Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Embraced
Reviewer: cakdg (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 12:30 PM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens

Sorry I haven't read/reviewed for a few days, RL the last few days has been both a pleasure (celebrated parents' 56th wedding anniversary on Saturday) & a pain (on same Saturday a neighbor was doing some yard digging/demolition and took out both our phone lines and therefore my internet connection--dratted man!).  The line finally got fixed late today.  Can we talk withdrawals?  Anyway...

I laughed at Lee's first word/thought transmitted to his Mom & Dad, how appropriate and with the oldest vampire living present! *g*  Loved the vampire teddy too!

The Uber Tower is getting such august tenants! I haven't yet read the Twilight series, but the Volturi kind of sound like the Mafia of the vampire world...

OMG there's another Emmett?!  Well, Aunty Em is one of a kind, but this could get confusing if they both appear in the same chapter.  Fun how J was able to take down Emmett Cullen a few pegs.  Never underestimate small humans, especially J! lol.

I was surprised at how easily the Uber Tower was breached, would have thought security would be better than that.  Look's like Bella's shielding powers are going to get a workout!

Great chapter, lots to take in.  Going on to the next!

 

 



Author's Response:

So sorry to hear of your RL issues and glad they are over. I had a bad storm knocking out my internet for a day and it was horrible!

I'm so glad to see you back online and enjoying my story. Constant reviewers like you are gold to us writers and inspire us to produce for you. We truly love to read all the reviews; well I sure do. Thank you so much for your detail review and rating of this chapter.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 11:24 PM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens

Great chapter. I loved how you incorporated Twilight into the story. i hope nothing happens to anyone, except the volturi.

can't wait for some more..



Author's Response: Thank you Lesley for reviewing. Ah yes; more of the evil Volturi will be part of the story soon.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2009 12:01 PM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens

Ha, ha! How could you?! Good writing, leaving us  with that!! SO looking forward to the next installment. 

I haven't read the Twilight series so I really don't have a clue with all the references but I'm sure most people have & will enjoy you adding them to the story. Very clever.....

Just amazing how you have this unfolding in your head. I've always been in wonder of creative people, especially writers. One of my professors had tried to explain how she had thoughts & scenarios in her head that just needed to get out & she had to write. Now, maybe she was just crazy but I've always thought that would be pretty cool but could also be frustrating at times.

 However it happens w/ you, I'm just glad that we get the benefit of it & get to enjoy your talent. 



Author's Response: Thanks for the review and rating Susan. You don't have to know Twilight to enjoy my story just accept the new characters as I introduce them. All you needed to know was their powers. I've described the background details and it's enough to follow the plot line for Embraced. I hope you like it.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens

Oh my god! You can't leave me hanging like that. It's so wrong. But I loved this chapter. I love how you included the Cullen's into your story. I love the Twilight series. I now look forward to the new chapters even more.

Love ya lots!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Author's Response: The Cullens do bring a new angle to the story. Things are heating up at Uber Tower soon. Thanks for reviewing and rating the chapter my darling Vikinglass24. I always love to read your reviews.

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