Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp

Interesting.......I didn't know anything about BDSM stuff.
I like how Justin seems to have learned from the class & should be interesting to see how Brian's class is coming along.
Again, interesting.....

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing and rating this chapter Susan. I'm always delighted to hear from you. I hope you enjoy reading the new chapters.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp

look forward to seeing how Justin takes all this info.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review alys. Justin is getting better being in his role now.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 09:38 AM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp

absolutely loved this chapter. Very precise in the explination of what it means to be in a M/s relationship. I'm very happy to see Justin falling into the slave role. It will be interesting to see how Brian's training goes.

Author's Response: Justin's a born natural like a duck to water. Brian's the bashful Master to start out with. I love your reviews Gina and I was thinking of you writing these chapters.

Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp

It was a bad day for me at work. I just came back and I find my comfort : 4 superb chapters. I locked myself in my room with my laptop and I read. I loved intensely.
Good work, thank you (and thank you for always taking the time to respond).

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing the chapters! I was posting the newest one as your review came up so be sure you see it all. It's all up now. It's Brian's turn to learn.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp

Just when I think I know where the story is going you shoot into a new direction that creates a new universe within a universe. I've never learned so much about the BDSM world and you never wrote about sex! This was an amazing chapter crammed with interesting details making me wonder where the B/J relationship will evolve to now. Can't wait to read Brian's training.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your review George. Most people have no idea the mental involvement of the BDSM world and most have mis-conceptions of that universe and what it tries to accomplish. Brian and Justin are learning about it and have not made a firm commitment to live the lifestyle totally; they can take parts of it to enrich the life they have on many levels without being total BDSM committed to each other. One of the revelations Brian learns in his training is that Justin is mostly already trained!
There is a major flaw in the BDSM world that Brian discovers right away in the next chapter making the lifestyle wrong for him and Justin to commit to it completely.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Chapter 60: Slave Boot Camp

Love it! Love it! Love it!

Author's Response:
You're welcome slave....I mean reader! hehehehehehe

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