Reviewer: tgrayfic (Signed) · Date: October 11, 2023 01:22 AM · On: Betrayal

Just finished the entire story. Loved this so much! I loved everything Brian did for Justin, and in return, Justin helping Brian achieve his goal of buying Ryder out. True partners! And Michael was an idiot! I knew they should have trusted Justin's gut instinct when it came to Rage. Glad it all came out in the end!

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2022 08:47 AM · On: Ambush

Why would Justin have the "asshole movie producer" show him around in California since he didn't work on rage?

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2018 04:15 AM · On: Ambush

great

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2017 03:13 PM · On: Ambush

Damn if Michael doesn't try to ruin everything.  Hopefully you give him the retribution he deserves.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 08:16 PM · On: Betrayal

Why am I worried about the comic?  I'm so glad that Mel and Lindsay are letting Gus come to meet Justin's grandmother!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 15, 2017 01:12 AM · On: Betrayal

Financally things seem to be looking up for Brian and Justin.  Maybe Michael isn't up to something, but I doubt it.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 13, 2017 01:05 AM · On: Betrayal

I love banner too...thank u soo much.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 04:47 PM · On: Betrayal

Wow...mikey is going to be in soo much trouble soon.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 04:09 PM · On: Betrayal

What the heck is he planning?? Good going..b25;

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 02:29 PM · On: Betrayal

Jealous brian is cute.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2017 12:46 PM · On: Betrayal

Mikey is ssooooo pathetic...i hate that character.

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: July 11, 2017 04:01 PM · On: Betrayal

That is soo romantic..love it.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 09:37 PM · On: Restoration

This one remains my favorite of the series!  Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 05:44 AM · On: Betrayal

Ted and Emmett took the news well.  If only Michael could.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 04:38 AM · On: Betrayal

I've always like Emmett.  Michael kept talking bad about Justin, no wonder Brian got angry.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 03:42 AM · On: Ambush

I am rereading all the stories and enjoyng them just as much this time as before!! Bill

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2017 12:24 AM · On: Betrayal

This is wonderful.  Not only did Brian make partner, but Justin was able to get the money he needed for school.  Take that, Craig.  This trip to London should be fantastic.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: July 03, 2017 02:20 AM · On: Betrayal

Revisiting your stories since they are featured this month.  This is one of my favorite series here on Midnight Whispers!!!!  This was one of my inspirations to write my own story.  Bill

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2017 12:31 PM · On: Betrayal

I've read this tons of times and loved it everytime. I loved everything about it. It has it all, love, drama, sweetness and hotness and cuteness. Please write more of it, such an amazing story xx

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2013 10:55 PM · On: Restoration

'...if Michael moved to California, they might have a chance to slowly rebuild..."

For a long time I had reservations about this story because of Brian and Justin forgiving Michael so easily. I can see that they did it for the rest of the family as well, and I can see that Brian felt it would be better at a safe distance. Still, I thought Brian gave Michael too much encouragement for the future. Nevettheless, I love the dog battle and the concessions.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 04:18 PM · On: Ellis, Uniforms and Girlfriends

Now I can officially say that I absolutely LOVE this series!!! :D I think it was a suitable ending, and I love how everything turned out.... Anyway, hope to read you in another one of your fics! Kisses!

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 02:32 PM · On: Retribution

Loved it! I'm sad that they lost almost everything in the fire, though... but it was a good thing that they managed to save some of their things... I thought that the way you introduced Britin was genious! :D I'll definitely be reading the next one! :D

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: November 30, 2012 01:26 PM · On: Betrayal

Loved the story! Can't believe I haven't read it sooner! I love happy endings! Andd I'll obviously will be reading the rest of the series next! :D Congratulations on a great story!

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2011 02:43 PM · On: Ellis, Uniforms and Girlfriends

Nice to see Brian as a family man.  Great ending to the series.

Author's Response:

Thanks! I like the way he changed through the series. Glad to see someone else does too!

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2011 11:25 AM · On: Ellis, Uniforms and Girlfriends

nice!!! Brian Kinney , the family man !!!!

thanks. and more to come

Author's Response:

Sorry, no more on this series... I'm glad you enjoyed it, however!

Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: December 23, 2011 05:33 AM · On: Ellis, Uniforms and Girlfriends

Amazing as always. As for ideas (I read your response to my review of the last one). You could so something with Gus and John getting together or Michael coming back or something. <3

Author's Response:

Lol! Good ideas, but I won't promise anything when it comes to sequels. Inspiration, even with a good plot, can be a tricky thing at times. I have so many half finished stories that started out as great ideas... Which is also the reason I never post until a story is complete.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 10:17 AM · On: Ambush

Mikey doesn't get it does he?  Great sequel.

Author's Response:

Mikey never gets it! Lol! Thanks!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 22, 2011 05:54 AM · On: Restoration

Thank you this is a series I am keeping to reread time and time again, over the years this story will be requested again and again by people in the fandom. It is good that Brian could reach out tentively to Michael but remain very wary for his family. Justin would always take longer as his relationship with Michael is not as dependant.  Looking forward to the epilogue

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'll be posting today... As for rereading, I have to admit that I like to go back and reread it myself at times... Lol!

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: December 21, 2011 09:20 PM · On: Restoration

:)

Author's Response:

Wow. THat was fast! I just posted! Lol!

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: December 21, 2011 07:50 AM · On: Retribution

Great story.

Author's Response:

Thank you!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2011 12:03 PM · On: Ambush

Wow this is such a powerful series and I LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOve it I will be around to see the sparks fly hugs Chris

Author's Response:

Thanks! The real sparks will start in the next story... Lol!

Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 09:58 PM · On: Ambush

Typical Michael. Just as great reading it the hundredth time as reading it the first. Awesome job! <3

Author's Response:

Thanks! It does seem like most of the readers here have read everything on FF.net. Hopefully this is new to some.

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 11:59 PM · On: Betrayal

Thank you for this story.  I guess it almost goes without saying that any good writing about B and J is always good, but this was nice because of the way you used Mikey as a wonderful bad boy to hate.  The back stabbing plot he came up with was so brillant, really way beyond his usual tricks.  I really loved this story.  Thanks so much for sharing this story.  You have real writing talent.

Lori

Author's Response:

Thank you so much! I like using Michael as the antagonist simply because he annoys me. Lol!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 15, 2011 01:17 AM · On: Betrayal

love it

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: ColorLet23 (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 11:15 PM · On: Betrayal

I am in love with this story! Wow. I wanted to wait till you had more chapters up before reading and now I am just soo excited. It's well written and I’m loving the storyline as well. I am glad Brian stepped up to the plate and took his "relationship" with Justin to the next level. I like your Brian because you managed to portray how he's changed without forcing it on the readers. It reads genuine and not fake. The other thing I noticed that was very helpful in making this come full circle is Justin's fund. Because he now has access to his own money, he has become Brian's equal and can now feel solid in their marriage because he is financially independent from Brian. Also, I think it's smart on their part for keeping it quite from the rest of the family. Michael Michael Michael… I hope he doesn’t cause too much trouble for Brian and Justin as well as the family. I could go on, but I won’t … lol. I did enjoy reading the last eight chapters and can't wait for more. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response:

Thanks! This series really is one of my favorites. As the story moves on, I like seeing how BRian and Justin develop. I hope you'll stick around for the other stories int he series!

Reviewer: BigPaw (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2011 09:07 PM · On: Betrayal

I love this story.  I especially enjoy the nasty side of Mikey, it's fun to have such a good reason to dislike him, if that makes any sense.  Your descriptions are top notch!

Lori

Author's Response:

Thanks! Everyone thinks I must hate Michael, but I really don't. I think he's pretty whiny and annoying, but not an altogether awful person. But... but stories need an antagonist and he's pretty perfect for that. Lol! I can actually see him doing some of the things I suggest, all in the name of protecting BRian, of course.

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 12, 2011 09:41 PM · On: Betrayal

love it

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: December 10, 2011 07:07 AM · On: Betrayal

Great Chapter!!! It's time Brian put Michael in his place... Can't wait for more...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: December 09, 2011 03:07 AM · On: Betrayal

I've read the whole thing twice now. I absolutely love this story.

Did you ever wrote a sequel to it?

Please write some more.

 

Author's Response:

I've actually written an entire series. This is the first of five stories.

Reviewer: Ghost Writer (Signed) · Date: December 08, 2011 02:48 AM · On: Betrayal

Oh, I read this story a while ago on FF and loved it. Reading this again and made me not want to wait so I've gone back to your FF to read the whole thing, lol. It's an amazing story. <3

Author's Response:

Cheater! Lol!

Reviewer: Rainbow12004 (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 10:42 AM · On: Betrayal

love it

Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 07:42 AM · On: Betrayal

just a little side note.  your rainbow inn series is very good--but i think goodbye hello would also be a good one to put over here.  i really loved that one.

Author's Response:

I had to add the Rainbow Inn series because, let's face it, I worked my ass off on that one. But I do think I'll eventually get around to moving all my stories over here. I'll keep Goodbye Hello at the top of the list!

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 05:10 AM · On: Betrayal

Hi, dear - glad to see you posting your stories over here....there goes my audience - LOL!  Seriously,  the readers will be in for a real treat.:P)  And I always like to read your happy endings.:)

BTW - Glad to hear you'll be posting a new holiday story.  I'll be looking forward to reading it.  I'm going to try that myself in my spare time (if I can figure out what that is - ha!).

Welcome to the site!

~Kimberly

 

Author's Response:

Thanks for the warm welcome! I seriously doubt I'll steal any readers from you. It's like when a new baby is born into a family; the love isn't divided, it multiplies! Lol! Look forward to reading anything you put up! Since I've been in a bit of a slump lately, I've been reading voraciously, so I welcome anything new (and good)!

Reviewer: linda (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 01:25 AM · On: Betrayal

this story is the bomb.  i have read it on that other site.  you have so many stories there-i hope you put them all over here.  your writing is amazing.  can't wait!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks! Lol! I plan on eventually posting pretty much everything, at least for QaF. I'm not sure about other fandoms, but I will post the Rainbow Inn series here soon. Also, I've got a new Christmas story for QaF that I'll be posting on both sites soon.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2011 12:00 AM · On: Betrayal

hello i really like the way this story is going so far

it sounds great

please write some more soon

Author's Response:

It's all written, but I'll post the next chapter tomorrow! Thanks for your review!