Reviews For Visitation Rights
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: April 02, 2016 06:18 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Lorie (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2014 03:59 AM · On: Chapter 1
I don't know why, but I don't remember ever reading several of your stories. I love this one.
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Netteh (Signed) · Date: October 10, 2011 01:26 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: February 12, 2009 03:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Enjoyed how you fitted so much into one chapter. I would love a sequel along with the rest of your readers. It shows how much Justin still loves Brian even though he's with Ethan (which I didn't expect.) Just one point if you don't mind me pointing it out. The word is "eviscerate" which if you saw the movie "Braveheart" is what they did to our poor Mel Gibson at the end.
Reviewer: Deb Tanner (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 01:34 PM · On: Chapter 1
I really enjoyed your fic; if only it were canon! This is what should have happened. Michael never considered his *best friend's* feelings, but it was always most obvious when it came to Gus and Justin. Canon Mikey never considered making a stand for Brian's rights. I could definitely see canon Justin making the conditions in your story. Hope you write a sequel... I've always loved fics with Justin as a daddy!
Reviewer: MattMel (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 04:07 AM · On: Chapter 1
Oh how great was that. Wonderful. I loved Brian's 'oooh big mistake' and Justin's 'take me home'. I can see both of them as Daddys.
Reviewer: snvoigt (Anonymous) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:48 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 03:27 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 1
enjoyed this
Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 03, 2009 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Curious George (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2009 11:59 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 11:16 PM · On: Chapter 1
brian is right, michael would never have thought to offer conditions. i loved how you bought the fiddler's cheating on justin into it. that was perfect. and justin was going home where he belonged. whoo hoo!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Nice.
Reviewer: minami77 (Signed) · Date: February 02, 2009 09:43 PM · On: Chapter 1
Reviewer: Sammy (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2009 07:38 PM · On: Chapter 1
I meant that if Mel and Linds split up and got new partners after awhile they probably wouldnt interact anymore thus the kids would probably barely see each other if at all. Mel and Linds relationship on the show I always thought was probably the least stable and if they split permanantly I doubt they would remain close. Thats just imo.
Reviewer: Sammy (Anonymous) · Date: February 02, 2009 07:03 PM · On: Chapter 1
that was a great thing Justin did for Brian. However Justin and Brian wouldnt be tied together just because Justin has a baby with Mel. It would actually have nothing to do with him because Gus wouldnt biologically be related to the baby at all. If Linds was the baies parents then they would be tied because they would be related biologically. |
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