Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2020 05:25 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

This was a great story!!  And I'm glad that Brian and Justin just did what they wanted to do and got married.   I'm hopeful that after them tellling everybody how it is, they will finally get a clue, but I highly doubt it.   I think the next thing on their agenga should be to get the locks changed at the loft, and only have a key for the two of them. 

Reviewer: MieMie (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2020 04:09 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

What!? That's the end?  Nooooo! I need more. 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 09:53 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 09:53 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2020 09:53 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

did read it again

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 08:53 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Fucking Lindsey.  I would change the locks and give nobody a key

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 06, 2018 08:22 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Just love it, LOL, Michael listing to them.  Great

Reviewer: gaarainolove666 (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2018 06:44 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

very entertaining story. Good Job

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2017 08:52 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

The only thing that could have made this great story better would have been Brian kicking Michael and Lindsay out, then Mel and Ben finally saying enough is enough and dumping their asses! Oh well, I can dream :-)

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: November 11, 2017 03:23 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Great story, really enjoyable read.  Will Michael and Lindsay ever get a clue? Too much to hope for, I guess!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 05:42 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

this was a really great story

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 05:15 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

 Most of the family is concerned about what the marriage means to them, not thinking that the marriage is about Brian and Justin.There is no way that Gus isn't happy for his daddy and justy

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 04:44 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

 Most of the family is concerned about what the marriage means to them, not thinking that the marriage is about Brian and Justin.There is no way that Gus isn't happy for his daddy and justy

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 04:15 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

the cake sounds beautiful and rings were perfect, they decided on the menu and everything seems ago

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 03:45 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

the new loft sounds wonderful  and I'm sure Justin will turn it in to the home they BOTH need. mikey just doesn't catch on how dumb can he be? I often wonder how Ben puts up with someone sp clueless

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 03:10 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Can't belive mikey is so in denial, as if Brian would change his mind because mikey didn't approve. Glad their trying to buy the loft below would be great for Gus 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:43 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

  I couldn't believe how all those people just walked right in the loft! Debbie and her son have no sense of boundries and then acted rude that guys were fucking--you just don't invade a person's privacy

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:36 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

 Wish I could have slapped mikey's face, how dare he upset Gus and make tear up that daddy Justin wasn't his daddy and was so glad when Mel told the jackass to shut up. If Brian thought Justin wouldn't be there Gus he would have let Gus call him daddy Justin

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:29 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

 I've always loved Jen, she and Molly both love Brian. He is seen by them as loving and devoted to Justin in much the same way as Justin is to Brian. I like the Brian lets Justin have his moments to shine instead of Brian being the big deal

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:23 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Of all their friends I think Ted and Cynthia know Brian and Justin best, it's not just sex between them they connect on a much higer level

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:13 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I like Mel she is straight foreward, sorry Lindsay has been and always be a cunt, she wants what she wants and she will say or do anything to get her way,regardless who it hurts. Mel at least knows that Gus loves and is loved by Brian and Justn 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:07 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I think Em always knew about Brian and Justin he has certainly went to bat for them with mikey, as for Deb she believes every word that mikey utters which is usually a lie.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: November 06, 2016 01:02 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I have read this story so many times but failed to review, but it is such a good story I felt I should.Chapter one on mikey, if you ever wanted to meet a village idiot mikey's your man,- why couldn't he sleep on the sofa at his mothers or at Ems.Because he lives to see Brian nude, he had no idea that Justin would be there (dense) or that Justin would make love to Brian he is such a tool he does'nt even think that Brian has his life and doesn't intend to explain his actions. loved it

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 07:35 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Yay!  Brian finally told Lindsay and Mikey off.  Great story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 07:30 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Love your floor plans.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 07:24 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Interesting the different opinions about the invitations

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 07:21 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Sounds like the party is going to be great.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 07:17 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Mikey hurt Ben's feelings.  So sad.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 05, 2016 07:08 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Buying the loft below is a good choice.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 10:18 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Carl is the smart one of the crowd.  At least Deb, Carl, Emmett, Jennifer and Molly are happy for them.  I imagine Ted is too.  Melanie seems aware that it's none of their business.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 10:11 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Love Ben's POV.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 10:07 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Can you imagine what would have happened if Mikey had been there?  He would have been snotty to Tiffany just because she fawned over Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 10:02 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Ted and Cynthia in total agreement.  I like that.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 09:58 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Love how Melanie thinks.  Lindsay doesn't seem to have a clue.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 09:37 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I think since Mikey doesn't give any financial support that Brian is the better dad.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2016 09:17 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Even after learning the truth, he still can't accept it.

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 03:04 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Lovely story!

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2014 02:27 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Great story.

Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:33 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Yay they got married! Come on Jen think before you speak.. the door was locked!!! They really don't care about B/J's privacy



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:31 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Aw daddy Justin!! Sometimes I don't know how Ben can live with Michael.. Great chapter



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

:)



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:25 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I love how Brian and Justin work together



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:20 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Ahh I think Lindsay is jealous!... Brians reaction is great



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:15 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

so cute.. :)



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Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 12, 2011 12:13 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Ah stupid Michael.. he just don't get a hint.. Nice chapter



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Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:44 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Such a great party, glad everyone had such a great time. Also glad Brian let Michael and Lindz have it. They are so delusional and nuts, to actually think Brian would just dump Justin like that. Brian has grown up and finally come to terms with his relationship with Justin.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked this.

Michael and Lindsay needed to be told, but I'm not sure it did much good ;)

Thank you.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:24 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

So glad their home is done and how quick they were to christen the place! Looking forward to the reception, but I don't trust Michael and Lindsay as far as I can throw.



Author's Response:

That's just them, christening as much of the place as soon as possible :D

I wouldn't trust them either.

Thank you.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:59 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Loved most of the reactions, but Lindz and Michael need a reality check. The fact that they can't see how much Brian loves is sad, hope they don't do anything to ruin Brian and Justin's day.



Author's Response:

Michael and Lindsay are selfish cunts ;)

Thanks.

Reviewer: scrub13 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 11:13 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Wonderful ending to this story. Loved the vision of Brian assembling the  wedding cake and the simplicity of exchanging their rings.  Well done yet again.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

I would have loved to see Brian asseble a cake :D

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 08:01 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

if brian thinks that little talk is going to do the trick with michael and lindsay, boy is he ever wrong.

it was a nice chapter. the rings made it special.



Author's Response:

I know, those two are clueless and selfish when it comes to Brian.

I thought so too, the family needed to be part of their celebration.

Thank you.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 07:50 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Yea!

...except, this is just the end of this part, right? ;-)

JK (or not) :P



Author's Response:

Thanks :)

Maybe, it seems to be the general concensus that I should do another sequel, so perhaps.

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2009 05:32 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

that was great. is there going t more in this story?



Author's Response:

Thank you.

I don't know, maybe some day in the future, right now I have too much going on to take on more.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:26 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

wonderful story.  thanks deb



Author's Response:

Thank you, and you're welcome :)

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 02:25 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

too bad about those bed friends, glad the rest of the gang was so supportive

great story



Author's Response:

Yeah, jalousy is an ugly emotion :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: September 20, 2009 01:29 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Great ending...but... I hope there will be a sequel..because Mikey and Lindsay really need to be "kicked to the curb"...for their spiteful, hateful and childish behavior towards their "best friend"....



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm not sure a sequel is in my future, but who knows. I still have 9 WIP's I'm working on, so it's not going to be any time soon, sorry.

Reviewer: gert (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2009 10:27 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

I love this story.  Great ending.



Author's Response:

Thank you :)

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: September 19, 2009 09:44 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

what bloody pricks.. i would said something a lot stronger than that.. great story....



Author's Response:

Oh they are that, but Brian is too happy to really get into it with them :)

Thanks.

Reviewer: Rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: September 15, 2009 09:52 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

I love your story I can't wait to see what happen next.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: LumCheng (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2009 01:29 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

oh, LOL!

that was funny XD I wish I would've been Mikey :P

Naw, but I liked it a lot, that they acted like they've been living together for a lifetime and feel so comfy around each other.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.

They have been living together a lot over the years. THey know each other very well.

Thank you :)

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 08:42 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Double checked this AM- the Story Table doesn't list chapter 7 and neither does the drop down menu. And I can't access it using the NEXT and PREVIOUS functions from ch 6 or ch 8.

 

Weird. :)



Author's Response:

There is no chapter 8 :D That must be the mistake, I'll take a look.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 07:50 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Oooh.... can't wait to see what Linz & Mikey try to do at the party... should be a blast! :)



Author's Response:

I think they'll find themselves dissapointed by the lack of support :)

Thank you.

Reviewer: HalfTime1030 (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2009 06:56 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Love this series & was re-reading it... um, chapter 7 seems to have mysteriously vanished :(

 

Oh, well... off to re-read the sequel!



Author's Response:

THank you so much.

That's weird, I can see chapter 7, have you tried again?

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2009 12:16 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

 

Great fic...   I am glad that everything went off without a hitch in time for the wedding reception... I hope if Mikey does do something really stupid at the party... the suit he picks out is nice enough to be buried in... lol...



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, the boys were really happy about that too :)

LOL, that's a nice image, I'm quite sure he won't survive a direct confrontation with Justin, or Brian.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2009 09:13 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

LOL! am I the only one who noticed that the CLOSET is the size of a bedroom?



Author's Response:

Hey, this is Brian Kinney's closet, of course it's big. There has to be room for all his designer suits :D

Reviewer: indigo556 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 11:33 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

:) I was so happy to see this update!!!!! :)

I love how well you characterize all of them and their reactions. Especially Deb and Justin's mom. Perfect! 

I also love the idea of Justin doing a mural for Gus! How cute!!

I can totally imagine Brian with Daphne's boyfriend! That would be hilarious to watch and so in character! 

You have such a great way of including little details that reveal something about each character. Thanks for updating this one!! 

P.S. I'm in love with their loft. :)



Author's Response:

I'm glad you think the charactisation was good, I try wery hard to 'hear' their voices in my head when I write, but I think it's difficult.

Yeah, I think it's something Justin would have loved to do :)

Me too, protective Brian is HOT and he really likes Daphne.

Thank you so very much.

I'm in love with the loft too :D

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:44 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

great chapter. loved the 'drama' of who & how they responded to the invitation. now what will happen at the party.....



Author's Response:

Thanks.

I felt it was in keeping with the story to hear what they each said when they answered :)

Reviewer: darkraven (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 09:23 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

how could you stop there. lol. i hope you update soon. can't wait to find out what happens at the party. great chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm evil that way ;)

Thanks.

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: August 15, 2009 08:48 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

great chapter as always.. but damn that michael. i wish brian would throw hm out the window.. he knows michael is somehow going to cause trouble, which knowing michael he probably will.

can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Yeah, Michael is a snake. I never understood what Ted saw in him.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2009 06:56 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

why can't lindsay and michael just stay away and give them the happiness they so rightly deserve?

wondeful chapter. love the layouts of the lofts.



Author's Response:

Yeah, well, they think they know Brian better than Justin or even he himself does, morons :)

Thanks, I love floor plans :D

Reviewer: Lesley (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:30 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

loved this chapter. why the hell can't michael and lindsay realize that brian has changed... thats what i hated about those two.. they could change but brian couldn't..

Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, me too, they wanted him to stay the same, not giving him the space and the support to grow, argh.



Author's Response:

Thanks.

Yeah, me too, they wanted him to stay the same, not giving him the space and the support to grow, argh.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 09, 2009 10:16 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Love how the women and men all want to look great.... even kinda Mel & Mikie.

I hope Mikie gets his head adjusted soon so he really appreciates Ben better.  

Love to see your stories.



Author's Response:

Thank you.

Yeah, Mel wants to do it for Justin's sake and Mikey wants to do it so as not to get outed as the jealous little shit that he is ;)

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: June 09, 2009 01:28 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Oh my god! You never disappoint! MORE MORE MORE SOON SOON SOON. I eagerly await the new chapter. Keep up the great work!

XOXOXOXOXOXOXO



Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:49 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

I'm glad they were able to get so much of their planning done. That cake is gonna be fabulous (to quote Auntie Em). How sweet was Brian about the rings!



Author's Response:

Yeah, they really didn't want the whole fomal reception thing, just a small party for family and friends.

The cake is going to be scumptuos.

I'm glad you liked the rings, I wasn't sure about them.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2009 08:06 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

So much to organise, so little time.

Author's Response: Yep, but Brian is nothing if not organized ;)

Reviewer: patheticgal (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2009 04:23 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

like the idea of the cake and the ring!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! love it.......

cant wait for the wedding/ceremonial day of Brian and Justin!!!!!!! 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the pride ideas. I wasn't sure if it was something Brian would do, but I figured he's changed so much in this verse that he would probably do it for Justin.

Reviewer: Bliss (Anonymous) · Date: March 04, 2009 08:02 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

This is like the 10th time I've read this story. I love outside POV-fics. And this is a really good one(love the first chapters of the sequel too.)

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm so happy you like it.

I plan to do some more outside POV on the sequel too.

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2009 07:58 PM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Mikey is driving me nuts and it looks like the boys are growing up...well except for Mickey.

Author's Response:

Michael has that ability.

The boys are growing up, most of them.

Thanks.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 06:48 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

michael the ass will try his damnest to ruin the party i'm sure, that is if he even shows up for his "best friend".

i do love how they're getting along. brian and justin fit so well together.

good job.



Author's Response:

Most likely, but I think he will find himself outnumbered.

Yes, they are so good together, we have always known that ;-)

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Vikinglass24 (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 03:57 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Great story. Keep up the great work!

Author's Response: Thank you. I will :-)

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2009 12:32 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Did Michael get dropped on his head as a baby? How could he be such a fool for Brian in front of Ben...HIS husband. He is a brat, just like Justin said. Poor Ben!

Love that Brian and Justin were able to get the new loft, its going to work so well for them. 



Author's Response:

I'm afraid that Deb overcompensated for being an un-wed mother and Michael being an only child. He has been so used to her doing everything for him. Brian didn't help when he came along. He needed the emotional support from Deb and Michael so much that he accepted blame for things that wasn't his fault. Plus he didn't want Michael to stop loving him, he was to afraid to lose him.

The new loft is going to be fabulous, to quote Emmett.

Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 06:33 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I don't get better that this.  I loved your story, will make it my business the read more of your work.  Thanks!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I hope you'll enjoy my other stories too.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 05, 2008 01:53 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Thanks for telling me about this sequel. Now get your muse in gear and update! =)

Please let someone (like my sweet Em) tell Mikey off for good at some point in this story. Or punch him, whatever floats your boat.

So Ethan finds out Justin got married. He's audience of one, his muse is gone forever. HA HA! He was never going to get Justin back anyway.

Hope you do update this soon!



Author's Response:

You're welcome. I'm always happy to rec my own fics. :-D

I'll think about letting Em give Mikey a piece of his mind, I actually like that idea.

Ethan lost before even entering the game. He might have lured Justin away for a little while, but it would never have been forever.

My muse is on a BDSM story at the moment. The first chapters is with my beta.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 01:18 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

This was such a great story. I loved everyone's pov and how some people actually, finally "got" Brian and Justin.

Michael is a bratty, delusional spiteful little man and Lindsay is just a plain bitch.

Loved the ending and how they all litterally got the shocks of their lives. Finding out Brian and Justin got married and seeing them do what they do naturally. LOL!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Michael is an idiot, I have always thought so. Lindsay can be a bitch.

There is a sequel, I have only written one chapter so far, but hope my muse will get back to it soon.

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2008 07:13 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

i know it will be a beautiful story, please update soon. thanks

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2008 09:16 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

great chapter, mikey and ethan really need to get over it lol

Author's Response:

Yeah, they do.

Thank you.

Reviewer: camjakefan (Anonymous) · Date: September 01, 2008 05:01 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

I can't wait to see what happens next.  I hope Mikey doesn'[t cause any trouble.

Author's Response:

Well, Michael always tries to cause trouble in my stories (except my new story Justin comes home).

I hope my muse decides to come by again soon.

Reviewer: LadyHarold (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 03:15 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

Ahhh nooooo please don´t. I should´ve keep my big mouth shut.

I don´t say anything more.



Author's Response: I hadn't planned on it. I don't know exactly where the story is going, but I don't think you have to worry. :-)

Reviewer: LadyHarold (Signed) · Date: September 01, 2008 02:36 AM · On: More eye-opening experiences

God Michael that whiney little shit.

I got the feeling that Michael and Ethan might plan something against BJ.

Great chapter as always.

Hugs



Author's Response:

Hmm, I hadn't thought of that possibility. There might be something there.

Thanks for the review and the plot bunny :-D

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 04:15 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

These were so great I love the way you look at both of them ...thx

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Mia

Reviewer: lorie (Anonymous) · Date: April 20, 2008 04:48 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Beautiful.  Loved the ending.

Author's Response: Thank you.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 02:28 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

boo hoo. sob sob. sniff sniff.

loved it all.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm contemplating a sequel.

Mia

Reviewer: balki85 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 01:33 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Awesome!

Author's Response:

Thank you. Glad you liked it.

Mia

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 01:05 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

that friggin' idiot. as sad as ben is right now, think how happy he would be if he came to his senses.

i love gus and daddy justin together. yeah you can throw daddy brian into it too.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. I'm sitting here grinning like an idiot :-)

Mia

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2008 12:59 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

i was worried that i was too pushy because i don't want these to end. i like jennifer's take on the two of them. "not everything with my son and his partner is as it seems." perfect. 

Author's Response:

Thank you sjmpets. I really like this story and i hadn't thought about Gus so you weren't to pushy.

Mia

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2008 03:27 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Love how everyone gets to see what Justin see's all the time ... thx

Author's Response:

That's the point of the story :-)

Thank you for the review.

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: April 19, 2008 10:20 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

loved this chapter, molly and tiffany were so funny, it was perfect thats exactly what you would think looking at brian 'wow'

Author's Response: I think 'wow' all the time when I see him. :-)

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2008 06:18 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Thank you another great chapter ...Hugs

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2008 09:59 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

just don't forget we have to hear form jennifer and molly, maybe gus and then maybe the guys themselves okay.

Author's Response:

You're right. Maybe I'll do a few more chapters :-)

Mia

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2008 06:58 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

funny how she can tell how well things are going with brian and justin just by brian's moods. nobody picked that up in the show. they were like that before and after the king of babylon contest.

 i know this is almost over and i'm going to miss it.



Author's Response:

Cynthia has worked closely with Brian for years. She sees things that no one else is alowed to see.

I'm happy that you like this little series but seeing as there really isn't anybody else o get an eye-opening experience it has a natural end.

Mia

Reviewer: Lilith (Anonymous) · Date: April 16, 2008 04:59 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Thank you for the update...

Author's Response: You're welcome.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2008 05:09 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

"until she gets a clue." understatement of the year.

Author's Response: I know. Mel is fun.

Reviewer: Kimmy (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2008 03:41 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I loved all 3 chapters, update soon

Author's Response: I will. Ted and Cynthia is next.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2008 02:09 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Last 2 chapters were grate thank you....

Author's Response: Thank you so much.

Reviewer: emmakinney (Anonymous) · Date: April 15, 2008 01:12 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Lindsay's a cunt and Michael's a cunt... I hate cunts! :D But seriously, I can't believe how shitty Lindsay was to Justin and Brian, bitch!

Can't wait for more... your sex scenes are yummy! Later, Emma xx



Author's Response: I know, Mel was less of a cunt for once. I actually like Mel. I'm glad you like my sex scenes, they are the ones I have the most trouble writing (being a straight woman)

Reviewer: Maya (Anonymous) · Date: April 09, 2008 02:51 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I liked this chapter alot, more soon

Author's Response: I promise.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2008 07:31 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

sweet. i always liked a more mature brian.

Author's Response: Thank you sjmpets.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2008 07:26 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

michael is such an ass.

brian and justin are a couple as he said and it's what couples do. not their fault that michael isn't as coordinated with ben as they are with each other.



Author's Response: I know. They have even been together longer (minus the Ethan periode).

Reviewer: Mel (Anonymous) · Date: April 08, 2008 08:11 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

can anyone say delusional to mikey lol, he would be the only one that could hear them going at it and not love it lol

Author's Response:

That's kinda why I let him be the one to hear it, not only the sex but Justin topping. I'm evil, I know.

Mia

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: April 08, 2008 02:54 AM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Some people will just never get a clue...thanks

Author's Response:

I know, it's amazing. Thank you.

 Mia

Reviewer: nazdre (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2008 11:38 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

God, could Mikey be any more dense? I mean Brian actually told him off, and he still believes Brian is Peter Pan? That man really needs to get a life and realize that Brian and Justin have more of a relationship than the rest of them. I can't wait to see what happens with the rest of the gang, and if they side with Mikey or the boys. Great first chapter!

Author's Response:

I think he only sees what he wants to see. His world can't contain a Brian in love if it's not with him.

Thank you for reading and commenting.

Mia

Reviewer: shinigamiisjustice (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 11:29 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

This was a great chapter! I cannot wait for more. The Liberty gang is always underestimating Brian and Justin's relationship. I like how you brought out their domesticated side in this chapter.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. This was actually a challenge on bjfic.net and I liked the idea.

Mia

Reviewer: Hobbitstown (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 10:08 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

I like the start of this story.  Please keep writing.

Thanks, Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you I will.

Mia

Reviewer: anjul02 (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2008 06:25 PM · On: Eye-Opening Experience

Great start...that was really Michey aaallll the waaayyy...always denying that BJ are for real.

 

Tough...he and the others will apparantly have to get used to it!

 

Can't wait for the eye-opening of the others! *wink*

 

lol

Anja 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I have always thought that Michael was kind of clueless where our favourite couple is concerned.

Mia

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