I really loved this chapter!

I liked B/J public disagreement and the way they resolved it (such delicious punishment).  B had to know there was no way J was staying home, especially with the powers he has.  He is a force to be reckoned with too and he was threatened as well as his child.   

Dracula a chickenhawk!  I don't think I've ever heard him described as such, what a hoot! lol

I was intrigued when the animal transformation was first mentioned and absolutely delighted by the animals B/J became.  Since I was a teen I've been a BIG cat lover and I don't mean the domestic variety (though I like them too as they are just miniatures).  My girlfriends were into horses and I was into tigers, jaguars, leopards, cheetahs, etc.  Such sexy, slinky, powerful creatures and what beautiful eyes all of them have.  And now B/J...love it!!  New fantasies to weave around them now.

Aro and the Volture won't know what hit them and boy am I looking forward to it!

On to the next chapter!  

 

 

Author's Response:

Justin went too far embaressing Brian publically but he was an emotional wreck barely holding it together at the time. Brian is wise and understood as well as all the vampires in the room. There is strict training in Justin's future now to make him better emotionally and a better embraced lover; he's still an 18 year old boy with all these amazing gifts, talents, and powers to manage.

The jaguars are a favorite new thing in my plot line. Soon the banner will show the kittys when Nickie gets time. I'm a big cat lover myself and I thought a big black jaguar Brian on top of a smaller beautiful golden blond jag Justin was too hot to miss! Thanks again for your very important reviews and ratings. Love you!

So loving this!  let the battle begin!  Oh, and I hope Brian doesn't forget to punish Justin for disrespecting him in public. I'd love to read that scene!

Author's Response:

I screamed when I saw this review. I'm so happy you're still reading my story Gina! Brian hasn't forgot the incident but he wants to take care of the Volturi before getting mad at his embraced. Brian realizes he has given Justin way too much power in their relationship. Brian thinks his boy needs discipline queer style later on. (woops! spoiler alert to late hehehe)

Thank you so much for your review Gina.

Darn you write fast and a good quanity too. Other authors post a few hundred words and your chapters are always thousands of words long.

I like very much where this story is going. Dracula, the Cullens, the baby, now facing down the Volturi has me eager for the next chapter. BRAVO!

The jaguars are genius too. More soon please!

Author's Response:

Thank you George for the review and rating. I don't watch the word count; I just belt out each chapter as it happens. I could do 10,000+  words a chapter but it's a bitch to post chapters that big on this site so I have to keep the scale to about 5,000 or less. My hamster has been spinning overtime on his imagination wheel bringing you the new developments. Next stop: Volterra Italy!