Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 2: Moving In

Well what can I say about this story…
I’ve only read two chapters yet but somehow I’ve gotten completely obsessed with it…
the story and the way you tell it’s fascinating.

Ohh there was one more thing I must say you really managed to make an interesting story and not another Twilight copy(no offence to any twilight fans out there) 
<<33 Jill



Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope you enjoy the story and comment again. Happy Holidays Jill.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 2: Moving In

After reading your responce to my review of TFOBJ I was very pleased to hear you where going to write another.

You could not imagine my happiness to see this here tonight. I love Vampires, always have. I find them hypnotically beautiful and mixing that with B/J sex and love is almost too much for a fangirl to bear, but I will give it a try, lol.

Let your young man know I am so sorry for taking his time from you (hehe, not really), but make sure you keep time for him too, hugs, Gerri, xxx.



Author's Response:

I'm a big fan of vampire stories myself. I have to sleep one day soon and so their will be a break in writing then but I hope to belt this one out really fast like the last story. I will attempt to push the envelope of gay sexual erotica so my nasty fans can enjoy the B/J smut.

In my youth we didn't have HIV to worry about and free love was for real. Someone is helping me with ideas to spice up this story so I'm out of the dog house for now. Out of the mouths of babes...

Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2009 04:55 PM · On: Chapter 2: Moving In

Now I have to go to my room and lock the freggin door!

I got some wood to cut; damn that was hot!

Memories are flooding me as I read this sh*t. I don't doubt ur gay now.



Author's Response:

What!!!!! YOU thought I was ghost writing as a gay man when I was a girl? Boi cut me some slack.

Vampire master Brian and slave Trell Justin have only scratch the surface of their sex play. This story is going to be smokin hot!

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 03:48 PM · On: Chapter 2: Moving In

You lovely man you! Once again, you wrote another hot and amazing chapter. MORE MORE MORE. I love that Brian is so in love with Justin and I can't wait to see what is so special about Justin. Please give me more soon! I look forward to what you write. I have to say though that this is 10x better than The Future. There's just something about it that enthralls you and doesn't let you go. The future is excellent too, but this one is better! Please forgive me if that last part upset you but I promised myself that I would be honest with you. I look forward to more!

Author's Response:

This is only my second attempt at writing! How can I be upset? It's the highest compliment to say I'm getting better. I'm beginning to learn you nasty girls love to read out over the top mad wild sex! That was something I didn't like about the show QAF. They did not show the reality how f***ing burtal we make love. The harder, faster, even painful sometimes; we totally love it. When I was much younger I was bi and girls went wild when I gave it to them the gay way. If you watch us have sex for real you might think it's rape, but you can't rape the willing! :P

I have an appointment this morning out of town, but I hope to write the next chapter this afternoon.

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