Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 36: Young Love

Hi JT,

It was truly a good reading. I love the sequence of events. I'm hooked more and more. I really appreciate your work. Gehexan told me : A glance at this and you won't be able to stop. Oh how he was right ! In fact, we kindly laughed at him as soon as he grabbed his laptop to read an update. Ok, now, we are two in our house (+ those who read in secret as I suspect ‘cause some here are familiar with some plots I haven't yet read  :) )

Well, this chapter 36. I read the story and then read the reviews... In particular, your comments ‘cause the most important is to know what the author wanted to express. And I found nothing very shocking in the text (maybe I've a higher threshold of tolerance due to my education and a very special family background where we always talked about sex without taboos). Anyway, let's not fool ourselves, parents may not want to hear it, but it's a fact : lots of teenagers have underage sex and sometimes with serious consequences. Here, Molly feels ready for a love story. She is mature. She has a good boy (Kelly feels nice) and their family are OK... And this is done in full knowledge of the facts....So, why not ?

And finaly, having hetero sex is great for me. I feel a little less out. Already, my hubby and me feel in a minority in our family. Well, I joke. One of my dads experimented girl aswell (and got 3 superb results  in the process with one of my mums...Ah, my big, weird but happy family !!!)

This is a long comment but I wanted to give my point of view on this particular chapter. I hesitated yet and I don't know why (hormonal changes ?)

I can't wait to read more...

Thanks a lot for this story, JT

 



Author's Response:

WOW! Thank you for the long detailed review. People here in the USA are far more hung up about sex and especially underage sex than they are in Europe. I had to explain the chapter to avoid readers in America getting the wrong idea for what the chapter was saying. I'm very happy the story entertains you. Thanks for your comments.

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