Reviewer: BBurns (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
I would preferred if you left Mel & Lindsay together. Whenever they are apart, Lindsay causes problems. Besides I like Mel.
Author's Response: In my new story Mel is the good girl and Lindsay is bad. Thanks for commenting BBurns.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 28, 2009 05:10 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
I totally loved this chapter. I'm glad that melanie is gone, at least out of their life.. And Gus changing into a baby kitty is so cute...
Author's Response: Thanks for your review Lesley. This was a fun chapter to write.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:32 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
LOVED!!! Kitty Gus, too cute! Loved everything about the chapter! By the way, I JUST noticed the addition to the banner! How long has it been like this?! I noticed Justin's eyes right away & can't believe I had noticed the felines! Hope you're getting enough rest & thanks again for sharing w/ us.
Author's Response: The banner is about 5 days new. Thanks for reviewing and rating this chapter. I so love to hear from you everytime. I slept a good 15 hours and so I'm up now and writing the next chapter or two if my hamster stays on his wheel inside my head and spins out the details.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 03:25 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
Excellent chapter, very pleasant. Mel is not going to appreciate being throw out, toss in her ass like that but she deserved it. She's an absolute jerk. Gus is not a f*****g object that gives up somewhere because we don't like it any more, it's a baby boy, for Christ's sake ! Linds is better without her. "Better to be alone than in bad compagny"
Author's Response: Thanks for your review myhazel_eyes. Wow! This chapter really hit a home run with my readers if the reviews are any indication. I did put a lot of work and research into it and got baby details from my partner's Mom. I hope to create the next chapter today. I very much appreciate you taking the time to leave a review.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2009 01:20 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
ups, and here I though Mel is kind of nice in this story. :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing rose. This is AU and I mentioned OOC in the story description. There's a good chance Lindsay won't alone very long.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
Totally LOVED this chapter! The cats and their baby kitty! How adorable! Loved how you had Brian explain the difference between his relationship with Justin, and hers with Mel. Perfect. Also, I was glad to see they had agreed before hand that where the baby was concerned, Brian was not Justin's Master. Justin would make decisions concerning his baby on his own (though I'm sure he'll consol with Brian on all things out of respect) Glad to see Mel out of the picture, (though I worry she'll seek revenge) In one aspect I understand Mel's point (understand, not agree) She didn't know the baby could be born with shifting powers. If she did, she could have said no. Though she's a piece of shit for not wanting a 'defective' baby, (by her description) she still had the right to know if it were possible. Then B/J and Lins would have seen her true colors before. In the end however, it's good Lins is no longer embraced with her. Again, excellent chapter. descriptive, colorful and packed an emotional punch. Hey, what can I say? I'm a sucker for 'kitty' families. lol
Author's Response: Thank you very much for your comments Gina. I worked hard on that chapter to get it right on many levels. I just see things are different somewhat for straight and lesbian vamprire/embraced relationships compared to m/m. Nickie my banner maker first gave me the idea and then vikinglass24 came up with it again out of no where and I had to agree a kitty Gus was adorable.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:03 PM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
loved the visual of kitty Gus and the daddies. Glad Lins got out quick.
Author's Response: Thanks alys for reviewing again. Every review is important to me. I'm happy this chapter entertained you.
Reviewer: Marny (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 02:40 PM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
ohhh wauwww Gus can shift in a baby jaguar kitten .... wonderful chapter hihi goodbye Mel
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing Marny. I'm delighted the chapter was good for you. I hope you stay with my story and I try to update very fast and often serveral chapters quickly.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
Oh, that was beautiful! I love that Gus can shift into a baby jaguar! I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: I love kitty Gus too. I hope I don't have too many Mel lovers out there. Thanks for reviewing girlfriend.
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