Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

I'm finished with this stupid story- your racist language tipped the scale! your suck anyway!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'm a white writer and called white people crackers in a fiction story. I can do that. Perhaps it was wrong to show two black men robbing a cafe in your eyes. I bet that never really happens either. There's nothing race wise in my story you won't see on HBO any given night or the latest episode of COPS. I'm gay and suck dick so you got me there and I'm good at it too. Since my latest story is the most popular one on this site with nearly 1500 reviews to date, I can handle one rotten tomato from you with grace.

Have a wonderful blessed day and remember to take your medication.

Reviewer: calisurferchic (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

"Staff" lol good one

Author's Response: Thank you!

Reviewer: RCA (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:48 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

I like this story it's different w/ a bit of originality.  I'm with Curious Reader though, this chapter would've kept me reading if not for the borderline racism, since 'dark meat' is barely good enough for even the wolves.

Author's Response: Actually it was the straight vampires who did not want them. As said in the previous review it came from a common statement in the gay world. I agree the term "dark meat" has a negative quality and will remove it.

Reviewer: curious reader (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 04:02 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

whats up with the "dark meat" comment and Justin laughing?

I would think that you as the author and Justin, as your character, would be above such tasteless humor. Guess I was wrong

 



Author's Response: The term dark meat is from an inside gay joke as it is a phrase saying "I don't sleep with black people. Justin laughed hearing they were going to the wolves. I agree the comment is tasteless and will change it.

Reviewer: camm (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2009 01:19 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

Hey,

The last few chapters have been INTENSE dude!  :)   First, the orgy in NYC...hot!  Michael's execution... brutal,but totally deserving.I'm glad he's gone, and can't cause any more to Justin or anyone else!  The robbery at the diner... I found that funny, how B&J just overtook the bad men.

You said you're taking some time off, well we will miss you while you're gone. But good luck with RL stuff. Come back soon though!  :) 



Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing; will be back soon.

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

Hello JTSecrets!

Still like it ! Its nice to see what happens with other couples and how Brian and Justin's are involved !

I'm wondering if there is anything that could threaten Justin's life since he is so powerful(despite a vampire) ? Do you plan to use more of his mind powers in the story ?

How long as it been since B/J are together (for me its been 2-3 weeks...) is this right ? I'd also love to see Brians reaction with Justin's painting of them... And, and, and...

I'm buzzzing with questions, LOL! Keep it coming ! Jersey :))



Author's Response: They are pushing a month together. Yes to the mind powers. Justin threatened? Maybe. Thanks for reminding me about the painting.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:46 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

Once again an excellent chapter. I look forward to more.

 



Author's Response: Thank u so much! I started the next chappie but my eyes are getting heavy and my vampire won't let me have any more life force tonight so I have to sleep. Will try to bring you more tomorrow. Love u girl!

Reviewer: FrankUSA (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 07:47 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

I was surprised to find more chapters so fast. Great action, sex, and storyline. Watching for more.

Author's Response: I aim to please! I can't get another chapter tonight, getting sleepy again but tomorrow I'll get her done. Thanks for your repeative reviews they mean so much to me.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 06:08 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

Can't wait to see how weekending in NY goes for our boys with the other tenants on their floor.

Yummy chapter.



Author's Response:

I might get three chapters done today! Just started #3. I check online from time to time to see the hits and rapidly approaching 8000! in only 8 days. (does funky chicken all over his office holding his self like Michael Jackson)

The next chapter takes care of dinner at Debbie's, Justin's Liberation ceremony (in Latin), and a heart to heart talk between Justin and his Mom. The following chapter will have the next trip to New York with some interesting developments. Let me say Justin bitch slaps the most powerful embraced boys in New York and they love him for it. Thank you for your continued reviews that mean so much to me. :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment

it must be heaven for justin to have such hot sex on a daily basis. steve will learn in time. ted needs to talk to brian so brian can teach him the vampire ways.

Author's Response: Just added a final paragraph to this chapter:Never a Dull Moment. Thanks for your reviews and ratings.

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