Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Penname: Gina Marie [Contact]
Real name: Gina Marie
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Member Since: March 12, 2008
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Summary:

Set two years after 513. Melanie, Lindsay and the kids are still in Canada. Justin has returned after a year in New York and now lives at Britin with Brian. 'Rage' has broken the 'barriers' and is now popular in the mainstream comic book world. Michael and Justin have been asked to appear on a talk show (think Graham Norton) to discuss their comic book. Brian and Ben as well as Ted and Blake, and Emmett and Drew tag along with front row seats in the audience.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Humor Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 4427
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: March 12, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Stand Alone

I so loved this!  I'm glad you didn't villify (hope I spelled that right lol) Mikey. I always believed he was just lost in his childhood, holding on to something long gone.  In the end, I'm glad he wised up.  Great story!

Author's Response: Thanks Gina Marie! I'm glad you loved my little fic. I must say, I was tempted to vilify Mikey but I controlled myself, because I agree that he just seems to be stuck at fourteen... at least as far as Brian's concerned. But it was a lot of fun to write and something I had to get out of my head after watching too many gameshow clips online. [BTW... I looked up vilify ;-) and I gotta say it looks better with two 'L's. It looks silly with only one. And doesn't villian have two? LOL Maybe I should look it up, too.] Thanks again!

 
Collar Bound by elyxer Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 109]
Summary: Feature

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Sequel to Leather Bound and it would make more sense if you read LB first. We revisit the gang about a year after LB ended. Brian and Justin are settling into their new life together with family and friends. However, not everyone is happy with Brian's new life.

Warnings: AU, OOC, BDSM, Other Characters, Violence


Categories: Anti-Michael, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Bdsm, Out of Character, Violence, QAF-U.S. FICTION Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 41719
[Report This] Published: March 12, 2008 Updated: May 28, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Everyone Has Secrets

"I have faith in cole....I have faith in cole... I have faith in cole...."  lol.  I am soo biting my fingernails here!  Looks like Brian has a fight on his hands.  Can we just shoot Lindsey?  The way she is manipulating Brian!  Using her son to emotionally blackmail him!   It's criminal!   Great chapter, I'm so invested in this story!  Thanks!

Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I love hearing from you!  Thanks so much for all your support and I'm glad you're enjoying this story.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Stripped Bare

Another wonderful chapter!  (my second time reading it!)  Cant' wait for an update.  Sounds like this custody battle is going to get very ugly...

Author's Response: Hey Gina,  I promise the custody battle will be handled and that's all I'm saying.  *grins*  Glad you liked this one. Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Friendship

This chapter so touched my heart!  It was poignant, emotional and very revealing. I love reading about the lives of all the boys in this story.  I cannot tell you how much I love your writing, and these wonderful characters you've created. Great update.

Author's Response: Aww Gina!  I love your comments.  Thank you so much.  I'm so glad that you like my original characters, because I love them.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: The Surprise Continues

Hot, hot chapter!  But there must be something wrong with me, lol  I kept thinking, "damn!" how can he really enjoy such a great meal with all that sexual pleasure! lol  I must be in a slump, I kept thinking about how sweet that pheasant meat must  be..... lol  Serioulsy, great chapter!



Author's Response: LOL Gina!  I thought the exact same thing when I was writing it, but then I thought, well if Brian had a choice between hot sex and food, what would he pick?  Thanks for commenting!  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: Tides Turn

LOL  I sooo loved this chapter! It was perfect, from begining to end! I will be so sorry when this story ends, but I will look forward to your new stories.

 



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I know what you mean.  I always feel a little down each time I end a story, but who knows...I may do another one.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Miguel's Anguish

Could I love Jake and Miguel any more???

Great chapter! thanks.



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I know what you mean.  Jake has always had a very special place in my heart.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Alex's Agony

Can I just say I loved this chapter? *blissful sigh*

Author's Response:

Hey Gina!  I'm glad you liked it.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Enough is Enough

Love Alex and Miguel!  Hate mikey!  Great chapter, but I'm a little confused. Was Justin Jakes sub at one point? I though Chris trained Justin. 

I'm always so excited to see an update from you, and never disappointed!



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  Justin was Jake's sub.  He was never officially trained by Chris, but I'm sure he picked up quite a few pointers from him.  I'm glad you enjoy the story. Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18: The Confrontation

I think Justin, Chris and Jake should haven't offered so much.  It's not their place, it's Brian's. (at least as far as Gus is concerned ) Brian and Justin's.  I wonder how Brian will feel about Justin, Chris and Jake taking over the finacial responsibility for his son's schooling? and home? 

This chapter was a little uncomfortable for me.  I was not comfortable with the boys stepping in like they did.

Having said that, you know how addicted I am to your stories!  I do love how Justin is trying to help Brian and the way he continues to care for him.

Looking forward to an update.



Author's Response:

Hey Gina!

I didn't want to write another court battle fic.  So, I sat down and thought about what was going on in the story, and how Justin handled Kip Thomas in the show...after thinking about it for awhile, I decided that Justin would do whatever he could to "fix" things for Brian.  As far as the other characters, well they all love Justin and Brian and they have money to burn so to speak...so I can see them doing this to help out Brian and Gus.

How does Brian feel about them doing it?  Well, Brian has come a long way from the man he was when he met Justin.  He no longer feels threatened about asking for help, so he will see this as his friends helping him...nothing more.  I can understand how some people would see this as the guys sticking their noses into something that was none of their business, but this is Jake we're talking about here...LOL.  They look at it as taking care of their family.  How many times did Brian do just that for his friends...remember he even offered to pay for Deb's house.  So, I know it wasn't a perfect solution to the problem, but I do think it works for the story and the characters.

 I'm glad you still like the story.  Keep me informed about what you think of the next couple of chapters.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: Changing Attitiudes

Rest up, but come back soon!  I've read and reread this story, and Leather bound several times!  *sigh*

Thank you so much for hours of wonderful entertainment!



Author's Response:

Hey Gina,

Thank you for all your support through this whole process.  I'm glad you enjoyed the stories, and I hope to hear more from you in the future.  Hugs, Rena

 
Summary: Feature

  This is a sequel to my fic Karma.  You should read that one first or this will make no sense.  Thank you to my Beta Shellie for all her help and to Marilla_pm67, aka Luv_Sam for her beautiful icon.  Is it Karma or luck that determines the outcome of our lives?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 125446
[Report This] Published: March 13, 2008 Updated: March 22, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26

This has been a wonderful, romantic, turbulant journey that I am so sorry to see end!  Perfect ending by the way, I hope you continue to give us a glimpse into the lives of these enchanting characters!  Thank you.

Author's Response:

You are so welcome Gina Marie.  I appreciate every single word you've sent my way these last six months.  It has been an incredible journey with the Kinney-Taylors and their extended family.  Hope to see you again in the future.  Big hugs, Michele

 
You is for Utopia by Sapphire Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 91]
Summary:

A sequel to ‘Atavism’. Several months after Justin makes his critical decision to remain with Brian in Britin, an unexpected event arises to potentially alter the course of their lives together. They’re drawn ever closer as they start down a path they had not intended to take.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Romance, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: Finding Utopia Series
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 31476
[Report This] Published: March 16, 2008 Updated: April 15, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Dream Pool

I love this story!  And that poem is amazing..truly beautiful..  Your talent shines, thank you for sharing.



Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading!! I just love to share ;) I'm so pleased that you're enjoying this and that you liked the poem. I'm glad I managed to dig it up again after all these years (OK, well eight years, but that's a while). Thanks for reading and for your wonderful reveiw!

 
Seed of Betrayal by Wildsweet_angel Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 2]
Summary:

Brian's thoughts about Justin's infraction of the "rules".


Categories: Gap-Filler, Canon, One-Off Fic Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 574
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2008 Updated: March 17, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Seed of Betrayal

you know this broke my heart!  I hated that scene!  Justin should have at least said he was sorry.. oh wait, sorry's bullshit. lol  Brian was right, that infraction was the beginning of the end...

Author's Response:

I felt the same way.  Brian's eyes said it all.  I was so angry with Justin for breaking the rules.  Brian always abided by the rules, and of course Justin broke them yet again with Ian.  Thanks for reviewing hun!

 
Understanding You by Liberty Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 9]
Summary: It has been nine years since the bashing and that means nine years since Molly has seen or heard from her brother. Molly has become a totally different and darker person and she knows the reason her parents sent her brother away. It was because of 'him'. What would happen if she started hanging around Liberty Ave to find out who 'he' was? What would happen if Craig and Jennifer knew? After nine years of no communication Molly and Justin are forced together but it is too late to turn her bitter brother back into the Justin she knew and help him find love again? Will Justin and Molly be able to save each other before the they lose their selves to the darkness?








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Categories: Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, Real Life Issues, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes Word count: 9747
[Report This] Published: March 17, 2008 Updated: May 01, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6:runaway

I'm so glad I got to catch up on this story!  What's going on with Justin?  Does he feel Brian isn't ready for a relationship?  7 years is a long time, and Brian is there for him. Or does he think it's just out of pity, because Molly called him? Oooohhh!  These two are so frustrating!  lol But that's why we love them!  Update soon!  Great story.

Author's Response:

My G.M. !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

 You know I can't tell you that. I know they are frustrating but like you said it's why we love them. I have some idea's planned but I mean, this story is slowly taking on a life of it's own so it is taking me longer to figure out which direction to go in to make sense. Thank you so much for reading and commenting because you know how much I love and value your thoughts on my writing. :)

 

Hugs, 

Keighley  

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6:runaway

So glad to see you continuing this story! I love it!   I love Molly in this.

I'll be looking forward to the next chapter!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Two weeks can help the fire dye down.

awwww. wonderful ending!  I reread chapter 6, (I have to admit, I forgot I already read it, I've been so confused catching up on stories being reposted to this new site, I forget which stories  I've already read, and which are new) still, I loved rereading it, it refreshed my memory of this story.

Great job K!



Author's Response: Thank you sweetie. I know it's confusing trust me I am having the hardest time figuring out what I have or haven't read yet too. Thanks again. :)

 
Summary:

Brian and Justin meet in a different way. Justin is the older one this time. The brunet wants to form a family and once he has it he will protect it no matter what just like Justin would. This starts with Brian wanting to be the stud of Liberty Ave. The gang is just forming. Hope you guys like it. Thanks to my betas.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Humor, MPreg, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes Word count: 190942
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2008 Updated: October 03, 2022


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: This Is My Life

I'm so glad to see this story!  It's just as good the second time around.  I can't wait for an update!

Author's Response: Thank you very much.  I'm happy that you're reading it.  I'll try to post soon.  Hugs, Tay

 
Sangre Azul by Draccone Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 90]
Summary:

Blue blood is an English expression recorded since 1834 for noble birth or descent; it is a translation of the Spanish phrase sangre azul, which described the Spanish royal family and other high nobility who claimed to be 'pure' and better than everyone else basically. Justin has always been given everything he wants. Can Brian and Justin have a relationship when they come from two different classes?


Categories: Alternate Universe, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Humor, Romance, Anti-Michael Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes Word count: 101435
[Report This] Published: March 21, 2008 Updated: May 10, 2009


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Some Birthday

I'm so happy to see this story!  I've just reread it  to catch up and it's better the second time around!  Please update this wonderful story soon!

Author's Response: I'll try to do my best to update it soon.  My life has been a bit hectic these past weeks.  Things are getting better...or at least I hope they are.  He, he.  Later, Tay

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Better And Old Enemy Than A New Good Friend

Ok, first please let me vent. FUCK Charles, FUCK Jennifer, I mean she hears what her husband did and all she says is, "I'll call charles?" Well FUCK her! And Craig, I can't even tell you what I want to happen to him!  Wheww!  Ok, now that is over, lol. oh btw, FUCK Michael too. lol.  GREAT chapter!  I LOVE this story.  I have every faith that Justin and Brian will find their way back to each other again.... In the meantime I will just hold my breath and dream of all kinds of torture for Craig, Jen, Charles and Michael, until you update again!  Please don't let me suffer too long....

Author's Response: I know.  But Jen is going to be the first one to cave.  She wants certain things for Justin but when she realizes that Justin is not playing around she will back off.  She loves her son and she prefers to accept anything that comes with that than lose the boy.  She will even be sneaking behind Craig's back to see her son.  That's going to be interesting.  He, he.  I won't let you suffer too long.  Hugs, Tay

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Mr. Justin Kinney Or Mr. Taylor-Kinney Or Whichever You Like Better

Amazing chapter!  I'm so worried what Craig will do!  I so love the relationship between B/J in this story.  Justin being Brian's brat.  :-)   love it.  Love this story

Author's Response: Thank you very much.  Don't worry too much about it.  Justin will be there to make sure nothing happens.  There will be more soon.  Hugs, Tay

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: My Husband

I was so glad to see an update. Love this story. I hope craig doesn't make trouble for them. They seem so happy now.

 

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, they seem very happy and I'm thinking about the trouble part...after all it doesn't really have to be Craig causing mayhem.  Lol.  I'll be nice.  Promise!!!  Later, Tay

 
Guilt Management by sfscarlet Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 102]
Summary:

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This is the sequel to Pain Management.

 

This is the next story in the Pain Management Verse.  In order they are:

Falling off the Cliff

Pain Management

Guilt Management

  • Compromises- this story

And the last story:- You'll Always Be Young and Beautiful

hanks to Marilla for the banner.
On the way home from Comic-Con, something disturbing occurs, which causes everyone to revisit their past.  Sequel to Pain Management.  Beta by girloftheburbs.


Categories: Could be Canon Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes Word count: 91951
[Report This] Published: March 23, 2008 Updated: October 08, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

I just had a chance to catch up with this story.  So heartbreaking! And addicting!  I hope the guys are able to work this out.  Loving this story, thanks.

Author's Response:

Gina:

 

Glad you had a chance to catch up.  Comments from a writer I admire are very special.  Thank you for your continued support.

 
All Wet by mandagrammy Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

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This story is a gap filler that picks up the next day after the famous make up scene in Brian's office when Justin comes back to his man.  Before they go to Babylon that night for the famous 'reunification' dance, Brian goes to the office and comes home to find Justin in the shower.  He muses on his feelings as he indulges in a little fun voyeurism of his blond beauty.  Many many thanks to Eka for the wonderfully steamy banner.

 

 

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Gap-Filler, Romance Characters: Brian, Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 2206
[Report This] Published: March 29, 2008 Updated: March 29, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: March 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: All Wet

Hmmmm..... Loved this! Hot steamy sex.  What an imp that Justin is! lol Love him!

 



Author's Response: Thank you so much Gina Marie.  The playfulness between these two is one of my favorite aspects of them.  I'm glad you enjoyed it.  Grammy

 
Summary: Feature

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Post 513) Brian and Justin begin a new chapter in their lives. I'm affectionately calling this the lost episodes of Season 5.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, BEST FAN FICTION CLASSIC, FEATURED STORY, Canon, Romance, Song Fic Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes Word count: 134059
[Report This] Published: March 30, 2008 Updated: June 02, 2019


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

I just reread this wonderful story and had to comment again how much  I LOVE your writing!  I can't wait till you update.

You bring each scene to life with your words. Thank you for sharing this story.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Loved this chapter.  love the lyrics to that song!  I can't wait to see how Justin reacts when Brian tells him he hasn't been tricking.

Great scene at woodys, and afterwards at the loft.  :-)



Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of your kind words. I'm working to get all of the chapters added here. God knows how you managed to add all your wonderous million chapters so soon...lol.. But there is new stuff posted on LJ. I'm so glad you're enjoying this though.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 18

There is so much to say about this wonderful chapter!  Love how you keep the friendship between b/m. you wrote it beautifully. "always have, always wil." As friends.

Love the  developing relationship between B/J.

And Calvin! Oh I hope Brian helps him.  He will, for Emmett's sake.

And the reunion....HOT!  Can't wait to see what the  gift is, and I can't wait to see what the club Alex is taking them to is like.

Amazing chapter!  Thanks!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19

Wow! What an amazing chapter! First, that club!  Woo hoo!  LOVED the massage!  What did that hot italian guy say to the other in Italian?

Second, oh no!  What is the problem!?  Please update soon!

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much Hun. I'm glad you liked.

The men said: "Such beautiful men and obviously so in love." =)

More soon.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 24, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

ok, first I need a cold shower! Wow! Great chapter, very hot, and also, very touching.  "home is where you are Brian, only you..."

loved it!

 
Forbidden Love by Draccone Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 68]
Summary:

Brian has broken up with his boyfriend but finds himself getting back together. While the brunet and Michael are celebrating the reunion, Brian meets someone new. Yes, that would be Justin. What would ever happen? Thanks to my beta. She's simply wonderful.


Categories: Justin/Other-Relationship, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Humor, Romance, Brian/Michael, Brian/Other Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 29 Completed: Yes Word count: 121848
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2008 Updated: April 01, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 29: Forbidden To The World

This was one of my favorite stories. I"m glad I got a chance to reread it. 

Author's Response: Thank you so much for letting me know.  I'm glad too.  I think I am happy that I finally posted all of them back.  Yes, it feels good.  Yay!!!

 
Summary:

Justin is a vampire that lives his life killing his kind. He's angry that he was turned when he didn't want to. He killed his sire a long time ago but is still thirsty for revenge. Justin thinks that his real family are a bunch of monsters that he has to kill. His kind just thinks there is something oh so wrong with the blond.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Abuse, Anti-Ethan, Anti-Michael, Brian/Other, Humor, Incest, Justin/Other-Relationship, Minor Character Death, Rape, Romance, Unsafe Sex, VAMPIRES!, Violence Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 43 Completed: No Word count: 116834
[Report This] Published: April 01, 2008 Updated: December 14, 2021


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 29: When Visions Don't Fit

I was sooo happy to see an update to this story!  It's one of my favorites!  Sorry to see the war is still going on, but loving little Justin!  lol.  I wonder what Kevin is going to reveal...



Author's Response:

I know I have kept you guys waiting that's why I gave you two.  There will be more soon.  Yeah, there will be more about the war before I can really focus on Justin and Brian but it's not that long a wait.  Interesting things are happening.  Hugs, Tay

 
Equality by edom Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 13]
Summary:

Banner by Masterglory, grazie mille cara. 

Justin want's to be Brian's equal.


Categories: Could be Canon, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1199
[Report This] Published: April 03, 2008 Updated: April 03, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 04, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I loved this!  It so demonstrates their love.  Thank you for posting this.

 

 



Author's Response: You're welcome. I had fun writing it.

 
Deception by Wildsweet_angel Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 25]
Summary:

Justin is a recent college graduate, and lands a job as Kinnetik's assistant art director.  However, he has a hidden agenda, and is intent on carrying out his plan, when some unexpected complications arise.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes Word count: 18143
[Report This] Published: April 05, 2008 Updated: May 17, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 17, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Startling Revelations

Oh this sooo screams for a sequel!  Great job. I totally enjoyed this story!

Author's Response: You're right Gina Marie.  I am considering doing a sequel.  Thank you for you support and encouragement!  I'm loving your sequel at the moment.  You're a very talented writer.  So, I'm pleased that you enjoyed this story.  Thanks again for commenting. :)

 
Justin Girl by fallengreenangel Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

AU Justin and Brian have been dating for a while now what happens when its time for Biran to meet Justin daughter Molly? and what is the terrible secret that Justin hides?


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Justin/Other-Relationship, MPreg, Rape Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: No Word count: 790
[Report This] Published: April 21, 2008 Updated: April 21, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

What an intense first chapter!  I can't wait to read more.

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you!

 
From Whence We Cum? by Sapphire Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 15]
Summary:

A little intellectual ‘discussion’ that gets a bit out of hand…


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Could be Canon, Humor, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1800
[Report This] Published: April 25, 2008 Updated: April 25, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: From Whence We Cum?

I so loved this!  Your  writing is witty and fun.  Loved your word play, and B/J play. 

Thanks!



Author's Response: Thank you! I love to play with words...and with B/J. And if I can play with them both at the same time, so much the better :) I'm glad you found it witty and fun! I love the deep sensual h/c, but sometimes I give into these little descents into madness :) Thanks so much for reading and for your reveiw!

 
Summary: Feature

 

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Post-513 (one year after). Despite his partner’s enormous success in the art world, Brian becomes increasingly concerned about Justin’s strange and secretive behaviour. When he finally discovers the reasons behind it, both men are faced with a struggle so intense it stretches the boundaries of their love beyond where either thought possible.

 

Note: Deals with the subject of eating disorders.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Could be Canon, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 49300
[Report This] Published: April 30, 2008 Updated: August 14, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Even If It Kills Me

You are doing an amazing job with this story. I don't thin B/J are ooc at all.  I think this kind of disease brings out strenghts (and weakness) in people they never knew they had.  Brian always gave Justin want he needed (or what he thought he needed) in the show and that is exactly what he is doing now. Justin needs all the love and attention Brian is giving him. He needs the words and the actions. I see Brian totally in character in this story.

This chapter in particular was powerful. You describe not only the physical ramifications of the disease, but also the emotional.  I believe with love and support, Justin will beat this thing. 

Your writing is so powerful and real. I'm totally invested.  This is one of the most original and relevant B/J stories I've read.  I applaud your efforts and your courage in taking this on.



Author's Response: Thank you so much! That really, really means a lot. I'm so glad you can see and feel everything I try to describe; it's sometimes quite difficult to explain what an ED feels like from the inside. But, as you've pointed out, the most important thing (for this story and in relaity) is that recovery is possible with firm, loving support. I can't tell you how pleased I am that you find this story so appealing; I do really, really appriecate your comments. Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: April 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Dark Secret Love

I love your writing, and your word usage. This story is heartbreaking, and very real. I'm glad you are tackling this delicate subject. I look forward to seeing how you handle it, and where'll you'll take the characters.

Great first chapter



Author's Response: Thanks. This is the first time I've achtually tried writing in third person, so the writing style is a bit of a departure for me. Yes, this is a very delicate, very real and very sensitive subject. I hesitated over writing this story for a long time for that reason. But I think if it's handled with care it could be a make a powerful, if somewhat poignant, hurt/comfort fic. I think the hardes thing is keeping the characters ICC, but I'll do my best. Thanks for reading and for your review!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Shades of Grey

Loved your metaphors in the beginning of this chapter "the charcoal longing of regret, the shimmering silver of memory, the heavy lead-gray of concern..."  beautiful

 This was the most amazing, beautiful, well crafted chapter I've had the pleasure to read. Please continue this amazing story.  The premise is haunting and intriguing, and your writing brings everything to life.

Thank you



Author's Response: Thank you so much! It's so awesome to hear this from such an amazing writer like yourself :) I'm so glad you're finding this story interesting but also realistic. I know this is such a delicate topic and I'm trying to be very careful to keep it real and compassionate while also ICC. Thank you again for your wonderful review- it really does mean a lot :)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Broken Wings, Unbroken Soul

Heart-wrenching, and so beautifully written.  This is one of the most soulful stories I've read in fanfic.  Wonderful job. Thank you

 



Author's Response:

And thank you for you wonderful reveiws! They keep me inspired ;) 'Soulful' is a such great description...I think it's been good for my soul to write this. Thank you so much for reading and for your amamzing reviews. I do appreciate them very much!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: If You Need Me

My heart, my heart, my heart....

Such a great chapter. So moving. Don't worry about not updating quickly enough.  This story is soooo worth the wait! Thank you, and happy birthday!



Author's Response: Thanks for the birthday wishes! Hope your heart is OK ;) I'm so glad you enjoyed this chapter, and that you thought it was worth the wait. (I'm waiting oh-so patiently for an update on your story...but no pressure. I'm sure it will be more than worth the wait :) Thanks again for reading and for your wonderful reviews! I love them all!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: July 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Losing the Battle, Winning the War

Each chapter is more amazing than the last. I'm so happy Justin is winning this battle. So happy Brian is being so supportive.

I am HOPING for a happy ending! If I haven't said it before, great, great job with this story!



Author's Response:

Of course the ending will be happy- I’m a firm believer in happily ever afters. Or at least, happier ever afters ;) Justin is passing through the hardest part of his recovery in this chapter, but Brian is always there to be his pillar of strength. He’s as much a part of the recovery process as all the meds and the meals. I can’t tell you how pleased I am that you’re enjoying this story. It does mean a lot coming from you :) Thank you so much for reading and for you amazing review!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: July 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Eternal Sunshine

Yippppeee! Justin gets to go home! LOVED this chapter. Loved Em's interaction with Justin..

I'm up at 2 am, just to read this! lol  Well worth it!



Author's Response: Thanks Gina ;) I'm so glad that you enjoyed this chapter! I've always been so interested in Justin and Emmett's relationship- althought it was never played out in canon, I got the feeling that they were pretty close as friends. ;) Glad you're a fellow night owl- I'm up at 3:45 am replying to reviews ;) Hee hee. Glad it was worth it!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: July 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Like the First Time

Hmmm....Nice to see Justin is feeling MUCH better.

 Need I say I totally loved this chapter?  :-)



Author's Response:

Yes, he Justin recovering rather nicely... ;) I'm so pleased that you enjoyed this chapter! Thanks so much for reading and for all you much-loved reveiws!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: July 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Snakes and Ladders

Another heartbreaking, equisit chapter. Each one more compelling than the last.

I worry about Justin going to NY, but I agree, he has to go.

Please update soon!



Author's Response:

Going to New York could be the making or breaking of Justin's recovery- it's certainly a delicate decision, with huge pros and cons on both sides...

 I'm really glad you enjoyed it ;) I'll try to have the next chapter up as soon as possible. Thanks so much for reading, and for your much-adored review!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: The Way To His Heart

Bravo! Perfect ending to a perfect story! This one is diffinately going in my favorites!

Great job!



Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so honoured that you list this story amoung your favorites- that means so much coming from such a talented writer like yourself ;) I'm very pleased that you enjoyed it. Thanks for reading, and for coming along on the ride! And thanks again for all your amazing reviews- I appreciate them all so much ;)

 
The Dare by edom Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 75]
Summary:

Emmett gives Brian and Justin a dare.


Categories: Anti-Ethan, Alternate Universe, Out of Character, QAF-U.S. FICTION, Anti-Michael Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: Dares and families
Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes Word count: 11893
[Report This] Published: May 17, 2008 Updated: June 08, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Justin's reaction

Loving this so far! Can't wait to see our Kinney holds up! Love Emmett in this too. Way to say it like it is Em!

Author's Response: Thank you so much. I have a fealing that Brian will hold up just fine. ;-)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: The first test

Great chapter!  Love toppy Justin! :-)

Author's Response: Me too, but not all the time, that would be to OOC for me.

 
Summary: Justin and Brian are not together.  Their former relationship was ruined by deceit, and secrets from the past.  Can Justin redeem himself, and convince Brian to give him another chance, so they can have a future, and rebuild their relationship in the process?
Categories: Alternate Universe Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes Word count: 10653
[Report This] Published: May 18, 2008 Updated: June 19, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Regrouping and Reconnecting

ohhhh good start!  Loving this sequel so far!

Author's Response: Thank you Gina Marie.  Stalker Justin is always fun to write!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: Blond Temptation

Wooo hoooo!  Love it!  Can't wait for the main attraction!  Great chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review sweetie.  The main attraction is now playing.  LOL  Hope you like!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: May 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Passion Unleashed

Now that was hot!  Excellent chapter!  Looks like Justin's on his way to acheiving his goal!

Author's Response: Thank you Gina Marie.  Justin knows just what to do to get his man!  ;)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Gaining Some Ground

Hmmm.... Brian is no match for Justin!  It's just a matter of time before Justin gets his man now!

Great chapter



Author's Response:  You're absolutely right!  This is one blond who has brains too. LOL

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 19, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Redemption and Resolution

Ahhhh..... Nice ending. Nice story. I really enjoyed it.  Thanks!

Author's Response: Thanks sweetie.  I'm ecstatic that you liked it, especially the happy ending! ;)

 
A second birthday by edom Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 101]
Summary:

Banner by Masterglory, grazie mille, cara

Beta by TayTay4936, I couldn't do any of it without you.

Justin doesn't remember Ethan.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Michael, Hurt/Comfort Characters: Daphne, Debbie, Ethan Gold, Gus, Jennifer Taylor, Jenny Rebecca, Justin, Lindsay, Melanie, Molly Taylor, Vic
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes Word count: 21498
[Report This] Published: May 28, 2008 Updated: September 30, 2009


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: PIFA

I'm on pins and needles waiting to see what happens!

Great story!  can't wait for the next update!



Author's Response: Thank you. That means a lot to me.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: September 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Exams and fiddlers

So glad to see an update. Love this story  Dreading the day when he gets his memory back. Hopefully, his relationship with Brian will be stronger by then to weather that storm.

 

GM



Author's Response: Thank you so much. I think their relationship is already stronger, and 5 days away from the Pitts and their friends should help even more.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: February 19, 2009 Title: Chapter 10: A memory resurfaces

So glad to see an update to this story!  I wonder what other memories are going to surface.

Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Happy to oblige.

You'll just have to way to see what else is going to come backe to Justin.

Thank you so much.

 
Summary: Feature

Progeny- Join Brian and Justin and their extended family as they move forward in this universe. This fic is set in New York City and is part 3 of the Karma series. You have to read Karma and Gene Pool before reading this fic or it will make no sense whatsoever. Thank you to my beta, Shellie, for her ongoing support and help. My icons are made by the talented Marilla_pm67, aka luv_Sam.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Hetero Sex, Humor, Hurt/Comfort, Real Life Issues, Romance, Unsafe Sex, FEATURED STORY, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes Word count: 74468
[Report This] Published: May 31, 2008 Updated: November 01, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12

Whewww..... I need a cold shower! Great sex scene! Great chapter. Love the talk  between brian and mark.

 You're doing an excellent job with this story!  I know how difficult it is to write a sequel, yet you make it seem effortless!  This story stands on it's own, it's amazing. 

I eargerly await each new chapter!



Author's Response: Thank you Gina-what a huge compliment that is coming from you!  I appreciate it very much.  Sequels can be really challenging, especially following on the heels of a really well loved story like Gene Pool , so I'm very gratified to hear that this is working for you as well.  More next week.  Big hugs, Michele

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13

Excellent chapter.  Looking into the very complicated lives of these characters is so mesmerizing. It's all so sad, and raw and honest.

great job.       



Author's Response: Thanks Gina-lots of real life issues-hopefully the girls will get the help they need.  I'm thrilled that you are continuing to enjoy this!  Hugs, Michele

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14

Love this chapter.  Gus and Aedan are getting close to the truth.

 Brian just might have to get involved with Yury, or maybe, Sorina and Ryan will turn the tables on him.

Great chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks, Gina...the plot does thicken with this new request of Sasha's... Yury continues his stalking...Appreciate your feedback so much!  Michele

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: September 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

Can  I just say I loved this chapter?  VERY much?  :-)

 Seriously, I can't wait to read B/J's experiences at the club.

As for Sasha, well I think Mark should call Brian.  Those two need to get  back together, though it's going to be rough going once Mark  finds out he has a child, and Gus and Aedan are rasing him.  Hearts will be broken.

Looks like Yury might be getting a call from immigration....lol

Great chapter, as usual



Author's Response: Thank you!  Brian and Ryan are plotting even as we speak, lol!  I'm guessing that Mark will make some kind of move soon and hopefully one of the dads will be involved.  Thank you so much for always taking the time to comment.  You know how much it means to a writer to hear back.  xo, Michele

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17

Ok, more please!!  Loving this story, can't wait for the next chapter.

 

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much Gina!  Glad you're enjoying this!  Michele

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

Great chapter.  I wonder what's going to happen when Mark finds out he has a son. He'll want part custody too, and he'll want Sasha too.

Things are about to get interesting!

loving this story.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks Gina-wonder if Mark and Sasha will ever get together again, that's more the question.  She seems pretty adamant, but she did change her mind once before.  We'll see what happens next.  Thanks for the review!  Michele

 

 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

Such drama! Love it! Mark seems like the type that's going to want his baby.. I sense trouble ahead!

Great chapter. I'll be so sad when this story ends.

 



Author's Response: Brian and Justin=drama queen, lol!  Add Gus who's a quite a DQ himself and it's a formula for disaster.  Thank God for Aedan who knows how to tame his beast.  Glad you enjoyed this chapter.  Hugs, Michele

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22

Oh and the plot thickens! This story is so good! so intriging!  I'm dying to know how  Mark is going to respond to the news he's a dad!

Great update.



Author's Response: Thanks Gina.  Conclusion next week  I'll be sad to see this end.  Hugs, Michele

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23

what a beautiful story! What a beautiful vid!  Thank you

Author's Response: Thank you!  I'm glad you enjoyed it!  xo, Michele

 
Summary: It was a stupid bet, but he was so sure he would win. He just wasn't prepared for what would happen next...What if everything he did was because he was trying to be someone he couldn't be?
Categories: Brian/Justin, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 10095
[Report This] Published: June 01, 2008 Updated: June 01, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Loved this!  I don't think we've seen the last of Brandon.

 

 
Husband.Com by KAYLIN Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 11]
Summary:

Summary: Ted is searching for a husband when he comes across Justin Taylor's profile.


Categories: Brian/Justin, Out of Character, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 2 Completed: No Word count: 1783
[Report This] Published: June 06, 2008 Updated: June 30, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Love the start of this! Can't wait til Justin meets the 'man of his dreams'.

 

 
You Don't Love Me by Camlaw Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 5]
Summary: Justin deals with him and Brian breaking up...
Categories: Brian/Justin, Hurt/Comfort, Song Fic Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 964
[Report This] Published: June 13, 2008 Updated: June 13, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: You Don't Love Me

I really liked this, but I'm a bit confused. What was Justin watching? And was he daydreaming about Brian dumping him? 



Author's Response: Sorry! Didn't mean to confuse you. Justin was watching a music video and happen to imagine him & Brian as the main characters of the video. Hope that explains things for you. Thanks for reading!

 
Internal Battle by Resist It Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 5]
Summary: It will all make sense to you one day. Brian's POV at the end of 305.
Categories: Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 929
[Report This] Published: June 25, 2008 Updated: June 25, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Internal Battle

This is so how I invision Brian would  be thinking.  He was very cold in that backroom. But also brutally honest. Ethan would have hated Justin down the road if he's career went now where and he let this opportunity pass. It was a hard lesson for Justin to learn, but one he needed to.

"What about me?"  Brian told him pretty much that 'he' did not equate Ethan.  I'm glad Brian said what he did to Justin, as cruel as it was cause he needed to hear the truth.

Loved the ending of this. Yea, Brian should have taken te time to admire Justin more...

Short, but definately sweet, and left me waiting for more.

 



Author's Response:

I always felt the same exact way. I knew Brian was doing all that for a reason. I understand Brian so much, everything he does is for a good reason even if it does come across heartless. I wish I could be as clever as him. He really is my hero lol.

Thanks so much for the review, it was very sweet. I wrote this a while ago and just now posted it, but you never know. I may return to this one day ;)

 
Staying In by daisy Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

Brian spends an evening at home with someone special.


Categories: Brian/Justin, Drabbles Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 442
[Report This] Published: July 01, 2008 Updated: July 01, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: July 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Staying In

ahhh so sweet!  Thanks



Author's Response: :)  sleeping nieces are great inspirations.

 
SUFFERING by carbon69 Rated: GENERAL [Reviews - 4]
Summary:

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Season 5-Brian POV

Brian's thoughts just after Justin leaves for New York.

 


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon, One-Off Fic, Song Fic Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1464
[Report This] Published: July 21, 2008 Updated: July 21, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: July 21, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Suffering

So sad. I think that song is perfect for Brian.  I've always viewed him as a  'tortured' soul, especially when Justin left him at the end...

Nice job, thanks



Author's Response: Apologies- I keep hitting the wrong button to respond to peoples comments!  LOL! I think I will not do this anymore now!

 
Duplicity by elyxer Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 109]
Summary:

Retake on the movie Overboard QaF style.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes Word count: 24577
[Report This] Published: July 22, 2008 Updated: October 03, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: July 26, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: A New Home

Awwww....So loving this story!  Can't wait for an update.



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I'm glad you're reading this one.  I love your comments. Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: All New Rules

I can't tell you how much I"m loving this story! I'm falling in love with the boys!

I can't wait to see where you take this story. Great job!



Author's Response: Thanks Gina, I'm glad you're enjoying what I'm doing.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 10, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: A New Relationship

Ha hahaha!!! LOVED it!  This story keeps getting better and better!



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I'm glad you're enjoying my version of things. Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: A New Attitude

Love, Love LOVE this story! More please!

Author's Response: Thanks Gina!  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 22, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: A New Plan

OH OH OH MY!!!!  Whew, I need a hose down now!  GREAT chapte! LOVE the pic!  How'd you do it?

This story is fun, and enthralling, and just, woo hooo!!!!  LOL

Loving every word!



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I found the pic online and doctored it up a bit.  I'm glad you liked this chapter. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: A New Assignation

ohhhhh! So loving this story!  brian's falling in love, and when jay gets his memory back he's going to feel betrayed. Hopefully by then he'll be totally in love with brian. He's already in love with the kdis. 

such a good feel story! Thanks



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I'm glad you're enjoying this one.  It is a bit different from what I generally write, but I've been trying to break out and try new things.  Thanks for all your support and comments.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: September 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: A New Development

Uh oh,  Gregor is going to be trouble!

I know this sounds selfish, but I don't want 'Jay' gettting his memory back! The family is working so well together!

Great chapter

Gina Marie



Author's Response: Hey Gina!  I know how you feel, but all will work out.  I hope.  Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: September 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: A New Surprise

Ahhh the plot thickens!  Excellent chapter! Of course I'm on the edge of my seat waiting to see what happens next.

Author's Response: Hey Gina!  We're getting close to the end here.  *grins*  Thanks for all your comments. Hugs, Rena

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: September 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: A New Memory

oK, That was hot!  More please.

Author's Response: Thanks Gina!  Hugs!

 
HOME RUN by Julia Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 43]
Summary:

Brian and Justin have gone their separate ways following the Rage Party. 

After successfully launching his own advertising agency, Kinnetik, in Pittsburgh, Brian moves to New York to open up a second office.

Justin accompanied Ethan to Europe, but their relationship is over. Returning to Pittsburgh, he discovers that Brian has moved away. Realizing that he must get on with his life without Brian, Justin takes a position in Hollywood as an animator and now lives in L.A.

Brian is approaching his 40th birthday. Tragedy strikes and he suddenly has custody of his ten year old son, Gus.

What happens when events bring both Brian and Justin back to Pittsburgh?

With acknowledgements to 'Sleepless in Seattle'

Rating: NC-17

Warnings: Character death


Categories: Brian/Justin, Major Character Death, Romance, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes Word count: 30918
[Report This] Published: July 29, 2008 Updated: August 02, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: July 29, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Interesting start. Can't wait to see where you take this.

Author's Response: Thanks.  I wrote this story about 4 years ago - it turned into a series of 3 (so far!).  I'm reposting all my stories now as they were lost when Elsa Rose had problems with the hosting server.  I hope you enjoy them.  Cheers. Julia

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20

I loved this story! Thanks for sharing it.

Author's Response: Hi Gina, thank you, glad you enjoyed it.  Julia

 
"JE NE SAIS QUOI" by Doppelganger Rated: PARENTAL GUIDANCE -13 [Reviews - 7]
Summary:

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SYNOPSIS: Brian swears it's the last time Justin is sleeping over...


Categories: Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 994
[Report This] Published: August 13, 2008 Updated: August 13, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 13, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: "JE NE SAIS QUOI"

Totally loved this!

 
Summary: Feature

This story is pretty much the same plot of the movie.   Meet Justin Taylor he works at Red Cape Comics.  He fantasizes of the owner of the store M. Novotny.  He kept help himself he's falling in love with him.   What happens though when people mistake him for Mikey's fiancee and he's thrown into there family.   What happens when he meets Mikey's brother Brian and he just can't help the fact that somehow he falls in love with Brian.   What will happen now?   Read to find out.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Could be Canon Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 11 Completed: Yes Word count: 32863
[Report This] Published: August 17, 2008 Updated: May 28, 2011


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 18, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Welcome to The Family

Loving this story! Love the twist you put on it.  It appears Brian is a tragic character in this, lots of issues, Love it. I love that you like to tear down your characters then build them up again. It's angsty, and makes the story more intriguing to me. I will definately be following this one!

Author's Response: Yea i'm all about the building you up and breaking you down.  It's just how i operate.   Yea Brian has a lot of problems which will be revealed.  He's different too as in his appearance and that'll be explained later.  Yea i'm all about the angst.  I'm glad u like it.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: August 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: It's a Mystery

Excellent chapter! This story just keeps getting better. Love how you're weaving it, giving us little hints and clues into Brian's past.

Can't wait till the next update!



Author's Response: yea that's how i draw you in.  hopefully a new update tomorrow.

 
Summary: Feature

***Featured Story for January 2015***

Brian and Justin never had a relationship.  Justin is still trying to get over his ex-boyfriend Ethan.  A mysterious stranger accidentally dials his phone number.  Will Justin find out who the stranger is, and where will it all lead?


Categories: FEATURED STORY, Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes Word count: 18463
[Report This] Published: August 25, 2008 Updated: January 18, 2015


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Sounds Like a Plan

Nonononononononooooooooo!!!!

I'm on the edge of my seat here! PLEASE don't make me wait!  LOL

so loving this story! It's exciting, mysterious, suspensful and romantic as fuck!  LOL

great chapter.

 



Author's Response: Oh Gina Marie, you really know how to put a smile on my face!  I love, love, love your stories, and am so pleased that you're enjoying mine.  Thank you. :)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Unmasked

oh nooo!  I had a feeling Brian wasn't going to take too kindly to being fooled like that.  I hope he goes after Justin and realizes Justin wasn't playing games.

 Great chapter. Update soon!

 

 



Author's Response: Thank you for the compliment honey.  Brian knows that Justin is upset.  As for going after him, I wouldn't count on it.  We're talking about Brian here!  ;)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Wisdom in the Truth

Uh oh.  I think another phone call is in order!

 



Author's Response: LOL  Yep, another midnight call.  If only Brian would swallow your pride! 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 11: To Be or Not To Be

Oh answer the phone Justin!  U know you want him....

Author's Response: Justin's hesistation is because he knows that having a relationship with Brian will not be easy!  But isn't Brian worth it?  ;)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 20, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Point, Game, Match

So glad Brian didn't hang up!  Loved this chapter.  very hot!  Question now is, where do they go from here? Hmmm..

Author's Response: Thanks Gina Marie.  Let's hope Brian doesn't revert to being an ass.  LOL

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: I Wanna Be Your Boyfriend

Oh I hope Mikey doesn't fuck this up! I LOVE Brian and Justin together in this story! Love their easy banter.

Looking forward to the next update!



Author's Response: Thank you Gina Marie.  Brian and Justin have a great rapport.  They were friends first, so that helped a lot.  (not to mention amazing chemistry)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 02, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: The Showdown

uh oh the rules!  They didn't work well last time around. Will this time be any different? Hmmm... I'll just have to wait and see!

Love this story



Author's Response: Somehow the rules just wriggled their way in there.  I occasionally like to use actual script from cannon.  Will it be any different this time...good possibility!

 
Summary:

Justin writes gay romance stories and posts them online. Brian is his number one fan.

Thanks so much to pannkakan for the banner!


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Alternate Universe, Anti-Ethan, Brian/Justin, Child Abuse, Justin/Ethan, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 81 Completed: Yes Word count: 110517
[Report This] Published: September 13, 2008 Updated: February 14, 2015


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 20: A Little Role Play

Wow that was hot. So adoring this story!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 21: Paying the Piper, Part 1

Oh shit! Looks like Brian might get thrown back in jail. I'd punch that cop out!

Great chapter

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: January 02, 2009 Title: Chapter 28: Another Brainstorming Session, Part 3A

What a nice start to the new year!  Great chapter!

Author's Response: That's sweet of you to say! I'm so happy you enjoyed this part :) :) :)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: January 12, 2009 Title: Chapter 30: Another Brainstorming Session, Epilogue

Loved this story!  *sigh*



Author's Response:

I'm so glad!

 

But don't let the word 'epilogue' scare you...that was just the epilogue for Ch. 27. The story isn't over, not by a long shot :D :D :D

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 11, 2009 Title: Chapter 43: Justin's Naughty, Very, Very Naughty (Part 1)

This chapter was amazing!  I was so glad to see an update.  I really love this story, and the love you portray so well.



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you enjoyed this part!

Thanks so much for the compliment :) :) :)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: June 13, 2009 Title: Chapter 44: Justin's Naughty, Very, Very Naughty (Part 2)

Another hot, great chapter!

 
Summary:

DISCLAIMER: All publicly recognizable characters, settings, etc. are the property of their respective owners. The original characters and plot are the property of the author.  The author is in no way associated with the owners, creators, or producers of any media franchise.  No copyright infringement is intended.

Post 513.


Categories: Brian/Justin, One-Off Fic Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1028
[Report This] Published: September 23, 2008 Updated: September 23, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: September 23, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Coming or Going, The Game Show

absolutely adorable! Loved it

 



Author's Response: I'm so happy you enjoyed it! It was certainly fun to write :)

 
Summary:

Justin's a prostitute who solicited Brian but he didn't realize Justin was a whore until after he f*cked him and Justin demanded to be paid.

Disclaimer: All recognizable characters in this story do not belong to me. They belong to the QAF TV series. I just post here for entertainment purposes only. No monies are made by me and no copyright infringement is intended.


Categories: Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes Word count: 55818
[Report This] Published: October 02, 2008 Updated: November 27, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 05, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: Did He Ask Your Name?

OMG That's so sweet!  I can't believe I'm going to say this, but fuck Brian~!  Go for George!  LOL

Seriously, I hope Brian gets past his pride and opens up to Justin, especially now that Justin is a 'rich' man.  I wonder how Brian will handl that.

Though it's often said, 'once a whore, always a whore'. I hope  Brian doesn't use that on Justin. We know how cruel he can be.

Looking forward to an update.

 



Author's Response: Gina-M, gal, soooooooo glad 2 hear from U.  It's been a long, long time.  Hav fun and I'm so glad U R aboard this one.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 06, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: What Are You Doing Here?

Great chapter.  So now Brian is starting to see Justin as something more than a 'whore'.  He's a student working himself through college. That's something Brian can respect.  It's obvious he's got it bad for Justin!  Can't wait to see what happens next!

 

PS - though this is (I think) chapter 10, you have it listed as chapter 9 again.

 



Author's Response: Thanks,  hi, GM, hav Fun... the site is stalling a bit that's how I ended up with chapter 9, actually had it on about 4 times but before I remove the last one it stalled again.  I'm just getting back in.  Enjoy.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: Spiteful

LOL Loved this chapter.  Mikey is such a shit.

Author's Response: Hi, Gina Marie, babe.  And thax so much for 'once a whore always a whore' which is ironic... my stuff can full of cliche' I can't believe I 4got that one.  It wouldn't have been the same story without that phrase.  Thx again.  C U next week, going away 4 the weekend.

 
Reset by violette7 Rated: NC-18 [Reviews - 172]
Summary:

Justin loses his memory of the last year after the bashing. What will Brian do?

Thanks so much to pannkakan for the banner!


Categories: Alternate Universe, Brian/Justin, Romance, What If Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 41 Completed: No Word count: 40281
[Report This] Published: October 03, 2008 Updated: April 04, 2010


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Broken

Sounds very interesting! can't wait to see Justin's reaction.

 



Author's Response: I'm so glad you found the first two chapters interesting :D

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 07, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Running Scared

kitten. I like it. I'm looking forward to Justin taking the lead.  :-)

Author's Response: I'm thrilled that you like the pet name :) I hope you end up liking the B/J lovin

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Role Reversal

Oh you have to stop teasing! I want more please!

Author's Response:

Sorry :(

I plan to update on Monday (Oct 13). 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: The Lies We Tell

I'm so loving this story! Great update



Author's Response: I'm so happy you are enjoying it :) :) :)

 
Summary:

banner 

Coming home isn’t always all it’s cracked up to be, especially when you find the people you love the most have betrayed you.

Written because of a convo with anglluvr


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Brian/Other, Could be Canon, Hetero Sex, Unsafe Sex Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 8 Completed: No Word count: 12592
[Report This] Published: October 06, 2008 Updated: April 27, 2009


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: It's Over

Wow. It's going to be a long way back, that's assuming there 'is' a way back, from this disaster.

Brian and Daphne got a lot of making up, and soul searching to do.  On one hand, I can understand two people who love one person so much as Dap and Brian love Justin, commerserating with booze and sex.  Brian's usual pain management is getting so fucked up and fucked, he forgets everything else.  Perhaps he felt a connection to Justin by fucking Daph.

I'm not excusing their behavoir.  To say they should have known better is moot.  People, good people, do stupid things with the best of intentions, or not realizing what the fuck their intentions are, all the time. It's called being human and making mistakes. But some mistakes you can't fix.

I don't know if this one can be fixed I think Justin will have to do a lot of soul searching. Maybe in his journey, at some point, he'll find forgiviness in his heart.

Very bold theme you've chosen. This will not be easy to write.  Demonstrating the pain and emotions of all involved without making anyone look like the villian will be a huge challenge.

My hats off to you for taking this on!  Where ever you may take this, I will be there with you on this journey.

As for your critic's, (the emotional ones) it's testment to how much they love these characters.  I hope it doesn't deter you or influence you in any way.  Take this story where you want.  Fuck what others want or think.   It's your 'art'.  And I for one love art that provokes such strong emotions!

 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Author's Note

Just a side not on people's assumption that a gay man would never sleep with a woman....my question is, what rock have you been living under?

Gay men often sleep with women for different reasons.  Many gay men are married.  They like having a family with kids, but are totally gay. They just for one reason or another, don't want to come out of the closet. It is THEIR choice!  Not everyone choses to be an out gay person.

As for Brian, it's not like he's never slept with a woman. He fucked Lindsey, even told her when she gave birth that he would have fucked her if she wanted.

To me Brian is definately Gay, and loves men, but sex for him is just that, sex. He loves Justin but will fuck anything.  Like Justin accused him of in season one.  "You'll fuck anything~" Um yeah. he would.  But he wil ALWAYS go for  the guy first.  But that doesn't mean if a situation arose, and circumstances allowed, he wouldn't fuck a woman for what ever reason. Brian has his own set of rules he lives by.  Period. 

 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 3: It's Over

maryann...

I watched the same show as you. Are you going to tell me the writers kept the actors in character throughout the whole series? Cause if you are, then I would counter you are either delusional, or were watching a different show then the rest of us.

As for what you 'think' Brian would do, or not do, I don't know what you base your beliefs on since cowlip had Brian and Justin do things I would NEVER believe either one of them would ever do! At least not the Justin and Brian characters from seasons 1-3.  

"realistically" Brian IS capable of fucking a woman.  Again, it depends on the circumstances.  As far as fucking Daph, to me it makes sense if he WAS going to fuck a woman, it would be Daph simply because of her connection to Justin.

Now, I speak from experience. I lost my boyfriend in a car  accident when I was 19, (many moons ago) I had sex with his best freind shortly afterwards in my grief. It felt like a connection to me.  Of course it didn't last, but I don't regret it. It happened. Period. 

In this story, the writer makes it clear that Brian thought he 'lost' Justin for good. That he was never  coming back. so YES, I can see him fucking his best friend in grief.

I'm sorr you can't. but believe me, it CAN happen. even to the fucking almight Mr. Kinney!

 



Author's Response:

Hey Gina,

I'm glad you liked the story and understand where the motivations are coming from. I hope I can keep it as real as possible under the circumstances. As for Brian sleeping with a woman I have to repeat something I believe I have already said, any and everyone is capable of any number of things that they would never normally do under certain circumstances. I'm so glad you get that. Anyway, thanks for the review.

Later, Jessica

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Ultimate Betrayal

To Jody, the moral's police. 

Not all relationships are conducted the way you think they shoud be.  you want to talk about morals? how about all the fucking Brian does when he supposedly loves Justin? That you can justify, but him fucking Daph you can't?

So it's ok to fuck anyone as long as it's not your best friend? Some would say that's fucked up morals. Actually, Randy said as much. He objected to the way his character just took Brian's shit.  I mean would YOU stay with a man like Brian? He's not faithful, and excuses it away by saying 'I"m gay, that means I fuck who I want, when I want'.  Even if it means you degrade and humiliate the person you 'say' you love.

Nice morals there hon.   Good luck with that.

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: The Ultimate Betrayal

Hey Jessica,

I think I understand where some of these people are comming from.

In thier world, (view) Gay men only sleep with other men, Gay women only sleep with other women, Straigh people only sleep with the opposite sex.  And when you fuck your lovers best friend, it's an unforgivable act. Period.

  Oh and if you have one sexual experince with a person of the same sex, that makes you gay. 

Some people live in absolutes.  They like to believe all things are black and white. Problem with their theories though is that life doesn't work that way.

The truth is, sometimes straight people fuck people of the same sex and that does not mean they are gay.

Sometimes Gay people fuck people of the opposite sex and it does not mean they are straight.

Relationships, and sex especially, is so fucking complicated you can NEVER say what someone would, or wouldn't do.  I've wittness ALL kinds of relationships. I've seen women take men back for shit I would have shot them for.  One in particular, was a friend of mine whose husband slept with her sister.  Guess what? She eventually forgave him and they have been together now 5 years, no more incidents.

You can't argue with people who believe so narrowly. Truth is, ANYTHING is possible, and the most inprobably happens all the time in relationships.

You have a great story here!  I'm loving it.  and it's totally believable. I mean if these critics bought half the shit they wrote for QAF, why can't they buy your more believable story? 

To them, a character who drinks and takes as many drugs as Brian does, stays up fucking all night, and is still able to be successful at his joband look great, is realistic? Um, I don't think so.  Clubbing 6 nights a week? Fucking all night? Using alcohol and drugs like they're vitamins? And while doing this he holds a high power job?  Must be super man.

Wait, maybe he IS rage! LOL



Author's Response:

Yes, God forbid we should acknowledge that there is a grey area in everything in life. That no matter how much you would like it to, not everything fits neatly into the little packages we have made for them.

I figure they will get bored as I go through the story because really who is going to keep reading something they hate just so they can bitch about it. Although I figure that for even those people, I am doing my job because they are obviously bored and this is entertaining them.

I have tried to educate them but making people realize their worldview is screwed is not the easiest thing in the world obviously. Therefore, I will just keep posting and keep laughing at the regurgitated comments.

On the other hand, I hope you and all the people who like this story will continue to enjoy it.

Later, Jessica

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: February 03, 2009 Title: Chapter 4: Fall Out

I'm glad to see you update this story.  Boy this is a mess! One question though, did I miss something? Brian isn't Gus's real father in this story?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I'm confused by the question though.

 
Summary:

Brian and Justin look back on their feelings for each other a few months after Justin moves to New York City and they come to a mutual conclusion as to those feelings.


Categories: QAF-U.S. FICTION, Brian/Justin, Song Fic Characters: Justin
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes Word count: 1863
[Report This] Published: October 09, 2008 Updated: October 09, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 09, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: It Had to be You

This melted my heart. I love that song.  It's so fits them and their love.

 Thanks for sharing

 



Author's Response: Thank you so very much Gina Marie.  The song is an oldie but a goodie and when Sunny asked for a story to go with the words I knew I had to do it.  I'm so glad you enjoyed it.  Big hugs, Grammy

 
Summary:

Sequel to Happy Birthday, Brian. Can Brian and Justin survive “happily ever after,” that is, an engagement, a huge wedding, a honeymoon in Italy, life at Britin, career changes, and a baby?

Thanks so much to pannkakan for the banner!

 


Categories: Brian/Justin, Romance Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: Happy Birthday, Brian Universe
Chapters: 34 Completed: No Word count: 30520
[Report This] Published: October 15, 2008 Updated: March 27, 2010


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 16, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Not Normal People, Chapter 1: In the dark

whewwww... shower anyone?

 

 



Author's Response:

I take it that means you enjoyed it?

:D :D :D 

 
Summary:

Repost of this story. Everything takes a strange turn at the end of Episode 217, when Brian goes to tell Justin about his new partnership.

 

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 Banner by the lovely skywalkersdream!!!


Categories: Brian/Justin Characters: None
Challenges: None
Series: None
Chapters: 16 Completed: No Word count: 46261
[Report This] Published: October 25, 2008 Updated: November 24, 2008


Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Brian comes home from Chicago

Ok, I'm hooked!

Author's Response: And I'm just reeeling them in!  LOL!  Thank you!  Chapter 2 is up.  :)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 25, 2008 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Brian tries to get some answers

Oh no! Paralle universes??  Dying to know what happens next!



Author's Response: Yep.  Parallel universe.  So there you go.  This really is an AU!  LOL!  I should be posting the next chapter sometime today.  I don't want to spam the comm.  :)  Thank you!!!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Brian runs into Kip

Oh this is getting very intriguing! So loving it!

Author's Response: Thank you.  You are now coming to the part of the roller coaster that is going straight up.  :) 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 27, 2008 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Brian learns who Justin is

Love that you brought in mysterious marilyn!  She can explain it to the boys.  Very interesting storyline!

Author's Response: Well, let's just say she'll try to explain it to the boys.  LOL!  :)  Thank you!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 28, 2008 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Brian and Michael learn more

OMG this was the best chapter yet!  Please update soon!  I can't wait to see how Justin reacts to Brian for the first time!

Excellent story!  You are doing a great job considering the complexity of the storyline!  It flows and has continuity.  I thought it would be a bit confusing, but you've crafted it perfectly!  Again, great job!



Author's Response:

LOL!  Best one?  You have about 19 more to go!  :)  I will be updating tomorrow.

 

It was sometimes a real bitch to write - keeping both universes straight.  Thank you for that!  :)  I always hoped that I kept the confusion down and to me, no matter what story I'm working on, if it doesn't flow right, I scratch it and start over.  That to me, is one of the most important things in a fic. 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 30, 2008 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Brian gets some answers from Justin

This story gets more intriguing with each chapter! Love the formatting by the way. And your attention to detail is greatly appreciated.

 I have this on my favorites now.  It's not often one comes across a talented writer with such a vivid imagination.



Author's Response:

I like detail (but not so much that it gets distracting and makes you just want to skip over everything) because it makes it more real.  Thank you for the very lovely fb!

*hugs*

 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: October 31, 2008 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Brian goes back to the loft

Brian is jealous of himself!  lol Love it. another great chapter

Author's Response: Yeah the big goof!  LOL!  Thank you and the next chapter is up!  :)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 01, 2008 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9 - Brian talks to Lindsay

First of all Justin compared to cheesecake. Love it! lol

But I'm a bit confused about the timeline. In the show, the frenchman came after Justin went to vermont. In your story it starts off with Brian coming back from his trip and Justin never went to vermont. Are the time lines different in each world?

Loving this so much  btw!  If you couldn't tell.  :-)



Author's Response:

Justin is full of cheesecake goodness.  LOL!

Gui was in S1, remember?  He was going to marry Lindsey so he could stay in America (this was after Mel and Lindsey broke up).  Then Brian gave his parental rights to Mel and then Linds broke off the engagement to Gui..  And I put a note at the beginning of the story.  I changed canon slightly.  Instead of Justin going to Vermont, Michael convinced him to stay until Brian got back from Chicago.  This was the only way this story would've worked otherwise.

Hope that clears everything.  :)  Thank you!  I'm glad you're loving this so much!!!

 

 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 03, 2008 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10 - Brian goes to the diner

First, thanks for clearing up my confusion.  It really doesn't matter though, this story stands on it's own, it's so amazing!  Love this chapter. Love how each Brian is the same, yet different.  For some reason I'm liking the Brian in Justin's world a little bit more. Maybe it's because he's realizng for the first time what he's been missing.

Anyway, again, great chapter!



Author's Response:

Hey no problem.  It does get a bit confusing sometimes - just like life.  :)  Yes!  Exactly!  Brian (the one we know) is more likable, because he opened himself up to Justin and yeah, he's really not liking where he's at at right now because he's missing Justin terribly, which makes Brian a more sympathetic character right now.

Thank you!!!! 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Brian keeps looking for answers

another great chapter, but again I'm a bit confused as to the timeline.  Ethan came after the vermont trip. Much after. 

Do the two worlds exist in different time lines?



Author's Response:

No remember?  Justin met Ethan on his birthday.  Then Brian went to Vermont and then as Justin was feeling left out when Brian came back, he saw Ethan again and they talked about his birthday and then there was the couch moving thing.

So I was thinking that Ethan would know of Justin when Brian visited him at PIFA.

BTW, thank you!  :)

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 08, 2008 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12 - Brian keeps looking for answers

Duh!  I think I need to rewatch the show!  lol

You're right, I totally forgot about that!  I'm so loving the story, and when I am so into a story, I get stuck sometimes on a detail. It's a compliment, believe me. So many stories aren't as meticulously written as yours that I would normally let something that doesnt' quite fit with me slide, but your story is so well crafted, small details like that catch my eye.

But you are right, (not surprisingly) Justin did meet ethan on his birthday!  Thanks again for clearing that up.

 



Author's Response:

LOL!  I still can't believe I remember half the shit I do.  :)

I kow what you mean.  I forgive quite a bit when reading a story that doesn't pay attention to detail either but when one does, I start paying more attention and notice flubs.

You are quite welcome.  :) 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 11, 2008 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13 - Brian learns some hard truths

Walking through that mirror may be doing our Brian some good.  A life without Justin is making Brian realize exactly what he's been missing.  How ironic that he has that cathartic conversation with Ethan! That was just brilliant.

As for the 'other' Brian, things are starting to come together for him. Question is, when the time comes, will he want to go back?

Another great chapter!

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 12, 2008 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14 - Brian remembers something

Oh no. I hope Brian's not  going to do what I think he's going to do! For sure Justin's going to know somethings wrong then!

This story is sooo intriguing!



Author's Response:

Well, you already know what Brian was thinking of doing and HE DID IT!!!!  And yeah, Justin's heart just broke in two.

Thank you!!!!  Glad it's got you hooked.  :) 

 
Reviewer: Gina Marie Signed
Date: November 15, 2008 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15 - Brian fucks up

this chapter was heartbreaking.  My heart goes out to the 'other' Brian, and Justin. What a fine mess...

Author's Response: It is a mess.  And yeah, writing Justin as his heart was breaking was hard on me.  But this is how I see him reacting.  Thank you!!!