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Sometimes things happen that shouldn't, and change everything. What if Justin wasn't so lucky at the party in 214? Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Violence, What If, Rape Characters: Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes Word count: 362201 [Report This] Published: September 25, 2008 Updated: January 09, 2012
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Date: October 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Changes Your story is simply brilliant. Summary:
***Featured Story for June 2018*** Brian and Justin try to cope with life apart - with the marriage that did not happen and the love that would not die Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Justin/Other-Relationship, Romance, Violence Characters: Debbie, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 61 Completed: Yes Word count: 784049 [Report This] Published: August 28, 2009 Updated: June 01, 2018
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Date: July 31, 2010 Title: Chapter 39: Chapter 39 I can't believe YOU made me laugh ! What a delightful chapter ! Does it make me a bad person if I really don't give a damn about our poor Ted, this time ??? Because, actually, Brian deserves a "little" comfort ! I think he had earned the right to be a bit cruel to those forget his sufferings ! Oh ! And I love what you've done with the "conversation" between Gus and Brian. It's so realistic and so funny! The puppy's name...It's so cute ! and french...Yippee ! And how Debbie is aware of her injustice to Brian ... Sorry, my comments are very "disconnected" ! But I'm still in full euphoria mode...I will do better the next time ! Author's Response: LOL. I love disconnected, because it means you're touching on all the bases that I manage to insinuate into a chapter - and we all know that's a lot to keep up with. And I am delighted if you laughed. That is frequently the hardest thing to achieve in a story, especially a story in which the primary thrust is not funny at all. Thanks so much for your lovely comment. CYN
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Date: May 01, 2010 Title: Chapter 31: Chapter 31 It's always a great pleasure to read a new chapter. I look forward for them ... and I'm delighted that you can continue to write. Hope you feel better.
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Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 This has become boring for you to read always the same things, but I can only repeat again how much I admire your writing. Every detail is perfectly chosen and the dialogue is always brilliant. Finally, I rarely read a story that explores both the deepest feelings and the most hidden. Although I can not help but think that Corey has exceeded the limits in "violating" Brian's feelings of guilt and of shame . « Because I always had to have it my way, and couldn't see that I was putting him at risk. Because I've never been good enough for him. He deserves - so much more than I could ever give him. It's always been . . . my fault. ». That's heartbreaking. It is true that mental suffering is harder to bear than physical pain. "They're laughing," he said in a strange, flat voice. "How does a man do something like this . . . and laugh about it?" I love Christ. He is here to protect Brian and their interaction is amazing. I like the way he manage to help Brian after and during this terrible flashback. The end of this chapter is breathtaking. I'm looking forward for the next.
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Date: June 07, 2010 Title: Chapter 34: Chapter 34
Wonderful chapter, again. Every reaction, every feeling (fear, laugh, despair, love, anger, yearning...) are perfectly written. And for a once, it's all about love. I like this part : Justin pulled back slightly, just enough to speak. "Mine," he breathed, with absolute certainty. "Yes?" That night on the beach is a miracle, and a promise and a commitment ... a time almost too good to be true. I dread the return to reality. Author's Response: I'm delighted that you're pleased, and that you found that night "miraculous". I was aiming for "magical", so I hope I came close. As for the return to reality, of course, it must come, but maybe they can carry a little piece of magic with them, to see them through the rough times. That's what I'm hoping, anyway, and I depend on readers like you to let me know if I get it right. CYN
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Date: October 25, 2010 Title: Chapter 42: Chapter 42 So, now, it's because of Brian if Michael almost died ?? And Michael will never love anyone the way he loves Brian ? What a rude thing to say in front of Ben ! You don't have to worry. Once again, it's brilliant. You perfectly painted the characters we love so much. And Brian hadn't learn yet to trust himself and his feelings...isn't it ? And yet - deep inside, in a place where no one had ever been allowed to enter - a shadow stirred and reached for the conscious level of his mind - and asked a question, age-old and ancient, a question he had seldom allowed himself to ask . . . and never once been able to answer. These two - so beautiful, so bright, so filled with life and joy - they would give him happiness beyond anything he had ever dared to imagine, but what . . . what could he possibly give them in return? The loveliness that dwelled within them, that would create an incandescent joy in his soul, was what they would bring to the life they would share; it was a part of them, which lived in their hearts. Katy's grin was impudent. "Right. Nice ass too." Yes...I second that ! Thank you so much for this chapter. Take care of you and come back when you're ready.
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Date: January 08, 2011 Title: Chapter 44: Chapter 44 I really like your original characters. Especially McLaren. And I'm amazed by the way you can give to all of them a whole story to tell. One again, your writting is brilliant, and I particularly love your description of Brian's feelings (complicated...) on the beach. But, really, I'm afraid for him...Another obstacle to overcome ? Summary:
Brian receives his cancer diagnosis and undergoes treatment. How will this affect him and Justin? Chapter 30: Brian completes his homework assignments with Justin. *finally posted...* *hangs head in shame* : Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Gap-Filler, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, What If Characters: Debbie, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 30 Completed: No Word count: 76020 [Report This] Published: March 08, 2010 Updated: February 27, 2012
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Date: October 14, 2013 Title: Chapter 1: Mirror, Mirror I'm still hoping you'll write again...This is a powerfull story. |
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