Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Justin at home
Reviewer: Sweetcheeks76 (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2019 03:44 PM · On: Justin is home

Love the story. Shame you didn't finish it 😢

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:05 PM · On: Justin comes home

I'd like to say I'm surprised, but I'm not.  Just how did Matt manage to buy the loft and Brian and Justin not know?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:00 PM · On: Justin comes home

Sounds like the house is going to be well furnished.  Sadly all the links no longer work.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 07:49 PM · On: Justin comes home

Woudl love to know what design program they used.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 06:58 PM · On: Justin comes home

Sigh.  You never know what you'll get when you play Truth or Dare.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 06:53 PM · On: Justin comes home

That will teach Matt to play games.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 06:42 PM · On: Justin comes home

Who does Matt think he is?  Justin is home, no Brian for Matt.

Reviewer: Artfuleye66 (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2015 08:20 PM · On: Justin is home

I would love to read more

Reviewer: Who (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2015 12:02 AM · On: Justin is home

When

Reviewer: Hannah (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2012 08:44 PM · On: Justin is home

ooh i can't wait for more, is there going to be more? i hope so :D

Reviewer: marietta (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2011 04:05 AM · On: Justin is home

Hi Mia, I hope that you will tell us what happens with the boys and Matt in the continues of this story. Metka



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Reviewer: Lipps27 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2011 11:26 AM · On: Justin is home

It's a great story so far. I would love another chapterssssss :P Please?! Pretty please?! :)



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Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 14, 2011 09:32 PM · On: Justin comes home

This Matt is really anoying, but a good story. Thanks. The end seems a bit sudden.



Author's Response:

He really is anoying. The story isn't done, there is a sequel :)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: December 02, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Justin comes home

Can you please continue this story.... I know that there could be so much more to this wonderful story.... You could make Matt even crazier in his crush on Brian that Michael ever was. Just please don't let Matt hurt Justin physically.

 

Thank you for writing this awesome fic

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: November 16, 2010 04:45 PM · On: Justin is home

I just read 'Justin Comes Home', which I really enjoyed, then came looking for a sequel.  Unfortunately, it looks like this one has been abandoned, so I won't start reading it.

Your completed stories are great.  Thanks for those, and I hope all is well with you.



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Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 03:38 PM · On: Justin is home

Im spaming you.  I had to register to comment and realized that by adding your unfinished stories as my favorites I'd get notification when you posted a new chapter, sooooo.....

I'm all set up, you can continue writing this awesome series now, please?! Or I'll keep commenting knowing you get notification of new reviews, LOL.

Michelle



Author's Response:

Wow, all that just for me? I'm flattered :D

Don't worry, I'll get back to my 'normal' writing schedule as soon as 'Criminal minds on Liberty Avenue' is finished :)

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2009 01:05 PM · On: Justin is home

Nice.... they both got each other the same anniversary present...  that's true love...  I hope Matt doesn't turn out to be some kind of psycho axe murderer or something.... 



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Matt will make an appearance in the next chapter, and he is most definitely nuts; that's all I'm going to say ;)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:39 PM · On: Justin is home

What a great anniversary for Brian and Justin and love the bracelets!



Author's Response:

I thought so too, and I loved the bracelets when I saw them on Tiffany's site :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:20 PM · On: Justin is home

That's gonna be some party! Gus will have plenty to tell his friends when he gets back.



Author's Response:

Oh, it'l be a party alright, and all his Toronto friends will be green with envy ;)

Thanks.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 02:00 PM · On: Justin is home

Love the pics of Gus and JR's rooms and how shocked Mel was when she saw them. Looks like she's finally seeing how Justin has turned Brian's life around. Its good he caught the girls up on the Matt drama, he's still delusional as ever.



Author's Response:

Aren't they great?

Mel is beginning to see that maybe Brian isn't as much of an asshole as she's always thought.

The girls needed to know, they needed to keep the kids away from him.

Thanks.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:53 AM · On: Justin is home

great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 08:28 AM · On: Justin is home

great chapter.. i'm with justin, hopefully no incidents with matt is right..

can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response:

Thanks.

I'm afraid niether you nor Justin will get your wish, sorry.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2009 07:37 AM · On: Justin is home

Happy Gus's birthday indeed! Brian's so cute - though I'd never admit that to his "face" ;-)



Author's Response:

I thought that was such a Brian thing to say ;)

I wouldn't either, he might smack me :)

Thank you.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Justin is home

Love this series... can't wait for the next bit to see what Matt has plotted next.

Oddly enough, I had a harmless semi-stalker named Matt in High School... maybe it's the name :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad.

That's funny, it might be the name, not that I actually know anybody by that name :)

Thank you.

Reviewer: M_elle (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 02:42 PM · On: Justin is home

Nice update!  I'm really enjoying this story. Thanks for for writing it!

Michelle



Author's Response:

Thank you, and you're welcome :)

Reviewer: waytotheend (Anonymous) · Date: August 07, 2009 12:55 PM · On: Justin is home

I really like this story. Justin and Brian are so happy together and I'm so happy that they're so hapyp and ahah I don't find hard to dislike Matt because in the banner you used Riccardo Scamarcio for him and let's just say that I'm not a great fan of him. But anyway, I've really liked this chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

It's my wonderful friends Masterglory/Gloria that makes my banners, she's the one who chose him to 'play' Matt :D

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2009 06:30 AM · On: Justin is home

great chapter, hope you update soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you :D

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:48 PM · On: Justin is home

excellant. love that mel had an epiphany abt lins, hope it works out.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

I think had an epiphany too, I don't think either of them realized what was missing.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2009 09:41 PM · On: Justin is home

that's what family does for brian. changes him for the better. i'm glad mel is getting a chance to see the real brian. relaxed and happy. also i'm glad that lindsay isn't jealous of justin any longer but a bit envious of what he shares with brian. i guess it is time for the girls to work on their relationship.



Author's Response:

Yeah, a decent family can do wonders.

Mel needs to see the Brian Lindsay sees, and she needs to realize that he is no threat to her.

The really need some time to be a couple and not just parents.

Thanks :D

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 06, 2009 07:47 PM · On: Justin is home

Great chapter. Gus is so cute.. it would be so cool to see brian and justin have a real wedding, just to shove it in matts face.. its good to know everyone knows about him and his foolish crush on brian that will go nowhere..i hope that jackass doesn't get invited to gus birthday... 

can't wait to see what happens..



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Yeah, Gus is cute :)

Everybody needed to know about Matt, he could have caused to much damage otherwise. Don't worry, he's not invited.

Reviewer: M_elle (Anonymous) · Date: July 17, 2009 06:14 PM · On: Justin is home

Just rereading some stories I am following...not sure if that is a good or bad thing to do, now I just cant wait for a new update all over again!

Im trying to actually leave comments now.  Ive been a lurker for well over a year in this fandom.  Since my BJ "addiction" doesn't seem to be fading in the least, I figure you writers deserve to know how very much your continuing stores mean to me.

I mentioned this in another story, but just so you know, I just love the pictures you include in your stories.  Wlhile I do have quite the vivied imagination (probably why Im still so into this fandom - smirk), it's a nice way to plunge into a scene and have it all layed out for you visually.

Great work!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Comments are the food us writers live off, so it's always nice to get some :)

I've been in the fandom for about a year and a half, and it's not deminished in the least, in fact it's grown a little :D

I'm glad you like the pictures, I love when other writers do it too.

Reviewer: perle84 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 05:09 AM · On: Justin is home

Now I#m really anxious to know what Matt will do and I want to know how the birthday will take plce. *hug you*



Author's Response:

So glad you still like the story. Updates are coming :)

Reviewer: perle84 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2009 04:41 AM · On: Justin comes home

What a little shit. *grr* This Matt is really annoying.

The whole story is great and I loved o read it. Now I'm up to the sequel. *smile*



Author's Response:

So glad you liked it, even if you did hate Matt. Then again, that was the point ;)

Hope you like the sequel too.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 08:18 AM · On: Justin is home

Loved the rooms.  I do believe that you're right, Brian would be more careful to ensure all kids are treated equally.

Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked the rooms :D

Yeah, Brian is like tht, he remembers what it was like when he was a kid and wants to do better.

Thanks.

Reviewer: Annjeela (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2009 08:13 AM · On: Justin is home

He's sick, but I almost feel sorry for Matt.  This is not a family you want to mess with & be gay in Pittsburgh.

 

Well done.

 



Author's Response:

He is sick, he needs help, witch is why Brian and Justin has asked the family to help him.

Thanks.

Reviewer: Heygirl1 (Anonymous) · Date: June 06, 2009 11:40 AM · On: Justin is home

Happy to have the new chaper.  I feel that Matt is going to cause brian and Justin a lot of trouble.  I hope he doesn't hurt Justin or Gus.

Author's Response:

Thank you.

I'm afraid the trouble isn't over yet.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 05:02 AM · On: Justin is home

i forgot to rate when i reviewed.

Author's Response: Thanks :D

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Justin is home

fabulous chapter. i'm glad they made a room for jr, she is part of the family. i think mel's thoughts of brian are changing.

good thing she's a lawyer, matt is nuts.



Author's Response:

Thank you. Yeah, Brian and Justin thinks like that, they don't differentiate between the kids with things like that.

Mel is definitely starting to look at Brian in a different light.

Matt is certifably nuts.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 05, 2009 10:32 PM · On: Justin is home

Great chapter. I hope that Matt takes a hike finally.. What more can they do to make him realize that brian will never ever be his.. can't wait for some more..

Author's Response:

Thank you.

Matt is very slow on the uptake on this matter ;)

Reviewer: Draccone (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2009 05:34 AM · On: Justin is home

So when are you going to update more for this story.  Matt is insane.  Ha!!!  Give me more to read.  Later, Tay

Author's Response: Urgh, sometimes I wish my muse would just settle on a story, finish it and then move on to the next, unfortunately she doesn't work like that. I'm not done with this story, but I can't say when I'm going to update it, sorry.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2009 02:55 PM · On: Justin is home

I'm glad thay told the gang about CrazyMatt. That boy is unstable and it would be wise that the others are careful around him. Glad to see this sequel!

Author's Response:

They had to tell them, both as a warning and because Matt needs help.

I'm gald you liked it.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:34 PM · On: Justin is home

He is so creepy.

Author's Response:

He really is.

Thanks.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2009 05:16 PM · On: Justin comes home

Well done.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 11, 2009 01:32 AM · On: Justin comes home

please don't let that be the end of the story. it has so much potential in it. please continue. i love it

Author's Response:

I've been asked to do that by others, so I'll probably do that.

Thanks.

Reviewer: Trenice (Anonymous) · Date: March 10, 2009 08:56 AM · On: Justin comes home

Can we say sequel?! This is not resolved in any way, shape, or form. You have to have a sequel with this crazy fuck in it.

Author's Response: We can, I'm apparently unable to do short fics or series. Everybody always tells me to keep going. It's a great compliment, so thank you. And yes, Matt is one very crazy fuck.

Reviewer: Bliss (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Justin comes home

I loved most of the story, but I have to be honest and say that I found the last chapter a bit rushed. Matt went crazy just a little to fast for me. 

I did enjoy the other 5 chapters a lot. 



Author's Response:

I think Matt was well on his way to crazy before Justin even came home. He just devolved faster after he found out that the eleged partner was actually real. He didn't believe that Brian had a partner, he believed that Brian actually liked him better than, for instance Ted. He had a plan and Justin blew it out of the water.

I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapters, though.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 03:59 AM · On: Justin comes home

The end?! You gotta do a sequel, there has to be more that Matt does. Buying the loft was bad enough, but we need more Crazy Matt! =)

Author's Response:

*Smirking*

I just might do that. I haven't quite decided yet.

Thanks.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2009 03:23 AM · On: Justin comes home

I really enjoyed this fic and hope there is a sequel in the works. Would like to see everyone's reactions and how Matt continues to figure into the family.

Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it.

A sequel might be in the works, but not right now.

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 12:09 AM · On: Justin comes home

I've read all 6 chapters -- I guess the question mark in your 'End Notes' (The End?) gave the impression you might be working on a sequel. That's why I questioned Matt's final sanity status.  I mean his final understanding of the situation!

Author's Response: Ahh, yes I haven't quite decided if I want to continue with it yet.

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: March 03, 2009 04:06 PM · On: Justin comes home

I enjoyed the story, but just can't wrap my head around the idea of Brian allowing furniture from JCPenney into Britin.  Especially after reading some of the furniture reviews.  ;-)

Loved the 'Matt' character, though.  Wonder if he'll understand that "no" means no?



Author's Response:

That was the whole point ;-)

I love to put Brian in unexpected situations to show how much he's grown.

How much of the story has you read so far? You'll see whether or not Matt knows that no means no.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2009 10:35 AM · On: Justin comes home

"Matt goes off the deep end." you think. how matt could ever think that he would or could have something with brian is beyond me.them together at britin is just what both of them want. selling the loft, to matt at that, will make moving to britin so much better. now that matt tried to, whatever it was he tried to do, the memories will be all the sweeter for them than bittersweet.

Author's Response:

Matt lost his marbles somewhere around the time Justin came home.

The fact that Matt now owns the loft made it VERY easy to leave it behind. Brian didn't even look back ones.

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: March 02, 2009 08:24 AM · On: Justin comes home

No please.  Not the end.  I like crazy Matt.  Well, not like him like him.  Like reading about him.

Author's Response:

Thanks, Kate. He may show up at a later date somewhere.

I'm glad you liked it.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 06:54 AM · On: Justin comes home

Brian at JC Penney, awesome! I love how you described all the furniture. Sounds just like something they would pick out.

Matt has a lot of nerve, he just never learns. Glad Brian finally said something to him.



Author's Response: I like to put Brian in situations and places he would never normally go in order to please Justin.Did you check out the links? There are pictures of most of the furniture. Matt is a slow learner. He really did believe that Brian genuinely like him. Brian really did not want to take any more crap from him.

 

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 07:31 PM · On: Justin comes home

It's great to see this, I started reading it a while back. Brian is going to have a great time shopping.

Author's Response: Hmm, not so sure about that, he is going shopping with Justin!

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2008 12:54 PM · On: Justin comes home

Very very happy this has been updated. :)

Author's Response: Well, them my mission is complete ;-)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 06:05 AM · On: Justin comes home

confortable companionship. it's nice.

Author's Response: Yeah, they have gotten comfortable with each other over the years.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: December 11, 2008 05:56 AM · On: Justin comes home

Thank you so much for a great update i love this story please update soon.

 

Hugs Buffytess 



Author's Response:

You're welcome.

I'll try to update soon.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 11, 2008 01:02 AM · On: Justin comes home

Glad to see an update! I love that Brian is so protective and sweet with Justin. Its good that they both realize how much of an annoyance Matt is. Love that Brian has to get dressed up to go furniture shopping! Only BK!

Author's Response:

Happy to oblige.

Brian has always been protective of Justin, and yes it is sweet.

Yeah, they are both well aware how annoying Matt is, don't worry, he is not going to get the upper hand anytime soon.

Of course he has to dress up. How would he expect to get the best service if he didn't look his best ;-)

Reviewer: Bliss (Anonymous) · Date: October 27, 2008 07:55 PM · On: Justin comes home

Great chapters to read. I hope you update soon. I personally would not like it if Matt would harm Justin physically in this story. I do like him chasing after Brian. I hope that the next chapters will contain more of that and will lead to more displays of Brian's and Justin's affection and respect for eachother. Matt has to find out that no one messes with this power couple!

I especially enjoyed the pieces of the story told from Matt's pov, because even as an unwilling outsider he has to awknowledge Brian and Justin's connection.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that really means a lot to me.

Matt isn't going to give up just yet, but he is not a violent man, thank god.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: October 18, 2008 07:27 AM · On: Justin comes home

Deb and Carl were so cute. Im so happy Mikey has grown up. That last bit was a mood killer lol. Update soon

Author's Response: I'm very glad you liked this chapter, it caused me a lot of problems.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 05:50 AM · On: Justin comes home

i can't imagine what matt is trying to do, but everything asked always comes back to brian and justin being together.

yeah, justin's answer was a mood killer.



Author's Response:

He was trying to put a wedge between them. He doesn't realize how close they really are, how long they have been together and how well they know each other.

Chris Hobbs is ALWAYS a mood killer.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 04:22 AM · On: Justin comes home

Wow, that was a party ender. Does Matt realize that everyone knows he is crushin on Brian...including the man himself? I hope Justin will be ok, the mention of Hobbs is never a good thing.

And Brian is right, pissing off Justin is NEVER a good thing. He can be a sweet kitten, but turn into a tiger quickly. Can't wait for the next update.



Author's Response:

Matt thinks that he is very subtle and that no one realizes his feelings.

Justin has Brian to help him, thank the lord.

Justin is such a nice little kitty, until provoked enough.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 04:11 AM · On: Justin comes home

Matt: Insert both feet in mouth. What is he up to with this game. I don't trust that guy.



Author's Response: He's mostly harmless. He just hopes that Brian will notice him and dump Justin.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2008 04:01 AM · On: Justin comes home

Love this! I can only imagine the look on Matt's face when he saw Justin and Brian together the first time. He'll need to get over his crush, because he nor anyone can hold a candle to Justin.

Author's Response: Nope. In Brian's eyes Justin is actually the sun.

Reviewer: sarah (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2008 04:06 AM · On: Justin comes home

i luv it!!!!!!!!!!!

when u gonna continue!?????????

i'm can't wait to see what happens!!!!!



Author's Response:

I'll continue as soon as i find out what the next question in 'truth or dare' is going to be. :-D

Have any ideas?

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 11:59 AM · On: Justin comes home

i guess matt got more info than he wanted. asshole. brian better keep an eye on him. justin too, although justin is just waiting for matt to slip up.

great chapter. glad for the update.



Author's Response: Justin is on high allert where Matt is concerned and i think Brian is indifferent, which might prove to be the best course of action.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2008 10:10 AM · On: Justin comes home

matt made a fool of himself with that comment lol I love truth or dare, update soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yep, Matt is a fool.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 08:30 AM · On: Justin comes home

Please update soon. I'm really enjoying this and can't wait to see what happens next and what kind of trouble Matt is going to cause.

Author's Response: I'll try my best. I think Matt isn't done fighting the inevitable, yet.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 12, 2008 07:21 AM · On: Justin comes home

thanks for the update and more please. really like the story but i hope Matt will not be another michael!!!!

Author's Response: I think Matt will be stopped in time, before he turns into a new Michael. I think he might put up a bit more fight, though.

Reviewer: LadyHarold (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2008 03:51 AM · On: Justin comes home

Oh god I hate Matt. He´s so stupid.

But I love Brian *heart*

I hope you update soon. The last time was eternity. 

Hugs



Author's Response: I'm so sorry about that. I'll try and be faster the next time. My poor, wonderful beta had computer troubles.

Reviewer: carbon69 (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 07:13 PM · On: Justin comes home

Good story...love the way Justin told Brian he was home to stay. Poor Matt...oops,trouble in store...bring it on...good job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I think Matt will find Justin a formidable opponent :-)

Reviewer: cattabella (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2008 10:19 AM · On: Justin comes home

I really liked this plot line. Funny, a little sarcasm and sweet all at once. Can't wait for more! 

Author's Response: Thank you so much. The next chapter is with my beta as we speak.

Reviewer: Gerri (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2008 08:15 PM · On: Justin comes home

That was really fun to read. Other than family some people just don't get Brian, lol.

Author's Response:

Nope, he is a very complicated man.

Reviewer: CAMJAKEFAN (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2008 04:50 AM · On: Justin comes home

I really loved this .  Poor little Matt is going to have to give up his little fantasy.  I love reading your stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes, Matt is in for a rude awakening.

It's always great to hear that people love my stories.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2008 07:25 PM · On: Justin comes home

Great chapter and  please update soon. thanks

Author's Response: Thanks, and I'll try.

Reviewer: Buffytess (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2008 05:52 PM · On: Justin comes home

What a great story i love it, please update soon

 

Many Hugs Buffytess 



Author's Response:

Thanks. I hope to update soon.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 05:45 PM · On: Justin comes home

"Michael asks and the others just nod their heads in consent, again, except Matt. He really needs to get with the program if he intends to stay in the family. If he tries to break up Brian and me, not only will he not succeed, he will alienate the rest of the family. They have been waiting far too long for this, almost as long as I have." well that sets it up for chapter two, matt is so screwed.



Author's Response: Matt is an idiot. He will alienate the new family he has required if he tries anything.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: August 31, 2008 04:14 PM · On: Justin comes home

I liked this alot, Im glad they pointed out that brian doesnt fuck his friends, that really blew matts plan up in his face lol and yay for brian and justin wearing their rings and moving into their house

Author's Response: Thanks. Yeah, he really doesn't know Brian as well as he think he does.

Reviewer: LadyHarold (Signed) · Date: August 31, 2008 04:02 PM · On: Justin comes home

I smell trouble with this guy Matt.

I hope Justin is right and Matt can´t break them up.

Great chapter, I love it. I want to read more soon.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I hope to have the next chapter soon.

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