Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 11:30 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
I'm coming late to the party, again! Thought I could catch up, hasn't quite happened..... Good chapter, really liked the conversation w/ Dracula & the end was too funny! Leave it to Justin, he knows exactly what's going on. Thanks for sharing......
Author's Response: Thank you Susan for your review. I like that chapter too.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 03:50 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
Hello you, I followed your advice and I extended my night reading the new chapter... So, short night but hey, it's so good ! Anyway, I had decided not to go to work today... I enjoyed these two incursions into this environment that I'm not too familiar. I smiled 'cause Justin is very smart... Our two lovers can now take some ideas to this world. Lucky boys !!! Again, thanks a lot
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing myhazel_eyes. Shhhhhhh! Don't spoil the plot! Hehehehehehehe!
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
to be honest, this BDSM Master/Slave thing is annoying.... and I don´t like the way justin acts.... :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing rose and giving me your opinion. Justin started out being a slave since the first chapter. The BDSM universe is only one of many ways it can be performed in. Brian and Justin won't get into it that deeply but will learn some things within that universe. This is not turning into a BDSM story per say but will touch on some things from that world. Our lovers are very much different and won't go all the way into it. It's only a small part of the story.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:13 PM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
very smart Justin.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing alys. Justin's brilliant and has learned more what makes Brian tick thus he can get Brian to do things now he didn't know how to do before. Things are looking up for our lovers.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 02:47 PM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
hihi I'm grinning with Justin Woww wonderful chapters, thanks for writing so fast. I'm totally hooked to the story.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Marny. I'm delighted the story pleases you.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:49 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
LOL loved the ending of this chapter! So like Justin, topping from the bottom, love it! Loved the back and forth between b/j too. Very entertaining, and educational.
Author's Response: I worked my buns off to get those two chapters just right! BDSM is complicated to explain on the basic level because there is so many levels to it to be explored it's hard not to go into the advance stuff while teaching the ABCs. So much happening now; Brian thinks pain is painful but Justin knows its erotic; Brian thinks domination is going to hurt Justin but he knows it will build Brian's confidence and it shows Justin Brian loves him to lead him; Brian thinks electricity play is shocking into submission and Justin knows it make you have orgasms; Brian thinks bondage is excessive and cruel and Justin knows it's liberating; finally Brian fears BDSM will kill his love and Justin knows it will increase the love and bond they have. Every couple who explore BDSM have there own experience unique to them. Not everyone does it the same way. There is mild, medium and hard core BDSM play. All of it is 90% mental, and only 10% physical. Brian only sees the physical and Justin has the mental down pat and wants to play the physical to increase his knowledge. Justin has his hands full training his Master for a while without letting Brian know he's being trained! I love this shit! Been there; done that; got the t-shirt and wore it out! Once you learn the lessons of BDSM you don't have to play again if you don't want to. Simple. Thank you so much for your reviews and support into this delicate subject not all will enjoy. Our boys will play mild/medium BDSM.
Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
This stuff is so mental. I think Brian has a phobia against taking charge and giving commands. They both have all the information they need but have to get their act together. At this point Justin is more on top of things than Brian who has doubts compared to Justin's confidence. Brian needs time to digest his new knowlege and decide what kind of relationship he and Justin will have. Dracula saw through it all and gave hints to both of them. This is really deep reading.
Author's Response: Nailed it! Thanks for reviewing George.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
That was cute, but I understand where Brian is coming from. I think the slave classes can help Justin but I think Brian is already a good Master. XOXOXOXOXOXO
Author's Response: If you go back and re-read Dracula's last comments; he tells Justin to train Brian because he isn't ready to be a proper Master yet; Justin hears it (between the lines); pulls the emotional sad card, and forces Brian to take charge and order him upstairs for sex. Dracula says "the BDSM universe is mainly to train the master to be wise!" He says it in a way it flys right over Brian's head but not Justin's. Justin learned how to top from the bottom and support and train his Master. The mis-conception many have about that world is the Master is in total charge; the opposite is the reality when the slave is totally dedicated and SMART! He can run the show until the Master is ready to play and perform his role in the learning experience of the BDSM universe. If you remember slave Angel taught Justin how to manage his love; and Master Superior set the new Masters up for a lesson in love for if they can't manage it yet; or if they blindly follow his harsh teaching to surpress it; they don't deserve to be a Master. Things are not what they first appear to be in the BDSM world. Rule number 1: The slave is the real Master but he never admits it! Have I lost you yet?
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