Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2012 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 22: The Kingdom of Ireland

Ireland !!!



Author's Response:

Hopefully I'll get to visit Ireland someday.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2012 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 21: Michael Returns

Just when I was wondering how old Brian was you supply the answer.  I enjoyed how much trouble you got Michael into.  Shame Justin forgave him.  LOL



Author's Response:

There's a soft spot inside me even for a creep like Michael.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2012 03:49 AM · On: Chapter 20: The Pride of Ireland

Sorry to hear that Brian is having problems.  How nice that Justin took care of Jerry's parents.  Jerry really lucked out. 



Author's Response:

When I went and read this story again, I was shocked about some of the plot twist I created herein. I do remember this story flew together very rapidly and I typed as fast as I was thinking up the details, and that was very fast.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2012 02:29 AM · On: Chapter 19: Jerry Granger

So now they own Ireland!!!  I know Jerry is going to be a big help to Brian and Justin, I just wish that Justin wasn't quite so enthused with Jerry.  Wonder what Tyler needs.  On to the next chapter to find out.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:27 AM · On: Chapter 18: President Tyler Taylor Kinney

I knew this was coming, but it is still sad to read about Alex and Roberts demise.  I can't help but wonder just how old Brian and Justin are at this point. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 09:08 AM · On: Chapter 17: China

I'd forgotten about Justin Jr.  So much to re-remember.  Am thoroughly enjoying this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2012 08:25 AM · On: Chapter 16: The Next Ten Years

My how time flies.  Michael got his just deserts and Ben got the better of the deal!!!

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 07:50 AM · On: Chapter 15: Wine and a USSF Battlestar

I wanna live on this space ship!!!!  Frankly I wouldn't change the way the Chef makes his wine.  Even though it would mean less wine it would also be worth more.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2012 07:24 AM · On: Chapter 14: Sunshine One

The future looks bright for Hunter and Max.



Author's Response:

That's a dream come true for someone with HIV, and rarely happens for them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 13: More Friends and Enemies

Novotny is a pain in the butt.  Shame you didn't send him into outer space and have him sucked out of a vent.   lol



Author's Response:

Michael is one of my favorites to bash in a fan fiction story :)

I'm a bit under the weather and will catch up with your wonderful comments soon.

 

bob

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 08:11 AM · On: Chapter 12: Friends and Enemies

I get it now.  You are I and this is mostly biographical?  Go Hunter!



Author's Response:

I am not I, that would be who most people call God. Nothing about this is biographical, although I was once the puppy of a multi-millionaire for many years. Thanks for commenting much.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 11: More at Britin Hill

ack!!! What a way to end a chapter.



Author's Response:

:) Ya

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 06:09 AM · On: Chapter 10: Flying Lesson Day

Remind me to never fly with Justin.  I don't think my heart could take it.



Author's Response:

Years ago in my late twenties I took pilot lessons so this is an area I know something about. Flying is a blast too :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2012 12:21 AM · On: Chapter 8: Prince Siam

Theyre giving away gifts left and right.  Wish I had some of those magical gifts.  This story is certainly moving forward.



Author's Response:

When a plot runs for decades, it has to move forward quickly to finally reach a conclusion. Yes, some of those magical gifts would be very nice indeed :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 05:09 AM · On: Chapter 7: After Christmas

Thank goodness Justin is a healer!!!!   Being able to read the future doesn't always work.



Author's Response:

I think it goes without saying you have to be looking for something to see it - even a future event, and Justin was distracted at the moment. The healer part is really important to the plot.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2012 03:20 AM · On: Chapter 6: Christmas

What vision you had writting this.  I can see the hampster running around as I read.

 



Author's Response:

Yes, this is the story the hamster first came to life for. I just type and the rodent dictates the words. Thanks very much for commenting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2012 11:15 AM · On: Chapter 5: Mr. President

Okay, I'm buying all this, but I have just one question.  Is it insider trading if you have special powers to read the future?  lol.  A good thing they have the president on their side.



Author's Response:

My gut impression is that this isn't insider trading. That requires obtaining outside secret information for an investment not public knowledge from another source or person(s); however, everyone has the right to use all their intellectual abilities for investments. Since pschic ability is a personal skill, no outside person gives you inside information. Does that make sense?

Thank you very much for reading and commenting; we writers live for those words from our readers.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2012 11:06 PM · On: Chapter 4: Sir Michael and Lex

Naughty Craig.  Brian and Justin give him a beautiful bottom and he flubs it.  Good thing Michael's got Lexi in his future.  As much as I dislike Craig, what Brian did was pretty cruel.  At least Justin softened it somewhat.  It's a little disappointing to find that Justin hates Russia.  One of my early fandom's is the Man from UNCLE which stared a cute blond with blue eyes named Illya Kuryakin.  The actor has gone on to play Ducky Mallard on NCIS.  Brian and Justin remind me of Illya and Napoleon

 

I thought Brian sold Brittin to Ted?



Author's Response:

When I was a kid U.N.C.L.E. was a new show on TV and I loved it. Illya was a hottie too. I lusted for him at 12 y/o :)

When Ted moved in they stopped calling it Britin and named the new place Britin me thinks. Been nearly 3 years since I wrote this. Sound about right? I could have my stories mixed up!

Thanks for reading.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2012 09:09 AM · On: Chapter 3: London

Wow, I'd forgotten about the futuristic turn of this story.  Good thing I'm rereading it.  Angels and a magic kingdom, oh my!  Poor Michael, I know things work out for him but the stopping point of this chapter is still a shocker.  Good job.



Author's Response:

My first attempt at writing fan fiction, and I think my first cliffie too. Glad you're enjoying it Yum.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 09:52 AM · On: Chapter 2: Daddy Dearest

Now if that isn't a twist.  And you've come up with a logical reason why Craig was such an asshole to Justin.



Author's Response:

That is a weird plot idea with Craig but it only happens once in this story and never in anything else I wrote to my knowledge. Glad you're reading and commenting YumYumPM.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2012 05:41 AM · On: Chapter 1: Billioniares

Who knew that Justin could be so evil!!!  Love it!  I like the way your future of Brian & Justin goes.  It's nice to see that they've done so well.  This story may take me a while to reread, but I know it will be well worth it.



Author's Response:

At first the chapters are long and they get shorter as you read on. Always happy to see new comments on finished stories. Thank you!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 25, 2009 10:34 AM · On: Chapter 4: Sir Michael and Lex

Another WOW! SO much going on. 

You said Mike's going to be bad but you're making me like him & Lex!!

You make me hate Craig, you make me tolerate him, then dislike him, then feel bad for him..... Ha-ha, Stop it!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

I like how Justin & us got to see that Craig does survive.

Bill Gates, nice touch.....

Just really enjoyed.

(side note...RL really tough right now, but I am reading when I get a chance. Thanks for the escape!)

 



Author's Response:

Debbie's Michael messes up later. Sorry if I confused you with another Michael. Lex is cool. Craig...well I'll let you read the story. President Obama is also in the story later. I hope you enjoy it very much.

Hugs!

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 22, 2009 11:58 AM · On: Chapter 3: London

Finally finished this chap. Really good so far! Different from what I've read before but very interesting. 

Seems like there's going to be a lot of traveling in the future.

Surprised w/ the end. I'm sure Michael will be fine since he's an important part of the story........

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading my first child. This story is very different than my other two in many ways; sci fi, magic, lots of new stuff. Michael is very bad in this story so I hope you're not too much a Michael fan. I'm looking forward to your comments as you read.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2009 01:37 PM · On: Chapter 3: London

I'm half way through this chap & am just too tired to finish tonight, but I couldn't wait to tell you that I am LOVING it!! I'm where Jennifer just came in. This is really interesting & I'm looking forward to reading the rest of it. 

I'll write a real review after I finish this chap.....

 

 

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for letting me know you're reading this story. It was my first child and has a special place in my heart. Please comment again as it has so few reviews in number next to it's brother stories.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 01:06 PM · On: Chapter 2: Daddy Dearest

Just read Elsa's review & she's right, your writing does sort of remind me of O.G. Walton's. Not so much your other two stories but difficulty this one. 

You are a gifted writer & I feel privileged that you share it w/ us.



Author's Response:

What I see is that Walton and I both write in 3rd person for our stories; the prespective of being an unknown observer of the plot and actions of the characters rather than basing the story on the journey on one leading or supportive character speaking. This technique places the reader as the third person in the story and draws you into it. It's the only style I use. Walton is a gifted writer and this is high praise. I hope you enjoy this story and don't let the Justin/other sections get you down; they are brief in the total context of the novel. Thanks you for commenting Susan.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Chapter 2: Daddy Dearest

Interesting chapter. I don't have a clue where this story is going! I certainly wasn't expecting this.

A little gross w/ Brian & Craig, I just don't think Brian would ever have anything to do w/ him. 

I want to read the next chap but too tired for tonight. Will be back tomorrow for more!

Oh, thanks for correcting the list of chapters, I just didn't want to read them out of order & was a little confused....

 



Author's Response:

That was a stange bit of writing: Brian and Craig; however important for the plot to happen. You'll see it explains my theory why Craig had such a hard time with Justin's sexuality. The story is ok but my other two are better and this was my first attempt to write and I was really winging it here. Thank you for reading it and commenting Susan very much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2009 10:12 AM · On: Chapter 3: London

Susan, your right; somehow i messed them up and don't remember doing it. They are right now. Thank you.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 3: London

I'm a little confused, LONDON says chap 3 but is next to number 2 & Daddy Dearest says Chap 2 but next to number 3, which one is actually 2?



Author's Response:

The chapters are in order but I must have my numbers messed up. Thanks for pointing that out. I hope you like the story and review for me. It  really means a lot. Thank you.

Reviewer: Susan (Anonymous) · Date: August 13, 2009 01:18 PM · On: Chapter 1: Billioniares

Good chap. It's not pulling me in as quickly as your other two stories but I did enjoy.

Interesting w/the security detail. Funny w/ the ck for Craig & then he dropped.

Sci-fi/Fantasy has never been anything I've liked but I'm thinking I might like this. I should be able to tell after a couple more chaps. 

I'll be bouncing between this & your new story! Hope I don't start getting them mixed up, lol!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much Susan for reviewing this chapter and considering  my first novel ever written. It's way different then the other two so no chance getting them confused. I try to keep the sci fi to a mimimum however. The parts of Justin/other turned off many readers not willing to share our favorite blond boy. You can imagine my delight to see a new review on this story; I haven't seen one for months! Thank you!

Reviewer: Marny (Anonymous) · Date: May 26, 2009 11:44 PM · On: Chapter 1: Billioniares

wow I'm already hooked to the story

 * runs to the next chapter *



Author's Response: Thank you! It was my first attempt to write and I love science fiction and QAF so I put the two together. I wrote this NOVEL in 30 days. Thanks for your review Marny!

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 14, 2009 07:22 PM · On: Chapter 40: Epilogue

I have to say, this story was sometimes way to much, but I had so much fun reading it. I enjoyed every chapter. oh... I love long chapters... you did a wonderful job. I will start reading your other story now.... thank you for sharing. :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thank you for your review. This was my first attempt to write. The second story "Embraced" is far more popular with the readers and the sex hotter. I hope you like it. I update very often.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2009 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 40: Epilogue

I often get emails compimenting my stories. I wish to share them with you on this forum.

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I've learned to wait until a story is finished before I comment.  I've been stung by too many that were never finished.

I greatly enjoyed your first one, the tech parts were first rate.  I am a VERY old science fiction fanatic, so it was most welsome.  Now you are writing a new one.  I can't wait to read it.

(name omitted)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2009 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Thank you readers for hitting 5,000 reads.

Me very happy new writer!!!!!!!

Reviewer: deb (Anonymous) · Date: April 18, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 40: Epilogue

i cryed ...... what an incredible story. i am absolutly blow away. i have read allot of fanfiction but never anything of this calibur.  congradulations  and thanks.

Author's Response:

Reviews like yours inspire me to try and write better and much more. I'm so pleased I could entertain you. You made my day!

I've started a new story "Embraced" and hope to belt it out just as fast as this one. I only work on one story at a time.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:58 PM · On: Chapter 40: Epilogue

Thank you for such a wonderful story. Full of B&J, yet also some wonderful sci-fi. I'm not science person by any means but really love to read sci fi and this was excellant.

Hope you write more stories soon. Thanks for a wonderful story.



Author's Response:

(New writer whips a tear of joy from his eye)

Thank you for such a sweet review. I enjoyed creating this story and do plan to write again soon. Reviews like the make me very happy to do the work it takes to make a novel.

Love,

JTSecrets

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 07:19 PM · On: Chapter 40: Epilogue

I have loved this story from the beginning and it is funny that whenever I would get worried about a certain line of story you would do exactly what I hoped for.

I love that Brian and Justin where together till the end. I also loved how many lives they touched, helped and fucked along the way.

The sci-fi nature of this fic was so clever yet easy to read I would get engrossed everytime.

The banner worked out so well, she really is something isn't she?

Thanks for such a splendid ride, I would jump in at any time,

hugs Aussie Girl,

                        Gerri, xxx.



Author's Response:

Forty chapters in 30 days! I'm still in awe how easy it was for me to belt this one out. I freaked out when it hit 189,000 words exactly on the first completed posting. That might change as I go back chapter for chapter tweaking mistakes missed. I am so grateful for your kind detailed reviews. Knowing I've entertained readers inspires me to attack the keyboard and bring you more. I have a dirty house and piles of laundry and other RL issues to deal with now. The houseboy is on strike because he was neglected during my writings mania, but another story is brewing inside my demented brain. I see queer vampires in my future! To be honest, gay people are very much like vampires in reality already and it can make one hell of a story.

Love you much Gerri! XOXOXO

 

Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:11 AM · On: Chapter 38: Final Preparations

The banner is totally hot! Who are the boys in the banner? They are soooooo cute!

Can't wait to read how we get the bugs.

Dog gone you write fast.



Author's Response:

I love the banner. The boys are Tommy and Oskar. I average a chapter or two a day. There is perhaps three chapters left to this novel.

I'm working on the Invasion! chapter at this time and should post it later tonight. Thanks for reviewing again Justin's Boi.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2009 09:04 AM · On: Chapter 38: Final Preparations

I wish to formally post my sincere appreciation to Nickie, aka: Pannkakan for the amazing banner she created for my story. She is too modest for the talent she has; a true genius with Photo Shop 4.

MEGA-HUGS! Girlfriend!!!!!!!

~JTSecrets

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2009 09:42 PM · On: Chapter 38: Final Preparations

Sucked in spider bugs. I like Ronney, but it is hard to see B/J not as close. I am glad you are still haiving them together, but nor

Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing. Don't fret; our favorite lovers are still very much together. Next chapter will show it.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2009 11:16 AM · On: Chapter 37: The Third Sphere

Just caught the new chapter. Ronny is a big turn on for me and Brian.

The young scientists are fun to read and I can see them in action.

I would have killed Ron's dad though. Some crimes are not forgiveable.

I look forward to the invasion as a major fan of sci fi writings.



Author's Response: Ronny is a very personal character for me; I really enjoyed writing him into the story. He's based on a real person. Our little mad scientists are on a roll with creative energy. Ron's dad gets one second chance to change before his life is through. The insect planet invasion is forming in my brain constantly and will be my most challenging writing ever to accomplish. Good sci fi is very hard to write but worth the effort for those of us who love it.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 06:08 PM · On: Chapter 36: Ronny Jones

Brian is going to love this birthday, lol.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Brian is going be in a state of time warp when he sees Ronny. The boy looks like he could be Justin's clone and he will know how to please his man. Ronny is much more important to the story then being with Brian. The next chapter tells all.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2009 04:50 AM · On: Chapter 1: Billioniares

Thank you readers for passing 4,000 hits last night. Although most of you don't leave reviews I can tell you're reading the story. Hugs! for you all.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 09:50 PM · On: Chapter 35: Party Time

It never stops and I like that.

Author's Response: Yawn...just woke up. Very happy to see another review. The boys have a very active life. I hope to get the next chapter up today.

Reviewer: Justin's boi (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2009 12:35 PM · On: Chapter 35: Party Time

This was a fun chapter. I love JJ and Randy. Is Oskar like a drunk at times?



Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. JJ and Randy are very special. Oskar isn't a drunk but he is young and booze hits him pretty hard, and he can take it or leave it. I wanted to give the reader's a break from all the science fiction technological crap, and set the stage for a new international development. We have maybe five more chapters left to the novel.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 09:02 PM · On: Chapter 34: Project Loverboy

Go boys go!!!

Author's Response:

I love writing those boys. They've given me an idea for an original novel story not OAF.

Two gay teenage lovers who save the human race. Thanks for your review. (does happy dance :P )

 

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:55 PM · On: Chapter 34: Project Loverboy

Go boys go!!!

Author's Response: They are on a roll!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:57 AM · On: Chapter 34: Project Loverboy

Ok physics majors, I'm pushing the BS limits with this chapter. But you have to admit it's better then some lame sub-space crap!

Author's Response: I meant to say sub space communication like Star Trek and other sci fi stuff. That's just too easy to write.

Reviewer: Hotesse (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Chapter 31: The Oskar Project

I've been wondering, What ever happened to JJ. I miss him in the story he would have been cute... right?

Author's Response: Justin Junior lives with his attorney lover in Pittsburgh. He will return by chapter thirty five for a visit. He's a living doll and looks just like Justin with his half-angel features. His most important role is at the end of the story. He gets the gay kingdom and most of Justin's wealth and powers. He's the next Prince of Gay Terra. Thank you for your review.

Reviewer: George (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2009 11:43 PM · On: Chapter 32: The Bleeding Edge of Technology

Great chapter. You're laser theory is right on and very accurate. The bending of space is a cool idea and beyond Star Trek warp drive. In theory you can jump anywhere in a split second this way. The most powerful laser today is 1.5 petawatts so your ratios are right.

Very clever how you hide the new advance laser seed charge ability. The entire chapter is within the range of being possible.

Looking forward to more chapters



Author's Response:

Optics and electronics were my primary focus for my EE degree. I was going to build a plasma ray gun but decided to stay with what I had more knowledge of. I hope you enjoy the next ship, the giant death star USS Loverboy. The boys are creating the designs now.

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