Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2008 07:20 AM · On: Catching Up to the Past

Hi, Gramms. Love their declaration of love for each other. Lots of love. Thanks

Author's Response: I kind of thought that folks would enjoy that scene.  It warmed my heart to picture them saying those words to each other and meaning it with all their hearts.  Thanks for your kind words.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2008 05:05 AM · On: Catching Up to the Past

jennifer and justin reconnecting is a natural thing. how she'll take the news of justin and brian's lifestyle or justin's wanting to stay where he is is another chapter waiting to be written.

brian and justin reconnecting is a passionate thing. justin will not leave him. not now, and if so then not willingly.



Author's Response:

Jennifer is about to discover the man her son has become, but only time will tell if she is able to deal.  Brian, at least, knows the real Justin and knows that he is the most important thing in Justin's life.  That is going to be important to them both very soon.  Thank you so much for your comments Sherrie.  I appreciate them as always.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2008 07:54 AM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

Poor Brian. Justin wouldn't leave him, but the pressure Jen will more than likely put on asking him to come home without knowing the real story will be hard. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank yo so much Jackie.  You hit the nail on the head...just how much will Jennifer know and how will it influence her desire to have her son come home with her?  We are about to find out.  Stay tuned.  Only a few more chapters to go.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2008 05:26 AM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

Hey Grammy, what can I say exect Congratulation again for another wonderful chapter.

I certainly hope that Jennifer will be understanding and Justin will stay by Brian.

It would not only break my heart to see them part. But guess what I´m a strong believer that everything will work out for the best at the end.

Hugs, Sunny



Author's Response: I'm a strong believer in their love being more powerful than outside forces so I think you can rest assured that all will be well in the end.  Be patient and we'll soon see.  Thank you so much for your kindness, Sunny.  I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2008 10:08 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

I believe that justin will stay with brian where ever this may be. I believe in their love and I don´t think that jennifer will dislike their relationship. I always love to read your stories. :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment Rose.  As a reader of my stories, you know that I simply can't break our lovers up for good but they always have to deal with outside forces.  We are about to see how well they deal in the next few and final chapters.  I hope you will enjoy them.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2008 09:42 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

sorry that i couldn't review the previous chapters till now.

grammy, these last two chapters were so tender and touching. brian is thinking of himself and how justin's leaving would effect him, but he is putting justin and jennifer first. justin will definitely need brian for when he faces her.

you are amazing. you know that right?



Author's Response:

My dear Sherrie, it is people like you who are the wonderful ones.  You take the time to make an amateur like myself feel special with your wonderful comments and I am more grateful than I can ever say.  I gave up on my dream of being a writer decades ago in order to fulfill my dream of being a devoted wife and mother.  When I was young I thought you could only do one or the other.  Now, I'm finally living that dream and readers like you make me feel so good about it.  Thank you sincerely. 

 

I'm so glad you like where I'm taking this story.  It is near the end but Brian and Justin still have to face one more hurdle.  Don't worry, cause they can conquer any problem together.  Stay tuned.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 07:56 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

i hope eveerything is alright after the storm! can't wait for the next chapter, love it!!!! thanks

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtfulness Thess.  Yes, luckily the storm was brief and my computer was fine once it rebooted.  I simply had to reconstruct the chapter from memory since I was right in the middle of writing the chapter when the electrical outage caught me by surprise and I didn't have the chance to save my work.  I'm so glad you enjoyed my second attempt to finish this chapter.  Stay tuned for the real meeting of mother and son coming up.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 06:44 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

Oh Grammy you certainly are keeping us in suspense. I'm hoping that Jennifer won't convince Justin to leave.  I think she would want what's best for her son now that she is rid of the hateful Craig. I'm sure that she would want to know about his relationship with Brian and be understanding about it. You know how us mothers are about our gay sons.

Author's Response: I know that not all gay sons are lucky enough to have spectacular mothers like you and Debbie, but I think Jennifer is one too so we'll just have to wait and see how this turns out for our intrepid lovers.  I think they need to explore Justin's past before they deal with his future.  Btw, I hope you checked out my preface to the chapter on TQL.  Something special is there for someone special, namely you my friend.  Big big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 01:16 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

if justin does want to return with his mother then brian could go to, great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments Sara.  You are right, that Brian could leave with Justin, but his home and his work are in Egypt.  He would have to sacrifice everything he has worked for all his life and the place that is dear to his heart.   Hmmmm, would he do that for Justin?  Well, could be?!  Stay tuned for further developments.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 08:03 PM · On: Past Meets Present

I don't usually review here as I leave it for TQL, but I couldn't wait. That was really great and I love that brina is worried how it will effect his life with Justin.

Author's Response: What a pleasant surprise to see your name here Gerri.  I feel honored that you wrote a comment here too.  I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter so much.  It was certainly a tricky one.  This was a momentous occurence in Brian and Justin's life, and it is only natural that Brian would be both happy and scared for Justin and the relationship they have.  It is all the more hard since they have been together for so long now.  Isn't that the way of real life though.  It is when you are most content with your life that something comes along to upset the apple cart.  Only time will tell how they will deal with this situation. I look forward to you joining me.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 01:10 PM · On: Past Meets Present

Oh man...I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I promise not to make you wait long Jackie.  I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  It was difficult to keep it from becoming overwrought, but this is not an everyday thing and the reprecussions from it could be more dramatic than the discovery itself.  Time will tell.  Stay tuned.  And thanks for your comments.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: daisy (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Past Meets Present

oh that was just cruel... i'll try to be patient while waiting for an update...

Author's Response: I'm so sorry Daisy, but after all that unexpected trauma I knew that Justin would need a chance to regroup.  I will have an update as quickly as possible.  Your patience will be rewarded, I promise.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2008 02:58 AM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

Hey Grammy,

I liked this chapter as always and I`m looking forward to the next. 

What will happen when Justin and Jennifer will meet?

Hugs, Sunny 



Author's Response: I so happy to know you enjoyed this chapter, which sets up the big reunion to come.  I'm in the midst of writing the next chapter at this very moment.  I hope you will join me as the family rediscovers each other.  Thanks so much for your comments Sunny.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2008 04:08 AM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

ooooo they're gonna meet. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: The wait for the great meeting is right around the corner Jackie.  I promise not to make you wait too long.  I hope you will find it worth the wait.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 10:27 PM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

your story is getting better and better with each update. :-)) rose



Author's Response: Thank you so much Rose.  It is very encouraging to know that I have been able to make this story worth keeping up with.  I appreciate your comment very much.  The next chapter will be extremely 'revealing' so I hope you will enjoy it.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 01:18 PM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

it will be good for justin to see his mother again and for her to know her son is happy and healthy, update soon

Author's Response: I couldn't agree with you more Sara, and I figured it was about time.  Luckily for Jennifer she will have the right man beside her when the big reunion happens.  I hope you will enjoy it.  The update will be coming soon.  Stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2008 09:40 AM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

i'm so happy for jennifer. finally a man who loves her more than he does himself. good bye craig. hello long lost son. that will be a very emotional meeting especially since justin's memory hasn't returned. yet he felt comfortable painting jennifer's picture.

brian almost always loses his train of thought when he and justin are alone. if justin hadn't ask then brian might have forgotten the cablegram altogether for a while.



Author's Response: There is a bond between mother and son that even a lost memory can't deny.  Please join me for the next chapter as everything changes thanks to a meeting.  I promise it will be memorable, in more ways than one.  I do love a gentle affectionate Brian.  I just can't seem to write him any other way.  LOL!  Thanks so much for your comments Sherrie.  I always love reading them.  Big hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:42 AM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

I love how you are working this story, I just hope that Jennifer will be able to accept her son for the man that he has become.  Beautiful writing, as always.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying the story Lorie.  And don't worry about Jennifer.  All my characters are very close to canon even when the situation is AU and we all know what a loving and good mother Jennifer is.  The next chapter will answer the question for you.  Please join me then.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: onebookwoman (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2008 05:35 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

I'm so glad that your stories are all here.  I really like this one because I've always loved historical romance.  I hope you're feeling better which is why I won't say "please update soon."

Author's Response: What a treat to get a review from a name I haven't seen before.  I am so glad you are reading my works Onebookwoman.  I love your name.  I am a huge fan of period pieces too.  I particularly love stories set in past centuries.  I have a story ready to go when one of my ongoing stories is complete that will be set in the old West of the 1800's.  I hope you will join me for that one too.  Thank you for your kind thoughts.  I am feeling a whole lot better.  One of the problems with aging is a tendency to health problems, but I certainly prefer that to the alternative.  LOL!  i will update as quickly as I can, I can promise you that.  Thank you again.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2008 08:14 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

i was so engrossed in their loving making, which is what it was, that i forgot all about the wonderful things that happened from his showing.

beautiful chapter sandy.



Author's Response: You just made me so happy Sherrie.  That is exactly what I think...when Brian and Justin get together they make love, not just have sex.  That's what makes them so special.  Something special did happen at the showing, but you'll have to wait to find out what...but I promise not too long a wait.  Thanks as always for commenting, my dear.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2008 10:52 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

Another great chapter. The boys are leading a wonderful life. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Jackie for your comments.  They do have a wonderful life, but changes are in the wind.  Don't panic...not all changes are negative.  LOL!  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2008 04:45 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

this was a beautiful chapter. I love the way you write. it´s easy to read and very "visual"... and of course hot :-)) rose

Author's Response: That is such a sweet thing to say Rose.  I love that it is visual for you.  That is how I write.  I picture a scene in my head and try to write it exactly as I envision it.  Which, I guess, qualifies me as a 'dirty old woman'...LOL!  Although, as far as I'm concerned when Brian and Justin make love it is anything but 'dirty'.  Hee hee!  Thank you so much for your comments.  They are much appreciated.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2008 10:07 PM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

great chapter, I love this story, its so interesting and hot too

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sara.  I am always happy to know that someone finds my story interesting.  That is such a nice compliment.  I appreciate it a great deal.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2008 08:11 PM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

Hey Sandra,

you made my day. You know how much I like your stories and how I waited patiently for a new chapter.

I guess I forgot to breath while I read this chapter and I hope the papers are where they`re supposed to be.

Hugs, Sunny



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Sunny.  I hope you felt your patience was well rewarded.  I gave this one a little kick just to make up for the long delay.  Brian's manservant is the most trustworthy man imaginable and his devotion to both Brian and Justin is total...thankfully, as you'll soon see.  Hint, hint.  Stay tuned.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2008 11:11 PM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

Hi, Grams, its been awhile since you updated your beautiful stories???!!! Waiting for it. Thanks



Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the delay Thess.  Believe me, it wasn't by choice.  I lost my monitor about a week and a half ago and just as my Daughter was transferring my files with my new work on the stories on it into her computer I became very ill and ended up in the hospital.  I've only been back home a few days and am just getting my strength back up a little.  I'll try to be back in the saddle as quick as possible.  Please be patient with me.  I miss you guys too...a ton.  Much love, Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2008 01:17 PM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

brian and justin are soooo sweet together. I hope this will still be like that after the show...or will there be someone who knows justin?? :-)) rose



Author's Response: Hmm, well who knows what waits for our lovers?  Oh, that's right...I do.  Hee hee!  Come back soon and all will be revealed Rose.  Thank you so very much for your comments.  They are appreciated very much.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2008 09:11 AM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

great chapter, really sweet :) update soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sara.  I will have the next chapter very shortly so that everyone will know what has been happening to the Taylors in the ensuing years.  I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2008 06:21 AM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

Hmm has the time come for Justin to find his past? He's already had a couple run-ins with it. It's great how well Brian and Justin have built a life for themselves. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much Jackie.  I knew I was taking a risk moving the story ahead so far into the future, but I wanted to give our boys a wonderful life together and the chance to be a true couple so that they would have that bond to face what was coming.  The next chapter will delve into Justin's forgotten life next.  I promise you won't have to wait long.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2008 12:46 AM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

if you don't mind me asking, wherelse are you posting this?

Author's Response: No, of course I don't mind Sherrie.  I am a proud member of True Queer Love.  I post everything I write on that site and our beloved MW.  In case you have never heard of TQL, here is the link...  http://s12.invisionfree.com/True_Queer_Love/index.php.  It is a wonderful home for Brian and Justin lovers who love QAF obsessively.  We are like a family and have so very much to offer.  If you have never heard of us, I hope you will check us out.  Many of the wonderful writers here are also featured on TQL.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2008 05:57 PM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

"just so long as he was the one who was able to take the artist home with him at the end of the night." why do i have a feeling that with all the near misses with jennifer and molly that tonight won't go as planned?

another amazing chapter.

 justin finally graduates, things are going great for the two of them. something has to happen. it's just a feeling and not a good one.

 



Author's Response: One reviewer was concerned that four years had gone by and I had forgotten all about Jennifer.  As you know, I try to tie up loose ends so I have most definitely not forgotten Justin's lost past.  Your feelings are pretty perceptive Sherrie, so keep an eye out for the next chapter.   A lot will be revealed at that time.  Thanks so much for reviewing.  I always appreciate hearing from you.  Grammy

Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2008 05:14 AM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

ooo..close call. Incredible journey for the boys..and an awesome chapter.

Liz



Author's Response: Thank you so much Liz.  I'm very glad to know that you enjoyed the little vacation I sent our boys on.  I think they did do.  LOL!  Keep watching.  I think more close calls may be coming.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2008 06:57 AM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

What a great vacation. It's great that the boys were able to do something so great together. It's going to be hard with Justin's mother finds them. Hopefully the boys pull out ok. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Jackie.  I wanted the boys to have a real adventure.  I'm glad you enjoyed it too.  Jennifer's arrival could definitely make changes, but not necessarily bad.  Stay tuned for further developments.  Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2008 07:57 PM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

dare I say "thank god she didn´t see him"?? She just would have confused justin... hmmm I don´t know but I think justin should really stay with brian. :-)) rose



Author's Response: I can understand your fears for Brian and Justin as a couple, but remember that Justin is not a child and Jennifer could not make him leave Brian.  Only time will tell whether Jennifer's arrival will be a plus or minus in their lives.  Thanks so much for commenting Rose.  I truly appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2008 04:21 PM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

oh sandy. that was amazing. i felt like i was on vacation with them. what a wonderful job. and the research you've done is just outstanding.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much Sherrie.  I'm afraid that's why I took so long in posting this chapter...the research took a lot more time than I expected, but I wanted to give the boys a vacation they'd never forget.  And just imagine how much fun they could have had if they could have been more openly affectionate.  LOL!  Thanks for taking the journey with them.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2008 02:32 AM · On: An Unmistakable Couple

Brian and Justin are so lucky to have so many accept them. Now hopefully Jenn doesn't cause to much trouble....sure. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Jennifer has always been a loving Mother even when not understanding what was happening with her son.  Hopefully that part of her nature will be strong here too.  Thank you so much for commenting Jackie.  I appreciate it so much.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2008 09:36 PM · On: An Unmistakable Couple

wonderful chapter. debbie and all their friends accepting of brian's new found happiness. ahmad and his friends treating justin with respect. what will happen when jennifer arrives? bad enough debbie has to go snooping about justin to ben. can't she ever let anyone live their own life?

Author's Response: Poor Debbie.  I think of her as having a heart in the right place, but in this case she doesn't realize that both Brian and Justin don't want anything to spoil what they have. together.  At least Jennifer is coming without the ball and chain....and it will take some time to get there.  Brian and Justin still have more time to themselves.  So glad you liked this chapter, even without the heat.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2008 08:22 PM · On: An Unmistakable Couple

great chapter... :-)) rose



Author's Response: Thank you Rose.  I'm very glad you liked it and I appreciate your comment.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2008 06:06 AM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

Oooo very very nice. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you very much Jackie.  I'll be back in Egypt as soon as I finish up in Hollywood.  LOL!  Stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2008 04:09 AM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

loved this chapter, cant wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sara.  It is always good to hear that someone enjoyed a chapter.  I very much appreciate it.  The next chapter will be out very soon.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2008 12:14 AM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

sandy, i'm amazed at your imagination. that was one of the most tender yet sizzling hot chapters i have ever read. it was so good until the eventual threat to their happiness.

Author's Response: I apologize for the distress Sherrie, but the problems are in the future.  I can promise you some fun times of discovery first.  Thank you so much for commenting.  It is always a pleasure to see your name.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2008 10:25 PM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

oh, how I love this brian. I was sooo happy to see a new chapter... and the sex was sooo hot hot hot. :-)) rose

Author's Response:

This Brian is definitely a sweetheart, but then so was our canon Brian.  Remember how caring he was about the total stranger in his bed that very first night with Justin?  That said a lot about who the man really was.  So glad you enjoyed their lovemaking.  Thanks for commenting for me Rose.  Grammy

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2008 12:14 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

I just love this story.

You are truly a gifted writer.

Please keep on writing.

 



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying this story, Debbie.  Thank you so very much for letting me know.  And thank you for the very kind compliment.  I truly appreciate it.  Writing has given my a new lease on life in my retirement so it's safe to say I'll keep writing as long as ideas keep popping up in my fevered imagination.  LOL!  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2008 07:15 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

A great chapter. It's great that two people who play a part in Brian's life approve of Justin. And Brian has acknowledged his feelings for Justin. I can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Jackie.  It is always helpful for lovers if the people who matter to them approve of their relationship.  Of course, Justin's people might not be so understanding, but only time will tell.  I promise another chapter very soon.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2008 03:18 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

Hot chapter, I really like how caring Brian is with Justin and Justin is so cute the way he is so adoring of Brian

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Sara.  I just can't seem to write a Brian who isn't caring of his Justin.  LOL!  So glad you enjoy that.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2008 02:13 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

stunning.



Author's Response: Thank you Sherrie.  I'm glad you enjoyed their evening together.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: lorie (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2008 10:39 PM · On: A Most Memorable Night

Amazing chapter.  Are you sure you're not a gay man?  Love all your stories.

 



Author's Response: You just made my day Lorie.  What a wonderful comment.  Of course, if I was a gay man, it would have been a big surprise to my ex-husband!  LOL!  Love is universal.  There are no barriers.  I simply think of our boys as men in love and take it from there.  Thank you so much for the compliment.  I truly appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2008 05:54 PM · On: A Most Memorable Night

that was sooooo hot and sweet. great chapter...:-)) rose

Author's Response: Thank you so much Rose.  I aim to please.  LOL!  I certainly wanted Justin to have a beautiful experience for his first time.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2008 07:28 AM · On: Desert Comfort

Yay! A clue! That adds something that Brian can look for. And a bigger cheer for kissing and fooling around camel rides. Loved the line where Brian said he would apologize if he was sorry, but he wasn't. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when they get to the house.

Author's Response: Brian is one smart man.  It won't take him long to figure things out, but he has something much more urgent on his mind at the moment.  LOL!  Very glad you enjoyed the camel ride too, Jackie.  And that's our Brian...unapologetic if he knows in his heart he didn't do something wrong.  They will be back in the villa in no time.  Thanks for commenting for me.  I appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2008 06:10 AM · On: Desert Comfort

well that was one hot camel ride lol, I was nervous when justin seemed to be getting anxious but that kiss would have calmed anyone down, update soon

Author's Response: I asked myself, Sara, what would calm my fears and...well you read the results.  LOL!  Glad you enjoyed the camel ride.  Being with Brian would give me the urge to mount a camel, that's for sure.  Thanks for commenting.  Another update very soon.  Grammy

Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2008 04:43 AM · On: Desert Comfort

Deliciously Hot! I can't wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: Ahhh, so it warmed your heart.  I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter We_Dreamerz.  The next chapter is in the works.  Thanks for the comments.  Grammy

Reviewer: distorted_G (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2008 02:36 AM · On: Desert Comfort

There are no words to describe how happy I am that you've not only added old stories to the new MW, but that this one is still going strong. I love it!

Also, I was reading your 'about me' part, and I wish I had a grandmother who is as awesome as you are. After my own grandma's "don't two men kissing make you want to be sick" speach, the whole "by the way grandma, I'm gay" definitely wouldn't have gone over well. So basically, I want to adopt you into my extended family lol.



Author's Response:

First of all, I am so sorry that you you were faced with the fear of rejection by family.  Not everyone is raised to understand that all human beings deserve equal respect no matter what their nationality, religion, race, or sexual orientation.  They can't help the beliefs that have been drilled into them.  Hopefully, my dear, time will improve that situation for you and everyone else.  Just know that the list of people who love you and care about you is growing ever longer with each passing year.  I was blessed by a family who taught me nothing but love which I passed down to my child and she to her children.  That's how we'll eradicate this sickness called prejudice.  I would love to have you join my online family called True Queer Love.  Everyone knows me as Grammy there and we have a lot of love to offer you.  If you are interested, feel free to send me an email and I can give you more info. 

Secondly I want to thank you for commenting for me.  I love to hear from my readers.  It makes me so happy to know that someone is enjoying my stories.  As long as I have the ability, I will never abandon a story.  It would not be fair to the readers who have been so loyal to me.  I hope to hear from you again some time.  Hugs from Grammy 

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2008 11:12 PM · On: Desert Comfort

certainly an eye opening trip to the desert for out men. brian is going to be looking into more of what could possibly be justin's background. maybe he'll get a lead. when will justin's memories begin to come back to him?

ok. now i'm all ready for them to be back at the villa.

 



Author's Response: I'm afraid our boys got a little distracted from trying to figure out why Justin was so disturbed at the Pyramids.  Knowing Brian, however, it will come up again.  Hee hee!  Hope you enjoyed the camel ride.  The villa is going to be extra busy on this coming night, I can promise you that.  As always, thanks for commenting Sherrie.  Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2008 10:15 PM · On: Desert Comfort

yippiee.. finally their made the first move... great... please update soon.. :-)) rose

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter Rose and another one is ready to start as soon as I get the next chapter of 'Lights' completed.  It won't be long, I promise.  Thanks for commenting.  Grammy

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2008 04:13 AM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

"even including the small mole just above his pubic hairline" Hmm, have you had your magnifying glass out lately?  LOL!!! Another wonderful chapter.  You've managed to capture their growing attraction. I sympathise with Justin. I've ridden a camel and the worst part is getting up and coming down.  How I would have loved to have had Brian to help me overcome my fear. Another wish that won't come true. Sigh.  Can't wait to see how the trip pans out.

Author's Response: Hee hee!  No, Judy, no magnifying glass...just a very vivid imagination!  I try to see Brian through Justin's eyes and boy, do I like what I see.  LOL!  I know what you mean about the camel.  I rode one once at a theme part with my Daugter when she was little.  It is definitely an acquired taste.  I almost got seasick.  No wonder they call them 'ships of the desert'.  But i can assure you, this ride will be worth the wait.  Thanks so much for commenting.  Grammy

Reviewer: black sheep (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2008 03:25 AM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

I NEED MORE!!!! LOL! GREAT STORY SO FAR....

 

Keep up the good work



Author's Response: I'm getting the hint that you would like me to post another chapter very soon, black sheep?!  LOL!  Please be patient.  I have the next chapter of Lights to complete and I promise I'll be right back to 'Shadow' again.  I'm very glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for letting me know.  I truly appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: Maya (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2008 03:12 AM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

Brian and Justin are so cute, I am worried if they go the pyramids that Justin will get some bad memories, update soon

Author's Response: I'm really glad you are enjoying the story Maya and I'm afraid you are right to be concerned about the memories...but you'll have to check out the next chapter to understand the meaning behind what I'm saying.  Hope you'll enjoy it too.  Thank you for commenting.  Grammy

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2008 11:21 PM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

Grammy, I just found this story. It is most intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you found the story Suse and are enjoying it.  I will be back to the next chapter as quickly as possible.  Please stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2008 11:18 PM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

This chapter really showed why I love your work so much. It feels as if the reader is there. I hope something good happens to Brian and Justin...like a memory returned...or them getting together soon. Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hmmmm, how about if I offer you a little of both those thoughts Jackie?  I hope that will make it worth the wait.  Thank you so much for your comments.  They are much appreciated.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2008 06:59 PM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

sandy, fabulous job. painting a world that we can feel as though we're a part of. at least for me. justin's feeling for brian are coming out like he says at the end of his brush. i only have to wonder what brian is thinking sitting behind justin and being close.

justin should go with his feelings. "Something told him that this was going to be an adventure he would never forget...made all the more wonderful because he was sharing it with Brian Kinney.. "



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments Sherrie.  I can promise you that the next chapter will reveal Brian's feelings as he gallops along behind Justin.  I can also promise something new for our intrepid lovers....at least I don't believe I've ever read of this before.  LOL!  Stay tuned.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: bmyoungs (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2008 09:08 PM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

i really enjoy this story.  I hope you continue it soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments bmyoungs.  As a matter of fact I am in the final stages of the next chapter and should have it posted no later than tomorrow.  I hope you will continue to enjoy where this story leads.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2008 02:58 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

I feel bad for Jennifer. She doesn't have a choice to stay like she really wants to. I almost hope that they don't find Justin...then he can stay with Brian. And Brian in the bath.....just great. Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Jackie.  I doubt if anyone or anything will be able to part Justin and Brian if they discover their true feelings for one another, but I don't think Jennifer should suffer too long.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  More to come very soon.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2008 05:39 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

grammy and dphysh, just wanted to say that i'm glad to be a part of the "old timers" group. only thing is that i cover up the "snow". hahahaha

Author's Response: Oh Sherrie, the snow is one of the best parts of being an 'old timer'.  It ticks me off that I can't seem to get rid of all this brown in my hair, but the greys are beginning to take over.  I would prefer white, but I'll have to settle for gray, it looks like.  LOL!  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2008 05:35 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

I like the story, but the whole "Justin didn't belong up on the auction block because he was white" comes off as really racist. I'd be careful of that...

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my story, but I am dumbfounded by your comment.  Where in the world did you read that I said Justin didn't belong on the auction block because he is white?  My mind didn't even go there, nor would it ever.  Justin obviously came from a financially comfortable background...well fed and well educated...and was also obviously from either a European or American background.  For the most part, people offered up in the clandestine slavery business were natives of their country and/or from a very poor background, at least from the research that I did.  There is nothing for me to be careful of.  I detest political correctness for its own sake.  I would not want to offend anyone deliberately, but I am only responsible for what is in my own heart and mind, not for what someone else reads into my words.  I am sorry if you were offended, but I am even more sorry that you misread me.  However, I do thank you for taking the time to comment.  Grammy

Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2008 02:21 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

Its great how sweet brian is being towards justin, maybe when justin gets his drawing supplies and draws brian, brian will find the drawings and realise that justin likes men too lol

Author's Response: Hmmm!  It wouldn't be the first time that Brian recognized Justin's feelings for him based on a drawing (i.e. Moonlight Magic), but it is always a good thought.  I can promise you that he won't have to wait long to get the message...either one of them.  Thank you so much for commenting Meg.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

captivating chapter.

when will brian find out that"the chances of Justin having the same feelings about men as he did", were truer than he thought?

i'm not even thinking of jennifer and craig right now. all i know is that if it were my son, i'd stay until i knew something definite.



Author's Response: Please don't be too harsh with Jenn, Sherrie.  Remember that this story takes place almost a hundred years ago.  Women didn't have the same resources and ability to stand up for themselves as they do now.  Her Mother's instinct is right on, however.  And trust me, Brian won't have to wait too long for Justin.  I can't keep them separate for too long.  It isn't in me to be so cruel.  LOL!  Thanks so much for commenting.  Hugs from Grammy 

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2008 05:45 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

Really like this fic! Can't help but wonder waht is happening with the Taylor family, what are they doing about their missing son and heir? S happy that there is another 'old timer' reading and writing fic! (Well in my case more reading than writing at the moment but nice to know someone else shares my obsessions!) Had to let you know I think your stories are improving wach time I read them! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Dphysh.  I can promise you that I haven't forgotten the Taylors and we will hear from them again.  And I'll bet there are plenty of 'old timers' on here.  If not, well I'm proud to be one.  I figure it this way, there may be snow on my roof, but I still have plenty of fire left in my furnace.  (One of my Mom's favorite sayings...LOL!)  And nothing has stoked that fire like the love between Brian and Justin.  I am so glad you believe my stories are improving because it is always my aim to try to do my best each time and I do feel more comfortable writing each time I set out with something new.  Thank you again.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2008 05:55 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

if brian only knew that somewhere in his mind justin felt the same way brian did about men.

maybe things will come back to him slowly if he starts to draw again.

i loved this chapter.



Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter Sherrie.  There are just some things that we are born to do and be.  For Justin, that is his innate artistic eye, and when you have something as beautiful as Brian in front of you...well talk about inspiration.  LOL!  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Bec (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

brian deserves a medal for not touching justins bubble butt in the bath, that had to have been hard for him lol excellent chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much Bec.  I have no doubt that it was quite 'hard' for poor Brian to resist, but he is a gentleman after all.  LOL!  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 03:31 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

Another great chapter. If Justin knows he can draw it'll open a lot of doors to his memories. And ouch...my skin just hurts thinking about his chest. I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you Jackie, for your kind comments.  Justin's artwork will definitely play a part in helping him in the future, I can promise you that.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 01:46 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

Brian was so caring and sweet to Justin. I enjoyed this chaper, and cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know that you enjoyed the chapter Sara.  That's our Brian..aloof on the outside but a warm heart on the inside...especially for that certain blond.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2008 06:11 AM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

sandy, your writing is vividly bringing this story to life. it felt like i was watching from the sidelines. can't wait for the next chapter. luck was on both their sides that night. ahmad did well by his friend even if brian doesn't know it yet.

Author's Response: You know how thick headed Brian can be sometimes, but his instincts led him in the right direction.  Now all he has to do is follow the path to his beautiful fate.  I'm so glad you are enjoying this story Sherrie and thank you for commenting.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2008 05:59 AM · On: Facing Reality

i can hardly wait. for the first meeting of something that will change their lives. for the first meeting of something that was meant to be. yum.

Author's Response: That is my theory too Sherrie.  It doesn't matter what century, what country, or even what planet...Brian and Justin were simply meant to be.  And we wouldn't have it any other way.  *Deep Sigh*  Thank you so much for commenting.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2008 10:13 PM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

Poor Justin. That would be the worst.....but he was bought by Brian, that can't be so bad. Thank goodness that Brian gave in though if he hadn't Justin could have been bought by someone bad. Great chapter and I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Jackie.   Justin is definitely in better hands than he could have been.  Now if he could just figure out who he is.  But I'm sure Brian will try and help him regain himself.  Grammy

Reviewer: Lauren (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2008 10:10 AM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

That would have been so scary for justin, lucky brian got to him before some perv, I am looking forward to seeing them get to know each other and falling deeply madly passionately in love :)

Author's Response: It may take a little time for the love thing to happen Lauren, but of course it will.  The universe would not have it any other way.  LOL!  Thank you so much for commenting.  I truly appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2008 09:38 AM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

I am so relieved Brian won, he will take good care of Justin, this story has me hooked so bad, eager to see what happens next

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying this story Sara.  Our Brian simply couldn't let a young man like Justin suffer at the hands of the wrong man.  But he has definitely bought more than he bargained for.  LOL!  Stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: Big J (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2008 09:23 AM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

Omigosh Grammy.  This is sooo exciting.  Thank goodness Brian bought him and had no trouble doing it.

Author's Response: Oh yes, Judy, Brian could never miss the chance to come to the rescue of Justin, even when he doesn't know a thing about the young man.  It must be in the chemistry.  LOL!  Thanks so much for commenting for me.  Hugs from Grammy

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