Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 06:32 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
AWWWWW! Justin doesn't realize that he already has the Beast wrapped around his pinky finger.
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 01:15 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
OOOOOOOH the beast is absolutely frightening. Jennifer had quite an experience. Now she has to forfeit give up Justin to the monster. Nicely done!
Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2018 12:10 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
So Brian received his comeuppance and I would almost feel sorry for the guy if he had been such a douche to the fairy. This first chapter is great.
Reviewer: chenlina (Anonymous) · Date: May 19, 2017 06:34 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
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Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2015 04:54 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Okay now I guess Justin and I are both falling in love with the beast... ~ Kathleen
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 08, 2014 09:10 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Very nice ending. I've never seen Supernatural, so Sam and Dean are a new experience for me. I'm glad they brought Leo back. Now if you just give Justin another child, maybe adopt, and his name is Tim, we've even got Timothy back.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 07, 2014 05:48 PM · On: The Red Hoody
A "Supernatural" crossover, nice.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2014 11:02 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Oh great, Gus got to wear a white Vera Wang outfit too. LOL
I feel gypped as the white rabbit didn't get to deliver his famous line. "I'm late! I'm late! For a very important date! No time to say hello, goodbye! I'm late! I'm late! I'm late!" Okay, I feel better now I have recited it. :D
I thought I was in the wrong fandom when I started reading this. A whole chapter on hetro love; I'm glad you couldn't write the intimacy part. Haha
Thanks for finishing another fine fairy tale Jon.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2014 08:07 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Sam and Dean Winchesters, ha, I didn't see that coming. Leo's back so that's a nice ending and they seem to have their happily ever after so with trepidation I will read the epilogue.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Awwww, no trepidation needed! Enjoy!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2014 11:06 PM · On: The Red Hoody
I was never so glad to see a TBC as I was at the end of this chapter. The suspense in this one was unbelievable! At least the Big Bad Wolf is gone, but I wish that Leo and Opa weren't. So I'll just wait for your next chapter to see what happens. Great writing!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 25, 2014 01:02 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Haha, you fooled me; kinder isn't dead.
"WARNING!!! The following chapter is not for the faint of heart! But I just couldn't dumb it down into a people pleaser without it being totally wrecked". I appreciate this warning and I'm really pleased about it as I would hate to think you adjusted your plot just to appease people.
I'm curious; did Opa make a deal with the devil? No, I don't mean Mel,lol. Dueling fiddles or maybe whistles at 50 paces would have a least given Opa a fair chance of staying alive and keeping Gus that way too. Hurry back the last conversation was very ominous.
Cheers :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2014 01:14 AM · On: The Red Hoody
That was so unfair. But true to the tale and we know it ends better. Nice to see that Leo is still around, shame he must disappear again or does he. You're the writer and can take this whereever you want.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2014 06:39 PM · On: The Red Hoody
The last part's gotta be a dream.
Author's Response: A dream or a scream?
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2014 10:36 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Yay, Leo's back; at least there is something bright in this dark chapter. Blow Gus, blow. Was this chapter inspired by "Eat the meat" because I don't think Brian meant it so literally? :D I'm hoping this is some sort of regurgitation kink I've never heard of, as I wouldn't like to see him come out any other way than the way he went in. lol I'm really glad the hoody wasn't eaten as perhaps Opa can use it. There's nothing like having a trendy grandpa and ties are so outdated, yet they apparently have their uses. Thanks for the quick update. BTW, I didn't have time to read through my fingers as I wasn't expecting such an ending. Well done; I like it when someone can surprise me.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: You have a wonderful perspective. I never did think of the Eat the meat thing...Or did I? As a matter of fact...yeeeah that was it , I was thinking that the whole time.....yeaaahh, yeaah, that s the ticket...<looks around shifitily>
Seriousy to...glad you liked the ending. I'm working on the next chapter right now. The tone will remain dark and it will come with several warning labels. But that's all I'm saying. Wow. This story went from being totally blocked to my most closely guarded secret. Weird.
Reviewer: freddie (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2014 07:20 PM · On: The Red Hoody
I love this story. Not every Brian and Justin tale has to be chock full of graphic b/j sex scenes, and this proves it.
Author's Response: thank you so much. I've nothing against sex scenes mind you but sometimes my mind goes to a different place, ya know? I'm glad you're enjoying the story.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 16, 2014 12:29 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Awesome chapter. Awesomer banner.
Author's Response: thank you so much and I'm sure the banner artist loves the praise too!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 09:37 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Excellent banner by Christie. Thanks for the warning as I will now be reading this fic through my fingers. The Woodsman; is it Zack O'Tool? Or is it someone from Brian's "Got Wood" campaign? This fic has the potential to go in a humorous direction or is that just me thinking that. Maybe I should get my mind out of the gutter, but I really liked the poster Brian had made for Remson's Instant Wood (no not the revised old couples one, lol). I'm really glad Opa survived the choking and Mr Wolfe's stinky breath. Listerine (mouthwash) might be the weapon of the day. :D Hurry back if you can.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thank you for the excellent review. The woodsman will be revealed next chappy. And readng thru your fingers....would be a very good idea...Bwa hahahaha!!! That's all I'm saying.....no spoilers!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2014 08:07 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Oh no, please don't let the wolf hurt Opa. Let me see, the big guy Gus has run into is a good guy and the wolf is about to meet his match!!!! Hopefully???
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 12:35 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Hey, shouldn't that be a huff and a puff to blow the door down. Oh, wait that's the three little pigs. :D Beddy; so much like Debbie in many ways, yet not. Mr Wolfe, Mr Wolfe what big muscles you have? "All the better to rip out your throat with". I suppose it's a little more menacing than "all the better to eat you with" as that could be a whole different conversation. LOL I'm having way to much fun here so I'll wrap it up and wait patiently for the next installment.
Cheers :)
Author's Response: Thanx for the great review as always! And yes...we are heading to the oh what big___ etc etc you have although still not sure how I'm going to play that. Thanx for all the ideas. However, a WARNING to you and everyone else, I think part of the reason I've been taking so long with this is that the story is potentionally heading down a dark and potentionally scary path that might not be popular and not to mention is becoming hard to write. Potentionally. Well, I'll keep going , if you guys keep reading. Thanks for continuing to tell me what you think after my long pauses.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2014 05:36 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Hurray! Another chapter. How sad to put him to work on his birthday. I thought the hashish brownies were too funny. Oh what a tangled weed we weave. The big bad wolf almost got Gus! He needs to tell his dads. Short chapters are good!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! Don't worry, it's not meant to be hard work taking a basket of goodies to his grandfather. And yes! The big bad wolf shows his true colors at last! The writer's block is over so hopefully this story will be a bit quicker in coming and be over soon. But Beauty and Beast...then Jack and Beanstalk, now Red Riding Hood...what a journey this series has been! Oyy vey!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2014 03:16 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Hey Jon. I'm sorry I thought I was up-to-date with this fic. I assumed when I seen it appear at the top of the list that you were reposting chapters from when the system crashed. Sorry you lost some of your reviews. I love Gus' hoody/cape and all the other clothing items it becomes. Jackson tells Jack he came from the maze and he believes his amazing story and puts him in charge of the maze. That's priceless, no amazing. :D John and Mathew 8, and Noah; I admit it, my mind went straight to Bible references. LOL
Cheers :)
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2014 09:27 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Gus is such a good Prince, surely you can figure out some way to keep the Big Bad away and not let Gus suffer.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2014 03:22 AM · On: The Red Hoody
So that's the background on the Big Bad. There is a catch, he has to be polite and curtious, so that explains how he was with Justin! What is his plan for Gus?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 11:07 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Oh, no. What's coming for Gus! And what about his cousins? What are their names?
Author's Response: This confuses me a bit. Who are the cousins? Do you mean Justin's biological children? If you did, you know, I haadn't really thought about names at all! Bad me! I'll take care of it next chapter but I'm planning on another time jump anyway soeveryone will beheading out of the infancy stage anyway.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 10:21 PM · On: The Red Hoody
The wolfman, huh. Is his name by any chance Jackson? I like Leo and the idea of shiny men around us. Wish it were true!!!!
Author's Response: Loved writing the Bright men! Wish it was true too.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 10:10 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Timothy certainly has come a long way and Gus seems to adore him. The house for the girls is perfect!!!
Author's Response: Yup...have triied to update Timothy to grandpa status as much as I could. As for the house, i tried to make it as nauseatingly girly as possible. I hope it was somewhat realistic....or at least a girls dream come true.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 09:24 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Mikey! What nerve. Why am I not surprised. Thank goodness for Ben. On another note - It's nice to see that Brian and Timothy are getting along. Timothy has his own house and a puppy! Is Jackson the big bad?
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2014 02:19 AM · On: The Red Hoody
The truth comes out. While I can't feel sorry that Craig is dead, Jenn has gone over the edge. Nice to see Carl showing up. How did Justin get Jennifer to confess?
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2014 07:33 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Alls well with everyone. Just as a fairytail should be.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2014 10:53 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Ark! Loved the look of how the red hoody came into being. But the monster, that scares me!!!
Author's Response: Don't worry...It's just a sneak peek. And remember...there were TWO shockwaves of magic! HINT!
Reviewer: mamaduck (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2014 01:53 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Love the story!
Author's Response: Thanx hon!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 07:24 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Thank goodness BabyHam had a sad story as it shifted away from all the touchy-feely stuff Brian was saying. LOL "I had your father murdered" would have been a great ending to this chapter. It's been so long since you began this story that I had forgotten about bad Jen. However, since Jen is going down for a very long time things are wrapping up nicely with Molly happily going to live with Justin.
Cheers
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2013 07:23 AM · On: The Red Hoody
I have read Tagsit...Prego Stud; it's great. I love the way you wrote Michael in this chapter. He's just weird, and I'm pleased Brian isn't going to let him have his loft. Weird being a good thing as it's a different way to writing Michael, than the usual. Justin kissing his grandfather figure; yuck. Grandfather figure enjoying it; double yuck. LOL
Cheers
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2013 06:36 AM · On: The Red Hoody
I have missed this story. Looking forward to what's in store for Michael as well, but in a positive sense.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2013 12:49 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Damn, this fairy tale was great, with a happy ending for everyone. I will certainly be looking forward to where you go, be it a continuing happy or an evil dark scary tale.
Author's Response: Hopefully it won't be as bad as the Crucible (not sure what happened there, I had a lot of issues I was working out) but there will be both comedic and dramatic elements to it. How serious, I'm not sure yet. Thanks for all yur insightful reviews. Keep em comin!
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2013 12:17 AM · On: The Red Hoody
This story tends to jump, so will my review. You did it, you did it! You gave Timothy a puppy!! And all the other wonderful things. I would love to have one of those baskets that come with everything you need. Sadly I thoroughly enjoyed Michael getting his comeupence. And how nicely everything is turning out for almost everyone. I'm worried about that wolf though.
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2013 10:26 PM · On: The Red Hoody
OMG! Where to begin, where to begin. Can you give Timothy a puppy dog or a kitty cat? Is the big bad wolf good or bad? Gus is adorable! Jennifer, however is not. Thank goodness Justin didn't turn into a beast, and is taking Molly away. Nice to see Carl. Looking forward to the diner and whatever you plan for Michael. Sorry but I couldn't find it in me to be silent for Craig.
Author's Response: Sorry but Carl just has the cameo....for now. Thanx for all your reviews Don't worry about Craig. Truth be told...neither could I <wink>
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2013 10:05 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Loving this fairy tale! Justin is doing all that he can for Timothy, which is very nice. Telling Timothy that Brian loves him may be going a bit too far. I'm sure that Brian accepts Tim for Justin's sake. Love the Mikey parts. <wicked laugh> He sure does need to have his bubble burst. Love the interaction with Mel as well. Pigs fly??? LOL.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2013 11:25 AM · On: The Red Hoody
This is just too funny.
Snarky Justin is especially a hoot.
Author's Response: Thanx for the compliments. Thanx for reviewing!
Reviewer: Somme (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2013 11:51 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Love the snappy dialougue between Justin and Brian, as well as the description of arguing between Michael and Debbie.
And Michael is lucky he has Ben, with his sexy baritone voice.
Author's Response: He sure IS lucky! I remember Ben's voice to this day and I love it too. Thanx for reviewing
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2013 10:27 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Sooooooo much happening in this chapter, I don't know where to begin. . . I think Craig should only get 30 seconds of silence, even if he was murdered by an evil Jennifer. Personally I would have left everyone with the horrible cliffhanger, but I know you're just not as evil as me - You big softy! Mr Wolfe doesn't seem that Scarey, what am I missing? "BabyHam": typical bully tactics but, I'm ashamed to admit its rather funny. Oh, and, BTW, I like the repeated 'bruising' and 'feral' kisses - descriptive and hot! Now, I'm all caught up on your story so you can take time out for a summer challenge! Hehehe. TAG
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your insightful reviews. I look forward to them a lot. The BabyHam thing came to me as I was writing, it was unplanned.
I was wondering if I was being a softy....Oh well. As for the challenge, well still thinking about it here and trying to think of a summer-y fairy tale....Or might have to be an original fantasy, who knows. Or I might have to keep going on this, I'm literally half a scene away from posting the last Part 1 chapter so I'll wait until then at least. Or I might keep going it depends on how my idea factory is working. I'll keep you posted.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2013 09:38 AM · On: The Red Hoody
Thought I'd tell you again how much I loved my chapter. Now, off to the new stuff! TAG
Reviewer: Somme (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2013 12:38 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Wow. Michael seems extremely confused. And Jennifer has gone completly insane.
Author's Response: Yup. Unfortunately, Jennifer has gone completely around the bend (aat least in this AU and will not be returning to active duty in this storyline. You and maybe quite a few other readers may wonder why I've chosen to have Jennifer take a turn for the worst here. So...here's the deal:
Dear Readers: First of all, I'd like to assure you I still consider Jenn a "good guy" in most regards and in most of my stories. I liked her character in the show and thought Sherry Miller did a stellar job portraying her. I in no way plan to engage in "Jennifer bashing" or whatever. However, I am desperately trying to wrap up resolutions from events in Beauty and the Beast and have had this little twist up my sleeve since the beginning of Jack and the Beanstalk. Plus, her character in this AU simply isn't needed anymore so I'm sending her upstate to a nice funny farm where she can be well taken care of by Nurse Tucker for the rest of her life. She deserves a nice rest after all the BS Craig put her through.
Well that's my story, anyway, and I'm stickin' to it.
As for Michael I'm dealing with that now and boy is it coming out slowly. He's being a bit of a whiny bitch. But I'm getting there. Thx for your patience.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2013 07:39 AM · On: The Red Hoody
I must say I'm intrigued. This good.
Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2013 07:11 AM · On: The Red Hoody
This chapter was even better than the first. I loved the relationship between Justin and Timothy. Brian's handling of Michael and the loft was hilarious. And I wouldn't mind having a cottage like the one you described.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2013 10:35 PM · On: The Red Hoody
Michael's gone crazy. And Jennifer's gone even more crazy.
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: June 19, 2013 12:58 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
What happened to the last two chapters?!
Author's Response: Please check the update in the summary. Next chapter and general overhaul in progress. Thanx for your patience.
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: June 17, 2013 02:38 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
I really don't understand why Brian and Justin want to open up their home to literally the whole world. Nor do I understand how transplanting the entire town to their home gets back at Stockwell. And it seems like moving the whole town into Britin would mean that they had created a whole new indoor town under their own roof.
It's hilarious that Timothy actually refers to his home as a hovel.
So Justin's pregant now as promised/threatened. I've never been a fan of mpregs because they are so often set in the regular world but then treated in the story as nothing remarkable. But in this fantastical setting, a male pregnancy might be better suited.
Author's Response: As to your first question, I suggest you re read the last chapter of Beauty and the beast which answers it. However, the the short version is: Suppose Disneyland (or World) was built as all ready and stocked and then....locked away and the gates were closed to the public. Wouldn't that be silly? Same thing here. That's why they're making it a resort/hospice...and since thetown will be emptied...a hospital.
And yes, an indoor town is how I visualized it too. It's not neccesarily "getting back" at Stockwell...well, not entirely....but more of filling the void he has now left since his evil factory was a monopoly and now gone. I AM sorry for the bizarre events that transpired there but if you remember I DID ask for help at one point.
Yes, the mpreg is comingéhere. As I have explained before, I probably will not go into great detail with the pregnancy but he will have it. Glad you are enjoying the story otherwise.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2013 10:08 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: Thanx a lot as usual. Any favorite partsÉ
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: June 14, 2013 06:59 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
What's happened to Michael!?
Author's Response: He had a year of the good life and has gone temporarily elitist and insane....Sorry if I didn`t do a good job foreshadowing it.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2013 06:42 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
No fair! Timothy's new hovel is way nicer than my current hovel. I'm jealous. Great idea to spin off another story. You should round up all the jack & the b characters for one last hurrah at the castle and then you can take over the Pitts. The more b/j stories we have the better, I always say. But, unfortunately, it doesn't look like you'll be getting to Aladdin anytime soon. . . That's okay, though too. We can all just bide our time while you finish off that next 100,00 words you've got soaring around in your brain. Thanks again for the chapter dedication.
Author's Response: Thanks for the usual great review! I really want to get to Aladdin...I do! I have since this weird spin off began. Jack and the Beanstalk was supposed to be an epilogue! Dohhh!!! Well...I`m getting there....I`m tryin`....
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: June 13, 2013 05:18 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
I haven't even had time to read the chapter yet, but as soon as I saw the dedication I got so excited! Thank you so much. I'm sure this will be the best chapter you've ever written, just because! Now, I'm off to start reading! TAG
Author's Response: I dedicated it to you for your insightful reviews and lovely words of encouragement when I felt overwhelmed with the story. I could really tell you were reading! Thx again!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2013 10:33 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
"Why won't this end? <Sobs into a glass of Jim Beam>"
Poor baby! I know how it feels - sometimes a story sorta takes over. But don't despair - there HAS to be an ending out there somewhere and I trust you to find it. Just keep thinking to yourself 'happily ever after, happily ever after' and it WILL come. Maybe. Eventually. You might have to write another 100,000 words or so in this 'verse, but you'll find the end. Really. I think.
Hows that for a semi-helpful pep talk? TAG
P.S. I'm enjoying the story so I really don't care if it ever ends! Bring it on!
Author's Response: Good Grief and Willem Grimm!! Another 100,000 words! Let's hope not!! Oh God, who knows! I may have to break this off into Book 3, it s taking so long. Why Why?? Why is this one taking so long? I wanna get started on Aladdin. BTW that conjecture. I'm not sure that will be neccesary. But thank you for the PS. That was a real lift. Although, I personally can't understand why this is popular. Some parts are so draggy...well to write anyway. Thanks for the pep talk and the inspiration for the abuse thread. Although I won't be going into as much detail as you do. I simply don't know what I'm talking about!
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2013 10:30 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter.
Author's Response: thank you. Any parts you liked in particular? Constructive criticism? Did yu like Emmett? Anything?
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: May 31, 2013 12:30 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Your probably sick of fearing this, but i can't help it. I love the mix of fairyland and the"real" world. Such as the boys thinking about the money they will get for selling their eggs. Fairy eggs used for such unfairy thing as paying off a house or getting out of debt.
Love how Jack's attempt to steal from " Wizard of Oz" was lost on no one.
But why did thr two fairy realms have to be forever separated? I feel a little sad about this.
But what's even sadder is that even here in fairytail land, they still haven't found a cure for AIDS.
Author's Response: Yes! I'm glad you liked the Wizard of Oz thing! That makes me happy :) The fairy tale realms had to be separated and Stockwell punished because he was abusing them. Also I never want to see that factory or the bowels there in ever again LOL.
As for AIDS, well I did address that issue or at least an allegory of said illness in Cinderella and did cure it there. I don't want to be redundant. However....the story ain't over yet hon....wink! Anything can happen!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 11:04 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
*Danses around joyfully* I'm all caught up on your story! Hoorah! TAG
Author's Response: Glad you're all caught up. So...Did YOU like the Wiz of Oz themed scene? No-one's saying anything! Sniffle Sniffle!...
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 09:08 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Yay for Jack not being dead! Yay for sexy Kevlar catsuits! Yay for not being of English decent! Yay for golden goose eggs! Yay that Stockwell's gonna have to slave away for the giant for the rest of his lie! Just, yay, in general, I guess! TAG
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 08:52 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Noooooo, not poor brave Jack! Please say the harp can save him. Or, maybe Moose is a world renowned surgeon, OR maybe it was all a dream. Anything, just save out Jack! TAG
Author's Response: Not much to say here since you know how it turns out.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 01:28 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Oh, how can you be so cruel, so patently evil, bordering on Satanic even. Only a truly evil person could dream up such terrible torture:
"It's the series finale episode of Queer as Folk! And it`s stuck on an endless loop!"
*Arghhhhhh* Reader runs screaming away from such gruesome torture - and on into the next chapter. TAG
Author's Response: THANK You! You are the only reviewer yet to address that elephant in the room! Glad it made such an impact on you. Bwa hahaha! <rubs hands and strolls away to think up how to place our heroes in even more devious torture....a musical death trap perhaps.....hmmmmm.......
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 12:52 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Replacement Review #5 - whew, I'm glad this is the last replacement review because the pressure of trying to come up with comments as witty and erudite as the ones I originally posted is killing me. Of course, I do tend to overestimate my own wit, so maybe I didn't really have to work this hard after all, but since the original reviews are gone, as far as anyone knows they were the epitome of humor and intelligence. I'm sticking with that story, at least. Now, lets step aside for a moment and analyze this chapter, shall we? A huge, thick pole penetrating through a big hole . . . What does this remind you of? Should I get Sigmond Freud in here to explain? Nope, I think we all get it. Hehehe! TAG
Author's Response: LOLOL Maybe we should get Sigmund in here! I honestly did not mean for the double entendre. On second thought, maybe not. Who wants to talk about my mother?? Blechh
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 12:29 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Replacement Review #4 - I always love when you start in on your descriptions of Brian's various outfits, like his Kevlar armor/suit in this chapter. Usually, you're more into leather, but I can work with the Kevlar thing too. So, is this a special fantasy, kinky fetish or just a guilty pleasure on the author's part? We may never know. Which, frankly might be a good thing . . . (Just kidding!) Now, as to the rude cliffhanger [Insert standard cliffhanger complaint #3 here.] - says the pot to the kettle remarking on how black they both are. TAG
Author's Response: His kinky superhero suit was due to a request to a reader....can't quite remember who....
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 11:56 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Replacement Review #3 - I think I detect a certain amount of 'Monty Python-ery ' what with your hermit named Timothy. But shouldn't he be up on a rickety rope bridge asking Brian and Justin what's their favorite color? Or was that the wizzard who lived in the caves? I forget. Besides, how can you be a hermit and live in a luxury resort? Well, we'll just have to see about that. Next chapter. . . TAG
Author's Response: No Monty Python-ery meant. As for whether Tim can live in a luxery resort....that question and more is coming up in my next chapter. I will be posting soon!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 10:57 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Replacement Review #2 - Before this chapter I guess you could say that Brian and Justin didn't know Jack! Now they do, so . . . That's good, I guess. Will they make it in time before the Oath is finished? Who knows! Well, you do, since you're the author. Me, I'll just keep reading and find out. TAG
P.S. This probably wasn't as witty as the original, but I tried!
Author's Response: Thanx for reviewing. As you saw, I guess, it's a long road ahead.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2013 09:16 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Replacement Review #1 - I'm finally getting around to redoing all the reviews that got wiped out when the site server crashed - sorry it took so long! You KNOW I always love your stories. You've got one of the sharpest wits out there. Since I tend to read a lot when I'm on public transportation, and I find I'm laughing out loud while reading your stories, I have to always prep myself beforehand if you're the author. Just be warned, if I'm hauled off to the looney bin by one of my fellow bus riders, I'm blaming YOU! Now. On to Chapter two. TAG
Author's Response: I had no idea about a crash....sorry I missed your reviews, thanks for doing them again. Be careful while reading and riding. I've warned you b4 hehe
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2013 09:08 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Keep it coming. "Queer" humour is rare.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2013 03:18 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
It's great that the boys are back home. But where's prenant Justin!
Reviewer: Somme (Anonymous) · Date: May 17, 2013 06:17 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
'NOT SO DAUNTING AFTER ALL" Didn't stop laughing at that one for a while.
The job offer was nice of them. But I do believe this means their house and hometown is going to be flooded with the unemployed. No good deed goes unpunished.
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2013 12:07 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
This is about ch. 8. I am behind in all ways.
It's quite something the way this tale has fairytail creatures living seamlessly alongside the modern world and using modern technology. And even using said technology while still being part of the fairytail world.
It's been long awhile since I've read the first chapters, but I don't remember the Kevlar vests.
I love the phrase "mind-mushifying".
The giant is perhaps too nice. And it's very sweet of Justin to beg for Stockwell's life. Canon Justin would probably do this as well. Brian's less charitable attitude is also in keeping with probable canon. Not that I rate stories or fanfic characters on how close they are to the"real" characters. But it is worth mentioning when they both jibe.
Stockwell was so good at a snide but funny turn of a phrase. He will be missed.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 09, 2013 12:00 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Happy to see a new chapter.
Author's Response: Thanx
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: May 08, 2013 05:26 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter.
Author's Response: Thanx
Reviewer: Filmoore (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2013 05:03 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Too funny. And so irreverent. But in a good way.
Author's Response: Thanks. Did yu like Wizard of Oz themed scene?
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 08, 2013 01:04 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Poor Ted.
Author's Response: He'll survive. Barely. ;)
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 17, 2013 02:42 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Was that last line a hint about the comimg mpreg?
More story please.
Author's Response: No, it wasn t a hint about the mpreg. It will be explained next chapter, although the clues are there to figure that cryptic statement out. Don't worry, mpreg is coming. Now that the giant and Stockwell are squared away, we can move this baby (pun intended) along! That was an interesting interpretation though!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2013 12:05 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
At first I was kind of bummed that Stockwell will live. But it's probably for the best. Keep it up.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2013 07:40 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
So the giant is a good guy. Loving this story.
Author's Response: Yup, and remember a few events have been altered since Jack's (the first one) day. It's a 1,000 years later or so, this giant has a son who was being held for ransom and the harp was kidnapped as well. Plus she has more dangerous powers that don't belong in our world. So, there's 2 possibilities. The giant is good....or...the giant is still vicious but driven by revenge against the kidnapper and there's sort of a "the enemy of my enemy is my friend" kind of a thing going on here. You be the judge.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2013 10:07 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter.
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: April 11, 2013 05:01 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Please ignore the "update" in the earlier comment. I know this makes me sound like the world's biggest idiot. But it turns out, it was correct the first time. Guess I should pay more attention.
Forgot to mention. Loved all the humorouse asides throughout the chapter, as well as the story in general. Wish more Queer fic writers were as funny.
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 10:25 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Update: In the next to the last sentence of my last comment there is a mistake. It is supposed to be "seen by the readers" not "by the author". Sorry about any confusion.
Reviewer: mi (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 08:29 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Hello :) I just finished reading your story. Sorry I can't leave review at each chapter cos I read all continously. I like the idea & the storyline... I like the characters too eventho I feel Jen's character changed too sudden.
It's the 1st story of yours that I've read so maybe I'm wrong, sometimes your writing style changed in chapters, is it intentionally? No offense but in-the-middle-of-story author's commentary not really necessary. Like "Justin's basket" or when they gonna have sex. It's like you're watching football game on TV & at the critical moment they airing long commercial break instead (you know what I mean?).
Hmm I feel I give critic more than compliment but I really do like this one. I'll read the sequel. Thank u for keep writing :)
Author's Response: I love criticisms! Thank you!
thanx so much for reading and reviewing even after story was done! And you're probably right, the writing style did change from time to time as I was posting by chapter and this was a VERY long story, taking a long time. Plus there was the alliteration chapter which was a kind of homage to another writer on here who wrote an entire STORY in alliteration.
As for the author's commentaries...well some like em some don't. I do try to keep them to a minimum though!
Cheers!
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2013 10:48 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
The mixture of old fairy tale and modern humor and attitudes continues to be entertaining.
Some of the narrative sounds a bit like stage or screen set direction. And the image of the three fervently nodding and then shakeing their heads sets the tone for the whole chapter. Stockwell comes across as capable of a snarky phrase even through his insanity. In fact, there's not a dull character to be had in this section of story.
About comments on old stories.... While I haven't polled the readers here. I believe that most believe as I do that once a story is completed, the author moves on. So, any reviews left after this point will probably never be read. And for this reason, most readers don't leave comments on older or completed stories. And in a lot of/most cases the readers are correct about this. I don't want to tell you how to write, but offer a suggestion. If you want to increase comments for old stories, it might help to make a notation where readers can see it. Perhaps a remark at the end of the tale or another visible spot stating that any late comments or reviews will be seen by the author. Not sure this will make a difference, but it may be worth a try.
Author's Response: I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Thanx so much for the praise! And thanks for the intelligent suggestions re: reviews and old stories.
I also recieved your message on the other site about not enough of the other characters. So you'll be happy to know even though B&J are stuck in the jam they are by themselves, once they are out in the world again, the next story arc involves the other characters a bit more.
Reviewer: Beth55 (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2013 11:16 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
This is funny.
But poor Jack. I'm holding out hope that he will be allright. But how can you come back from that?!
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2013 08:29 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Get the boys out of this cliffhanger and bring on pregnant Justin!
Author's Response: Trust me...I'm tryyyyy-in'!!! It's almost over. I have to warn you, I'm not sure how much detail I'll put into the mpreg since this story has gone on wayyyyy to long as it is. But the issue will definitely be addressed.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2013 10:11 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 26, 2013 05:53 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Another cliffhanger? Your killing me here! But don't stop.
Reviewer: Somme (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2013 11:42 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Just like in the movies. Things are going so well, everybody's happy, everybody's partying. But of course this means it's whammo time.
Author's Response: You got it! Hope you enjoyed the cliffie! Tune in next time!
Reviewer: maris (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2013 05:36 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Glad you liked my review. Suppose you're right about the spoilers.
Since I can't remember all of my earlier comments in detail, recreating them is unlikely. I would have preferred posting reviews in the comments section of each respective story, making spoilers a non issue. But since these fics were long ago finished, I figured any new comments would never be seen.
Pleased that you were not put off by my critical opinion of the mystery villian.
Author's Response: Ahhhh...I wondered why people reviewed up to a point and then but stopped. However, if you (or anyone else) is reading an old fic PLEASE REVIEW if you want to. I check my shories all the time, for the new one but also the old ones. The Little Merman has reached 33, 028 hits and it still going up to this day. But no new reviews. Please review folks! I'll see them!
And yes, I actually hated how the mystery villian turned out in Lttle Merman. By the end of the dance contest or there abouts it was so painfully obvious who it was, I wanted to get rid of him but by then he was so much a part of the plot, I couldn't stop. So I just muddled on.
I'll tell you what though, the way that started was just out of the blue. I was very happy writing them home or being romantic or whatever happened and out of no where I wrote: But someone was watching. It was completely unplanned and I sat there for several minutes and thought....Well....that was wierd! And I kept it in because I wanted to find out who this mystery figure was and why he was watching. I had no idea. So that's now that started.
Anyway, hope yur enjoying the latest excursion into weirdness as well and hope you're enjoying the VERY extended epilogue to Beauty and the Beast.
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2013 10:36 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Your totally insane Stockwell character is a hoot. Keep up the good work.
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2013 09:35 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Dear Readers,
I just wanted to aknowledge a fantastic review given to me my a reader/writer code named maris. It was fully 5 or six paragraphys long and was a review on a few of my stories.
However, upon reflection I decided it was so full of spoilers that I decided to delete it. Sorry Maris. And thank you for your both good and bad feedback about the stories. You were totally right about the mystery villian, it was a thread that just went terribly terribly wrong but couldn't pull out of. If you can re write yur review without talking about the outcomes and revelations of the characters of the stories, please feel free to re post
However, as it stood, I'm afrraid I had to delete it.
Reviewer: Moderator (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2013 03:04 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
:)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2013 11:51 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Okay, I had just reread the whole story from the start and wrote amazingly funny and insightful reviews for each chapter. I was really funny. Really! You would have loved those reviews. . . I'll try to recreate them but I fear they won't be as funny (I haven't had as much to drink tonight). TAG
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2013 12:50 PM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
Great way to change it up. I expected something horrible down there but this was not it. Good going.
Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2013 09:52 AM · On: Jack and the Beanstalk....Sequel to Beauty and the Beast
So glad that you are continuing this story. I really love it. It just gets more exciting each chapter. And you're right, that was an evil cliffs. More please.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2013 10:55 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
thank goodness. I'm kind of interested in the powers(gifts) that were given to Justin.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 09:21 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Yes this story has gotten long and wayward. This chapter was good , we are finally getting somewhere with the oath thing. Find out what Stockwell is doing ,throw hin down a well, save the town, open the resort , have babies, live happily ever after.
Author's Response: I couldn't agree more. I think I should have ended this with them riding away with Arjax. This whole storyline came out of nowhere and there is so much to do before ending. As you said babies, I want a reunting with Gus, then there are the kidnappers...arrrgh Rest assured that this storyline tho will be coming to a conclusion this next chapter.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2013 08:47 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2012 08:28 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter.
Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2012 09:25 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
O.K. what horrible things did Ted see already.
Author's Response: You'll have to wait and see....bwa hahahahaha!!!!
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2012 02:18 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter, looking forward in what happens next.
Author's Response: You and me both sister..cuz my idea factory is running real low on supplies. Thx for reviewing
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2012 10:03 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
A new mystery - the evil Stockwell factory, huh? They probably manufacture cloned fascists and bigots by killing innocent baby unicorns (or something like that). Go Brian and Justin to the rescue. Where did Brian leave that leather superhero cape of his, anyway? TAG
Author's Response: My God! Your mind goes to a...dark sort of place, doesn't it? You'll be happy to know there are no clones or harming of innocent baby unicorns in the writing of this story. As for a leather superhero cape....mmmmmmmmmmmmmm!!!!! Maybe later!
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 02:33 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Was it a glue factory? Stockwell was a surprise but how is his factory about getting revenge on Brian? I can’t wait to find out.
Cheers
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: October 30, 2012 05:05 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2012 05:37 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Arjax; "YAAA-HOOOOOO!!!!! YIPPPEEEE!!!!! YEEEEEEEEEEE-HAAAAAAAWWWWWWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!" That’s how I felt about the whole chapter. I was so excited arriving back from holidays to see you had updated with such a large chapter and didn’t finish the story. Please add the Mpreg category as I want a Jusan baby Pleeeeeease. Okay it doesn’t quite work like Britin but you get the picture. Thank you; you have a wonderful imagination.
Cheers
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: October 20, 2012 12:36 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Who can take a rainbow, sprinkle it with dew, cover it with choc'late and a miracle or two, the candyman can. . . and Bryton4ever71 can . . .
Nice castle, dude! Roald Dahl would be proud! I do have a bit of a tummy ache after all that sickly sweetness, though, now that you mention it. LOL! TAG
Author's Response: Awwww! Well that was just....sweet! Thank you! Sorry bout yur tummy but I'm sure it will recover Bwa Ha Ha!!
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 16, 2012 04:54 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Hi Jon,
Oh, LOL, no, not in one sitting (although I have been known to do just that), but I did read the whole thing yesterday. I didn’t really have a favorite part, at times I found myself cringing (like when Brian was first turned into the beast) to chuckles to outright laughter. But, there was one part that I really liked. It was when Arjax the horse became Arjax the man but still kept the horse outlook on things. The nervousness and outright panic displayed by Arjax was pretty much in "horse mode". ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Author's Response: yeah Arjax is fun to write! I didn't mean for him to be quite so horsey but it just happened that way! Look for more horsey hi-jinks to come!
Reviewer: starfire64 (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 10:12 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
I spent most of the day reading this from the first chapter up until what you have so far. I've never been much for fairy tales (even when I was a kid) but dang this is good! kind of like having a good book that you just can't put down, no matter how hard you try, haha. Can't wait for the next up date. ~*~ Hugs, Janet
Author's Response: Oh my God! Did you really? You read this in one sitting? No it must have been 2 or something. At any rate...thank you so much! What were your favorite parts? I'm just....Wow! It's reviews like these that make be want to keep going. It might be a week or so till the next update so I have a few other novel length fairy tales on my page if you want a look. My first, the Merman seems to be a favorite of many. Anyway, thanks again! I'm going to get to work on the next chapter tomorrow!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: October 15, 2012 12:07 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
I loooooooved this so much,I am so happy you see no end for it yet!! ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2012 11:06 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: that s super! Anything in particular yu liked? More is coming soon. One more story arc and then I'm done i think
Reviewer: siren (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 06:18 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Okay, that is still an evil cliffy, but you're right, not as bad as the last one. I love the story with all its twists and turns and can't wait to see how our boys end up. Good work. More please.
P.S. - Can you put me down for a vote for Aladdin?
Author's Response: Glad you're enjoying the ride! Thanks for the great review and thanks for your vote. It look like I'll be tackling Aladdin next...gulp....that s a big challenge!
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 01:36 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
I am glad that Justin and Brian reunited. :)
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Author's Response: I'm so glad they reunited too. I hope to provide more soon. I hope you'll like what I have in store for the castle and the village and for those awaiting back in the Pitts!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2012 12:54 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
This story is incredible,I have been hooked from chapter one ~ Vonnie xx
Ps,put me down for Aladdin aswell please.I would love to see where you take that story :)
Author's Response: thanx for your vote and caring enough to do so! I ll keep it in mind! Thanx for your review. I'm doing my best, although, I never really meant to "hook" anybody with any of my stories. I have such a different style than the rest of you and I know there s not a lot of sex. But thank you for the compliment and I hope I can keep your interest as the story starts to wind down.
Reviewer: junebug (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 08:42 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
phew ~~~~ u got me in the first paragraph!
Author's Response: the basement?? Yeah, I'll probably get a few people b4 the run is through! Bwa HA! HA! Hope you liked the little scare and then the rest of it ;)
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 27, 2012 07:31 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Yay! Brian has been found! And he's horny! Yay! TAG
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 02:53 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Brian WHERE THE HELL WERE YOU!!!??" OMG this was a great chapter. You fooled me about the basement. ROFLMAO. Thank the powers that be for the convenient presence and placement of the condoms. Phew. I know this is wrapping up but please don’t hurry towards an ending.
Cheers
Author's Response: glad I could give you a pre Halloween scare! Yes thank God and magic castles for knowing when and where to put condoms and most of all...thank God For our horny Boys!
Don't worry, I won't hurry but as you said things will wrap up nicely pretty soon, but really...isn't this already the longest fairy tale you ever read already?? Don't you guys get enough?? Oyyyy!
Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 08:38 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
but where is Brian......
what wonderful gifts!!
love it!
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 03:48 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
It seems the question of the day is........WHERE'S BRIAN??
BWA HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2012 03:21 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
But, Where's Brian? TAG
Reviewer: 4depthoflove (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 02:51 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
I am SO excited! I thought this story had no more to tell - and was kind of sad. Even though I always want the boys to end up together and happy - its kind of bittersweet when a story ends. Now I have hope that there is still a little life left in this tale - and I can't wait!
Charle
Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2012 02:47 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Ohhhh. Mean cliff hanger. Liked the gifts and the reincarnation of the other men. Great loved it!
Reviewer: yvonnereid (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 11:33 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Omg!!! This is great but like Justi kept asking..... WHERE'S BRIAN!!?" ~ Vonnie xx
Reviewer: lexa4227 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 08:50 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
I hope Brian and Justin reunite.
Great chapter, looking forward for more.
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 08:45 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
I love the gifts now Justin gets to have a baby BJ, lots of money, be young and beautiful throughout a very long life, with nobody able to lie to him but, WHERE'S BRIAN!!? OMG you left us hanging again; thank you so much because I don’t want this to end.
Cheers
Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2012 07:28 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
whoops another cliffy. will be waiting for Brian to appear.
Reviewer: pacagirl (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2012 02:50 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Justin is right...where is brian?^^
Nice chapter, thank you.
I'd love to get «Ted» gift.
Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2012 02:07 AM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Lovely, evil cliff hanger. Ohhhhhhhh! What is the evil white light? Great imagery, BTW - reminded me of CS Lewis', 'The Magician's Nephew' - with the magic ring pulling him through space. Very nice! And, congrats on 100+ reviews. You deserve them. (Even the mean ones? LOL?) You know what I mean. TAG
P.S. I'm not on fanfiction.net so I'm voting here - I vote for Aladdin. I really want the image of Justin in a skimpy belly dancer costume stuck in my mind. Or Brian, for that matter. Love skimpy costumes, on general. TAG
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 09:13 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
I just read what you wrote to your reviewers. Thank you so much for letting us know how you appreciate our comments. I love getting involved in the story and I really like an author who answers a review with a personal touch as you do.
Cheers
Author's Response: I sure do appreciate them! None of my fairy tales have EVER gotten close to a 100 reviews b4 so I 'm just astounded and so happy! I love answering reviews on the most part but sometimes I let them build up and then it takes a long time. That's why I decided on the blanket message this time. Thanks for your support and don't worry there's more to cum after the exploding farts <wink>
Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2012 07:36 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
I like everyone else enjoying this fic would have just reviewed and reviewed for you to reach 100 but you are such a good writer there was no need. I am loving this and I can’t wait for the happy ever after even with an explosive fart I don’t think that is the end. Hurry back please.
Cheers
Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2012 04:18 PM · On: Beauty and the Beast
Whooooo Hooooooo! 100 + reviews!!!! Thanx so much to everybody for reading and esp. to everyone who's been reviewing! Thanks and congrats to Predec2 for being 100! Also thanks to TAG, debv3, flossee, no sleep, yvonnereid, pacagirl, and anyone else I may have forgotten for reviewing thire way up to 100 for me. Thank you all for your incredible and rather....inexplicable support for this story!
Let me use this to answer you all re: this chapter: It'll take me a few days but it's already coming along and I have the ending all mapped out in my head. Sort of. Well, i'm doing it, let's put it that way!
Thanx again! Call me a cow cuz I'm over the moooooo--ooon!
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