Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Entwined Universe
Reviewer: Placedo (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2022 08:37 PM · On: Entwined

Hello !

What a great story, I've read tons of fiction and this one is great ! I loved it !

I really like the way you wrote the complex relationship between Brian and Justin.

Anyway, thank you !!

Sorry if there are some mistakes, English isn't my first language.

Dorothée

Reviewer: Placedo (Signed) · Date: December 05, 2022 08:37 PM · On: Entwined

Hello !

What a great story, I've read tons of fiction and this one is great ! I loved it !

I really like the way you wrote the complex relationship between Brian and Justin.

Anyway, thank you !!

Sorry if there are some mistakes, English isn't my first language.

Dorothée

Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2021 02:32 PM · On: Entwined

DYING HERE SO BEAUTIFUL SO GREAT LOVE U SO MUCH

Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2021 12:24 PM · On: Entwined

AHHHH GOD IM NERVOUS

Reviewer: Estrelinha97 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2021 11:24 AM · On: Entwined

Loving it ghhjjghghgggg

Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2019 02:21 AM · On: Entwined

Every so often there are stories that keep drawing you back to read again, Entwined is definitely one of those stories. I just finished reading it for a second time and wanted to give credit to the writers talent to be able to write a story where no matter how many times you read it, the emotion it draws is just a raw as the first time.  Entwined is superbly written. Candy

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2019 03:25 PM · On: The Date

Hi again! I can’t stop smiling! This was an amazing double-date! The scene at the Theatre was unbelievable, so funny. Your Jack is such a lovable character, so cute... First dancing, then crying, playing Brian and then again dancing and singing with Justin. Great. And it’s good to see Brian and Justin so happy together! Thank both of you so very much for this story and I would love to have more dates to read! Warmest regards!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2019 01:52 PM · On: The Date

Hi again! Oh my Goodness, this is so hilarious, it’s perfect! Every moment. I was chuckling so many times. So many wonderful moments. How you describe Gus’ expectations regarding Brians behaviour towards his "date", the talk between Brian and Lilys parents, Lilys behaviour and this “I’m your daughter-in-law, the interaction between Brian and Justin, the talk where Lily explains that Gus had not only a girlfriend before but “a girlfriend for every schoolday” and this “You’re not this boy anymore” hahaha :-)  Just amazing! Thanks and warmest regards!

Reviewer: aglaja5 (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2019 12:46 PM · On: The Date

Hi my friend! It's been a long time, nearly three years when I've fallen in love with your story "Entwined" and I still love it! I've just re-read it! It's amazing! And it's crazy, but I'm also still totally in love with Brian and Justin. I must admit, I'm addicted. And fortunately, there are so many amazing stories on mw or kinnetikdreams. But that's also the reason why I haven't read "The Date" until now. So, now, at last, you'll get a much earned review. Such a cute first chapter. You made me smile so often. It's so cute to see Brian and Gus interacting and there are so many awesome moments. While reading it - and I think I haven't mentioned it before in one of my reviews for "Entwined" - I just realized, Gus is the first person to whom Brian can openly admit that he loves Justin, isn't he. That's so amazing! And wow, this scene in the flower shop when Brian speaks about Justin "He is the most exquisite flower I have ever met" - haha, so funny. Great, I haven't enough words for it, how you pictured Brian and Gus and then also let us know what Brian thinks about the situation he founds himself in. Amazing! Thanks for making my day and warmest regards!

 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 20, 2019 01:37 AM · On: Entwined

Hate that fucking Lindsey

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2019 10:43 AM · On: Entwined

Nooooooooooooooooo an infinity of noooooooo this story cannot be over please say it’s not. This was beautiful so beautiful. The wedding was perfect but what was even more incredible was Brian’s speech wow it blew me away so much. It words touched me and brought out so many emotions. Please write a story with them finding a house together. I’m sure it would be fun to see Javk and Gus going with them to pick out the house and I bet they get that mansion after all. Thank you for this story xx

 

im doing better now my blood sugars still everywhere so I think I’ll have to be seen again to fix that. 

 

Hope uoh are well and Happy Easter 🐣 xx

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 13, 2019 10:54 AM · On: Entwined

Sorry it took so long to read this chapter I was in hospital for a bit. 

 

This was wonderful I loved the trip they took and I loved them getting ready to go to Debbie’s for Christmas. Lol Brian really can’t resist Justin can he. His bond with his dad gets me in the heart more and more you have written it so beautifully. I’d love to see more.

 

The date has to be written and of course lots more as well this is such an incredible story. Xx



Author's Response:

Never apologize for something like that. I hope you're feeling better now. How are you ? I saw the post on FB, I'm so happy you're finally out of there. And sorry it takes me so long to respond to reviews, I'm quite busy these days and mostly away from my computer.

I'm glad you stille enjoy it. And I know you read the Date already before. Remember Gus bringing a date on Valentine's day in a restaurant and going to see the King Lion with Brian, Jack and Gus? That's the one :D

Sending a very special giant hug your way my friend <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 25, 2019 12:29 PM · On: Entwined

Loved seeing the progression Brian made. It took time but I’m sure it was worth it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 23, 2019 12:01 PM · On: Entwined

Happy tears, I’m so happy that Brian took that step it was such a huge one for him. I can’t wait to see what’s next. I don’t want this to end. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 20, 2019 02:51 PM · On: Entwined

Gosh you really could feel Brian's pain and struggle in this chapter and it hit me in the gut. I hope he listens to Debbie and gets himself together and lets himself be apart of his sons life. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2019 09:41 AM · On: Entwined

I could feel the tension jump off the page. I can also feel the pain Brian is feeling at seeing Jesse. It’s understandable that things went the way they did with this meeting it will take time I guess and I hope they can resolve this. I’m glad Brian turned to Justin they really can help each other. 



Author's Response:

Brian has really grown up, right? :D 

Thank you again, Vicki!!!!

Reviewer: JerseyGirl (Signed) · Date: March 07, 2019 02:29 AM · On: Entwined

I just finished Entwined, it was superbly written!  Your connection to the characters, and who they are is what draws me to your stories. Your way of setting a scene with words, a description, makes the whole story come alive.  You have a way of making your readers feel what you felt when writing, that is a gift!  You write with an understanding that Brian & Justins love isnt always about the happy times, yet inspite of all they have been through it is the one thing that will always connect them, even surviving distance and time! Thank you for writing this amazing story, you are one of my all-time favorite writers!! Candy

P.S. The Date was so "Adorable" I laughed out loud at "He is sooo going to nail her" like I said you sure have a way with words!  Im off to read Beneath the Lies. 



Author's Response:

aww, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed that one. I'm considering writing a sequel, so maybe you will have more soon ;) 

Anyway, thank you for your enthusiastic reviews, you made me want to write all over again <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 11:43 AM · On: Entwined

💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔💔 there isn’t enough broken heats to post to tell you how heartbreaking this chapter was. I truly can’t blame Justin for leaving and for reacting how he did. As for Brian I wanted to 🥊  one right in the smaker. He will see what he has lost and get himself some help.

 

magnificent chapter x



Author's Response:

That chapter was very difficult to write, because I needed to find the right balance of hate between brian and Justin. The present part of the story makes it more bearable, but their love story isn't always easy, to say the least...* authors hiding in shame LOL*

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2019 08:55 AM · On: Entwined

Wow there was so much in this chapter. I loved seeing it focused mostly on Jesse and Aaron. Jesse really came such a long way he battled so much to get where he got to and to see him helping others really touched me. The addition of Alive truly warmed my heart and Aaron is so good with her, I look forward to seeing more with them all. I could picture the look on Aaron’s face when Jesse announced he wanted to go back then the look on Brians face when they faced each other. I sooooooo can’t wait to see what’s next. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 04, 2019 08:33 AM · On: Entwined

I don’t know how Justin stayed as sane as he did putting up with what Brian was doing.  I wanted to shake him and shout wake up and stop what you are doing. I would have slapped Lindsay silly she was such a bitch for doing what she did. My heart is breaking for Justin. 



Author's Response:

Justin is quite a character in this story, right? I love him to death here <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 02, 2019 11:40 AM · On: Entwined

What are you doing to me girl, happy tears once again. I wish this story could be made into a movie it’s so good. I love how the bond between Jack and Brian is going. He is getting the dad he should of had growing up. Everything in this chapter grabbed me fully and I’m wondering what’s going to happen with Jesse now. I’m so hooked in this I never want it to end. 

 

 

Im doing good, I finally finished my last chapter and as soon as I get it back from the beta it will be posted. I do hope that you enjoy it 💕💕💕



Author's Response:

Brian and Jack's relationship was a delight to write, that's also why I consider writing a sequel to Entwined. I'm so glad you could finish your story! You must be excited :D 

Thank you again for all your wonderful reviews Vicki!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 28, 2019 08:25 AM · On: Entwined

Oh man my heart shattered reading this chapter so much pain in their hearts. It’s so hard to see the struggle within them and stubbornness. I can feel Justin pulling away even though he loves Brian so much I don’t know how much more he can take. This story is so amazing and powerful. 



Author's Response:

<3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2019 12:46 PM · On: Entwined

Where do I even begin. I love that Justin looks after Brian, even after all these years and what’s gone on he is still there heart and soul. The smile on Brians lips at the fact Justin remembered his favorite food and the chat that followed. You really have a beautiful way of capturing moments and it keeps you drawn into every word. I want to thank you for that I truly s. 

 

I know really sad sad moments are coming in the past parts I’m holding onto the happy parts of the present ones. 

 

Imdoing ok, I’m writing the final chapter of my current story. It’s going really slowly. 

I hope you do write more of this and please come back to QaF fics. 

 

I can give you a prompt if you would like one to write a cute doc with xx



Author's Response:

Thank you for the compliment about capturing moments :) <3 You must be excited to finish your story ! I know I always were when I wrote a long one. 

I have actually written a very cute (and very short) fic in this universe, I could maybe post it for the challenge. It's a letter from Jack to Brian, after this story ends. Ansgt free with an excess of sweetness LOL

Thank YOU for your kindness Vicki, it means a lot to me <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2019 11:31 AM · On: Entwined

Omg such raw pain like a dagger to the heart. This broke me to see the suffering from all sides. Will there ever be a way back for the friendship between Jesse and Brian and what will this do to Brian and Justin. I’m in floods. 

 

Fantastic work x



Author's Response:

Hey Vicki !

Always such a pleasure to read your reviews. You're reaching the hard part of the story, at least in the past. I promise you things will get better, eventually, but for now it's going to be tough for the boys. 

So glad you're enjoying this story! I really loved writing them here and creating this universe. I'm considering writing a sequel soon, just to revisit this world.

I really hope you're okay my friend :) 

A huge hug to you <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2019 08:22 PM · On: Entwined

OMG I’m lost for words, I knew I hated spencer but omg poor Brian I hope that he will be ok. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 19, 2019 04:11 PM · On: Entwined

That Spencer really is an asshole isn’t he. How could he do that to Justin. He knew Brian would react that way. That fight between our boys really scared me. Did the talk with Jesse work 😢 I sure hope it did. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2019 04:30 PM · On: Entwined

What a way to make me cry again, Jack is really touching my heart the way he was talking to Brian, asking that he find a new name for him like dad, oh man that really got to me big time. There is so many more emotions to come I think with those two and it’s painful for them I’m sure. I hope their relationship will get stronger. 

 

Brian needs Justin by his side and I think Justin is the same it’s thoe baby steps they are taking I think is good because jumping in to fast could crush even a friendship between them. 

 

Man oh oh man I’m loving this story x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 18, 2019 08:16 AM · On: Entwined

Oh Brian, Brian, Brian why do you do this to yourself. If you could only just talk out loud about your feelings all this wouldn’t happen to you. You are lucky to have Michael to pick you up and to tell you pull yourself together. Justin loves you and you love him. I fear you might lose him if you don’t talk. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2019 11:08 AM · On: Entwined

You’ve made me cry with the beauty in this chapter. I loved the moments in the case with Brian and Justin you can feel them growing closer again. Then the moments between Justin and Jack those really touched my heart so much. He has such innocence and it’s sad but sweet the way he reacts to Justin. I really hope Brian and Justin end up back together they are meant to be. 



Author's Response:

Hi Vicki!

Jack is a wonderful character to write about in this fic. I remember this chapter, I had a great time writing it. From now on, the present will be easier, the past harder. But I promise beautiful moments and with Jack, too :) 

Thank you for all your reviews. I hope you're okay, as well as your family. XOXO <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 11, 2019 08:46 AM · On: Entwined

Oh deary me, I had a feeling fights were coming and a jealous Brian. If only he would admit how he really felt this wouldn’t happen. I want to shake him so badly and say wake up or you will lose him. I can’t blame Justin’s reaction. I hope things get better I wantvthe guys happy. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 05, 2019 03:13 PM · On: Entwined

That was brilliant and beautiful. Loved their conversation in the diner you could feel the nerves and the flirty banter between them. Their love is slowly creeping back into their lives I think they just need to open up a tad more. 

 

I love they went to see Gus and Lindsey but mainly Gus of course the moments between His dad was so sweet I so want to see more and more of this. I laughed when they were teasing Justin while playing football that was the best. Omg Jack is missing I hope they find him safe and sound. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2019 11:40 AM · On: Entwined

Wow, that was such a brave thing for Brian to do, to share the experience of going to see his dad in Secret with him. To show that vulnerable side to him was a huge thing. 

 

I was with Justin at being angry with Brian for bringing tricks back to their bed, but I do agree it’s Brians way of hitting out if trying to hide how he truly feels. It maybe wrong and it does need to change and it can with Justins help. 

 

Kmg happy tears that key is more then a key to an apartment it’s a key to Brians heart 💓 



Author's Response:

Brian is so full of s***, right?  :D But truly, he's helpless when Justin is concerned LOL

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2019 09:27 AM · On: Entwined

You had me crying here, the scene with Jack talking with the doctor and Brian was so emotional and heart wrenching. His innocence and his memories that are haunting him are just so sad. If I could hug all of them I would. 

 

I love Brians relationship with Debbie she is a good mother to him and their talk I hoped helped him lots. 

 

I lorcthat Micheal wants to work with Justin on his comic I really hope that Justin takes him up on the offer.

 

oooooh Brian asked Justin to go see Gus this has me exited I can’t wait to see how it goes. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 31, 2019 09:52 AM · On: Entwined

Gosh I’m so proud of Justin for facing his fears and going out on New Years Eve. That really took big cahonas didn’t it and it’s thanks to Brian for instilling that in him. It truly moved me. I loved that they celebrated with Jessee as well becwadnt left out and Brian confronting Aaron was great it’s not good how he is treating Jesse. The talk that they had once they reached back to the apartment about Brian’s dad was really sad and moving at the same time i wanted to cry for him. He was like a little boy talking about him. Oh boy I can see Daphene confronting Brian about Justin and wanting him to explain just were their relationship actually is after the talk shechad with Justin. Poor Brian won’t know what hit him if she does lol.

 

Brilliant work as always xx

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 30, 2019 10:09 AM · On: Entwined

Going to dinner at Micheals and Bens house must have been scary for Justin knowing that Debbie was going to be there. Having no contact in eight years is a really long time I’d be shitting a brick if I was him. I am glad it went well even though the warning from Carl but a shiver down my spine. Wow that phone call fromJesses was very cryptic wasn’t it. I’m wondering what it was all about. I’m dying to find out now.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2019 01:14 PM · On: Entwined

Brain really has a damaged soul hasn’t he that needs healing. My heart aches that he is using the fuck um and toss um way of shutting off his heart. I know he wants to let Justin in but it’s that struggle isn’t it. Like with the devil on one shoulder and the angel on the other telling him different ways of dealing with it. 

 

I feel for Jesse as well, he needs a good kind manthat will treat him the way he should be treated. I’d kick Arrons butt I swear for acting that way around him. 

 

Loli love that Justin has Brian in his grasp wheather Brian knows it or not but I think he may have an inkling. 

 

Fantastic Chapter x hugs 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2019 08:59 PM · On: Entwined

I must admit I did feel sorry for Tyler even though I desperately want our boys back together, oh how I pray that they do get back together and get that passion on fire once more. 



Author's Response:

Yes, Tyler wasn't so happy with Justin's decision but at least, he told him the truth. Now, to see how our boys will act from now on ;)

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2019 08:35 AM · On: Entwined

I seriously loved the private moment with Brian and Justin on the roof. That was so powerful and moving. The quite moment without words gave me shivers then when they talked sharing past history that blew me away giving me goosebumps. Then you go and hit me with that kiss wow wee. That was someway to start my day. 



Author's Response:

I loved writing that scene :D

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 25, 2019 10:51 AM · On: Entwined

God almighty that really dug into my heart. Jack really is struggling isn’t he and now he is remembering his his past ways even though he thinks they are Dreams. I can feel how much that is killing Brian, I know that it would kill me. 

 

Lol Michael coming after Justin is brilliant, I understand why he is doing it but it’s funny seeing him do it. He is right though, Justin is in love with Brian still and he does need to make his choice. It’s not gonna be easy though because someone is going to get hurt.



Author's Response:

Love your reviews Vicky! Again, sorry for not responding much. But again, I love every single one of your review. Thank you! <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 02:01 PM · On: Entwined

I am loving Brian here, seeing him like this is great because its showing all sides to him. You get the Brian hexis showing the world. I loved the conversation between him and Justin on the street, I could feel The flirty undertones between them. Then the talk between Jesse and Justin was really great. I hope they become friends xx



Author's Response:

Brian is intrigued by Justin, to say the least. And Justin is attracted by Brian, even though I'm sure he'd prefer not to be. The sparks are about to start ;D

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 12:50 PM · On: Entwined

The electricity in the air between these two is huge in this chapter, I nearly got shocked by it as it was so strong. My heart is breaking for Brain with what’s going on with his dad, anyone dealing with this situation must be awful. My friends dad has dementia and I know how hard that is for her. 



Author's Response:

Brian wants Justin to be happy. For all his attitude, he is a true selfless character, and dearly cares about his former lover. He has a lot to deal with too, including the evolution of his relationship with his dad. I didn't spare him LOL. But I promise it will get better :) 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 12:00 PM · On: Entwined

Wow, this moved me beyond words. To see the vulnerable side of Brian sitting on that roof top was breathtaking. People think of him as this jerk and hard but inside he is just as hurting as the rest of them. Poor Justin having that panic attack was awful but it was so incredible seeing Brian look after him, that was so touching. 

 

Brilliant work x



Author's Response:

I enjoyed very much writing about those two in this story, and their relationship in the past. I'm glad you can feel their connection. It's truly a beautiful one.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2019 10:17 AM · On: Entwined

Poor Brian, dealing with that must be soul destroying. I would have rung that nurses neck for doing that to my dad, how he restrained himself I don’t know. He needs something happy to happen now doesn’t he. That phone call from Justin I pray is that something. I’m seriously loving this story.



Author's Response:

It's true it seems Brian has a lot to deal with in this story. His relationship with his dad will be a major part of it. There is angst ahead, but I promise TONS of love :)

Thank you for being so amazing with all your reviews Vicki. I hope you're okay <3 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2019 10:45 AM · On: Entwined

I’m so glad that Emmet is looking after Justin, he really needs it and I hope he doesn’t go back to his cold apartment. Lol standing up to Brian that was brilliant I hope we see more of that side of Justin it’s awesome. 



Author's Response:

Emmett is a fantastic friend ! And Justin is one strong young man. Brian is about to discover just how much :D

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 21, 2019 11:53 AM · On: Entwined

Seeing this through all there eyes was unreal. The nervous and awkward Justin seeing Brian when opened that door stopped my heart waiting to see what was next. Then Brian reacting in the same way , it was like the cosmos was pulling them together through Emmet who was looking out for both of them. 

 

Justin knows his heart belongs with Brian’s but with Tyler in the mix and I know there will be angst this is gonna he a heck of a ride to read. 

 

Im always excited to read your work. Hugs from Ireland 🇮🇪 



Author's Response:

I love rereading the story thriough your eyes :D

Hugs from France <3

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2019 11:46 AM · On: Entwined

I do hope Justin calls Brian because it seems like fate has made their paths cross again. I feel bad for Tyler as he would lose Justin if they get back together z  and I didn’t see Jack turning up that surprised me and what’s wrong with him I’m wondering. 



Author's Response:

I'd need to reread this one LOL Justin and Brian will meet again, like, very soon * grin * :D

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2019 10:58 AM · On: Entwined

My nerves were shaking for Justin here I could feel everything he was feeling. I’m sure he will have an amazing friend in Emmet and boy oh boy what an introduction to Brian huh. 



Author's Response:

What I love about new readers with this story, is that I can read the story again through their eyes.  It's been a long time since I finished that one, so it will be a pleasure to read it through you :)

Explosive meeting, right? Justin has a long road to recovery in this one, but he will get there :) And Emmett is a hoot! :D

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2019 07:52 PM · On: Entwined

What an amazing start to a story. You have well and truly pulled me in. I cannot wait to see how this develops. I hope our boys hearts become one. 



Author's Response:

Hi Vicky!

I'm glad you started this one :) I think you'll like it, even though you know me, there is angst coming, but I promise a wonderful love story with our boys. And I suspect you will like Jack and Gus in this one ;)

Thank you for giving it a try. I hope you're okay!

Hugs from France <3 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: November 12, 2018 11:09 PM · On: The Date

Just loved it



Author's Response:

We’re very happy you enjoyed this story. Thank you for taking the time to review :) <3

~ alois & eureka1 ~

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: September 09, 2018 01:53 PM · On: Entwined

Hi, Alois! I decided to re-read this wonderful story recently and I fell in love all over again. I was so excited to jump back into this world, with Brian, Justin, Jack, Jesse, Emmett, and everyone else. You took the characters from canon and made them into your own, and the original characters you’ve added turned out to be as wonderful and complex as everyone else. While I’m usually interested only in Brian and Justin and their relationship, I was genuinely invested in Jesse and his romance with Aaron — and his friendship with Brian. You’ve created such interesting story-lines and they all tugged at my heartstrings.


 The way you alternated between past and present has captivated me back when I was first reading this story and it had the same effect on me now. It was infuriating, too (in a good way) — I got so absorbed in the past, I didn’t want it to end at all. I wanted it to go on and on, without interruptions. But when Present started, I became absorbed once again and this time, I didn’t *it* to end. And this was an endless circle! So I gulped the whole story down pretty quickly, ignoring my need to sleep — and it was so worth it.


I love how at first, Brian and Justin’s relationship was so strained. I love that it took them a while to get back together in the present — it was realistic and believable. The process of them falling in love was, too — Justin slipped in under Brian’s system of defenses gradually and steadily, and his loyalty and devotion were so in-canon. And Brian, his patience despite his abruptness, his love and tenderness that even his assholish behavior couldn’t hide.


Brian’s descend into self-made hell was so painful and heartbreaking – but I loved it because I love angst (with a happy ending) and you described it perfectly. My heart was breaking in the most delicious way. The whole situation with Jesse – I really didn’t except such reaction. For him to blame Brian… but I could also understand him, and it made everything much harder to take. Poor Brian, but poor Jesse, too. And poor Aaron and Justin, who had to deal with the aftermath for months and months. The moment when Justin finally left Brian was absolutely devastating. Still, I loved (I swear I’m not a sadist) how gutted Brian was and how he blamed Lindsay – it was such as realistic and heartfelt display of pain and anger and self-hatred — trying to blame another person for your pain... this heartache was beautifully  balanced with a happier present, which made everything easier and lovelier. Ii couldn’t get enough.


Thank you so much for this amazing story and for such a lovely, wonderful end! I got immense pleasure from reading it and I can’t wait to catch up with your other works!



Author's Response:

OMG, Katrin! I was so happy to see your name on the review, and what an amazing review once again. You really know how to put a huge smile on my face. And coming from you, who are so talented yourself, I really was blushing hard :D

I hope you're okay and that real like is treating you well. How are you?

And again, thank you so much for telling me how you feel about this story in such great details. It's been a while since I wrote that one, but I truly like it, and am always wondering if I will ever come back to that universe. I did write a little companion story in this universe, so if you haven't read it, it's called 'the date' and is angst-free compared to that one.

But really, I'm so excited to see you back!!! Hope we can chat soon :) Take care <3 <3 <3 

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: August 17, 2018 03:04 PM · On: Entwined

I found this story three days ago, it took me this long to read it because I did not want to miss a word lol.  I laughed, cried and loved it .  Looking forward to reading more of your stories.  You are a wonderful writer.

 

Lori



Author's Response:

Hey Lorie,

 

Thank you for another amazing review. This story is one of my favorite, so I'm glad you liked it as much as you did :) Thank you also for leaving a review, I deeply appreciate it <3

Hugs from France

Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: February 17, 2018 05:42 PM · On: Entwined

I really liked the story. I'm happy to have read it. Thank you very much. Judit from Hungary



Author's Response:

Hi Judit!

I'm sorry for the delay in my response but I wanted to thank you for your kind review. It's always great to know new readers enjoy this story.

*Hugs from France*

 

Reviewer: Nadine (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2017 02:10 PM · On: Entwined

So lovely, one heck of a roller coaster ride, and my emotions were all over the place , too. But the end was so worth it. I'm excited to read more from you.

Thanks for sharing this:)



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! It was a roller coaster ride to write, but I'm very proud of that fic :D 

I'm so grateful you read two of my stories and enjoyed them both! I'm currently working on a new fic, and I hope I will be able to share it soon.

Thanks again, so much, for your reviews! You made my day :)

XOXO

Reviewer: loveloversspit (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2017 08:40 AM · On: Entwined

I'm intrigued!



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know mandy! I hope you will enjoy this one :)

* Hugs from France *

Reviewer: cricrijolie (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2017 05:13 AM · On: The Date

Cute story that made me laughed out load! Good job, I had a great time reading it. Thanks for sharing!



Author's Response:

You're very welcome! We're thrilled you liked it :) Thank you for the review!!!

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 12:59 PM · On: The Date

I'm even more in love with this story now. Lol I loved Brian he reactions to everything was so funny he is protective and sweet and funny yet still very Brian. I dis not want this story to end. I hope you'll write more of truly amazing story.

 

incredible wok xx



Author's Response:

And again, thank you Vicky. We don't exclude to write more in this universe and we definitely enjoyed writing this one :) Very glad you loved it!

XOXO

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 12:43 PM · On: The Date

That date was just so romantic and sweet and cute and OMG beautiful. Lilly really is a little madam isn't she and so cute with Gus. I'm so proud of how Brian is coping with it and acting for Gus but I think he is enjoying it and loving treating Justin to a good date. I'm glad Brian treated Jack nicely here it must be hard when a loved on suffers with head injury long term affects and he knows double after Justin's as well.

Fantastic work xx



Author's Response:

Aww..thank you! Lily is a hoot, we had such a great time imagining a girlfriend for Gus and how she would behave. Brian and Justin are in a very good place in the end of Entwined, and Brian with his son and father and we just had to write a scene that reflected just how much they meant to each other. 

Thank you again :D

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2017 12:23 PM · On: The Date

Omg I'm in love with this story, is that possible but I so am. I love how Brian is with Gus, he would do anything for that little boy and this proves it. Gus is just like his dad a huge heart and he is so into his dad as well and how he feels about Justin. You have melted my heart so much. I wonder what Brian would have said if Lindsey had asked to give Gus another brother or sister. This story is getting added to my favs.

 

Brilliant work xx



Author's Response:

We're glad you're loving this! I knew this would be your kind of story :) Brian and Gus have such a wonderful relationship, right?

Thank you for giving this one a try!

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2017 11:41 AM · On: The Date

Love the interactions between the fathers and sons.  I really hope to see more stories from this universe:)



Author's Response:

Thank you Nicky! We're so glad you enjoyed this story:) Thank you also for letting us know you appreciate this universe. Who knows? Maybe we will add to this universe one day.

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: March 10, 2017 03:16 AM · On: Entwined

Love the story and love the dynamics of the characters in this universe.  I would happily revisit for any sequels you may have planned. Adding to favorites immediately :)



Author's Response:

Hi Nicky! 

I'm very glad you enjoyed this story! I had a great time writing the dynamics between all those characters in this universe. I wrote a companion story with my beta called 'The date' and taking place between the last chapter and the epilogue of Entwined if you want to read it. It's mainly a humurous story though.

Thank you for your comment. I always love to know readers are still discovering this one :)

* Hugs from France to New Zealand! (I think you're from New Zealand, right? If not, I'm sorry!!) *

 

Reviewer: Flo3241 (Signed) · Date: March 01, 2017 12:50 PM · On: Entwined

This was a brilliant read. LOVED IT! 



Author's Response:

Thank you Florentina! I'm so glad you enjoyed this story :) Thank you sincerely for taking the time to comment, too. I appreciate that so much.

* Hugs from France *

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: February 25, 2017 03:09 PM · On: The Date

Finally had time to get caught up!

What a lovely story from start to finish! I do adore this childlike Jack and the way Brian responds to him. I know Jack isn't in the "father" role in this relationship, but I think it works for Brian and allows him to give into his usually hidden nurturing side.

Gus is adorable.... trying to be so grown up, yet just like every other kid, embarrassed by silly parents, LOL! Lily is a hoot and a half! She must certainly rule the roost around her house! And Justin is having way too much fun at Brian's expense!

Would love to see more Dates!



Author's Response:

We're delighted you enjoyed this one! It's always a pleasure to write about Jack and Brian's relationship in this universe and of course, we had to create a wonderful girlfriend for Gus LOL. It was also great to write a light/fun story after Entwined, without any angst. 

Thank you so much for your support and feedback! We appreciate that so much. Also, we don't exclude to write more in this verse in the future :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~ 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2017 09:33 PM · On: The Date

Hi, Ladies!  Such a sweet, cute story.  My favorite parts were Gus's constant admonitions to his father to stop kissing Justin all the time, and Lily's 'grown-up' attitude, along with Jack's behavior.  So happy you two decided to write us a side story to Entwined!  Enjoyed this one very much. Thank you for posting it on here.  ~Kim



Author's Response:

Thank you Kim! We're glad you enjoyed this little story. We couldn't resist placing Brian in that position, as well as including Jack and creating an endearing girlfriend for Gus. And we had a great time writing this one. Maybe we will add some more later, too :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 03:02 PM · On: The Date

  This was a delightful story of first love, and what a loving father will do for his son. We all know none of this was easy for Brian. I doubt there is anything that Brian wouldn't do for Justin and Gus-even if its a blow to his dignity,guess that's why we love him so, please take us on some more dates.



Author's Response:

We're thrilled you enjoyed this little story! We might write more at some point, we will see. Thank you immensely for your support!

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 02:04 PM · On: The Date

 When picking up Lilly who would have guessed she would call Brian her father-in-law? When they went to the burger place, Gus was adorable tasteing the juice,pulling out her chair,etc he and Lilly were so cute trying to act grown up in fact the only child at the table was Jack



Author's Response:

Gus is trying hard to please Lily :) He is an amazing kid. And Lily is a sweetheart. As for Jack, he can't resist his son and grandson :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 24, 2017 01:06 PM · On: The Date

Gus is such a sweet child, and very smart like his daddy and Justin. Just knowing that chocolate is good for you, ans about the meaning of different flowers.Brian would do anything to make Gus happy, even if Justin teases him about the big day.



Author's Response:

Gus is a very sweet kid, and Brian is very lucky to be given a reason to celebrate Valentine's day! LOL

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:37 AM · On: The Date

Awwwww, I LOVED it! You know I love this Jack and, while I am sure he is a handful and it is at times heartbreaking to see him with such innocence, he is definitely an improvement from canon Jack/pre-accident Jack. And Lily, she's so weird, I love her lololol. Although, I may be biased on that. Thank you for the great story, ladies! I would love to see more dates. ;) 



Author's Response:

Thank you Anne! We're thrilled you enjoyed this date. Maybe we will write more! And a special thanks for the idea of the Lion King! 

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:28 AM · On: The Date

Awwww, Jack is coming along too. Of course, he has proven to be more of a handful than Gus (although Lily seems like she may have some quirks as well LOL.) Lovely chapter! Can't wait to see how the date goes!



Author's Response:

We just had to include Jack, knowing Brian would be so happy to deal with him at the movies ;)

Reviewer: Annie-Eliza (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 04:26 AM · On: The Date

As always, I love this. Even though Brian probably isn't a fan of the grand romantic gestures Gus wants to make, I'm sure he is happy to have the father/son time. Also, it does give him a push to show a tiny bit of romance to Justin yet still gives him a logical reason as to why (Gus made him, duh.) Great chapter! <3



Author's Response:

Of course it's all Gus's fault. Brian hates romantic shit, that's why he put up with buying ridiculous chocolates, the perfect flowers, eat more carbs we could ever eat and watch the Lion King. And he doesn't enjoy it one bit. Nope. * grin *

Thank you for the reviews!!!

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2017 01:28 AM · On: The Date

LOVE LOVE LOVE! I myself have never seen The Lion King (my tastes are more of the R-rated nature) but I thoroughly enjoyed reading about this particular "showing". And Brian's reaction to Gus' kiss later had me in stitches... "She raped my son?" Priceless!

Are you kidding about possible future stories?! I'll take more dates, drabbles, poems...heck whatever you decide to write as long as you continue to grace us with more from these characters. I ADORE them all sooo much. 

How about a school dance that Brian gets suckered into chaperoning? Just an idea...



Author's Response:

The Lion King is a great movie! I (Alois) have watched it like a thousand times (I was barely a teen when it was released) and I love it so much. It was so fun to write about Gus and Jack's reaction to it with Karynn. And of course, Brian freaking out over his son's first kiss was just too tempting LOL!

Karynn joins me to thank you for all your beautiful comments. It's such a joy to see how much you like this story! and if we ever decide to add to that universe, we will definitely have you to thank for that.

Now, Brian as a chaperon? That's definitely an interesting idea :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

 

Reviewer: Marie-France TEJEDOR (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 03:06 PM · On: The Date

Soooooo funny ! I love Brian and Gus ! Thank you girls !



Author's Response:

Merci beaucoup Marie-France! C'est toujours un plaisir de lire tes messages :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: Alana (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 09:56 AM · On: The Date

I adored your entwind story, one of my favorite. And when i saw that you wrote a short sequel i was head over the moon. It was incredible, l lough so hard... So please continue, your Brian and Justin are my favourite version.

Thanks!!!



Author's Response:

Alana, thank you so much for that wonderful feedback. It means a lot to know you enjoy this universe like you do. If we ever decide to write more about them, it will be thanks to reviewers like you :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 09:09 AM · On: The Date

Oh I laughed so much through this story almost as much as Justin I think I really enjoyed it

Author's Response:

We're glad we could make you laugh with this date! Thank you Chris :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2017 02:02 AM · On: The Date

Awwww that was sweet! Fun, heartwarming, and beautiful...oh and let's not forget hilarious! I laughed out loud picturing Brian trying to not only comfort his son but his father too during the movie. I actually laughed through most of the story...Seriously, really funny. Great work and I enjoyed it immensely!



Author's Response:

Heartwarming, beautiful and hilarious... You have us blushing!

Thank you very much for your comment and support :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: February 22, 2017 12:20 AM · On: The Date

Awww so sweet, Gus and Lily and Brian and Justin, of course 



Author's Response:

Thank you ! We're glad you enjoyed it :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2017 09:54 PM · On: The Date

I absolutely adored this story!  Jack is so funny and it is hysterical when he plays Brian!  Gus was adorable with Lily, and I loved the special Kinney romantic gestures Brian showed towards Justin.

i hope you keep writing in this series.



Author's Response:

Thank you Lorma! Revisiting this universe was fun and putting Brian in that position was impossible to resist :)

Who knows, maybe we will write about them again. Thank you very much for your feedback :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: xJustSayingx (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2017 09:16 AM · On: The Date

Loved this chapter so much, Gus and Lily are really cute :D

Brian trying to make romantic gestures is hilarious, him holding the door for Justin was so sweet ^^

I'm so looking forward to the next chapter!



Author's Response:

Hi Sarah!

Gus and Lily really are so cute, right? :D And Brian? We can tell you we had a good laugh writing that story LOL 

We're so happy you're enjoyed this story so much. Thank you for letting us know, it's deeply appreciated :) The next chapter will be up very soon!

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2017 05:55 AM · On: Entwined

Beautiful story! Well Done



Author's Response:

THANK YOU for all the reviews! You're wonderful :) 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2017 05:27 AM · On: Entwined

I have truly enjoyed your story--going back and forth with the past and present was a challange for me but it finally worked out. This is the first story I've read that let you feel joy about Jack and Brian as father and son. I so wanted a memory for Brian of a time his dad loved him and for Brian to be proud him, even with his restrictions.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you so much :) I'm very glad you enjoyed this story and Brian and Jack's relationship!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2017 03:49 AM · On: Entwined

Even Brian knew Justin walking away years before was what made Brian finally become the man he knew he could be. He was a son, and a father, and with the luck of fate maybe soon  a lover and partner.



Author's Response:

Accepting to be a father has changed everything for Brian :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 21, 2017 03:21 AM · On: Entwined

I realize Jack is damaged but he is written as such a sweet guy--frim insisting burgers and fries for everyone--his little happy dance--to the painting he did and gave to his much loved son, the cherry on top, Brian hugged his dad on his own. Brian has grown up to be a loving partner,son, and father. Making the decision on his own to go see Jesse will heal Brian and Jesse, he is truly the man Justin always wanted him to be



Author's Response:

Brian has become the man he was meant to be, thanks to Justin. Now, it's time they have their happy ending :)

Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: February 21, 2017 02:12 AM · On: The Date

OMG! I laughed so hard throughout this entire chapter. That Lily is a trip... I know there is only supposed to be one more chapter, but man this story is just sooo wonderful that I hate to see it end.



Author's Response:

Hi Carrie!

Aw, we're thrilled you laughed at Brian's predicament! ** happy dance ** And yes, Lily is a hoot, right? 

One more chapter for now, but we could be convinced to write more dates in the future ;) 

Thank you deeply for your wonderful enthusiasm :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 10:27 PM · On: The Date

This is great.  I'm so glad that Jesse and Aaron are there too.  Love the first story.  Lily is a handful- but so is Gus.  Justin is having fun playing his role - now the ultimate would be a nice sex scene after they drop off Gus and Lily-  I do believe Brian would pretend to be annoyed at Justin and make him "pay' even if he did throughly enjoy the 'date'.



Author's Response:

Hi Sandy!

We're very glad you're enjoying their date and the fact that all the 'family' is here! Both kids are so precious LOL And what an interesting idea about a nice sex scene! Well, chapter 3 is already written and almost ready to post, but the good thing about that kind of story, is that the readers can motivate us to write more in the future  :)

As always, thank you for your wonderful support, we appreciate that so, so much ♥

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 08:31 PM · On: Entwined

He has so many demons , maybe Debbie could reach him. Somehow a son made him think, how could he have a son growing up as unloved as he was--it's time to grow up.



Author's Response:

It's time indeed :)

Reviewer: cookiebun (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2017 02:29 PM · On: Entwined

This was an absolutely wonderful story.  I will be honest, I wasn't sure I was going to enjoy the back and forth between the past and the present, but you did it so well, and it really worked.

I'm so glad you finished this so I was able to enjoy it so much!  :) 



Author's Response:

Hi Kathy!

I'm so happy you enjoyed this story so much. I assure you after the first chapters, I thought I was crazy to divide the story between the past and the present and I will probably never do it again LOL But I'm glad it worked for you!

Thank you sincerely for your feedback, I deeply appreciate it.

* hugs from France *

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 11:05 AM · On: Entwined

 Wow that had to be a huge surprise to see someone after eight years and he's walking. To bad Brian didn't ask him to sit causing Jesse considerable pain. I figure after the shock wears off they will re-build their friendship.I'm sure Brian still feels a lot of guilt that he got hurt.



Author's Response:

Yes, talk about a shock. Brian will need time to process that Jesse is back. And of course, a part of him will always feel guilty, even though he now understands it wasn't his fault.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 10:01 AM · On: Entwined

  Brian is so scared and so damaged, I'm surprised he hadn't had a heart attack the stress along with lack of sleep, the ,etc. are all stressors add the guilt he has on so many levels, the man is a mess  



Author's Response:

He is. It's painful, really and it was painful to write. But he will learn from that time. He will learn from his mistakes and accepts he is just a man. He will learn to be happy, even if it will take time...

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 09:31 AM · On: Entwined

 I love that Jesse has a good life, walking,still loved by his partner, and a daughter who has made his life so much richer, and a job that lets him help people pick up their life and learn new skills and to feel alive again.This was a wonderful uplifting chapter.



Author's Response:

Aw, thank you! I'm so glad you enjoyed Jesse's story :) Also, again, thank you for all the reviews, it's wonderful of you to take all this time to leave your thoughts. I couldn't thank you enough 

*Hugs from France!*

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 08:23 AM · On: Entwined

Brian can't help himself in his guilt over jesse, he has come self-destructive he's slowly becoming his own worst enemy.



Author's Response:

You're absolutely right :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 08:01 AM · On: Entwined

A wonderful chapter Jack and Gus love each other and the best part Jack and Brian have come to love each other-even with the difficulties Brian and Jack have found a way to love and enjoy each other for the first time in many years Brian has a "Dad". I loved this chapter, how Brian's"family" accepts Jack it was really beautiful!



Author's Response:

The present part of the story is showing how much they had grown up, especially Brian. And now that they had all accept and embrace their feelings, I have a feeling they will be okay. More than okay ;) I'm so glad you liked this chapter!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 07:13 AM · On: Entwined

 Brians a mess, Jesse is a mess, Justin is heatbroken and a mess-chapter had no hope for anyone, when does it get better ?



Author's Response:

It will, I promise. But we're not here yet.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 06:17 AM · On: Entwined

Brian seems sincere when talking with Justin and excepts his leaving as he didn't really give Justin much choice. I don't think Brian would have grown up and felt the way he does about Gus or Jack unless Justin left him and forced the issue.



Author's Response:

You're absolutely right. As painful as it was, Justin leaving Brian had allowed the man to deal with his shit and grow up. As a result, he gained a father and a son.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 05:42 AM · On: Entwined

Jesse wasn't wrong, but Brian was beat down again. Now I guess the booze starts up again and Brian will try anything to dull the pain how much pain can he take before he snaps.



Author's Response:

I guess you're right. Brian doesn't deal well with pain. And at the moment, he hates himself so much he won't even see how much pain he will cause to the persons he loves.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 20, 2017 04:37 AM · On: Entwined

 My God , Spencer is a sicko and a prick, how does Justin find these people? Looks like Jessee is hurt, another burden of guilt for Brian this will devastate Brian. The sex was great between Brian and Justin, it's just for every beautiful moment they share there's a horrific moment yet to come,great chapter



Author's Response:

Yes. It seems unfair for Brian and Justin to have to deal with that when Brian had finally decided to lower his walls to save his relationship with Justin. Unfortunately, it will begins a downfall spiral for them, although, in the end, they will find peace. But in the meantime, it will be hell.

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 20, 2017 01:01 AM · On: The Date

Great second chapter with a very interesting take on Jack Kinney.  Lilly is a hoot.  Can't wait for more.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi Bill!

Thank you very much for your review :) We're thrilled you enjoy Jack Kinney here, who is a very interesting character in that universe. And Lily is so good for Gus, right? ;)

We should have the last chapter up very soon :) Thank you again!

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 06:10 PM · On: Entwined

Spencer is creep and I hope Justin finds out the truth



Author's Response:

He is! The worst kind of creep.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 05:10 PM · On: Entwined

  The pain that Brian has to live with is horrific.The burden of his guilt (in his mind) he just can't get past it.It makes you wonder how people manage to pick up their lives and continue on.



Author's Response:

I agree. The pain Brian experienced helps to understand why he is so fucked up in this story. And no, for now, he hadn't dealt with it at all. I agree with you that dealing with that kind of drama seems nearly impossible. It takes a lot of courage.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 03:54 PM · On: Entwined

Well, Spencer showed his true colors! what an asshole, Brian finally said he was sorry but was it to little to late?



Author's Response:

Maybe not too late... this time. But Spencer isn't done, unfortunately.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 08:47 AM · On: Entwined

So glad Justin went with Brian-he has a way of calming Brian, with the two of them to split up helped find Jack before nightfall. Justin helped keep Jack calm and telling him Brian just wanted to find him, poor Jack thought Justin was an angel even when being brain damaged Jack had a point.



Author's Response:

Justin is exactly what Brian needed to deal with Jack's disappearance :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 08:01 AM · On: Entwined

 Spencer sure didn't help the situation, in fact he added to it, what's his problem?



Author's Response:

Spencer has a problem, you're totally right :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 07:32 AM · On: Entwined

 Brian and Gus love their soccer and Gus was delighted when scored a goal against Justin, wonder what happen to Jack? Brian will make heards roll is an understatement.



Author's Response:

Brian and Gus have a very special relationship :) Having a child has changed Brian for the better

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 06:59 AM · On: Entwined

more insight on their earlier life. Want to know what went wrong so they can get together  



Author's Response:

You will :) Thank you for all the reviews!!!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 06:36 AM · On: Entwined

I like this story and appreciate that even if Jack is brain damaged he and Brian can have some type of relationship and with Gus.Brian still seems frighten of Justin, that Brian can just maybe hook-up again and he needs someone special like Justin who can love him



Author's Response:

Brian has come a long way since the time when he refused to even speak to Jack. You will understand why as you read, and more precisally, who has given him the strength to do so. And yes, Brian is still scared, but he has grown up a lot since his teens, so he will face his fears. Lucky us ;)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 05:47 AM · On: Entwined

It must be tough for Brian--abused by his father, then losing his mom and sister only to have Jack in the state he's in so diffrent than the man Jack is now! No wonder Brian has a character of not loving anyone he really distrusts people no one loves the man (in his eyes) he's afraid to love.



Author's Response:

Brian in the past has yet to come with closure regarding what happened to his family. This trauma is going to dictate his life for a long time, and trigger his insecurities until he will stop running away from his demons. It will take him a long time, though.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 04:15 AM · On: Entwined

I feel really sorry for Justin, everyone questions his decisions. Tyler I can understand, but Daphene, Emmett, Debbie, mikey, and Jessee, I dont understand why it's their business. Brian and Justin's mom make sense to me, but to have every meeting every word examed puts Justin on the offensive. It would drive me crazy to have people who feel they know whats best for me. He is not a child.



Author's Response:

All Justin's friends are just trying to help him understand why he is suddenly changing his mind. They don't necessarily judge him, but considering he had been adamant for years not to speak about Brian while trying to convince himself that Tyler was the good guy, it's surprising to them that he changes his mind so fast. Now, we all know why he does, and I'm pretty sure his friends will support him, no matter what

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 19, 2017 02:41 AM · On: Entwined

Calling Brian a coward certainly got his attention but also got Brian to admit Justin was  different which what Justin wanted. Great chapter



Author's Response:

Brian is still resisting, but not for long :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 07:25 PM · On: Entwined

I can see Tyler's point, we know why Justin left Brian, yet it doesn't explain why after eight years he suddenly came home. I think it was love, some would call it fate ,Their love still burns for both them they just seem to get out of their own way.



Author's Response:

I think Justin wanted to come back, but genuinely didn't realize it until he saw Brian again. One thing is sure, Tyler didn't stand a chance... Brian and Justin's love story is one of those grand romance when nothing compared in that fic, even though they broke up. I can't say it enough, the angst will be hard to take at times, but their love is magnificent.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 02:41 PM · On: Entwined

 Hot chapter,Finally some of their secrets are being talked about , Justin is strong but the bashing made feel he was weak and Brian realizes that he was a victim of a hate crime he was to be blamed for some homophob's gutless attack



Author's Response:

They're making progress! Justin is a strong young man, but Brian is bringing back his will to live his life to the fullest. And Brian is falling for Justin :D

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 01:40 PM · On: Entwined

mikey being a friend to Justin will take a adjustment on my part. In this chapter the best scenes were between Brian,Gus, and Jack.Brian doesn'tr know how to explain things to Jack No one can resist darling Gus--not his daddy or his grandpa. I hope Jack never learns of treatment of Brian in his youth I think it would break a man that is already broken--it's sad Jack wanted to hug his son and Brian couldn't accept it, but they both have no trouble with Gus.



Author's Response:

Brian still needs to come to terms with his feelings regarding his father. I'm glad you're enjoying Jack's character, though, since he was such a bad father in the show. And for course, both Brian and Jack are totally enamorated with Gus! I promise Brian and Jack's journey will be fulfilling, even if not always easy.

As for Michael, he is a good guy in this story.  Brian will have some hard times to deal with, and he needs a friend.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 10:49 AM · On: Entwined

 Justin isn't the only one wondering about Brian's past. After talking to Jesse maybe Justin will talk with Brian in the privacy of their apartment.  



Author's Response:

I have a feeling things are going to heat up very soon :D

Thank you again for all the comments! I hope you will keep enjoying this one :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 10:03 AM · On: Entwined

Men often accuse women of talking to much, but these two men are fucked because they rarely talk at all. Brian is in a tough place will a ailing father, but running from Justin isn't going to make things better and Justin has his own secrets, both have demons but they are running away instead of fighting for each other.



Author's Response:

It's hard to fight after so many years, but I have a feeling they will not give up ;) Have I said that Justin was very persistent in this AU? 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 09:23 AM · On: Entwined

 Finally, the Brian we love! caring and kind when he tries to help Justin with his panic attack both of them hurting for different reasons and neither can seem to talk about it



Author's Response:

Yes! And this is just the beginning :)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 08:53 AM · On: Entwined

A great chapter, I wish we knew what is wrong with Jack. Brian is hurting the last thing he needs is mikey or Deb,he needs the comfort of Justin even if he doesn't know it



Author's Response:

We will know, I promise :) Michael and Debbie are a great support in that fic (Michael is not in love with Brian in this story). I have a feeling you don't like them much, so maybe try to imagine them as being someone else LOL And I agree that Justin can help Brian to deal with all this. But will Brian will let him?

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 08:24 AM · On: Entwined

Don't really understand Brian acting like a prick to Justin, the boy was ill and Em wanted to care for him, at least Justin found his voice and took Brian down a peg or two



Author's Response:

Try to think Brian pre season 1, and you have asshole Brian at his best. He is a prick to Justin, mainly because he can but I have a feeling it's his way to hide (and refuse to acknowledge) his attraction to Justin. Now, Justin might be unsure of himself, but he can stand for himself. Lucky us ;)

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 07:17 AM · On: Entwined

Nice chapter, Brian always had so many demons and shortcomings in his own mind, In some ways Brian is more damaged that Justin. It's no secret they still love each other but have a hard time communicating



Author's Response:

I must warn you Brian is very fucked up in this story, especially in the past. in the present, he needs to process that Justin has come back. And communicating? What's that? LOL 

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 05:59 AM · On: Entwined

I was really surpise by Jack, we never got to see Jack much on the series. Finding Brian helping the an eat they had up and down relationship to say the least. Can't wait to see where this goes. great chapters



Author's Response:

Jack is very different in this AU. I hope you enjoy their relationship!!!

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 05:28 AM · On: Entwined

I never would have thought of Brian and Em being roomates, I would have thought more than five hours together Brian would have hung Em in the closet-- you know Bri's personality and living with someone so totally opposite in most ways usually spells danger watch for the studs moods! 



Author's Response:

The beginning of the story is inspired from a book and Emmett and Brian were the closest to the roommates in that book. Fortunately, the place is huge and Brian is barely there LOL.

Reviewer: bktush (Anonymous) · Date: February 17, 2017 04:44 AM · On: Entwined

I Just saw your new story "The Date" and waned to refresh my mind of this story first, of course and story with Gus is always special to me, looking forward to the rest of this story, your have the best ingredients-Brian, Justin, and Gus



Author's Response:

Hi!

First of all, thank you for all the comments! I will answer then now :) The Date is very different from Enwtined, since it's mainly humor and romance while Entwined is as ansgty as it can get. I hope you will like it nonetheless. I promise some very cute moments, if you can stand the angst. Thank you again :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: February 16, 2017 06:36 AM · On: The Date

Great Story.  Brian will do anything for Gus!  I smiled all through this story.  Bill



Author's Response:

Hi Bill!

Brian would do anything for Gus, you're absolutely right. Thankfully for us LOL

Thank you so much for your review :D We will post the next chapter very soon :)

~ eureka1 and Alois

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 09:52 PM · On: The Date

Omg that had me chuckling so often and at times lol, my husband kept frowning at me. Thank you so much I can see this being the only way it actually happening

Author's Response:

Hi Chris!

We're so glad this story made you smile and laugh :D Thank you so much for this wonderful review which made us very happy. And all our apologies to your husband ;)

More to come very soon :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 08:59 PM · On: The Date

Brian never does anything he doesn't want to do so that means he really wanted to do this.



Author's Response:

Hi there!

Yes, Brian can't do anything he doesn't want to do. And lucky for us, he can't resist his son :D

Thank you sincerely for your review! More to come very soon :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~ 

Reviewer: WhiteSnowFox (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 04:10 AM · On: The Date

Haha!  This is so great!  Gus is very informed on the meaning of flowers!  I can't wait for the next chapter.  :)



Author's Response:

Hi Kristine!

Gus has done his homeworks as how to be the most prefect gentleman to his date. Of course he would know all the meanings regarding flowers, right? LOL

We're very glad you're enjoying this! Next chapter will be posted in the next couple of days :D

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: sfscarlet (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2017 03:48 AM · On: The Date

I rmember the original conversation and am glad that you decided to develop it into a full story.  Can't wait to see how the "dates" go.  Enjoying reading in this universe again



Author's Response:

Hi Sandy!

We're so thrilled you are interested to read more about this universe. Thank you very much for your never-ending support on this story :D

The date will begin in the next chapter, which will be posted probably on Friday :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~ 

Reviewer: boo (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2017 03:32 AM · On: The Date

Very SWEET!



Author's Response:

Thank you! We're so glad you're enjoying this :D

More to come very soon!

~ eureka1 and Alois ~ 

Reviewer: LauraB725 (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 02:09 AM · On: The Date

This is so sweet! Entwined is one of my favorite story's and I love how you tied this into it. I'm so enamored with Gus ... he's way beyond his 8 years and he sure is teaching our beloved Brian a thing or two about romance. Although, I do believe Brian is a closet romantic...he just needs a little shove to show it and who better to shove him than Gus?! Kudos for another great story! I can't wait for the date!!



Author's Response:

Hi Laura!

First of all, thank you for the praise about Entwined ** blushing ** We couldn't leave this verse without exploring the double date Gus mentioned in the last chapter. Of course, Gus just have to look at Brian with his 'You're the best dad ever' look for Brian to do exactly what his son wants him to do. And forcing Brian into romantic gestures is too hilarious for us to spare him ;)

Thank you so much for your wonderful feedback Laura! The next chapter will be posted in the next couple of days :D

~ eureka1 and Alois ~ 

Reviewer: Toto_too514 (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2017 01:17 AM · On: The Date

What a lovely surprise on this Valentine's Day! And it fits so perfectly where Entwined left off. I'm almost as anxious as Gus to go on this date!



Author's Response:

Hi Trish!

Aw, we're so happy you're looking forward to read about the date :D We thought it to be appropriate to write a Valentine's day story in the Entwined verse. This story takes place after the last chapter of Entwined, but before the Epilogue and Brian's declaration to Justin. But Gus is doing a perfect job to turn his father into a hopeless romantic case LOL

Thank you so much for your wonderful review! More to come in the next couple of days :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

Reviewer: Camlaw (Signed) · Date: February 15, 2017 01:15 AM · On: The Date

OMG!!!! What a treat! I loved the Entwined story so much so discovering this little gem made my day. I cannot wait for the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Hi Carrie!

Thank you so much for your enthusiasm! We're so thrilled you're enjoying this so much :D  ** blushing and performing a happy 'à la Jack Kinney' dance **

Next chapter will be posted very soon! (in the next couple of days)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~ 

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