Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 30, 2009 05:07 AM · On: Chapter 57: Fight to the Death

Enjoyed this chapter. Nothing cuter than a cub Gus & enjoyed everyone's reaction to them changing. I've really been enjoying how you've been portraying Jennifer, she just rolls along w/ any situation.
Sort of a nice surprise to see David show up. I say sort of due to he's not one of the good ones but nice surprise w/ how you incorporated him into the story. I just didn't see it coming. I should be used to you flawlessly adding new & "old" characters to your story but the different ways you're bringing in the "known" characters is still surprising me!
I'm a little behind w/my reading but I will be caught up by Sunday, if not before!
Off to the next installment.....

Author's Response: Thank you Susan very much for reviewing my chapter. I love you guys who take the time to say a few words each chapter. It makes me so happy to know I've entertained you enough to do it for me. I'd add more vampires but Ann Rice refuses to let us use her characters in fan fiction; she thinks it hurts the sales of her books; well what ever. Love to hear from you girl!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 12:48 PM · On: Chapter 57: Fight to the Death

Loved it! I also loved that Jennifer didn't have a problem with having 2 shapeshifting sons and 1 shapeshifting grandson. I also love how brian and justin act towards Gus in jaguar form. so cute!

Author's Response: I'm rather fond of cat families myself. They are so adorable to me. The story needed this chapter to establish the new band, announce the new CD coming out, the extension of adding straight kids at Sunshine High School, and other details. Thanks for reviewing me girlfriend.

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