Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Embraced
Reviewer: Amy Bumgarner (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2016 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Bob will you please put your stories on AO3 website for fan fiction. 



Author's Response:

Hello Amy,

Thank you for your invitation. However, many years ago I made the decision to only post my stories on Whispers. I have nothing against AO3; they're an awesome site however my loyalty is here.

The readers at Whispers have been amazing to me and very supportive. One of my stories got over 2,000 reviews, and Embraced over a 1,000. Soon after that, I became an admin, and later the owner of Whispers.

By only publishing here is a small way to support this website which has my heart. The new Whispers site soon to arrive, which I'm working on everyday, will possibly become the premiere fiction website of tomorrow.

And so much more. The next generation may find reasons to love the new Whispers.

The abilites and features we will be providing to our members, are out of this world.

Thank you, but this is home for me, and I wish to stay home.

bob

Reviewer: rainbow_roses (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2016 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

I realize this is an older story, but I just discovered it, and I love what I'm reading so far!!  I'm now anxious to read through all the remaining chapters!  I've always enjoyed vampire stories, and this one is an amazing read!  Thanks for sharing!!



Author's Response:

Please forgive my very tardy reply to your wonderful comment. Real life has me dealing with many irons in the fire and besides that, I have no excuse for not seeing and replying to this sooner. I'm very happy you're being entertained by 'Embraced'. It's the second story I wrote and was very popular in its day. Heck, I didn't even know back then what a crackfic was and got told it was one, and a dozzy too. Thank you for commenting.

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2015 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

I KNOW THIS STORY WAS WRITTEN A WHILE AGO BUT I JUST DISCOVERED IT RECENTLY AND I WANTED TO SAY "WOW" BOB I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I STAYED UP FOR ALMOST 2DAYS STRAIGHT READING THIS STORY LOL AND WHEN I WENT TO WORK THE NEXT TIRED I TOLD EVERYONE IT WAS "BOB'S FAULT". IT WAS THAT GOOD!

Author's Response:

Forgive me making such a very late response to this amazing review comment. Some way it slipped by me. Thank you very much as it warms my old heart to see that this story still entertains someone new. I just let my imagination fly wild when I wrote this epic tale of crack!fic reality. I have no excuse for being such a bad writer except I was 'born this way' ;P

Reviewer: black-rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

I can't believe it's over. Everyday I would come home hoping to see another chapter posted. You are very talented and I hope you continue to write more stories in the future.



Author's Response:

Thank you for commenting black-rose; I appreciate you taking the time to let me know.

Reviewer: SleepyBard (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

I haven't started reading yet, I've been browsing through the reviews first. I'm a little trepident to read a vampire fic, since lately all vamp fanfic seems to be ripped from that Twilight series but this fic is getting such positive reviews so I'm gonna go ahead and read and suspend all judgement.

 

I have a feeling though that it's gonna be amazing and I'm gonna regret not having found this fic sooner!! :D

 

-Bard



Author's Response:

Thanks for commenting SleepyBard. Over 500 steady readers enjoy the story now. Most of the vampire details are my own. The Cullens of Twilight do make an appearance later however it does not dominate the story. I'm looking forward to hear from you again as you read.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 26, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

hilarious. it would be a great twist if daniel and angela hit it off. looking forward to reading whatever you dream up... :-DD



Author's Response:

Thanks alys for your comment. We'll have to see how it goes.

Reviewer: Tanya (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 01:17 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

I just wanted to know how many more chapters there are. I stopped reading at 90, I want to read the rest all together. I am really enjoying this but,I just needed a break for a bit.

Author's Response: Thank you for your comment Tanya. I'm expecting the story to go to 110 chapters total. As fast as I write, and I only write one novel at a time, it won't be long until I write them.

Reviewer: FEROZA (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2009 05:54 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

HAPPY BRTHDAY!

Author's Response: Thank you FEROZA!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 29, 2009 09:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

loved the NY crowd coming for a Pitts visit. Baby Gus cat in the forest was a great storyline.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Vikinglass24 deserves credit for Gus in the forest. She has great ideas to add to the story.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2009 12:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

A great chapter. That both Justin and Brian learned something is the best. As the saying goes it takes 2 to tango, it takes 2 to make or break a relationship.

I felt Dracula was very fair in the secrecy about the whole trial. Those there can support B&J, but B&J will not be shamed by the event, nor will other Vam/Embraced couples expect a 2nd chance either.

I look forward to seeing just how their lives change.

Loved the visual of big blond kittie sleeping the night away.



Author's Response: Thank you very much for reviewing alys. Brian suffered much more than Justin did that week. Their love will be far greater now for this experience. A kitty Justin is so adorable!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2009 05:56 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

loved catching up on the last couple of chapters. Loved the cat scenes.

Also loved the Cullens so watched the moved. Just got their books. Can't wait to see how you use them more.

I think training will be good for Justin. Its necessary as yourself and many reviewers have mentioned. Look forward to reading abt the training, sounds like you've had 1st hand experience here.

Can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Working on the next chapter now. Brian begins the training slowly and makes Justin do some serious thinking. I really appreciate you taking the time to review alys. RL has me a bit busy but should have a new chapter completed and posted within 48 hours at the most.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2009 01:10 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Oh yes darlin the MFM was realistic, especially to those of us blessed to have sampled it.  I really, really, admire your writing style and wait in eager anticipation for the next chapters.

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review Carlly. It means a lot to me and I hope to hear from you again. I stayed up to make the next chapter so you didn't have to wait!

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Brian drank from legendary DRACULA. That's  impresive!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for reviewing monica. More interesting vampires are going to show up next chapter.

Reviewer: Carlly (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2009 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Hullo luv.  I've been away for a minute and just finished reading 15 chapters.  I had to change my panties twice.  Thanks for letting us girls get some too!  And how dare you leave us hanging; need more more more!!!!!

Author's Response: So my straight sex scene was realistic? Two panties is quite a compliment to a budding young smut writer as myself. Next chapter real soon. Thanks so much for reviewing and if you love me; hit me again became reviews are like sex for me; I can't get enough~!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 10:15 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Excellant ch29. Love how close the community is, Ellen D. ;-) can't wait to read more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much alys. I'll get up the next chapter tomorrow; me getting sleepy now.

Reviewer: roni69 (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2009 05:52 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

That was so hot. On to next now.

Reviewer: subbstevie (Signed) · Date: April 27, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

very erotic and this was just the frist chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you sub; I very much value your opinion. Enjoy the ride; Justin does!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 11:55 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Just caught up on the last 2 chapters, boys in NY and Mickie's end. The NY storyline is excellant, I can't wait to see what new twist happen because of the boys new friends. Very HOT chapter.

An apt if gory end for Mickie. Very graphic. Hopefully this is really the end for him.... don't see any more twists with him.

I love reading between the lines and seeing what is coming. I agree w/ moonshadown women.... rather you exceed S.King, he's too predictable that's why I stopped reading him long ago.

Loving your stories. Hug the partner if thanks for sharing you with us! A few hours sleep too.... I'll try to wait patiently ;-)

 A.



Author's Response: That's definitely the end of Michael. Writing the next chapter after catching up on answering reviews. Muse is on the Soloflex gym right now clanging away. Hug delivered with a kiss. He likes this story too and helps with kinky sex scene ideas. I didn't know he had such a naughty streak in him. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 10:53 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

UH, I LOVE IT!!!!!!IT'S HOT AND STEAMY!!! MMMMMMM :-) i love your naughty imagination ;-)

Author's Response: I must have been a nympo in a prior lifetime :P  Thanks for reviewing,

Reviewer: ali (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2009 03:27 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Just wanted to let you no that i'm loving your story, it's the first vampire fic i've read, not really been interested in them before but yours has me hooked!!

The sex is hot and the death scene of Micheal graphic .........great writing!!!  can't wait for more.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the kind review. I  hope to get better the more I write. :)

Reviewer: Tonya (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2009 05:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Just read all the chapters and have to say....WOW.

This is a very good vampire fic, I usually stay away from these fics but yours is too good to stop. I am so anti Michael it's ridiculous, I need and want him dead.

I also can't shake the feeling that you have some shocks, surprises or something cooking in the background.

Keep up the good work.



Author's Response: I promise an interesting read. I won't do anything stupid like kill Brian or sometime. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 01:46 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

I love you! Oh my ****ing God! In Brian's words, "That was ****ing hot!" I love the whole vampire background along with how Justin becomes embraced. That was inventive. I also love how you combined one of my favorite type of stories, vampires, with one of my favorite couples, Brian and Justin.

MORE MORE MORE!



Author's Response:

I love to hear from you. You're like my biggest fan! I took some of your vampire story ideas and added some twists of my own. I going way back into my history remembering my hottest lovers to help me create the wild sex scenes of this vampire/boy trell combination  of B/J. The second chapter is almost ready for posting. Please keep up your reviews. Love you girlfriend!

~JTSecrets

Reviewer: BlindDreamer (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2009 10:07 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced

Damn that was hot...or cold rather? *giggles* Can't wait to see where you take this one!

Author's Response: Congrads! You got my cherry for this story. I'm slamming a 5 hour energy extra strength and heading into writing the next chappie now.

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