Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Penname: Camlaw [Contact]
Real name: Carrie
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Member Since: June 11, 2008
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Broken Open by Gina Marie Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 293]
Summary: Feature

Brian owns a private detective agency. Justin's an ex-cop from NYC looking for a change. Both have pasts that are about to catch up with them. What happens when their paths cross and their destinies entwine. This is an AU story with our favorite characters. I hope you enjoy, this is a new venture for me and I've no idea where it's going!

Thanks to foreverbm for the lovely banner!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: Chris Hobbs, Debbie, Drew Boyd, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Kiki, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 299229
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2010 Updated: January 20, 2012


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: April 23, 2010 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9

#1....TOO SHORT! 16,000+ words?! Pffft... :D

#2....TOO LONG A WAIT! Having your own life is not allowed. All you are supposed to do is write for the fandom. Had you taken any longer to update I would have had to track you down. And I am not one you want to deal with face to face. Just ask all my co-workers & bosses. :p

#3....TOO DAMN GOOD! I stayed up late and read this chapter with 1 eye open & blurred vision. I love your writing and story ideas. I devour everything of yours I have come across.

And  Lastly...Never Be TOO PROUD....You have a great writing style. Your characters tend to stay within character and yet are entertaining an unpredictable at times. You seem to capture the human emotions brilliantly without being too sappy or unbelievable. So when ever you feel like you are overwhlemed or incapable of writing anything worthwhile, just remember there is a Texas gal out heer routing for you.

Now...bring on the next update already. HA!



Author's Response:

Ok, THIS is a great review!  What a wonderful surprise to wake up to!     Soo.... to respond let me say

#1 - don't temp me!  lol  Seriously, I can ramble on and on and ..ok, you get my point. lol I always feel like my chapters are too long and ppl will lose interest. Kind of like it is at my shop.  People come in, order a hamburger and are totally pissed they have to wait 10 minutes for me to actually cook the thing!  It's like everyone want's everything NOW and QUICK!  I, personally, like to take my time reading, eating, etc.  So I am very glad there are others like you who enjoy my LONG ass chapters.  lol

#2 - I TOTALLY agree!  Damn lotto isnt' cooperating though!  I need to be financially independant so I can just write all day!   Plus, I"m also agreeing with because you scare the shit out of me! LMAO!   I am quite possitive you are a force to be recokoned with so I will endeavor to post in a more timeley fashion Ma'am yes Ma'am!  lol

#3 - Now I'm blushing....I am my worse critic, and hearing that readers like yourself reall, really like me...(taking cue from Sally Feilds's 1985 Oscar acceptance speech) makes my heart swell with appreciation.   

As for the last, that I have a problem with. every time I sit to write I am telling myself, "This isn't good enough"   I bite my nails each time I post waiting to see how the readers will respond.   I am truly humbled by the great response I do get and the constant support of my work.

This review, is proof positive that I must be doing something right!  :-)   Thank you so much for taking the time to post this lovely, heart warming and very humorous (in a positive life affirming way) comment!

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: May 24, 2010 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10

OK....as excited as I was to see your new chapter posted. I have some serious complaints.

First of all, only 12000+ words?! Last chapter was 16,000+ words and I already told you that was too short! You need to REALLY work on this issue.

Second of all, I already told you that you are not to do ANYTHING but write for the fandom. A month to update?! Unacceptable! Dump that store and get to writing! :p

Lastly, I hate that the fandom always makes Mikey out to be such a whiney shit. You were flirting with that same stereotypical characterization in this chapter, but pulled back from the abyss before I started my rant email to you. While we all have our whiney/needy moments, behaving such a way continuously makes one unlike-able and in need of a serious ass kicking if not immediate death. :D

Now on to some compliments!

I LOVE LOVE LOVE the idea of Justin as an ass kicking aryan gang member! While I don't necessarily see Brian as a nerdy/geeky science teacher as much as a walking contradiction as a teacher with amazing knowledge of science yet oozing sex appeal (some character stereotypes just can't be broken. HA!). I cannot wait to see where you go with this.

I love the out of no where pairing of Shane and Hunter. I felt just as shocked as Shane does in this chapter of the revelation of their relationship. This is why you are such an amazing writer. You are unpredictable, entertaining and VERY imaginative.

Ok...enough with the ego stroking. Get to writing! I await anxiously for your next chapter.



Author's Response:

I'm writing, I'm writing! lol   Seriously, I wish I could dump that shop!  It's truly more headache than pleasure and I'm seriously thinking of selling it.  That aside,  I do apologize for the short, '1200+' chapter, I was being lazy that day.  :-)  Second,  I've always loved the B/M relationship.  In all my stories B/M are close, each flawed, but very close.  I don't like Mikey bashing stories.  IMO Mikey was there for him from the beginning, during his worse times, and always loved him.  Maybe too much at times, but can we blame him? It's Brian fucking Kinney we're talking about!  LOL  This is actually the first story I've written where there is tension between Justin and Michael, but I needed to put that in there because Justin doesn't know their history in this story, (yet) and is just getting to know Brian. He doesn't understand Michaels protective, (in his opinion, over protective) feelings towards Brian, and he's a little uncertain as to his own role right now in Brian's life. Their relationship is tenious at best and Justin doesn't want/need Brian's 'best' friend causing trouble.  But eventually, Justin will understand and accept Brian and Michaels freinship.

There will always be a special bond between B/M, in my stories at least. I hated it when the writers of the show turned the Mikey character into some bitch stepford wife who turned on Brian. I felt it didn't 'jive' with the intent of the original Michael character.

As for geeky science teacher Brian...well, I wanted to expand on the 'sexiness' of all that is BK.  Geek can be hot...  :-)  Thanks for commenting!  Your comments always make me smile.

 
And Yet by elvenesse Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 38]
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for April 2017***

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Brian has always hated the country.  And yet...

Written as part of the "Great Outdoors" challenge.  Takes place post-5x13.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Romance, Summer Fan Fiction Challenge Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 691
[Report This] Published: August 22, 2013 Updated: April 03, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: April 03, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow! This story is 4 years old and just came across my radar... So of course I had to read it a few times. HA! You MUST write somemore... So beautiful.

 
Entwined by Alois Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 336]
Summary: Feature

At thirty-one, Justin Taylor comes back to his hometown after having been gone for eight years. But then he runs into his first love, Brian Kinney, and everything is going to change...

 

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Justin/Other-Relationship Characters: Brian, Daphne, Emmett, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: Entwined Universe
Chapters: 39 Completed: Yes Word count: 228640
[Report This] Published: June 30, 2015 Updated: December 18, 2016


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: September 13, 2016 Title: Chapter 32: Chapter 29 - Jesse’s story

You are an amazing writer! I started this story once before and devoured it. I was devastated to read about your writers block. But I know how writing can take a toll on a person, so I'm glad you were able to forge through it and continue to write such beautiful material.

 

You asked once what "us" as a reader wanted to read. Honestly, there isn't anything I would change about this story. I love the flipping chapters back and forth between past and present. I love all the characters. I am so lost in this world you have created that I anxiously wait for your next update.



Author's Response:

I am very touched by your comment, Carrie. Very, very touched... Thank you so much for letting me know how you feel about this story, this makes me SO happy :)

* smiling like a fool *

More to come very soon :)

* Hugs from France *

 
Gay Camp by 7wildwaysup Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 8]
Summary:



It’s true what they say, gay boys have more fun…


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Drabbles, Drama, Humor Characters: Brian, Justin, Melanie
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1789
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2016 Updated: July 29, 2016


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: July 30, 2016 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1


OMG! That was hilarious! Awesome job! And I would so be sneaking over to the boys camp...

Author's Response: Thanks! I'd be right behind you... Later Hon ~ Kathleen

 
Summary: Feature

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When Brian Kinney was fired from Ryder’s advertising agency after being accused of sexual harassment, he never would have imagined becoming an escort. However, learning that his son was seriously sick wasn’t part of his plans, either.

One year later, he meets Justin Taylor, an artist who was attacked at his prom and suffered serious injuries. What happens when their worlds collide?

* STORY NOW COMPLETE *


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other-Relationship, Drama, Humor, Out of Character, Romance Characters: Ben, Brandon, Brian, Chris Hobbs, Daphne, Debbie, Emmett, Ethan Gold, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Molly Taylor, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 25 Completed: Yes Word count: 115163
[Report This] Published: January 21, 2017 Updated: August 04, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: February 18, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4

More!....I want more!....Please?!



Author's Response:

Soon.

~ Alois and addict_writer ~

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: July 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22

You should know that I adore your work...I hate that its ending soon. I hope to get sequels or snippets like with the Entwined Universe...



Author's Response:

Thank you so much for saying that Carrie :) Reviews like yours are truly the main reason why it's worth it to share our fanfic stories.

* A big hug *

~Alois, addict_writer and eureka1 ~

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23

Sigh....what can I say? Do I enjoy this story? YES! Am I sad to see this ending? HECK YEAH! Will I be waiting with bated breath til your next story? OF COURSE!

Util then, I have the upcoming epilogue left to savor...



Author's Response:

Aw Carrie, you ARE so wonderful!!! Thank you so much for your kindness, it means the world :) <3 <3 <3

The epilogue will be up very soon, so stay tuned!

~ Alois, addict_writer and eureka1 ~



Author's Response:

Aw Carrie, you ARE so wonderful!!! Thank you so much for your kindness, it means the world :) <3 <3 <3

The epilogue will be up very soon, so stay tuned!

~ Alois, addict_writer and eureka1 ~

 
Summary: Feature

Summary:  Brian makes a mental note to inform every one of those half-wit baristas what his name is tomorrow. 


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: Ben, Brian, Daphne, Emmett, Justin, Michael, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 9718
[Report This] Published: February 06, 2017 Updated: February 14, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: February 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Saturday

OMG! This fic is so fun. I look forward everyday to another chapter... And I have a theory about the "wrong" name on the coffee cups. What better way to get Brian's attention then to keep messing up his name? And I like that they are all similar to Brian's actual name. So you can just say "honest mistake" when it's anything but.

Can't wait for your next update...



Author's Response:

LOL!!!!!!! I think you are definitely onto something. Very close to something. Thank you so much for reading and reviewing!! I HOPE you continue to enjoy the fic. :)))))))

Olivia.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: February 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Another Tuesday

Noooooo! I want more!



Author's Response:

LOL I feel the same way. I absolutely hate when things end. But I'm so glad that you enjoyed this fic!!

Olivia.

 
Summary: Feature

Justin needs and wants to fulfill his artistic integrity without setting Brian off. Is it even possible?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin, Post-513 Fic Characters: Brian
Challenges: None
Series: The World for You
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8814
[Report This] Published: February 08, 2017 Updated: February 08, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: February 11, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed this. I've read so much anti-Michael fic lately that it is so refreshing to read one where Michael is Brian's friend and their friendship has matured. No jealousy or bitterness but respect and understanding. Where Michael supports Brian's relationship with Justin and is not trying to sabotagr it.

And I love how Brian and Justin relate to one another. I like seeing their vulnerable sides. This is how I envision their life together to be.

Can't wait to read more of your work.

 
Ice To Warm His Heart by mandagrammy Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 25]
Summary: Feature

Happy Valentine's Day!  And what better way to return after three years absence than to offer you a romantic love story, featuring our beloved Brian and Justin.  I really hope you will enjoy it.  I would like to dedicate this story to three people in particular for helping me to return to fanfic writing.  To Judy, my beta, for her enduring support and friendship.  To Kim, for creating this beautiful banner for my story, and for providing the help I needed to continue my work.  And to Bob, simply for being there whenever he is needed.  I would also like to thank all my readers who have always made me feel so good about my work.  


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Post-513 Fic, Romance, Valentine's Day Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5888
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2017 Updated: February 14, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: February 14, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awwwww! This was wonderful per usual. We all need a little reinforcement from time to time. It was nice to see Brian recognize the need and go above and beyond to fulfill it for Justin. 



Author's Response:

Even when apart, this couple was always attuned to each other.  Sometimes they'd get too busy to notice, but their love is now so strong they'll never lose it again.  Thank you so much for such wonderful comments.  Warmest hugs, Grammy

 
The Date by Alois, eureka1 Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 39]
Summary:

 

Brian has to live up to his promise to his son to go on a double date.

 

* STORY NOW COMPLETE *


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Humor, Romance, Valentine's Day Characters: Brian, Gus, Jack Kinney, Justin, Original Character(s), Other Canon Characters
Challenges: None
Series: Entwined Universe
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 15463
[Report This] Published: February 14, 2017 Updated: February 21, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: February 15, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chocolates and Flowers

OMG!!!! What a treat! I loved the Entwined story so much so discovering this little gem made my day. I cannot wait for the next chapter....



Author's Response:

Hi Carrie!

Thank you so much for your enthusiasm! We're so thrilled you're enjoying this so much :D  ** blushing and performing a happy 'à la Jack Kinney' dance **

Next chapter will be posted very soon! (in the next couple of days)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~ 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: February 21, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Burgers and Surprises

OMG! I laughed so hard throughout this entire chapter. That Lily is a trip... I know there is only supposed to be one more chapter, but man this story is just sooo wonderful that I hate to see it end.



Author's Response:

Hi Carrie!

Aw, we're thrilled you laughed at Brian's predicament! ** happy dance ** And yes, Lily is a hoot, right? 

One more chapter for now, but we could be convinced to write more dates in the future ;) 

Thank you deeply for your wonderful enthusiasm :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: February 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Movies and Kisses

LOVE LOVE LOVE! I myself have never seen The Lion King (my tastes are more of the R-rated nature) but I thoroughly enjoyed reading about this particular "showing". And Brian's reaction to Gus' kiss later had me in stitches... "She raped my son?" Priceless!

Are you kidding about possible future stories?! I'll take more dates, drabbles, poems...heck whatever you decide to write as long as you continue to grace us with more from these characters. I ADORE them all sooo much. 

How about a school dance that Brian gets suckered into chaperoning? Just an idea...



Author's Response:

The Lion King is a great movie! I (Alois) have watched it like a thousand times (I was barely a teen when it was released) and I love it so much. It was so fun to write about Gus and Jack's reaction to it with Karynn. And of course, Brian freaking out over his son's first kiss was just too tempting LOL!

Karynn joins me to thank you for all your beautiful comments. It's such a joy to see how much you like this story! and if we ever decide to add to that universe, we will definitely have you to thank for that.

Now, Brian as a chaperon? That's definitely an interesting idea :)

~ eureka1 and Alois ~

 

 
Out to Lunch by Neverbreeze Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Brian left after Justin was bashed. One day Justin's out to lunch with the man in his life, when he runs into a familiar face. It's a one-shot that I wrote a few weeks ago.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, What If Characters: Brian
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2576
[Report This] Published: February 24, 2017 Updated: February 24, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really enjoy your one offs. Keep them coming...

 
Goodbye, Joanie by Alois Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 32]
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for July 2018***

 

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Brian considers that he should thank his mother for dying since, if not for that, Justin wouldn’t have come back after having been gone for eleven years. Although, he is pretty sure she would die a second time if she knew her death had allowed them to reconnect.

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Could be Canon, Post-513 Fic Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 6580
[Report This] Published: April 04, 2017 Updated: July 02, 2018


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: April 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I love this...But then again I enjoy ALL your work....do I really need to beg for more stories?....cause I will...ha...more...more...MORE... Now back to work!



Author's Response:

And I love you, Carrie!!!!! Thank you so so much for supporting me as a writer, it moves me more than I can say :)))))

* A big hug *

~ Alois

 
Misstep by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 98]
Summary:

Brian's offer to help his partner has some unforeseen consequences. 

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Brian, Daphne, Gus, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes Word count: 22518
[Report This] Published: June 19, 2017 Updated: July 30, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: June 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: One Small Step for Man...

OMG! I haven't laughed so hard in a long time. Love this! Can't wait for next chapter...

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: July 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Show and Tell

Another wonderful story I hate to see end. Thoroughly enjoyed it though. Until next time...



Author's Response:

Thank you, Carrie!  I'm delighted that you enjoyed it. :)  Working on a new one right now.  And I hope you'll write another one yourself when you get the opportunity.  :)  ~Kim

P.S. Thanks, too, for joining our FB page!   

 
Therapy Session by Teinisydan Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 14]
Summary:

The boys have a teeny tiny problem that needs solving.

 

Thank you Predec2 for the amazing banner!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Drama, Humor, One-Off Fic Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 694
[Report This] Published: June 20, 2017 Updated: June 20, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: June 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Therapy Session

Tee hee hee! I love these fun little stories. Good job!



Author's Response:

Hehe, I'm happy you had fun reading. Thank you for the comment.

 
Summary:

This is part 2 of the Heels Over Head series. 

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other-Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Justin/Other-Relationship, Out of Character, Violence Characters: Brian, Cynthia, Debbie, Gus, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: Heels Over Head ~ Gap-fillers and Fantasy Seasons
Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes Word count: 310587
[Report This] Published: June 21, 2017 Updated: September 21, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - The Legend of Bountiful Bottom

I LOVE how human Brian is. So looking forward to the next chapter...

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: July 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11 - Life

I devour every chapter of these that you post. I find this version of QAF quite bold and intriguing. Really touches on the complex humanity of their relationship. Plus so far it delves into topics NOT addressed on the show. Like Brian's job's reaction to the bashing. The insecurities and day to day issues that arise dating someone with such an age difference. And course the reactions to such a tragic and life altering real life event (9/11).

I really look forward to reading the rest of this series...

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 20, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Disperse the Clouds

OMG! How I love this series... Thank you, thank you thank you for sharing this here. I can't begin to express HOW much I have enjoyed this series so far....

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: September 22, 2017 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18 - In Shadow or In Light - Part Three

Thank you! Thank you! Thank you! I absolutely adore this fanfic series! The angst and the complexity of the relationships... I am just enthralled reading each and every glorious chapter. So looking forward to the rest of this series....

 
Runaway Bride by Teinisydan Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

Someone was supposed to get married but ends up at the back alley of Kinnetik.

 

 

Thank you Predec2 for the lovely banner.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes Word count: 5818
[Report This] Published: June 22, 2017 Updated: June 29, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: June 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

YEA!!!!!! So excited to see this continued.... Love it! Can't wait for more...



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like this. The next chapter is up already so you can read it. Thank you for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: June 29, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5

Oh what a fun little story this was! I'm sad to see it ending too...



Author's Response:

All good things must come to an end :(. Unfortunately. But I'm glad you enjoyed this little story. Thanks for the comment.

 
Summary:

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You Are Not Alone, inspired by Michael Jackson's song, shows the way Brian copes with missing Justin while he's away.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1931
[Report This] Published: June 24, 2017 Updated: June 24, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: June 25, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: You Are Not Alone

Absolutely beautiful!

 
Next to me by Kurenohikari88 Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 36]
Summary:

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Now that Brian has a way to contact Justin, he'll do whatever it takes to win his Sunshine back.

 

But what happens when our favorite teenager tries to move on from the stud of Liberty Avenue?

 

Will Brian be able to win him over in time?

 

Or lose him forever?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: Don't take my Sunshine away
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 6659
[Report This] Published: July 20, 2017 Updated: July 30, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: July 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Day one hundred and fifty

Oh that gutted me! Boyfriend?! Rocked my world too...Please update soon!

 
Spin The Bottle by Teinisydan Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Another High School story! This time Brian and Justin are brought together by the very cliché game of spin the bottle. Afterwards, Brian thinks Justin is an excellent kisser and comes up with a deal to which the blond can’t say no to.

 

Aribritinxoxo once asked me to write jealous Justin. So honey, you’ll find Justin being a little jealous in this story. Hopefully you’ll like this :).

 

THIS STORY IS NOW COMPLETE

 

Sequel: The Proposal


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, High School/College Fic, Jealousy Characters: Brian, Daphne, Jennifer Taylor, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 38407
[Report This] Published: July 27, 2017 Updated: August 10, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: July 28, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Proposition

I love fics where Brian pursues Justin...Keep it coming...



Author's Response:

Will do, at least for now :). I'm glad you liked the first chapter. Thanks for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: The Proposition

I agree with Nadine. I think Brian IS affected by Justin and trying like hell to figure it all out. My theory is Brian began the kissing pact cause he liked how good it felt for just that brief moment at the party during Spin the Bottle and wanted to explore that. Kissing other boys was more about comparison that just getting off. Cause why does he keep coming back to Justin? What makes Justin so special?

Now if Brian is such a slut as you replied in another review, why the hesitancy of penetration sex? What I vaguely remember about horny teenage boys is that ALL they seemed to want WAS penetration sex. 



Author's Response:

I agree that Brian must feel something for Justin at this point. 

As for Brian being a slut. In this story there's a lot going on in Brian's life we don't see. As we talked before, we can't always know what goes on in other peoples minds and lifes. I imagine Brian being with other guys and having similar rules as he does in the show. I mean the one fuck only policy. Of course Justin is exception as Brian told in this chapter. You can disagree with that if you think some other theory is best for you. 

Maybe this is a cultural difference but in my life when I was a teenager not all my friends that were boys wanted penetrative sex. Some were gentleman when it came to any kind of relationships. Maybe Brian thinks Justin is worth much more than just one fuck to see if it's great. The other guys he's with are just that, other guys. Much like in the show :).

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 11: First Time

Awwww! Poor Justin. So glad he finally told Daphne. He needs a friend right now.

I'm not sure how he should proceed with Brian. I guess it all depends on Brian's next move and what Justin really wants and is willing to do about it.

Can't wait to see what happens next...



Author's Response:

Yeah, he really needs Daphne right now. Happily Daphne's a good friend. Next chapter will be up in a moment :). Thanks for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: July 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Daydreaming

OK! I have a complaint! No Brian and Justin interaction this chapter?! WTH?! Although the Daphne & Justin interaction helps lessen my disappointment. :)

 

Of course I enjoyed this chapter immensely despite the obvious lack of Brian & Justin interludes. :) So looking forward to the next chapter. Be interesting to see Brian's point of view/feelings about Justin.



Author's Response:

I'm sorry you didn't get much Brian and Justin in this chapter. I promise you'll get more in the next chapter and the chapter five is all about them! I have to say this because I don't want you to get your hopes up and them come crashing down but there isn't going to be Brian's pov. We only get inside Justin's head in this story. I'm sorry! I feel like I'm disappointing you in that too. But thank you for the comment. I appreaciate it! Maybe I should make another story with Brian's pov? Actual writers do that so maybe I can give it a shot? Depending of course how readers like this story. 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Jealousy

Uh oh! Poor Justin...So confusing to be pursued like that, made to feel so wanted & desired and then realize your just another conquest. 

I know you said you had no plans of telling things from Brian's point of view, but I'm so curious about his motives and rationales and just general take on the situation. What was his first impression of Justin? Why did he come up with this agreement? How did he feel when Justin stumbled in on him in the bedroom with another guy?

But then we don't always know others feelings & intentions are in real life either do we? :)

Great chapter! Looking forward to the next one.



Author's Response:

Yes, poor Justin. It must be confusing. 

Very good questions :). I intentionally didn't really think about Brian's thoughts when I wrote this because I was afraid I would slip something into Justin's thoughts that he couldn't know and then things wouldn't be logical and because as you said, we can't really ever know what others think unless they tell us. I'm giving everyone free hands with their own interpretations about Brian but now that I think about it I personally think Brian might have always noticed Justin or something but not really had feelings for him. About why he came up with the agreement, I think he just is that big of a slut and wants good time :D. He noticed Justin's talent and didn't want to not use the opportunity. 

I'm glad you liekd this chapter. Next will be up in a moment. Thanks for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 01, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: Bake Sale

I have my own thories about Brian...

I love that Brian's always initiating the kissing. And I think its more than just wanting to feel good...



Author's Response:

I'm really happy someone noticed that Brian is always the one who makes the first move :D. Your interpretation sounds way better than mine. Much happier :). Thank you for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Touches

OK...Brian is captivated by Justin...what other reason would he have to keep approaching him? :)



Author's Response:

Maybe Justin is a pro at all things sexual :D. But yeah, I too bet there's something going on in Brian's head. Thanks for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 04, 2017 Title: Chapter 7: Shower With Me

Wow! Fooling around in the school shower?! Okay...I change my mind. Brian is addicted to Justin. 



Author's Response:

It's pretty risky, isn't it? :D You wouldn't do that with anyone, right? Thanks for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 14: Stares

Great ending! I would LOVE to see this story from Brian's point of view.... Looking forward to your next fic... no matter what you choose to do next. :)



Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked the ending :). I think I'm going to write the Brian's pov but I'm taking my time with it. I do have some of the plot figured out in my head and I think you're going to be somewhat surprised :D. But as always I might write some one shots in between :). Thank you for the comment. 

 
How To Cuddle by Teinisydan Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 23]
Summary:

a guide by Justin Taylor. With examples. 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Fluff, Humor, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 3068
[Report This] Published: August 05, 2017 Updated: August 07, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Finding the perfect snuggle bunny

Brian has to know he's been played. If anyone is the light weight between the two of them, it would be Justin. Plus I can't imagine NO ONE else besides the bartender wouldn't know about the drink switch. 



Author's Response:

Justin is definitely the lightweight. That's why he driank water. I'm pretty sure other people and maybe the gang knew about Justin's little plan but they decided not to say anything :). 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: The big con

Brian is a secret cuddler. In my world he pretends not to be, but when no one's paying attention he's cuddling. :)

He's just so affectionate on the show. So I can see him easily participating in the act, but fighting like hell to call it anything but cuddling. Ha!

So while Justin thinks he's being sneaky and clever, Brian is secretly loving every minute of it.



Author's Response:

I agree. Brian loves to cuddle! He is just way to manly to admit :D. And yes, if Brian knows about Justin's plan to get some snuggle time he wouldn't say a thing. Thank you for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Make the subject think they’re in charge

HA! This was pefect.



Author's Response:

Hehe, thank you :). I'm happy you liked it. Thank you for the comment.

 
Summary:

One shot. Justin goes to Wonderland. 


Categories: Humor, QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Carl, Craig Taylor, Daphne, Debbie, Emmett, Ethan, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Kiki, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3416
[Report This] Published: August 06, 2017 Updated: August 06, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 06, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I must admit, I've never read Alice in Wonderland. I know bits & pieces though.

What a beautiful, funny & touching story. I love that Justin interacts with everyone like they're insane. And I also love how it all ties together in the end...



Author's Response:

Thank you. Even the ones that knew who they were (Blake and Brian) had been distorted a little by Wonderland. Blake freaking out about being a "mouse" and Brian having real cat tendancies. 

 
Patrick by Teinisydan Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 17]
Summary:

Brian knew the first time he heard the name Patrick that that man was trouble.


A jealous Brian story. Predec2 inspired me to write this, so a big thank you and a hug to you Kim, you’re the best :). 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Fluff, Humor, Jealousy, One-Off Fic Characters: Brian, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 3033
[Report This] Published: August 08, 2017 Updated: August 08, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 08, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Patrick

And that was how Brian knew Patrick had to be destroyed.

OMG! I laughed throughout this entire fic. Dancing My Little Ponies for a home page?! Bwahahaha... Your imagination is priceless!

Loved this...Can't stop smiling...Spectacular fic!



Author's Response:

I love making my readers smile! I'm really happy you had fun reading :). Thanks for the awesome comment.

 
Spinning by Galesgal Rated: R [Reviews - 22]
Summary:

Justin Taylor is gone, and Brian has a new friend.    The world is about to spin out of control.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 6 Completed: No Word count: 4572
[Report This] Published: August 09, 2017 Updated: December 31, 2021


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: August 09, 2017 Title: Chapter 5: The Reunion

I think this is a wonderful story. You should continue it!

 
Beneath the lie by Alois Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 80]
Summary: Feature

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Brian Kinney’s life wasn’t supposed to end so soon, but on that fateful night, everything changed in a split second.

*** STORY NOW COMPLETE ***


Categories: FEATURED STORY, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Romance, Suspense Characters: Ben, Blake, Brian, Carl, Daphne, Debbie, Emmett, Gus, Hunter, Jennifer Taylor, Jim Stockwell, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Michael, Original Character(s), Ted
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 125009
[Report This] Published: September 06, 2017 Updated: October 06, 2018


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: October 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - The truth is out

OMG!!!!! I disappear for a couple of weeks and all hell breaks loose.

I am sooo sad to see you go! Your writing is amazing! I always look forward to your posts/updates. And this story had me hooked from the get go...And NOW you have stopped at a point that has me dying to know what happens next.

Plus I was still hoping for another post from the Entwined Universe...

Best of luck to you. I hope you do decided to come back & share your wonderful stories with us. You will be sorely missed! :(

Author's Response:

Thank you for saying that. It's not an easy decision. i have received a lot of requests, though, and was honestly very surprised. Not hearing much from the readers can take its toll on us. And being part of a fandom is not always easy. I probably put too much pressure on myself, but I doubt I will ever change when it concerns my writing. Posting online had been tough lately, and this story doesn't interest that many readers (that's what I thought anyway). Angst is what I love, but not for everyone.

I'm not saying I won't update again for sure. I honestly don't know at that point. What I do know is that I need a break. Whether it's a permanent one or not has yet to be determined. I'm feeling more indecise today because of the requests and messages I had since Sunday, but I'm still careful about changing my mind, because I know what to expect if I decide to post again. 

Don't hesitate to contact me through my mail aloiswriting@gmail.com if you want to keep reading this story. As you've read, for now, I will offer a way for the readers to keep reading via Google Docs. I don't want to abandon the readers (not really) in the middle of the story. 

You've been so nice with me Carrie, and thank you for being such a fervent supporter of the Entwined universe. It's always a pleasure to converse with you. :) 

 

 

 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: October 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Trying to make sense of it all

OMG! You're killing me!

Author's Response:

Nooo!! I want you alive with me! LOL

Thanks for the comment Carrie, I hope you're enjoying the ride :D

 
It's a Puzzle by Predec2 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 37]
Summary:

Just when Brian thinks he knows everything about Justin, he finds out that he doesn't. B/J One-shot, Romance, Humor. Note: This is a repost of this story from several years ago.*STORY IS NOW COMPLETE!*

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Bottom Brian, Brian/Justin, Humor, Romance, Toppy! Justin Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes Word count: 10899
[Report This] Published: September 10, 2017 Updated: October 01, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: September 10, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Awww! This was lovely.... Looking forward to the next part...



Author's Response:

Thank you, Carrie! I'm happy you liked it.  Brian is a sneaky little bastard, isn't he?  LOL!  I'll have the next part up soon.  It's written, but on my other computer (which decided to die of a dead battery, and my charger doesn't want to work - grrr...!) But I think I have it somewhere else. Either way, I'll have Part 2 up soon. Thank you for reading, and especially for taking the time to comment.  ~Kim

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: September 16, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: A different kind of puzzle

UH continue....please!

Author's Response:

Hi, Carrie!  Thanks for reading, and for the encouragement!  I think I'm being talked into it. ;)  Will see what I can do to finish up the last part.  Now I have the "Mr. Peanut" dildo in my head (oops!  wrong way to put that - ha!). Thanks again for taking the time to leave feedback. I appreciate that.  ~Kim

 
Summary:

This is part 3 of the Heels Over Head series. 

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Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Angst, Brian/Justin, Brian/Justin/Other-Relationship, Hurt/Comfort, Jealousy, Suicidal Thoughts, Unsafe Sex, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: Heels Over Head ~ Gap-fillers and Fantasy Seasons
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 349914
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2017 Updated: April 24, 2018


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: October 07, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Voyage

I cannot get enough of this series...so good!

 
Like the First Time by Teinisydan Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 8]
Summary:

Justin finds something old that raises nostalgic feelings.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Canon, Season 1 Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 849
[Report This] Published: October 26, 2017 Updated: October 26, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: October 27, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Like the First Time

Excellent as always... I love this playful & fun little fic. But then I really enjoy your work.

I'm sorry you took down The Proposal. I was away for a couple of weeks & when I came back I discovered it was gone. I hope you change your mind and come back to it someday.

Author's Response:

Thank you. It means so much to know this <3. 

I didn't really want to take Proposal down but not a single comment to the second chapter tells me something went wrong with it. I just don't know what it was. Feels really bad because I worked months to write the story for those who asked for it and then they say nope right from the beginning. 

Anyway. Thank you for the comment. I appreciate it. 

 
Summary:

Brian really wants Justin to move out. A season 1 story.


Categories: Season 1, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Drama, Humor Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 727
[Report This] Published: December 13, 2017 Updated: December 13, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Maybe a Little Chocolate

Ha! Too funny! I think we ALL do this. Gripe and grumble while at the same time looking out for/taking care of the people we're annoyed with. I love reading Brian doing the same thing.

Author's Response:

Hehe, I'm happy you enjoyed this :). Thank you for the comment. 

 
The Proposal by Teinisydan Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 82]
Summary:

A sequel to my story Spin The Bottle from Brian’s pov. You should definitely read Spin The Bottle first to understand this story. 

 

This story is complete.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Angst, Brian/Justin, Drama, Fluff, Friendship, High School/College Fic, Humor, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Brian, Justin, Original Character(s)
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 29979
[Report This] Published: December 18, 2017 Updated: January 23, 2018


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: January 06, 2018 Title: Chapter 6: Pain Management

OMG! I love this chapter...Brian fighting/rationalizing his feelings for Justin is so in character with the show. Keep the chapters coming! I can't seem to get enough...

Author's Response:

Hehe, I'm happy you enjoy this story so much. Mean so much to me <3. Thank you for being such a supportive reader. Thank you for the comment. 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 30, 2017 Title: Chapter 4: Hiding

OH! I wasn't expecting an update so soon! Thank you for the pleasant surprise!

I love the interactions with Alice and Janet. I wonder if Wal-mart has a "Brian" in their stock? :)

Don't let the low read count discourage you. I personally had my house flood Christmas night and haven't been able to do anything since...

Author's Response:

Wal-Mart better have a Brian :). I'm glad you like Alice and Janet. Not a lot of people are fan of original characters. Thank you for the comment. 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 26, 2017 Title: Chapter 3: Alice Needs To Calm Down

OMG!!! I loved the title of this chapter. Brian's whole online interaction with Justin while at the same time being grilled by his co-workers cracked me up!

Why on EARTH would you ever think there is something wrong with this story?! It's wonderful! Looking forward to the next chapter...

Author's Response:

Hehe, glad you're having fun reading. Means so much to know you're enjoying this story.

As for the other thing, the read count sucks. I'm used to seeing the read count rising ups to 200-260 in the first 24 hours no matter what I write. Now it barely reaches 70. Also people didn't comment until I pointed it out. 

Thank you for the comment. 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Harsh Light of Day

You know I always loved this idea! That being said, I like how unpredictable this is. Brian's job, his reasons for not doing homework, his thoughts and feelings during the deliverance of his proposal. I look forward to reading more!

Author's Response:

I 'm glad you like that it might not have been what people expected. I wasn't sure about that. Thank you for the comment. 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 23, 2017 Title: Chapter 2: So Who’s the Bottom?

Ha! Torturous Brian is funny!

Author's Response:

Glad you had fun reading this chapter :). Thank you for the comment. 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: January 03, 2018 Title: Chapter 5: Brian And Justin Sitting In A Tree

I read this late last night so I am just getting around to reviewing...

Um what's wrong with Alice? She seems a little off. :P

Looking forward as always for the next installment...

Author's Response:

She's a 16-year-old teenage girl, who's a hopeless romantic and a big B/J shipper. Don't you recognize the symptoms? Because I do :D. Even thoug I'm not a teenager. Thank you for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: January 09, 2018 Title: Chapter 7: Kiss It Better

I had to go back to Spin the Bottle to remember what Justin was so upset about...He saw Brian making out with someone else in a parked car in the school parking lot during lunch...which had been the cherry on top of an already crappy day for Justin.

I love how oblivious Brian was to it all. He just wanted/needed to make Justin feel better not knowing he was the main cause of Justin's tears. And then the fact that he can't seem to recognize his own intense feelings for Justin that of course Janet & Alice can see. And then Brian making the effort to be "gentle & loving", Priceless.. He's in love with cutie. He just hasn't figured it out yet...

Author's Response:

Ding Ding Ding we have a winner! You interpreted this exactly as I did. Usually people interpret my stories slightly differently, which is great because I get think my stories from another perspective. I consider that I must have done something right when your thought are exact same as mine. 

Gentle and loving mixed with Brian Kinney, I don't think we need to discuss this further. Everybody understands it :D.

Thank you for the lovely comment. I appreciate it<3. 

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: January 16, 2018 Title: Chapter 10: A Closed Door

OK.... See I am with Brian on this. Cause when I read this encounter from Justin's point of view, I couldn't understand WHY this was soooo awful.The act itself seemed to be enjoyed, so I assumed it was the awkwardness afterwards.

Author's Response:

The way I see it, it was really awkward to Justin because at this point he really loves Brian and thinks that Brian doesn't love him and that he doesn't have a change with him. And you know when you're a teenager and hopelessly in love and then you go have sex with that someone. Feelings are messed up, especially in our boys case. But happy to see you're with Brian here :). Thank you for the comment.

 
Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: January 18, 2018 Title: Chapter 11: Hurt

I am SOOO glad you are writing this story.

OK...I love this chapter and here's why. With just seeing Justin's POV you had soo many questions.And now getting Brian's POV you realize that (like in life) they are having communication issues and possess false assumptions of each other's feelings and intentions.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy to hear that :). I admit I didn't handle STB the best way possible but I'm happy I did better job this time :). Thank you for the comment.

 
North Pole Surprise by vic32 Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 12]
Summary:

stories/1820/images/North_Pole_Surprise.jpg

 

Brian and Justin are in NYC with Gus and Jenny and decide to visit Santa. 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Family Characters: Brian, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1413
[Report This] Published: December 20, 2017 Updated: December 20, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Christmas

This made me smile! Too cute & sweet.

Author's Response:

So happy this made you smile. Thank you so much for reading my story and for the beautiful review. Have a great Christmas x

 
Tree Troubles by Wren Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

Summary: Set in an AU in which, after the Babylon bombing, everything goes pretty much back to normal. Mel and Linds re-unite, as, of course, do Brian and Justin, but there’s no running off to Canada, no wedding plans, no bizarro exit for Justin to New York.

 


Categories: Christmas, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4927
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2017 Updated: December 24, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

OMG! This was so wonderful! I loved the different "arguments" over the trees. All of them so in character too. I could so see all of this happening. Beautifully done!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I had a lot of fun writing this one.  Glad you enjoyed it.

 
Christmas Presence by Wren Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

This is set sometime in the first few months after the end of S5. Justin is living in New York. Brian is planning a surprise.


(This was written to allow it to be read as something like a prequel to Homecoming, if that makes any difference.)

 


Categories: Christmas, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Post-513 Fic Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 5279
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2017 Updated: December 24, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Presence

Awwww! I enjoy stories like this. Not too sappy but showing their love for each other.

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I truly believe that they do really love each other and that they are learning (both of them) to find ways to express that love.  I don't think Brian especially is ever going to be a flowers and chocolates kind of guy, but I also think that he's going to be much more "real" in how he shows his love.

 
Summary:

Christmas, three ghosts - you know the deal.  Except this time it's Justin, not Brian, who receives the visitations.


Categories: Christmas, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Post-513 Fic Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 8498
[Report This] Published: December 24, 2017 Updated: December 24, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 24, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Justin's Christmas Carol

I love this!

Author's Response:

Thank you.  I'm very glad you enjoyed it.

 
A Night Out at the Movies by SLHR Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 6]
Summary:

Just a little short one-shot. Older couple Justin and Brian take their granddaughter to the movies. 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Humor Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 529
[Report This] Published: December 29, 2017 Updated: December 29, 2017


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: December 31, 2017 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh this is so cute! I giggled throughout the entire thing...

 
Like a Virgin by Teinisydan Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

A boring Tuesday night forces our boys to stay in and find creative ways to spend their night.


NOW WITH A SEQUEL!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Bottom Brian, Brian/Justin, Humor, One-Off Fic, Toppy! Justin Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes Word count: 6059
[Report This] Published: January 07, 2018 Updated: May 23, 2018


Reviewer: Camlaw Signed
Date: January 09, 2018 Title: Chapter 1: Like a Virgin

Ha! Brian the virgin....Too funny!

Author's Response:

Yep. The tought seemed funny when I thought IC Brian :). I'm glad you liked this. Thank you for the comment.