Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Forbidden fruit
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 05:17 PM · On: Chapter 29

Omg if Justin had walked in a few moments earlier he would of had his heart broken. I think he will find out and be hurt by Brian’s lies. I do hope that that won’t drive them apart because they make a great couple. A jealous Justin is one Brian needs to watch out for lol. 

 

Brilliant work as always xx



Author's Response:

Yes, he would had his heart broken for sure. I don't think he will find out, there's ne big reasons for it. They do make a great couple and Brian needs a jealous Justin by his side to put him on right way again lol.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 02:28 PM · On: Chapter 29

C'est pas vrai mais qu'est ce qu'il cheche Brian ? Qu'il veuille tromper Craig ok mais pas devant Justin! heureusement que Justin lui pardonne mais je ne pense pas que Brian doive jouer à ça ! il perd tous ses repères face à Craig Justin est plus mature que lui! Merci pour ce chapitre

Author's Response:

Brian est un peu confus dans cette relation. Je suis d'accord, à force de chercher à tromper Craig, il va commettre des erreurs qui risquent d'être dangereuses. Craig le déstabilise énormément. Justin est plus mature que lui en quelque sorte et c'est ce que je voulais montrer. Le plus jeune peut s'avérer le plus réfléchi au final.

Merci pour ton commentaire :-)

Reviewer: nkaur550 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2018 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 29

Damn...brian is attracting trouble everytime..lols..this will not be good when he will need craigs support..lols..he will definetly not be getting brownie points in future.

Thanks for the chapter.



Author's Response:

Brian is indeed a troublemaker lol. About Craig's support, I don't think he will need some lol. No he won't for sure.

Thanks for your review :-)

Reviewer: Happy Gamma (Signed) · Date: January 18, 2018 06:41 PM · On: Chapter 29

Don't like Conor, but then again I don't like anyone who tries to come between our guys.  At least Brian took a stand.  Can't wait until the bombshell hits Craig. Good chapter



Author's Response:

Not sure that a lot of readers will love Conor lol. Brian realised he was doing something wrong and pushed him away in the end. Justin is the only man in his life. It wil come, the bombshell will come, don't worry.

Thanks for your your review :-)

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