Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

Hey…
I figured it was Latin sense I recognized some of it xD… (Awesome)
You had me laughing so hard in this chapter, especially the talk with Ellen, but it was genius so I was laughing in a good way…

Jill <<33

Author's Response:
I'm glad you liked it Jill. Ellen and Porta are major characters now in the story.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2009 08:05 PM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

Ha ha Ellen, you are so funny.
I know I havn't reviewed in a while and I am sorry sbout that. I have been a busy slave girl and been very tired, so by the time I am falling alseep at my computer, writitng reviews is too hard. I couldn't help myself tonight as it s just so great this fic and I am loving how it is going.

Author's Response: My favorite dyke had to show up in the story! Glad you're back and reading; the next chapters get very interesting indeed. Thanks for reviewing and rating; me luv u girl!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 08:11 PM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

WOW what a life Justin has, his talents seem to be just getting better and better. Brian will have to work hard to keep everything safe and grounded for Justin.
I like the correlation of real life people that you are weaving into the fic. It shows the complex world we live in these days of how privacy is a special and difficult to maintain :)Chris

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing again. Justin's vampire powers are mostly creative in nature and some surprises coming up.

Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

I couldnt stop reading. this is a really addictive story like another reviewer says. late for sleep but had to say you have a new fan. I am going to read your other story too.

Author's Response: thank you!

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

Nice to read that Ellen is one of theirs. Great chapters as always. Waiting patiently for some more..

Author's Response: I hope to put the next chapter up today. Thanks again for reviewing Lesley.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:50 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

I'm not good w/ reviews but I do want to let you know I've been enjoying this story & I feel so spoiled w/ all of your quick updates! Love that Ellen is one of them.

Author's Response: Susan you wrote a great review! Welcome to my world of queer vampires and embraced boys who love them. I much appreciate you taking the time to tell me.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:44 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

Oh my god! I loved it. I loved that twist with Ellen. That was neat. I can't wait to read a new chapter. Love ya!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Author's Response: hehehehe! glad to make you happy girl. ellen makes the perfect lessze vampire, smart, beautiful, rich, powerful, ageless, tacky, classy, and of course almost pale white skin. thanks for reviewing and rating again; me luvz u.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:39 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

great great great!

Author's Response:
Me tickled you like it. Thanks for reviewing and rating again.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh

Ellen is a vamp~? LOL Loved this chapter. This story is so addicting~

Author's Response: Thanks Gina! I love Ellen so she had to make an important appearance in my novel.

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