Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2009 10:55 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER

I have been away for some time having a grand old time but I am back and looking forward to catching up. I have missed it.

Author's Response: It's good to have you back gerri and thanks for reviewing. You have many great chapters to enjoy. I've been writing like crazy.

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2009 10:19 AM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER

Hey JTSecrets !
I love what you did in this chapter, the twist you gave to the Ideas !!!
I just find its not clear enough the moment that the couple leave NY to go back to Pittsburgh! I had to read that part twice to realise they were back home. But maybe its just me.
Great work! The half turning idea to possibly cure Justin is awesome !!!
Keep it up JT! Jersey :))

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'll check the story an perhaps add a transistion paragraph to make it clear. The flu plot came from a reader's idea. I'm dealing with a cold too which helped. I'm working on the next chapter.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:17 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER

Wow! You evil evil writer you. How dare you sneak us a cliffe. Great chapter and I can't wait for the followup. I got a wicked fever reading it.

Author's Response:
New chapter is up now. Thanks again for reviewing.

Reviewer: Gene (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:07 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER

I looked for new chapters before leaving for school. This one is looking very serious. Kind of a damned if they do and damned if they don't catch 22 scene. Can't wait to see how this turns out. Poor Justin and Cajsa. And the other humans in NY dying.
I take it the swine flu inspired this chapter?

Author's Response: My own cold and the swine flu plus a fan's ideas for the story made it possible. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:01 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER

OH SHIT! IF YOU KILL MY JUSTIN I WILL HUNT YOU DOWN AND MAKE YOU PAY. NEXT CHAPTER SOON JT OR ELSE! heheheehehehe

Author's Response: Don't sweat dude. I love Justin just as much as you do.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 05:02 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER

Well that is scary for Brian poor Justin on the brink of death.
Looks like we are going to move into another level with the Secui Verto turning. Look forward to the next chapter, cheers Chris

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review!!!!! I do a happy dance with each new one I see. Over a 1,000 people have read the first chapter and nearly 300 are regulars but only a handful take the few seconds it takes to make a review and encourge a writer. The next chapter is almost finished as I stayed up all night just for Justin and Cajsa.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 12:56 PM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER

oh my god! that is just cruel leaving it like that. I thought you liked me. Please get a new chapter or add to this one soon. The suspense is killing me.

Author's Response: type type type type soon type type type.........thanks for reviewing and rating.....type type type type....

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2009 11:19 AM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER

you have to make justin get better on his own. the ritual may kill him if brian doesn't turn him fully. you can't let that happen. brian will be lost.

Author's Response: It's a paradox of a situation for them. If Justin doesn't come out of the coma he can't even drink the mouthful of blood. Medically speaking his condition is now grave which is between critical and dead. Thanks for reviewing. I hope to get the next chapter done tonight if my own damn cold permits me to.

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