Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2021 10:55 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

This was terrific. I am looking forward to the next series. 

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2021 10:30 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

This was amazing. Love how Brian finallly has a father that loves him unconditionally. I am so happy Emmett and James are finally married and that Ronni and Dante have as well. 

Looking forward to the next installment in this series.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoyed it.  I think you will enjoy a Son's Admiration.  There will be a spinoff series in the future called Legacy.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2021 01:02 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

The last two chapters were fantastic. Some reason it wouldn't let me post my review at the end of the pages. 

 

They had such an amazing time in Atlanta they needed that. Gus's words about helping people really moved me. I was tutting at Justin smoking a joint, inside the house and it's where his kids live. 

 

The wedding was incredible and I am so happy for them. I wish them so much happiness.

 

The end had me screaming go away B€&/@ 

 

Fantastic work as always 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2021 03:38 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

Wow, what an ending.  Can't wait for the continuation of this and tossing Lindsay out.  There is no way she's taking Gus from them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2021 02:33 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

Shame Anna Claire was having a bad day.  They should introduce her to Jessie.  It's hard to believe that Brian bought his childhood home.  Perhaps with having work done on it his feelings will change.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2021 01:59 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

How nice to have the whole family together.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2021 10:44 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

Another amazing chapter.  



Author's Response:

You are too kind.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2021 09:21 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

Nice to see some new additions to the family.  Can't wait to find how who set off the alarm.  Hope Molly got through to her dad, but I doubt it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2021 07:55 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

Nice to see that when B & J stay at the loft they don't have to go far for a meal.  I feel bad for Nat, hope something can be worked out between her and Tom.  What is Craig up to, can if get him thrown back into the clink?

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2021 03:05 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

Such a wonderful chapter. I loved how happy Gus was with Kevin and seeing Brian's face watching them interact. The girls are so sweet together and a great addition to the family. I do think the house will be harder on Brian then he thinks but Justin will get him through it. I think they will find some surprises.?

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 21, 2021 10:39 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

I feel for Justin and the stress of what his dad might or could do. I'm glad he had Brian there when reading that email. I'm sure with all the chosen family around them will help get them through anything. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 05, 2021 10:43 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

I swear every time I read more of this story this family gets deeper and deeper into my heart. I love how Nat is getting looked after and loved through her operation. The new additions to the family the nanny and housekeeper and her daughter are wonderful. I hope the daughter settles in soon. I loved Brian showing off his photos like a proud dad that made me smile so much. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 01, 2021 02:33 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

Those interviews were fantastic and I think they will be an amazing fit to the family there. Craig, were do I even start without using bad language. He is a very bad man. That's about all I can say without going on a rant lol. You captured everything so perfect. Now I'm very worried about James. You left us hanging. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2021 08:13 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

That was such a romantic time for Brian and Justin they truly needed that time together. I'm so happy Nats night went so well and I'm sure she will shine more and more. I hope Tom decided what he is going to do soon so everyone is not hanging on by a shoe string waiting to hear. That Craig 🤬 he better feck off . Fantastic work 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 22, 2021 10:22 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

Here's hoping their time away is all that they hope for.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2021 12:17 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

Gosh I was nervous for them going to see Craig. I'm glad Brian got there first and said what he said. Justin and Molly handled it so perfectly. I was so very proud of them. He is a nasty piece of work. I honestly can't wait for more. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2021 02:59 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

Can't wait to find out what Craig's plans are.  No matter what there are enough men around to keep the baddie away.  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2021 02:09 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

Sometimes things just don't go the way one would want it to.  With everything Justin and Brian have been through, you'd think they'd be more compassionate with one another.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2021 01:32 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

Wow!  One hell of a chapter.  So much happening, lots of action, problems anxs.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2021 09:28 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

This was a fantastic chapter Gus was a little ray of sunshine wasn't it. So caring and so excited about starting school. I understood Justin's nervousness about seeing his dad and Brian's worry. I think I would be the very same way. I'm looking forward to seeing how this gets played out. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 16, 2021 07:14 AM · On: A Son's Admiration

Dam I cried when they were saying goodbye before going home. They really got so close and it's a beautiful thing to see. Opening those centres is a fantastic idea and I'm excited to see how that goes. I think Brian was right in what he said to Justin about Molly and I hope Justin sees that. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: June 02, 2021 02:21 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

I have to admit that I’ve really come to dislike Tom and the relationship between him and Nate because Tom is trying to have his cake and eat it too as the saying goes. Tom is a Catholic priest and priests are supposed to be celibate regardless if they’re heterosexual or homosexual. If Tom wants to be the priest he committed to being when he took his vows he should not be having sex and if he wants to have sex he should leave the priesthood.
What’s also puzzling me is that pretty much everyone in the family who knows about the sexual relationship between Tom and Nate is okay with it.
When Father Kevin says “No, when I made my vows to the big guy I committed. I don’t hold it against any priest that has relationships. It’s not for everyone.” it may be supposed to come off as tolerant but to me it just comes off as wishy washy. Replace the words ‘big guy’ and ‘priest’ with ‘husband’ or ‘wife’ and see how it reads as if Kevin is okay with anyone in a committed relationship having extra marital affairs. Whether one has committed to God or a human spouse having extra marita relationships do matter and, unless the couple is in an open relationship, is not okay! Would Nate be having a sexual relationship with Tom if he was married to a human spouse? I would like to think that Nate would know better than to do that so it puzzles me that he’s okay with having a relationship with Tom who’s in a relationship that’s as sacred as marriage just not to a person. So even though I have a feeling that Tom and Nathan/Natalia will end up together, even if Tom leaves the priesthood/church, I’m just over this relationship.

Author's Response:

You may want to quit reading my stories since you obviously don't enjoy them.  You have pointed out, very politely and with no disrespect to me, that you don't like most of what I write.  Maybe you need to find an author who writes more to your tastes.  I don't mean this to sound snippy.  I just don't know why you would read something you don't enjoy.  And if you do keep reading my work, I hope you find something you enjoy about it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 11:46 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Nathan transitioning is not easy.  You are giving us a reality of the situation.  Thanks for the look at the future.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 05:16 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

It's amazing how well Anna Claire took to meeting Kevin again.  Kevin seems to become friends with everyone he meets.  Brian is going to miss him.  In fact everyone who has met him will miss him.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 04:31 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

What a wonderful wedding.  And with happy endings for everyone.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 04:07 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

It's amazing how you intertwine the new characters with the old.  I'm sure Ted will be there for Emmett but will Mikey?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 03:02 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Can't wait for the wedding.  It will be interesting when Tom meets Kevin.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 02:17 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Oh my.  They haven't told Tom about Natalia have they.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 01:57 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

More new people to add to the family.  This is so much fun.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2021 01:02 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Tom and Nate are doing well together.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2021 06:58 PM · On: A Son's Admiration

That was so much fun. Gus was truly brave I would have freaked out. Brian is such an amazing dad and Justin is even more in love with him because of it. Seeing Gus so happy to see his granddad and his new Auntys was so moving. Now I want to know what will the boys decide to do. Fantastic work 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2021 02:44 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

So much going on.  Justin and Tom looking for Brian's father.  Tom and Nate?  Gus and Aaron have so many people who care for them.  



Author's Response:

They are lucky kids.  They will never wonder if they are loved.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2021 12:03 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

Wow Brian has a real father JustTom and Nate have broken up, Ronnie and Dante married and Yay Emmett is married. I am looking forward to the next chapter

Author's Response:

Lots more to come.  

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2021 07:38 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

You know how reach off the page and grab a persons heart don't you. I had so many awe moments reading this. I love how Brian was with Nate he knew what to say. Justin I think maybe get a bit broody and if they ever add to the family it will be blessed. Gus made me smile with his care for everyone and making that painting. I can't wait for their trip to Atlanta. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2021 05:39 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

You know how reach off the page and grab a persons heart don't you. I had so many awe moments reading this. I love how Brian was with Nate he knew what to say. Justin I think maybe get a bit broody and if they ever add to the family it will be blessed. Gus made me smile with his care for everyone and making that painting. I can't wait for their trip to Atlanta. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2021 07:11 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Wow where Em and James are on Honeymoon looks breathtaking and so peaceful. My heart is so happy for Brian he now has the dad meant for him. I love how well they are getting on it's a beautiful thing to watch. Kevin is so great in how he wants to help Nate as well I think it's what he needs and Tom as well to have that ear to speak to I'm sure helps. I loved everything about this chapter. I cannot wait for more. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2021 10:41 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

The wedding was so perfect and the wedding blessings blew me away at how truly beautiful it was. As for the witches I'm sorry but even if Lindsey does move back I hope Gus never goes to live with her. He has a far more stable life with his dads. Em's dad was so nice and Kevin was fantastic. Man I'm in love with this story so much. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2021 01:47 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

Gus seriously stole the show here. He has so much love in him and sharing that with others is like his life's mission. Kevin is perfect and I wish his girls were there with him so everyone could meet them. I love that Brian called Kevin dad, that really melted my heart. As for the wicked witches I've no words, they make me so angry. They better not take Gus. You did an incredible job with this chapter x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 17, 2021 07:13 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Happy tears, so many happy tears. Brian meeting his dad was perfect and I could feel his heart beat for the first time for a parent and one that loves him for him. There was so many incredible moments in this and you hit every note perfectly. Kevin meeting Joan again and Brian saying what he wanted to was so powerful. I held my breath for every word they both said. Then Em omg even more happy tears. You got me emotional this morning. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2021 01:11 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

Yay Kevin and Brian United in slaying the dragon bitch. Emmett and Brian getting their daddies back

Author's Response:

Glad you could see my vision.  And both fathers feel remorse for their own faults.  Both sons have enough love to accept them as they are.

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2021 07:01 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Still loving this story. Keep writing.

* hugs *

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2021 01:31 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

I want to clap so loud and cheer at the same time at how Brian handled that phone call. Those girls don't deserve Gus.Brian going to see Bennet was so perfect as he was in a similar situation and knows what it's like. I do hope and pray he comes to the wedding. I have a feeling that Nate and Tom are truly falling in love no matter what they say and as for Nates revelation I think everyone will support him all the way. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: May 11, 2021 08:20 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

In the second chapter Nathan says that he is a transexual and that he hopes to transition soon. But after that chapter nothing else is mentioned about transitioning. Is Nathan planning to transition from male to female?

Author's Response:

I do plan to but I don't like having too much going on at once.  After the wedding is over I will probably start working on that.  I have to admit, I better start some research.

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 10, 2021 06:45 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

I was giddy with happiness reading this. Kevin is awesome and I think he will be a blessing for Brian and the family. It's just what he needs after the horror that was Jack. plus the girls who Kevin helped are amazing. I hope now as well for Emmet that his dad comes to his wedding my heart aches for him. You did an incredible job with this chapter. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 06, 2021 09:36 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Poor Justin those headaches are killing him. I love that Ronni is helping him deal with him. Brian worry's naturally and more help is definitely needed there. I think Tom and Nate are good for each other I think more than anything they could be best friends. Brian has such a huge heart and what he did for Ted and Cynthia was amazing. This was a fantastic chapter. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2021 10:12 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Another fantastic chapter and filled with emotions. I love Justin and Tom teaming up like that to track down Kevin. It's hard and rocky road but they are not giving up for Brian. That shows true love right there. I feel for Brian being stuck in the city and now that snow is not going to help. Plus now I hope for Em that his dad and family show up for the wedding he needs that more than he even truly knows. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2021 01:03 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

Emmett came out well in this story.  A lover, knowing his mom cared, and family.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2021 06:16 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

That was so moving. I'm so glad it went well for Em I was worried for him. Nate seems so nice and I awe of what he is seeing and experiencing so far. Lol Brian's jealous head out already. This is gonna be  good . Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2021 02:08 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

Awe Em I want to hug him so badly. He needs to feel loved and to know his mum does truly touched me. I like Nate already and I'm curious to know what happens next with him. Fantastic and emotional x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2021 01:50 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

What a nice chapter.  Enid's passing was easier knowing that Em was aware of how she felt.  

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2021 05:40 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

Seems to me that Emmett and Brian have more in common than they knew. Is Katie taking lessons from Claire? Glad Em got to see his mama and sit with her. James was right about times changing.

Don't know and can't imagine how Emmett's father is going to react with not only Em being there but also James, Brian, Justin invading the South. Let's hope he has changed too.

Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2021 05:40 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

Seems to me that Emmett and Brian have more in common than they knew. Is Katie taking lessons from Claire? Glad Em got to see his mama and sit with her. James was right about times changing.

Don't know and can't imagine how Emmett's father is going to react with not only Em being there but also James, Brian, Justin invading the South. Let's hope he has changed too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2021 05:36 PM · On: A Father's Remorse

Love how you managed to get Emmett seeing his mother.  I'm sure she'll set the rest of her ungrateful children straight.  Good chapter.

Reviewer: Bob (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2021 09:48 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

A very interesting and original plot - well done.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2021 07:17 AM · On: A Father's Remorse

This was a fantastic and emotional first chapter. My heart bleed for Em. His family needs to learn respect. Thank goodness for James and the boys. They truly know how to love and support each other. I felt everything they did. Brilliant work as always x

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: March 09, 2021 01:26 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

This was terrific! I am looking forward to the next verse to this series.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it!  I am planning on at least one more in that series.  The next (and maybe last) will be A Father's Regret.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2021 08:21 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Such a perfect end to an amazing story. Gus is such a happy loving child. The boys really enjoyed their Christmas through his eyes didn't they. There is a lot of love in that house so I hope someday they do add to that family. Those boys needed that getaway just the two of them after everything they went through taking time out for themselves was the right thing to do. I was shocked at what Joan did but happy hopefully it touched apart of Brian that he needed. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2021 10:13 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Oh Joan good on you

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2021 06:14 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Merry holidays were had by all.  Joan missed out on it all.  

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2021 03:42 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

What a full chapter and a brilliant one at that. I could feel all the emotions that ran through that house. My heart was going hammer and tongs. It was great seeing Tracey smile with Mark she needs a good man in her life. I won't give it away but my ’ for certain people. I love Gus that boys heart is pure gold I swear he never gives up trying to break the armour that surrounds Joans heart. Man oh man this was fantastic. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2021 02:36 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Wow!  Such a lot has happened.  This chapter couldn't have turned out better.  Now Brian needs to meet his father.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2021 09:04 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Oh dear Tracy being in a DV relationship is so dangerous and now we can see the danger.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2021 04:55 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Oh holy heck 😱 that was oh my. Tracey Ex is nuts.

 

Fr Tom really enjoyed his time with Gus and the family. I can see him leave the church to try and have a family of his own.

I sorta felt sorry for Joan, she really is a lonely woman isn't she. 

 

Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2021 01:16 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Another cliff hanger!  You've found a way to keep our attention.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

This story just seems to lend itself to the cliffhanger. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 08, 2021 01:16 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Another cliff hanger!  You've found a way to keep our attention.  Great chapter.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2021 11:06 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

I love how together Brian and Justin are and you can see the strong bond Brian has by the way he is looking after him. That doctor I would have kicked his ass out of the room and reported him. Thank goodness his actual doctor is lovely. My heart broke for James thinking Brian hated  him and Gus on how worried and upset he was. Thank goodness Justin got out and home to be with his family. I can't wait for more. Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 03:14 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Wonderful chapter.  Can't wait to see how Thanksgiving goes.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 06, 2021 03:13 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Wonderful chapter.  Can't wait to see how Thanksgiving goes.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 08:32 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Omg poor Justin. See I knew I didn't trust him 🤬. My heart goes out to them all. Gus is such a strong and loving boy. I have a feeling poor Brian is going to need all the love and help in the world. What an incredible chapter x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 03:55 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Poor Gus.  It's a good thing Justin didn't take him up to the studio.  Just when things are going good, Len tries to do away with Justin.  You've given us some cliff hanger here so we'll want more.  It's working.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2021 01:16 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Oh no poor Justin and Brian

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2021 09:28 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Argh I don’t like Len either

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2021 09:32 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

I was glad to see that Tom got out to the house to visit and I loved how he was with Gus. I think he is lonely and needs family and friends. It's good to know he knows Joan isn't a pleasant woman. I hope he visits again. That Len is giving me the shivers. I'm scared he might do something awful. Fantastic work can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 07:09 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Love how Tom couldn't deal with Joanie either.  She's a piece of work.  Len is trouble.  He's going to end up in jail is my guess.  So Brian is a Taylor, does that make them Taylor-Taylor?

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2021 08:50 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Can't wait till the next chapter. Please keep writing.

* hugs  *



Author's Response:

I don't see that happening any time soon.  I've got an addiction.  My house shows it.  It needs love and care but writing is much more fun.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2021 08:55 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

#1.  Justin do not let Len alone with James.

#2.  Can Joan be shown the damage she did to her children by being a selfish bitch?



Author's Response:

James is not the one that you have to worry about.



Author's Response:

James is not the one that you have to worry about.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2021 11:39 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Holy moly there was so much to take in 😱. I want to know who Kevin is and I hope we find out. I was sucked right into this. You seriously did an incredible job with it. I didn't want it to end. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2021 08:31 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Holy shit, what a chapter. First off I wanna take that Tracey down so badly she is trouble. I think Ronni will rip her to shreds if she does anything. As for Claire grrrr just like her mother. I feel for Peter. I think he would do well without his mother and to be with his uncle. Then you go and leave us with that ending of this chapter 😱. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 09:05 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Da dum!! So we have another father out there hmm interesting story arc. Omg Tracy get a life and go away!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2021 06:21 AM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Wait until Father Tom finds out that Joanie had a child by someone not her husband.  She has a lot of nerve talking about Claire's boyfriend the way she did.  Can't wait to find out more about Joan's sister.

Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2021 07:17 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

just keeps getting better and better 



Author's Response:

Glad you think so.  Have some ideas where we are going but it surprises me too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2021 07:10 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Really good chapter as we learn more about Joanie's past.



Author's Response:

Need to keep up the mystery.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2021 02:54 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

This was such a powerful chapter. So much moved me that words aren't enough to describe how much. I hope Brian gets his answers about his mother. I hope Gus gets to talk to her some more see if he can touch her heart if she has one. I don't trust Tracey at all. Amazing work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2021 03:17 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

I hope Joanie is sitting all alone wishing she'd been invited to the party and knowing why she wasn't.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 07:47 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Brian is so sweet with the kids and in that you can see his venerability. His mother has a lot to answer for. I'm glad what happened with Gus and her he is such a happy child. I didn't say what happened so there are no spoilers. 

Reviewer: JustinsMom (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2021 07:04 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

what made that woman thd way she is? some people are just happy that way. cant believe ronni was pushing for justin to let joan come., but now seeing what joan is like. eagerly awaiting another chapter. 

 

 



Author's Response:

Some people just don't know how to be happy but I think we will be exploring a little of what caused her to be this way.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2021 09:35 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

It's good that James and Emmett have each other.  I never realized how jealous Em can get.  Perhaps Father Tom could come and be there while Brian has his little chat with the she devil?



Author's Response:

Not sure he will show up but I might bring him up. LOL

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2021 09:17 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

I hope Brian can keep his Justin armour on facing the crone and his ghastly sister

Author's Response:

Brian will eventually realize he has the family he needs.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2021 03:58 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

My heart is in bits poor Brian he really did turn into a little boy and all the hurts hitting him at once. I could feel every bit of it. Thank you for this incredible chapter x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2021 01:19 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

I can't blame Brian's reaction I would have blown up as well. I also can feel the pressure poor Justin is under. Joan is temperamental. I can't wait to see where this goes. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2021 06:44 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Joanie will be very unhappy because that is her nature.  Can't wait to find out what you have planned for her.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2021 06:03 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Looks like Joanie will be moving in.  I can just see Ronnie telling her off.  This is going to be fun.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2021 07:14 PM · On: A Mother's Disdain

Another amazing story from you and what a perfect first chapter. Brian really cares for his family and you can see the love pour out of him. You really captured it. I pray he gets on well with his trip for work and omg what a cliffhanger. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: hikinggirl70 (Signed) · Date: October 28, 2020 02:24 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

This was a terrific story. I am so glad Justin finally has the family he always wanted. Also I am glad Emmett finally found love with James. I am happy Craig will be locked up and maybe one day will accept what he did to Justin was not in his best interest but his.

Reviewer: Rixa (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2020 02:19 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

I'm confused as to why Justin keeps referring to Aaron as his son or child when Aaron is his brother/half-brother. What has Justin got against the fraternal relationship?

Author's Response:

He adopted Aaron.  He is his son and he wants Aaron to have a loving father, not the kind he had.  After the way Craig treated Justin how could he want Aaron to have a relationship with him?



Author's Response:

He adopted Aaron.  He is his son and he wants Aaron to have a loving father, not the kind he had.  After the way Craig treated Justin how could he want Aaron to have a relationship with him?

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2020 01:30 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

This was a great ending to a great story!!   I was very impressed by Chris.   I think he was truly sorry for what he did to Justin, and I think it was great that he and Justin shook hands and even hugged.   I think they both got the closure they needed.



Author's Response:

Glad you enjoyed it.  A Mother's Hate will come out later.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2020 01:37 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

It's good that Ronni is around.  She'll come in handy not only with Aaron and Gus, but with Justin as well.  Craig didn't get nearly as much time as he should have.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2020 10:40 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

Fantastic work. My heart went out to both Justin and Brian. The surgery and watching to watch someone you love go through that. All that worry and everything that goes with it when it comes to the court sessions are not easy and I think they handled it so perfectly. They didn't let Criag have any power whatsoever. It all blew me away. Ronni she really is growing stronger isn't she. Loved this x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 19, 2020 07:41 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

Fantastic work. My heart went out to both Justin and Brian. The surgery and watching to watch someone you love go through that. All that worry and everything that goes with it when it comes to the court sessions are not easy and I think they handled it so perfectly. They didn't let Criag have any power whatsoever. It all blew me away. Ronni she really is growing stronger isn't she. Loved this x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2020 07:05 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

Fantastic work. My heart went out to both Justin and Brian. The surgery and watching to watch someone you love go through that. All that worry and everything that goes with it when it comes to the court sessions are not easy and I think they handled it so perfectly. They didn't let Criag have any power whatsoever. It all blew me away. Ronni she really is growing stronger isn't she. Loved this x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2020 07:44 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

Omg that is a heartbreaking last sentence from Brian, Justin’s response will gradually start to heal the damage

Author's Response:

You can never heal a heart broken by a parent but Justin will do his best to mend it.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 15, 2020 07:19 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

Another amazing chapter. What Brian said to Ronni was perfect and it truly came from his heart. Then that ceremony was so moving and Gus made me chuckle lol. I hope Ronni comes more around to Em and James because they were beautiful together. Aaron was a little cutie pie he is a blessing to the family and Gus is gonna be a wonderful big brother. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2020 05:45 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

Right now things are really good for Brian, Justin and family.  However Michael the innocent is still a little mean spirited and even though Ben accepts it will he eventually have too much?



Author's Response:

I may have to decide if Michael and Ben play more of a part then I planned.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2020 03:14 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

How great that Justin is back from the dead and has Brian plus two sons.  No life can't get any better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2020 02:27 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

James and Emmett look like a good match.  James' mother is a good addition to the story and adds a lot.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2020 12:35 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

Never a dull moment with them is there. Brian is so romantic with those rings such a beautiful gift he created. Ronni seems to be settling a bit which is a very good thing as I think this family is perfect for her. And now The baby what a gift to get before a special day. Such brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2020 01:26 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

James mother needs to accept her son for who he is or risk losing him for good. Justin does need to get the consultation for his headaches even though Ronnis drink helped him. I can't wait to see James and Em grow closer. This is so good cannot wait for more. 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2020 01:06 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

I'm still on the fence about Ronni staying.   Everyone including James, Justin, Brian and Justin has said something to her about her comments.   And while she is not outright homophobic, she is very opinionated, and has no trouble saying whatever comes into her head.   I just don't think she should be in a house full of gay men.    



Author's Response:

Give her a chance.  She will come around soon. She will always be opinionated but in a loving way.

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2020 12:39 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

Another amazing chapter. I LOVED Em meeting James that was definitely the thunderstruck moment between them. I just hope that his mother comes around or she will find herself living somewhere else. Justin's headaches don't need taking care of more then using the herbs. That second wedding is going to be epic for sure. X

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2020 08:03 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

That was so romantic, the wedding was perfect for them their two hearts joining as one. I think when Em finds out he will go into party mode with overkill lol. James's mother is a very interesting lady you can tell she has love in her heart I just hope for James's sake she comes around to accepting he only wants to be with men. 

 

This was brilliant x

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 07, 2020 02:00 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

I think Ronni needs to change her way of thinking, if she is planning to stay with James for a while.    This is Brian and Justin's house, and she seems very set in her ways.   In her culture, being gay may not be accepted, but all of Brian and Justin's friends and "family" are gay.   



Author's Response:

If a love like those two have can't change her, nothing will.

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2020 03:52 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

Love the new addition to this story.  Can't wait to find out what Emmett needs to talk to them about.



Author's Response:

I am loving this combination of charactors.  It is fun writing them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2020 02:47 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

Not sure what Molly expected or hoped for, but she didn't get it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2020 01:30 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

Craig got caught but the troubles to the Taylor clan still go on.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2020 02:13 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

That was fantastic, my heart bleeds for Molly she loves her dad and yet he is the biggest A'hole ever. Thank goodness for her brother and Brian she will get more love from them then she would from the Sperm donor. 

 

I love how a Brian took Justin away to the cabin and surprise with stuff there, I'm not saying what for spoilers of course. 

 

I cannot wait for more and more never stop xx

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2020 07:52 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

Seeing him now in custody is great hopefully the judge will throw the book at him once he gets to trial. He must be all kinds of stupid saying things to Brian in front of a guard. I hope Brian agrees to Justin adopting his brother because that child couldn't go to a better home. Mel actually said some nice things about Brian, that was huge right lol. So much fantastic things in this chapter if I kept saying everything about each of them I'd be here for a long time. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 29, 2020 12:23 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

Yay, Craig was taken down.  I think Dani is going to be around for a good while.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2020 07:15 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

Poor Justin he is going to feel so much stress for another bit with his dads arrest coming up. Now finding out the truth about the baby as well. He won't want that baby to go anywhere will he. Dani that poor girl needs a lot of love and support and she will find it those boys. It's great to see all the family band together. I feel for Molly she is so young and shouldn't have to deal with this no one should. This was another amazing chapter x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2020 05:34 PM · On: A Father's Hate!

Did Brian do the right thing.  Can Craig use it to get out of the trouble he's going to be in?



Author's Response:

I am not getting notifications of posts. Glad I saw your comment.  This is going to end up being more of a civil case than a criminal case probably.  

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2020 07:55 AM · On: A Father's Hate!

I feel for Molly she is so young and her emotions are everywhere. It must be so hard for her. Justin is really coming so far with Dani's therapy but his emotional side will take time I'm sure. Brian oh Brian was that the right thing to do. I love how he wants to protect Justin and Molly snd Jen . This is such a fantastic story x

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