Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Hey again…
Awesome chapter… But hey they all are xD
I totally loved it when Justin defended himself…
I would have liked to read some more about the turning ceremony it was kind of short, and I actually have a question about the words they spoke. Is it real Latin??
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Thank you Jill; yes it is Latin. The turning ceremony is pretty short and simple. It happens again in the story.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 05:26 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
fun fun chapters. anything jennifer needs to know justin can tell her. anything ted needs to learn brian will teach him.
Author's Response: I very much like your ideas. Readers often help me develop a story. Thank you.
Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Great chapters as always. keep up the great work. Am still loving this fic..
Author's Response: Thank you Lesley! There will still be hot B/J sex however I need to build the plot some more. I want to balance the story with sex and adventures. Our boys have to come up for air sometimes (at least Justin does :P )
Reviewer: Brittani (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
You know every morning when I wake up the first thing I do is check for updates from you!!! I don't want you to burn out, but reading your story each morning makes my day complete. I do hope EM will meet someone who wants to be embraced by him. But I'm torn because I do love that he has his boys..... Anywho keep up the great work, hope you have a lovely day.
Author's Response: I love hearing from you. Ok, a hot twink top is around the corner for Emmett. You'll love it I promise! Thanks for reviewing and rating it so makes my day.
Reviewer: Brian Lover (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:49 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Latin is the sexiest language there is. That was an amazing chapter with the turning and the embracement complications. I love how the story isn't all sex but has a detailed interesting plot happening. Thanks for the quick chapters. Every time I log on I look for a new one. I'm hooked too.
Author's Response: I'm nuts about Latin myself. Thanks for reviewing again.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:25 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
I loved it! Get some sleep and then feed us some more! Love ya!
Author's Response: How's my best girl today? I'm half way writing the next chapter now.
Reviewer: Gene (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Wow! I got way behind on chapters and just read them all. This story has me hooked wanting more. Lots of hot action with B and J and the story has interesting things happening in it. I've known boys like Cajsa who get messed up with too much sex and it's so real how you tell it. The sugar daddy can't handle it or fix it. Typical gay problem and you tell it like it is. The comparison of running into a burning building to save a dying child is so true. You don't want to but you feel you have to so this is why Justin lets him feed to connect with him to save him. Great plot. You have added two more embraced couples now, Paul and Ben and Ted and Steve to add to the story line, and of course Jordan and Cajsa makes three new couples. Lots to keep track of. Thanks for the very rapid updates and new chapters. Wish I didn't have to work and could catch them as you post them. I'm looking forward to more chapters JTSecrets.
Author's Response: Thanks for the detailed review and rating me. Cajsa is all too familiar in the gay world for real. Embraced lovers will be like human lovers with problems and growing as couples. Writing the next chapter now. Thanks for repeative reviews Gene.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:57 PM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Another chapter this am, loved it. Love the coversations between Paul and Ben. Loved the turning of Ted, and the subsequent help by Brian during his embracement problems. Love how you've made Ted not the butt of everyones jokes like the show kinda did. Hope Em has fun with his harem, maybe he can find a bear familar to be played with by. Hugs, A
Author's Response: I always like Ted; he's closer to my age and he's educated. I like to add vampire details to make the universe more real for us. Emmett is a sweetheart and will never be lonely again. He wants to be a submissive but a bear won't cut it for him. He really is loving his Twinkie diet very much. Thanks for your constant reviews, they warm my vampire heart!
Reviewer: Jacko (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 11:00 PM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Just read the new chapters and its so hot. :) This is a great read and I'm looking for more. I like how you show what happens to each person, and your details of truning and embracing were good to know adding rich detail to the story. There's enough plots to keep it interesting and hot hot sex to keep it steamy. You got a winner here JT.
Author's Response: Thanks Jacko! I'm happy to hear from you again. Writing the next chapter now and should post it later today.
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