Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2019 08:12 PM · On: The Truth Exposed

Oh no, I do hope Jennifer accepts them and doesn’t make Justin choose. Brian and Justin’s Love is to strong and beautiful to lose.



Author's Response:

Jennifer certainly chose her second husband wisely.  Mark will guide her through this discovery with love and care.  The end is in sight.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2019 07:44 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

Poor Brian his anxiety is so strong, I think I would be the very same so scared to lose the one I loved. I hope Justin doesn’t leave and that he tells his mother of their love. 



Author's Response:

Brian is an honorable man and wants whatever Justin feels is best for him.  But of course, he hopes Justin chooses him over his past.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2019 06:33 PM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

Oh wow what is going to happen when they meet. So many years has passed and lots has happened in that time. I’m excited to find out. 



Author's Response:

I had to throw in a little suspense to reach the point where Justin's past comes back into his life.  I'm glad this has intrigued you.  Thank you for the wonderful comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2019 12:55 PM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

You could feel the pride radiating off Brian for Justin and all he accomplished. You could also feel how happy Justin felt and that made me smile and feel proud of him. I do hope he finds his mother and sister as I think he is missing that link.



Author's Response:

A life that started out so frightening in Egypt for Justin has definitely become the life he is more than happy to have.  But, of course, there is still that shadow from the past lingering.  Maybe that will change in time.  I was so happy to see that you are continuing to enjoy this story, Vicki.  Thank you so much for all your wonderful comments.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2019 01:39 PM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

Such an Amazing chapter the professor noticing Justin talent and then the wonderful trip Brian arranged. Then Jennifer missing who was quite possibly Justin Z my heart is thumping in anticipation waiting to see.



Author's Response:

I wrote this chapter just to show how committed our boys are to each other.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2019 01:19 PM · On: An Unmistakable Couple

Oh wow I do hope that Justin gets on well in Art school and that something doesn’t go wrong. I sincerely hope that Jennifer finds Justin and that it doesn’t ruin the relationship between Bruan and Justin. My fingers are crossed for them and I’m on the edge of my seat waiting to find out what happens next. 🤞



Author's Response:

Jennifer deserves to know the fate of her beloved son, who she has never given up on, but the question will be... how could it affect the deepening relationship between Brian and Justin.  More on that coming up.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2019 01:09 PM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

So hot and sexy and such beauty in those moments beautiful between them. Brian really showed Justin just how wonderful it can be between two men. 💗💗💗 



Author's Response:

It was important to show that their relationship has grown deeper with time, and how it all started.  The future is looking bright for our boys right now.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2019 11:09 AM · On: Desert Comfort

That was amazing, I was so intrigued by the race place and how it was all set up. I loved how Brian looked after Justin tethered making sure he was ok. Then that ride they took wow wee girl talk about smoking hotness. 

 

Beautiful work as always x



Author's Response:

Your patience has been rewarded, as has Brian and Justin's.  LOL!  Now that the door to romance is open, who knows where it will lead?  And yes, I did research to make sure that the camel races were a fact during this time period.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2019 10:48 AM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

I could feel Justin’s panic when Brian saw the drawing his did of him but I’m thrilled with the reaction he got. They are getting closer I hope they talk more about that and about what’s going to happen about getting his memories back. 

 

Beautiful work 🌸



Author's Response:

I'm so happy that this story is still interesting to you, Vicki, although it is taking a bit of time for our boys to recognize what is happening between the two of them.  I can promise you that there will be many long conversations as time goes by.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2019 10:27 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

How on earth could Craig do that, he is evil beyond evil. Poor Jennifer my heart aches for her. 



Author's Response:

I didn't like making Jennifer suffer like that, but it was easy to picture Craig being so callous.  Perhaps what Craig has decided will change Jenn's life, as well as Justin's.  Time will tell.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2019 09:04 AM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

I could feel Brian’s disgust when he realized what was going on, but I am glad he stuck there and bought Justin. I hope he gains his trust and helps him.  Brilliant chapter x



Author's Response:

The thought of owning another human being is totally against Brian's principles, but in this case he knows it is what he must do to save the young American.  Only time will tell how it will work out for them both.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2019 07:45 PM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

Oh boy Justin is in real danger isn’t he. I fear for him and who I’m guessing is Brian. Who are these men who did this. 

 

Brilliant start x



Author's Response:

Justin is indeed in danger.  The men who attacked him were simply after anyone and poor Justin was just in the wrong place at the wrong time.  Brian is a stranger, for now.  I'm so glad you are checking out this story.  I enjoyed sending our boys into a whole new world with this one.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: June 24, 2018 11:56 AM · On: Love in the Shadow of the Pyramids

I took a break from the new website to read this one again. Thank you, Grammy, for writing this wonderful tale.



Author's Response:

My dear Bob, I can't begin to tell you how much pleasure it gives me that you took the time to re-read this story and let me know that you liked it so much.  This was truly one of the ones that I enjoyed most in writing.  Thank you for always making me feel supported in my work, which has brought me so much joy during my retirement.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2016 09:33 PM · On: Love in the Shadow of the Pyramids

Grammy,

Once again I wanted to read this great story of yours and did today. It was partly your writing that got me interested in QAF fan fiction to begin with, and this story has always been an all time favorite of mine. Thank you so much for writing it.

bob



Author's Response:

My dear Bob, it is always such a pleasure to receive comments from you on any of my stories.  I have such respect for your own work.  If I had even the slightest impact on your taking up writing fanfic, then I am truly honored.  I have not been able to produce any new work for quite some time for many different reasons, but just knowing that my old work is still appreciated is the ultimate compliment.  Thank you so much for reminding me why I took up writing in the first place so late in life and how rewarding it has become.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2016 12:06 PM · On: Love in the Shadow of the Pyramids

I really liked this story, it was a new type of B/J AU unlike any other I have previously read and it was interesting to read about another place and another time.



Author's Response:

I just realized that you had left me this review some time again.  Please accept my apologies for the long delay in responding.  I truly appreciate your comments.  I love placing our beloved characters in another time and place and am so pleased that you enjoyed the journey there too.  Thank you so much.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2014 03:21 AM · On: The Truth Exposed

I had the wrong person, Mark noticed, I thought one of them would see the obvious.  I can understand Jennifer was just too caught up in finding her son.  That was a brilliant bit of logic.  I was so glad you wrote "the suite that Brian had ordered for their special night when Justin graduated was now unoccupied" as I was thinking, maybe Jennifer and Mark have that suite and you wouldn't want to associate your mother with those happy fun time memories. LOL  Em and Deb might have helped Justin and with Mark's final thought in this chapter, Jen is in good hands. "Somehow he would help his wife to accept what was the reality of her son's life."

I have attached an interview that you have probably already seen, however I found it interesting.  I knew the girls pubic hair was fake as you could see it, but they speak about the accents and the accuracy of the shows history.  I hope you aren't offended by the majority of the conversation. 

I can't believe you have taken me back to such a horrible memory for the stoning.  Thanks; NOT.

Okay, Nasir's necklace with all the carved figures that look like penises; really.  I must take more notice. LOL

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Em9ZTFnE9II

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Don't you just adore Mark (named after my own brother actually)?  I wanted someone to be there who could help Jennifer adjust to the reality of her son's life, the way that Debbie did for her in the series.  It needed to be someone she knew very well and trusted completely.  You did guess accurately who would 'spill the beans' and expose their secret.  You are always very perceptive.

Thank you so much for the link to that interview.  Every time I think I've seen all the videos there are, another one pops up.  I missed this interview but loved the Lounge Live one that can be found on the same page.  That one is longer and more detailed.  If you haven't watched it, you really should give it a try.  Thank you for the link. 

Whoops!  Sorry about the stoning thing, but when I researched Crassus's history for a story I was writing (since I knew he was a real person) I learned that the terrible event actually did happen.  It showed how the writers of the show did their research.  

As for Nasir's necklace, I noticed it right away in that famous love scene, when several of the ornaments slipped off to the side of his neck when Agron was kissing him on their bed.  The necklace fascinated me and I went back to Season 2 to see if he was wearing it then.  He wasn't, so I became intrigued on how he got it.  If you are interested in my version as to how the necklace ended up around Nasir's neck, you'll find my story 'A Gift for Nasir' right here and on Ao3.  It is just about my favorite short story for the couple that I wrote.  I'd love to know what you think if you decide to read it.

Thank you again for all the fantastic comments, Flossee.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 02:36 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

This chapter was a little bit of a tease.  Justin hides in his room and Brian tells Jennifer a cover story.  I assume the true eventually comes out if they are in Egypt long enough as Britin's friends know the truth and surely one will slip up in conversation.  My reviewing maybe a little off today as I haven't had time to watch any Agron footage. :(

Cheers  :)



Author's Response:

Ah yes, the tease.  Actually I simply needed to show that both Brian and Justin were prepared just in case something like this ever happened.  Of course, they wouldn't let themselves think beyond that point, such as how it would affect their relationship.  Now it is time for the Taylor family to reconnect, but you'll have to wait for one more chapter before you see whether your suggestion is prophetic.  Btw, I enjoy all of your reviews... short or long.  Thank you again, Flossee.  I love starting my day this way.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2014 08:29 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

Well whose names are on those pieces of paper?  Will Ahmose forget his instructions and the information be washed away causing Justin to once again miss his chance to reunite with his parents.   Everything is going so well for Brian and Justin so I am just holding my breath as life seems too good to them. 

Warning: This review will contain no Nagron comments.  LOL   However, I've been watching and reading everything I can find on the show.  :D

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Ah yes, whose name is on that paper is the question.  LOL!  Only time will tell.  It would certainly be a shame if anything was to invade the truly happy life that Brian and Justin now have together.  

Ah yes, no Nagron!  But I'm almost finished with a new 3 part Nagron story, so maybe when I post it, you'll want to check it out.  We'll soon see.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2014 03:42 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

WHAT? Brian gives Justin a blow job and gets nothing in return.  Why I wonder, as Justin was willing and Brian certainly sounds frustrated to the point that it wouldn't take much anyway.  :D

LOL  Ahmad made Brian blush.

I've always liked a journey where the men need to keep their hands off each other and they suffer in silence. 

I have begun watching Spartacus again only to be upset that Barca and Pietros die.  This is going to be a long sad series I think.  I haven't begun watching the links you sent as I got the first series earlier than expected and I can't stop watching it.  The fast forward button gets a lot of use during the fighting scenes. LOL

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Check out the next chapter and you'll see that Brian didn't have to wait very long for his 'reward' for making Justin sooo happy.  As for Brian blushing... I just couldn't help myself.  I loved the idea of someone being able to do that to him and Ahmad seemed the perfect candidate, being as savvy as he was as to what Brian was feeling.   There are going to be a number of journeys for our couple coming up, and a lot of pleasures taken very carefully, but oh so happily.  

I'm so glad you are getting into Spartacus now.  As I said before, there is a lot more to the series than just the fighting and bloodshed.  The characters are so interesting, both good and bad, and very good and very bad.  My heart was broken too with the loss of Barca and Pietros.  I would have become almost as enamored with their love affair I'm sure, if they had lasted longer and had more of a storyline to follow.  I'm not sure if you know this or not, but the actor who played Spartacus in Season One, a much loved man by all, became very ill during the hiatus between Season One and Two.  As a result, they decided to create a prequel Season in order to give him time to recover so he could return to the show.  In the prequel, they go back a little in time to when some characters, like Crixus, Oenomaeus, Ashur, Batiatus and Lucretia, as well as Gannicus and Barca were at the ludus.  Gannicus becomes one of Spartacus's Generals in Season Two and Three but he has left the ludus as a champion gladiator with his freedom by the end of the prequel and isn't seen in Season One.  Barca had a different lover during the prequel... a gorgeous man originally from Greece named Auctus who was also a gladiator.  Their brief, but passionate love story will break your heart if you watch the episodes.  It will help you understand a lot of the later characters in the show.  The Season is called 'Gods of the Arena' and I highly recommend seeing it right after Season One.  Btw, sadly the actor who played Spartacus did pass away and they had to re-cast for Season Two and Three, but he did an excellent job and earned his title.  I thought you might like to add these video to your list since you showed an interest in Barca.  I hope you don't mind two more.  I wish I could show more but not many fanvids were made of them, and the one that includes Pietros is extremely violent so I won't add it here.  Huge hugs, Grammy 

http://youtu.be/gxkt61rdG9w

http://youtu.be/-o0J07Oyr4E

 

 

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2014 08:56 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

Hello Grammy.  As I pictured Justin entering the water I was picturing a bath like Cleopatra would have where steps are used to enter.  Then I read about Brian washing and massaging Justin's back while not looking at his manhood and I thought well it can't be.  It's funny how your mind automatically goes to a particular place when reading about another country and another time.  Thank you so much for allowing my mind to take this little adventure in to a time I'm not all that familiar with for this part of the world.  I'm so pleased the men have talked and Justin's fears seem to be alleviated somewhat.  Brian's restraint was a nice touch as I can only image how hard that would have been for him to not touching Justin's bubble asset. LOL

I didn't receive the message you sent.  I see some people are having trouble reviewing and others with email messages.  Can you please send it again and if it doesn't work I will contact admin and let them know. 

I can't wait to read the next chapter "Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes"; but whose?  :D

Cheers 



Author's Response:

Ah yes, the proverbial sunken tub with room enough for all kinds of activities besides bathing.  Check out the next chapter and you might be surprised.  LOL!  As for Brian being able to restrain himself... well that doesn't get any easier.  I can assure you of that.  Looking forward to what you think of the next chapter, Flossee.

I will resend the video list, but I can't remember anything else I wrote in the message, so I'll have to wing it.  Thank heavens I kept the links on my wordpad just in case.   Please let me know if you get at least one of the messages.  If not, maybe I can pass the list on to you some other way.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2014 01:53 PM · On: Facing Reality

OMG Grammy, I don't want to read this to fast as then it will be over.  I'm just two chapters in and I can already see the research you have done to make this authentic, however I expected nothing less from you.  :) I think it is easy to see who Brian is going to buy, and I can't wait to read the description of their first meeting. 

You have sold me on trying Spartacus again.  Firstly though, I want to catch up with Kim's horsey fic and Sarah's vampire one, and then I will allow myself time to search for the men that have the same magical chemistry as our QAF men.   That's a tall order; still I trust your judgement.

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

Brian is really in for a surprise when he finds out where his good friend, the Prince is taking him.  He'll be even more surprised by how he reacts in the end.  LOL!  Thank you so much for the compliment concerning the research.  I absolutely love researching the topics I write about when I don't know much about them.  It is one of the perks of writing stories.  You're never too old to learn new things.

I do hope you'll check out Agron and Nasir.  I'll be happy to share some of my favorite videos with you that center entirely around them and don't involve all the blood and gore, if you'd ever like me to.  I actually discovered them thanks to the videos I found on YouTube.  I found the couple so intriguing, I had to take a chance on the entire show.  LOL!  I've never regretted it.  

Hope the rest of this story makes you happy too.  I can hardly wait for you to get to the camel riding scene.  Of all the scenes I've written (and imagined in my head) this is one of my very favorite ones.  Huge hugs, Grammy

 

 

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2014 10:22 AM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

Hey Grammy.  I know you have updated your profile and your name is Sandra, however, I quite like Grammy, but if it annoys you please let me know. :)  I'm so happy I once again have time to read the feature story of the month; unfortunately I have missed a few.  Congratulations on being this month's feature story.  I have only read the first chapter so far and I can already see why this is in the "Best Fan Fiction Classic" category.  Poor Justin it's bad enough he has been taken hostage, but not remembering who he is must only heighten his fears.   I love this banner and I like your Spartacus ones too.  I wish I could watch that series as I would love to read those fics, unfortunately it is to bloody for me.   I can't wait to read on and luckily I don't have to. LOL

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

My dear Flossee, I was born with the name Sandra, but Grammy was chosen for me by my Grandchildren and it means more to me than anything I've ever been called.  Even my friends who are older than me or my age know me as Grammy.  I love it and will be thrilled to have you think of me that way too.  

Thank you so much for the Congratulations.  I was taken by surprise to discover that my story had been chosen to be featured and felt extremely honored.  I loved writing this story, especially while doing research to make it as authentic as I possibly could.  I hope you will enjoy every minute of it.

I completely understand how you feel about Spartacus.  I didn't watch it at all for the first two Seasons because the first episode convinced me it was too bloody.  It was only when I learned of the love affair between Agron and Nasir that I decided to cautiously try it again.  That's when I discovered that the show was about far more than the violence.  The storylines were exciting, the characters complicated and fascinating, and it was brilliantly put together.  By the time I got to the story involving Agron and Nasir in Season 2, I was totally and irrevocably hooked.  Perhaps, if you feel like it, you could watch some of the videos that only include Nagron and not all the violence so you can see why folks like me are in love with them in the same way we love Britin.  The actors, Dan and Pana, who play them have the same magical chemistry that Gale and Randy possess.   If you do, I hope you'll try out a bit of my work on their stories.  

No matter what though, I want to thank you for your lovely comments.  I appreciate it so much.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

 

 

 

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2014 05:09 AM · On: Featured Story for May 2014

It has been a tremendous oversight that I have never reviewed one of (if not) my favorite stories. I've lost count of how many times I've read this story. It should have at least 100 more reviews because of that fact alone.

Sandra:)

Author's Response:

What absolutely delightful comments, Sandra... thank you very much.  It is always a treat to get any kind of review from a reader, but as long as I can see that my work is being read I consider that a compliment in itself.  But I admit that knowing you liked this story enough to read it more than once is as exciting as it gets.  You have made my day.  Again, thank you.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: nena (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2014 09:20 AM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

I read it some time ago and I think it's really amazing!



Author's Response:

It is so wonderful to hear from someone who read and enjoyed one of my older stories.  Thank you very much for your thoughtfulness in letting me know that you liked my work, Nena.  It is much appreciated.  Warm hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 06, 2014 02:14 AM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

Great choose for the featured story! This is one of my faves! TAG



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for the lovely compliment, TAG.  I was completely unaware that my story was chosen as this month's featured item.  I am so grateful for the kindness, and appreciate you taking the time to comment too.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2012 04:46 AM · On: Love in the Shadow of the Pyramids

The perfect way to spend a day, reading a wonderful story filled with camel delights. I've read this many times but always find a few more things that really tickle my fancy. I know I had the whole month to enjoy this story, right from the home page but I had to devote this day to it. I read nonstop and enjoyed every word. This is a love story that will last as long as the pyramids.
Hugs, Lori

Author's Response:

As alway, Lori, you and I will always be connected via camels.  If I ever get one to add to my menagerie at home, I'm naming her Lori.  LOL!  Who knows, maybe someday we'll even re-visit the desert.  Of course, we will never have as much fun on a camel as Brian and Justin...but then who could?  Huge hugs, Grammy  

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2012 11:47 AM · On: Love in the Shadow of the Pyramids

Looks like a great choice for featured story of the month on our home page.



Author's Response:

Thank you doesn't quite do it.  To say that I feel honored to have this story chosen as featured story is putting it too mildly.  This is truly one of the stories that I enjoyed writing the most.  Just the research alone for the time period and location was thrilling.  To have the entire story enjoyed by my fellow QAFers is the icing on the cake.  However I must say thank you, because that is how I feel...thankful.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 03:04 PM · On: The Truth Exposed

Well that went well; leave it to the gossip of Debbie and Emmett to break the ice.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 02:55 PM · On: Catching Up to the Past

I wonder what Jennifer learns at the Liberty Inn.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 02:46 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

I like how Justin already decided to stay with Brian; smart puppy.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 02:35 PM · On: Past Meets Present

This is getting very interesting indeed. Great writing of the meeting.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 02:04 PM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

I sense a winding up to something now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 01:39 PM · On: An Unmistakable Couple

Jennifer coming to Egypt will be something special I'm sure.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:26 PM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

Looks like Brian will be stuck with Justin for a while.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

I wonder how many chapters until they get together.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2010 11:38 AM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

I decided to read this story again and leave comments for each chapter. Already I see I probably forgot how it ends.

Reviewer: qbee (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2008 08:06 AM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

Hi Grammy! *waves*

Yeah - I don't often comment. I tend to be a bit shy about it unless pushed. 

I'm glad to know that you're a researcher when it comes to your fic. That makes me appreciate them even more.

I'm just a tad younger than you but I still remember my father having uniform work pants that buttoned rather than zipped. I'll have to remember to ask my mother when zippers began to be used commonly in men's trousers (she trained as a dressmaker in her youth) but things could have been different in Europe than here in North America.

See, now I'm all interested in all things 'Zipper' and my sister will be laughing and rolling her eyes...again!

Cheers!



Author's Response:

Hi Qbee.  *waves back* 

How wonderful to hear back from you.  You definitely sound like my kind of person.  I even run the trivia game on my home site TQL because I love, love, love learning things about almost anything.  The older I get, the more I want to learn.  I love my readers so much I never want to cheat them with unrealistic or nonsensical bits it my stories.  That's why I appreciate it when a reader gives me a heads up about something that doesn't look right.  In the case of the zipper, my research says one thing, but I've noticed that one can sometimes see conflicting info on the same subject.  Let me know what you find out.  I'm truly curious.  Btw, don't worry about your sis.  My siblings, parents (yep they are still with me, thank heavens) my Daughter, and my Granddaughters all think I'm anal retentive, especially on the computer but they love me anyway.  LOL!  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: August 04, 2008 02:29 PM · On: Love in the Shadow of the Pyramids

too sad this story is finished. I really enjoyed reading it. as always you did a great great great job. :-)) rose

Author's Response: I am very happy that you enjoyed this story Rose.  Your comments have been wonderful and much appreciated.  I felt sad to let the story go but it was time for our lovers to literally ride off into the sunset together.  The desert will heat up over and over again but it won't be from the sun.  LOL!  Thank you so much again for staying with my story.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2008 10:42 AM · On: Love in the Shadow of the Pyramids

fantastic ending. no drama, no angst. just a loving mother giving her son room for happiness. for the man in his life to share his undying love. it was wonderful especially since you brought them back to where it all began.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sherrie.  I hate to let this story go, but it was time.  I actually dreamed about the desert last night.  LOL!  I knew the minute that Helen brought the idea of our lovers in ancient Egypt with Justin as a slave that this was an idea that had great romantic possibilities.  I'm just glad it worked out.  I will always love the image of Brian and Justin making timeless love under the shadow of the timeless monuments.  Did I mention I'm an incurable romantic?  I appreciate all the wonderful comments you've left me for this story.  Thank you again.  Big big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2008 07:21 PM · On: The Truth Exposed

So, we are coming to the end...

After reading this chapter my first impulse was to say: No, please don´t let  it end but on second thought I must admit that it is the perfect time to end the story. I think the decision Justin has to make is a final one. A decision which defines his and Brians´s future. So the story will come to its closure and that a good thing.

In my opinion the end of a story is the most important part of a story. I`m not a writer myself so I can only guess but I think it´s the most difficult part to write too.  The circle is ready and both ends have to meet. Many authors ( not only FanFics) aren´t able to do it. There are sudden twists and turns in the last chapter. People appear or disappear  without any reasonable explanation.

So, one reason why I enjoy reading your stories is that I know that I can read your stories and relax. You will write a plausible ending!

Of course it helps to cope with the near end of this story to know that there are many others which will follow soon. And I will be here and enjoy them.

Sorry, for writing such a long review - maybe there is a law against it - but You´re too far away to call or visit .

Hugs, Sunny 

 



Author's Response: Sunny, your review is absolutely one of the best I've ever received.  Thank you so very much.  I agree with you totally about the importance of the ending of a story.  I hate it when I become vested in characters and then feel that I've been cheated out of a satisfying conclusion to their story (and that includes secondary characters).  I love this story, but it is definitely time for our lovers to reach the climax of their relationship and for Justin to deal with his past.  I can't speak for other writers, but for me the story itself seems to talk to me and tell me that it has said enough.  So far I've only written one story that I found impossible to let the characters go...thus the Double Trouble sequel.  I hope you will enjoy the conclusion of this story and pick up its replacement which will be set in modern times but still be AU in nature (though not as much).  Thank you again for being such a faithful reader and reviewer.  It means a great deal to me.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jess (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2008 06:46 PM · On: The Truth Exposed

well its all out in the open now, it will be sad to see this story end but Im hopeing you will write more stories, any new plots you have planned? :)

Author's Response: You are so right Jess, the secret's out but not resolved.  Stay tuned for the final chapter.  And yes, I have so many other stories ready to go in my file that I just hope I'm still around to get them out of my head and onto the screen.  LOL!  The next full length story will be entitled 'The Story Teller' and will be set in modern times.  It will be AU since Justin will be cast as the writer of gay romance novels who meets the ad man that represents his publishing company.  I hope you will join me for that story.  The one after that will be set in the 1800's in the old West.  Thanks so much for your readership and comments.  It means a great deal to me.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2008 10:39 AM · On: The Truth Exposed

At least mark understands. Great chapter . I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you Jackie.  It is always a help when one has someone with a loving heart to support you.  Jennifer definitely married wisely the second time around.  The final chapter is in the works.  Stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2008 06:40 AM · On: The Truth Exposed

i don't know what to say. outstanding chapter. so full of uncertainty. will hate to see this story end.



Author's Response: I share your feelings about the story ending Sherrie.  I thoroughly enjoyed learning a bit about a Country I knew little about before, plus loving the relationship between this Brian and Justin.  I can promise that there will be no uncertainty about the lover's future in this coming final chapter.  Thank you so much for your comments.  I appreciate them always.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: July 26, 2008 01:58 AM · On: Catching Up to the Past

That was exactly what I needed on a much too cold and rainy summer day: Pure Love. It really warmed my heart! You were able to create emotions one could not only read you could really feel them. I got the feeling if I would only stretch my arm far enough I could touch it. You know what I mean?

Hugs, Sunny

Author's Response: I know exactly what you are saying Sunny.  There are writers that make me feel as if I was a part of their story or a voyeur in the characters lives.  I am deeply honored that you feel I can do that for you too.  Your words have warmed my heart more than I can say.  Thank you so very much.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: July 19, 2008 07:20 AM · On: Catching Up to the Past

Hi, Gramms. Love their declaration of love for each other. Lots of love. Thanks

Author's Response: I kind of thought that folks would enjoy that scene.  It warmed my heart to picture them saying those words to each other and meaning it with all their hearts.  Thanks for your kind words.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 19, 2008 05:05 AM · On: Catching Up to the Past

jennifer and justin reconnecting is a natural thing. how she'll take the news of justin and brian's lifestyle or justin's wanting to stay where he is is another chapter waiting to be written.

brian and justin reconnecting is a passionate thing. justin will not leave him. not now, and if so then not willingly.



Author's Response:

Jennifer is about to discover the man her son has become, but only time will tell if she is able to deal.  Brian, at least, knows the real Justin and knows that he is the most important thing in Justin's life.  That is going to be important to them both very soon.  Thank you so much for your comments Sherrie.  I appreciate them as always.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2008 07:54 AM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

Poor Brian. Justin wouldn't leave him, but the pressure Jen will more than likely put on asking him to come home without knowing the real story will be hard. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank yo so much Jackie.  You hit the nail on the head...just how much will Jennifer know and how will it influence her desire to have her son come home with her?  We are about to find out.  Stay tuned.  Only a few more chapters to go.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2008 05:26 AM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

Hey Grammy, what can I say exect Congratulation again for another wonderful chapter.

I certainly hope that Jennifer will be understanding and Justin will stay by Brian.

It would not only break my heart to see them part. But guess what I´m a strong believer that everything will work out for the best at the end.

Hugs, Sunny



Author's Response: I'm a strong believer in their love being more powerful than outside forces so I think you can rest assured that all will be well in the end.  Be patient and we'll soon see.  Thank you so much for your kindness, Sunny.  I'm so glad you are enjoying this story.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: July 11, 2008 10:08 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

I believe that justin will stay with brian where ever this may be. I believe in their love and I don´t think that jennifer will dislike their relationship. I always love to read your stories. :-)) rose

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the compliment Rose.  As a reader of my stories, you know that I simply can't break our lovers up for good but they always have to deal with outside forces.  We are about to see how well they deal in the next few and final chapters.  I hope you will enjoy them.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 10, 2008 09:42 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

sorry that i couldn't review the previous chapters till now.

grammy, these last two chapters were so tender and touching. brian is thinking of himself and how justin's leaving would effect him, but he is putting justin and jennifer first. justin will definitely need brian for when he faces her.

you are amazing. you know that right?



Author's Response:

My dear Sherrie, it is people like you who are the wonderful ones.  You take the time to make an amateur like myself feel special with your wonderful comments and I am more grateful than I can ever say.  I gave up on my dream of being a writer decades ago in order to fulfill my dream of being a devoted wife and mother.  When I was young I thought you could only do one or the other.  Now, I'm finally living that dream and readers like you make me feel so good about it.  Thank you sincerely. 

 

I'm so glad you like where I'm taking this story.  It is near the end but Brian and Justin still have to face one more hurdle.  Don't worry, cause they can conquer any problem together.  Stay tuned.  Big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 07:56 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

i hope eveerything is alright after the storm! can't wait for the next chapter, love it!!!! thanks

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your thoughtfulness Thess.  Yes, luckily the storm was brief and my computer was fine once it rebooted.  I simply had to reconstruct the chapter from memory since I was right in the middle of writing the chapter when the electrical outage caught me by surprise and I didn't have the chance to save my work.  I'm so glad you enjoyed my second attempt to finish this chapter.  Stay tuned for the real meeting of mother and son coming up.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 06:44 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

Oh Grammy you certainly are keeping us in suspense. I'm hoping that Jennifer won't convince Justin to leave.  I think she would want what's best for her son now that she is rid of the hateful Craig. I'm sure that she would want to know about his relationship with Brian and be understanding about it. You know how us mothers are about our gay sons.

Author's Response: I know that not all gay sons are lucky enough to have spectacular mothers like you and Debbie, but I think Jennifer is one too so we'll just have to wait and see how this turns out for our intrepid lovers.  I think they need to explore Justin's past before they deal with his future.  Btw, I hope you checked out my preface to the chapter on TQL.  Something special is there for someone special, namely you my friend.  Big big hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: sara (Anonymous) · Date: July 10, 2008 01:16 PM · On: Brian Explains the 'Story'

if justin does want to return with his mother then brian could go to, great chapter

Author's Response: Thanks for your comments Sara.  You are right, that Brian could leave with Justin, but his home and his work are in Egypt.  He would have to sacrifice everything he has worked for all his life and the place that is dear to his heart.   Hmmmm, would he do that for Justin?  Well, could be?!  Stay tuned for further developments.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 08:03 PM · On: Past Meets Present

I don't usually review here as I leave it for TQL, but I couldn't wait. That was really great and I love that brina is worried how it will effect his life with Justin.

Author's Response: What a pleasant surprise to see your name here Gerri.  I feel honored that you wrote a comment here too.  I'm so glad that you enjoyed the chapter so much.  It was certainly a tricky one.  This was a momentous occurence in Brian and Justin's life, and it is only natural that Brian would be both happy and scared for Justin and the relationship they have.  It is all the more hard since they have been together for so long now.  Isn't that the way of real life though.  It is when you are most content with your life that something comes along to upset the apple cart.  Only time will tell how they will deal with this situation. I look forward to you joining me.  Huge hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 01:10 PM · On: Past Meets Present

Oh man...I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response: I promise not to make you wait long Jackie.  I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter.  It was difficult to keep it from becoming overwrought, but this is not an everyday thing and the reprecussions from it could be more dramatic than the discovery itself.  Time will tell.  Stay tuned.  And thanks for your comments.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: daisy (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Past Meets Present

oh that was just cruel... i'll try to be patient while waiting for an update...

Author's Response: I'm so sorry Daisy, but after all that unexpected trauma I knew that Justin would need a chance to regroup.  I will have an update as quickly as possible.  Your patience will be rewarded, I promise.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2008 02:58 AM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

Hey Grammy,

I liked this chapter as always and I`m looking forward to the next. 

What will happen when Justin and Jennifer will meet?

Hugs, Sunny 



Author's Response: I so happy to know you enjoyed this chapter, which sets up the big reunion to come.  I'm in the midst of writing the next chapter at this very moment.  I hope you will join me as the family rediscovers each other.  Thanks so much for your comments Sunny.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2008 04:08 AM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

ooooo they're gonna meet. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: The wait for the great meeting is right around the corner Jackie.  I promise not to make you wait too long.  I hope you will find it worth the wait.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 10:27 PM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

your story is getting better and better with each update. :-)) rose



Author's Response: Thank you so much Rose.  It is very encouraging to know that I have been able to make this story worth keeping up with.  I appreciate your comment very much.  The next chapter will be extremely 'revealing' so I hope you will enjoy it.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 01:18 PM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

it will be good for justin to see his mother again and for her to know her son is happy and healthy, update soon

Author's Response: I couldn't agree with you more Sara, and I figured it was about time.  Luckily for Jennifer she will have the right man beside her when the big reunion happens.  I hope you will enjoy it.  The update will be coming soon.  Stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2008 09:40 AM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

i'm so happy for jennifer. finally a man who loves her more than he does himself. good bye craig. hello long lost son. that will be a very emotional meeting especially since justin's memory hasn't returned. yet he felt comfortable painting jennifer's picture.

brian almost always loses his train of thought when he and justin are alone. if justin hadn't ask then brian might have forgotten the cablegram altogether for a while.



Author's Response: There is a bond between mother and son that even a lost memory can't deny.  Please join me for the next chapter as everything changes thanks to a meeting.  I promise it will be memorable, in more ways than one.  I do love a gentle affectionate Brian.  I just can't seem to write him any other way.  LOL!  Thanks so much for your comments Sherrie.  I always love reading them.  Big hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Lorie (Anonymous) · Date: June 21, 2008 08:42 AM · On: On Opposite Sides of the World

I love how you are working this story, I just hope that Jennifer will be able to accept her son for the man that he has become.  Beautiful writing, as always.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying the story Lorie.  And don't worry about Jennifer.  All my characters are very close to canon even when the situation is AU and we all know what a loving and good mother Jennifer is.  The next chapter will answer the question for you.  Please join me then.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: onebookwoman (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2008 05:35 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

I'm so glad that your stories are all here.  I really like this one because I've always loved historical romance.  I hope you're feeling better which is why I won't say "please update soon."

Author's Response: What a treat to get a review from a name I haven't seen before.  I am so glad you are reading my works Onebookwoman.  I love your name.  I am a huge fan of period pieces too.  I particularly love stories set in past centuries.  I have a story ready to go when one of my ongoing stories is complete that will be set in the old West of the 1800's.  I hope you will join me for that one too.  Thank you for your kind thoughts.  I am feeling a whole lot better.  One of the problems with aging is a tendency to health problems, but I certainly prefer that to the alternative.  LOL!  i will update as quickly as I can, I can promise you that.  Thank you again.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2008 08:14 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

i was so engrossed in their loving making, which is what it was, that i forgot all about the wonderful things that happened from his showing.

beautiful chapter sandy.



Author's Response: You just made me so happy Sherrie.  That is exactly what I think...when Brian and Justin get together they make love, not just have sex.  That's what makes them so special.  Something special did happen at the showing, but you'll have to wait to find out what...but I promise not too long a wait.  Thanks as always for commenting, my dear.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2008 10:52 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

Another great chapter. The boys are leading a wonderful life. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Jackie for your comments.  They do have a wonderful life, but changes are in the wind.  Don't panic...not all changes are negative.  LOL!  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2008 04:45 AM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

this was a beautiful chapter. I love the way you write. it´s easy to read and very "visual"... and of course hot :-)) rose

Author's Response: That is such a sweet thing to say Rose.  I love that it is visual for you.  That is how I write.  I picture a scene in my head and try to write it exactly as I envision it.  Which, I guess, qualifies me as a 'dirty old woman'...LOL!  Although, as far as I'm concerned when Brian and Justin make love it is anything but 'dirty'.  Hee hee!  Thank you so much for your comments.  They are much appreciated.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2008 10:07 PM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

great chapter, I love this story, its so interesting and hot too

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sara.  I am always happy to know that someone finds my story interesting.  That is such a nice compliment.  I appreciate it a great deal.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2008 08:11 PM · On: Justin 'Kinney': The Professional Artist

Hey Sandra,

you made my day. You know how much I like your stories and how I waited patiently for a new chapter.

I guess I forgot to breath while I read this chapter and I hope the papers are where they`re supposed to be.

Hugs, Sunny



Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Sunny.  I hope you felt your patience was well rewarded.  I gave this one a little kick just to make up for the long delay.  Brian's manservant is the most trustworthy man imaginable and his devotion to both Brian and Justin is total...thankfully, as you'll soon see.  Hint, hint.  Stay tuned.  Hugs, Grammy

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: June 10, 2008 11:11 PM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

Hi, Grams, its been awhile since you updated your beautiful stories???!!! Waiting for it. Thanks



Author's Response: I'm so sorry for the delay Thess.  Believe me, it wasn't by choice.  I lost my monitor about a week and a half ago and just as my Daughter was transferring my files with my new work on the stories on it into her computer I became very ill and ended up in the hospital.  I've only been back home a few days and am just getting my strength back up a little.  I'll try to be back in the saddle as quick as possible.  Please be patient with me.  I miss you guys too...a ton.  Much love, Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2008 01:17 PM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

brian and justin are soooo sweet together. I hope this will still be like that after the show...or will there be someone who knows justin?? :-)) rose



Author's Response: Hmm, well who knows what waits for our lovers?  Oh, that's right...I do.  Hee hee!  Come back soon and all will be revealed Rose.  Thank you so very much for your comments.  They are appreciated very much.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2008 09:11 AM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

great chapter, really sweet :) update soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sara.  I will have the next chapter very shortly so that everyone will know what has been happening to the Taylors in the ensuing years.  I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2008 06:21 AM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

Hmm has the time come for Justin to find his past? He's already had a couple run-ins with it. It's great how well Brian and Justin have built a life for themselves. I cannot wait to see what happens next. Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much Jackie.  I knew I was taking a risk moving the story ahead so far into the future, but I wanted to give our boys a wonderful life together and the chance to be a true couple so that they would have that bond to face what was coming.  The next chapter will delve into Justin's forgotten life next.  I promise you won't have to wait long.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2008 12:46 AM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

if you don't mind me asking, wherelse are you posting this?

Author's Response: No, of course I don't mind Sherrie.  I am a proud member of True Queer Love.  I post everything I write on that site and our beloved MW.  In case you have never heard of TQL, here is the link...  http://s12.invisionfree.com/True_Queer_Love/index.php.  It is a wonderful home for Brian and Justin lovers who love QAF obsessively.  We are like a family and have so very much to offer.  If you have never heard of us, I hope you will check us out.  Many of the wonderful writers here are also featured on TQL.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2008 05:57 PM · On: A Bright Future for Justin

"just so long as he was the one who was able to take the artist home with him at the end of the night." why do i have a feeling that with all the near misses with jennifer and molly that tonight won't go as planned?

another amazing chapter.

 justin finally graduates, things are going great for the two of them. something has to happen. it's just a feeling and not a good one.

 



Author's Response: One reviewer was concerned that four years had gone by and I had forgotten all about Jennifer.  As you know, I try to tie up loose ends so I have most definitely not forgotten Justin's lost past.  Your feelings are pretty perceptive Sherrie, so keep an eye out for the next chapter.   A lot will be revealed at that time.  Thanks so much for reviewing.  I always appreciate hearing from you.  Grammy

Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2008 05:14 AM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

ooo..close call. Incredible journey for the boys..and an awesome chapter.

Liz



Author's Response: Thank you so much Liz.  I'm very glad to know that you enjoyed the little vacation I sent our boys on.  I think they did do.  LOL!  Keep watching.  I think more close calls may be coming.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 12, 2008 06:57 AM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

What a great vacation. It's great that the boys were able to do something so great together. It's going to be hard with Justin's mother finds them. Hopefully the boys pull out ok. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much Jackie.  I wanted the boys to have a real adventure.  I'm glad you enjoyed it too.  Jennifer's arrival could definitely make changes, but not necessarily bad.  Stay tuned for further developments.  Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 11, 2008 07:57 PM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

dare I say "thank god she didn´t see him"?? She just would have confused justin... hmmm I don´t know but I think justin should really stay with brian. :-)) rose



Author's Response: I can understand your fears for Brian and Justin as a couple, but remember that Justin is not a child and Jennifer could not make him leave Brian.  Only time will tell whether Jennifer's arrival will be a plus or minus in their lives.  Thanks so much for commenting Rose.  I truly appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2008 04:21 PM · On: The Vacation of a Lifetime

oh sandy. that was amazing. i felt like i was on vacation with them. what a wonderful job. and the research you've done is just outstanding.

Author's Response: Thank you so very much Sherrie.  I'm afraid that's why I took so long in posting this chapter...the research took a lot more time than I expected, but I wanted to give the boys a vacation they'd never forget.  And just imagine how much fun they could have had if they could have been more openly affectionate.  LOL!  Thanks for taking the journey with them.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: May 05, 2008 02:32 AM · On: An Unmistakable Couple

Brian and Justin are so lucky to have so many accept them. Now hopefully Jenn doesn't cause to much trouble....sure. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Jennifer has always been a loving Mother even when not understanding what was happening with her son.  Hopefully that part of her nature will be strong here too.  Thank you so much for commenting Jackie.  I appreciate it so much.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2008 09:36 PM · On: An Unmistakable Couple

wonderful chapter. debbie and all their friends accepting of brian's new found happiness. ahmad and his friends treating justin with respect. what will happen when jennifer arrives? bad enough debbie has to go snooping about justin to ben. can't she ever let anyone live their own life?

Author's Response: Poor Debbie.  I think of her as having a heart in the right place, but in this case she doesn't realize that both Brian and Justin don't want anything to spoil what they have. together.  At least Jennifer is coming without the ball and chain....and it will take some time to get there.  Brian and Justin still have more time to themselves.  So glad you liked this chapter, even without the heat.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: May 04, 2008 08:22 PM · On: An Unmistakable Couple

great chapter... :-)) rose



Author's Response: Thank you Rose.  I'm very glad you liked it and I appreciate your comment.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2008 06:06 AM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

Oooo very very nice. I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you very much Jackie.  I'll be back in Egypt as soon as I finish up in Hollywood.  LOL!  Stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 30, 2008 04:09 AM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

loved this chapter, cant wait for the next one

Author's Response: Thank you so much Sara.  It is always good to hear that someone enjoyed a chapter.  I very much appreciate it.  The next chapter will be out very soon.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2008 12:14 AM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

sandy, i'm amazed at your imagination. that was one of the most tender yet sizzling hot chapters i have ever read. it was so good until the eventual threat to their happiness.

Author's Response: I apologize for the distress Sherrie, but the problems are in the future.  I can promise you some fun times of discovery first.  Thank you so much for commenting.  It is always a pleasure to see your name.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 29, 2008 10:25 PM · On: An Even More Memorable Morning

oh, how I love this brian. I was sooo happy to see a new chapter... and the sex was sooo hot hot hot. :-)) rose

Author's Response:

This Brian is definitely a sweetheart, but then so was our canon Brian.  Remember how caring he was about the total stranger in his bed that very first night with Justin?  That said a lot about who the man really was.  So glad you enjoyed their lovemaking.  Thanks for commenting for me Rose.  Grammy

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: April 24, 2008 12:14 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

I just love this story.

You are truly a gifted writer.

Please keep on writing.

 



Author's Response: I am so glad you are enjoying this story, Debbie.  Thank you so very much for letting me know.  And thank you for the very kind compliment.  I truly appreciate it.  Writing has given my a new lease on life in my retirement so it's safe to say I'll keep writing as long as ideas keep popping up in my fevered imagination.  LOL!  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2008 07:15 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

A great chapter. It's great that two people who play a part in Brian's life approve of Justin. And Brian has acknowledged his feelings for Justin. I can't wait to see what happens next

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Jackie.  It is always helpful for lovers if the people who matter to them approve of their relationship.  Of course, Justin's people might not be so understanding, but only time will tell.  I promise another chapter very soon.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 23, 2008 03:18 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

Hot chapter, I really like how caring Brian is with Justin and Justin is so cute the way he is so adoring of Brian

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your comments Sara.  I just can't seem to write a Brian who isn't caring of his Justin.  LOL!  So glad you enjoy that.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 23, 2008 02:13 AM · On: A Most Memorable Night

stunning.



Author's Response: Thank you Sherrie.  I'm glad you enjoyed their evening together.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: lorie (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2008 10:39 PM · On: A Most Memorable Night

Amazing chapter.  Are you sure you're not a gay man?  Love all your stories.

 



Author's Response: You just made my day Lorie.  What a wonderful comment.  Of course, if I was a gay man, it would have been a big surprise to my ex-husband!  LOL!  Love is universal.  There are no barriers.  I simply think of our boys as men in love and take it from there.  Thank you so much for the compliment.  I truly appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2008 05:54 PM · On: A Most Memorable Night

that was sooooo hot and sweet. great chapter...:-)) rose

Author's Response: Thank you so much Rose.  I aim to please.  LOL!  I certainly wanted Justin to have a beautiful experience for his first time.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2008 07:28 AM · On: Desert Comfort

Yay! A clue! That adds something that Brian can look for. And a bigger cheer for kissing and fooling around camel rides. Loved the line where Brian said he would apologize if he was sorry, but he wasn't. Great chapter. I can't wait to see what happens when they get to the house.

Author's Response: Brian is one smart man.  It won't take him long to figure things out, but he has something much more urgent on his mind at the moment.  LOL!  Very glad you enjoyed the camel ride too, Jackie.  And that's our Brian...unapologetic if he knows in his heart he didn't do something wrong.  They will be back in the villa in no time.  Thanks for commenting for me.  I appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2008 06:10 AM · On: Desert Comfort

well that was one hot camel ride lol, I was nervous when justin seemed to be getting anxious but that kiss would have calmed anyone down, update soon

Author's Response: I asked myself, Sara, what would calm my fears and...well you read the results.  LOL!  Glad you enjoyed the camel ride.  Being with Brian would give me the urge to mount a camel, that's for sure.  Thanks for commenting.  Another update very soon.  Grammy

Reviewer: We_Dreamerz (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2008 04:43 AM · On: Desert Comfort

Deliciously Hot! I can't wait for the next installment!

Author's Response: Ahhh, so it warmed your heart.  I am so glad you enjoyed the chapter We_Dreamerz.  The next chapter is in the works.  Thanks for the comments.  Grammy

Reviewer: distorted_G (Anonymous) · Date: April 14, 2008 02:36 AM · On: Desert Comfort

There are no words to describe how happy I am that you've not only added old stories to the new MW, but that this one is still going strong. I love it!

Also, I was reading your 'about me' part, and I wish I had a grandmother who is as awesome as you are. After my own grandma's "don't two men kissing make you want to be sick" speach, the whole "by the way grandma, I'm gay" definitely wouldn't have gone over well. So basically, I want to adopt you into my extended family lol.



Author's Response:

First of all, I am so sorry that you you were faced with the fear of rejection by family.  Not everyone is raised to understand that all human beings deserve equal respect no matter what their nationality, religion, race, or sexual orientation.  They can't help the beliefs that have been drilled into them.  Hopefully, my dear, time will improve that situation for you and everyone else.  Just know that the list of people who love you and care about you is growing ever longer with each passing year.  I was blessed by a family who taught me nothing but love which I passed down to my child and she to her children.  That's how we'll eradicate this sickness called prejudice.  I would love to have you join my online family called True Queer Love.  Everyone knows me as Grammy there and we have a lot of love to offer you.  If you are interested, feel free to send me an email and I can give you more info. 

Secondly I want to thank you for commenting for me.  I love to hear from my readers.  It makes me so happy to know that someone is enjoying my stories.  As long as I have the ability, I will never abandon a story.  It would not be fair to the readers who have been so loyal to me.  I hope to hear from you again some time.  Hugs from Grammy 

 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2008 11:12 PM · On: Desert Comfort

certainly an eye opening trip to the desert for out men. brian is going to be looking into more of what could possibly be justin's background. maybe he'll get a lead. when will justin's memories begin to come back to him?

ok. now i'm all ready for them to be back at the villa.

 



Author's Response: I'm afraid our boys got a little distracted from trying to figure out why Justin was so disturbed at the Pyramids.  Knowing Brian, however, it will come up again.  Hee hee!  Hope you enjoyed the camel ride.  The villa is going to be extra busy on this coming night, I can promise you that.  As always, thanks for commenting Sherrie.  Grammy

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2008 10:15 PM · On: Desert Comfort

yippiee.. finally their made the first move... great... please update soon.. :-)) rose

Author's Response: I'm so glad you enjoyed the chapter Rose and another one is ready to start as soon as I get the next chapter of 'Lights' completed.  It won't be long, I promise.  Thanks for commenting.  Grammy

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2008 04:13 AM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

"even including the small mole just above his pubic hairline" Hmm, have you had your magnifying glass out lately?  LOL!!! Another wonderful chapter.  You've managed to capture their growing attraction. I sympathise with Justin. I've ridden a camel and the worst part is getting up and coming down.  How I would have loved to have had Brian to help me overcome my fear. Another wish that won't come true. Sigh.  Can't wait to see how the trip pans out.

Author's Response: Hee hee!  No, Judy, no magnifying glass...just a very vivid imagination!  I try to see Brian through Justin's eyes and boy, do I like what I see.  LOL!  I know what you mean about the camel.  I rode one once at a theme part with my Daugter when she was little.  It is definitely an acquired taste.  I almost got seasick.  No wonder they call them 'ships of the desert'.  But i can assure you, this ride will be worth the wait.  Thanks so much for commenting.  Grammy

Reviewer: black sheep (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2008 03:25 AM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

I NEED MORE!!!! LOL! GREAT STORY SO FAR....

 

Keep up the good work



Author's Response: I'm getting the hint that you would like me to post another chapter very soon, black sheep?!  LOL!  Please be patient.  I have the next chapter of Lights to complete and I promise I'll be right back to 'Shadow' again.  I'm very glad you are enjoying the story and thank you for letting me know.  I truly appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: Maya (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2008 03:12 AM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

Brian and Justin are so cute, I am worried if they go the pyramids that Justin will get some bad memories, update soon

Author's Response: I'm really glad you are enjoying the story Maya and I'm afraid you are right to be concerned about the memories...but you'll have to check out the next chapter to understand the meaning behind what I'm saying.  Hope you'll enjoy it too.  Thank you for commenting.  Grammy

Reviewer: Suse (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2008 11:21 PM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

Grammy, I just found this story. It is most intriguing and I can't wait for the next chapter.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you found the story Suse and are enjoying it.  I will be back to the next chapter as quickly as possible.  Please stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2008 11:18 PM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

This chapter really showed why I love your work so much. It feels as if the reader is there. I hope something good happens to Brian and Justin...like a memory returned...or them getting together soon. Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hmmmm, how about if I offer you a little of both those thoughts Jackie?  I hope that will make it worth the wait.  Thank you so much for your comments.  They are much appreciated.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2008 06:59 PM · On: Prelude to a Memorable Day

sandy, fabulous job. painting a world that we can feel as though we're a part of. at least for me. justin's feeling for brian are coming out like he says at the end of his brush. i only have to wonder what brian is thinking sitting behind justin and being close.

justin should go with his feelings. "Something told him that this was going to be an adventure he would never forget...made all the more wonderful because he was sharing it with Brian Kinney.. "



Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments Sherrie.  I can promise you that the next chapter will reveal Brian's feelings as he gallops along behind Justin.  I can also promise something new for our intrepid lovers....at least I don't believe I've ever read of this before.  LOL!  Stay tuned.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: bmyoungs (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2008 09:08 PM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

i really enjoy this story.  I hope you continue it soon.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the comments bmyoungs.  As a matter of fact I am in the final stages of the next chapter and should have it posted no later than tomorrow.  I hope you will continue to enjoy where this story leads.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2008 02:58 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

I feel bad for Jennifer. She doesn't have a choice to stay like she really wants to. I almost hope that they don't find Justin...then he can stay with Brian. And Brian in the bath.....just great. Great chapter and I can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Jackie.  I doubt if anyone or anything will be able to part Justin and Brian if they discover their true feelings for one another, but I don't think Jennifer should suffer too long.  I'm glad you are enjoying the story.  More to come very soon.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2008 05:39 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

grammy and dphysh, just wanted to say that i'm glad to be a part of the "old timers" group. only thing is that i cover up the "snow". hahahaha

Author's Response: Oh Sherrie, the snow is one of the best parts of being an 'old timer'.  It ticks me off that I can't seem to get rid of all this brown in my hair, but the greys are beginning to take over.  I would prefer white, but I'll have to settle for gray, it looks like.  LOL!  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2008 05:35 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

I like the story, but the whole "Justin didn't belong up on the auction block because he was white" comes off as really racist. I'd be careful of that...

Author's Response:

I'm glad you like my story, but I am dumbfounded by your comment.  Where in the world did you read that I said Justin didn't belong on the auction block because he is white?  My mind didn't even go there, nor would it ever.  Justin obviously came from a financially comfortable background...well fed and well educated...and was also obviously from either a European or American background.  For the most part, people offered up in the clandestine slavery business were natives of their country and/or from a very poor background, at least from the research that I did.  There is nothing for me to be careful of.  I detest political correctness for its own sake.  I would not want to offend anyone deliberately, but I am only responsible for what is in my own heart and mind, not for what someone else reads into my words.  I am sorry if you were offended, but I am even more sorry that you misread me.  However, I do thank you for taking the time to comment.  Grammy

Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2008 02:21 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

Its great how sweet brian is being towards justin, maybe when justin gets his drawing supplies and draws brian, brian will find the drawings and realise that justin likes men too lol

Author's Response: Hmmm!  It wouldn't be the first time that Brian recognized Justin's feelings for him based on a drawing (i.e. Moonlight Magic), but it is always a good thought.  I can promise you that he won't have to wait long to get the message...either one of them.  Thank you so much for commenting Meg.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2008 12:47 AM · On: Fantasies and Frustrated Hopes

captivating chapter.

when will brian find out that"the chances of Justin having the same feelings about men as he did", were truer than he thought?

i'm not even thinking of jennifer and craig right now. all i know is that if it were my son, i'd stay until i knew something definite.



Author's Response: Please don't be too harsh with Jenn, Sherrie.  Remember that this story takes place almost a hundred years ago.  Women didn't have the same resources and ability to stand up for themselves as they do now.  Her Mother's instinct is right on, however.  And trust me, Brian won't have to wait too long for Justin.  I can't keep them separate for too long.  It isn't in me to be so cruel.  LOL!  Thanks so much for commenting.  Hugs from Grammy 

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2008 05:45 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

Really like this fic! Can't help but wonder waht is happening with the Taylor family, what are they doing about their missing son and heir? S happy that there is another 'old timer' reading and writing fic! (Well in my case more reading than writing at the moment but nice to know someone else shares my obsessions!) Had to let you know I think your stories are improving wach time I read them! :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Dphysh.  I can promise you that I haven't forgotten the Taylors and we will hear from them again.  And I'll bet there are plenty of 'old timers' on here.  If not, well I'm proud to be one.  I figure it this way, there may be snow on my roof, but I still have plenty of fire left in my furnace.  (One of my Mom's favorite sayings...LOL!)  And nothing has stoked that fire like the love between Brian and Justin.  I am so glad you believe my stories are improving because it is always my aim to try to do my best each time and I do feel more comfortable writing each time I set out with something new.  Thank you again.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2008 05:55 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

if brian only knew that somewhere in his mind justin felt the same way brian did about men.

maybe things will come back to him slowly if he starts to draw again.

i loved this chapter.



Author's Response: I'm very glad you enjoyed this chapter Sherrie.  There are just some things that we are born to do and be.  For Justin, that is his innate artistic eye, and when you have something as beautiful as Brian in front of you...well talk about inspiration.  LOL!  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Bec (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

brian deserves a medal for not touching justins bubble butt in the bath, that had to have been hard for him lol excellent chapter

Author's Response: Thank you so much Bec.  I have no doubt that it was quite 'hard' for poor Brian to resist, but he is a gentleman after all.  LOL!  I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter.  Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 03:31 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

Another great chapter. If Justin knows he can draw it'll open a lot of doors to his memories. And ouch...my skin just hurts thinking about his chest. I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you Jackie, for your kind comments.  Justin's artwork will definitely play a part in helping him in the future, I can promise you that.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2008 01:46 AM · On: Cleaning Up and Getting Started

Brian was so caring and sweet to Justin. I enjoyed this chaper, and cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know that you enjoyed the chapter Sara.  That's our Brian..aloof on the outside but a warm heart on the inside...especially for that certain blond.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2008 06:11 AM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

sandy, your writing is vividly bringing this story to life. it felt like i was watching from the sidelines. can't wait for the next chapter. luck was on both their sides that night. ahmad did well by his friend even if brian doesn't know it yet.

Author's Response: You know how thick headed Brian can be sometimes, but his instincts led him in the right direction.  Now all he has to do is follow the path to his beautiful fate.  I'm so glad you are enjoying this story Sherrie and thank you for commenting.  Grammy

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2008 05:59 AM · On: Facing Reality

i can hardly wait. for the first meeting of something that will change their lives. for the first meeting of something that was meant to be. yum.

Author's Response: That is my theory too Sherrie.  It doesn't matter what century, what country, or even what planet...Brian and Justin were simply meant to be.  And we wouldn't have it any other way.  *Deep Sigh*  Thank you so much for commenting.  Hugs from Grammy

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2008 10:13 PM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

Poor Justin. That would be the worst.....but he was bought by Brian, that can't be so bad. Thank goodness that Brian gave in though if he hadn't Justin could have been bought by someone bad. Great chapter and I cannot wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for commenting Jackie.   Justin is definitely in better hands than he could have been.  Now if he could just figure out who he is.  But I'm sure Brian will try and help him regain himself.  Grammy

Reviewer: Lauren (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2008 10:10 AM · On: A Dark Shadow Looms

That would have been so scary for justin, lucky brian got to him before some perv, I am looking forward to seeing them get to know each other and falling deeply madly passionately in love :)

Author's Response: It may take a little time for the love thing to happen Lauren, but of course it will.  The universe would not have it any other way.  LOL!  Thank you so much for commenting.  I truly appreciate it.  Grammy

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 17, 2008 09:38 AM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

I am so relieved Brian won, he will take good care of Justin, this story has me hooked so bad, eager to see what happens next

Author's Response: I'm so glad you are enjoying this story Sara.  Our Brian simply couldn't let a young man like Justin suffer at the hands of the wrong man.  But he has definitely bought more than he bargained for.  LOL!  Stay tuned.  Grammy

Reviewer: Big J (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2008 09:23 AM · On: A Sale in the Marketplace

Omigosh Grammy.  This is sooo exciting.  Thank goodness Brian bought him and had no trouble doing it.

Author's Response: Oh yes, Judy, Brian could never miss the chance to come to the rescue of Justin, even when he doesn't know a thing about the young man.  It must be in the chemistry.  LOL!  Thanks so much for commenting for me.  Hugs from Grammy

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