Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2018 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 1: Rage in LA

I enjoyed yor account of the Hollywood arc. So happy Brian decided to pay Sunshine a visit. Please update soon.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I will! I've got the next 3, almost 4, chapters drafted. 

Reviewer: Predec2 (Signed) · Date: November 02, 2018 10:45 AM · On: Chapter 1: Rage in LA

Hello, Amanda! Welcome to Midnight Whispers!  We're always delighted to see a new writer on MW.  Thank you for choosing to post your story on here.

I would have loved for Brian to have carried through with his desire to go visit Justin on the show, so I'm happy to see you writing about it. I really enjoyed your first chapter, and think you have their characterizations down very well. I will be looking forward to reading the next part! 

If there is anything I or the other admins can do to assist you in any way, please do not hesitate to ask.  FYI, I did space out the paragraphs one extra line to make them a little easier to read.  Hope that's okay. Did not change anything else. :)

Thanks again for joining MW and posting on here!  It's great so far!  ~Kim

 

 

Author's Response:

Thank you for the warm welcome! I figured it was time to stop lurking ;)

Brian is my favorite so to hear that I got the characterization down is a huge compliment!

Thank you for the help with formatting - I'm not tech savvy at all so I welcome any and all help!