Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Happy endings
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2019 10:28 PM · On: Married at last

good one

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 09:04 AM · On: No more pushing

Love it..

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2018 08:10 AM · On: No more pushing

I still do not trust Lindsey

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2018 11:35 AM · On: Married at last

Wow wee they stayed in amazing rooms, I wish I could afford luxury like that. I’m so happy Justin’s show went well he deserved something amazing to happen for him like that. 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2018 02:44 PM · On: Married at last

That was a perfect Christmas for them and I am so happy that Joan played nice. Let’s hope that she continues to and not go back to her wicked ways . 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2018 01:56 PM · On: Married at last

Yeah the girls and the kids are coming back to Pittsburgh that makes me so happy. I can’t wait to see how it goes and and how they get on working for the boys 💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2018 11:03 AM · On: Married at last

Brian has such a huge heart to buy those for Gus and Jenny as well proves that. I can’t wait for Mel and Micheal to find out. Grrrr Craig Taylor that ass I am so glad cat and Craig saw what a scum ball he is and not work with him he is pure dirt. 

 

Loving this so much I’m loving the family. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2018 10:37 AM · On: Married at last

Happy tears, so amazing those horses sound so perfect for the family I can’t wait to see what their names are and how they get in with them. I love Catcand Ger family they will fit in so wel with the rest of the family. It will bring lots of laughs and love I’m sure. Thank you for this amazing chapter 💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2018 09:10 AM · On: Married at last

Wow a new sister and one that is nice I’m so glad that Brian now has her. I can’t wait to see how the rest of the family meet her. I’m so proud of the boys for giving John a great birthday and wow his present was amazing x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2018 08:23 AM · On: Married at last

Awe you melted my heart with this. Their Honeymoon was perfect ami love Niagara Falls it’s shch a beautiful place. Plus for Justin to arrange time with Gus and the others was amazing 💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2018 07:20 AM · On: Married at last

That was so hard for the boys. I’m so glad that Dan got Chris out of there fast. Brian and Justin did the right thing by taking to the boys about why they were so down and their reaction was perfect. I hope wherever they go for a break helps them. 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 08:04 PM · On: Married at last

Claire could have been nicer to her kids and more respectful towards Brian and Justin for all they are doing. She is lucky they could look after the boys. As for Joan the less said the better she is just evil. 

 

Brilliant work 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 09:59 AM · On: Married at last

That party was great I’m so glad the new friend enjoyed themselves so much. As usual Micheal has to be the one with sour grapes. He needs to grow up big timeZ 

 

brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 09:50 AM · On: Married at last

Loved this, I love how they all got along and had some laughs as well. I’m glad the boys stayed natural around them I think it helped in meeting the parents and the kids. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 09:05 AM · On: Married at last

This gave me happy tears reading this chapter, I love the way the boys called Justin uncle that really touched my heart. I also loved the phone calls to the boys friends parents. I think Brian and Justin will get new friends as well. 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 07:29 AM · On: Married at last

I’m so glad the boys had a good first day at school and made friends. I can’t wait to see how they continue to get on. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2018 07:20 AM · On: Married at last

The guys really are doing good by the boys. I hope they feel more comfortable soon and enjoy living there with them. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 08:25 PM · On: No more pushing

That’s really good, I hope the boys settle in and enjoy living there. The boys really thought of everything they could to make them comfortable there. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 05:43 PM · On: No more pushing

Sigh, that was beautiful they truly had an amazing wedding. Those guys deserv to be happy. 

 

Beautiful work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 11:15 AM · On: No more pushing

Wow wow wow happy tears to infinity. That was more than perfect, their wedding was spectacular you should be so proud of yourself with this. I didn’t want this to end. 

 

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Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 10:59 AM · On: No more pushing

That was a brilliant night before the wedding both boys have great friends so this was perfect for them. 

 

Beautifully written x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 10:12 AM · On: No more pushing

Justin really is great for doing that for the boys so I hope they get approved to have them. 

 

Charlie really was disappointed wasn’t she lol but sorry girl aBruan loves only one that’s Justin. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 10:12 AM · On: No more pushing

Justin really is great for doing that for the boys so I hope they get approved to have them. 

 

Charlie really was disappointed wasn’t she lol but sorry girl aBruan loves only one that’s Justin. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2018 08:45 AM · On: No more pushing

Wow what a chapter, that was some news from Joan wasn’t it. I’m sure the boys will do fine if they ge the boys and it will be a loving caring home for them. Lol Ethan really was surprised wasn’t he lol

 can’t wait for more  x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2018 01:00 PM · On: No more pushing

Awe man my heart melted with Gus doing that he truly is a wonderful child and Justin will be a great pops xx

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2018 08:38 AM · On: No more pushing

Ted really is a good friend to Brian and he needs that right now. I’m so glad they asked their moms to do that such a sweet moment 💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2018 08:35 PM · On: No more pushing

Brian needed to do that didn’t he. For to long they have just assumed he didn’t care and couldn’t be hurt but can and he has a heart he proved that by telling Justin that he loved him. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 12, 2018 09:38 AM · On: No more pushing

My heart broke for Brian reading this. It must have been so difficult to have to tell Micheal a few home truths about his feelings and how the way Micheal has treated him made him feel. His trust and heart was bruised by him. I hope in time those bruises will heal and the close friendship can be saved. 

 

Powerful and and beautifully written x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 07:28 AM · On: No more pushing

Loved it, Lindz and Micheals reaction was just as I thought it would be. They need to buy a clue don’t they. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2018 06:52 AM · On: No more pushing

Love the name of the art gallery and the reaction of Mel lol that was brilliant 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 05:31 PM · On: No more pushing

Awe Brian is so great here I love seeing him like this.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2018 11:44 AM · On: No more pushing

I loved this conversation between them so much heart. Thank you for this m. 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 08:30 AM · On: Married at last

A really wonderful story-seeing Brian with a husband and a house full of kids, he shouldn't have any question as to him being a loving husband or a loving family man.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 07:53 AM · On: Married at last

 Joan must have been lonely as she behave for the most part.When Brian told Joan that Justin was the one who wanted Joan there I'm sure she was surprised. Hopefully Joan will wake up one day and realize, Brian is happy sucessful, and a good person.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 07:09 AM · On: Married at last

 Hooray!! Gus is coming home and daddy and pops are thrilled. Gus has his horsey here and all his family including his cousins. wonderful chapter

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 06:58 AM · On: Married at last

Well Craig missed a big customer, and inside I bet Brian is doing a happy dance. Justin's father is insufferable I'm always glad when he is called out for the miserble sob he is.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 05:54 PM · On: Married at last

 Wonder when Joan will make of her secret is revealed.I'm glad the family were pleased. Brians world is getting larger and so is his happiness, of course mikey is a dumb ass he is concerned with mikey's introduction. Whenis he going to learn the world doesn't revolved around him.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 12:38 PM · On: Married at last

 John got a car for his birthday of course Claire doesn't approve-who cares what she  thinks Brian told her John at end of the school term with a 3.0 rating and is doing well I  doubt she even checked if homework was done and certainly not bright enough to help them. Brian and Justin met Cat that will blow Joan's mind when she finds out.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 11:01 AM · On: Married at last

 Glad they finally got away for a few days and seeing Gus,who they both missed

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 09:40 AM · On: Married at last

I know when I watched the series I couldn't believe the legal system was so awful to give Hobbs community service when he damn near killed Justin, hopefully when some crimes can be identifed as hate crimes everyone deserves justice regardless of your personal beliefs, being gay,black, etc. biggoted people shouldn't have right to dismised crimes in the name of justice

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 09:14 AM · On: Married at last

 No wonder why the boys were a hard sell, between Joan and Claire they have certainly put a black mark on motherhood

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 08:55 AM · On: Married at last

 As usuall mikey is a child like brat, I don't understand how he has any friends! He made an ass out of himself with the entire family watching. I'll never understand why Ben stays with him, can't wait for the entire family just walks away from the queen. If he thinks he can intimidate Justin then he's as dumb as he looks

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:55 AM · On: Married at last

It would seem that Brian and Justin have found new friends, that seem to have quiet alot in common. That would make everyones kids very happy.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:18 AM · On: Married at last

 Hope the party goes well, not only do John and Peter need to make new friends but it be nice for Brian and Justin to meet some new people since they don't live in the Pitts.,anymore

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 03:54 AM · On: Married at last

John is becoming to realize the boys are not his enemy. The time they spend together, riding lessons and buying horses and both boys making friends at their new school. For the first time people care about them.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 03:11 AM · On: Married at last

I think the boys were caught off guard-the limo,the large house, their own room,and a bathroom for them, of course the media room was a special treat for them. Peter will do fine, John mistrusts everyone.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2017 01:56 AM · On: No more pushing

John has his uncle's snart, I think it will take a while but I think Justin will reach them, then Brian. I think being brought up by Claire was a whole lot like Brian and Joan,kinda living in the same house but no attention really sounds like Claire learned to be mother from Joan and she wasn't very good at it

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 11:53 PM · On: No more pushing

Daphe's speech was so cute and Jen's so loving. Ted called it right Brian was the last to know he loved Justin-Debbie's pure Deb.  Dancing to their song just let everyone know how much in love they were

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 09:43 PM · On: No more pushing

Wedding scene written so beautifulf. The men both of them wanted this so badly, fresh start with mikey and Linz behaving so far

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 04:27 AM · On: No more pushing

Was happy Ted and Em kept Brian company knowing he would be a loss ends without his Sunshine.Justin had Daph to be with him incase the nerves set in. Big day tomorow

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 04:09 AM · On: No more pushing

Guess Charlie Brown was tad disappointed, was thrilled Leo is so supportive of Brian and so taken with Justin's artwork. Brian seemed totally pleased by Justin's action of taking charge and making John and Peter feel welcome by doing a room he felt they would like

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:44 AM · On: No more pushing

 Joan's visit is always an experience Brian could do without-loved Justin's sarcasm with Joan and ''Ian'',I'm glad the men are going to help John and Peter, talk about an up hill battle! As for Ian. it's past time to take out the trash!!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:37 AM · On: No more pushing

Well, Gus has his Pops! Litte devil tries to see get a milkeshake out of Pops--it didn't work but Gus was just happy to be with daddy and pops. Gus is the sweetest character.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:32 AM · On: No more pushing

 So glad Ted will Brian's bestman and was very happy Deb was going to give Brian away even after she was told of his visit to Justin.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:25 AM · On: No more pushing

 Linz like mikey plays Brian, very bad idea, I'm not sure I believe in Linz's new atitude,and then there is Gus, who loves his daddy with everything he has and his love for Justin is so sweet and that he wants Justin to be his second daddy will have Justin's heart in his throat.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:20 AM · On: No more pushing

mikey has no sense of reality--he's child like and quiet use to people giving in--I blame Deb, she never made him responsible for his actions, it was always someone else's fault.What he said to Justin was awful and I was glad Brian overheard it and called him on his 'actions. I could never understand him having a key to Brian's loft he was a voyeur.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:12 AM · On: No more pushing

After telling everyone at the dinner their plans of course mikey and Linz are not happy, but who cares it's not their life. How Brian and Justin chose to live their life is no ones business and Brian says as much.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:08 AM · On: No more pushing

Ted has become a good friend to Brian, better than mikey. Mel has realize how deep Brian's feelings for Justin go. But by changeing the names, the will, p.o.a.'s,etc. Mel sees how important and how deeply the couple love each other.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:03 AM · On: No more pushing

I'm so glad B & J have learn to communicate (ok Justin knew Brian was a little slower) They seem to be moving ahead with Ted's and Mel's help.I actually like Melin this story

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 02:36 AM · On: No more pushing

I can't tell you how many times I've read your story and the follow up, I'm ashamed to say I didn't review. I always felt my review wouldn't be smart enough to do justice to your writing. After years of reading I decided it wasn't fair not to review and tell how much I enjoyed your storys--so I'm re reading a lot because you are one of my favorites and you deserve to know how much pleasure you have given me. This chapter always amazed me unlike the series Brian didn't throw Justin off the cliff, he late him stay and wanted to marry him---you got it right,Cowlip screwed up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:55 AM · On: Married at last

Gus and JR are moving home.  Hurray!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:55 AM · On: Married at last

Ponies and Craig Taylor.  An eventful chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:51 AM · On: Married at last

Trying to keep all the family names straight is going to be a challenge.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:46 AM · On: Married at last

John had a great birthday and Brian found a long lost sister.  Amazing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 06:42 AM · On: Married at last

A trip to Niagra Falls.  Well deserved.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 05:23 AM · On: Married at last

Hobbs showed up?  Let's hope that's the last we see of him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 04:36 AM · On: Married at last

Does Joanie want to influence Brian's son the way she did Claire's?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 04:26 AM · On: Married at last

You gotta feel sorry for Mikey.  He has a one track mind.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 02:29 AM · On: Married at last

It's great that everyone gets along.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:43 PM · On: Married at last

The kids have friends.  How nice.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:42 PM · On: Married at last

Looks like things are improving for Brian's nephews.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:37 PM · On: Married at last

Hope John comes around.  Living with teens is going to be tough.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:30 PM · On: No more pushing

No honeymoon?



Author's Response: Not at this time, later :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:28 PM · On: No more pushing

Beautiful reception



Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:27 PM · On: No more pushing

The night before the wedding.  At least Mikey isn't there trying to get Brian to trick.



Author's Response: I think Ben might be physically sitting on him :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:26 PM · On: No more pushing

Leo Brown and family will be attending the wedding.  How sweet that they are fixing up rooms for Brian's nephews.



Author's Response: They will :) They decided to take them in, that means they will make a home for them! :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:25 PM · On: No more pushing

So mother Kinney and Ethan both learn the news.  Why is it not surprising that Claire is losing custody of her sons?



Author's Response: They do, do you think they were happy? ;) Claire is totally unfit as a mother!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:21 PM · On: No more pushing

So Justin has a new name.  News of the wedding should spread fast now that everyone in the diner knows.



Author's Response: He does, and it should :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:20 PM · On: No more pushing

You picked the perfect best 'men'.  I'm glad that Deb is finally seeing Michael for the twit that he is.



Author's Response: Thanks, I thought so too. Deb has blinders where her son is concerned, but she's not actually stupid

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:17 PM · On: No more pushing

Awe, Lindsay came around.  Shame Mike can't or won't.  Someone should do a grouping of all the Clueless Michael pictures.



Author's Response: She might be a manipulative twat, but she's not stupid. Micheal on the other hand is stupid, but he thinks he's always right and that he knows everything about Brian better than anybody else, including Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:13 PM · On: No more pushing

You nailed this one on the head.  Glad Brian took his key back.



Author's Response: Thank you! He should have taken his key back years ago, as soon as Justin had one, Michael didn't need one anymore!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 07:03 PM · On: No more pushing

Lindsay personifies the name dumb blonde.  Poor thing she is so confused.  Mikey of course is emotionally stunted.  It's a wonder Ben stays with him.



Author's Response: Lindsay is a twat, there I said it, and manipulative! I have always wondered why two intelligent men like Dr. Dave (he was an ass, but still intelligent) and Professor Ben see in the childish, imature Michael, he's not even cute!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 06:55 PM · On: No more pushing

Love the name you picked for the gallery.  Should be canon.  Also like that Ted and Melanie are in their corner.



Author's Response: Thank you :) Ted and Melanie doesn't have any 'feelings' in the mix

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 06:48 PM · On: No more pushing

This has to be my favorite chapter.  Not only does Brian say the L word, they agree to marry and change their names.  They also decide to share everything!  Hurray.



Author's Response: Thank you :) If Brian does something he does it all the way!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 05:38 PM · On: No more pushing

Now why didn't they have this discussion on the show.



Author's Response: Because CowLip lives vicariously through Brian ;) They wanted him to be 'free' to fuck around

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2015 11:06 AM · On: Married at last

Beautiful story. Love the dynamics of new family and friends:-)

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2015 09:18 PM · On: No more pushing

This is just how it could have been, finally letting Brian and Justin have their "happily ever after". I'm sure we would have all felt a lot happier knowing for sure that they had a certain future together and that their love was strong enough to cope with all the obstacles put in their path -just like us fans always knew it would be:-)



Author's Response: Thank you! I always wondered if CowLip missed their youth where they played around, so they lived vicariously through Brian :D

Reviewer: khanspunk (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 02:25 AM · On: No more pushing

Look how easy!! Fucking writers! *rolls eyes* We_could _have_had_it_aaall.mp3



Author's Response: Aww, thank you :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 03, 2014 03:47 AM · On: Married at last

Excellent



Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2013 03:53 AM · On: Married at last

Good Story!



Author's Response: Thank you :)

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2013 01:22 AM · On: No more pushing

Good story! I am glad there is a sequel!

Reviewer: Al (Anonymous) · Date: January 06, 2013 01:47 PM · On: No more pushing

Great Story!

Reviewer: Ella (Anonymous) · Date: May 27, 2011 08:06 PM · On: No more pushing

so sweet



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Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 07:29 AM · On: No more pushing

Ok, I generally love your stories, but the John/Peter thing? Don't think so. It's just all too neat and too sweet for my BJ taste. I mean, I can see the money/company even the name thing, but Brian agreeing to be foster parent of those too? And that fast without a second thought? Sorry, it just seems little bit too far fetched. :/



Author's Response:

I'm glad you generally like it :)

It's ok that you don't buy the John/Peter thing, that's your prerogative :)

Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 06:30 AM · On: No more pushing

"...but my heart wasn't in it." :D lol I smiled so heart my belly hurts!!! I couldn't help but to picture him almost pounting, like a kid or smthg like that. :D 

or "Christ Justin, I really fucked you up good, didn't I?" that was a good reaction at Justin's easy over his tricking. Excited about next chapter already. Think I'll finish this before morning class. :) Continue pls :)



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so very happy you like this. THis is actually one of my finished stories, and the sequel is finished too :D

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:14 AM · On: Married at last

Very good story. Your English is excellent I may say; better than many Americans would write. Thanks for another wonderful read.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that means a lot to me :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 03:06 AM · On: Married at last

A mending with Joan was a nice touch; isn't fandom fun where we can create the QAF universe like we want to?



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, I love to play with our boys and bend them to my will ;)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:54 AM · On: Married at last

I like how you explained the American loathing Canadians have for us Americans. Actually it's only bad with the French Canadians to be honest with you. Good evolution of the girls coming home. What country are you in if I may ask?



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I have never seen or heard it for myself other than on movies and TV shows.

I wanted the girls and the kids home where they belong.

I'm from Denmark :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:44 AM · On: Married at last

I wondered when Craig Taylor would rear his ugly head. You've pretty much run the list of canon characters here. I think you forgot Cody though. hehehehe



Author's Response:

LOLL, I know, I haven't put in Dr. Dave either :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:32 AM · On: Married at last

I like adding Drew back into the picture.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I always liked him for Emmett.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 02:15 AM · On: Married at last

And the cast of characters grows; Cat sounds very interesting. Looking forward where we go to from here.



Author's Response:

That it does :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:58 AM · On: Married at last

Did you research the falls hotel or have you been there? Often in my stories I use places I've been to like England and Scotland, New York, Dallas, etc. That was a fun chapter.



Author's Response:

I reserched. I've never actually been to America or Canada. I'd love to go though.

Thanks, I'm glad you thought so.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:41 AM · On: Married at last

I fear that wasn't the last of Chris Hobbs for sure. He gets fired and hits the skids and will blame Justin and Brian. Gotta read what happens next.



Author's Response:

Go forth and read :)

Not gonna tell what happens next.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Married at last

I wonder if Joan had some liquid courage before going to Kinnetik for that. Like duh? They are the legal guardians now; Claire is a moron if she can't see it. I wonder if we have heard the end of Saint Joan yet? I almost doubt it.



Author's Response:

Doesn't Joan always have liquid courage?

Claire is not the quickest deer in the forest.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 01:14 AM · On: Married at last

Michael bashing is one of my favorite passtimes. You magnified his character in a realistic way. If I was Ben I'd dump the little shithead but that's me. Even with HIV he could do better.



Author's Response:

Mine too :D

Thank you so much. I'd have never hooked up with him in the first place, but that's just me.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:55 AM · On: Married at last

That was a very good chapter. The irony of a small world didn't escape me either; the owner of the art suppy stores and contractor for example.



Author's Response:

Thank you. I figure that it's a pretty small town. I know that Pittsburgh is a little bigger, but well... :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:30 AM · On: Married at last

The parental grilll went better than one might expect. Too many parents hear "gay couple" and run for the hills.



Author's Response:

I know, I wanted them to have some new friends, someone outside the gang.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:14 AM · On: Married at last

John is coming around faster than I expected. I like how they share the parenting of the boys. Justin's a natural.



Author's Response:

Yeah, I'm no good at writing conflict. I know in RL it would probably take a lot longer, but I wanted to get on with it.

Justin has a great role model in Jennifer, most of the time.

Thanks.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2009 12:04 AM · On: Married at last

This boys will be a handful.  Peter will bring John around perhaps.



Author's Response:

Yeah, but they will.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:56 PM · On: No more pushing

I didn't realize this was the last chapter. This was perhaps one of your fiirst stories as I see your writing has changed since then perhaps (for the better). The plot idea was perfect as how they ended it was dumb. You're a very good writer with wit and humor at all the right places. Yes you have some typos but so do my stories so I'm in no position to be picky.

I enjoyed this story very much and I'm going to go read "Married at Last" now to follow up. Thanks for a great read Edom.



Author's Response:

Thank you so very much. I do think/hope that my writing has gotten better, the first chapter of this story was the first thing I ever wrote!

I hope you'll like the sequel too :)

 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:51 PM · On: No more pushing

Yeah, raw is so much better; you got that right.



Author's Response:

Yeah, now on to the sequel ;)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:42 PM · On: No more pushing

The speaches were excellent. The ending dance a great touch to remember.



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:36 PM · On: No more pushing

Great wedding scene; Babylon was perfect.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Hope you'll like the party.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:14 PM · On: No more pushing

Hummm...I foresee a lamp post start perhaps. Well, that's how I'd write it. I like how you use canon without repeating it. We already know it. Well done.



Author's Response:

You'll see :)

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 11:07 PM · On: No more pushing

Justin is so thoughtful; creating the boy's rooms. Saying apart the night before is good luck for a marriage before the wedding; nice touch.



Author's Response:

Justin is thoughtful :)

It is, thank you :D

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:54 PM · On: No more pushing

Taking in the boys is that shoe I was expecting. Now Craig could be the other one. hehehehe

I love leaving reviews and raising your count and stars.

Not enough people leave reviews without blackmail (withholding chapters until they give you a review, etc.)



Author's Response:

Good, I'm glad you liked my little surprise.

I love getting reviews and I do try to leave them too.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:39 PM · On: No more pushing

Pops, how cute that is. Why do I expect a shoe to fall soon?



Author's Response:

Thanks, I thought so.

You just have to keep reading :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:32 PM · On: No more pushing

"He always does." That line was loaded! Ted was the perfect choice.



Author's Response:

Thanks :D

Yeah, he was :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:26 PM · On: No more pushing

Well done. One more small typo: losing not loosing (just in case you might want to fix it). Love the story.



Author's Response:

Thanks. I'll look at it :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:18 PM · On: No more pushing

Michael can be so stupid.



Author's Response:

That he can :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:13 PM · On: No more pushing

I hate to be the grammar Nazi but it's bid not bit. I loved the exchange with the IC of Lindsay and Michael so open and raw.



Author's Response:

Yeah, this story was from before I got my beta. I suspect there are a lot more mistakes.

I'm glad you liked it :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 10:03 PM · On: No more pushing

I like the gallery's name. I'm loving your take on season six very much.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I thought it was a great idea for a name :)

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:58 PM · On: No more pushing

Great chapter. Gotta read more now.



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2009 09:40 PM · On: No more pushing

That is how Cowlip should have ended the story. WELL DONE!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :D

Do you know that there is a sequel? 'Married at last'

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 12:38 PM · On: Married at last

I loved this series and I look forward to reading more of your other stories.

Author's Response: Thanik you, I'm so glad you did.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: May 03, 2009 10:02 AM · On: No more pushing

I loved this story! It isn't my first time reading it, but since you finished Married at last, I thought I would re-read it and then re-read Married at Last. I love your stories and I look forward to reading more your stories.

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response:

Thanks, I really appreciate that. I'ts always nice to hear that people enjoy my work.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: May 03, 2009 09:59 AM · On: Married at last

Loved the family gathering in Chicago. Hope to hear more Brian and Cat conversations. Loved the nephews, really turning out to be great boys.

Author's Response: Thank you. I might do a sequel at some point, then you'll have more Brian/Cat interaction.

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