Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Recovery
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2019 12:07 PM · On: Recovery

Love it.. Thank you



Author's Response:

i hope u enjoy the snapshots in the series

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 24, 2018 07:14 AM · On: Recovery Snapshot #1

Omg this was so emotional. My heart was racing and aching for them. So fantastic xx

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2018 08:43 PM · On: Recovery Snapshot #1

Omg this was so emotional. My heart was racing and aching for them. So fantastic xx

Reviewer: John (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2016 06:43 AM · On: Recovery

Cont.. but Brian did not get better,he was still acting like a child. He couldn't dress himself  cried at everything, it was a task to have his cloths match. I just didn't see him getting better. I wonder if he even remembers his past and his job. I know that he said giving the speech that he use to be good at speaking but I wonder if he remembers that or family tells him that and how he use to be.

Reviewer: John (Anonymous) · Date: September 04, 2016 06:37 AM · On: Recovery

Hi again. I read the series Recovery, Recovery snapshotex1 and 4, Christmas tradition and the two fuckachu which were basically the same I think. I think two of them we're after he had the surgery. Justin said in the Pokémon one that Brian could be a 6 year old or an ad executive some days. That could never happen because the man has brain damage,  he could never be what he was. Brain damage is irreversible . That the Dr said that Brian was doing well and that his brain was repairing itself. The brain damage is permanent. If he was going to get better with the surgery he would of been better after it. But it made him worse and more child like. I dont understand how justin let him have the surgery . Brian was not doing well in the stories ,he was acting like a child in all the stories. So I didn't see him getting better. I saw him just accepting what he was but not understanding how different he was. And Justin wanting his old Brian back but having to struggle to accept this different Brian. It's a sad story. I just wish you had kept him the way he was before the surgery at least he was  not this bad or made him better by the surgery working.



Author's Response:

I did pretty much keep brian the way that he was.   The brain is complex and everyone is different.   I never said that Brian got better.   In some people with brain injuries the person never completely gets better they just adapt to the situation   The reason that Brian is still Brian and he can still do his job because it didn't make him dumber that's is not what's happening in my stories.   What has done is messed with his emotional state and how he see things and deals with situations.   His bariers are down which causes him to feel things differently.   That's why some days he can be in control and normal and others he is childlike.    The Recovery snapshots are out of order that way sometimes I can make  him seem child like and others well put together.   He gets confused alot in the sory and it's more of how he thinks people see him them how he really is.   Also the original story Recovery is based on a movie and i went with how the man was affected in that movie which was based on a true story by the way.

Reviewer: John (Anonymous) · Date: August 27, 2016 02:25 PM · On: Recovery

It seems that Brian having the surgery was not successful.  He seems to have went backwards. He was better off before he had it. He should of discussed it with Justin first. They could of been just as happy before if they only communicated and he might of not had the surgery. He seems to be very child like now. Liked the wedding  but  Disappointed in the ending. Wish he could of been better or at least the same as before the surgery. 



Author's Response:

Thanks John for your words.  I don't know if u noticed but this is a series.   This was just the first story, if you read the others you find out that he did in fact get better.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2016 03:24 PM · On: My Hero (Recovery Snapshot #4)

You did a brilliant job here and yup I cried again



Author's Response:

Glad you liked it

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2016 03:23 PM · On: Christmas Tradition

This made me cry buckets

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2016 03:16 PM · On: Recovery

Talk about an emotional rollorcoaster of a story. So many ups and downs. I cried so much during this whole story. I hope you write more and get tha Lindsey 😡



Author's Response:

I never saw this.  Thanks Vic.  They are other stories in the Recovery Series

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2013 09:57 AM · On: Recovery

And that was not the end only a little side line to where they are happy and loved.  Thank you for letting them get married.



Author's Response:

of course they had to get  married.   I love the recovery series.    There will be a lotk at something else in the story don't know what yet though.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2013 09:45 AM · On: Christmas Tradition

This is so sad.  Brian was doing so well considering and then just because Justin and Gus have no faith in him things go wrong.  Boy JR was pissed.



Author's Response:

oh yes JR was pissed off.   I love JR in this story she's like Brian's shero.   I want to another story from this series but don't know what to do, any ideas?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2013 08:46 AM · On: My Hero (Recovery Snapshot #4)

I remember the story that this is part of.  This is so sad and so sweet at the same time.  I'm gonna look up that story and see if you ever finished it, because I want to know if Brian ever gets better.  I hope so.



Author's Response:

lol i did finish it on a Kindle so the editing sucks but a friend of mine is going through and editing the chapters for me.  I hope you enjoy reconnecting with it.

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2012 04:47 AM · On: My Hero (Recovery Snapshot #4)

Beautiful.  Just beautiful!



Author's Response:

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2012 05:18 AM · On: My Hero (Recovery Snapshot #4)

:)

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2012 01:49 PM · On: Christmas Tradition

i hope you write another chapter of this story



Author's Response: Its a one shot the story is complete

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2012 07:20 AM · On: Recovery Snapshot #1

beautiful....



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2012 07:13 AM · On: Christmas Tradition

Amazing and insightful.



Author's Response:

Thanks I love this series and Im glad people are still interested

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2012 06:42 AM · On: Recovery Snapshot #1

hry

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2011 06:53 AM · On: Recovery Snapshot #1

I had read Recovery back in April but I'd missed this little snippet.  It's so perfect how you described what Brian was going through trying to remember Justin; I know that feeling when you just KNOW you know something but it's right out of reach in your mind  And Justin's last sentence was beautiful!  :-)

I'm sorry some readers stopped reading after the rape scene because they really missed many very good chapters but I understand; some people just don't want to read certain types of storylines and that's their choice.  I won't read fics where Brian or Justin die (unless they are vampires, of course!) :-D

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Thanks Cindy I love ur reading and following the series

Reviewer: michele659 (Anonymous) · Date: May 23, 2011 10:36 AM · On: Recovery

Justin is right=adjusting CAN be a bitch! Poor Brian, poor Justin-I feel sorry for everyone involved.

Another heartwrenching(and very good)chapter!

Reviewer: michele659 (Anonymous) · Date: May 22, 2011 06:21 AM · On: Recovery

Another heartbreaking chapter! I feel so sorry for everyone involved. It's going to be a long road back for all of them,but they seem to want to be there for Brian. Now he just has to not give up on himself.

Reviewer: michele659 (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2011 04:00 PM · On: Recovery

Wow-so much tragedy going on in this family! Theyve all suffered so much and are trying in their own way to recover.

Brian looking for Justin in the street and crying,not even knowing Justin when he saw him broke my heart.

Great chapter- I look forward to reading more!

Reviewer: michele659 (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2011 03:26 PM · On: Recovery

So what's going on with Brian? Internal damage?

I liked reading more about them as a family-that scene between Brian and Isabella was sweet and funny.

Reviewer: michele659 (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2011 03:09 PM · On: Recovery

Great start to the story! I like the way you weave their backstories and what's changed in their lives over the years,and how their love has deepened.

I like the way you built up the sense of foreboding,and the shock of poor Brian getting hit by the truck!

Poor Brian and Justin! I'm looking forward to the next chapter and reading what happens next that makes everything change.

Reviewer: jm c (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2011 04:13 AM · On: Recovery

get story

Author's Response:

thanx

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Recovery

I liked the ending! I wasn't wrapped up in a neat little package and I think that's what made it good; made it more believable.  I enjoyed this story a lot. Even though the parts with the Sap; I trusted you to make it right and you did! :-)

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Thanks.   Yea I liked the way I ended it as well.  After I finish up some other things here I might do a sequel   Where you can see how everyone are now.   Maybe that guy from Brian's job can seek some revenge.   You never know.   Thanks for sticking with me to the end you will never know how that makes me feel

 

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2011 05:59 AM · On: Recovery

NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!! You are truly evil!! Bad, bad Galesgal leaving us with a cliff-hanger like that! At any rate I loved this chapter until that whooper of an ending...but I'll forgive you because you have me waiting patiently for the ending!! did I say you were bad...lol!



Author's Response:

I am glad you loved it.   The last chapter soon.   I am just wondering should I add another chapter to the other ones before this....... oh well only one chapter left and we will be done.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Recovery

I hope it all goes well and Brian gets himself back, I know Justin will love him regardless but if Brian doesn't love who he is it won't matter.  Poor Gus just needs someone to understand his point of view-who'd have thought it would be Chris Hobbs? 

Look forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: April 10, 2011 05:35 AM · On: Recovery

Have enjoyed this so far but Im not sure this chapter moved the story ahead.  Am I missing something?



Author's Response:

in a way it did and I guess really no progress was made.   I mean we are still waiting for the surgery to be over and we dont know what molly had.   Next chapter will be longer and its almost over.

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 09, 2011 02:08 PM · On: Recovery

I've been hoping you would update this story soon!  I have been keeping up with it and am really anxious to find out how you're going to do the outcome of the surgery!  It's a great story!

Hugs, Cindy



Author's Response:

Thanks.   I am trying to update it every other day with the proposal.   thanks for the review and sticking with me.   more to come tomorrow.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 08:22 AM · On: Recovery

Nice chapter, look forward to the next one and how the surgery goes. Glad Justin is there with Brian. Poor Gus and Christina Izzy is just too much!! But then again she is a taylor/kinney.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2011 12:16 AM · On: Recovery

Wonderful chapter, thanks

* hugs *



Author's Response: Thank for the comment and continuing to read.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2011 11:47 PM · On: Recovery

Wonderful chapter. This has been a great story.

I loved the ending "I am so scared and I'm glad you are here. Brian said as he put his arms around Justin's neck and buried his head into his shoulder.



Author's Response:

That was my favorite part as well.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2011 08:30 AM · On: Recovery

Thank goodness Brian is soft...no one can embark on such a major surgery and not want their love one around. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the comment.   I am thinking two more maybe and then its over.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 30, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Recovery

awww....this chapter is so good...I lke how you portray Brian, he doesn't have to be strong all the time...a gentle, sweet Brian is just as good....loved that ending! hope you hurry and update!!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2011 02:14 PM · On: Recovery

Hha Izzy Izzy Izzy you did it again LOL. Gus a hint! Lock the door, when there are little girls.

 

* hugs *

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 28, 2011 04:41 AM · On: Recovery

Boy, Izzy sure knows how to be in the wrong place at the wrong time! ;)

I'm glad Justin is determined to see Brian.



Author's Response:

Yea.   Sadly this story will be over soon.   Just a few more.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2011 01:55 AM · On: Recovery

Are you going to update soon?  I check everyday and I'm really missing this story. Brian needs to get back to Brian (if that's possible)

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 24, 2011 11:36 PM · On: Recovery

I was hoping that you would update while I was out with a cold so I could read while I was ill, hope you update soon!

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2011 11:03 PM · On: Recovery

I repeated my review for the chapter since it was a repeat chapter for some reason...I love this story as i said before but where is the new chapter 24??

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2011 10:58 PM · On: Recovery

Your last chapter made perfect sense and you didn't need to redeem yourself with me!! This chapter was so good...the message Brian left message left a lump in my throat, poor Brian! Fuck that indeed Justin, go get your man!! Hope you update soon, I'm at the edge of my seat...oops I fell...lol!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2011 02:09 PM · On: Recovery

hmm little mistake .. this is an old chapter * sighs *

Reviewer: ktfan (Anonymous) · Date: March 21, 2011 10:35 AM · On: Recovery

Chapter 22 and Chapter 24 are the same, any reason why? Did I miss something?  

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 10:22 PM · On: Recovery

Another great chapter , wow the twist of Brian's history just keep coming...I would have never seen the Bruce& Brian relationship....I love this stroy and I hope you continue writing not only the happy stuff but the darker stuff...I think you're a brilliant writer and I'm just happy that you're still writing in the QAF fandom, some of the writers that I use to read have left...I for one appreciate all the hard work that you do!!



Author's Response:

thanks i only write for qaf the deadzone buffy and docto who.   sometimes i do crossovers    i will continue to write qaf for as long as i can write    i am almost finished with this one still got to finish others but iwill always write    thanks for ur comment.     more to come soon.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2011 08:48 AM · On: Recovery

Excellent chapter!!!! Who would have thought that Sap was the "coach" great twist. Keep up the good work ;)

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 02:26 AM · On: Recovery

Hi,

I continue to read/ skim because it is a tough story to read.  I'd love for you to turn this around a bit since it's become harder to read.  This is your story and your creative energy and I would not think to try to tell you how to make your choices.  I would love to see how you resolve this but, not having read any comments by others, I can understand their reaction. As for the point that you love this chapter, no need to explain.  We often like the direction we are taking, the quality of what we are writing, or any other sort of reason and it's not for others to criticize but I guess human nature makes us respond to strong feelings.  That all said, I hope you will begin to show us where the healing will be.

Judi



Author's Response: thsnks judi i thank you for continuing to read. No more bad the healing can begin. this is the longest fanfic ive ever written and i love it. im happy with the response. the good and the bad surprisingly i just was kind of miffed like folks i got off on something like that but now i like the comments just means they were enjoying the story. not much left though three maybe four chaps thanks for continuing to read. latoya

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Recovery

WOW! talk about a plot!! that was so unexpected.....the last chapter was so dark and scary but I continue to read because I was sure that there was a light at the end of the tunnel....I am relieved that I did continue.... Look forward to facing the sunshine.

 



Author's Response:

i'm all about plot.  I think my story though whill be happy. The Unexpected Family is Happy and it's almost done so yea the end of this  story will be godandi hope those who stick around will appreciate it.   Also next story is going to be funny. Already started so it'll be happy.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2011 12:57 AM · On: Recovery

WOW!! What  a great chapter!! I just can't believe Brian....boy you are truly the master...I just can't find the words and I will wait patiently for the next chapters....I just want to say to those who aren't continuing with this story it's truly is you loss...I only have one question...Where is the blue ribbon???



Author's Response:

i thank you for continuing the journey.   Thats the last twist for now i think.    I would love a blue ribbon i dont know what you have to do to get one.   I did put up this eas not a rape fic on updated summary hoping to get my readers back.  sadly i miss them and am sort of hurt that would think i liked the idea of rape.   thanks for your comment

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2011 08:03 AM · On: Recovery

Your story always keeps me on the edge of my seat! I hope what ever operation Brian is going for will help. I can see how frustrated he is. Even in his confused state, he still knows how to push Justin off the cliff ... and now Izzy too.

I can hardly wait for the next chapter. 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2011 05:03 PM · On: Recovery

* waves * I'm still here. Thanks for the quick update.
Brian isn't so dumb, as he could come up with such a plan. (hmm is that good english ... sorry)

* hugs *



Author's Response: Exactly He's better he just doesn't understand he is because he's not at least everyday

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2011 04:51 AM · On: Recovery

This just get a lynch mob together and track down Sap. OK? Poor Brian, poor Izzy.

Reviewer: Jasmine (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 11:16 PM · On: Recovery

I just wanted to say that I read this whole story in one sitting and I'm absolutlely spell-bound and intrigued by your story...I'm really curious as how this next chapter will settle things...I know you've gotten several negative reviews and readers saying that they aren't continuing on, all I can say is that you need to give Galesgal a chance, as she said things aren't what they seem, and I trust her and will continue to read this story! It's an interesting and well written read and I can't wait till the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks Jasmine. I've decided that I don't care anymore if they continue to read or not. The next chapter will be posted either today or tomorrow my net is down and I'm hoping the person that posts for me will be able too. Brian is a complex person when he's in his right mind and if he wants you gone ur gone. Now he's trapped because some moments he is himself and the next he is not himself. What if he were lucid and he planned something then later when it came to happen he wasn't himself and the players he involved in his plan continued there plan. How would that change things. Hang in there the next chapter will make u have to go back and see what uve missed well the next two chapters. Thanks for ur kind words and I hop you continue to read

Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 08:40 PM · On: Recovery

Please go ahead and write your rape story, don't be put off by a couple of negative reviews. You have a following of people who like your writing, including me. Although they're nice some of the time, stories can't be all sunshine and flowers. I for one love angst and so do many others.



Author's Response: Thanks jen I probably will. Thanks for continuing to read. Maybe after the next chapter I will be redeemed if not I hope those qho like it continue to read it

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 08:08 AM · On: Recovery

This had to happen to get to the healing.  Well I sure hope this gets better.  I followed you over from BjFic because I couldn't wait.  I was sick to my stomach the whole time I was reading it.  I hate Brian as a victom.  Poor Brian and Izzy, then JR finding him.  I love this story, now let the healing begin.

Dee Dee



Author's Response: The healing starts in the next chapter. Well after we find out something brian has set into motion then the healing

Reviewer: Jen (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 06:44 AM · On: Recovery

It's not goodbye from me. I'll continue to read as angst and heavy emotion are my favourites. Keep writing, I think you're brave.



Author's Response: Thanks. I was thinking of writing a rape story after the reviews of this I just don't know. Things r not as they seem brian has made a decision all will be explained in the next chapter

Reviewer: Sonia (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 03:45 AM · On: Recovery

So you love this chapter...can I ask WHY....nothing to love about rape and a child witnessing it...nothing to love about seeing Brian suffering needlessly...nothing to love about this chapter at all...I'm with the other reader as that I'm also through with this story. All I can say is that you really show your hate for Brian by compounding the pain of rape with his other problems....it's pointless and definitely cruel! Goodbye!



Author's Response: Sure I am glad you asked why. I love this chapter for what happens in the next. Brian has suffered brain damage he sees things a lot differently and I promise it is not what it seems. The last few chapters have jumped around in time of events leaving blank spots. They have been left for a reason and will be explained in the next two chapters. Brian is all about pushing people off cliffs and sadly because of the damage he doesn't think things through. I promise I make it better. I think I probably chose my words wrong when i said i loved this chapter I do because of the set up to my version of the story. I love it because I know what really happened and you will too and I hope you like my litlle plot twist. ALL I ASK IS TO BE GIVEN ON MORE CHAPTER PLEASE

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2011 01:34 AM · On: Recovery

Ok you really lost me now....what you did to Brian and to have Izzy witness is no way needed and no way needed for anyone to heal...I think it verges on exploitiv and needless suffering...I trusted you before but I'm sorry to say that this time I'm really through with this story!



Author's Response:

ok i know what seem like and you might think that im crazy because i love all the hate.   first off i askthat you reread the chapter before this and then read this chapter because things ar not as they seem.    of course i dont think rape is a good thing its not what you think honest.   when you read the next chapter you will be shock stunned and unable to believe what you have just read.   im trying my best to finish the chapter so u can read it.  i hope you will give me the next chapter to redeem myself PLEASE

Reviewer: ruby (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 06:05 PM · On: Recovery

Still love this story - is it really bad of me not to want the healing just yet? I just want this story to go on and on. Thanks for posting another chapter.



Author's Response:

Glad you still love it.   wait until you read the next chapter itll blow you away

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2011 04:57 PM · On: Recovery

You love this!? * sniffs * poor poor Brian and poor Izzy for seeing it.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

it will all make sense.   Give me the next chapter and youkk kove it tooo.   izzy seeing was importat

Reviewer: Mariana (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 03:20 PM · On: Recovery

WTF I don't believe you did this.....



Author's Response:

I didnt when you read the nxt chapter you all will be amazed.   All i am saying is brian is all about cliffs maybe something happened that want quite supposed to happen but youll love it come the next chapter

Reviewer: feet526 (Anonymous) · Date: March 09, 2011 11:56 AM · On: Recovery

I'm glad YOU love it.......I have a pain in my heart!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

well i didn't mean it like that.   when you right that it makes me a horrible person.  I meant i like the raw emotions.  I promise i'm done wiht the torture lets just heal now.

Reviewer: kay (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2011 07:48 PM · On: Recovery

where is this chapter?

should we not see it to decide if it sucks or not?

 

Reviewer: TECH SUPPORT (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2011 06:00 AM · On: Recovery

This chapter (and maybe more) needs to be reposted.

See announcement for more details.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2011 10:11 AM · On: Recovery

oh -  another update-  I'm so loving this story-  I'm kind of scared what Brian has planned and I so thought that Molly and John were married.  They need to tell the family.

Reviewer: Ruby (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2011 07:22 AM · On: Recovery

Still really loving this story. Hope Brian's recovery takes a really long time.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2011 05:26 AM · On: Recovery

mmhhh....wonder what that big black cup cake is about? burnt,perhaps? mmm..

 

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2011 04:38 AM · On: Recovery

Did anyone tell Justin what Lindsey did (repeatedly) to Brian?  I may have missed that section - could you direct me to it.

Never expected Molly and John - but like it. Another Kinney and Taylor!

Thanks for another great chapter

 

 

 

 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2011 04:42 PM · On: Recovery

Sitting here with a big smile ... John and Molly !

Still loving this story, thanks for writing

* hugs *



Author's Response:

aww thanks look for tomorrow, it's dinner time.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 10:43 AM · On: Recovery

good chapter.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 08:53 AM · On: Recovery

WOW!!! now that was a surprise!! John and Molly.....

oh bri...my heart hurts for him... he seems so lost and confused....

Reviewer: Ruby (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Recovery

I really love this story and look for it whenever I visit here. Vulnerable Brian is so adorable. Please write loads more chapters.



Author's Response:

Don't you just want to give him the biggest hug.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 28, 2011 03:22 AM · On: Recovery

Can I just say...WOW!! I need you to do me a favor and update this soon, as I said before, I'm glad you told me to stick with this story, now it's become one of my favorites, so that's why you need to update ASAP!!



Author's Response:

just updated.  It's a big one.  enjoy.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 05:42 PM · On: Recovery

Wowww



Author's Response:

Thanks more soon.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2011 05:41 PM · On: Recovery

I really really love this story. Thanks.

* runs to the next chapter *

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2011 11:49 AM · On: Recovery

I hope Brian will be okay .... eeep!



Author's Response:

i am really liking writing this story.   Brian is proving that recovery is long and that the road to it can really play on a person's personality and emotions.  He's not better yet but he's getting there.   I'm glad you guys are liking it.   Look for more today.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 26, 2011 06:19 AM · On: Recovery

and entered through the emergency room. and??? When you said short, I didn't think that short.

When I tried to scroll down further that was it!!! I am hanging on the edge.....impatiently awaiting. Really looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2011 02:53 AM · On: Recovery

I'm glad that you told me to stick with this story, I admit when you got to the scene with Lindsay molesting Brian I was on myway oout, but as you told me things would get better...I'm now a big fan of this story! I have a question, I know you're basing this on the BBC television series Recovery, is this on dvd, I can only find particular scenes on you tube and I would really like to see the whole series! Can't wait for the update!



Author's Response:

Yes there is a recovery dvd.   The movie is very different.   The guy got in the accident and some of the scenes with Izzy and Brian were in the BBC series, but other than taht the other is my creation.   Recovery is a fantastic movie and it makes me cry everytime i see it.  It stars David Tennant and i won't go there on ho much i love him.   There's a channel on Youtube as well that has the whole show from start to finish let me know if you'd like the link.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2011 11:08 AM · On: Recovery

good chapter. no response needed.



Author's Response:

thanks i'll give a response anyway.   I was afraid it might have gotten to be a bit much.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Recovery

5,000 or 10,000 words....I am enjoying it.

You definitely have a reader here. I don't want it to end too quickly....A good story is beyond a word limit. Agree?

Again, am loving it.....



Author's Response:

Glad that you are enjoying it.  I will post the rest later today.

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2011 09:06 AM · On: Recovery

Whoopee!! way to go Bri! Show them who is boss. I just wish that he realises that he just did.

Hanging on for Part 11 because the ending does not reflect on the beginning.....



Author's Response:

Yea i know, it was all lenghty that was already over five thousand words you know and i feared no one wanted to read a ten thousand word update.   I mean in one chapter and it not be the end.   No one wanted that.  Look for the rest later tonight and they way they will meet up and match and so on and so forth.   I hope you guys aren't getting tired of this story because i'm loving it.   Sadly it's almost done.  It's already a hundred pages on in word.  I'm glad folks are still liking it.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2011 07:46 AM · On: Recovery

good to see a glimpse of the old brian, but i'm worried about what jerry may do once he sees that the owner of the company he works for hit him. but then again after everything he said he deserved it.

gus giving melanie an ultimatim was good. lindsay needs to be away from them. i know it's breaking mel's heart but does she really think lindsay would get better while at home? still around brian?

brian's had enough. he wants to be him the way he is. he'll get better his way if they'd only let him.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2011 09:43 AM · On: Recovery

I am so glad that they're letting Brian do what he wants to do. He needs to build some confidence.



Author's Response:

He really does but how long is it before that falls to shit.   Remember that chapter The Calm.  Well where's that storm that was approaching.   Thanks for reading.



Author's Response:

He really does but how long is it before that falls to shit.   Remember that chapter The Calm.  Well where's that storm that was approaching.   Thanks for reading.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Recovery

i liker the giant step brian took going back to work. now if justin would let  him live his life they'd be much happier. so glad john is there.

as for chris and justin eating together, i don't know.



Author's Response:

lol can't you just imagine that, can't be good right.

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2011 01:55 AM · On: Recovery

wonderful - truly wonderful. I can't put into words just how much I enjoyed this. I'm going back to read this again. Thanks



Author's Response:

I"m glad that you've enjoyed the story more to come tonight.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2011 11:19 AM · On: Recovery

Thank goodness John is there. He can see what is really going on. Wonderful update!



Author's Response:

Thanks look for more today.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2011 09:24 AM · On: Recovery

really like John he is very much like Brian-take charge, take no prisoners- I hope he sends lindsey back to the place she came from!!!  Looking forward to the more uplifting chapters.



Author's Response:

Oh yes John is going to help them all in the end.   Sorry the update is taking so long.  It was VDAy and it's my hubby's bday.   Look for the update later tonight.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 05:06 PM · On: Recovery

wow great chapter, please more !!

* hugs *



Author's Response:

more soon.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 12, 2011 10:12 AM · On: Recovery

Great chapter.Evil Lindsey...she needs to go back to the looney bin-after she gets caught and totally ostracized from the family.  Loving John great way incorporate Brian's blood family.  More soon Pleezzze.

Reviewer: P.R.A.N (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2011 05:30 PM · On: Recovery

Sorry, me again... I meant to review for the first 12 chapters and not just the first one!!!!



Author's Response:

im really enjoying this story myself.    i know they will be at least twenty chapterd.   look for the next one tonight or tomorrow it shall be very lengthy

Reviewer: P.R.A.N (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2011 05:27 PM · On: Recovery

Hi there, i love the story so far. It's so addictive, i just have to keep reading it again and again.

When is the next chapter coming out? How many chapters are you thinking of making the 'recovery' story? Please hurry...lol.

Your doing a great job

Reviewer: Reader (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2011 08:16 AM · On: Recovery

Lindsay the loony and John the doc, nice twist.  Definitely a different plot - enough to have me hood. Liked that Gus is loyal to his dad and has an idea of Lindsay's actions. What will he do to protect his dad from his mom or even better how will Justin react when he finds out?  Can't wait for Justin's reaction....

Look forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: judi (Anonymous) · Date: February 11, 2011 03:34 AM · On: Recovery

I loved this last part!  At last someone is there that can do something real for Brian.  Would love a bit more of that in the future!  I wasn't sure why you would have Brian shrink from Justin though, just because of Lindsay.  Didn't seem consistent but it's your story so onward and upward.  I'm enjoying it a lot, especially after this chapter.

 

thanks, judi

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 07:23 AM · On: Recovery

I'll give it another chance, I just love your stories so much and if you say things will get better I believe you...it



Author's Response:

Oh thanks very much.   Next chapter will be great all about family and of course Gus banquet.   Next chapter better.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2011 02:53 AM · On: Recovery

sorry, this story is much too dark and depressing for me....I liked it at first but , you just lost me when you turned Lindsey into a psycho molester...good luck and I'm still a fan, just not of this story!



Author's Response:

thanks for your honesty i hope you just give me one more chapter though.    She did wrong and she knows it but tat was done for another person in the story.    It will make sense in the end i promise and she is not going to be doing it constantly.   He trusts heer and it was important for something that will be happenung soon.   I hate loosing a reader give me two more chapters

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2011 06:49 AM · On: Recovery

This is getting really creepy with everyone plotting against Brian's success. I hope Justin can take control of things as Brian's partner and not as a glorified babysitter. 



Author's Response:

I am confused about the review.   Do you like it?  Look for more tonight  

Folks the Kindle is amazing.   I have made all my replies from it today

Reviewer: Jane (Anonymous) · Date: February 08, 2011 03:16 AM · On: Recovery

"giving his penis a little squeeze which caused him to squirm uncomfortably" - I want Justin to catch her. She's abusing him and should be arrested

Looking forward to the next chapter

 

 



Author's Response:

i agree the bitch shpuld be stopped  sadly its going to get wost not the abuse though.   Guess what replying from kindle.  How cool is that

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 11:09 PM · On: Recovery

Wow!!! Lindsey needs to go back to the looney bin FAST..she has to be off her rocker to think that its ok to molest the brain injured guy.  Poor Brian. Glad Gus has finally decided to see Brian, and that he caught Lindsey. Hopefully he will see it for what it is and not just his mom and dad.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

He did not notice.  It will not come up much in the next chapter.  It was the set up for the end of the three strikes.  Big things are coming get ready for a whole lot of crazy.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2011 10:56 PM · On: Recovery

grrrrrrr may I strangle Lindsey !
please more

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Lindsay is off her meds nd sadly she is going to do something worst before something is done about it.   I actually need to get back to my other story.   Thanks for the comment

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: February 05, 2011 07:24 AM · On: Recovery

Holy shit!



Author's Response:

I know right.  I hope you check out the new chapter.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2011 05:01 PM · On: Recovery

OMG you're evil ... you can't stop here and then write that you'll be back in 3 or 4 days. Need and update ASAP.

pff and Christina is a Hobbs * sighs *

* hugs *

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2011 11:24 AM · On: Recovery

nice to see gus giving him a chance to be his father again. about time gus grew up a bit. no matter what condition brian's mind maybe in he'll always be his father.



Author's Response:

exactly.   there relationship is going to be hit hard in this story.   like i said the calm before the storm.

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 03:05 PM · On: Recovery

This is very powerful story!! I hate how everybody treat Brian and I he made a great comeback in the end of the chapter. I hope that from now on he will be getting better. Please update soon I am loving this stroy sooooo much.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 10:54 AM · On: Recovery

don't stop there-  we have to get Gus on the same page-  so glad that Justin realized that Brian is still his mate-  TBI's can be devastating, but lets hope our guys get it figured out.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2011 09:35 AM · On: Recovery

I would have been roaring if I was Brian, too. Fuck 'em all. Take back your rightful place, Brian!

Great update!

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2011 01:31 AM · On: Recovery

What a brilliant chapter!  God, that was so moving!  Best. Story. Ever.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 01:22 AM · On: Recovery

Definitely coming back to see what happens * big smile *

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2011 12:58 AM · On: Recovery

Shame on Justin....I know he is trying to cope with the "new" Brian, but drugging him was a low blow. Emmett is great, I love him.   I think Brian needs to take control and tell the family that they need to treat him like the man he is and not like a child-no matter how different he may be- the only way he is going to get to be anything close to who he was is for them all to treat him like an adult.

Reviewer: lauren49ers (Anonymous) · Date: January 30, 2011 09:51 PM · On: Recovery

What a rollercoaster of emotions! It was so intense. It's difficult to understand Justin's state of mind. He seems he doesn't try to understand Brian's feelings.

I hope he realizes he doesn't have to treat Brian differently.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2011 04:20 PM · On: Recovery

first: happy birthday
second: this was so heartbreaking

* hugs *



Author's Response:

first thanks

second:   I hope you mean in a so heartbreaking but i gotta come back to see what happens next because you just can't keep me hanging there sort of thing

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: January 29, 2011 08:07 PM · On: Recovery

I love how emotional this story makes me!  Joan gets a gold star for mothering and Gus gets a good shake and smack on the back of the head.  But Justin - ARGH!  

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Recovery

I read all seven chapters this morning and the story is so good but so heartbreaking.

Thanks for writing

* hugs *



Author's Response:

oh thanks i'm glad that you're enjoying it.   Pretty soon it'll get in deep wiht Brian and how he's more of like two people now.   The New Brian and the old Brian battling to see who will win.   Probably neither right, and he'll become something new.   Thanks for reading.   Comments like yours keep a girl going.

Reviewer: Armandyouidiot (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2011 05:55 PM · On: Recovery

This really tore at my heart!  I can just see that happening with those damn child safety locks.  I am really mad at Justin right now. Great story!

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: January 26, 2011 07:10 AM · On: Recovery

Wow! Thanks for updating so quickly. I am so hooked on this story. I'm so glad that JR instinctively knew how to handle Brian, and I'm glad Jennifer gave Justin some "pointers" from her own experience with Justin's injury.

This was just great!



Author's Response:

Thanks i'm really glad that you liked it.   I will continue to write as long as folks continue to read.

Reviewer: Anno53 (Anonymous) · Date: January 25, 2011 08:33 AM · On: Recovery

I feel so sorry for everyone. Everyone is hurting and Brian is trying. I felt so badly for Izzy ... this is such a great story!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2011 12:24 AM · On: Recovery

I hope Brian will be better soon

Reviewer: jizabel (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 09:48 PM · On: Recovery

Wow , this is going to be one really interesting and heartbreaking story. It looks like Brian's road recovery will be really long. Great work and I cannot wait to read more from it.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2011 12:02 PM · On: Recovery

interesting saddening chapters.

don't care for lindsay being around at all. i think in brian position she's going to try and take advantage of him. she would if it would benefit herself.

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2011 11:18 AM · On: Recovery

I'm really liking this story.  How very sad for everyone.  I know that Justin is going to be there for Brian.  I'm excited to see how you will continue the story.



Author's Response: It will be a long and difficult journey the ending will be happy but its the ride to that

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2011 04:54 AM · On: Recovery

Eeek! This is a great story, but it is terrifying at the same time! Wonderful writing :)



Author's Response:

Thanks.   That's what i'm going for.  Get where you don't want to continue reading but you can't help yourself because well you just have to know what happens next.

Reviewer: Gina Marie (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 11:55 PM · On: Recovery

omg this is so heartbreaking!  I've read amenisia stories before, (wrote one myself) but this one has a different, intriguing twist to it.  It's very realisitic.  Amnesia patients often remember bits and pieces of their past and confuse them with what's going on around them in the present.   Brian is displaying that perfectly.  Hopefully, when the swelling goes down, his brain will realign itself better.  Though parts of his memory maybe lost to him forever.  I hope that's not the case here!

I'm very much enjoying this story.  Thank you for posting it.



Author's Response: Yea This story is going to be very different and Brians condition is going to send them on journey

Reviewer: galenut (Anonymous) · Date: January 21, 2011 03:42 AM · On: Recovery

great start,don't keep us waiting to long for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Look for the next chapter sometime soon.

Reviewer: sophie's mom (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2011 09:25 AM · On: Recovery

i like it.



Author's Response:

Thanks more to come i promise

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