Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2014 08:56 PM · On: Lies, Lies, Lies

Love the twist about Ray, and Joe being such a jerk. I hope brian is able to open up to Justin about his childhood and finds out about Ray. Alive or dead.

Author's Response:
Brian won't have a choice...he'll need to.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 09, 2014 05:01 PM · On: Lies, Lies, Lies

Great chapter, as always, I loved even though there weren’t Brian and Justin interactions. It was fascinating to read about Justin’s history of telling lies – he’s always been a clever lad. Poor Jennifer, she must have had thousands of suggestions and thoughts as to why Justin wouldn’t pick up a girl.

I was amazed by Justin’s grandmother beliefs! That God make us different colors so we knew who to marry. I don’t know if it is your idea or if it’s actually common, I haven’t heard it before! So interesting and amusing to think of it!

Again, I don’t remember – what is Justin’s relationship with his Mom now? Do they talk? Damn, I really can’t wait to re-read this story!

Poor Justin, I know what he feels – how it is to keep getting deeper and deeper into the world of lies… I do think he should end it all and tell Brian the truth. After all, he didn’t commit a crime – these lies are bad, but sort of harmless. Maybe they even helped him and Brian to get closer.

Thanks, great chapter, and great title! Can’t wait for the next one!

Author's Response:
Yeah...Jennifer was going out of her mind trying to figure out Justin's "deal."

Actually, I'm embarrassed to say that that was MY grandma's belief. She told me that when I showed interest in a non-white person growing up. I was 8.

Justin has a pretty fabulous relationship with his mom in this story :-)

Justin doesn't want the information he provides about Ray to hurt Brian. So he's bending over backwards to find out as much as he can first...then he'll be prepared ... have a better idea how to help Brian.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 06:27 PM · On: Lies, Lies, Lies

How many ways can one lie? I think you caught them all in this chapter. It was funny all the ways Daphne came up with for Justin. Interesting how his mom never noticed how Justin was, the clues were there. Red nail polish, five course meals. lol. Justin need to come clean.

Author's Response:
The Daphne-Justin part was such fun to write :-)

Yeah...Jennifer knew. She just didn't want to know.

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 10:49 AM · On: Lies, Lies, Lies

Justin should just tell Brian about Ray. Holding back any longer could ruin things between them.

Author's Response:
Justin is trying to protect Brian, but, you're right, it's a BIG risk.

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 08, 2014 10:09 AM · On: Lies, Lies, Lies

I really enjoyed Justin's back story. Haha What an unfortunate way to come out to your homophobic father. I wonder if the driveway was ever completed. LOL

I love Justin and Daphne's inventiveness when dealing with the fix-ups; Priceless.

I like this chapter as it seems to be a little more light-hearted, yet you finished with us wondering what Justin will find. I can't wait for your return.

Cheers :)

Author's Response:
I'm glad this one was more light-hearted. That's what I was going for.

Yeah...worst coming out story ever...or the funniest anyway :-) driveway was completed, but by someone else.

Justin-Daphne are a good team :-)

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