Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: um (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2009 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced

I really don't mean to nit-pick, and I am enjoying your plot etc. But do you have a beta reader? They would catch some of the grammar and spelling errors. I am really not trying to be bitchy, so please don't be offended.

Author's Response:
I don't have a beta reader now. Most of my readers have preferred fast chapters with a few typos comparied to slow perfect chapters. I'm using an older version of Word that is horrible for spelling and English corrections. Since this may be a much longer novel I may get a beta as one reader has offered to do it. Thank you for reviewing.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2009 05:16 AM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced

things are going to be changing in NY now that brian and justin are regular visitors. i think everyone involved will be happier. i like how the embraced took control of their lovers.
nice chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you for your review; the next chapter is more plot development of the lover's lives in New York. Justin will get the needed healing for his dareair and next chapter he'll be back at it again with Brian's huge assistance!

Reviewer: Brian Lover (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2009 04:04 AM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced

More chapters! *grins* Great way to moralize a horny bunch of boys. Very neat plot going on here. Justin is so smart.

Author's Response: Glad to see you're still reading my story. Our Justin is not the typical blond by any means (and I never believed that crap anyway). I'm working on the next chapter now which is important plot details for the future of our lovers in New York. Thanks for your review Brian Lover.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced

lol loved this chapter. It was just perfect!

Author's Response: Thank you so much Gina. I'm glad you approve the direction were going in with the boys of New York. Justin is a breath of fresh air for a stale smoggy city. Jordan and Mark are thrilled with the new maturity of their boys. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 29, 2009 09:23 PM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced

HOT! HOT! HOT!(This being said while drool runs down my cheek) This chapter was excellent. I love that you're introducing a sense of morals into their relationships. Thanks! MORE MORE MORE. Whenever you get a chance.
Love ya!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Author's Response: type type type type soon type type type type.....thanks for reviewing and rating again! type....

Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2009 05:47 PM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced

Damn that was hot!!!!!

Author's Response: I would reveal too much to say where the ending for this chapter came from! Thanks again for reviewing and rating boi.

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