Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: MARCUS (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2012 03:29 AM · On: The Sorting that Shocked Wizarding Britain

This must have been a 'ball' to write.  Enjoyed it very much.  Will there be a seques with the kids taking over?

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2011 12:02 PM · On: The Sorting that Shocked Wizarding Britain

Well, this definitely was a fantastic story.  I hope Malfoy will be all right.  somehow I knew that the Sorting Hat was going to do that.  Well done!!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks.  Draco will get over Blaise being sorted into Hufflepuff, probably about the same time Ron gets over Seamus being sorted into Slytherin.(vbg) There is the possiblity of more chapters being added if I think of anything but they'll probably be done as related stories.  I am working on a sequel of sorts that starts after the boys have graduated from Hogwarts.  I haven't decided on whether one long fic or several small chapters is the way to go. :- )

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: March 06, 2011 01:54 PM · On: Execution

Well, it seems the young ones are more wizards.  I wonder if that potion that Harry and Drako took when they both became pregnant had anything to do with it>  I wonder...  Great update.



Author's Response:

The fact that Ronald and Blaise were created due to the effects of magic has a very big part of why they are so powerful.  thanks again for reading and reviewing.

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: February 22, 2011 06:56 AM · On: Unbeleivable

Now this is interesting.  They are definitely years before their time.  Great update.



Author's Response:

What one has to remember is that Ronald and Blaise were born because of magic and as we all know Magic is Awesome.(vbg)

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 22, 2011 01:51 PM · On: Unexpected Results

I wonder what those two twins are up to.  This is intriguing.



Author's Response:

The sons of Harry Potter and Draco Malfoy up to something. :-)

 

There are probably 5-10 chapters left in this story.  then I'll probably do a sequel of sorts that will deal with what the twins are up to.(assuming they are up to something.)

Reviewer: balrogtweety (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 01:30 PM · On: Who Knew?

It's amazing what you can learn when you talk to other people about your family tree.  Great update.



Author's Response:

You can also take it to absurd lengths.  My aunt got into genealogy big time and it was amazing the relatives she found.  Of course the grandson of the sister of a great grandfather really isn't related to me.(vbg)  But the story reason was that in canon the Pure Bloods despise the Weasleys while acknowledging them as Pure Bloods but Blood Traitors because of political differences so I wanted to show that they were related.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2011 08:21 AM · On: Who Knew?

Nice to see another chapter from you.  And very informative it is too.  Before long everyone will be related to everyone else. lol



Author's Response:

Thanks but it's a long way from the best chapter of this fic.(vbg)  That is the fatal flaw of the Pure Blood bloc, there simply aren't enough Pure Bloods available for there not to be a lot of interbreeding.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 12, 2010 10:50 AM · On: Unexpected Relations

Fourth cousins!!!  Now ain't that a kicker.  When do we find out what the twins think about if Jamie's magic has changed?  To be honest with you, when I read that Draco had an announcement to make, I thought he might be pregnant again. LOL.

Still enjoying this story.



Author's Response:

Now if you remember it was stated that the way the potion Draco used and the spells that Harry used make it unlikely that they would work again.  So even though the Professors are still very intimate with each other they probably will never birth any more children.  As for Jamie's magic that may or not be divulged, it depends on whether it logically fits into any future chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 24, 2010 11:04 AM · On: Unexpected Letter

Well I'm all caught up now and enjoying this thoroughly.  All the boys taking over the ministry?  What a wonderful idea.  And now Dudley's son is going to Hogwarts!!!

I imagine when Ronald & Blaise find out, they'll say they knew all along.

>



Author's Response:

If you rember they did know.(g)  I haven't decided for sure whether they'll try to take over the Ministry.  To be perfectly honest the question is probably more will they win and will Harry and Draco support them or the Ministry.  But it certainly isn't 100 % that there will be an attempt to take over the Ministry.  It might be more interesting to keep it as a worry that Harry has.  We'll see.(eg)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 23, 2010 08:40 AM · On: Waiting Room Revelations

I couldn't resist responding to this chapter.  Harry and Draco each having a child was astonishing.  I'm not surprised that their children are so magical.  I'm gonna have to make a list to keep up with each parent and their children at this rate <grin>

 

>



Author's Response:

You can respond to all of the chapters, it won't hurt my feelings.(vbg)  There was never any doubt in my mind that they both would get pregnant the only question was whether to go againt the current and have Harry use potions and Draco use spells.  I have several lists to keep track of which child belongs to which parent and when they were born.  I also have which house they'll be sorted into even for those that more than likely won't get to Hogwarts before I finish the fic.  Of course who knows when that will be if the muses keep coming up with stories for the gang.(vvbg)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 08:35 AM · On: Spoiled Plans, Again

Mercy me.  I need to stop leaving reviews, which I couldn't resist doing because the story is so good, but I'll never get to the current chapter posted if I don't.  BTW wonderful job setting up Harry's birthday.



Author's Response:

Another one of those come out of the blue ideas.(g)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 08:23 AM · On: Graduation

Harry an honorary member of all four houses!!!  Nobody else could manage that!



Author's Response:

That was one of those situations where the story winds up in  a place I wasn't planning on going.  I wouldn't go so far as to say that nobody could manage the feat.  There is always the future.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 08:15 AM · On: Happy 18

Tut tut.  and to think that Draco spent all that time learning to magically remove his clothing.  I'm thinking he enjoyed turning 18.



Author's Response:

It's always fun to have scenes where Harry and Draco completely forget about the rest of the world.(vbg)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 08:05 AM · On: All Four Houses

Poor Seamus.  If what Dumbledore says is true then sending students home would weaken the school wouldn't it.  It's so wonderful that all the houses are uniting in a stand against the Dark Lord.



Author's Response:

Becasue of how this story was generated Seamus didn't have a chance.  I  had to have a reason for Harry and Draco to be in Ireland in 2013(hasn't been written yet in this fic) and killing Seamus pretty much was the only way I had to do that.  If all students and staff were gone then it probably would make a major difference but as long as one is there the Castle is going to defend them.  This is probably my favorite of all the chapters but if were inclined to rewrite it I would have to make Slytherin House react some what differently.(how's that for a cliffhanger comment?)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 07:23 AM · On: New Tactics

How suspenseful! 



Author's Response:

"I've always thought that the way Wizards fight seems silly so I came up with a system that I think makes more sense.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 07:13 AM · On: Frustration

What a shame that they are not taking Harry seriously.  Where did Draco learn to give such good advice? 



Author's Response:

Well adults tend to do that.  Malfoy heir.(VVVBG)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 07:06 AM · On: St. Valentine's Day

The art work is superb.  The story is too and romantic!!!



Author's Response:

I liked it but it probably is too smaltzy for many readers.(vbg)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 06:45 AM · On: New Year's Conversations

Malfoy and Weasly's getting along!  Ron and Hermoine getting engaged!  The New Year is certainly starting with a bang.



Author's Response:

All of the Weasleys(well who knows what Percy things) think of Harry as a son or brother so if Draco makes him happy then that is what counts.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 06:35 AM · On: Halloween Date

Neat pic!  How did you manage?  Funny chapter<giggle>



Author's Response:

As I remember I googled "Hogwarts Halloween".  It's always interesting what pictures you get when you google.  I mean why would a picture of Ron show up when you google "harry and draco"?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 06:30 AM · On: Surprise Announcement

hurray for Ron.  Now what is this about Giffendor's and Slytherin's sleeping in the same bed...why would anyone laugh at that?  How cruel of them.  Now you have me wondering what Potter and Malfoy do think about it.



Author's Response:

Well put yourself in the older student's place.  10 13 year olds sleep together in a big bed and think they are sleeping together.(g)  I"m guessing Harry thinks it was very cute and Draco thought how un Slytherin they were.(g)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 06:16 AM · On: Birthday Talk

Loverly Pics!  Funny how it's Draco that always wants to talk and Harry just wants to have sex.  Won't they be surprised to find that their news isn't news???  lol



Author's Response:

That little situation is dealt with in a future chapter.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 06:04 AM · On: Murder, Most Foul

oh, no!   How sad.  I wasn't fond of Draco's mother from the books, but your interpetation of her is much nicer. 



Author's Response:

Certain things had to happen in order for the fic to wind up where I wanted it to wind up.  Lucius had to be gotten rid of so that Draco could realise how he felt about Harry.  Truth be told that I got rid of Narcissa simply because I didn't have any idea of what to do with her.  Plus her death lets Harry and Draco move along with their relationship.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 06:00 AM · On: Summer Plans

LOL  It's nice that Harry wants to protect Draco.  Now to get rid of 'he who shall not be named' so they can be open.  At least they get to spend time together over the summer



Author's Response:

Yes that darn Riddle gets in the way of all the good things in Harry's life.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:53 AM · On: Shag of the Century

Draco seems to take a serious interest in his sexual education doesn't he?<grin>



Author's Response:

Would you expect anything less of the Malfoy heir?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:45 AM · On: Practice Makes Perfect

<giggle> I wonder how Blaise feels about Draco and Potter?  Maybe I'll find out in future chapters.



Author's Response:

I think the fact that he didn't do anything to Draco when he over heard the comment in question answers your question.(vvbg)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:39 AM · On: Conversation

How very smart of Ron.  Who woulda thunk!



Author's Response:

Pretty much no one.(vbg)  I saw Deathly Hallows today and I just have to say that our three young actors really have developed their skills.  There is a scene where Ron makes a very good point and the looks that the three actors give each other are just perfect. LOL

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:37 AM · On: First Kiss

My time does fly.  I can see I'm gonna need something to cool me down from this point on.



Author's Response:

Yep time does speed along.  Later on it even goes faster.(g)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:22 AM · On: Christmas Holidays

I rather like this new Draco.  I have a feeling Harry does too.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:19 AM · On: Library Chat

Lordy, lordy!!!  Now the libarian isn't the only one in the know. <chuckle>

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 05:15 AM · On: Truce

Loving this.  Sorry your pic didn't show.  I'm finding that they add a bit extra to the enjoyment.



Author's Response:

Even though I put the exact same information for the pictures in every chapter for some reason they don't show up in some.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 04:58 AM · On: The Witnesses

Oye Vay, I never thought to hear those words said.  I know I'm coming on this story a little late, but now you have my interest and I'll continue on to the end because it reads so well.



Author's Response:

It's always nice to get a review of any kind let alone such a positive one. :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 22, 2010 01:50 AM · On: Execution

You know, if I didn't know better I'd think you wrote the Harry Potter books, the voices are sooooo right.



Author's Response:

Thanks, my bank account would be much happier if I'd written the orignal stories.(vbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: October 29, 2010 07:29 PM · On: Primary Plans

Good to see a new chapter :)



Author's Response:

It's amazing how fast time passes, I had no real idea it had been so long since I posted #46.(vbg)

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2010 02:54 PM · On: Primary Plans

nice :)



Author's Response:

Thanks it's always nice to hear from my readers.(g)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 01:53 PM · On: Hogwarts

Like how you add photos to your writing. :)



Author's Response:

It's an option availiable when posting on this site; hopefully they add to the story.  While I've had some in every chapter of this fic they don't always show up even though I put them into the story exactly the same way.(vbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2010 01:52 PM · On: Candy Caper

I've been very busy writing but do plan to get back to your story soon. Despite the lack of comments I'm sure your work is being read. Let me give you a couple of hits to brighten you day and encourage you to keep going. :)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2010 10:25 AM · On: Funeral

Good to see you keeping this story alive. I see your writing getting better too.



Author's Response:

thanks

Reviewer: Rainbow12007 (Signed) · Date: July 09, 2010 11:19 PM · On: New Family Members

lol i love the twins



Author's Response:

Everyone loves them which the Ministry will probably think is another segment of their plot to take over the Wizarding World.(vbg)  Actually I keep wanting to make them even more powerful than they are and I have to remind myself how old they are and pull back.(g)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 09:29 AM · On: Truce

Many writers are funny and don't want to see another author get more reviews than they have. Therefore they all hold back from giving most people a review. They are just mutually screwing themselves collectively :)

I'm just the opposite and was before becoming an administrator here.

I've given nearly 1300 reviews and got back more than twice that; I hold the record for most reviewed on MW.

Then you have the vast silent majority of lurkers who never review and are not members either. They don't know how important a little feedback is for a writer.

Remember you're a fair writer or your stories would not be on this website.

Your style is simple but there is a market for that; we get lots of people from foreign lands who read here to improve on their Engish.

I bet you that your writing has helped some of them.

You're probably helping and entertaining people you never considered was happening.

Stay with it.



Author's Response:

For some reason when I first posted I expected to get actual discussion on a fic.  Like why I did this or that or x makes no sense what so ever.  But it became very clear very quickly that the culture simply doesn't support that kind of discusstion.  It was always amazing how badly people could take the most simple of comments. and not the author but fans of the author.  I simply don't review very much either because I simply don't have anything to say(the fic is amazingly good or amazingly bad) or I'm reasonably sure that a negative comment of any kind will be taken as a nuclear attack.(vbg)

 

As for number of reviews they are very misleading in many cases.  Some of the absolute best fics here on MW got very few if any reviews while many of the almost unreadable ones got many.(this is true of every site I visit, Harry Potter or QAF.) 


It amazed me the number of reviews I got and I'm just an average writer. I think it has a lot to say about the loyality of my readers who like my kind of stories.

I have seen it get better for authors here to get comments lately.

I always say give them at least a :) and the hit for each chapter.

It inspires and motivates the writer to give us more.

bob

 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:58 AM · On: Cleansing Magic

:)

Keep writing as you're getting better at it.

It's wonderful to have a Harry/Draco story on MW.

I hope we can get other authors in this canon to publish here too.

Don't bother answering all the :) comments.

I just wanted you to get the hits.

Hope you like the banner :)

bob

UPDATE: Some viewers can't load the page with the gif video files.

Had to take them down.



Author's Response:

Yes thanks for the banner.  Considering how many fics I have here I hope that I've gotten better over the years.(vbg)  My style isn't a lot of people's cup of tea that's relfected by the number of reads I get and I've never gotten a lot of reviews but then who ever said life is fair.  It certainly wasn't Brian Kinney.(vvbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:55 AM · On: Proper Parental Names

:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:55 AM · On: The Prefect's Bathroom

:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:55 AM · On: First Day of Classes

:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:54 AM · On: 1 September

:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 13, 2010 05:54 AM · On: Career Change

:)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2010 10:15 AM · On: At The Manor; Finally

Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: rainbow (Anonymous) · Date: January 31, 2010 11:23 AM · On: At The Manor; Finally

i love it



Author's Response:

nice to have you back.(vbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:46 PM · On: Waiting Room Revelations

Well I finally caught up to all your chapters and gave you comments on each one to raise your count and encourage you to keep writing. The names are very cute too.



Author's Response:

Thanks, sorry I haven't responded sooner but since I almost never get reviews I forget to check for them.(vbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:23 PM · On: Gossip Redux

I'm dying to learn their names now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:21 PM · On: A Meeting at the Leaky

Poor Ginny; will they find a cure?



Author's Response:

Yes a cure will be found, whether the details will be in a chapter remains to be seen.(eg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:15 PM · On: Announcements

Interesting chapter; on to read more...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 04:00 PM · On: Spells and A Potion

Well that was not expected; double MPreg.



Author's Response:

Harry and Draco have always flip flopped since the first time they had sex so of course if one gets pregnant the other would have to as well.(vvbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:49 PM · On: Babies

MPreg in their futures?

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Gossip

If you want babies there is always a way...



Author's Response:

Plus Harry was around Hermione too much to not know how to research a solution to a problem.(g)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:43 PM · On: The Year 2000

Looks like a nice condo there.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:31 PM · On: Disappointment

Funny how you made a small paragraph of info into a total chapter  :)



Author's Response:

I decided when I started this that I was going to have very short chapters, some of them have carried that to the extreme.  In my earlier fics I combined the small events into one rather than have such short chapters.(g) 

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:18 PM · On: Tossing and Turning

Pillow talk...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:14 PM · On: Wedding Memories

Good photo of the wedding and cake.



Author's Response:

Hermione looks better than Ron though.  It's amazing what Google can find.  It's also amazing what images will show up when you search for Harry and Draco.(vvbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:07 PM · On: Minister Fudge Has His Say

Problems in Surry now perhaps.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 03:04 PM · On: Voldemort's Last Stand

Well that was a very busy chapter. Good job.



Author's Response:

Early on I decided that I would go with an easy victory so Voldemort had to be on the stupid side.(g)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:37 PM · On: Spoiled Plans, Again

Reading on to see were we go to next...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:22 PM · On: Graduation

On to the next chapter...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:15 PM · On: Happy 18

How fluffy of you once again.  :P



Author's Response:

I think you would have to agree that my Harry and Draco are on the fluffy side.(vbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 02:09 PM · On: All Four Houses

This was without a doubt your best chapter yet.



Author's Response:

I totally agree.  Since this all started over as a crossover with my QAF fics Seamus was doomed since I had Brian and Justin(from QAF) in Ireland and I needed a reason for Harry and Draco to be in Ireland.  This of course hasn't happened yet in this fic.(g)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 01:52 PM · On: New Tactics

I wonder how old you are writng this. Glad to see some action again.



Author's Response:

I'm much older than I want to admit to most days.(vbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 01:42 PM · On: Frustration

Perhaps a bit of plot development here I hope.



Author's Response:

Without a doubt.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 01:36 PM · On: St. Valentine's Day

I'm choking on the fluff over here  :)



Author's Response:

Isn't that what St. Valentine's is all about.(g)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 01:33 PM · On: New Year's Conversations

Poor Ginny; doesn't get to have Harry in this universe.



Author's Response:

Welll Draco isn't known for his ability to share his possesions.(g)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 01:17 PM · On: Halloween Date

Ok, on with the plot please.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 01:10 PM · On: Surprise Announcement

I'm expecting a shoe to fall any second now...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:59 PM · On: Birthday Talk

Cute story; I must read on...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:52 PM · On: Murder, Most Foul

How said and how good for their relationship to be together now.



Author's Response:

Again one of those decisions made to make things easier.  I killed Narcissa off for the same reason Lucius had to die; with them dead I don't have to deal with them.(vbg)

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:48 PM · On: Summer Plans

The best laid plans...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:42 PM · On: Shag of the Century

Young love grows.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:37 PM · On: Practice Makes Perfect

Draco and his toy; now his roommate knows so the plot thickens.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:31 PM · On: Conversation

Funny how they find out and handle it.



Author's Response:

They either handle it well or they don't but either way affects how the Harry and Draco plot moves along.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:27 PM · On: First Kiss

First Contact

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:17 PM · On: Christmas Holidays

Well, I have to see how you develop this now.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:14 PM · On: Library Chat

Ok, time in the library looking into each other's eyes.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:10 PM · On: The Witnesses

Interesting turn of events.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2010 12:05 PM · On: Execution

Great canon and very well written.



Author's Response:

Thanks.  It's hard to beleive how long ago I started this process.(g)  I started writing the QAF crossover before Deathly Hallows came out and it's getting close to a year since I started the adaption of that into this Harry/Draco fic.

Reviewer: brokenheart (Anonymous) · Date: November 05, 2008 06:05 PM · On: Execution

I love this story and Harry Potter! Keep it up!

Author's Response: thanks, and since it's based on an already written chapter of the Gus Chronicles I have an outline of sorts to keep me on track.(vbg)

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