Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: October 21, 2019 02:25 AM · On: The Thorne Saga

very cute

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 10:17 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Thorne is going to be the death of Brian

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 08:59 AM · On: The Thorne Saga

The kids are so cute with the puppy as is Brian. Who knew !

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 08:28 AM · On: The Thorne Saga

Here it goes !

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 07:35 AM · On: The Thorne Saga

Gonna be fun

 

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:25 AM · On: The Thorne Saga

Crap

 

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:20 AM · On: The Thorne Saga

I wonder if everyone is going to be in trouble with Brian

Reviewer: JoJo (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2017 06:13 AM · On: The Thorne Saga

Oh No   Brian's not going to be happy

 

Reviewer: Mary Covington (Anonymous) · Date: October 02, 2016 12:53 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

i loved this series i hope theres another chapter or if i'm lucky sequel out soon , thank you for this wonderful story.

Reviewer: wingnut1974 (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2013 08:44 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Love these stories.  Hope will eventually finish them

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2011 10:07 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

I have to say absolutely fantastic.. 

I have laughed at every chapter and its now 4am and I can finally go to sleep

Thank you its been so much fun reading

Reviewer: Ceci (Anonymous) · Date: April 25, 2011 09:04 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

I enjoy all your stories. I've read them a few times (okay, more than a few) - especially the Talisman of Time series. You're a wonderful writing. Please keep writing...

Ceci

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know you like my stories. I've been workiing on Thorne III, while I've been away. And yes, eventually the Part II of And So Moving Forward will finally appear. Just be patient with me a little longer.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2010 01:39 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Another excellent chapter!

I cant wait until Justin's show in Cincinatti!  Will you be going back to writing the original story?

Author's Response: Thanks for comment. Yes, I will eventually catch up with Justin's show in Cincinnati.....in And So Moving Forward, Part 2.

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: September 08, 2010 05:45 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

I love the stories and this series.

I have read it more than  once.

Please, keep up the writing!

You are truly a gifted writer.

Debbie

Reviewer: Jay (Anonymous) · Date: July 31, 2010 08:57 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Another great chapter.   WHen I see you post another chapter, I know it is going to be a great day

Author's Response: I'm glad that you liked the chapter. I'm glad my little story brightened you day. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: July 25, 2010 06:14 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

YAY!  Another chapter!  Love how Brian and Justin are just happy to sit back and watch all the drama take place all around them.  LOL

Author's Response: Sometimes just sitting back is the best strategy...especially when this group all go into OTT mode. (smile) Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2010 05:34 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

OOoooo.  Who is it?

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2010 10:46 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

must be danny

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2010 07:21 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Great chapter. 

 

 

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. With all these characters all talking at once...you never quite know what going to happen. LOL

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2010 02:33 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Amazing how one little puppy can make so much comment and trouble

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I didn't want to resort to a actually talking Thorne. But he says so much just by his presence...I think it's the wrinkles. (smile)

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2010 03:45 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

I like how Brian has simply submitted to the wiles of both Justin and Thorne, as illustrated by:

Finally, from sheer contentment, Thorne dropped down on his full tummy in the middle of the kitchen floor. Thorne then looked around.

“What’s he looking for?” Debbie asked.

Justin shook his head and simply called out, “Brian, can you come here?”

Brian casually entered the kitchen. “What is it, Sunshine?” was all he got a chance to ask…because Thorne walked over and dropped down on top of Brian’s feet.

Thorne made himself particularly comfortable, causing everyone else in the room to laugh.

“Now how am I supposed to move?” Brian asked, looking down at Thorne.

Of course, Brian is the last to know he has been manipulated:

“This is Justin’s puppy, and for some reason, that I can’t figure out, he enjoys pinning me down,” Brian said.

At that point Calvin and Hunter returned with the additional chairs.

Calvin couldn’t resist making a comment. “It’s only been a week. I can’t believe that Justin’s got the puppy trained so quickly.”

“You don’t really think Brian’s lost control of things, do you?” Trace innocently asked Blake, as most people started moving toward the table.

Justin, Gus, and Nicky couldn’t stop laughing at the expression on Brian’s face.

Very enjoyable read.  Really looking forward to your next post!
Michelle

Reviewer: lynn4227 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2010 01:49 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Poor Emmett! LOL! 

Great chapter. :)

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 04, 2010 07:04 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

this was a wonderful update. i can't even think what it's going to be like once everyone goes back to where they all belong. i hope brian goes to ny with justin at least to get thorne settled in.

dinner conversation is certainly to be lively if the moms tell about their girls night out.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2010 06:53 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

YAY!  Another chapter posted so soon!  I can hardly imagine so many of them packed into Deb's little house.  I can definately see a lot of sitting on each others' laps just to fit into the livingroom!  Thanks for another adoeable chapter.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2010 06:02 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

You tease!  Anticipation indeed.  I'm just so glad you are back to posting new chapters!  I love these stories.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 09:35 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

The new guests have arrived.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:34 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Another dripping cute chapter :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 07:03 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Ted's self esteem issues make him the perfect target for scorn.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 05:52 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

I like Fran very much.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 04:27 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

I wonder why you added a dash to Britin.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:26 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

Entertaining read; now I can catch up on part 2 currently being updated.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:13 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

Let the adventures begin.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 03:01 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

How cute it all was. Fun read.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:51 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

Choke choke...*(blows globs of fluff from his mouth and nose)*

:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:35 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

I was hoping Brian would be good about this.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:21 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

I'm choking on the fluff over here. Fun chapter however.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:07 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

Short chapters have the advantage of feeling like you're getting the story quickly.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 02:01 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

Three chapters this time?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:51 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

Reading on for more.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:44 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

I saw that coming when Fran left a note.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:28 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

Brian doesn't like Cristina; that is established.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:21 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

Wondering the relationship of Spyder and Justin.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 28, 2010 01:16 PM · On: The Thorne Saga

So the little dog must be the special present for Justin. Don't bother answering all my comments; I'm just giving you the hits.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 28, 2010 09:21 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

i really enjoy your stry. when you up date your story again?

Author's Response: Thanks for letting more that you enjoyed this story. I'm almost back to my usual writing schedule. I just wanted to let you know that this story will be updated before the end of this month.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2009 03:07 PM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

let the fun begin.

Author's Response: I agree...because only Thorne could be at the center of this much chaos ! (smile)

Reviewer: Elli (Anonymous) · Date: November 13, 2009 02:07 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Great chapter. Can't wait to read about the dinner, that should be interesting.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 10, 2009 08:23 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad that you liked it.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2009 09:43 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

thorne's saga is coming to an end. what a lucky puppy. how will brian ever deal with him when there's no company? this is a great story.

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Thorne Saga II will be coming to an end when this never-ending trip to Bri-tin ends...probably. (smile) But I definitely have other Thorne stories planned as long as some one wants to read them. I just need to bring this story to a reasonable conclusion, so I can finish some of my other stories. It's just so great to know that you loved this story.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: October 11, 2009 03:28 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Oh Brian! LOL. Thorne wants to be with you too! LOL. 

Great chapter! :D

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 17, 2009 09:31 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Brian and Justin are hilarious! 

Great chapter! :D

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Justin has his hands full keeping Brian on an even keel. We all know how difficult Brian can be. (smile) I'm glad that you liked the chapter.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 14, 2009 05:30 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Great chapter! 

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2009 06:30 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Great chapter! :D

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 14, 2009 10:26 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

“Chaos…total chaos…” truer words were never spoken. that's exactly what is about to desend onto britin.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 11, 2009 08:15 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Poor Ted! LOL. 

Great chapter.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2009 01:36 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

do any of them know the meaning of chaos? they're certainly good at causing it.

great update.

Reviewer: Debbie (Anonymous) · Date: July 30, 2009 08:43 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

I look forward to seeing your series. I look forward to them whenever I check out the website.

You are truly a gifted writer.

Plus keep up inform about Thorne. However, I am still waiting the Milan art show for Justin too. I would love to see how his picture turned out there. Plus, Brian, Justin, Gus, Paul, Jason, and Nicky being in Italy.

Well, please keep the great stories.

Debbie

Author's Response: Okay, I know that I owe you Part II of "And So Moving Forward"....I haven't forgotten. (smile) I had to continuously postpone a trip to Europe, so all my stories are off schedule. I didn't mean to leave you on a cliff hanger....you know that I never do that (smile), but we'll get there...I promise. Thanks for letting me know that you enjoy my writing. You have no idea how much that means. Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: July 30, 2009 05:32 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

thanks for the update. I oe your stories.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for commenting and letting me know that you like my stories. More to come...

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 09, 2009 10:02 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

too funny, love this story. can't wait to hear about Em and the 'ladies'

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2008 07:15 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Thorne has Brian's number for sure! Too funny!

BTW, in the second to last sentence you put  Jason enjoyed adding, as he reached up to kiss Brian. I'm guessing you meant Justin (unless Jason wants to kiss Brian! LOL!)

Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know about the typo. No...no....I'm not creating any new pairings here (smile) Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 16, 2008 02:41 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Brian always get tricked by Justin. lol. But something tells me that Brian doesn't mind. :D Great chapter. 

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Anonymous) · Date: December 07, 2008 11:02 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

the maternal mafia are still enjoying their time away and the guys finally realize that they may never have sex in their bed again. fun had by all.

Author's Response: Especially the irrepressible Thorne. (smile) Thanks for commenting.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: December 03, 2008 05:28 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Brian enjoyed every second of torturing Carl about Debbie's whereabouts!

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: November 27, 2008 12:29 AM · On: The Thorne Saga II - A Visit To Bri-tin

Great chapter. Looking forward in how Brian and Justin can convince Mel and Lindsey to allow Gus to be in the commercial.:D

 

 

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. Brian and Justin definitely have a bit of a challenge on their hands as they try to persuade Mel and Linds to be reasonable.