Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For The Gathering
Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2020 08:00 AM · On: Anticipation, Part 2

They all annoy me with there insistence that they be included with B/Js life...if my friends acted like that, they wouldn’t be my friends for long. Hey your own life. 

Reviewer: Bgriggs (Signed) · Date: May 22, 2020 06:41 AM · On: Pittsburgh

But he’s my best friend....some things never change 

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: April 30, 2017 09:17 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

Hi again.  Its been a looong time!  I read a few of your responses and it says you have ideas for Talisman of Time and the Thorne Saga continuations.  I really hope you do post those.  I still love this 'verse.  I'd also like to get a peek at Brian and Justin's life in NY now they have a loft and an office for Kinnetic.  Love all of your writing!

Reviewer: wingnut1974 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2015 01:58 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

What Happened.  I so hope someday this will be finished

Reviewer: Amber (Anonymous) · Date: December 23, 2013 02:24 PM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

UPDATE AS SOON AS YOU POSSIBLY CAN PRETTY PLEASE?!?!!?!??!?!?!!??

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 08:25 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

I was wondering if Mel and Lindsay got any presents.



Author's Response: During the big after-dinner Christmas Exchange. These are only the presents from Santa. (smile)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 08:15 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5

Yummy Christmas breakfast. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 07:47 AM · On: Christmas Morning Part 4 of 5

Thanks for the recipes, I'd still rather have Em do the cooking.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 05:48 AM · On: Christmas Morning Part 3 of 5

and a wonder time was had by all.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 05:36 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 2 of 5

What kind of punishment is the hot tub?  Exactly who is behind the horses?  Wasn't Ted or Calvin supposed to have shown up?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 03:15 AM · On: And At Michael's House

I really must go back to your other story to review why Mikey and Ben are apart.  Mikey has this unreasonable need to consult Brian, when he should be consulting Ben.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 02:41 AM · On: And At Bri-tin

Are you sure it was wise of Brian to tell Daphne about Philip and CJ's visit to Woody's with Gus around.  Surely the other kids will learn about it and then it will get back to Elise and Vicki.  I have a feeling Deb's going to get married.  Justin really is sneaky.  Now I have to find the story of the Christmas Horse.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 01:59 AM · On: At Carl's Old House

I hope Mac and Laurie decide to join them.  The story Philip picked is perfect.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 12:34 AM · On: Return to Debbie's

CJ/Philip - how deliciously wicked.  I thought everyone was going to help Deb, but Brian managed to somehow get out of it.  In spite of it Deb manage to whip up enough to feed an army.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 12:24 AM · On: The More The Merrier...Maybe

At least Michael is now thinking about Deb marrying Carl and not just thinking about himself. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2013 12:16 AM · On: Afterward

Ah, another cliff hanger.  It was nice that the boys took time out for a boys night out and Philip and CJ trying to fit in ... LOL!  They did a wonderful job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 11:15 PM · On: Special Delivery For The Rehab Center

What a heartwarming time at the rehab center.  You did a wonderful job of telling this.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 01:12 PM · On: Special Delivery for the Vic Grassi House

Ted makes a wonderful Santa

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 12:53 PM · On: Trouble Arrives

Poor Ted.  Actually I think he doesn't mind as much as he says.  The kids are going to be soo surprised.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 12:18 PM · On: Together Again

Why does Michael have to act like a two year old?    Is he trying to divide the family?  Even his own father disagrees.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 12:05 PM · On: Adventures In Wrapping

Teddy Bears!  What a wonderful idea!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 11:25 AM · On: Here We Go

I wonder who Philip will get to explain the Mikey, Daniel connection.  Brian?  Michael not being snoddy - I think I'm going to faint.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 11:15 AM · On: Arrivals 107

Daniels back, now Mikey will be happy.  How do you explain that Divina Devore to Carl's relatives?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 11:04 AM · On: The Prelude To Things

Shopping with 6 kids can not be fun!  But it seemed to work out in the end.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 10:55 AM · On: Riding Together

I think they should get Gus involved in grooming horses and muking out the stalls, then see if he really wants a horse so bad. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 10:22 AM · On: The Old House, Part II

Well now that Carl has his children's approval all he needs to do is convince Debbie.  One way would be to remind her that if something happened to Carl she wouldn't be intitled to anything.  I can't wait to find out what Emmett has planned.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 10:13 AM · On: At The Old House

The Horvath Clan had an interesting morning.  Their day of shopping should prove just as intersting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 08:14 AM · On: Plans

A little look at everyone's morning.  Wonderbar!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 08:08 AM · On: The Bedtime Afterwards

Every one was updated on the happenings at Bri-tin.  Always a good thing.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 05:23 AM · On: A Little Bit Of Chaos

Christmas Eve already!  So much has happened and it's nice to see Brian getting into the Christmas spirit.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 05:00 AM · On: Santa Land And Beyond (Sidebar)

It's nice to see what Michael and all the kids, big and small, were up to.  This must have been fun to write.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 03:55 AM · On: The Cookies Await

Now I'm sure Nicky and family will show up.  Rage had better warm up as well.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 03:08 AM · On: The Media Room At Bri-tin

Brian's letting his inner child have free reign.  Fantastic chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 02:40 AM · On: Wrapping At Bri-tin

I can't help but wonder where Christmas dinner will be.  It appears Santa has the right amount of helpers.  I'm gonna have to find time to decorate some cookies after I finish this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 12:46 AM · On: Let's Assemble Together

Well all the kids have found the adult of their choice to stay close to when visiting Santa.  The trip should prove interesting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 26, 2013 12:38 AM · On: Bri-tin

So Daphne is going to see Santa.  Who else will get roped into going?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 11:08 PM · On: Anticipation, Part 2

Everyone wants to visit Britin.  Hope they all get their wish.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 11:01 PM · On: Anticipation, Part 1

Looks like everyone is getting along.  Santa Land here they come.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 02:17 PM · On: Dinner At Debbie's

Now Mikey gets to be jealous of everyone going to Britin while he's escorting kids to see Santa.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 01:55 PM · On: A Bonding Moment

CJ and Philip shopping together!  Will wonders never cease.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 01:48 PM · On: Visitors

I can't wait for CJ to meet Emmett and of course Drew!  <chuckle>

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 01:38 PM · On: Pittsburgh

Can you imagine Michael meeting CJ in his uniform.  Hubba hubba!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 01:33 PM · On: Arrivals 106

CJ introduction to Liberty Ave has started.  It's good to see that he and Carl are starting off on the right foot.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 01:20 PM · On: Arrivals 105

So a trip to the Big Q is planned.  Will Gus get in on this?  Will Brian end up being a chaperone?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 12:59 PM · On: Bri-tin

Brian seems to be enjoying Christmas this year.  What could be better.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 12:49 PM · On: Pittsburgh

Michael doesn't seem to grow does he?  He's obviously jealous that almost everyone seems to have met Brian and or visited Britin.  At least his JR has arrived.  That should make him happy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 12:35 PM · On: Pittsburgh

So CJ is a control freak?  What happens when he meets Brian, another control freak.  I'd forgotten that Ben and Michael had separated, must reread that again.  That last sentance is quite the cliff hanger.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 12:12 PM · On: Bedtime

The kids at the Horvath House got a story that all could understand.  Debbie got a lecture on letting other's do for her.  Justin got carried away with a train set that made Brian feel very special.  A wonderful chapter for all.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 10:17 AM · On: Bri-tin

A train under the tree.  How wonderful.  I think I'll have to get a tree ready to decorate after reading this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 08:27 AM · On: Pittsburgh

I'm going to have to read the whole series to refresh my memory on Kinnitek NY.  I almost expected Ted to address Philip as Phil.  lol.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 08:19 AM · On: Pittsburgh

Deb seems to have calmed herself down for Vicki and Elise.  Having to explain about Michael and his dad must have been a story in itself, since I thought they'd been told that Michael's father was dead.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 07:40 AM · On: Pittsburgh

So Philip will finally get to see what a bath house used to look like!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 06:07 AM · On: Arrivals 104

Oh, how to explain Emmett to someone who's never met him.  Elise introduction into America has indeed been easy.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 05:49 AM · On: The Next Morning At Bri-tin

Emmett and Daphne playing Barbie dolls, that I would love to see.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 25, 2013 02:23 AM · On: That Night At Bri-tin

Having Daphne around may curtail their activities a bit, but I doubt it.  I too can't wait to see what tomorrow brings.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 10:08 AM · On: Dinner At Debbie's

The meal turned out wonderful.  And no Mikey?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 09:58 AM · On: Reflections

What would Vicki think if Debbie pulled off her wig I wonder.  Everyone is meeting at Deb and Carls?  Where will everyone sit?  Will Michael and Ben be there?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 09:20 AM · On: Arrivals 101

What a lovely return home for Vicki and her family.  Emmett did a wonderful job.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 09:07 AM · On: Toronto

If Brian hadn't met Justin the day Gus was born I'd wonder exactly was Gus' father.^^

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 08:50 AM · On: Salt Lake City

Philip is going to have his hands full.  Mac can come to his rescue.  I notice that even Vicki calls Philip Philip.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 07:54 AM · On: Pittsburgh

I guess asking Brian and Justin what their plans are is out of the question?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 07:46 AM · On: Germany

Gretchen appears to be a little scamp.  Getting all those kids together should prove interesting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 07:43 AM · On: Germany

CJ and Vicki really do need to spend some time together.  Lets see how many kids do they have between them?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 07:28 AM · On: New York

Looks like Justin on the warpath.  Doesn't he know that Brian's got it all taken care of?  Of course does Brian know that he's got it all taken care of.  lol.  Getting Emmett to NY shouldn't be too hard to do.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 07:12 AM · On: Salt Lake City

You more or less need a flow chart to follow Deb's family.  You certainly managed to detail everyone and their place in the family and make it all interesting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 07:00 AM · On: Salt Lake City

Vicki is not clever she's devious.  I  expect that Mac will show up from time to time.  I like him.  His finding out about the Pittsburgh crew should be illuminating.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 06:45 AM · On: New York

How nice to see Brian and Justin dealing with important issues.  To shop or not to shop.  It's been awhile but I do remember the Silvestri Family, if they turn up Christmas will be very interesting.  Not to mention that Nicky and his dads need to be there for Gus. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 06:15 AM · On: Pittsburgh

It's a good thing that Carl is the voice of reason.  I pity his check book though.  Funny Emmett isn't the only one to suspect that this will be a Christmas to remember. LOL.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2013 06:06 AM · On: Salt Lake City

I worry about Vicki.  She interrupts her husband to ask a question she could have asked at any time and she seems to have already come to a conclusion about Debbie that doesn't bode well.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: November 17, 2013 03:28 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

Will this ever be continued?



Author's Response: Yes, I hope to have new chapters up before Christmas. I'm running a little late due to an unexpected job assignment. But I will definitely be posting new chapters. (smile)

Reviewer: wingnut1974 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2013 10:12 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

Are you ever going to finish these stories?  I love them so much!!!!!

Reviewer: bonef (Anonymous) · Date: October 04, 2012 12:05 PM · On: Salt Lake City

Certainly hope you will continue this story. Some of us Do like Michael and care what happens to him. I'm also interested in the Carl and Debbie story.

Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2012 02:54 PM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

I loved it! I can't wait to see how it all ends..... And I'd want to know if the other sagas (The Thorne Saga and the Sparring Partners saga) will be completed.... They're so good! Pretty please??? :D Can't wait for the next chapter to be up! Hope to read you soon! Kisses!

Reviewer: rattan23 (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2012 10:16 PM · On: Salt Lake City

Great Story, am more coming soon?



Author's Response: Thanks for letting me know that you like this story. There will be more chapters posted. Unfortunately, with my schedule, I don't think new chapters will be posted until the holidays. But there will definitely be more chapters.

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: January 29, 2012 04:22 PM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

Thanks for this wonderful story.  Had Ebenezer had this story to
read, he probably wouldn’t need Christmas, past, present and

future.

 

So Gus got his horse(s).  Nothing could possibly top that, except

maybe a BMW convertible, or is that just me.

 

There is a reason why stories like this are called “Christmas

Stories” and this is a wonderful example of one.

 

Thanks again.

DavidR



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. There is more to the story. I'm going to continue it. Unfortunately, I ran out space on my disc drive. Let me get files transferred and I'll be back to writing this story.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2012 06:40 PM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

Oh what a lovely chapter I love the gentlness of this



Author's Response: Thanks of commenting. I'm glad you like the chapter. Sometimes Christmas should be just a easy holiday with friends and family. (smile) More to come...

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 24, 2012 12:53 PM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5 (continued)

chuck sold santa the horses gus got his wish love it good going up date soon and have fun thanku kim

Author's Response: Kim......I'm glad you had fun. We'll have to see if your theory about the mystery of the horses was accurate. My lips are sealed. (smile) I'm glad you liked the chapter. Thanks again for commenting.

Reviewer: kim136@dodo.com.au (Anonymous) · Date: January 23, 2012 09:30 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 5 of 5

great chapter thanks kim

Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I love comments. (smile) I'm also glad you like the chapter. The continuation has been posted. Enjoy!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 06:57 PM · On: Christmas Morning Part 4 of 5

I am so enjoying all these wonderful Christmas mornings thank you



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you like the little glimpses of Christmas Morning before the big gathering at Bri-tin. My images of QAF Christmas would always have these moments. I'm glad you liked them too. More to come...

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 11:05 AM · On: Christmas Morning Part 4 of 5

The Christmas dinner at BriTin should be fun. Looks like


everyone will be dressed casual except maybe Brian.  Then


again, if Gucci or Prada make casual; then Brian may dress


casual as well.  Then again – maybe not.


 


Nice couple of chapter.  This story has become a Christmas


Tradition.  Maybe you should stop here and continue next


December.  Just kidding…..


 


I am still having problems caring about Michael and what


happens to him.  I know that is not very ‘Christmas-Like’, but


Michael is ‘eh’. I know he is an important character and a


member of the family, but I just don’t like him. Even JR is now


cuddled up happily in Ben’s lap.


 


Anyway, thanks for the chapters; I am now up to date.


 


DavidR



Author's Response: Yes, Yes. I know Michael isn't your favorite character. (smile) But it's the holidays, and family is important...even if they drive you crazy. (smile) I thought I was going to be able to finish this story without interruption, but that didn't work.. However, I've figured out how to let you know about the brief disappearances...and then I can be back on track. We'll have to see how this works. I'm glad you like this story. More to come....

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: December 25, 2011 01:44 AM · On: Christmas Morning Part 4 of 5

I loved this chapter!!! I hope you have a great Christmas!!!!!! Kisses!!



Author's Response: Thanks for the holiday wishes. I'm glad that you liked the chapter. I'm going to continue story for a bit. More to come...

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: December 22, 2011 12:38 AM · On: Christmas Morning Part 3 of 5

I loved this chapter!!!! I can't wait to read what will happen next!!!! We'll read each other soon.... Kisses!!!

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2011 06:19 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 2 of 5

Oh! How I loved the surprise in the stables!!!!! Horses!!! Ha! Who would've thought? I really can't wait to read the next chapter.... I can already picture Brian and Justin's surprised faces when they look at the horses... even though they already know they're there.... I hope you can update soon, but no pressure, I know that when real life gets in the way, there's little one can do about it... And in case you don't update until after the Holidays.... Merry Christmas!!!!! Kisses!

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 03:16 PM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 2 of 5

What Im done.  i ned more  why r u doing this to me cant wait for more



Author's Response: I love you comments after each chapter. They have definitely left me smiling. It's good to see that you've caught up with me. I always worry about readers' fatigue with my stories. (smile) I will have another chapter posted by Wednesday. Just bear with me. I'll write faster so you don't have to suffer. (smile) I'm glad your reading with me.

Reviewer: Cynthia (Anonymous) · Date: December 19, 2011 06:56 AM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 2 of 5

I love this story, and I'm so glad you updated! Horses in the stables? Mac and Laurie? I can't wait to read what happens next at Britin ;-)



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you like these new developing twists. Now you see why it takes me so long to tell a story. All should be revealed. More to come...

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 06:35 AM · On: Afterward

Christ just when I was going to pause for awhile.   Better readone more chap

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 06:02 AM · On: Trouble Arrives

Dont do this to me i love this story and i wanted drama but now if people become evil i dont know what I will do

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2011 05:02 AM · On: Arrivals 107

YA Danny!  Hey dont CJ and his sister think michael dad is dead

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2011 11:01 PM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 2 of 5

I am so happy to see another chapter up.

Can't wait to see what happen next...

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 07:41 PM · On: Christmas Morning, Part 2 of 5

Ok I have no idea how the horses got there if Brian did not organise it. I look forward to finding out in the next chapter

Reviewer: MAFITA (Anonymous) · Date: December 18, 2011 09:10 AM · On: Christmas Morning Part 1 of 5

I loved this chapter also!!! I can't wait for Mac and Laurie to be at Britin and meet everyone!!!! I really love your story.... all of the Talisman Series in fact... I was just wondering if you would be continuing The Thorne Saga II and More sessions in the Pitts, and The Talisman Series in general... I would love to continue reading those!!! Well, Merry Christmas!!! I hope you have fantastic holidays and I hope we'll read each other soon!!!!



Author's Response: Thanks for commentng and letting me know that you like this story. I've been trying to write a nice short story...obviously this story isn't it. (smile) There are a lot of characters and each one demands their space on the page. I'm going to continue the Talisman Series....I owe everyone "And So Moving Forward, Part 2". I'm also working on "Thorne III." Hopefully, my travel/work schedule will settle down a little, and my writing will get back on track. In the meantime, enjoy "The Gathering".

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 05:09 AM · On: A Little Bit Of Chaos

Ok i just love Daph she is like a big old baby.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2011 03:13 AM · On: Santa Land And Beyond (Sidebar)

This was so great.   Yea Im back with more comments

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 07:32 AM · On: The Cookies Await

Okay stopping here for now.  Words cant express how much i love this

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 07:07 AM · On: The Media Room At Bri-tin

Oh Brian is a big softy.   One more chapter and I gotta stop for awhile.  You so rock.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 06:22 AM · On: Anticipation, Part 2

Will Tomorrow Ever Come?  Im trying not to comment every chapter

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 06:12 AM · On: Anticipation, Part 1

I cant wait for tomorrow

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 05:57 AM · On: Dinner At Debbie's

Wow I comment alot.   This is great.  Now I want a Christmas wedding.  I think I got time for one more chapter.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 05:13 AM · On: A Bonding Moment

See that was great.  i got time for one more chapter

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 05:02 AM · On: Visitors

This was great maybe CJ wont be so bad.  He liked Brin.  He liked Kiki.  I guess I have time for one more chapter.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 04:44 AM · On: Arrivals 106

OMG he was nice.   I dont know man im still skeptical.  I better read one more chapter before I pause.   I see CJ as as Captain Jack Harkness.   Do you know him.  He is in the militaryr.   Lol I can only imagine the gossip Debbie will receive.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 04:33 AM · On: Arrivals 105

See now i like michael.  Cj is going to be the devil

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 04:20 AM · On: Bri-tin

Aww the calm before the CJ Storn.  I want a Melanie CJ smackdown

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 12:50 AM · On: Pittsburgh

See Mikey has to get over this best friend crap.  I havent read any other story in ur series but damn i hate michael

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 12:37 AM · On: Pittsburgh

See the first winey bastard.   God I hate Michael

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2011 12:17 AM · On: Bri-tin

See that chapter was so cheesingly good.  CJ is going to so be a bastard.  I really should stop saying that.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 02:11 PM · On: Pittsburgh

See its to good to be true.  CJ is the devil.  Or are you going to kill him off at this training.  The suspense is killing me.  Although I like the good nature so far.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 02:00 PM · On: Pittsburgh

Oh this is getting good.  He is going to love the car.  I also realize that ur story takes place in ur own universe with storylines and people.  I will not stop reading this now though.  Im to hooked and god so not liking Michael.  Is it wrong I hope CJ hates him and loves everyone else.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 01:50 PM · On: Arrivals 104

Please let CJ be nice.  I know how Carl was in the beginning but he wasnt cruel.  I imagine Brian and Carl fighting.  Him hating Michael immediately.  Oh well on to the next

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 08:40 AM · On: Dinner At Debbie's

No the brother is going to be evil.  I hurt thinking of it.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 08:25 AM · On: Reflections

Damn the brother.   Thats the real trouble.  He is going to be a bastard right   God Im so depressed

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 07:51 AM · On: Arrivals 101

Oh now its getting interesting.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 07:38 AM · On: Toronto

The suspense is killing me.  I want everyone to meet.  I will not skip ahead.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 05:53 AM · On: Germany

Oh man now i like CJ.   God they are so snobby I just wonder what they will think of same sex couples kissin in front of kids.  Then there is HIV.   God i am hooked.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 05:30 AM · On: Salt Lake City

Okay so what I thought was going to come out didnt.  then again cj has his own investigators.  ok im hooked.  hope you dont mind the comments i comment a lot.

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 05:18 AM · On: Salt Lake City

See now I dont know what to think.   I mean  he doesnt have last names.   then they are certain things that are public record.  I mean the gayness.  Then the bashing.  We got porn king.  Something tells me he will find molesting allegations and Pink Posse reports.  I want him to be on their side but something tells me all the wrong ideas will be got by the time they arrive.  Im going to stick with it though

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 04:57 AM · On: Pittsburgh

What kind of prepping can one give for The Novotny extended family?   The Horvath's won know what hit them

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 04:46 AM · On: Salt Lake City

Oh man Im just finding this.   I cant wait for more. Off to the next

Reviewer: Galesgal (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2011 02:43 AM · On: Salt Lake City

Oh man Im just finding this.   I cant wait for more. Off to the next

Reviewer: wordshipper (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:59 PM · On: And At Bri-tin

What a treat - another chapter! I was just getting ready to nag....



Author's Response: I'm trying to stick to a Wednesday and Saturday posting schedule. Of course, if I can slip in a few extra chapters, I will. (smile) After a long absence, we're making progress. I hope you continue to like the way this story unfolds.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 07, 2011 06:42 PM · On: And At Bri-tin

Oh that was lovely I wanted to hear the story of the Christmas horse lol. I just love the soft comradery of Brian and Justin



Author's Response: Sorry its' taken me so long to respond to your comments. The Christmas Horse is both an old fable an a new book available at Amazon. com I'm glad you like Brian and Justin here. I've tried to remain true to the characters we all know and love. More to come....

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: December 03, 2011 06:07 PM · On: At Carl's Old House

Really glad to see an update...hope to read more soon. Thanks



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I want to keep the updates coming...because this is a holiday story. (smilel) I'm trying to work out a schedule for updating. At the moment, I'm aiming to have new chapters up by Wednesdays and by Saturdays. I hope you like the way this story continues to unfold.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2011 02:50 AM · On: Return to Debbie's

are you ever going to finish this



Author's Response: I know this seems like the never-ending story. My goal is to finish this story....this holiday season. Updates should be posting soon.

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 23, 2010 02:00 PM · On: Return to Debbie's

I really like this story, and this is the 2nd time I am reading it.

Really hope to be able to read the rest of the story soon.



Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. I'm glad you liked the story. New chapters will be posting this holiday season.

Reviewer: lynn (Anonymous) · Date: August 08, 2010 12:02 AM · On: Salt Lake City

This is a nice story. I really look forward to new chapters to this story soon.

 

Reviewer: kellydeer (Anonymous) · Date: June 27, 2010 06:11 AM · On: Salt Lake City

OK...it's been a year since this story was updated.  Any more chapters on the way?

Reviewer: Elaine (Anonymous) · Date: January 01, 2010 03:16 AM · On: Return to Debbie's

looking forward to more chapters - I recently stumbled on you series and have fallen in love with the characters and story. Please add more chapters soon.

Later



Author's Response: I will be adding more chapters this year. Thanks for commenting.

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