Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2020 11:56 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Ok I am crying so much I couldn’t read the last bit I had to pull myself together and then read it again. That was beautiful thank you

Author's Response:

Thank you.  Could they go any other way?   

Thanks for reading my story.  I am doing a light hearted Short story right now.  Very different for me and then I will continue my Cabin story and the Hate story.

 

Reviewer: Raemani (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 05:36 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

A fitting, yet sad end to their journey.  I have loved this story since finding it near the 3rd or 4th story (and heading back to the beginning after discovering the one I was reading was not the start). 

I have always looked forward to reading the next installment as they were posted.  It was quite a ride. Many ups and downs, laughs and tears.  Getting to know the family that Brian ans Justin built over the years.

I am sad knowing it is ending and that there will be no more stories in this particular universe, but I understand it has to end somewhere and it was an fitting end, whether you stopped at chapter 16 or the epilogue.  

Thanks for an amazing series that has kept me entertained for years.



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it.  I felt it was time for this universe to come to an end.  I admit I will miss this family but I have to other universes started and I have a short story started that will come out next.   Thank you for hanging in there with me.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 02:34 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Omg so many tears. You wrote this so perfectly. My heart was with them all the way. I don't normally read death stories but this one blew me away. Thank you for giving them a beautiful life and a beautiful passing. ❤️🌈🌈



Author's Response:

Thanks, Vicki.  I wanted them to live and die on their own terms and I consider this a happy ending because it is the way they would want to go.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 02:17 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Such a beautiful chapter. Full of love and family. They are all so close it can bring a tear to my eye. They remind me of my own family, crazy, funny, not afraid to say I love you and full of hugs. Thank you so much for writing this incredible story x

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 08:45 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

It's early in the morning and I'm still in bed with a huge headache from crying. I had to stop reading a few times, because I could't see anything through my tears. What an amazing story about a beautiful familiy. Aggrr now 30 minutes later my tears are still running down my face. I knew this was coming, they are both old. But aggrr I want them to live forever, so this story will never ends. But this ending is what I wanted to see, going together, maybe with less pain for Justin. Jesus I'm a blubbering mess. It's a good thing my kids are still sleeping for a few hours.

 

Thanks for writing this amazing story. 

And now I need a big hug.

* hugs  *



Author's Response:

Thanks for the kind words.  I blubbered as I wrote it but I needed for there to be a conclusion.  I have fallen in love with this family but it is time to move on.  I am glad I was able to touch you some how.  There will be more stories.

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 08:12 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

The end is truly beautiful....their hearts truly cannot beat alone!



Author's Response:

Thanks for helping me get it out in good shape.

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2020 08:12 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

The end is truly beautiful....their hearts truly cannot beat alone!

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2020 10:28 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Wonderful writing.  I could just imagine their very full Thanksgiving.  I have a very small family so am not used to can't even imagine a gathering like that, but I think it would be amazing.  So sad to see this series end, but I hope you will continue to write and maybe start a new series.



Author's Response:

Thank you.  I have truly enjoyed writing it.  I have a short one shot playing around in my head that will be fun and light hearted and then I plan to do a couple more for the Cabin story.  I will also continue the Father's Hate series.  That should keep me busy for a while. Again, thanks for hanging in there threw all of it.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2020 01:06 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

That was so full of love and I loved that. Hearing them talk so openly made me go all kinds of feels in my heart. Seeing Daphne was amazing and I hope she gets to visit them she is like their little sister. Thank you for writing this it was amazing x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2020 11:50 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

It was so touching to see Gus and Trent together their bond leapt off the page. It's so amazing how souls attract each other and theirs certainly did. As it is with Brian and Justin. They are definitely forever young. I love how you brought them and Marcus and Adam to the secert garden that place is magic. I was moved so much listening to Brian and Justin talk. You really have a way of getting right to the heart. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 13, 2020 11:12 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Love this story so much. Hope it never ends.

Think I'm gonna re-read it from the beginning..

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Well, it is coming to an end.  This will be the last story in this series.  I have a couple more chapters to complete and then I will move on to one of the other stories I have started. 

I am so glad you have enjoyed my adventure with Brian and Justin and the family they created. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2020 12:20 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Brian and Justin are so connected and seeing your loved one going through that is not easy. They are lucky to have such loving support around them. Nico sure knew how to handle a frustrated and angry Justin I loved that lol.

 

I'm so proud of Brian how he is handling the Trenton situation and getting him back is important on so many levels. 

 

You did a fantastic job with this x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2020 02:35 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Way to make me cry that really got to me. The fear in Justin's voice shook me. I can feel it jump out at me. Brian sure held it together so well for him. I pray that everything will go well for them. Adam is really getting on well with Marcus and I'm so happy to see that a family bond is a wonderful thing. So much happened I could write for ever but I'd give away to much lol. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: November 01, 2020 07:45 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Justin really has a choice to make doesn't he. I do hope he picks the one that will give him the better quality of life. Brian is his power house keeping him going and that is true love for you. Nico and Kevin are funny and I can picture them sneaking around like naughty school boys lol. Marcus the poor guy is gonna find it hard but he can do this and Adam might give him strength. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 27, 2020 05:31 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Wow talk about a cliffhanger 😱. That's so not fair leaving us waiting like that. There was was much emotion I was spinning my head. I feel for Shelby having to share her husband isn't good and I understand why she does but it doesn't make it easier. Marcus is dealing with the news of Adam so good and his interaction with Brian moved me. As for Nico and Kevin hotness.

 

brilliant work c

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 25, 2020 09:56 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Yet another incredible chapter. I'm so glad that Justin's show went to well and Brian felt the fresh love wash over him again just like the first time. I do hope everyone gets to know Adam, his upbringing I can tell is why he put off knowing Dan and that is horrible. Now though he can get to know more of his brother through his family and friends. 

 

Bren and Jed are so sweet together, I truly hope they are forever even though they are young I do hope so.

 

and a new boy Nico he seems so sweet and perfect to join this gang.

 

Poor Trent he is really hurting and I hope he gets emotional therapy as I great he needs it more than getting it from Gus.

 

you have left me hungry for more. 

 

Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: October 23, 2020 02:15 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Gus will take care of Pen.  Shelby is awesome that she is welcoming him into their home.  Cliff hanger-  who is the mysterious man?



Author's Response:

The next chapter is up so you can find out who he is now.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2020 07:19 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

That was so emotional, I have a major lump in my throat reading this. Poor Pen that was so sad and I could feel the fear in Gus's voice and his shaking in his body. I hope he can recover well. 

Omg who was that who actually walked in and made Brian pass out. 

 

Wow wow wow 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 18, 2020 08:43 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

That was brilliant, my heart shattered for Jed. How on earth could his mother do that to him no matter what you never leave a child behind. I'm so glad Bren and the others were there for him. Bren and Jed I think are made for each other and their growing love is beautiful to see. Marcus I think will shine taking him in and looking after him it's definitely just what he needs. I have to give Jed a high five to have gotten Brian to go to Justin and how he surprised him was perfect and may have helped Kevin get his dream career. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2020 03:05 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Oh Justin I don't think you should have went that far with Marcus. I understand the emotions going around but it was a mistake. Brian loves you and is hurting just as much. Getting together and healing together Would be the best thing to do. Bren and Jed are so sweet , I really hope it goes somewhere. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2020 03:40 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Wow poor Brian and Justin and Marcus all grieving and trying to keep breathing. Brian’s deep seated pain management ways of dealing when he cannot deal is front and centre again.
Let’s hope Justin enjoys his work and regains his strength. Plus let’s hope Brian gets his arse in gear and goes to his sunshine

Author's Response:

I like the way you think.  If you have read this whole series, by now you know how I think. LOL

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2020 07:29 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

My heart is breaking Brian is taking this so hard and trying to push everyone away. Marcus is hurting Brian just can't see it properly over his own grief. I feel for Justin as he is doing all he can snd I can see how much it's hurting him to see his husband in so much pain. Gosh I hope things get better for them. As for Gus he is so lucky to have such a wonderful wife who can see the love between him and Pen and know it's not threatening her relationship with him. There is a lot of love in the whole family.

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 06, 2020 08:30 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Omg I'm broken after this chapter. Crying here first thing in the morning. I could feel the pain leap off the page and seep right into me. The love they had for Dan and for each other came across so well. My heart goes out to Marcus, he will need the support from all and with it they will see him through it.

 Powerful work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2020 06:30 PM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

Oh wow so emotional, my heart was in a clench reading this. I love how the boys look after their friends. It's so cute how jealous Brian still gets over Justin it shows how much he loves him. I hope Marcus gets back in time. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2020 09:35 AM · On: CDLWY 15 The Final Chapter

I have been reading these first four chapters for the last 2 hours. I was crying 2 minutes into chapter one. I have loved each and every word written of this entire series. I am sad this is the last installment; but what a wonderful journey you have taken me on. Thank-you for causing all the emotions to bubble over and for allowing me to entire your magical world. 



Author's Response:

I am so glad.  When I started this series I had never really written anything.  I think knowing I have tugged on heart strings makes me the most happy because it means I have touched something in someone.  I try to make them human and yet keep the personalities of the characters we love so much. Thank you for the compliment.   I am not nearly done writing.



Author's Response:

I am so glad.  When I started this series I had never really written anything.  I think knowing I have tugged on heart strings makes me the most happy because it means I have touched something in someone.  I try to make them human and yet keep the personalities of the characters we love so much. Thank you for the compliment.   I am not nearly done writing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2020 01:52 AM · On: CDLWY 4.1 Sick

Being involved with women is turning out detrimental to John and Tony.  Brian will fill Gus in on what he should know and everything will be alright.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2020 01:41 AM · On: CDLWY 4.1 Sick

It's good that Tony and John are going away.  Their episode with women isn't really working.

Reviewer: qafqueenbee (Signed) · Date: July 28, 2020 07:18 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Still enjoying the journey.

 

 

lah

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 23, 2020 01:51 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Omg what a wonderful chapter

Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed the ending.  There will be one final story to this series.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 22, 2020 01:25 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

What a fantastic chapter. My heart sour for Danny and El their baby so cute and Emma adorable beyond adorable. Sam and George and their news made me so happy. Gage with his dad and Trent was fantastic a real bonding moment that I'm sure he will treasure forever. This was an incredible story x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2020 12:50 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

The people on the lane love each other in ways outside of the societal norms but omg it works

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 12, 2020 11:00 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Danny and El are doing such an amazing thing for that little girl and they will be incredible dads. All the family will rally around them as a village help raise the kids. I'm so happy I could burst for George, Sam is incredible and with a heart of gold I think everyone can see. I have a feeling her secret is growing and will show itself soon. Everything about this chapter touched my heart and the old house the boys are looking at as their further home for their new family will be incredible with Gus's touch to help make it possible for Danny and El. 

 Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2020 07:18 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

You made me cry girl 😢. Talk about full of emotions. Danny and El sure went all out for poor Connie and her daughter. They have such huge hearts don't they. Emma will be so great with them and be never not know about her mum.

 

I'm so happy Gage spoke with his dad and made up, he really needed to do that. 

 

I love Sam and George together she needs a good man in her life just as he needs a good woman in his.

 

sexy times for our boys phew wee those boys all naked is always a very good thing. 

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2020 12:21 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

What a huge mix of emotions I was crying and some laughter with smiles. I gasped when George referred to himself as dad to Juss, thank goodness she didn't hear him.

 

poor Gage is so confused and hurt still which I can understand. I think Trent handles him so well. I had to laugh at the stuff Guss suggested he do to scare him lol

 

oh my that little girl in the hospital will she end up with El and Danny 😱

 

fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: July 02, 2020 02:18 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Wow that is some news that Brinn and Zack got. I'm so over the moon for them. They got two blessings as did the rest of the family. Poor Gage that's a lot for a little kid to take in so I understand his reaction. I'm so happy he was drawn to Trents as he will be safe there and he will be able to work through it all. Amazing work as always x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2020 06:03 PM · On: CDLWY 4.1 Sick

Depending on which type of reading style you use sometimes the Review option doesn't show.  I've read this story before, but it has been awhile and I'm enjoying rereading and wish to leave reviews.  Yes I just finished reading chapter two and do know that Tina and Grace will cause problems.  It makes for an interesting story.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2020 02:26 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Another incredible chapter of this amazing story. I loved Gage sad about Trenton leaving it shows his love for him and how much he means to him. The new house for our boys sounds so incredible I want to visit it for a few days. I like Sam already her interview make me laugh her confidence is through the roof. Her meeting with George I could see sparks magically fly between them. Brinn did so well pushing out two babies then boom the bombshell news 😱😱 wow what a cliffhanger girl. 

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2020 03:38 PM · On: CDLWY 4.1 Sick

I fear that two women are going to come between Brian and Justin and Tony and John.



Author's Response:

I hope you were able to read Chapter 2.



Author's Response:

I hope you were able to read Chapter 2.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 27, 2020 09:52 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

I seriously love how they all love Trenton he deserves love so much. I can picture Justin's paintings so well and they would be perfect hanging where everyone can enjoy them and learn the beauty of them. I teared up when Shelby showed Gus her surprise that was so incredibly moving. Everyone is having such a great day and I was wrapped up in each and every one of them. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 23, 2020 08:08 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Wow that left me breathless. First bye bitch bye Vicky I hate her so much. I hope George Will be ok and find someone that will truly love him and treat him well. As for Gus my heart crumbled for him thank goodness for Trent, I hope the person blackmailing him goes away for good now. 

 

Girl you took my heart on a ride during this chapter. I need a lie down now. Incredible work x

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2020 09:16 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

So many good things about this chapter.  Shelby coming home, Trent helping the family, Danny and El etc.  Things are moving forward, but I know there will be some bumps in the road.  Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

I would never put bumps..... OK, not sure about bumps but there will definitely be a few things for you to enjoy, I hope.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 19, 2020 02:03 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Loved this, it was so really wonderful to see Trent looking after Shelby. He really cared for her and the kids so well, the boys are coming along well as well as it was such a scary time for all. Plus wow wee for Brinn and Zack and then Danny end El yeppie 💕💕💕💕. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2020 10:47 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Way to get right deep into my heart first thing in the morning. El and Danny are seriously getting to my soul. I hope they will be okay. Poor El what what happened to him tore  me  up. I wanted to hold him tight. I hope Danny will stick with him and they sort things out. I feel for Shelby she is facing such a hard road ahead. And Hannah omg my heart d84;a039;. Then what a surprise to end with girl.

 

fantastic work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2020 10:21 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Woohoo twins but omg Brinn is going to have to learn to take things easy. Yay Hannah is home and Danny and Elliott are finally talking

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2020 08:31 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Wow that was brilliant. Gage was so brave going into help his grandpa and thankfully Trent showed up. I love everyone rallied together to help each other. I can't even begin to imagine how frightening it was. The kids amazed me with their strength. I would be grabbing a hold of the one I love and afraid to let go. They would be lucky if I let go long enough for them to pee. My heart sank for El when he said those words, that word were, tore my heart out. I wonder what happened. Incredible work as always x

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2020 01:54 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

I'm worried about an earthquake-  hope everyis okay

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 31, 2020 07:24 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Holy shit 😱 my heart just about jumped out of my chest. That was one hell of a ride and a cliffhanger girl. Plus I hope Danny and Elliott sort it out, I want them happy. Oh boy I can't wait for more my heart is literally pounding in my chest. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2020 12:15 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Zach is so awesome his acceptance of his illness and that he cannot physically father a child is amazing. He is a real father in the truest sense of the word.
Oh dear Justin I thought you could only paint when you with Brian it seems now you have him you don’t need him anymore

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2020 06:50 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

I wish Justin could stay at home now, Brian needs him more than he knows. My heart was racing when she went missing the worry Molly went through then dealing with that husband of hers. She deserves better. And Brinn yuppie so happy for her. Gus and Pen were sweet. I think he is falling in love with Gus. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 26, 2020 06:50 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

I wish Justin could stay at home now, Brian needs him more than he knows. My heart was racing when she went missing the worry Molly went through then dealing with that husband of hers. She deserves better. And Brinn yuppie so happy for her. Gus and Pen were sweet. I think he is falling in love with Gus. Brilliant work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2020 10:12 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Oh dear Justin and Brian heading for trouble

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2020 02:24 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Poor Molly she is really goin lg through it with her daughter isn't she. I hope she gets it worked out with her. I feel for Brian just retiring and Justin decides to that. I hope it doesn't affect their relationship. I hope looking after the child Elliott will see JR is a good person to be a dad. Ooooh I hope the treatment worked on Brinn, excited to see. 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2020 09:40 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Poor Jenna she is struggling let’s hope Molly and Tyler can help her. Meanwhile Brian needs to remember we do not always have tomorrow as he well knows. Go to Justin Peter can do the business

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 19, 2020 01:51 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Fantastic work. I could feel the longing between Justin and Brian to be together when they were both doing things apart. Their bond is so strong and you write it so beautifully. I love how you are writing Gus and Treanton and I love the nickname Pen. He is so great with Tally I think he would make such a wonderful dad. I felt for Taylor she didn't know and she is making the right choice not to want to be around Jenna if she continued acting like that. I'm dying to find out what will happen with the baby will it be Zack or Gus. As for Danny and Elliot I pray they figure it out because I love them so much. Amazing work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: May 14, 2020 12:00 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Oh dear I think you have just ramped up the angst I feel a lonely sad time is on the horizon

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 13, 2020 03:14 PM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

Man oh man talk about full of emotions. It's so horrible about the guys trip and the hurt the situation caused. I could feel that pain jump off the page at me. What Brinn asked Gus to do if needed is huge that was a shock and a half for sure. As for Danny and EL I wish they could sort it out. They are so in love, I truly want them happy. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2020 08:43 AM · On: CDLWY 14 Upheaval

So happy to see more of this amazing story. Boy our boys get hotter with age don't they. I hope that trip they are taking is drama free not like the last one. Gage is so cute I swear I think he will be like his grandpa. My heart is breaking for Danny and Elliott I hope they talk and work things out. I hope Nora and Matty are ok and things go smoothly. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2020 10:16 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Wonderful.

Hope you continues this story. Ow jeeh I want more ... Please.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I plan to continue although I am starting a new story as well.  Keep an eye out for it.  It is going to be Brian and Justin meeting for the first time.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2020 02:18 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

There is so much more I want you tease. I hope Danny and Elliott come to an agreement of some sorts I'm worried about them. So many other beautiful moments in here with Juss and Tally growing up and Nora blooming. I want more, more, more.

Fantastic work as always x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2020 01:40 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Perfect absolutely fantastic. Jonnas reaction was understandable after all she went through but I'm glad she came around to Nora. I think they will end up really good friends. I loved Noras sister name Vicky is always good lol. Everyone is happy and that makes the heart sing. It's what we all need right so I thank you for that. 

 

I've loved this story from beginning to end. I wish them all the luck and happiness for the future xox

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2020 07:29 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

That has left me breathless, wow seriously wow. 

 

Justin's pain made me tear up as that kind of pain is horrible and learning to walk again is really hard I've been there a few times. I really like Nora, she is kind and can take the guys and care about them. What happened with Mattaeo shocked me that was a surprise and half. I did not see that coming.

 Seriously amazing work x

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2020 12:28 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Oh wow so hard for Trenton and Gus. However this situation is restoring Gus’s strength as he helps Trenton

Author's Response:

Gus really is such a good guy.  He messed up and now he is going to do his best to be there for his family and friends.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2020 07:12 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

That was brilliant, it was so great to see Brinn with her daughter, it's a pity Alice couldn't stay with them. I'm worried for Justin and his operation I hope he gets through it ok. Gus was so good with Trenton, that was so hard for him to deal with. All that emotion and inner guilt will be so difficult to get rid of. Man you put me through the ringer. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 10:34 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Thanks for writing this story. Love it fery much.

 

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I am so glad you enjoy it.  I love my 'family'.  I sometimes worry about my own imagination but I enjoy coming up with all their adventures.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 20, 2020 02:12 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Poor Justin he is in so much pain and Brian truly is doing his best to help him. I'm glad he decided to have the surgery so he can get the help he needs. I hope Elliott talks to Danny about why kids scare him that much because I think those guys would be wonderful parents. Such a fantastic chapter. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2020 09:05 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Brian is definitely doing the right thing. Scar tissue can cause a hell of a lot of pain. I'm glad Tally is warming up to her dad, it is going to take time but it's great to see a start. I think the way to get Brinn close to her daughter is to let her there on her own with her so she has to look after her. This story is getting better and better. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2020 01:19 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

I seriously loved the way the kids reacted to their dad they got out what they wanted to say and how they felt. It really did move me because I could feel it roll off them. I hope Brinn relaxes with her little girl, I'm sure she will be an amazing mum to her. I have a feeling with Trenton that more will happen with Gus. 

 

Fabulous work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2020 08:40 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Man oh man that was powerful. My gut was knotted reading this. I felt so bad for Brian, all he wants is help his son and to have him treat him like that even though it's not truly how he feels, hurts. I hope Gus pulls himself out of it and get back to being himself. I'm so glad that Brinn and Zack have their baby home that was the light of this this chapter xx



Author's Response:

Kids always lash out at the people they love the most because they know deep down they'll always be there.  Glad you liked it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 07, 2020 01:45 PM · On: CDLWY 4.1 Sick

For some reason I was unable to review on Chapter two.  Tony and John look like they are headed for trouble.  Good thing I know they stay together.  Now Tina is in Labor?  Hope Justin doesn't miss it, he'd never forgive himself.  Brian needs to not be such a work-a-holic.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 06, 2020 03:14 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Wow this had so much depth and feeling in it. Peter and Becca need a lot of chats and Peter maybe needs to tell her about Shelby. I am glad she is home and I hope being home with all the family heals her further. This really moved me. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2020 11:03 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

What a perfect ending.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked it.  I make the boys fight for happines but make it worth it in the end.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2020 08:54 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

My heart is going out to Brian, I could feel the physical punch to his heart with the way Gus was talking to him. Gus needs so much help so I hope and pray that Brad can and get him back to being Gus. Shelby and Peter shouldn't have done what they did I but they did need each other to get through what they did. So many emotions. I send everyone hugs 🤗.

Brilliant work

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2020 04:59 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

They are finally wed.  That was some honeymoon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2020 04:54 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

First they almost lose the baby and then they lose their tuxes.  But then they have the rehearsal dinner making things alright.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 01, 2020 03:19 AM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

Oh my.  Tina is horny.  Somehow I don't see anything good coming out of that.  Brian and Justin are supposed to get married and Justin gets sick?  

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2020 12:24 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

Things are working out.  Ten days!  That's amazing.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2020 10:04 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Omg Gus is fall down mess and I suspect he has a ways to go still

Author's Response:

Yes, Gus needs to fight it now.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2020 07:13 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

I would have acted the very same way as Brian did when he got his hands on Gus. Gus needs a big reality check. If he doesn't pull himself together he will lose everything. I hope he can do it. 

 

Brilliant work x

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2020 12:11 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Some people hit rock bottom and still keep digging. Hope Gus ain’t one of them!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2020 04:01 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

To think that Brian thought he was doing good when he sent Tina with Justin.   In a way it is Brian's fault that Justin is going to be a father.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2020 01:44 PM · On: CDLWY 5 - Love Conquers All

I'm glad with the happy ending. Wonderful story again!!



Author's Response:

Hope you continue to enjoy them.

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 29, 2020 08:27 AM · On: CDLWY 5 - Love Conquers All

This chapter makes me sad. I can feel their pain.



Author's Response:

So glad you could feel the love Justin has and the pain.  That lets me know I got the story across the way I wanted to.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2020 11:28 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Wow this family is so complicated but they lose fiercely

Author's Response:

They love fiercely, too.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2020 09:27 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

It's so good to see the boys back and safe. I'm sure seeing Gus like that was scary and confusing for them. Gus needs a good kick in the ass I'm willing to help do it. This new guy that bought the property will he fall for any of the gang I'm wondering. I hope the baby will be ok and get to go home. She is going to be so spoilt by her granddads. 

I think Peter is going to have major guilt and I fear as to what it might do to him. 

Loved this chapter. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2020 02:18 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

Thank goodness I know that the split doesn't last.  That Tina is pregnant is only the beginning of problems she causes and she seemed so nice in the beginning.



Author's Response:

Tina definitely causes trouble throughout.

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2020 04:45 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

I pray for both mother and daughter that they continue to get better and better. Gus I so wanna smack him so bad or shake him until his senses actually click in. He will lose everything if he doesn't stop. As for Peter and Shelby, tut tut guys that is so not on. 

 

Fantastic work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2020 01:15 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Can I have permission to do a Debbie style smack to the back of Gus's head. He is being so immature he has a wonderful family at home and permission to have his other needs met once in a while but he is taking the piss as we say over here lol. 

 

Oh Becca I want to hug her, I hope she gets the help she needs to heal and with the love of Peter behind her she will.

 

Wonderful work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2020 07:52 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

I want to hug them so bad, poor Brian 😢



Author's Response:

I love how their love has developed but Justin from Day 1 has been there for Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2020 06:19 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

I wonder if Brian and Justin had talked if things would have been different.  Which arm did Justin break.  I'm assuming it was his right arm.  I remember that Tina is going to be a problem in the future.  

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2020 12:21 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Poor Brian, he is sure in for a long road isn't he. Thank goodness he has his Sunshine and Tammy there. I think when Brinn finds out she will blow a gasket at not being told. It might even start her labour prematurely.

 

Fantastic work. Yup you have me on edge x

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2020 11:48 AM · On: CDLWY 5 - Love Conquers All

Why Brian?? I love who Justin takes care of Gus.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2020 08:17 AM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

Omg can't this poor family get a break from heartache. I'm so worried for Brian 😭



Author's Response:

Am I stressing you out?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 26, 2020 03:09 AM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

Wow, so much happening.  Brian getting ruffied.  John and Brian getting sued by his mom.  Thanksgiving and Christmas.  Brian's gift for Justin topped everything.



Author's Response:

Love you're enjoying it.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2020 02:27 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

Wow another amazing chapter, I held my breath right through the court scenes and listening to the judge. Thank god for a good judge and for Brinn. She did an incredible job I was so proud of her. Matty he can do anything in life he wishes so I hope he succeeds. 

 

I'm on edge now about the results what's gonna happen. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2020 12:36 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

Wow that was some rollercoaster of a ride through this chapter. Brian being Brian he could have gotten into serious trouble doing what he did. Thank goodness for Brinn. I'm so sad the friend died that broke my heart. I hope Matty gets stronger he needs so much love and care. I'm on tender hooks now. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 24, 2020 03:24 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

The party was wonderful.  I could wish for a little less pain.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2020 08:16 AM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

I'm so worried about Brian and Matty 😢. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2020 12:52 AM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

Tony's joined the family.  There's a lot of sex.



Author's Response:

Must be his latin blood...or the fact they are 20 something boys that are both gorgeous.

 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2020 04:28 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

My heart is hurting for Jonna that poor young girl needs help and I'm so happy she has a loving family around her to do just that. I hope Danny gets to the reason why Elliott doesn't want kids and maybe that can heal them so they can have kids. I think they would make amazing dads. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2020 09:47 AM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

I really hope that the trip to Ibiza does wonders for them, they have been through so much and need a bit of light now. I'm still so worried for Matty and Brian 😢. Fantastic work x

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2020 07:55 AM · On: CDLWY 5 - Love Conquers All

Wonderful chapter. Locve to read how Brian takes care of other people. How he is helping Jim and Mary. Who will Tony deals with te pregnancy of Tina. Will Brinn been jealous of annem brother/sister? Can't wait to read more.



Author's Response:

I love hearing from readers.  It helps me remember my stories.  I have to admit there are times I don't remember it at all. LOL

Reviewer: Raemani (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2020 06:07 PM · On: CDLWY 13 Struggles

I guess I thought Shelby was still in LA. so I was confused as to how apter was on their couch or how She and the kids got home to the vineyard. 

Last we saw Peter Zach was there telling him about Becca. 

Did I miss something?



Author's Response:

Chapter 4 talks about John flying Shelby and the kids home and the first paragraph of Chapter 5 says they arrived home.  I know sometimes I have more going on then I probably should.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2020 01:33 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

Michael is so responsible for what happened.  Justin could have been allergic to all those flowers and ended up in the hospital.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2020 09:49 AM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

Oh no, Matty what have you done 😱. I pray that the man isn't actually dead. I'm so happy that Hannah is back with her dads and unaware so far as to what was actually happening to her. My heart was going ninty reading this . You sure know how to keep me on edge lol 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 11:40 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

John and Tony will make a good match.  Brian is evil.



Author's Response:

Brian evil?

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 04:29 PM · On: CDLWY 4.2 The Good Life

Loved it!!



Author's Response:

So glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 02:54 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

It's nice that John is disgruntled for Justin's sake.  Too bad he has it all wrong.  What's going to happen when he finds out they do it rough?

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 01:46 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

Poor Jonna I can't even imagine what she is going through, with the power of love and support from the family she will pull through this. Oh Matty sweetheart let it to the police, you don't want to end up in jail. 



Author's Response:

I do like to stress stuff out, don't I?

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 12:48 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

My heart is hurting so bad for them all. I can feel the fear and panic in them. God I hope and pray they find Hannah. I'm so glad that Jane found Jonna. I also hope Dan and Marcus will be ok. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 12:17 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

That was a beautiful wedding and Brinn snd Zach were so happy and in love. That bounced off the page 💕. Omg the kids are gone 😱. Will they be oh please let them be. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 11:28 AM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

Awe so many beautiful emotions here. Their baby girl is growing up and getting married 💕. It's so wonderful to see Brian and others show how it's affecting them and to see the pure joy on Brinns face. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 03:39 AM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

It's nice to see that John is beginning to change.  



Author's Response:

John is one of my favorite characters in my series.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2020 03:39 AM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

It's nice to see that John is beginning to change.  

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 09:06 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

i hope gets better soon, it's horrible to feel that bad poor guy. I can't wait to see how Brinns and Zacks big day goes. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 07:46 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

Shame Joan managed to come back from the grave to haunt Brian.  If I remember correctly John gets better later on.  But I don't remember if Claire turns around.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 02:47 PM · On: CDLWY 3: The Wedding

The gang is something else.  Planning a wedding and having Gus over!  Brian is happy.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 02:45 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

Awe no poor Gus it's so horrible to see someone that unwell. He is lucky to have doctors as friends that can come and help him like that. As for Brinn, oh Lordy I wanted to smack her silly. Her poor brother very sick and all she thought about was her wedding. I loved that Hannah became the guys official daughter that really cheered me up . 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 02:15 PM · On: CDLWY 4.2 The Good Life

Great idea from Jennifer and Alice. They needed all the help they got.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 11:54 AM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

Poor Gus I can feel his heart break a little at Seth going away for Good. Their last meeting you wrote was beautiful and so perfect. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 19, 2020 12:44 AM · On: CDLWY 2 Ibiza at Last!

Buying a new vacation home is a good investment.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2020 05:04 PM · On: CDLWY 2 Ibiza at Last!

Joan is in the past and marriage is in the future.  Nicely done.



Author's Response:

Yes, Brian doesn't bring up his family often until Claire and her boys show up.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2020 03:18 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

I'm so happy that Zach was happy with the baby news. They will be amazing parents. Oh Gus, what on earth have you done. Brinn is going to kick your ass. So I'd run if I were you. 



Author's Response:

Gus is having a midlife crisis, I think......and since I'm writing it I guess he is. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2020 03:13 PM · On: CDLWY 2 Ibiza at Last!

Sadly some mom's are like Joan.  At least the cook is all right.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2020 02:07 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

I hope she keeps the baby, it's not the baby's fault it was conceived. I'm keeping my fingers crossed 🤞 x



Author's Response:

It will depend on Zach mostly.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2020 01:14 PM · On: CDLWY 2 Ibiza at Last!

Tut tut.  Brian shouldn't be so possessive, thought one day Justin might be glad he is.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 18, 2020 09:20 AM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

I was super happy to see Emmet he is one of my favourite people and he will give Brinn and Zach the best wedding ever. Gus did a great job with his baby whether he thinks so or not. It's not easy I'm sure to see your kids sick like that. I hope Seth finds a nice guy that can be all his abs Tammy of course find a lovely lady to call her own. Fantastic work as always x



Author's Response:

I love Emmett, too.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2020 08:51 PM · On: CDLWY 12 It's All About the Girls

That Mel ticks me off something rotten I swear. I may hate Lindsey as well but she deserves better. It certainly was a very different Thanksgiving for them all. 



Author's Response:

Life is always interesting with this family

 

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