Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2022 08:17 PM · On: Family Matters

Great ending to a great story.  Glad Jenny now has an extended family.



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :) Jenny deserved her happy ending as well!

Thanks for all your comments and support - much appreciated :) 

Reviewer: Blacky (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2022 04:21 PM · On: Family Matters

Gracais por esta historia. Se que no hablas español, soy de Argentina y los traductores de google me ayudan para poder leer esta historia maravillosa y para agrecerte por ello.

Escribis de una forma fantastica, gracias nuevamente



Author's Response:

You are welcome :) I am glad that you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2022 10:48 AM · On: Family Matters

wonderful. feel good chapter!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

I like to finish my stories on a happy note!

Thanks for all your comments and support - it was much appreciated :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2022 08:42 AM · On: Family Matters

Thank you for the story ! See you later.

Author's Response:

You are welcome! :)

Thanks for all your comments and your support - it's really appreciated :) 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 28, 2022 05:17 AM · On: Family Matters

Sad to see the title epilogue and 6 1/2 months later. Don't want this to end.

Thanks for this wonderful story and hope to see another really soon.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

All good things must come to an end :( 

I am glad that you liked the story, thanks for commenting :)

I still have one story in my files that hasn't been posted yet, but I have to admit that my focus has recently shifted to another fandom and my muse has been quite busy there recently. I will however post that story once it's fully edited, which might take a couple of weeks.

So, I will be back ;)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2022 08:29 AM · On: Family Matters

It's really a nice surprise to see Ben and Hunter. Jenny will have two more people on her side

Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

More will be up later tonight!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2022 06:24 AM · On: Family Matters

Wonderful chapter.



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

More will be up later tonight!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: June 20, 2022 02:05 AM · On: Family Matters

Ben and Hunter were a nice surprise.  Always happy to see an update for your story.  Keep up the good work.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am glad you liked it :)

More will be up later tonight! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 15, 2022 10:04 AM · On: Family Matters

Once her disillusion passed Jenny will have a real loving family.

Author's Response:

Yeah, with time she will come to realise how lucky she is to have the family that she has :)

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2022 03:15 PM · On: Family Matters

Poor Jenny but she realizes she is lucky to be surrounded by people who love her and want to protect.  Imagine if she was stuck Mel & Mikey as her only family.



Author's Response:

God, what a horrible thought. No one deserves to be punished like that :(

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2022 01:36 AM · On: Family Matters

Told you. Just won $20 bucks from my sister cause I knew this was gonna go batshit crazy!

Author's Response:

Haha, congrats! I hope you put the 20 bucks to good use lol 

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2022 08:59 AM · On: Family Matters

Michael did not disappoint me, always in his imaginary world. I'm sad for Jenny with her shitty parents, luckily she has the whole family with her.

Author's Response:

Yeah, poor Jenny. Thankfully, she has a loving family around her now that will take good care of her :)

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2022 08:31 PM · On: Family Matters

Poor Jenny but not really a surprise.  It's grat that she has a family that loves and supports her.  Her birth parents are a mess! 



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, this outcome was to be expected :( I am sure the family will take good care of Jenny!

Thanks for your comment - much appreciated as always! More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2022 07:45 AM · On: Family Matters

We just have to wait for Michael's reaction

Author's Response:

We'll see it in the next chapter which will be up tomorrow :)

Thanks for your comment! It's much appreciated :) 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 30, 2022 12:31 PM · On: Family Matters

Can't wait for the meeting! What a supportive family!



Author's Response:

We'll see the meeting in the next chapter which will be up tomorrow :)

Thanks for your comment - it's much appreciated :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2022 10:53 PM · On: Family Matters

what a place to leave us....  can't wait to see how the visit goes.  Bill



Author's Response:

I will only be able to post the next chapter tomorrow :( I am travelling this weekend and forgot to bring the file with the story...

Thanks for your comment though - it's much appreciated :) 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2022 09:48 PM · On: Family Matters

Agrrr I need an update now!!! Love this family so protective for each other.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Sorry, the next update will only come tomorrow :( I am travelling this weekend and forgot to bring the story file...

Thanks for your comment! It's much appreciated :) 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: May 29, 2022 06:11 AM · On: Family Matters

Still reading, still loving this very much. Thanks.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know :)

More will be up later today!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 25, 2022 09:41 AM · On: Family Matters

Justin's reaction is so justified! Now let's see what will happen if they find Michael.

Author's Response:

I totally agree!

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2022 11:54 AM · On: Family Matters

Can't really blame Justin for his reaction.  I agree with the plan of Carl going with Jenny but somehow suspect it will end up being Brian.



Author's Response:

I don't blame him either...

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: May 23, 2022 01:13 AM · On: Family Matters

OOH-WEE! Got my 🍿 Ready for When this goes Down!!!! ITS Gonna Be Good!!!Yaw!!! CANT WAIT!!!! Are we Taking BETS?????? 😁 Cause I got 5 on it!!!!

Author's Response:

Sure, I am open for bets :P 

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2022 11:11 PM · On: Family Matters

A meeting with Michael should be interesting.  



Author's Response:

We might find out how interesting pretty soon ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 16, 2022 09:04 AM · On: Family Matters

I think Jenny will be disappointed and will alienate the family. I hope Michael rejects her and doesn't use her to get to the family, or better yet we find out he died in a rat hole. He deserves no sympathy. Whatever happens I'm disappointed with Jenny. She will hurt those who welcomed her so well.

Author's Response:

Disappointed with Jenny? For wanting to find out more about her parents? I don't know, I think it's a natural instinct that she's following...

We'll see how it will all end and can only hope for the best!

Thanks for your comment :) More will be up tomorrow as usual! 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 15, 2022 11:44 PM · On: Family Matters

Not suprised that Jenny wants to meet her father.  It will not end well! Bill



Author's Response:

It probably won't :( 

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow as usual :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2022 08:10 AM · On: Family Matters

Everything seems to be back on its axis and Luke realizes how lucky he is.

Author's Response:

And wasn't it about time? ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 09, 2022 02:13 AM · On: Family Matters

Great chapter.  Luke realizes how lucky he has been.  Bill



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked it :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: May 02, 2022 08:15 AM · On: Family Matters

Luke has a lot to think about. He encountered a real and hard homophobia from Craig and Joan.

Author's Response:

I am sure in the end he will grow from these challenges.

Thanks for your comment :) More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: May 01, 2022 10:27 PM · On: Family Matters

Luke is finding out a lot about life.  He has been pretty sheltered.  Hope he is ok once he processes his encounters with Craig & Joan.  Still enjoying your story.  Bill



Author's Response:

The fun of going through puberty ;) 

Thanks for letting me know that you still enjoy the story! 

More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 26, 2022 12:46 PM · On: Family Matters

What a dumb move the visit to Craig was.  Luke should realize how this will affect Justin.  



Author's Response:

He's a teenager - thinking about consequences is not something high on his list ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 25, 2022 09:22 AM · On: Family Matters

Will Luke question everything his fathers said or did? It's a little annoying to see him like that, he's just going to piss everyone off. I'm glad he took a slap with Craig. I hope Joan is even worse! He will finally come to terms with what a happy and loving family he has.

Author's Response:

He is a teenager. I think as long as we try to look at his actions from an adult viewpoint, we will never understand them ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 24, 2022 11:48 PM · On: Family Matters

Wow!  Luke is stubborn guy.  Well I guess it is in his DNA.  Can't wait to see how the Joan meeting goes.  It can't be good!  Bill



Author's Response:

With Brian and Justin as his fathers, I think being stubborn is a given ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2022 10:14 AM · On: Family Matters

I think you had a great Easter, much like the Taylor-Kinney family had a lovely Christmas. Luke looks like he wants to stay home.Maybe it will be his New Year's gift! And him too find his life with his family and friends.

Author's Response:

I did indeed, hope you had a lovely Easter weekend as well :) 

Thanks for your comment - more will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2022 08:13 PM · On: Family Matters

Gus talked to Luke like a big brother.  Loved their conversation.  Glad Luke is feeling better about his family situation.  Hope that continues.  I would find Jennifer the hardest to forgive.  She should have been lloking out for her son and known he would be happy to have a child.  All water under the birdge now!  Love this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

I am glad you're still enjoying the story. Thanks for letting me know :) 

More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2022 11:10 AM · On: Family Matters

What a wonderful Christmas present for Brian and Justin!



Author's Response:

After everything I have put them through, they deserve a bit of a break ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up later today! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 11, 2022 07:30 AM · On: Family Matters

I think the family is going to have a good Christmas

Author's Response:

They will :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up later today!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 10, 2022 08:59 PM · On: Family Matters

Glad that everyone is talking and getting along.  Vicky will be happy to have both her brothers home for Christmas.



Author's Response:

It's time for the Kinney-Taylor family to move on :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up later today! 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2022 11:06 PM · On: Family Matters

Sweet ending to this chapter.  Luke is slowly coming around.



Author's Response:

Yes, he is. Things are finally falling into place again :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: Blacky (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2022 04:41 PM · On: Family Matters

Amo esta serie, como sus personajes se mantienen fieles desde el principio. Creo que es la primera vez que escibo pero he leido todo. Me gusta mucho como escribes. Espero cada semana la actualización y nunca me siento decepcionada.

Me gustó mucho este capitulo. Me da mucha ternura Luke y como va tratando de resolver este conflicto.

 



Author's Response:

I am sorry, I am not Spanish and don't speak Spanish, so I'll reply in English.

Thanks for your comment :) I am glad that you enjoy the story and thanks for letting me know!

More will be up tomorrow :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2022 08:00 AM · On: Family Matters

It was a pleasant evening for everyone. Things are moving in the right direction.

Author's Response:

And isn't it about time? ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: April 04, 2022 12:42 AM · On: Family Matters

Poor Luke.  Growing up is confusing enough without additional drama.  Love this story, always happy to see an update.  Bill



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks! I am glad you enjoy it :)

More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 31, 2022 09:11 PM · On: Through Sickness and Health

Loved the 2nd part to the story!!   This was definitely angsty with Brian having lung cancer at the same time as being pregnant with Vicky, but I loved how he and Justin got though it.   Sure Justin went way overboard and took on way too much, but I don't think there was any other way.   He did what he needed to do for his famlily.   I'm just glad that everything turned out well for Brian and Vicky and their little family ended up closer than ever!!



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading this story and for letting me know that you enjoyed it :) That means the world! 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2022 11:40 AM · On: Family Matters

Nice that Jenny and Luke have mended fences.  Still enjoying your story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know :) Things are finally moving in the right direction for Luke on all fronts!

More will be up tomorrow - still quite a bit and some twists to come ;) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 28, 2022 09:48 AM · On: Family Matters

Luke finally seems to understand how much his fathers and family love him so he can forgive.

Author's Response:

He's definitely moving into the right direction and a better place now :)

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2022 05:29 PM · On: Back for Good

This was a great story from start to finish!!  I'm glad that Justin forgave Brian and that Brian learned to forgive himself over what he had done.   



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked the story :)

Thanks for giving it a chance and for letting me know that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 22, 2022 08:40 AM · On: Family Matters

Luke is really slowing down. He needs to hear all versions of the family..

Author's Response:

Hopefully, he's ready to listen now.

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: auggie (Signed) · Date: March 21, 2022 09:09 PM · On: Family Matters

I am also having a hard time understanding Luke's anger.  It really had nothing to do with him.  He did not lack any love.  I could see if he felt bad for Justin, but that is all.  Love this.  Thank you for sharing your talent with us.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment, but I have to disagree with you. It had everything to do with Luke. He missed out on five years with his father because of Brian's lie and that's not nothing. Yes, he was loved by Brian, yes he was a small child at the time and hardly has any memories from back then, but to say it had nothing to do with him? That's a big stretch. 

Then there's also the issue of trust, his father not being the man he thought he was...a lot of things that just rained down on a 15 year old and that he now has to navigate along with everyone else a teenager in puberty is going through. 

I appreciate you sharing your thoughts :) Much appreciated! More will be up tomorrow! 

 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2022 11:25 PM · On: Family Matters

WOW!!!  Really great chapter.  So much emotion.  So many twists and turns in all the realtionships with everyone thinking they were doing what was right.  To be honest I still have trouble understanding the degree of Luke's anger with his fathers but everyone is entitled to their feelings.



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked the chapter :)

As for Luke's anger - we don't have to understand it to accept that it's there. Everyone is entitled to their own feelings and Luke is feeling angry, as many teenagers are with their parents for way smaller reasons. 

At least we seem to be moving in the right direction now.

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2022 02:59 AM · On: Family Matters

Wow that was Nice writing! Dr. Phil has nothing on you!
ps. can you come over and smooth things out for with my daughter and me? lol I’ll pay you 😁

Author's Response:

Thank you! I can finally convince myself that those four psychology classes that I took at university weren't for nothing :P 

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2022 11:43 AM · On: Family Matters

What a beautiful chapter.  Loved the discussion between Luke and Justin.  Finally, Luke is coming around.  



Author's Response:

Yeah, things are finally moving in the right direction!

Thanks for your comment - more will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2022 09:19 AM · On: Family Matters

Luke seems to relax a little! Talking to Justin made him feel good even though they had this conversation before! He must not have really listened, stuck in his anger.

Author's Response:

To be fair, it wasn't the same conversation before. Luke has gotten a lot of additional information in the meantime ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 14, 2022 12:44 AM · On: Family Matters

Great chapter!!!  Happy Luke talked to Justin.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment. Looks like things are finally moving in the right direction :)

More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 11, 2022 10:17 AM · On: Family Matters

At least Luke is grateful. All is not lost !

Author's Response:

It's definitely a start!

More will be up tomorrow :) Thanks for your comment! 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2022 03:48 AM · On: Family Matters

Oh dear Luke is not giving an inch yet ” but yay Brian and Justin are so good giving him space to process his anger

Author's Response:

At least there was no yelling involved - that's progress, right?

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2022 03:48 AM · On: Family Matters

Oh dear Luke is not giving an inch yet ” but yay Brian and Justin are so good giving him space to process his anger

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2022 01:14 AM · On: Family Matters

Okay Luke was civil, that's a good thing.  Great Story!!  Bill



Author's Response:

It's definitely a start ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2022 11:13 AM · On: Family Matters

Between Jenny and Emmett I hope Luke gets his head straight. He is as stubborn as his fathers!

Author's Response:

Well, he is his fathers' son through and through ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2022 12:04 PM · On: Family Matters

What a great discussion Emmett had with Luke.  It is obvious he was able to get through to him.  I had a feeling it would be him, because he had always been so close to Justin and was so supportive of him when the reality of what Brian had done crashed down on him.  Let's hope after thinking over all that Emmett has told him that he decides to hear Justin out. 

You are doing a great job with this story showing how painful this all is for Luke and how it will take time for him to reconcile with it.



Author's Response:

Emmett is and will always be one of my favourites <3 

I am glad that you like the story :) Thanks for your comment, it's much appreciated! More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2022 11:55 PM · On: Family Matters

Wonderful Emmett. Next chapter ... Will Luke finally go to his dads. Great chapter.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I can promise that there will be some interaction between Luke and one of his dads in the next chapter *teases* It might not be what people are expecting, but it will happen!

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2022 10:52 PM · On: Family Matters

Emmett did a great job.  I think he gave Luke some perspective.  Everyone does have problems and if other people have worse problems it does not make your problems less important or make them any easier to deal with.  I am still really enjoying your story.  Bill



Author's Response:

I am glad you're enjoying the story :) Emmett is and will always be one of my favourites. Hopefully, the talk helped Luke - we'll find out soon!

Thanks for your comment, more will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 27, 2022 10:44 PM · On: Family Matters

Ooh great chapter and that was awesome Emmett. He loves all his boys so much

Author's Response:

Emmett is and will always be one of my favourites <3 

Thanks for your comment - it's much appreciated! More will be up tomorrow :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2022 07:30 PM · On: Family Matters

You are very loyal to Luke, even though many of us seem to have turned against the poor kid.  I applaud your loyalty to your character!!!!!!!!!!!!    (even though I still think he is being  a butthead.)



Author's Response:

Well, who else can defend him, if not me? ;)

Also I have worked with children and teenagers for years and know that their reactions aren't always the most rational but should be respected anyway. Just because we might not be able to understand certain kinds of pain, doesn't mean it's not real to them... I will never condemn anyone for feeling the way they do, just because I think they might not have a right to feel that way or because I think it's not justified. That's not how feelings and emotions work - especially, when you're still growing up and learning :( We will always achieve more with understanding than with lecturing...

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2022 11:57 AM · On: Family Matters

It seems like Jenny may have gotten through to Luke.  I'm hoping anyway.



Author's Response:

We can only hope for the best :)

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2022 04:10 AM · On: Family Matters

Jenny said everything I have been feeling. Luke was a baby, he doesn't remember any of this . It didn't hurt him. This is between Brian and Justin.

Author's Response:

Unfortunately, it's not that easy for Luke :(

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow! :) 

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2022 12:42 AM · On: Family Matters

Jenny's right...Luke needs to get his head out of his ass and be thankful for such loving parents. 



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, it's not that easy or black and white :(

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2022 11:36 PM · On: Family Matters

I LOVE JENNY!!!!  



Author's Response:

Don't we all?

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 07:39 PM · On: Family Matters

Glad the judge could see through Melanie and did what was best for Jenny.  It's hard to believe a mother could be so heartless.



Author's Response:

It is Melanie...what more can I say? 

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 08:58 AM · On: Family Matters

Melanie got what she deserved. What an unworthy mother I hope this will have repercussions on her work at least with her employers even if they are far away. Maybe Luke and Jenny could come over for dessert, that would be good for everyone.

Author's Response:

Yes, she did! Good riddance!

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2022 02:32 AM · On: Family Matters

Love the Melanie smack down and I agree with Bill...Luke is being a butthead. 



Author's Response:

She just got what she deserved ;)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2022 11:34 PM · On: Family Matters

I am hoping Luke amd Jenny show up at dinner and he goes home with his fathers.  I still think he is being a butthead.  Great story!!



Author's Response:

I can promise you that's not going to happen :P

Thanks for your comment :) More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: February 13, 2022 11:08 PM · On: Family Matters

YES

Next chapter I hope Luke will be talking to Brian & Justin.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

Not quite yet ;) But it will happen, I promise!

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2022 10:48 AM · On: Family Matters

Wow!  The Kinney-Taylor's keep taking the hits.



Author's Response:

I promise, it will get better :)

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 02:27 PM · On: Family Matters

Wow!  The Kinney-Taylor's keep taking the hits.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 12:47 PM · On: Family Matters

Wow!  The Kinney-Taylor's keep taking the hits.

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 09:54 AM · On: Family Matters

Mélanie the perfect mother does not know what will fall on her, at least I hope. Because she always dwells on old things and doesn't know where her daughter is. I hope this situation will help Luke forgave his fathers and return to live with his loving and happy family.

Author's Response:

We can only hope for the best *crosses fingers*

Thanks for your comment :) More will be up tomorrow!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 07, 2022 01:00 AM · On: Family Matters

OK now I think Luke is being a butthead. Yes his fathers lied to him but they have been really good parents and he should realize that fact.  His brother has forgiven them and he is hurting his little sister by staying away from home.  Hope Melanie doesn't have any dirty tricks planned.



Author's Response:

I don't think Luke's a butthead. I think he's a disappointed and hurt teenager that is trying to deal with some really shocking news :( 

I feel sorry for him...But it will get better! For everyone involved :)

Thanks for your comment!

 

Reviewer: Ilovelife (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2022 05:47 AM · On: Family Matters

I read this whole story in 3 days...I am hooked....‘🏼‘🏼‘🏼‘🏼‘🏼



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know :) I am glad that you like the story!

More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2022 09:22 AM · On: Family Matters

Gus and Brian had a good chat. He knows they were lucky to be a real family despite what may have happened and he is grateful. I hope he told all this to Luke and it will make him think. Justin and Brian are good together, I like their complicity in these difficult times.

Author's Response:

Luke will get there as well, he just needs a bit more time!

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2022 11:34 PM · On: Family Matters

Now we just need Luke to be a little more reasonable.  Happy that Brian and Justin are still in a good place with each other.



Author's Response:

We'll get there, it will just take a bit more time ;)

Thanks for your comment! More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 27, 2022 01:33 PM · On: Family Matters

Oh dear so much pain

Author's Response:

I promise that it will get better. It won't always be like this.

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2022 12:46 PM · On: Family Matters

It sure makes sense that Luke would have the hardest time accepting this.  That was a sweet scene between Justin and Jennifer.



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I am glad that you liked it. 

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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2022 09:10 AM · On: Family Matters

Luke is really very angry. Let's see what will make him return to his love for his fathers and his family.

Author's Response:

I promise that things will get better - it won't always be like this.

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 23, 2022 09:46 PM · On: Family Matters

Poor Luke.  He is being kind of immature but that is OK because he is young.  Hope he gets over his bad feelings.  Love your story.



Author's Response:

Like you said, he is only 15, so I think being immature is only to be expected ;)

I promise that it will get better!

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2022 12:27 PM · On: Family Matters

Emmett is a really good guy.  Glad Luke is with him but I think Luke is kind of being a butthead.



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Luke is Brian Kinney's son, so it shouldn't be a big surprise ;)

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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 17, 2022 09:03 AM · On: Family Matters

Luke is really very angry. Maybe Vicky with her innocence can remind him of his fathers he knows and he loves.

Author's Response:

We'll see. We'll hear from Luke again soon :)

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Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2022 09:54 PM · On: Family Matters

Oh dear Luke is really hanging onto his anger I hope maybe Gus can talk him round

Author's Response:

He's a teenager... It will take some time ;)

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Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2022 07:10 PM · On: Family Matters

Love this so much. Great chapter.

* hugs *



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked the chapter. Thanks for letting me know!

More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2022 09:12 AM · On: Family Matters

It's so good that they managed to talk to each other without facing the Kinney walls too much, which wouldn't help the situation.

Author's Response:

Yeah, the famous Kinney walls wouldn't help anyone right now...

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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 09, 2022 10:28 PM · On: Family Matters

I thnk Gus needs to talk with Luke.  Glad Brian and Justin are OK.



Author's Response:

It might or might not happen in upcoming chapters ;)

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Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2022 01:46 PM · On: Family Matters

Wonderful talk between Justin and Gus.

* hugs *



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I am glad that you liked it :)

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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 03, 2022 09:02 AM · On: Family Matters

It's so good that Gus got to talk to Justin after all. I hope he can find the words to help Luke.
Happy New Year !!!

Author's Response:

This was definitely a start in the right direction. 

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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 08:32 PM · On: Family Matters

Happy that Gus understands. Hopefully he can help his brother understand.  Happy new year!!  Bill



Author's Response:

It's definitely a beginning in the right direction.

Thanks for your comment. More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 03:55 PM · On: Family Matters

Vicky will make up for all the sadness.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 03:51 PM · On: Family Matters

I'm surprised that Luke is letting a past the is over and done interfer with how their lives have been seems so wrong.



Author's Response:

I wouldn't call it wrong... He's a teenager and has just received very disturbing news about his fathers and his own past. Teenagers are impulsive and quick to judge... 

He will need time to work through what he has just found out and wil need time to come to terms with the truth.

Hopefully, they can all work things out in the end :)

Thanks for all your comments :) I hope you had a good start into the new year. More will be up later today!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 03:35 PM · On: Family Matters

I'm looking forward to the conversation.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 03:24 PM · On: Family Matters

Looks like all the kids are about to learn the truth.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 03:04 PM · On: Family Matters

Mel seems a little unhenged.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 02:51 PM · On: Family Matters

Jenny is learning alot about the family dynamics.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 02:43 PM · On: Family Matters

It's nice to have family that cares.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 02:38 PM · On: Family Matters

Nice to see everyone and for Jenny to meet them.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 02:26 PM · On: Family Matters

Gus and Jenny are getting along nicely.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 02, 2022 04:33 AM · On: Family Matters

Here's hoping everything goes Jenny's way.

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2021 01:08 PM · On: Family Matters

Both Brian and Justin are in such pain.  It's sad.  Glad that Vicky was able to raise their spirits.



Author's Response:

I promise that things will get better... eventually...

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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2021 09:04 AM · On: Family Matters

Fortunately Vicky is there, she brings a smile to the house. I hope the boys will quickly come to their senses to talk to their fathers. They do not deserve this rejection behavior, conversation is always better to say what is on your heart.

Author's Response:

Just the little ray of Sunshine that they all need right now. I love her <3 

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Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2021 05:34 AM · On: Family Matters

Oh dear four ppl all still hurting let’s hope the boys get over it sooqnq

Author's Response:

I want to give all of them a hug and make it all better, but alas... the drama was too much fun to resist ;)

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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2021 01:48 AM · On: Family Matters

Ihope the boys get over their disappointment soon.  I don't think their fathers deserve the way they are acting.

 



Author's Response:

I am sure it will only be a matter of time...

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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2021 01:26 PM · On: Family Matters

WOW!!  Tough chapter.  Please update soon!



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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2021 09:46 AM · On: Family Matters

Luke's reaction is quite surprising. He should have listened to Justin's explanations but he's young and impulsive. I hope Emmett has good discussions with him to make him understand Justin's forgiveness. I trust Emmett and Daphne should also give her advice .

I hope you have a Happy Holidays. Traveling is not easy in these times!

Author's Response:

I am  glad that I was still able to surprise people ;)

Happy holiday and stay safe! 

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Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: December 20, 2021 01:55 AM · On: Family Matters

Wow...just wow. Didn't see that coming. I would get being mad at Brian, but mad at Justin for getting back together with Brian!?! Can't wait to see how Emmett helps Luke. 



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I am  glad that I was still able to surprise people ;) 

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Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2021 12:45 PM · On: Family Matters

This talk is a long time coming.  They do deserve to hear the truth.  I'm looking forward to the new chapter and how the story will play out.



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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 13, 2021 09:30 AM · On: Family Matters

I can't wait to see the reaction from the boys but Brian and Justin are right they are strong enough and love their dads to forgive even if they are very angry. I wonder what Mélanie is up to. In any case, she does not seem in a hurry to see her daughter.

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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2021 11:16 PM · On: Family Matters

Looking forward to the conversation with the boys and what Melanie is planning.  Can't believe she is just going to let Jenny stay in Pittsburgh.



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Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2021 01:35 PM · On: Family Matters

Two wonderful chapters.  I had tears in my eyes reading.  It is hard to believe a mother could be so cold and cruel.  I am in agreement that it is time for Luke and Gus to hear the truth from their dads before Melanie twists everything.

You are an awesome writer!



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked the chapters :) Thanks for letting me know! 

More will be up tomorrow! 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: December 06, 2021 09:21 AM · On: Family Matters

I think it's a good idea for them to talk to the kids about what happened before Mélanie made the facts worse. However I thought they had already spoken to Luke and Gus when Justin returned from New York. They are grown up now they will be able to understand better and they know that their fathers love them.

Author's Response:

Back in the day (as shown in Back for Good), they gave both Luke and Gus child-friendly explanations for what had happened. They didn't get into details about the real reasons why Justin was away for five years, but kept it general like: Brian did something bad (not saying what exactly) and Justin was lied to by both Brian and Lindsey (not saying what exactly they lied about). So that's what they mean when talking about telling the boys the truth: Telling them the whole truth, not just generalisations of what happened, but the whole story.

Thanks for your comment. Much appreciated!

More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2021 11:50 PM · On: Family Matters

Still loving your story and axious for more.  Bill



Author's Response:

Awww, thanks! More will be up tomorrow :)

Thanks for your comment! 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2021 10:28 AM · On: Family Matters

Wow Melanie is unhinged

Author's Response:

Yep, she sure needs help!

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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2021 09:17 AM · On: Family Matters

Well I can say that Mélanie did not disappoint me! She's a real harpy who got stuck in her vision from 20 years ago and she's cruel to everyone. Fortunately, each in their own way knows how to put her in her place and tell her its four truths. We see how much Gus has suffered from her behavior and he wants to protect Jenny from her fury.. I think she's even more upset to see that everyone is supporting each other and are ready to face her.. I can't wait to see what happens next. Great chapter. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Haha, Melanie sure was in high form ;) 

I am glad that you liked the chapter. Thanks for letting me know!

More will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 29, 2021 12:16 AM · On: Family Matters

Great Chapter. Can't wait to see what happens next.  Bill



Author's Response:

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Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2021 04:36 AM · On: Family Matters

Poor Jenny,  she isn't used to seeing a relationship. Mel took that away from her by leaving the family. 

The guys must argue like that often for the kids not to be worried and know the outcome of what happens when the argument is over. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Jenny is learning and seeing things she never had a chance to before.

As for the guys arguing often - I wouldn't necessarily say that. But most of us who grew up in "normal" families and homes knew that even if our parents argued occasionally, it didn't mean that they wouldn't resolve it shortly and things would be okay again. It's just some sense of security that you have in a loving home, an experience Jenny never got the chance to make before.

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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2021 09:03 AM · On: Family Matters

Once again Jenny can see what a loving and caring family is like.

Author's Response:

Absolutely, and she's learning things she never had a chance to before.

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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2021 09:12 PM · On: Family Matters

Great chapter all about family relationships.  Jenny is finding out about a real family.



Author's Response:

Yes, she's making experiences she never had a chance to before.

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Reviewer: sophiesmom (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2021 01:16 AM · On: Family Matters

No one but Brian could be as insightful to what Jenny is going through and what her fears are. No there's no way the family is letting her go again.



Author's Response:

Brian knows what it's like to grow up in a loveless home. I wanted them to bond because of their similar experiences.

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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2021 09:15 PM · On: Family Matters

Liked Justin checking on Brian but understanding he needed time alone.  



Author's Response:

After all these years, they just know each other so well :)

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Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2021 12:34 PM · On: Family Matters

Jenny deserves this family. Poor kid.  Hopefully Mel will see the light.  If not, I'm sure Brian and Justin will work their magic.



Author's Response:

I wouldn't expect too much from Melanie, if I were you. Her track record is clearly against her :/ 

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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2021 11:21 AM · On: Family Matters

Jenny must be asking so many questions. Poor little one, she knows her mother and is probably afraid that even this whole loving family will not be able to do much until she is 18 years old.

Author's Response:

Hopefully, they can assure her that things will turn out okay somehow.

We have to stay optimistic :)

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Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2021 11:51 PM · On: Family Matters

Great chapter.  Enjoyed Jenny interacting with everyone.  Bill



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it :)

More will be up tomorrow! Thanks for your comment :)

Reviewer: Marny (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2021 10:26 AM · On: Family Matters

wonderful family.



Author's Response:

Yes, they are. Slightly crazy, but you can't help but love them all :)

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Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: November 08, 2021 09:27 AM · On: Family Matters

Everyone is there for a good Thanksgiving. I imagine Jenny's astonishment at this somewhat crazy and loving family, as well as the love that Brian and Justin have after all these years. Children are used to it and this is a good reason to feel at home. We feel that Jenny did not have much love or complicity with her mother. Now I am waiting for hurricane Mélanie. Next Sunday is not going to come soon enough.!!! Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

Haha, yes, hurricane Melanie will make an appearance soon. I promise ;)

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