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 Brian and Justin are happy to spend two weeks with their son Gus. First everything seems to be perfect, but then everything changes in just one night and Brian has to experience what it feels like when the two people who mean the most to him are missing.
*** THIS STORY IS COMPLETED *** Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Minor Character Death, Violence Characters: Gus Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 31741 [Report This] Published: May 31, 2016 Updated: May 20, 2017
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: An Unpleasant Encounter I just started your story and I love the beginning. Hope I'll have to read it all :-) Author's Response: Hey, I'm so glad you like my story, have fun reading! :)
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Nightmares I love the relationship of Brian and his son. I always thought that Brian could be an amazing father. Poor Paul, it's sad to know how he feels but it doesn't surprising, regarding who his father is. Author's Response: I thought so too, even if there were only a few Brian/Gus scenes it was always so heartwarming :)
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: The Theater Play I really don't feel Hobbs. I'm not even sure that his background story is true lol. I really like your story :-) Author's Response: It's very hard to believe that he has good intentions, isn't it. Thank you so much! :)
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: The Plan What an asshole Chris is. Poor Paul, being raised by him. I'm really in a hurry to see all the bad things Chris planned.
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Bad Decisions I'm really hooked to this story :-)
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Pain I can't wait to read the following chapter. Chris, being able to beat his son up just to get Justin, that's horrible. I love how you wrote this chapter.
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 8: Fear I just love how you wrote this chapter. I could feel the tension. I'm in hurry to read the other chapters :-) Author's Response: Thank you, I'm happy you decided to read the other chapters too :)
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Worry Well the police part can sound like in the tv show actually. I think that Brian will think about Chris being behind all of that.
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Date: April 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 10: Unknown Driver They made some good points already. I think Brian will quickly think about Chris who is probably the person who hate Justin the most in town.
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Date: May 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 17: Epilogue I really love the entire story and I love the epilogue. I'm happy that everyone seemed to get just fine after those tragical times. I was surprised to see Paul living with Debbie but he will be great in this family. I love to see Justin and JR being so close. I think it definitively helps Justin to move on. And of course, our beautiful couple with an amazing and caring Brian. Thank you for sharing. Author's Response: Ohh thank you so much! Yeah, they are slowly moving on. I agree, Brian and Justin together are just the best. Thanks for your reviews! :) Summary:
While packing stuff up in the loft with Michael to move to Britin, Brian discovers something that hits him emotionally. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, Suicidal Thoughts Characters: Brian, Justin, Michael Challenges: None Series: Darkness To Light Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 3159 [Report This] Published: May 03, 2017 Updated: May 03, 2017
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Date: May 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: No one knows This first chapter was already beautiful. I love how you used the images of a journal. Poor Justin, going through so much pain. Author's Response: Thank you, those images were thanks to Kim, she really helped me so much with them. I hope it helped Justin to get that down on paper as it sure helped me.
Big hugsx
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Date: May 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: You can do this. I just so loved this story. Those two chapters were amazing and really well written. I'm happy Justin will find the real happiness with Brian now and build happy memories. Thanks for sharing this beautiful story. Author's Response: You are very welcome and thank you for such an amazing review, it truly means the works to me. It was very hard to write as I was feeling a lot of the dark stuff in this, so it was nice and freeing to get it out. They will build happy memories and I have more stories in my head to come.
Hugs xx Summary:
Brian is having a bad day until a memory makes him smile. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian, Gus, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 760 [Report This] Published: June 09, 2017 Updated: June 09, 2017
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Date: June 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Treasured Memory That was a cute story, I loved it. Gus and Brian were so cute, I love their interaction. Thanks for sharing :-) Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means so much to me. I love them and love writing them 💜 Summary:
This is a sequel to No One Knows, Justin and Brian take Gus and Jenny to see Justin's Grandparents in Canada who he hasn't seen in years because of his dad. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian, Gus, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Original Character(s) Challenges: None Series: Darkness To Light Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 68257 [Report This] Published: November 07, 2017 Updated: March 05, 2019
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Date: December 02, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 I love their wonderful family. The relationsip between Gus and Jenny is really cute. Brian can be proud of his SonnyBoy. Loved the update Vicki, everything is so perfect for our lovers. Author's Response: Thank you so much, I love writing the kids interacting and our boys having fun. I hope you enjoy what’s to come xx
Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx
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Date: November 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 I'm still loving this story. I love the relationship between Brian and Justin, the way they understand each other without a word. Jenny is just precious. I love the bound between Gus and Justin. Brian's reaction to the cockpit thing was so cute. I hope everything will be fine with Justin's grandparents. Author's Response: I'm so happy that you are loving my story, that means everything to me. Lol Brian is a big kid at heart and seeing the Cockpit I'm sure mad him feel really happy like a child at Christmas. Justin and Brian do have a strong bond they came through so much together. I love writing the kids they just write themselves and coming across really well thank god.
Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx
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Date: November 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 I love this first chapter. I love your writing skill and the relationship between Brian and Justin is funny and so tender. After what Brian found about Justin in the previous story, it's great to see them happy. I love their relationship with the kids too. I'm waiting for the next chapter :-) Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed this and how they are with each other. They need a lift from the last one so I hope this will be it. I have lots planned lol. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx
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Date: November 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 Sweet chapter. I already love Justin's grandparents. The reunion was really tender. They cut Craig from their lives because he didn't accept Justin? Well, it's a tough decision for parents but it was motivating by a good reason. I'm looking forward to learn more about Mary and Henry and to read more about this trip.
Author's Response: Oh I’m so thrilled that you liked it and the grandparents, I loved writing them. I hope you continue to enjoy them and all they bring. They have a lot of love to give.
Thank you you so much for the wonderful review xxx
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Date: February 19, 2018 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 Ok so first of all, the joke of Brian with his body part getting stuck into Justin was just too funny lol. I'm happy Brian spent some time with Henry, having so much fun. It's definitively a thing Brian would had love to do. Now, I'm in a hurry to have this karaoke chapter girl lol. Author's Response: Lol I’m so happy you enjoyed it and liked that a Joke it cane out of nowhere lol.
That chapter is next don’t you worry.
Thabk you for the wonderful review xx
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Date: December 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 I really love the relation the kids have together aswell as Britin's one. They are a very happy family and I feel this trip will really help Justin to feel better. Thanks for sharing :-) Author's Response: Thank you so much, I’m so happy that you are enjoying the kids relationship with each other. I love when kids support each other. This trip will really help Justin a lot and maybe heal Brian as well. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xox
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Date: December 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 Brian being afraid of the daddy donkey? That was funny. I was totally imagining the scene in my head of him, hidden being Jenny lol The names for the babies are grear and the reasons why they picked up those names are really cute Loved it Vicki :-) Author's Response: Thank you so much, that means a lot to me. Lol I could picture it as I was writing it, it made me laugh as well. I hope I can write more funny bits for you guys.
The names were really special so I’m so happy they picked them.
Thank you so much for the wonderful review x
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Date: January 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 Another sweet chapter. I love the part with Brian and the cats and when Mary caught our lovers, talking naughty lol. I can't wait to see Brian at Karaoke lol. Author's Response: Lol yeah I loved writing Brian with the cats and I will have fun writing him at Karaoke. This is a fun story to work on.
Thank you you for the wonderful review and for all your support xx
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Date: January 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 Breakfast in bed was really a cute attention from the kids. They do all enjoy their time there and they're all very happy and relax. Now, I'm waiting for my karaoke girl lol.
Author's Response: They really are enjoying their time there and the kids really are so cute. Lol the karaoke is coming in the next chapter I promise. I hope I write it right. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx
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Date: March 08, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 Nice chapter. Gus and Jenny are so cute, I love the kissy stuff lines lol. Brian and Justin are so good together. They're in love, happy and so good together with their little family around them. Brian being moved by Gus's words was so cute and touching Finally, the karaoke chapter is coming. Yes! Author's Response: Lol I’m so happy you liked it and they are are good together aren’t they. Gus loves his dad so much. Yup it’s coming next I promise you. Needed this happy review this morning as I am not very well.
Thank you so much for your wonderful review and support xx
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Date: April 05, 2018 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 Good chapter. I loved what you did with the little idea I gave you. The moment between Brian and Jenny was very cute. It's funny to imagine Brian, singing that kind of song lol. I love they were altogether to share this historic birth. It was funny that while the kids ahhed, Brian wanted to puke lol. He's the big kid lol.
Author's Response: I’m thrilled to bits that you enjoyed what I did with the ideas you gave me. It was fun to write. lol yeah the kids were great during the birth and poor Brian was maybe wondering if there was a sick bucket near by lol.
Im loving Jenny with Brian they really have a wonderful bond.
Lots st more to come and I hope you will enjoy it.
Thank you again for the wonderful review xox
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Date: April 26, 2018 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 Anne making Brian blushed was something very funny and cute. Our brunet isn't blushing easily but a outspoken woman succeeded to make his cheeks turned red lol. The Golf time was nice. The kids were definitively the champions lol. Waiting for the next chapter :-) Author's Response: Lol yeah he isn’t easily embarrassed but she did it 😂 and I’m sure the rest of them thought it was funny as well. I’m so happy you liked this chapter and the fun the kids had with the golf. I’m currently writing the next chapter so I hope I don’t keep you waiting long.
Thank you so much for the wonderful review it means everything to me 💕
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Date: May 07, 2018 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 That was a very enjoyable chapter. I still love the interaction between Gus and Jenny. The present Henry gave to Brian was just amazing and perfect. Brian was I'm sure very sexy in his co-pilot outfit. I would have loved to have him on a flight lol. All the parts talking about Brian and Justin's sex life were funny. Mary is a very funny woman and I just can imagine Justin's red face, especially when she talked about the supplies and the toys lol. You wrote a very enjoyable chapter to read and I'm waiting to read more about their adventures. Author's Response: I love writing the kids and they make it so easy as they are really good kids. Brian would look sexy in anything of course 😜 and I would love him on my flight as well.
OMG I would die if my nana talked to me about that kind of stuff . I’m so happy you enjoyed it and I do have more on the way. I am writing it at the moment. Thank you for the wonderful review xox
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Date: May 25, 2018 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16 Part 1 That was a very enjoyable read. Their family time are always very nice. Brian and Justin, even, talked about having more children. That's great.
Author's Response: Thank you so much, I’m really enjoying writing them they are a funny bunch and a loving family. I’m so happy you are enjoying it x
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Date: June 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16 part 2 Loving this chapter. The ghost town was good with the James Dean ghost. It would have been funny for Brian to be in face of this ghost. I wonder how he would have reacted lol. It was a long read but also a very enjoyable one :-)
Author's Response: Thank you so much I’m over the moon you enjoyed it. Lol I think Brian would have loved it as well but he may have been really scared as well.
Thank you so much for the brilliant review xx
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Date: June 20, 2018 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 Part 1 I love the romantic time Justin and Brian had. Brian did everything perfectly. I love how Justin talked about Brian's generosity to Mary. The time with the kids and the funny stories about Justin was also very enjoyable. Everyone is waiting for a video call but I don't know why, I feel something will go wrong lol. Thanks for this enjoyable chapter miss :-) Author's Response: You are very welcome, I’m delighted you are enjoying it. I’m enjoying writing it. Brian is showing us his romantic side and I love it. It’s great to see different dudes to him. Justi tLkjng was fun to write he loves sharing these little bits of the one he loves. Lol you never know what could go wrong it’s them after all isn’t it lol. Wait and see 😉
Thankyou again for the amazing review xx
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Date: July 21, 2018 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 17 Part 2 That was a very enjoyable chapter. Everyone had a great time. It would be hard for them to go back to Pittsburgh. Brian and Justin are so happy and in peace there. They're enjoying their time. Author's Response: You are right it will be very hard for them to go back to Pittsburgh but I’m sure they will be back to visit lots of times. They are having such an amazing time. Thank you so much for the beautiful review I’m so happy you are enjoying this story xx
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Date: August 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 18 Part 1 Great chapter. Too bad they only have two days left. Author's Response: Thank you so much, I’m so happy you enjoyed it. Yeah it’s sad they only have two days left but remember the grandparents will be visiting them in Pittsburgh so lots of fun a head for them x
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Date: October 02, 2018 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 18 Part 2 These fairs look really good and I like the moment Brian and Gus shared. Only two days left. I hope they will enjoy it the most they can before going home. Author's Response: They are having such an amazing time time i wish it didn’t have to end but they got to home I guess. Thank you so much for the beautiful review x Summary:
Brian and Justin are in NYC with Gus and Jenny and decide to visit Santa. Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Family Characters: Brian, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1413 [Report This] Published: December 20, 2017 Updated: December 20, 2017
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Date: December 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Christmas I told you I'd love this story. Such a cute and lovely story. I love Brian in it, especially the coat moment lol. Thanks for sharing and Happy Holidays! Author's Response: Awe thank you so much, I’m over the moon that you liked it. Lol I love the coat moment as well, I could see Brian saying so it was why it was so much fun to write. Thank you so much for the wonderful review xxx Summary:
Gus wants to surprise his dad and Justin and Mel make his happen.
Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Brian, Gus, Justin, Melanie Challenges: None Series: None Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 4102 [Report This] Published: January 03, 2018 Updated: January 03, 2018
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Date: January 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 That was another really cute story. I enjoyed every bit of it. Thanks for sharing :-) Author's Response: I’m so happy you enjoyed it that makes me so happy that I wrote it. I was nervous about posting it.
Thank you so much for the wonderful review xx |
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