Reviewer: Wendy Dawn (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2017 03:11 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
All I can say is WOW!
This was such a fantastic journey to take as a reader. I hated for it to end! Wonderful story with great plot twists!
Author's Response: Thank you, Wendy Dawn, very much. I was sure smoking the good stuff back then. Delighted you enjoyed it. And how kind to let me know, too.Forever Yours is the next one written after Embraced.
bob
Reviewer: Joey girl (Signed) · Date: August 19, 2017 06:03 PM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Testing changes to settings to see if the email links to new reviews are working correctly.
Reviewer: Amy Bumgarner (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2016 07:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Bob will you please put your stories on AO3 website for fan fiction.
Author's Response:
Hello Amy,
Thank you for your invitation. However, many years ago I made the decision to only post my stories on Whispers. I have nothing against AO3; they're an awesome site however my loyalty is here.
The readers at Whispers have been amazing to me and very supportive. One of my stories got over 2,000 reviews, and Embraced over a 1,000. Soon after that, I became an admin, and later the owner of Whispers.
By only publishing here is a small way to support this website which has my heart. The new Whispers site soon to arrive, which I'm working on everyday, will possibly become the premiere fiction website of tomorrow.
And so much more. The next generation may find reasons to love the new Whispers.
The abilites and features we will be providing to our members, are out of this world.
Thank you, but this is home for me, and I wish to stay home.
bob
Reviewer: rainbow_roses (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2016 05:06 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I realize this is an older story, but I just discovered it, and I love what I'm reading so far!! I'm now anxious to read through all the remaining chapters! I've always enjoyed vampire stories, and this one is an amazing read! Thanks for sharing!!
Author's Response:
Please forgive my very tardy reply to your wonderful comment. Real life has me dealing with many irons in the fire and besides that, I have no excuse for not seeing and replying to this sooner. I'm very happy you're being entertained by 'Embraced'. It's the second story I wrote and was very popular in its day. Heck, I didn't even know back then what a crackfic was and got told it was one, and a dozzy too. Thank you for commenting.
Reviewer: rukia12 (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2016 07:09 PM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
très belle histoire Bob j'ai apprécié chaque minute de ma lecture
merci
je suis une vrai fan à present j'ai déjà lu forever yours et je dois avouer que j'adore ta plume
sil te plait continue d'écrire
viviane (France)
Author's Response:
Thank you.
Reviewer: rukia12 (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2016 09:25 AM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia
tu es complètement fou Bob, mais bon sang je t'adore
Reviewer: max (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2016 06:15 PM · On: Chapter 42: Menage a Trois
Amazing Post
Author's Response:
If you meant my chapter thanks. But you made 'Post' a link to FaceBook. Links are not permitted except on a member's profile page. Had to end your link max. And it appeared like a spam to join FB.
Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2015 05:30 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I KNOW THIS STORY WAS WRITTEN A WHILE AGO BUT I JUST DISCOVERED IT RECENTLY AND I WANTED TO SAY "WOW" BOB I JUST WANT YOU TO KNOW THAT I STAYED UP FOR ALMOST 2DAYS STRAIGHT READING THIS STORY LOL AND WHEN I WENT TO WORK THE NEXT TIRED I TOLD EVERYONE IT WAS "BOB'S FAULT". IT WAS THAT GOOD!
Author's Response: Forgive me making such a very late response to this amazing review comment. Some way it slipped by me. Thank you very much as it warms my old heart to see that this story still entertains someone new. I just let my imagination fly wild when I wrote this epic tale of crack!fic reality. I have no excuse for being such a bad writer except I was 'born this way' ;P
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 03:00 AM · On: Chapter 47: Load Up
:)
Author's Response: I haven't been watching for reviews and these were a very welcomed surprise from you. A writer loves to get reviews for each chapter since it shows their story is still being read. Of course it adds to my review count and that's a major present for me as well. About a year ago I went back and read this one again for fun, and marveled at my imagination when I wrote Embraced. I've changed so much that I don't see myself writing a story like this again, but it was a ton of fun at the time and the reading audience were fantastic to me. Thanks Lorie for your smiles, comments, and support.
Hugs,
bob
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 02:21 AM · On: Chapter 45: The Cullens
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 02:05 AM · On: Chapter 44: Kiernan Ayden Lee Kinney
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2014 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 42: Menage a Trois
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2014 02:09 AM · On: Chapter 39: A Day Without Sunshine…
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 37: Having My Baby
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2014 01:35 AM · On: Chapter 35: Ellen and Portia
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 11:38 PM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 11:20 PM · On: Chapter 28: He Embraced Me
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 10:24 PM · On: Chapter 26: As Time Goes On
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 03:33 AM · On: Chapter 24: Art of Almost Dying Perfectly
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2014 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 23: WICKED FEVER
Even though I have read this before, I get knots in my stomach when Justin gets sick.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 04:20 AM · On: Chapter 22: Uber Tower
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 04:09 AM · On: Chapter 21: Morals Embraced
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 20: Libertas Rite
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 02:54 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 02:20 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 01:37 AM · On: Chapter 15: Happy Death Day
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Vampire Ball
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 14, 2014 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 12: What’s Happening
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2014 11:13 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2014 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
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Author's Response: Totally love the chapter smiley faces! Enjoy the story Lorie.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2014 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
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Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2014 04:08 AM · On: Chapter 4: Goodbye Dad
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Reviewer: ryan78 (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2014 07:18 PM · On: Chapter 86: Sunshine's Boot Camp
Wow I've been reading your story for three days straight I'm going to be very honest with you all the sex in the beginning was kinda boring but as I read on the way you mixed sex into the plot was brilliant it became a great balance and not just a sleazy wanna be smut novel, I'm am very impressed by you imagination to put the story together there were times I couldn't put my phone down I'd read everywhere, one of my favorite things in this story is a safe haven for the youth in the name of sunshine house I really wish those were real, please keep writing it's very inspiring when you talk about real gay issues, keep up the good work and you now have a fan for life.
Author's Response: Thank you Ryan! You've made my day with your comments. Actually I wrote that story in 3 months. Later I attempted to expand on it 350 years into the future but stopped when it was not popular like before. I may someday write again; however, I'm up to my eyeballs in study for my 4 degree at the moment. I'm also doing research for a futuristic original novel on the side.
It's always a huge lift when a writer's old story gets a new review and you're very kind to take the time and let me know I've entertained you. Thanks again.
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2012 12:03 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
You are really sick and freaking crazy.....why am I still reading your story...I don't know and can't seem to put it down. You must be a mad genius!
Author's Response:
hehehehe I had quite the imagination when I wrote this massize Crack!Fic. In its day it was the most read, and reviewed story on Whispers. It's not all weird, but weird enough. Thank you for reviewing and commenting Speedy. Health slows down my return comments but I wanted to say hi.
Reviewer: pat thomas (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2012 12:41 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I liked the way this story begins and I am hoping the next chapter will be just as good.
Author's Response: Thank you - It was very popular in its day.
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2012 04:12 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I read most of this before but don't think I read the rest. I will this time my dear friend ~ Vonnie xx
Author's Response: Thank you - enjoy!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2012 01:29 PM · On: Chapter 9: A Typical Pittsburgh Morning
How many sets of cum stained sheets do you think the boys go thru in a day? I wonder? TAG
Author's Response: I feel terrible missing your comments this way. Let me answer one and profoundly say how much I appreciate you writing in here. This was quite the work for me having been just my second story. I just let my imagination run wild with the craziest shit I could think of and wrote it down. The formula seems to have worked since I got so many readers and comments - mostly good.
Compared to the talent I've seen here, I'm a rotten writer myself. That said people have been kind to me.
Health slows down my online activity and I have new interest outside of the cyber work. RL is actually going very well.
Love you and thanks for your comments that once again made my day.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2012 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 5: Tongue in Cheeks
Six inch tongue. . . Fourteen inches . . . Twenty inches. . . For six hours! Laughed so hard I almost pissed myself! TAG
Author's Response: I believe I did mess myself writing this chapter!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2012 12:31 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Okay, I'm finally resolved to tackle this story. 100+ chapters is a bit daunting, you know. But, here goes nothing! TAG
Author's Response: The chapters go very quickly Tag and it's a very wild ride - Thank you for reading and commenting.
Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2012 10:57 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
I'm sad that I won't ready any more new stories - but I always go back to your stories - I think I've reread Forever Yours at least ten times (okay, more than that). I just really enjoy it. Good luck to all your future endeavors - and I really want to say thanks again for taking the time to share your stories. Regards!
Author's Response: Thank you very much for reading and commenting Ceci. It was a joy to write for you.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2011 09:22 PM · On: Chapter 30: Don’t Share Master’s Love
*Sigh* Here is where I stop - for now. I must get back at my writing desk. Lol. What a tremendous and progressive chapter. I really enjoyed this one. :)
Author's Response: I had to go and review chapter 30 to understand what you wrote about. Very happy this part entertained you confused bliss. And once again know how great it is to get chapter comments. You may have noticed on your stories I do the same.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2011 08:21 AM · On: Chapter 16: Full Moon Michael…..
Taking a little writer's break, and this is where I landed. :) Powerful graphic chapter. Very well done.
Author's Response: Bashing Michael is this writers favorite pass time. He, Ethan and Craig are my most hated characters in QAF. I rarely write them in a positive light but for Michael I've sometimes given him a second chance. Thank you so much for all your comments confused bliss.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 09, 2011 08:58 AM · On: Chapter 13: The Vampire Ball
Ahhh wonderful chapter. I was going to say a couple chapters ago that Michael concerned me. But, I rushed to read on. I guess he always does - but here he lived up to that. Great stuff!
Author's Response: You can always count on me bashing Michael and Craig in my stories usually. Sometimes they get a second change after years of scorn. I'm so happy you're reading and commenting. I just might reach a 1,000 review comments on this story someday. Thank you.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2011 09:29 AM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
The sex is blazing hot, but the love is felt so intensely. Loving this so much!! :)
Author's Response: I've always felt vampires are very sexual creatures and that blood and sex go so well together. Don't you agree? Thanks confused_bliss for your comments that are so motivating to me.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 08, 2011 08:49 AM · On: Chapter 7: What’s In a Name?
:)
Author's Response:
Thank you so much - words can't express how wonder chapter reviews are to the writer. Smily faces are perfect too.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 09:01 AM · On: Chapter 3: The Coven
I wasn't expecting such a coven. What a delightful surprise.
EVERY night? Oh wow! That was some blazing vampire sex. This is an amazing world you have created here. I'm really enjoying it. :)
Author's Response: There's lots of sex in the beginning and later it become more plot so it balances out.
Reviewer: confused_bliss (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2011 08:43 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
*Sigh* I have been meaning to get into this for so long now. I don't have to tell you how tempted I am by a good vampire tale - and this looks to be an outstanding one. I love to see how different writers can change aspects of standard vampire myth and make their own world. I'm enjoying this one you created in the intial chapter.
Now, don't tell anyone that I'm taking time out of my busy writing schedule to read. LOL. I just couldn't resist this any longer. I'm going to try to force myself to 5 chapters a day, in order to keep myself on task. :)
Author's Response: Mums the word - I won't tell a soul. It's good to take a break and see other works and let your brain recharge. It will make you a better writer too. You can be entertained, and study the writer's technique like sentence structure, plot, characterization, structure, descriptions and transitions. I'm delighted you're reading this. It was my first home run story and the second one I wrote. I was so amazed at the number of review comments it got since truly I've seen way better writers here then me only get a fraction of the number of reviews. I've been so blessed. Thank you.
Reviewer: Angelstar2 (Anonymous) · Date: September 07, 2011 08:20 AM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea
So i am just re-reading this story AGAIN! because its so extra awesome and amazing and the longest thing EVER!!!! And so now i'm just coming back to the site to comment again on how much I love this and what do i see????? NEW CHAPTERS!!!! SQUEE!!!!!!! I AM SO EFFIN HAPPY AND I'M OFF TO READ MORE!!!
Author's Response: Wonderful to hear from a new person Angelstar2. I'm delighted this tale has entertained you and you are glad for the new direction I'm taking it too. Thank you so much for the comments; they make my day.
Reviewer: ali (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2011 05:49 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Wow!!! your back!!!! Fantastic!!!
Checked MW this morning and found some new chapters, i'm overjoyed!!!
Always loved this story and reading these new chapters seems things are going to get very interesting, cant wait for more.
It really is good to have you back :)
alison x x x
Author's Response: It's very good to be back Ali. I've been thinking about returning to Embraced in the future for some time now. Elsa Rose gave me the idea and it stuck. Real life got in the way for a while but things have settled down and hopefully I'll be kicking out chapters pretty quickly. Thanks so much for your comment. It means a lot to me.
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: August 24, 2011 04:29 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I forgot to add that London looks like a great big amusement park in the picture you have up. Love this story
Author's Response: Lorie have you seen London today? It already is one of the greatest tourist spots in the world, and it makes sense to advance that into the distant future. Thank you so much for your support. Kind of a Disneyland of the 27th Century.
Reviewer: Angelstar2 (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2011 06:13 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Oh my!
So I have no idea where to start. Well i guess i will say that I enjoyed the hell out of this story. If someone told me that I would be reading a story with vampires who can extend their tounge to 2 feet long or have heart sex i would have told them they were crazy.
This is my first true "crack!fic" no disrepect with that term but I honestly dont know how else to clarify it sometimes I was thinking huh? what? how? why?
but reguardless I COULD NOT STOP READING!
I laughed, cried, lusted and enjoyed the hell out of this mega monster of a fic. This was a really amazing story and gave me some crazy ass vivid dreams of flying embracement.
So different from everything I've read (and i've read alot) I thank you so much for writing!!!!
XOXO
Author's Response: PLEASE forgive my late reply. RL has been a challenge for me lately and I forgot to look for new comments. I'm so happy this story entertained you and it's our reward to get such nice comments. A crack fic is considered so weird the writer must be smoking crack to imagine it, and a bad crack fic is the wildest of them all. Funny I didn't start out to write one; it just happened as my muse went to crazytown and I just let it flow out. Thank you again for commenting and reading.
Reviewer: Yvonne Reid (Anonymous) · Date: July 01, 2011 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
Wow,that was soooo hot!!!
Author's Response: It gets worse (snicker) Thanks for commenting very much.
Reviewer: FallBackTrick (Signed) · Date: June 26, 2011 12:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
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Author's Response: Very interesting pattern there.
Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2011 09:04 PM · On: Chapter 61: Master Boot Camp
Wow...I'm really glad they didn't go that road. It doesn't seem right in their relationship. I'm quite surprised though how serious Justin appeared to be and glad Brian saw it right. And the end was priceless! It showed that Justin was still Justin and that he understood what Brian ment. :D
Author's Response: Please forgive my delay responding to your comments. I forgot to check other stories lately with so much going on in my life. I can't see them in S&M either but a brief detour of learning about it was fun to do. And it gave me a channel to vent my own personal problems with that lifestyle. Thank you very much for reading and commenting Lipps27.
Reviewer: Tracey Herisson (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2011 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Over the last three days, I have truly loved reading your story "Embraced". I have been an addicted BJ fan for the last few years and really loved how the story was written. Great Job. How I wouldn't mind living in Kinneyville.
Author's Response: Hi Tracey; thank you for commenting. Sorry I didn't respond sooner but life has been a circus. I was in a very cracky mood writing this one and went back to read it myself and was shocked I had such an imagination!
Reviewer: brian (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2010 06:06 PM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
i finally finished this totally gripping story. i didn't review much as i couldn't stop reading. fascinating how you tie all the sub plots together. i wish my head worked the way yours does. i have always been interested in vampires since my early childhood. don't know why,but always thought there was a sexy undertone to the premise. good job we loved the story. i wish you had tons of stories to read as you are our favorite.
Author's Response: hehehe...did you get any sleep? This was perhaps my most fun story to write. In theory I was smoking some very powerful crack to write Embraced. I have not yet found a more crackalicious fan fic online compared to this one. I've even gone back and re-read it for entertainment. I'm amazed I wrote this story. I got the idea for it when I finished the first one I wrote; Future of Brian and Justin. I like dreamed it really. It was so weird how it came to me. Thank you for your comment; I'm working on the next chapter of We don't need Rings or Vows as you requested, and then I'll do a chapter on Partners in Crime. I'm also studying Photoshop and Dream Weaver to use those softwares for MW. God I have so much to learn, and I have to be careful not to crash the site!
Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2010 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 10: Babylon
Oh My God where do I even start...
First I had to email my fangirls and tell them about this fic... I told them it was the filthiest thing I have ever read; and I didn't even write it... ha, ha, ha
You know I may have competition for my crown… having been given the honorary title of Mistress Kathleen ~ Goddess of Porn…
Damn you are good… Great!!! I love that its vampires, bdsm and supernatural… Incredible… love your imagination…
Later Darling ~ Mistress Kathleen
Author's Response:
I have been down with a bad cold/flu. Sorry for taking so long to answer this comment. Girlfriend, I've read some very steamy sex scenes on fandom myself. I don't deserve a crown. Thank you for the comments and making my day. I hope the story entertains you very much. Once I get to feeling better I'll try to read your work.
Reviewer: Bigdogz09 (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2010 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Loved the saga of Justin and Brian. Very imaginative and original. Well done and very enjoyable. That was alot of thought, heart, and soul and it showed. Loved the whole inner world that you created and how you allowed us to read their thoughts and feelings.
Loved the happy ending! Simply wonder, marvelous!
Author's Response: It was funny how I woke up one day with this story in my mind from beginning to end; like the plot came to me in a dream or something. I just sat down and starting writing it until it was finished in less than 3 months and it's a very long novel too. Since it's mostly B&J I didn't call it a cross-over. One blogger calls this story the best crackfic online. I was very amused to read that! Thank you so much for reading and letting me know you liked it Bigdogz09.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 07:51 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
I would love to say that this is the most amazing story on vampires I have ever read. You had every situation involved. I have bookmarked it to read again. I will be checking out your other stories.
Author's Response: Thank you! I rarely check on my finished stories and was delighted to find your comment.
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 01:33 PM · On: Chapter 86: Sunshine's Boot Camp
I'm definitely loving this story. I love how you put real issues in this. You can go to my Live Journal website here:
http://balrogtweety.livejournal.com/
I have written a few B/J fanfics I'm proud of.
Author's Response: I'm pretty busy writing another story but I'll check it out later. Thanks
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2010 03:10 AM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia
This is just a wonderful story. YOU GO GIRL!!!
Author's Response: Well thank you; for your information I'm a gay man but being called a girl is cool too.! I have so much in common with women such as what turns me on. :)
Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 26, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Chapter 53: How to Catch a Nut
I have been reading this and it is TOTALLY awesome. I hope Chris is ok> No one should die that way even if he's a lonely vampire.
Author's Response: I loved writing this novel. A vampire Brian and blood/sex slave Justin is such a turn on! Thanks for commenting very much! :)
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 12, 2010 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Oh my good I’m crying it can’t end....
Well at least I haven't read your other stories yet xD
Now I know what I'm going to read next ;)
The whole story was incredible I can't praise it enough...
The story doesn't only get a ten in rating from me.
I can't give it less than a million.<3
Thanks for the story
Love Jill <<33
Author's Response: Would you believe I wrote this story in about 2 months? It just poured out of me constantly. Thank you so much for reading and leaving comments. "The Future of Brian and Justin" is my first story and very sci fi in nature. "Forever Yours" is my 3rd story and very popular; not to mention very long too. I hope to hear from you again Jill.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2010 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 99: Rio
Okej this was like the best chapther in a while..xD
I totally love the thing with gus xD
Jill <33
Author's Response: This was a fun chapter to write; I could not let the kid die or be crippled.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2010 06:18 AM · On: Chapter 96: The Donor
Crap now I can't stop reading....
Poor Justin And Brian :(
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Things will work out for everyone except the kidnappers.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2010 04:11 AM · On: Chapter 90: A Taxing Situation
Hey...
I won't actually be reading the last chapters today xD...
Believe me I wish I could... But I can't cause where I live its not morning it's night, and I got to get some sleep before it's time for school/work xD
I actually live in Europe, in Sweden to be more specific...
I really liked this chapter it was good. Its one thing I’ve been thinking about, I wonder what’s going to happen when Gus and Lee gets older than Justin... OMG what they get like 90 years old and die :O
Now I got to read some before turning in xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Thank you Jill for the comments I found posted today. I wish I could visit Sweden someday; I've been to the UK. Gus and Lee will come up later on.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2010 03:05 AM · On: Chapter 87: Fresh Meat
Ohh yay i really loved the boot camp program....
That sounded sooo hooooot xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Wow! You've almost read the entire story. You could finish it today. I had fun with that part of the story too. Thanks for every comment; they really are clapping to a writer's ears.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 11, 2010 02:36 AM · On: Chapter 86: Sunshine's Boot Camp
You are definitely my favorite author... But I'm not an member on this site xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: It's very easy to join and you don't have to be an author to join. Name, birthdate, email address and then you click on a link in your email message and become a member. After that you don't have to type the security numbers for each review. Once a member you can make me a favorite author at the top of the chapter page. I'd love that. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2010 11:17 PM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia
Haha he fainted, thats so cute...
I love to read like ten years later :P.... But the fact Gus ans Lee is going to be fathers is kind of.. well suprising to say the lest....
The family reunion was a great idea, there was allot of news at ones xD
I'm starting to realy like Damion. he's grown allot in the last chapters xD
And OH MY GOD KINNEYVILLE is an awesome idea xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: I felt it was time to accelerate the story line to keep it moving forward. A city of vampires, embraced lovers and familars is a hot idea with its on special group of problems to deal with.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 68: A Message from the Author
Happy birthday xD...
Although it's not you birthday today.... I think :S
Anyway happy birthday
Jill <<33
Author's Response: June 1st was my birthday; thank you!
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 10, 2010 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 66: Kidnapped !
Okay well hey again :P...
It's been some time sense my last comment... And there's a reason for that I just can't stop reading this story.. All of my friends is pretty pissed 'cause I blow them off to sit by my computer :P
All I've read since my last comment is more than amazing xD
I love the story with Gus. You really have some amazing imagination especially with the part where Brian and Justin both being the biological father.... And yay Emmet has found his embraced lover :P hopefully.... And the thing with the BDSM had me pretty concerned, I actually didn't think it sounded like a good idea in the beginning. but I'm coming around to it :P And the collaring was more hot... man I love these boys and you for writing this story
It's one thing I like to see more of and that’s Brian and Justin having more time.... 'cause when they do spend time with him and Lee the story gets better xD
Can't wait to read more...
Jill <<33
Author's Response: I don't get too far into the BDSM scene really. Just enough info to be interesting. Yes, Emmett has his man now and all is well for the Kinneys. Always delighted to read your comments Jill.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 48: Don’t Mess with Daddy !
Hahaha I laughed as much as Edward did I’m sure xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: I had a lot of fun writing that chapter. The ideals just poured out of me. Thanks for commenting; I live to read your reviews.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 40: Flamma Coepi
I have no other words than OH MY GOD!, this story only gets more and more exiting in etch chapter. But I’m kind of sorry that Gabriel died, I really liked him in an evil kind of way xD
I can't believe that you can actually come up with a story like this and love the realistic points in the story. I also love the story has progressed, I mean in the beginning Brian had more power than Justin and that was a given, but now especially with the flame starter thigh they're more like equals.
And that’s awesome xD.
I will review again in a few chapters like always
Till next time <3
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Well thank you Jill! In fact the equal status of Justin proves to be problematic later in the story. Please do review; it's my reward for writing.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 07:00 AM · On: Chapter 32: Nine Pints Low
OMG!!! this story only gets better and better....
I totally love you for writing this story... I just can't seem to get enough xD
You write fucking incredible how old are you anyway??? xD
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Thank you! This is really my favorite story to be honest.
I'm 55, and I have 3 degrees and working on a 4th one now. I'm retired too.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: January 07, 2010 05:25 AM · On: Chapter 29: Good Morning Pittsburgh
Hey…
I figured it was Latin sense I recognized some of it xD… (Awesome)
You had me laughing so hard in this chapter, especially the talk with Ellen, but it was genius so I was laughing in a good way…
Jill <<33
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it Jill. Ellen and Porta are major characters now in the story.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2010 09:26 AM · On: Chapter 18: Lamia Verto
Hey again…
Awesome chapter… But hey they all are xD
I totally loved it when Justin defended himself…
I would have liked to read some more about the turning ceremony it was kind of short, and I actually have a question about the words they spoke. Is it real Latin??
Jill <<33
Author's Response: Thank you Jill; yes it is Latin. The turning ceremony is pretty short and simple. It happens again in the story.
Reviewer: Jill (Anonymous) · Date: December 27, 2009 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 2: Moving In
Well what can I say about this story…
I’ve only read two chapters yet but somehow I’ve gotten completely obsessed with it…
the story and the way you tell it’s fascinating.
Ohh there was one more thing I must say you really managed to make an interesting story and not another Twilight copy(no offence to any twilight fans out there)
<<33 Jill
Author's Response: Thank you! I hope you enjoy the story and comment again. Happy Holidays Jill.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 29, 2009 08:23 AM · On: Chapter 19: Never a Dull Moment
I'm finished with this stupid story- your racist language tipped the scale! your suck anyway!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: I'm a white writer and called white people crackers in a fiction story. I can do that. Perhaps it was wrong to show two black men robbing a cafe in your eyes. I bet that never really happens either. There's nothing race wise in my story you won't see on HBO any given night or the latest episode of COPS. I'm gay and suck dick so you got me there and I'm good at it too. Since my latest story is the most popular one on this site with nearly 1500 reviews to date, I can handle one rotten tomato from you with grace.
Have a wonderful blessed day and remember to take your medication.
Reviewer: BBurns (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2009 04:28 AM · On: Chapter 56: GOOD KITTY / BAD PUSSY
I would preferred if you left Mel & Lindsay together. Whenever they are apart, Lindsay causes problems. Besides I like Mel.
Author's Response: In my new story Mel is the good girl and Lindsay is bad. Thanks for commenting BBurns.
Reviewer: Adrianne (Anonymous) · Date: July 23, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Chapter 97: The Godfather
Did you mean South Atlanta or the southside - more accurately, Southeast or Southwest Atlanta? South Atlanta is an actual place where where your characters would draw attention as being a little pale for the neigborhood before they became vampires. Also we're a bit short on warehouses abandoned or otherwise, being a lower to midlde class African-American community. Storefronts we have, warehouses, not so much.
I like your premises, but you need to make ARRANGEMENTS to get a Beta (or a better one). The is no ED in RANG.
Adrianne from South Atlanta
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. I've never been to Atlanta so I wasn't aware of a South Atlanta proper. Soon I'll go and correct this chapter. You may see more typos; my readers wanted faster posted chapters and didn't care about the few typos. I hope you enjoy the story and comment again.
Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
I hate to see it end, but i loved the story. It is so nice to be able to read such a good story all the way to the end.. so many of the writers leave us hanging and never finish a story.
So glad we still have writers like you!
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I'm the same way; I hate it when a writer doesn't finish a story. I fear writers with more than one or two projects in the fire as it gets too easy to get lost in crazy town that way and it takes forrever to get an update. I only write one novel at a time and very fast. My first one was a month and "Embraced" was just over two months and many sleepless nights creating chapters sometimes two or three at a time before sleeping and doing it again. If I don't finish a story something happned to me. Thanks for being a reader.
Reviewer: stellakinney (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2009 03:36 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Thank you JT, wonderful job, I always loved vampire world and BJ, so I enjoyed this fic very mutch... I hope you'll write another one soon...
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting stellakinney. I'm delighted the combination worked for you.
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 14, 2009 12:41 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
I enjoyed reading your story. great job :-)) rose
Author's Response: Thank you rose for commenting.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: July 13, 2009 02:06 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
thank you for this great story, i enjoyed this so much :-))))
Author's Response: Thank you monica; I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Thank you for writing this wonderful story. You took a lot of your time and energy in it and it´s understandable that you return to your RL now. But I hope that we will see more from you in the future.
Take care, Sunny
Author's Response: Thanks Sunny for commenting. I'm happy you liked it.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Oh, the journey is over but what a wonderful journey ! So, we are sad of course but you have shared so much with us, it's normal you take a break. You have to take care of yourself first. You are a nice person. All this work is an immense love.
THANK YOU SO MUCH ! Thank you for all these great moments you have given us. We are sure we will meet soon for new adventures.
With love,
Gehexan & Ihintza
Author's Response: Thank you Gehexan and Ihintza for all your support, reviews, and comments on each chapter. It was my pleasure to write for you.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 01:30 PM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
I love this story from the beginning till end, thanks for sharing. Hope your come back in a few weeks with another story.
* big hug *
Author's Response: Thanks Marny;I'm very happy you loved it and perhaps soon I'll be writing more.
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:59 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Embraced. Many thanks for a story so enjoyable I often eagerly waited for a new chapter. Your imagination is wonderfully vivid and it would seem that you could have a career in writing in the future. Thanks again for a wonderful story and I hope we hear from you again, x Chris
Author's Response: Thanks bksbracelet; I'm delighted the story entertained you. I appreciate your comments Chris.
Reviewer: black-rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 11:00 AM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I can't believe it's over. Everyday I would come home hoping to see another chapter posted. You are very talented and I hope you continue to write more stories in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you for commenting black-rose; I appreciate you taking the time to let me know.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:58 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
THANK YOU! Thank you for taking the time to share this wonderful story w/ us. Thank you for the endless hours of enjoyment you have given us. Thank you for sharing a part of yourself with us. THANK YOU!
I hope you get things straightened out & enjoy yourself, you deserve it. I will be looking on here, hoping for another story from you. We do understand it's a lot of work & commitment on your part to create these wonderful stories. If you're ever ready to go on another adventure & share it w/ us, we'll be here!!
Once again, THANK YOU!!!!!!
Author's Response: Susan, you've been such a great fan of the story writing so many comments and reviews. Thank you for all your support.
Reviewer: faithful_reader (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:41 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
OMG I can't believe it's over!! I hoe you either continue it or start another B&J story real soon
Author's Response: Thanks faithful_reader; I'm very happy my story has entertained you. I'm pretty sure I'll write again soon in perhaps a few weeks.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:32 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Thank you for a great story...... with your talent I am sure you will be back to writing again whenever real life permits......
Author's Response: Thanks BluvsJ for your support and comments. You're too kind. I have a feeling I'll have to write again or go crazy.
Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Thanks for the story. Hope to see you again when life permits.
Author's Response: Thank you Annjeela. Once RL settles down; who knows?
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:10 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
thank you for a beautiful story. we'll look forward to hearing from you again when RL calms down.... we all understand and sympathize.
Author's Response: Thanks alys. I've very much neglected RL and had to end the story now. I'm glad the readers understand.
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 10:04 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Of course you'll write again Bob - once you start it's like potato chips, you can't stop - take a rest and think about your next chapter. A futuristic sequel to Embraced perhaps.
Elsa Rose
Author's Response: Thank you very much Elsa; that's a fabulous idea! It will be a few weeks at least but I feel you're right; can't stop once you start. The love of our boys demands we carry on.
Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
Thank you so much for this wonderful journey! I enjoyed every minute!
Author's Response: Thank you Gina Marie for all your support. You're a sweetheart.
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2009 09:31 AM · On: Chapter 107: The End of the Beginning
wonderful story. hope you'll be back with us soon.
Author's Response: Thanks sjmpets3 for your support and comments. I hope to be back soon too.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2009 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 106: Truth faces Truth
Yippee ! Hooray ! That's it, I'm finished ! I'm on the 106....I'm making a happy dance here in my garden despite my HUUUGE round belly which give me the grace of a hippopotamus but I'm so pleased with myself... Now I'm going to wait for the next update, sipping a drink with my moms, between girls because all the male of the house are gone surfing (my old dads ;), my adorable brothers and their adorable half, my so patient hubby and even my toddler, Txabi, 6 years old)
Intense last chapters, I loved it so much
A lot of kisses
Author's Response: Congrads on making it all the way to 106! Thank you for your comments. I should have the next chapter out tomorrow; it's half finished now.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Chapter 106: Truth faces Truth
Nicely done! Should have known it would be handled. Looking forward to see what the aftermath is going to be like.
I finally got caught up & wish I hadn't. I will now wait patiently along with all of your other readers!
Author's Response: I've had a week off and dearly needed it. Real life was getting behind and required all my attention for a while instead of me giving all my attention to writing. I plan to have a chapter posted tomorrow Saturday, USA time. Thank you Susan for all your comments and support. It meant a lot to me.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 11:06 AM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea
Another great chapter! Love everything w/ the kids & Brian's fangs, very funny!
The end....THE END......OH my gosh!!!!
On to the next chap, right away!!
Author's Response: Real life is moving in and wanting more of me soon. I must finish the story soon. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Chapter 104: Terri Watson
YEA!!!! I've been waiting for twins! I'm glad Justin found Terri, she seems to be a great choice & another interesting character.
I am a little sad that you're working on how to wrap this wonderful story up but I do realize it can't last forever...... sniff, sniff......
Author's Response: Thanks Susan for commenting. Terri is a sweetheart. I'm taking time to make a good ending set of chapters and enjoying a small break from constant writing for several months. I'll be posting a chapter soon however.
Reviewer: lori (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 09:07 PM · On: Chapter 86: Sunshine's Boot Camp
you have become my number author. Just can't stop reading this story!
Author's Response: Thank yoiu lori. I'm delighted you like the story.
Reviewer: SleepyBard (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 03:16 PM · On: Chapter 1: Embraced
I haven't started reading yet, I've been browsing through the reviews first. I'm a little trepident to read a vampire fic, since lately all vamp fanfic seems to be ripped from that Twilight series but this fic is getting such positive reviews so I'm gonna go ahead and read and suspend all judgement.
I have a feeling though that it's gonna be amazing and I'm gonna regret not having found this fic sooner!! :D
-Bard
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting SleepyBard. Over 500 steady readers enjoy the story now. Most of the vampire details are my own. The Cullens of Twilight do make an appearance later however it does not dominate the story. I'm looking forward to hear from you again as you read.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:27 PM · On: Chapter 103: The Deal Breaker
WOW, WOw, Wow, wow, WOW!!!! Such a sharp turn there at the end!!
Bravo!!!!
Author's Response: I'm happy you liked it Susan. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 102: The Family Tradition
Wasn't expecting another baby, & w/ Daniel!!
Interesting where you're going w/ Daniel's sexuality. Wonderfully done...
Author's Response: Thanks for the comments Susan. Daniel's a complex person.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:59 PM · On: Chapter 101: They Grow Up so Fast
HA! Times sure flies when you're having fun!!
GREAT chapter.
Author's Response: Yes I did move the time line pretty fast in this chapter; thanks for writing.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 12:43 PM · On: Chapter 100: It’s a Family Affair
Great chapter, a lot of fun. Looking forward to the new addition to the family.
Oh, this is your hundredth chapter! It sure doesn't feel like it to a reader.
Thank you SO much for all the quick updates & just wonderful storytelling!
Author's Response: I can hardly believe it has over 100 chapters now myself. I'm working on the final details for how to end the story now.
Reviewer: Lori (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 06:53 AM · On: Chapter 82: Kinneyville Georgia
I just found this story a few days ago. I can't stop reading it, glad I am on vacation this week. I just hope I am reading it slow enough that I want run out of chapters lol.
Author's Response: Welcome to the Embraced universe! I'm delighted you like the story. I'm planning on 110 chapters so it's almost finished.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 04:44 AM · On: Chapter 80: Ten Years Later--Dallas
My god, how I love this story. Thank you very very very much. I have a soft spot for Diamond. He's so young. Gay, teen, (and here vampire), it's a complicated situation. Dracula had asked for assistance before the crisis is too serious. It's the good reaction. And with a lot of love around him, with a good communication and understanding, Diamond is now a wonderful young adult.
Beautiful moments
Big hug
Author's Response: I'm very happy to read another review from you Ihintza. Diamond was an interesting character to write. Thanks for commenting.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2009 12:29 PM · On: Chapter 99: Rio
Sad & sweet.......
Author's Response: It worked out for the good; glad you liked it and commented.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Chapter 98: The Request
I was wondering if Gus & Lee would ever want to become Vampires. Nicely done!
Wasn't expecting that with Jon at the end. Sounds like he may have to be turned.
Author's Response: Many twists and turns and in my story; Jon was a new development. Thanks for the review.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 08, 2009 05:19 AM · On: Chapter 97: The Godfather
INTENSE! I really like how you've made Justin extremely fair.
Thanks once again for taking the time & sharing w/ us......
Author's Response: Thank you Susan; I'm glad you liked it.
Reviewer: Ihintza (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2009 06:44 AM · On: Chapter 64: Vampire Love 101
So many excellent chapters here ! I spend very good moments with our vampires. I laughed, cried, I had some shivers. And in the meantime, I just forget my worries.
Especially with a chapter like 'Ménage à trois'. Wow, I'm a straight girl and I can tell you that the scene cause a bit of a stir. Details are ... wow! And what am I going to do with me now ? ‘cause my OB has strictly prohibited all sexuality !!! Now, I'm going to start watching my gay friends differently (my god, I'm ashamed. Let's hope my dear hubby doesn't read my comment ;) ).
I only know the Twilight Saga by name. The characters of this story seem really lovable. I think read it after the birth
On Chapter 64, I'm ok with my brother. It's hot, hot hot ! I know now why he was so cuddly with his lover some nights and knowing the lover concerned, he's not complaining ! ;)
I'm sorry for my rare reviews but I try to catch up my delay. How can I stop time?
Big hug
Thank you so much, my dear
Author's Response: Thanks Ihintza for the detailed review. I researched the three way straight sex chapter to make it good. Twilight is an excellent story of 4 books; I strongly suggest you enjoy it for sure.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 104: Terri Watson
I think Terri makes a wonderful addition to the Kinney clan. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Thank you!
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 04:00 AM · On: Chapter 103: The Deal Breaker
I totally agree with Justin's decision. It would have been for all involved.
Author's Response: Thanks VG24. She was an interesting character to write.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 102: The Family Tradition
That's so cool how it's almost like a family tradition to provide sperm. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response: Gay male vampires who want to raise kids need some way to do it if they want to continue the blood line.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea
The twins sound adorable. It sucks what Eric is trying to do.
Author's Response: Eric is sick in the head but the good guys got to him in time. Thanks for reviewing.
Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 03:58 AM · On: Chapter 106: Truth faces Truth
Hot!
Author's Response: Glad you liked it.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 06:05 AM · On: Chapter 106: Truth faces Truth
Completely grandiose...
Eric isn't really quite right in the head. Finally, in the light of this new chapter, I feel sorry for him. My God, all this mess just for Bah, everything just to not be rejected any more. He's lucky to deal with our vampires. I hope It's not too late to fix this shit. I hope that Roman, Dracula, Brian and Justin will be able to nip this problem in the bud and that life will go on... I'm hopping up and down with impatience for the next update
Love
Gehexan
Author's Response: Wow! Take off for a day and get lots of reviews. Thanks Gehexan for commenting. There are plenty of boys and girls who are gay and struggle with the Faith of Christianity. Things are better for this generation than it was for my generation however.
Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 12:36 AM · On: Chapter 106: Truth faces Truth
great read more. excellant 2 chapters. loved logan and lea.... twin talk is normal, even thru adulthood twins have a 2nd sense of one another.
Author's Response: Thanks alys. Twins are so cool.
Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 09:57 PM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea
Great chapter as usual.... it's great to see Logan and Lea doing so well.. but.. it seems as if Eric is turning into Bush Jr. the 3rd.......
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting BluvsJ. Eric is like so many gay boys who struggle with the faith and are often used by Christians to hurt gays.
Reviewer: monica (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 06:04 PM · On: Chapter 106: Truth faces Truth
Stiupid Eric!!!! i want to kick his ass! he put them in danger
Author's Response: Thanks for the review monica. Eric is very young and impressionable and was being used by others in the faith for political reasons. It happens.
Reviewer: myhazel_eyes (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 105: Logan and Lea
Well, really ! Leviticus doesn't agree with gays and vampires. Brandish this book is fairly simplistic (pff)... Some people are idiots and moreover the extremists (all religions) - What a load of jerks ! In Leviticus alone, there are still a lot of shit (sorry, precepts) which have nothing to do with the current reality. So, what about the other commandments, here ? I thought we should love each other. ;) This people, they make me mad. With them, I can't turn the other cheek, I'm rather going to apply the Talion's Law.
I can't wait to see what is happening with Eric. You had started so kindly with the twins and bang, I'm forced to jump up on a moving roller coaster... :D
I love it
Author's Response: I could do an entire story on say a Christian Justin struggling with his faith and what he was taught the Bible says about homosexuals. So much scripture was altered over the years it's unreal; add to that the miss-understandings. Thanks for your comments.
Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2009 04:05 PM · On: Chapter 106: Truth faces Truth
wowww thanks for the update, love this so much
Author's Response: You're very welcome Marny. I'm glad to hear from you again.
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:17 AM · On: Chapter 96: The Donor
Truly amazing. Very clever. Smack! Justing is taken! Have to get to the next chap, this is one good thing about being behind, I don't have to wait!
Author's Response: Yes Susan; you certainly do have that advantage. I'm very grateful for your chapter reviews each time. Thank you!
Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: July 05, 2009 10:09 AM · On: Chapter 95: Intervention II
Of course, another great chap! You scared me there for a little while, I thought William was going to come after Kyle. Glad he didn't
Author's Response: Kyle was afraid of his vampire but he was never in danger of that. Justin was very much on top of the situation. Thanks for reviewing.
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