Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

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Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: May 01, 2009 06:52 AM · On: Chapter 17: A Visit with Mom

Michael's death gave me a chill it was so grapic and horrible.
In this chapter the sex scene was very moist :)

Author's Response: maybe a towel alert was in order for that chapter :P

Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 27, 2009 12:35 AM · On: Chapter 17: A Visit with Mom

Loved the sex in this chapter. You have one wild imagination and keep coming up with new ways to tickle my privates :P
More, master, got to read the next chapter now.

Author's Response: Fans like you who review often warm my vampire heart :) Thanks for staying with me boi.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 26, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Chapter 17: A Visit with Mom

Another excellant chapter. Love'd the dialog between Molly, Tucker, the boys and Jennifer.
The sex was pretty great too.
Off to bed now.... stayed up waaaaay too late, definatley worth it. LOL

Author's Response: Thank you! It was a fun chapter to write. Working on the next chapter and perhaps it's posted when you wake for your reading enjoyment. Thanks again for reviewing me.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2009 01:40 PM · On: Chapter 17: A Visit with Mom

I loved it! That one was excellent because you should us how the embracement was going with Jennifer and Tucker and Molly's reaction to it. I love it! I can't wait to see when Molly gets embraced. 90% of Pittsburgh is going to be so protective of her. I look forward to more.MORE MORE MORE!
XOXOXOXOXOXOXOXO

Author's Response: I'm delighted you loved it. Molly has a few years but a hot foxy vampire boy is in her future and she will be pleased. Writing the next chapter now.

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