Midnight Whispers :: QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction

Reviewer: EmeryFelton (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2020 01:46 AM · On: Chapter 1

YES! I just made an account with this site so I could say YES! I'm glad someone mentioned it! It always bothered me that Debbie had a baseball bat as her weapon of choice at the the diner. Like...wtf Debbie?! Thank you for addressing it!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 08:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice combo mixing Debs defense of Loretta and the bashing.

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 25, 2013 11:35 PM · On: Chapter 1

Poor Justin. Protecting Brian - this is beautiful.

Author's Response: Thank you, what was Deb doing with a bat in the first place?

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: December 13, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really like it. A very tense one.

Author's Response:
Thank you so much :)

Reviewer: gerri (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 06:36 PM · On: Chapter 1

interesting take on that. It is a valid thing to investigate.

Author's Response: Thank you. I thought so.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 17, 2009 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 1

I never thought about the fact that Brian and Justin could have been there that day. Of all the things they had Deb use to hold off Loretta's husband, it was a bat!
Deb was a bit slow, but I think was really embarrassed when she realized what she had done in front of Justin and Brian of all people. Great job!

Author's Response:
Thank you co much.
I hated that they had her use a bat in the show.

Reviewer: fabi_tenshi (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

This was a wonderful concept, if not a bit sad.
The way you wrote Brian as being protective and all was wonderful.
Too bad it was too short, I'd love to read more about this.
You could write a sequel with what happensafterwards.

Author's Response:
Thank you. Yes, it was a bit sad.
Brian has always been very protective of Justin, even in the beginning.
I don't know about a sequel, I have so many other stories I work on.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 10:18 AM · On: Chapter 1

she knew but didn't realize. still too painful for them.

Author's Response:
Precisely.
It really still is.

Reviewer: mandagrammy (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 05:37 AM · On: Chapter 1

What an inspired thought. That was a scene that called out for a reaction if only Brian and Justin had been in the diner that day. You captured how it would have gone down perfectly. My only regret is that the story was so short. I would love to have read even more of this concept. You are a talented writer. Thanks for sharing your work Edom. Hugs, Grammy

Author's Response:
Thank you so much. It was hugely inspired by this story: http://ladybugkay.livejournal.com/25550.html
It's much longer than mine and beautifully written.
I think you should come join os over at www.libertyavenu.net The forum is really starting to be something and discussions on anything and everything QAF related is more than welcome.

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