Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 1

That would have been a good storyline for the series, rather than having Mikey as the poor kids dad.

Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1

I don't know why, but I don't remember ever reading several of your stories. I love this one.

Author's Response: Thank you, I'm glad you found them then :)

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 07, 2013 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice story :)

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 1

This is really nice. I've actually questioned why the girls never considered Justin to father JR. He is close to them, a good man, and blonde and artistic.  I hope there can be a sequel?

Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1

I really do love your stories



Author's Response:

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

Enjoyed how you fitted so much into one chapter. I would love a sequel along with the rest of your readers. It shows how much Justin still loves Brian even though he's with Ethan (which I didn't expect.) Just one point if you don't mind me pointing it out.  The word is "eviscerate" which if you saw the movie "Braveheart" is what they did to our poor Mel Gibson at the end.

Author's Response:

I'm happy you liked it. The sequel is unavoidable for me by now, not that I really mind.

I guess both me beta and I missed that one, thanks.

Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1

I really enjoyed your fic; if only it were canon! This is what should have happened. Michael never considered his *best friend's* feelings, but it was always most obvious when it came to Gus and Justin. Canon Mikey never considered making a stand for Brian's rights. I could definitely see canon Justin making the conditions in your story. Hope you write a sequel... I've always loved fics with Justin as a daddy!

Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes, canon showed how considerate Mikey is of his 'best friends' feelings.

I have been under presure from several sides to do a sequel, so I probably will, or maybe just more chapters to this one :-)

Reviewer: MattMel (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 1

Oh how great was that. Wonderful. I loved Brian's 'oooh big mistake' and Justin's 'take me home'. I can see both of them as Daddys.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

Brian would react like that, he knows that Justin won't stand for anybody talking about ANY of his friends like that, least of all Brian.

Justin as Daddy is a given :-D

Reviewer: snvoigt (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 1

I love it!! It would be even better if you wrote a sequel and let us know how they are doing and what it's like when Justin has his baby!!

Shauna



Author's Response:

Thank you so much.

I've already been presured to do a sequel ;-D

I promise to think about it.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1

i freaking loved this.  I read it here and then i got the notification that it was up at bjfic.  So expect a comment both places.

 

you freaking rock. 



Author's Response: Smiling like a fucking fool right now. Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 1

enjoyed this

Author's Response: I'm glad :-D

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

Loved it!! Only Justin would do something like this for Brian. He, out of anyone, ALWAYS looked out for Brian's best interest and was just as protective as Brian was of him. And no, Mikey would have never thought of doing that for Brian. We all saw on the show that he didn't give a second thought to Brian's rights to Gus. Only to insult him by calling him a "drop in dad". 

Nice twist with the Ethan break up!! Great job!!



Author's Response:

I'm glad.

Yes, only Justin would do something like that.

Thank you so much.

Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 1

I enjoyed this, very much.  Very clever the way you tied several, big canon issues into a single, short story.

Why, oh why, didn't CowLip hire writers like you and some of our other talented FanFic  stars?

I enjoy good fanfic, like this story, so much more than the actual series.

Thanks for sharing!

 



Author's Response:

Thank you so much, that's quite the compliment.

Wouldn't it have been nice to have this happen in canon, though?

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 1

brian is right, michael would never have thought to offer conditions. i loved how you bought the fiddler's cheating on justin into it. that was perfect. and justin was going home where he belonged. whoo hoo!!!!!!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks. No, we saw in canon that Michael wouldn't.

Justin belongs with Brian, we all know that :-)

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

Nice.

Author's Response: Thanks.

Reviewer: minami77 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1

I love it, compliments, I think only Justin could be so careful about "his" Brian.  And besides I love Masterglory's banner too, she is always very good with banner imo ^^



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. Yes, only Justin would demand that Brian got some rights to Gus. We know from canon that Michael didn't care as long as his rights were intact.

Masterglory's banner really is beautiful.

Reviewer: Sammy (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 1

I meant that if Mel and Linds split up and got new partners after awhile they probably wouldnt interact anymore thus the kids would probably barely see each other if at all. Mel and Linds relationship on the show I always thought was probably the least stable and if they split permanantly I doubt they would remain close. Thats just imo.

Author's Response: That's true, but in this 'verse they have leagal rights to each others kids. They would still see them both. You don't divorce children, you divorce spouses.

Reviewer: Sammy (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 1

that was a great thing Justin did for Brian. However Justin and Brian wouldnt be tied together just because Justin has a baby with Mel. It would actually have nothing to do with him because Gus wouldnt biologically be related to the baby at all. If Linds was the baies parents then they would be tied because they would be related biologically.

Author's Response:

Thank you.

They would be tied together as in Gus and the new baby would be raised as siblings, just like JR and Gus is in canon.

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