Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For How Sweet It Is
Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2014 04:52 PM · On: The Part Where Everybody's Vulnerable

Interesting chapter! Who is Ray? The moments between Brian and Justin are so passionate, you really know how to write them!  



Author's Response:

Jack's brother. He was the only one in Brian's family that treated him well and tried to stop Jack from abusing Brian. This story is long, and I had Brian thinking about Ray only here and there (he tries not to because it makes him sad). 

 

Awww...thanks! That's such a wonderful compliment :-)

Reviewer: Flossee (Signed) · Date: October 02, 2014 03:00 PM · On: The Part Where Everybody's Vulnerable

I've been looking forward to finding out what happened to Ray. 

I understand why Brian wanted Justin to buy him a toothbrush, but isn't it funny, in general, the idea that a person's tongue and other body parts can go in to someone's mouth, but not their toothbrush.  LOL 

Cheers :)



Author's Response:

I mispoke on the comment for the next chapter...I meant to say that it's been about 27 years.

 

I couldn't agree more about toothbrushes...always seemed silly to me.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2014 07:20 PM · On: The Part Where Everybody's Vulnerable

My question is, will Brian tell Justin about his uncle?



Author's Response:

that's definitely the question :-)

Reviewer: JAZZEPOET (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2014 01:06 PM · On: The Part Where Everybody's Vulnerable

I can see now that this isn't going to be easy for Brian.

Author's Response:

Definitely not. But there will be a neat twist :-)

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