OMG! YOU'RE BACK! THANK YOU... I have to go back through and reread... review to follow later!

HUGS  ~Cathy

This was an awesome story. I'm so very happy I finally had the time to read it. I was so happy Brian and Justin met and found something in and with each other. They both needed and deserved it.

Now that you've finished this, I have a favor to ask of you. I would love to see some of your other fics finished, but especially your sequels. An Inconceivable Secret is upmost on my mind. But it would be nice to see, Destiny Meets Reality, too.

Thanks for the Christmas Story.

Hugs ~ Cathy

OMG!!!!  I LOVED THIS!!!!! 

Very original idea. I marvel at what you put together. I can honestly say, I don't think this 'plot' has been done before. It was so very good.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Interesting concept for a story. It's a good first chapter. If you are interested in a beta, let me know.

Hugs ~ Cathy

I hope Luke is an understanding person. I wonder what everybody wants to talk about... Chris Hobbs? Protective Custody?

Thanks for the awesome update.

I've started reading, 'Entwined', while also reading the comments along with the chapters. As you know, almost all of them contain comments about reading this story and it's sequel. So, I stopped and thought I'd at least read this Prologue to see what all the hype was about.

I can say it's a different idea for a Brian/Justin fic, and it might be hard to read in parts, as I'm one to really love Brian and Justin as partners. That's not saying I won't give the sequel a try. I'll have to think about that after I finish reading, 'Entwined'. (which BTW I'm about to start Chapter 6). It also helps to know they will end up together. I'm, like others, fail to see Brian really falling in love with someone else. I can see him having a 'fuck-buddy' relationship, but Brian was not the type to give his heart away, especially after giving it to Justin, who had to fight for it for five years. But each to their own. I read people have given you grief over it, and that's the most ridiculous thing I've ever heard. My motto... don't like it... quit reading it. Authors put a lot of time and heart into writing a story. Who do they think they are for tearing the authors apart?

Anyway, this Prologue tore at my heart. Justin is obviously in deep pain because of his decision.

Hugs, Cathy

LOL! Too bad Justin was having a dream. I would have loved tp see him stab Ethan in the eye with the violin stick.  Shut that "cat's fighting" music off!

Hugs ~ Cathy

I really liked this. I wish it could have been like this in the show. Cowlip sure had screwed up that whole arc. You just made it better.  Thanks for that.

WOW! Imagine me finding this! I didn't even know you used to post on MW! I recently just read and caught up with, 'SOWK Part 1'. My user name on Kinnetik Dreams is bjluv... so you will understand where this review will originate from. When I wrote my review for Chapter 21, the last chapter written, I said, "I know Ethan is suppose to enter this story, but after everything B/J have been through together, starting the business together, legally raising the nephews together,  JUST HOW?"  When we left off with Part 1, Michael was pretty well ostracized from the Avenue and family because of the interviews given to Bellweather, and Lindsay's rights have been revoked after leaving Gus in the car, and she is settling herself into a job with Gardner. Anyway, those events just don't lead up to Mel and Lindsay having an anniversary party, and Brian even talking to Michael at said party. So, you really have me confused.

With all that said, this was an excellent story. Loved Justin hitting Michael. It was so long over-do. I was disappointed we didn't get to hear Lindsay, Mel and Debbie groveling for Justin's forgiveness. But was really satisfied how B/J got back together and stayed together. The classic though, was Michael thinking Brian was coming to Babylon to be there with him, when I believe he went there to the only rub it in Michael's face that him and Justin were back together.

And where does Michael get off thinking he didn't need to apologize to Justin? To me, the rest of the 'family' shouldn't have forgiven Michael until he did. And how was he able to get another artist for RAGE? What about Justin's contract? Granted, I was filled with glee that he had to return the money for the issues purchased, just don't understand how he was able to pull it off. Am I assuming Michael expects Justin to resume drawing the comic?

I went to youtube to listen to the titled song... it was so beautiful... I'd never heard it before. Thank you for another amazing story...

XOXO ~ Cathy

Kathleen, you've taken the cake with this one. Ethan was ALWAYS a mistake. I hope he was embarrassed as hell watching them kiss like THAT, in front of him, in front of everyone. You lost little boy, Go Home! Find Another Muse.

What a nice scenario. I wish it would have happened on the show. I hated that arc.

Hugs ~ Cathy

Alana,

I finally broke down and read this. When I first noticed the story, I think it was the fourth chapter. I debated about starting to read it, as I noticed the slow updates. (I'm not saying this to be rude.)  It's just I wasn't sure if you were going to continue. As I was looking around for something to read today, I came across this, and thought, "Why not?"  I am so very HOOKED now. I notived it has been six months since your last update, so I really hope it is soon.

I adore anti-Michael amd Lindsay stories, and this is definitely not disappointing. I'm very concerned for Gus' state ofmind, but if anyine can help that little boy and bring him back to being himself, it will be Brian and Justin.

I really hope Ben demands MIchael to leave. Hopefully, Michael won't have a pot to piss in. It's the only way to maybe keep him out of trouble.

I almost cheered for joy when Jennifer told him she would have him banned from the hospital. She should have followed through with it anyways.

PLEASE update soon. As I said, I'M TOTALLY HOOKED!!! Very good story.

HUGS  ~Cathy

and I will name it Cassidy... what an awfully cute story.  Thank you for sharing...

Hugs, Cathy

Yeah that was probably the worst time in the show that he could get cancer, what with Vic just dying. Sad arc on the show. But, you showed just how loving Deb could be.

Hugs, Cathy

Oh... Very, Very Sweet. I loved it. Ethan really did a number on Justin. I have to wonder if Ethan did anything else to Justin to make him so skittish.

Hugs ~ Cathy

I just read this and the Prequel, and I just LOVED it. The only thing that could have made it a 'little' better, was by Michael not getting the rescinding of the restaraining order, and continued with his crazy ways. ;)

I just finished reading this. I had thought about doing that a long time ago, and never got around to it. I love your story-telling ability. This was so good. I am going to go onto the sequel, whether that is tonight, is uncertain. I needed a break from writing tonight, so started this, and couldn't quit.

At first, I thought Michael was supplying the girls with drugs, but then thought it had to be something else, if they were both holding down jobs. What I can't understand, why he is not in jail. They had video of him supplying a drug to Justin... I would think a video of Brian's... beside him publicly admitting it... they could have gotten from Babylon. Let's not even start on the extortion charge, which carries at least a year in jail... more depending on the monetary amount.

But, it's sounds like Mysterious Marilyn (MM) is in their corner.

Awesome story,

HUGS  ~Cathy

Great Update... I can actually see the panic of Brian after that dream.  Take your kid to work day at kinnetik... too funny.  Brian's gonna love that... NOT!

Was happy Team Brian showed up with shaved heads and hats in support of Brian. Also, with Jennifer now on board, things should prove interesting.

Was surprised to see Brian having chemo. Usually first time cancer patients have radiation. It's debiliating, but the treatment doesn't hold the same conditions of 'hazardous to your health' that you listed. It's more toxic free. There's no glove usage needed by caregivers and there aren't 'poisons' caregivers have to worry about. It's also the preferred treatment. Both my mother and grandmother have had cancer. (knock on wood-it has passed by me so far). 

The 'Locks of Love' donation from Bree and Daphne was an awesome addition to your story. I've had two granddaughters and one daughter who have done the same, and when I turned 50, I decided to grow my hair out, so I donated the required 12 inches of hair. Cancer survival patients are dear to us. Now, at 62, I'm growing my hair again. I need about three more inches. It's still a rich brown, but has graying on the fine hairs around my ears and forehead. I'm lucky that way. One of my grandmothers was almost 70 before she had started graying.

But your story is so well-written concerning Brian. You've showed all his vanity, while allowing us to see his vulnerability due to this horrible disease. So, keep up the good work, as I'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Hugs, Cathy

Stupid is as stupid does. Michael is such a dumb-ass. He just can't help himself, can he?

IMO, Brian was way too lenient with Michael. Brian should have told him this wasn't about Mikey's little feelings, but about what was best for Brian. Why did he call him and have him come over and tell him right away? I thought he was gonna wait for Sunday. Maybe Michael's queen-out could have been tampered down if Brian told Michael with the rest of the family. Just let him try and say,  “Those silly kids have no idea what to do for someone who is as sick as you are. No wonder you’re just skin and bones."   Bree would have chewed him up and spit him out, hearing him say something like that. What did Michael think Brian would look like after a month of chemo? A picture of health and beauty? Those "kids" probably took better care of Brian than Michael ever could have. And the, Are you cured?  is an even bigger sign of his stupidity. Cancer doesn't get cured.  It will go into remission, because there can always still be cancer cells in your body for years after your treatment is complete.

If I was Bree, I would told Horvath to arrest Michael for stalking and assault. She is only 16 - Michael should have never grabbed her. What if she wasn't a black belt? He could have seriously hurt her. And the police should have arrested him for making a false report. Michael wasted valuable police resources. Deserved a fine in my book. (Guess you can tell I'm not a Mikey fan!)

Word on the street says you got your ass kicked by a girl.  Yeah, take that Mikey! The "kids" should give an exclusive to the local newspaper. Or regal it at the Sunday dinner.  How much do you wanna bet Michael can't keep his mouth shut and breaks down crying to Debbie, before Brian has a chance to tell her, himself? (Ooooh... I'd love to see that happen!) Because just like canon, Michael told Justin they shouldn't say anything to Brian, and what does Michael do? Shows up there, and the first thing he does does is cry and tells Brian he knows. So, Michael deserves the Wrath of Kinney!

Good chapter! You spun Michael so well. Looking forward to your next update.

XOXO ~ Cathy

What the Hell is wrong with Michael? Last chapter he refers to Bree as "Miss Butter Wouldn't Melt In Your Mouth", and this chapter he's talking about Lindsay like she's just being a nuisance. Isn't he aware Lindsay slept with Sam? Is he really that blind? Then saying Lindsay was upset for Brian not spending time with Gus? Crass, Michael. And what's with Michael asking Brian if he can get him a blanket, or if he needs to put his feet up? What is he? 80? That's way Brian didn't tell you Michael. You would have treated him like an invalid during treatment, instead of just taking care of his needs. It's a small consolation, but at least Brian is not allowing Michael access to the loft anymore. Still, a smackdown might be warranted.

Lindsay is a piece of cake. Jealous much, Lindsay? You weren't the only woman Brian slept with, and you aren't the only woman who is a mother to his child. So, get over yourself. Bree isn't going anywhere. Instead of Brian trying to find ways to spend time with Gus, I think when he's feeling a little stronger, he should get a lawyer and see if an addendum can be added on the parental rights form for visitation with Gus. After all, Lindsay and Mel broke the condition as to why Brian signed his rights over. They are no longer in a loving relationship, and they aren't two loving parents to Gus. With all the child support he pays, (which wasn't part of the agreement) and the fact he has a million dollar life insurance policy out on himself, should tell the judge something. Besides, I think if Brian told Lindsay he wasn't going to support her and Gus anymore, and that he was cancelling the policy if she kept Gus from him, she'd hand Gus over in a heartbeat.

And Don't Get Me Started On Debbie! What's her problem? Joan and Claire are the last two people who should be told about Brian having cancer. They would start to plan his funeral, and try to figure out a way to get Brian's money. I really hope Brian has a Will in place leaving everything to Justin, Bree and Gus. Oh, and let's not forget the $1.00 for each Joan, Claire, John and Peter, so they can't contest the Will. Debbie needs to butt out. If she tells Joan, she might be banned from Brian, just like Michael.

Brian and Justin certainly could have left Debbie's when Justin suggested it. Haven't they ever heard of "taking your dessert home with them"?

Thanks for the update. Looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

ONLY ONE CHAPTER LEFT?????

Just starting reading this story... OMG...it is so heart-wrenching. Oh, this chapter made my heart ache for Justin. To feel that amount of pain, and not feeling like you have anything to live for... I can't imagine someone so young going through all that. Then, to have a homophobic pricipal, who places Justin as the perpetrator, and Hobbs as the victim... well, now I hope that since Jennifer knows, she will jump into action, and does something with that school. Hopefully, now that Justin has finally called Brian, he tells him everything about what happened and how he chose to deal with it. Who knows... maybe the Hotline can help deal with the homophobia of the school...  Thank you for this wonderful story. It has to be hard writing with the emotions of Brian and Justin in this scenario... Looking forward to more...

Hugs, Cathy

Very happy Ted voiced his opinion and that Brian took him up on it. It's a step in the right direction for both Justin and Brian. It's been nine years since Mikey died, and I don't think it's healthy for Brian that he keeps talking to pictures of him. That's too long to have your life on hold. It's like Brian is half dead. So, it's good that he not only gave Justin his phone number, but they are gonna finally meet. Something they both really need in their life right now.

Maybe Brian can talk some sense into Justin that he needs to go to the police for help if the school continues to do nothing to help one of their students. Chris can't be allowed to keep doing what he is doing, expecially now when he has taken his hatred for Jusin outside of the college grounds. What if Chris catches Justin someplace when there wouldn't be any help for Justin if he needed it?  Nobody did anything in canon, and we know how well that turned out. And with his actions getting worse, Justin needs to get a stop put to it.

Maybe Justin and Brian should seek the help of a therapist.

Will Debbie be in the diner? What will her reaction be when she sees Brian with Justin, and can tell there's feelings between the two men?

Thank you so much for this update. I didn't realize that you updated this amazing story every Monday, until you mentioned it in your response to my last review. So thank you for that. You just made my Monday's brighter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Shame On You!  You forgot the TISSUE WARNING!  So very happy Brian found Justin in time. I hope nothing is wrong internally. At least anything more serious than broken ribs. But there needs to be something medically wrong in order for the police to get a conviction of assault. Sure, Chris didn't do much during the actual beating, but he ordered it, but he did hit Justin in the stomach and kicked him in the leg.  So Chris was a part of the beating bullies. I am so waiting for Chris and Company to get what should be coming to them. Maybe they could share a jail cell with a couple of queer bears. Ones who will know the exact reason the 'queer hating boys' are gracing that fine establishment.  hehe... (I know I sound vindictive)... but hey! I have the right to feel this way, and a girl has the right to dream.

I'm anxious to see Jennifer's reaction to this turn of events. I don't think she been a very supportive mother of a gay son, especially when she knows there have been problems of him being bullied in school. I'm sure we will have an outraged Debbie when she learns of the events that took place in Justin's life that night.

Thank you for this wonderful update, and so looking forward to the next chapter following this cliffhanger.

XOXO ~ Cathy

This story is kind of a different read for me. I don't think I've ever read a story where Brian is so shy and unsure of himself. But this was a touching chapter. Nice encounter between Brian and Justin. So it's kind of a nice change. And the words of the song were very befitting.

I wanted to point out to you, that you might want to change the word 'perfusion', to 'contusion'. The difference is that you can't see a perfusion, except on an imaging scan, as it's a scan of the heart muscle. Whereas a contusion, is an eruption of blood vessels.

Thanks for this update. I look forward to your next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

I'm happy the boys' night out was good for both of them. It sounds like this 'publid display', is something Justin needs to discuss with his therapist.

Why dod I get the feeling Brian wll help Justin with his college tuition? I can see one of two things happening. Either Brian helps him get a job at Vangard, and with that, he will be offered help with schooling the company pays for, or Brian loans him the money.

Justin better get in and report Chris and the other boys to the police, and soon, before too much time elapses. Besides, what is gonna happen if he runs into them again?

Hugs ~ Cathy

Just read the 3 chapters you've written, and have to say, I really like it. PLEASE let Michael bother Justin, again... hehehe...  But, you need to get Justin's mind changed about that trip to visit Ethan.

Just read this, and I loved it. You write the time era so well. I'm off to start the sequel. Can't wait to see how their lives have advanced together.

Hugs ~ Cathy

Well it seems the plot thickens for Justin. It will be interesting to find out what the call entailed from  Jeremy Knott, and why he was calling a year after Ethan's death. What did he hope to gain from calling Justin? Is it something to do with money? And what could Jeremy have had to say that has Justin frazzled, so that he hasn't even contacted Mel yet?

Tara seems like a flighty person. Why would she want Mika over Nanette? I know she was Ethan's best friend, but there must be some hidden reasoning that she wants Ethan's child and not Justin's. Did she have a thing for Ethan? Was Ethan playing both sides of the fence? Or, am I thinking too hard, and reading too much inbetween the lines? Besides, how could the courts give her bi-weekly custody when the kids didn't even know her? You'd think they would have set up supervised visitation until she got to know the kids. Anyway, doesn't she realize you don't separate twins? Especially when that child doesn't even know her? But at least Mika is back with Justin and Nanette. And, isn't Tara the least bit cautious regarding Gregor Michaels? Is she aware of the truth behind the elevator accident? Or doesn't she even care how Gregor seemed unconcerned regarding Ethan's death? Do her morals matter nothing, as long as she gets to 'go play violinist'?

Ahh... The Big Q! We all know how much Brian hates the Big Q. But I suppose he can't be quite as fussy when you have three teenage boys. Will Brian cave and buy Mika what he was wanting, and in the meantime letting Nanette pick out something, too? Do I see another dining experience at "The Plank"?

Will Brian end up getting Justin a job at Vangard? Or will they eventually branch out on their own? Maybe Justin could have some input on Peter's art. I'm impressed that Peter at 13, already has connections with PIFA.

Looks like Brian has his hands full with those three boys. Gus seems like he's too much like Brian. John sounds like he has a death wish. And, dear sweet Peter. The Artist. Sensitive and caring. Maybe being around Mika and Nanette will help with his self-confidence, and eventually help with the stuttering.

I guess I have a lot of questions going on in my head. But, I'm sure you will cover all that in your story. I'm really impressed with your writing and story telling. It's hard to believe this is your first  attempt into writing. It's really good so far.

Thank you for your update, and I look forward to your next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Pro Bono, huh? That's a good thing. And Brian realizing Justin didn't have the money, so Brian offering to pay Mel, against Justin knowledge, is really sweet. I have wonder what is up with Justin's former attorney, Leland Cross. Is it just that he is imcompetent, or is he friends with the lawyer Tara hired? Or is he (and the judge) chauvinistic pigs who believe a woman's place is in the home? I have to wonder if the reason Melanie doesn't want Justin to tell Leland about her, is maybe after she gathers all the information, she wants to be able to hit Tara and her lawyer hard, right between their eyes. Like I said in an earlier review, you don't split twins up, and you don't give rights to a small child to a person they don't even know.

So we've heard a little more regarding Tara and the twins. I don't think we will learn anything different regarding who the children's fathers' are. Doesn't mean I'm still not anxious to hear the DNA results. If for all intent, Justin and Ethan were married, were they in a civil unionship? Or were they both registered guardians of the children? There has to be some way to keep Mika with Justin instead of him reverting back to Tara because she's the biological mother, and Justin has no claim to him. This story also has a different arc by Justin's mother not wanting anything to do with him.

When Peter first brought the movie down, and Brian said, "Again?"  I was so sure the movie was going to be "Yellow Submarine". (you know - the artist angle, and all). So you surprised me with James Dean. But it was a really cute concept. "It’s like our movie.” 

It's really terrible the homophobic kids Gus and John are hanging around. It sounds like Gus needs some of those classes, "Understanding Gay People". Brian better be sure he forewarns Ted of this development before he leaves, as I don't see Gus being friendly towards any gay man right now.  Teddy is going to have his hands full. I also have to wonder if Brian was aware of the boys having to deal with this crap when they were younger. I hope this new devopment won't cause any conflicting emotions towards building a relationship with Justin. I see Brian as a parent that would give up something for himself, in order to make his children happy.

Another great update. Looking foreward to your next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Am I surprised Ethan sounds like he was a jerk? Not in the least. I think with all the strangeness going on in Justin's life right now, Justin should stay aware of Anthony and be vigilant of where of Anthony's whereabouts are right now.

So happy Vance gave Brian the perfect out. Brian couldn't have quit, even if he wanted. So now he has the perfect opportunity to start his own agency, and in turn, solving Justin's dilemma regarding money.

Are our favorite boys headed for a hot and heavy night?

Looking forward to the next chapter.

XOXO ~ Cathy

Oh my ever-loving god!  Please tell me you wouldn't do that. Don't make Nanette not be Justin's. I'm worried now that Carter knows that Ethan is dead, that he might come back for Mika. There's no Ethan standing in his way to his child anymore. The only possitive thing about it, when Tara learns the truth, she might stop the whole parental rights thing.

But, I don't get how Ethan and Mika could look so much alike, if Ethan wasn't the father. It didn't sound like Carter and Mika carried any resemblence to each other. Strange.  

Justin needs to call Brian. He needs to be talked down. It would also prove to Brian, that Justin wasn't sleeping with some guy, while his kids were in the house. How are they going to get to the truth of this, so Brian doesn't think the worse thoughts about Justin?

XOXO ~ Cathy

So sorry I missed this last update. I know there for awhile, I was extremely busy, and then I got this ahir-brained idea to try my hand at writing, so I've been busy. Anyway:

Well, we found out the reason Brian was so bent out of shape that night in the car with Justin. It was like a 'Wow' moment. That bitter old battle-axe, caused her son to be retarded, and instead of owning up to her mistake, she hid him away like a dirty little secret. Is Joan dying or something? I can't remember if that was covered.

Anyway, that was enlighteing. I'm sure Brian would have loved to have a brother growing up. Thanks for the chapter.

Hugs ~ Cathy

Just realized you had two chapters posted. Anyway, i have a feeling Justin is right to not trust Ethan. I'm wondering if he's broke, or at last falling on hard times. Why else would he be staying at Brian's, and purchasing a new coat with Brian's credit?

If Ethan is ignoring Justin, and acting like Justin's not even there, do I dare guess Ethan's got his sights set on Brian? If he was there for Brian after Emmett died, I could see him falling for The Face of God, Master Kinney. I just pray Brian never returned his affections. By the time this end of stay comes, I hope he hasn't wrecked to much havoc.

I'm off to read the next chapter. 

Hugs ~ Cathy

The house is a flurry of activity. Soon, very soon, we will know what Ethan is playing at, as they are getting ready to go down to the party now. I'm really hoping Ethan's plans get foiled. Somebody better be observant enough.

Lindsay sounds all prudish, (and homophobic). She sounds rather entitled, too. She'd do best to remember her postition within the household, or Daphne may have her job. (I'm assuming she's above Daphne is in her position, as Lindsay sure likes to play 'boss'.) It would be so sad if Master Kinney overheard one of those snide comments.

Looking forward to the next chapter. Thanks again for this update.

Hugs ~ Cathy

This was very sweet. Claire and Brian finally reconnecting after all these years due to a misguided attempt to spend the holiday with their mother, turned out to be the best thing for them. They can finally become a true family.  Maybe Joan's house will go to hell now, that it had gay sex in it, hehe.

I thought it was kind of funny when Claire asked Brian, Do you know anything about him?  No Claire, I picked him up on the street corner on my way over here.  Come on, Claire, get real. And what's with that poor excuse of an ex-husband? The boy's didn't sound too enthusiastic about going with him.

When Joan said she made green Jello salad, I had to laugh. Ever since years ago when I watched Chevy Chase's, "National Lampoon's Christmas Vacation" and the crazy aunt brought the green jello with the cat food in it, I haven't been able to eat it. Give me any other flavor than green, and I'm good.

I really liked this. Maybe you can do a follow-up on that Christmas family get together.

XOXO ~ Cathy

OMG! I had loved the banner for the story, but certainly did not notice the black nail polish until you pointed that out. I have to wonder, "Why Gale?"

Hey Heidi, Sorry I just got around to reading this today. I checked when it was first posted, I even copied and pasted the chapter, because the story plot appears that good to me. It just so happened, two other people asked me to beta, and after I said yes, I got 25 chapters to do. So, I have been swamped with that. Finished it earlier today. I had a few WIP's to catch up on, and I planned to read yours. I remember seeing Kim post that two other chapters of your story was posted, so imagine my surprise when I only found one tonight, and that it was only posted today. Did you have a lack of comments? Isn't there a read count, though? That way you should be able to see how many people are actually reading.

Well, I for one, found this first chapter to be well written, and the plot and story already has a good feel to it. I know I will definitely keep reading, so I really hope you will keep writing and posting. You mentioned MPREG, but said, Nobody will be having any babies, but you will have to be able to stomach MPreg. Does that mean that there will be boys in the school pregnant, but we won't have to read about them having the babies?

I did check the tags for your story, hoping for an Anti-Michael fic. I figured if Brian was coming into the school, we'd have dear, little Mikey falling all over himself, trying to be Brian's choice. Hmm, instead we got no Michael at all. But I suppose Debbie's little angel, won't need a school like this.  We DO have Hunter, though. Still cocky and wanting Brian. Perfect canon characterization.

Did Emmett mean he could count the gay kids on one hand, or does he need all ten of his fingers and thumbs? ;)  I hope Emmett gets to continue to be a part of this story, as he wasn't listed in the characters. I really love Emmett, and it will be fun to see if he's still campy as a teenager, and if Ted will hold the dorky persona.

Hmm, so Brian is still the gorgeous one, even as a teen. I had to chuckle when he mentally went over his list of items to unpack. I heard nothing resembling underwear and socks. And no wonder there, that he zeroed in on Justin, by just a glance. It's a shame they are not going to share a room. Maybe someone will be nice, and switch with Justin...

Loving the story, and I hope we soon get an update.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

First I want to apologize for the delay in my reading this update. Just remember if it takes me a day or two after posting to get to it, I will. So, please be patient with me. I have no intention of abandoning reading it.

Okay, So it sounds like the green-eyed monster is starting to rear it's ugly head. I realized after my first review when I mentioned the tags, that was something I was going to point out, saying that, if we didn't have an Anti-tag, that jealousy would be the next best thing. Am I surprised that it's JUSTIN who's jealous; you bet. I really thought it would be Hunter, as the jealous one. So a surprise it was, but your way, makes for a more interesting story. But, Justin needs to get himself in there, and make himself known, while pushing Hunter away, because Brian really wants nothing to do with Hunter. Something Justin would know, if he would assert himself a little more, and not allowing Hunter to get his chance with Brian. But hopefully before long, it will be Hunter as the jealous one.

If  can interject a request here, a little flirting I can deal with, but please don't let it go any further than that between Brian and Hunter. Not sure if I could stomach that. Besides, I don't believe you would be that cruel. ;)

So, Mikey's working the in the diner. I kind of get the impression that Brian and Michael got into some trouble, and while Brian's punishment was to be sent to this school, Debbie's making Michael work at the diner, hoping to keep him out of further trouble.(just speculation.)

I do have one question for you, due to your response to my last review, do you have this story totally finished? I can see you must have chapter five written, but the whole thing? That's quite a feat. Well, I'm looking forward to that long of a story.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

Loved the update, although the boys should of paused in their ascent, and got to 'know' each other a little better. The stairwell can be a good meeting spot. *hint - hint*, as you can hear anyone coming and going.

The next time the guys meet in the kitchen, they will have to have two spoons with one ice cream, because if they won't touch and have fun, their spoons can. (Okay, now I'm getting silly.)

So, Brian did get caught shoplifting, but Justin was simply slacking off in school and his parents wanted him to learn discipline. I think I'm following along okay, but I'm confused at your response to my last review. Based on your comment you're going to get a little confused in the near futute. I've reread it two times, trying to pick apart what you meant about what I said, and can't come up with anything. I know I mentioned homophobic parents, but, hmm...

Well, I'll keep reading. Still loving it, and waiting to find out what Emmett, Ted and Hunter did to be sent there.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

I could almost see and hear Justin's eyes roll at the suggestive way Hunter was talking and eating his fries, (that's if you can hear eyes roll ;) But I swear I could. *chuckling* He's really kind of a skanky character. The Littlest Hustler:

I think it’s only a question of time before I get into his pants. Dream on, lover boy.

At least I’m a professional. Yeah, that's exactly why Brian wouldn't want you. 

I'm wondering why Justin is a little standoffish when it comes to affection and sex. That ought to make for a nice reveal later. But it's evident he's not comfortable by lewd remarks and obscene gestures.

Then...

Touché for Justin. Decided to play a little dirty. Watching the common room, and yes he won. He got 'the man'.  Put that in your pipe and smoke it, James.

{{{Big Hugs}}} Cathy =^..^=

My deepest apologies V, for just now getting around to reading this. I have been extremely busy what with the holiday season, and then I had this stupid little story in my head after reading one of Deb Tanner's plot bunnies, so I had to try and put the story to paper, so to speak. My first of two chapters will be posted tomorrow. I'm actually kind of proud of it, as I've only written a one-shot before. Now on to your story:

So Justin had the notorious Mr Gold pegged for a fraud and he actually turned out to be one. I look forward to Brian pressing further charges against him. I hope the chin rat has to look Brian in the eye in a court of law and know just what Brian thinks of him. And Justin said just what I did; I wouldn't have called the nefarious creature a carriage either.

I'm a little bewildered by Emmett's picture in the banner. I have to wonder if Brian speaks of him and his past with Emmett, or if the illustious Emmett comes back from the dead. (I question if he had actually died.)

Onto the next chapter. I absolutely love this story, and I love a Lord Brian. Couldn't you just see Gale in a role like this? I certainly can.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Oh-my-oh-my! This just became intriguing and sort of a mystery. I really have to wonder how long Emmett has been with Carl. Was he hurt and then confusion set in? Or, did he actually fall in the lake, losing his memory? Or has Ethan struck again?

*Hurries to read next chapter*

HUGS ~ Cathy

I have to admit Emmett is worse off than I originally thought possible. I'm starting to think Emmett wasn't hurt after all, but saw something so horrific that it's put him in a permanent state of shock. It's almost seems like something is on replay in Emmett's mind, and he can't stand to be touched. Hmm... Can't stand to be touched. Am I reading too much into this? Maybe, just maybe, he was physically hurt, and can't face the truth of that knowledge.

Can I say how happy I am that Brian seems to still love Justin as much, if not more so, than before? But how awful for Brian to see the man he once loved in this condition.

HUGS ~ Cathy

V, This subtitle - Same Time, the Drawing Room at the College - I think you mean Cottage.  I also have to ask why it seems almost every chapter has a [J1] in it, at least once?

Ahh, Forgot Mr Bruckner. Let's see, Hmm... we still have Blake. Maybe he's the doctor? ;) I'm sure nosy, aren't I? At least I found out where Mel is.

I can only wonder about Ben's visit. As Justin said, Brian has been through so much lately. Wouldn't it be wonderful if it was about Emmett, and not the vile Mr Gold? Oh my, my mind just went someplace again. Did Ethan confess to further crimes? Did HE hurt Emmett? Wanting to erase anything standing in his way to Brian's bed? (I must admit it seems my mind is running away with me - with this story.)  But I love mysteries. Mary Higgins Clark is my favorite author for a reason.

I'm so happy Emmett appears to be a little more settled. And I love how Drew seems infatuated with Emmett. That's just how it should be.

Unfortunatley, I didn't have a 'next' button at the end of this chapter. Now I have to wait, like the others, to see what Ben's arrival at Britin means.

I love this story, V.  Thank you for continuing with this and doing the Christmas arc.

HUGS ~ Cathy

I'm squinting my eyes and covering my ears as I ask: is this the end? There has to be more!!! *Cathy bats her eyes at Vered*   Please, please, pretty Please?!?!?

Oh, I have a solution... We have New Year's Eve shortly, andd there's Valentine's Day in a hair's breath over six weeks. There's always one-shots to let us know how they spent the day... *hint, hint*  Okay, I will get serious.

This was a beautiful, light-hearted chapter! And the whole story was entertaining. A little suspense. I know I went overboard  in my speculations about Emmett, but maybe if you revisit this arc, we will find out something new regarding his mental state and memory loss.

Justin Taylor... Will you please do me the honor of marrying me?  *wipes at face*

Must be the dust. Yeah, dust.Seriously, though. What a gorgeous ending. *sniffsniff*

Thank you for this awesome story. I do have to say, I know what you mean about Kim. She's a goddess in her own right. If it wasn't for her help, I wouldn't have even been able to post my story.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Oh Wren, I absolutely loved this. But anything from the Homecoming Series, is sure to be a given. Gus sounded so grown up for thirteen. But with Mel and Linds, it's only natural that he's had to. I love the sound of Justin and Daphne having a little baby. Seeing the story through Gus' thoughts and reflections was a nice change. And leave it to the three wonder twits, to tell him that Dus and Brian broke up three times, instead of the once. (but we won't mention the chin rat.)

The bedroom was a very nice surprise and the best gift Gus could have been given. It's what he wanted more than anything. And Brian and Justin realized that, and gave him what he needed. Super Dads.

You had me at "But I'll always be your Sonnyboy."  It chokes me up just writing it again.

Lovely Christmas Story.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Kari this was awesome. Thank you for choosing my suggestion. You did a marvelous job of it. As soon as I read, “West Virginia, if you’ll have me," tears pricked the corner of my eyes and my throat closed up. A year and a half is a long time, but as you  concluded with Brian's parting words, It was only time, proved it was just that. And what a marvelous time they had as they celebrated Christmas at Britin.

Hope your Christmas was special,

Cathy

I was almost leery to start reading his, but I'm so happy I did. I kind of had an idea what I thought it would be by the title, and that's what it turned out to be. Then I thought, what the hell has Justin got himself into here?  But, it all worked out for the best. He sure landed himself a winner, didn't he?  And a cop on top of it. Why not just have a prenup drawn up if he was so worried about his money? What a lying, cheating bastard he turned out to be. fathering a child the first month during your gay wedding, takes all kinds. You should really do a follow-up one-shot about their 'getting to know each other again'. I can easily see a date night, turning into forever-after. Besides, Brian has to let Justin know that there is still a piece of artwork held near  and dear.

Is this where I cover my ears and squint my eyes close and ask if you will please resume with "We The Jury"? I would just love it if you would.

Thanks for writing and sharing. It's been awhile.

HUGS ~ Cathy

Interesting perspective here. Brian has given this some thought. I think he's spot on with his precepton regarding Lindsay, Debbie and especially Michael. Michael won't want Brian to change. He needs to have Brian stay the same. Perpetually young. Always the stud, so Michael can bask in it and say, "look at me. I'm Brian's best friend", and get his noteriety that way. Lindsay isn't much better. How did she say it when her and Mel were going to get married? She'd be disappointed if Brian stayed at a wedding and didn't go to the White party? can't remember just how it was said, but the sentiment was there. You'd think Debbie would be happy, though. Brian Kinney growing up.

I'm happy Brian has Ted and Blake. Brian was right though. He can't have Blake as a counselor, but Ted and Blake are the best friends he can have right now. They have both hit rock bottom. From there, the only place to go is up. It will be interesting to hear Emmet's POV. If we are following canon, and it was season 3 where ted had his bout with Crysatl, and it's five years later, Gus is what? 8? And Brian's 37? Just trying to put an age to everyone.

I remembered after I left my first review that you missed something. Justin mentioned receiving his chip for his first year of sobriety, but you didn't mention Brian getting his white chip for joining AA.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Rody, I just had to read this again, like three other times wasn't enough. I loved this take on Brian and Justin. At first the thought of Brian and Craig as friends was a little squeamish, but you brought it together beautifully. At least Brian was able to teach him something.

“If I say that I’m sorry, can you ever forgive  me?”  Yes, that choked me up. Brian Kinney apologising isn't something you hear everyday.

Great story. I truly enjoyed it.

Hugs  ~Cathy

He was adorable. Just look at that baby face! Oh yeah, I wanted to take him home and rock him to sleep.  Gotta wonder what Brian would think of those thoughts!

Wonder what else they will have besides, food.

HUGS  ~Cathy

Ah-ha!  The loft robbery! (I just wrote my first chapter for the title promp challenge we are doing, and that was in there!)  BTW, are you writing for it?

And yes, Brian took it too far kicking Justin out! I gotta wonder if Brian was upset at work about the loft, or having to go to New York. Probably, both.

HUGS  ~Cathy

FANTASTIC!!!!  Good use of the title prompt. I never even associated this song title with the story title when I first read the title. You did an awesome job!

Both Brian and Justin were cute in this. Each in their own way. I'm looking forward to more.

HUGS  ~Cathy

YAY!!!!  YAY!!!!  YAY!!!!

DING DONG THE WITCH IS DEAD.

AND A WICKEDER, WICKEDER, WICKEDER WITCH THAT NEVER, EVER WAS.

Good riddance you old bat. You condemned your son to hell, while you committed the same and worse sins than he EVER did!!!  Just see if you get to heaven or spend eternity in Purgatory.

You took someone else's son into your home and stood by while your husband beat him. Did it make you feel good that Shara's bastard child was getting the shit beat out of him? Did you think he deserved it, for being born out of wedlock?  And what's this about, you think maybe you’d tell him about us sometime? Maybe not, I know you think that it’s not true, but i really do love you Joan, always have and I always will.  So, old Joanie and was dabbling in the lezzie bed, too? Shara had the best of both world's. She had her 'Jackie', and yet had his wife on the side.  Oh My God, poor Brian. What an awful realization. As if he didn't suffer enough at the hands of his parents growing up, he's left for all eternity with the realization he's lived a lie his whole life. Doesn't even know who he really is. If it's possible, I think all this should stay between Justin and Brian for now. Tell no one in the family, and god forbid, DO NOT tell Claire.

Plus side of all of this. Brian and Justin are married. Is Pepper, Justin and Daphne's child? How old is she?

Thank you for joining the challenge. I love the premise for this story, and am anxious to see where you take it.

HUGS  ~Cathy

The story is getting interesting. I can't wait to see what the phone call was he received before Michael started pounding on Brian's door. (Dang Michael.)

And I am anxious to see what all will happen at Babylon

HUGS ~Cathy

Are we sad to see Ethan go? NOT! Lying, cheating imp! Hopefully, he left nothing behind so he has no reason to come back.

I have to wonder where Brian has been hiding. And why?

So, Michael couldn't help getting in his jab... Brian doesn't do boyfriends. I always have to roll my eyes at that comment. Just because he never wanted Micheal as one, doesn't mean he didn't want one. (okay... I'll keep my inner Anti-Michael feelings to myself.)

HUGS  ~Cathy

Well, I'm LOL... I really didn't think my 'Brandon' comment would reach anybody... But who knows, all the evil guys could be vampires!

Yes, I know it was Kip that Brian admitted to changing. But how many has Kip changed??? LOL..

Super Hugs,

Cathy

Vicky,

This was absolutely, beautifully written. Thank you for sharing your lovely poetry.

HUGS  ~CATHY

Finally I had time to catch up... my poor internet has been so sporadic lately, and the hurricane didn't help. Anyways...

It was nice to know that Justin hadn't lost a baby, but it's also very understandable that, as a father, he would want that experience of it from the onset, and it angered me that Brian was insensitive to that, and kept badgering Justin.

Also, it was very mean of Brian to make the accusation of Justin putting holes in the condoms. I really wish Justin would have really yelled at him and told him he was no better than Michael with his accusations... let Brian be compared to Michael to shut him up!

And WHY after all these years, is Justin referring to Brian as his 'boyfriend'? That just hit me so wrong on so many levels!

HUGS  ~Cathy

Yep,only Brian. This was Wonderful! Thank you!

Now, if you can bring us a "Christmas Present" Christmas chapter, think how excited we all would be! (I'm a terrible, relentless person, aren't I?)

HUGS  ~Cathy

Ah, yes... Zucchini Man. I was hoping if Brian brought the ugly sucker home, (And he WAS ugly)... that Justin would have suggested he do zucchini, and Brian do him... It would serve the guy right! LOL... (I'm cruel.)

HUGS  ~Cathy

Okay... I'm VERY confused... a White Tie was hosted in Brian's loft? with twinkling lights? Michael was in a shirt and tie? Did the other men's tuxedo's have long tails? And the women normally should have worn the old time ball gown with a tight bodice and full skirt. So, with the apparal worn, I'm not even sure that would have been a Black Tie event. Oh well... hopefully none of the anticipated clients will question it...

God, I hated that setting up of Michael getting a dating profile... talk about false info, and ridiculous... nothing like going through a dating service to get a man... especially when there is hordes in Babylon he could meet.

And I loved the touching moment at the end between Brian and Justin.

And YES! I'm all caught up!

HUGS  ~Cathy

HELLO!!! I'm doing my darndest to catch up on all the WIPs that I read. I am SO far behind. Too many medical situations going on.

I'm kind of at a loss what all to say. This chapter, though, really raised my claws (and my blood pressure - which the doctor made me promise to try not do.)

First, I guess I'm curious, is everyone aware that it was Michael that persuaded Debbie to help Rita? And WHY? Because, if Brian is going to back away from Debbie, I sure as heck would expect the same treatment toward Michael. And if anyone knows why he did it - Well, let's just say he will lose Ben for CERTAIN - not that he ever had him.

The girls - boy I have a lot to say there. #1 - if I was Justin, I would DEMAND they come clean to Debbie and Michael about the TRUE parentage of Melanie's baby. Besides, it would save Melanie TONS of grief, and get rid of Michael and Debbie.

Is Lindsay really pregnant? She's HAD a baby, so she should be showing well before Melanie. And if Mel is, and Lindsay's not - *SMH*... those women. And how can you connect with your partner, when you're both pregnant, without the child that binds? Pregnancy should bring out the loving nature of wanting to BE a parent - not give your other kid away.

Is Emmett going to start having memories/flashbacks to the 'Other Time'?

Stockwell must have been really worried about what Rickert would do to his son, and went after him after finding out his son was there.

And Hunter - my heart is bleeding.

Hugs,

Cathy

P.S: I have a friend, who isn't a MW member, who has been reading this story, and she wanted me to tell you how very much she is loving this. She tried sending you a message through the contact button, but wasn't sure if it was operational. So this is from her - I love this story and look forward to every week.