Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
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Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: August 29, 2015 04:36 PM · On: Decision

hello, will you be finishing this stpry?

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: July 27, 2012 11:58 AM · On: Decision

Beautiful!

Update soon

Reviewer: Lady Luciole (Anonymous) · Date: December 10, 2010 08:42 PM · On: Fight

Your work is admirable, very amazing! You are gifted!

It's really a very good story this one. There are just some little mistakes in this chapter: You write that Brian was here in the meeting with Hobbs' parents; and you make it so that Brian & Craig know that Justin is suppose to be with Chris but it's impossible : nobody know that he is missing... Isn't it right?

Hope to have some new work to read from you very soon...

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 12, 2010 05:41 PM · On: Decision

Please update your email address for MW.

We don't have a good email for you right now and I've been trying to reach you.

Reviewer: debv3/lj (Anonymous) · Date: April 13, 2010 03:38 AM · On: Decision

Is there more to this story????

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: December 30, 2009 05:14 PM · On: Decision

Woah well let's hope Brian and Justin eventually start new memories. It was exciting to see Justin taking a lead role this chapter. I still love the caring Brian in this fic :)Chris

Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 11:27 AM · On: Decision

Very intense chapter - but good

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 10:11 AM · On: Decision

after all this time, there is a light at the end of the tunnel.

i was shocked too when justin said no to the wiggling ass lying on the bed in front of him. but brian knew how to get to him. and then, then... sheer bliss.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: August 18, 2009 09:57 AM · On: Decision

HOT! Thanks for the update.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 08:58 PM · On: Away

Very well written; Chirs is a piece of work, I hope his parents disown him, Justin always knows how to help Brian out of a funk. I'll be watching for your updates.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 02:27 PM · On: Away

I'm so glad Chris' parents saw though his bullshit!! He is one sick puppy!! He needs serious help and to never be out on the streets again ever.

I hate that Brian and Justin had such a strain between them, but as always Brian is putty in Justin's hands and they'll be alright!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 29, 2009 11:33 AM · On: Away

beautifu, just what they both need.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 29, 2009 10:21 AM · On: Away

poor brian. yeah, everything hit him at once. justin is on the right track to get him back. he has to finish what he started for brian's sake and his own. brian is letting him, so that should tell him something.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Denial

I'm glad Brian and Justin are going to go away, they really need the time to just be them.

I feel that Hobb's might try to lie his way out of this, but I hope his parents see through his bullshit. I meant that jerk's last thought before his parents entered the room was that 'he would deal with Taylor later". He just has to pay for what he did!!



Author's Response:

Brian and Justin deff need this time and hopefully nothing will happen. Chris on the other hand will hopefully see the dark side of the punishment for what he has done. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 02:01 PM · On: Frantic

Poor Justin! I'm glad Brian had that talk with him and I think therapy is a good idea. It will take awhile for Justin to get past what happened (as much as he can get past it).

Wonder who is on the phone...



Author's Response:

That is so true but I have hope that they will be able to work through everything. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:33 PM · On: Denial

gotta feel bad for parents of chris, if they are unaware of his issues, sounds like they were



Author's Response:

That could be true, sometimes you do not know the people you love but they are getting a crash course. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 12:07 PM · On: Denial

brian and justin going away for a few days is a good idea. i hope they get away before chris' parents get him out of the hospital and off the hook.

“We have to know.” what if he's gay or why he did what he did to justin. i think they'll only be worried about the first one and not the second at all. i hope he isn't right because i get the feeling that yeah, his father will fix it.



Author's Response:

Yeah that is very possible that his father will clear this up but lert's hope not. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:31 AM · On: Denial

I'd like to see Chris get out of this one now. I hope he doesn't make bail and go after Justin but were would be the drama in that? hehehe



Author's Response:

Well I do not see that happening, but then again the world is bull and he shouldn't get have gotten away with it on the show. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: 2013 (Anonymous) · Date: July 20, 2009 11:02 AM · On: Denial

Sadly,i think that Chris is deluded enough to guiltless-ly admit what he did,lol. R u planning on finishing this story before u update Betrayal?



Author's Response:

I think you may be right, but as he deserves what he is going to get. Yes, that is the plan as I haven't had any time and certainly not enough to write two stories. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:47 PM · On: Fight

I very much enjoy the positive Craig and agressive Justin. Well done!



Author's Response:

Yeah Craig isn't usually like this but I believe that this would be a parent's response in this situation. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:46 PM · On: Vengeance

Love it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:45 PM · On: Frantic

You got a great story here.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2009 12:36 PM · On: Forward

I love what you're doing with this story. Your writing style is excellent and the flow is forward. Great work,



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 14, 2009 08:57 PM · On: Frantic

brian, the sense of reason. justin is trying to rush things which brian knew better than to allow. things will happen, and when they do, fireworks. can't wait.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2009 10:51 AM · On: Forward

So glad that Justin is safe! Loved seeing Justin and Craig beat the shit out of Chris...he deserved it!



Author's Response:

Hehe, yeah that was great I so loved writing it as well. Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it, sorry for the wait on the reply.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2009 10:05 PM · On: Forward

this was such a touching chapter. everything changed in the blink of an eye, is it any wonder brian wants some normalcy back. even he and craig tolerated each other. i'm proud of justin for taking the stand to press charges and take this to trial.

amazing still is brian knowing when justin was tense, relaxed, and needed to get home.



Author's Response:

Brian has been doing so good in this story and he has put up with so much stress that he just wants it to be better, I think anyone would feel the same. Justin is also doing what he needs to do to move on. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: July 06, 2009 09:44 PM · On: Forward

excellant chapter, jen didn't rush the men but walked, I really admire criag in this one.



Author's Response:

Yes both Justin's parent, in their own ways, have been doing what is best for Justin and trying to care for him. It's great to see. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:35 PM · On: Telling

I hope Justin tells Brian about Chris. Chris knowing Justin is there is not a good thing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, it would have been a good thing to happen, alas at the moment it all suck. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Invasion

Glad it was only Michael at the door and that in the end he handled the situation the way Brian wanted.

I can understand Brian not wanting to talk to Michael, but I wish he had picked up the phone. He's about to get a ton of unwelcomed guests!



Author's Response:

Yeah, who was at the door could have been bad but it was Mikey and he acted right as well which is more than we can usually expect from him, which is why Brian didin't answer the phone but if only he had. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: vallery (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2009 05:18 PM · On: Vengeance

Great chapter. I am glade that Chris got the shit beaten out of him. Can't wait to read the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah Chris is deff taking a thumping but he deserves it...and more. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Liri (Anonymous) · Date: June 23, 2009 06:54 AM · On: Prom

Wonderful !! I loved it.The best chapter.Thanks.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm so glad you liked this chapter so much.

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 22, 2009 11:37 PM · On: Fight

thank god....:-)) rose

Author's Response:

I second that, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 18, 2009 12:32 PM · On: Strength

interesting action there justin.... hope dearest (this time yeah) daddy and wonder boyfriend open the front door in time.

Author's Response:

Yeah Justin is not just going to take it laying down, he is fighting and doing rather well but he could use some backup. Thanks for the review, glad you like the chapter.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:38 AM · On: Interrogation

I forgot to review this fine chapter so here is the review. Glad to see the story developing.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad that you like the chapter as well as the story.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 18, 2009 11:29 AM · On: Strength

Thanks for the update. I like how the story is going. Can't wait for Brian to see the situation and wonder how Craig will handle it too.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, Brian and Craig are both acting rather well so we will have to wacth to see how everything goes down.

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: June 15, 2009 02:02 PM · On: Interrogation

glad craig is being helpful. a definate nice change

Author's Response:

Yes I guess people could say that Craig is OOC in this fic but I thought that something like this would warm anyone's heart. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: June 10, 2009 04:18 PM · On: Cabin Fever

How dare you give us an evil cliff hanger? Have you no humanity? Hehehehehe! Update soon please.

Author's Response: Hehe, I might use cliffies a bit, you'll get use to it lol. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: Lionstar16 (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 04:31 PM · On: Cabin Fever

Wow, it's really scary - Brian, Craig, Jennifer and Debbie can all feel that Justin's in trouble.

I hope they can save Justin before Chris can hurt Justin again. Can't wait for the next chapter!

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, I agree that's pretty scary but they all love him. Hope you continue to enjoy the story.

Reviewer: colin (Anonymous) · Date: June 08, 2009 12:53 PM · On: Cabin Fever

i can't read this if you keep hurting j.  it's just too much

Author's Response: I'm sorry you feel that way, all I can say is that you should really give the rest of the story a chance.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 05:33 AM · On: Restless

what a great chapter. i loved how you incorporated the scene from the show of justin walking in a crowd again into the story.

it was a gigantic step for justin to want to and actually go to the diner and also walk around. brian is nothing but encouraging. i'm proud of both of them.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, I love that scene, so I had to add it. Justin is deff doing his best to move past this and he deff has the support he needs to do it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 27, 2009 04:47 AM · On: Restless

Great chapter. I love how the plot is growing. I wish Justin could just say it was Chris and let the shit go down but I can understand your mental angst in the story. I'm proud of Justin for getting out of the loft and look forward to your updates.

Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, sometimes it is hard to give evil a name and thus more power over you...plus I'm an angst queen lol. I am glad you like the story though. Thanks for taking the time to read it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 04:08 PM · On: Telling

I can't wait for Brian to find out it's Chris. Great read; looking forward to your updates.

 



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I think that I would not want to be Chris at the moment, Hell I know I wouldn't.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:56 PM · On: Invasion

I'm like a broken record but once again I admire the development of the plot. Your visual style of writing is refreshing to how found.

Author's Response: I am so glad you like it, I do sort of have a different writing style but it's what comes to me. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:43 PM · On: Company

You evil writer you; such a cliffie you put here! Love the mystery.

Author's Response: I told you not to cheer my cliffies until you had seen them in action. I can get evil with those, lol. Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:32 PM · On: Battles

For fear of repeating myself damn you write good! I would like longer chapters and the winning numbers for the powerball lotto; can you help me out?

I so love a good writer.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I wouldn't even begin to know the powerball numbers and chapter length is sort of limited because of LJ and because they just stop where they stop, sorry. *blushes*

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:22 PM · On: Knowing

I love how you develop this story. Cyn is a great character to include and Brian like this is perfect. I'm so glad I started reading this story. Good writing makes me so horny for more!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I like to take a stance on different characters in all of my stories but Cyn usually ends up being awesome in all of them she is in.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:11 PM · On: Helping

Damn you write good. I'm really enjoying this story despite my adversion for this kind of plot. I'm a sucker for good writing.

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, I am so glad you like it even if it is out of your genre.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 03:02 PM · On: Found

You really know how to move a story quickly. That's talent.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, that is actually not a talent I know I have but I will take the compliment anyways lol.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:52 PM · On: Searching

Positive cliffie. Smart move.

Author's Response: oohhhh you shouldn't cheer my cliffies until you know how bad they can get, hehe.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:44 PM · On: Pain

Good stuff here. A dream, you had me going there! Put me don't as hooked.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I know that was evil but I couldn't help it. lol.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:30 PM · On: Nightmares and Dreams

Justin is so out of character here. As a gay man I know the anus and rectum especially for a teenager is very strong and can get raped without the severe damage you discribe. But allowing for your creative license we can overlook that.

I wonder how Justin was so able to be in Brian's arms and be touch just after the rape. And, how come Brian didn't see the stiches in his head?

One does not leave the hospital hours after a major surgery.

Enough bitching for now :)

I love how you write.



Author's Response:

Okay, this review bothered me, see I was afraid I was portraying something important in my story wrong so being me I researched it. I have to say that while I give you that men can be raped with minimal damage they can also receive much more damage than I had Justin have, so I think that my story works. There are many other injures that I didn't give Justin that he could have received and with only the stitches I think the portrayal works well. So I wouldn't say this is my creative license but simply the reality of a situation.

Also about Justin being in Brian's arms, for some people, and I included Justin in this group because he did the same thing after the bashing, rape is not connected with some people. For this reason those people, or person do not effect you when you touch them or they touch you. As for the stitches I will have to check that out, I totally might have blown that. As for leaving the hospital, many people do it, it's called AMA. Now I am not saying that it should happen but it does. 

Now don't get me wrong feel free to come up with any of these things you find that you believe may be wrong, especially something this important because I would like the chance to fix errors in my story. I am glad you took the time to point these out.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:21 PM · On: Tylenol

I like how you create multiple scenes.

Author's Response: Well I try to fit in important stuff, thanks for the review.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:15 PM · On: Ride

Super plot development.

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm glad you like it.

Reviewer: JTSecrets (Signed) · Date: May 21, 2009 02:09 PM · On: Prom

Fuck! That was one hell of a rape scene. Usually I do go for the battered Justin stories but I want to study your writing style. You got talent. I could so visualize the entire scene with all the details you gave.



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review, and the compliment. I deff go for battered Justin, it is one of my fav genres but I am glad I could drag someone else over to the darkside lol.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 18, 2009 01:23 PM · On: Telling

omg. that was fucked. the family swarming in and chris finding him. brian better go after justin and send craig to the police.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. The 'family' deff made a mess of things, fuckers but at least Justin tried although now that Chris knows where he is it could mean bad things.

Reviewer: Lionstar16 (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2009 02:41 AM · On: Invasion

Thank God it's not Chris who was trying to get into the loft, but how long until Michael finds out what has happens and tells the rest of the gang.

Can't wait for the next chapter!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review. I deff felt relief when it was only Mikey now we will have to see what he does with that knowledge.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2009 11:34 AM · On: Company

Please tell me its Mikey trying to get into the loft! Gawd, I hope its not Chris!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review, you have to wait to find out who it is hehe.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2009 12:50 PM · On: Company

it was beginning to fall back into place. brian was able to leave for a  while. who's trying to get in? brian would call and tell him he was on his way. it has to be friggin' michael. who the hell else. poor justin, the only place he felt safe and now it's invaded. brian better get home soon.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the chapter. Who is at the door is anyone's guess.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:17 PM · On: Battles

What would Brian do without Cynthia!!

I'm glad he was able to get Justin back home. They have a long road ahead of them.



Author's Response: Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Cyn is so great.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: April 14, 2009 08:43 AM · On: Battles

oh jess. so much thought went into this chapter.

brian has a long road ahead  just to get justin to want to accept his help and the help of the therapist. that will be the toughest battle right now. but justin took the first step to accepting help, he walked out of the motel room with brian.

cynthia is a gem and i'm glad brian knows what he has in her.



Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing, There is so much work to be done but at least they are backed up by Cyn who is so loyal and discreet.

Reviewer: lish (Anonymous) · Date: March 31, 2009 06:37 AM · On: Knowing

wow I love this! and you are actually making me not hate craig. wow. more please?

Author's Response: Hehe, I know. I'm always finding ways to mess with me readers lol. Glad you liked the chapter

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 12:51 PM · On: Knowing

I hope Justin does evenutally decide to tell Brian that Chris was his attacker.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review, some things are easier to say out loud than others and this is deff going to be a hard one. We will have to hope he can pull it off.

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2009 07:08 AM · On: Knowing

justin isn't going to be happy when he finds out that brian knows what happened. at least not at first. i hope he lets brian get him the help he needs. i don't know if craig will blame justin for what happened to him but then again maybe he will. i hope he won't. i don't know how brian is going to handle all of this. i wish he gets someone to talk to also. he'll need it.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review sorry it took so long to get back to it. Justin and Brian have a lot of work ahead but together they can do anything. The way Craig will feel is a little bit of a wild card in this story so we will have to see.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Helping

Love the new banner! Forgot to add that to my original comment. ;)

Author's Response: I know, it's so awesome right?

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 11:40 PM · On: Helping

Poor Baby! I just feel so bad for him, but I'm glad he's letting Brian take care of him. I know its going to be hard, but I hope Justin tells Brian the truth about what happened.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Justin is deff in a place that is heartbreaking but now that Brian is there it will be at least marginally better.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 16, 2009 09:34 AM · On: Helping

painful to read. brian is going to flip if justin tells him the truth or even if he lies brian will find out. not going to be pretty. i love how he's taking care of him.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you enjoyed the story. Yeah when Brian finds out Chris is not going to fare well. Protective Brian is something I totally love.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: 7qt (Anonymous) · Date: March 13, 2009 11:26 AM · On: Found

Hey Hi !!- I loved reading your fic -When are you posting more -Hope real soon -Its a wonderful story an' I love both o' them to death -!!-Poor Justin -having to face this terable nightmare -And For Brian -to feel so -so helpless in the coming situatuon -But sometimes life is that way - You really don't know how to comfort a loved one in such a raw situation -You can only be there -But its so-so frustrating an' agonizing -But I'm sure Brian's  love for him-will help them both overcome this in the end -AND Chris  should be shot dead for doin' this !!!-How dare he - Wonder what Brian will do -when he finally finds out -???!!!! -Post the other chapters quick !!!-Pleazzze !!!-Tke care -bye -

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I have posted a new chapter now. Justin is deff in a bad place but hopefully Brian can help him. Chris is a nutcase and needs to be punished. Ihope you like the next chapter just as much.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2009 06:39 PM · On: Found

Omg, this is just so sad. At least Brian knows where he is and can help now. Does Chris not realise what he's done? Is this a typical reaction and once Brian finds out what has happened will he suspect Chris? So many questions. I'm sure they'll be answered soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, this is a story is deff sad and competely emotional. Chris has lost his handle on reality.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2009 11:42 AM · On: Found

Oh! That's BAD of you, leaving your readers with this "cliffhanger" !!!You're killing me here "Grrr!" Lol !

Poor Justin... he's suffering so much... It must be hell for him !

Please update soon... I want to know Brian's thoughts and actions as well as Justin's ! I bet he'll have either a meltdown or a cool 'shock' way facade on his face !

Jersey :))



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked it. I'm horrible with cliffhangers I know. There is a new chapter up now.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 05:05 AM · On: Found

oh jess, this is one amazing chapter.

chris waiting for justin to show up gave me the creeps. that boy is certainly demented.

brian finding him and fighting with craig. i wanted to pound craig into the floor. and  the sight of justin's body, so battered that it shocked him. OMFG!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review Hun. Thanks for the complinment. Chris is deff messed up. Why do you want to pound Craig??? I think the sight of Justin would effect anyone.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: March 12, 2009 04:54 AM · On: Found

Thank goodness Brian found him! I hope Justin lets Brian take him home. 

Chris is a sick f&ck and Craig well, what can be said about him. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Yay! Brian has found Justin and now our blond won't be alone. Chris is deff a sicko.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Lionstar16 (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2009 04:09 AM · On: Found

I hated Chris Hobbs for bashing Justin with a basball bat, but what he has done in this story has made me loathe him. He violently rapes Justin and now expects Justin to consent to it again?!

Thank God Brian has found him, but something tells me it is going to be a long and very painful recovery. 

Can't wait for the next chapter, well done!



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Chris has deff gone off the deep end and he continues to run down that road. Hopefully Brian will be able to help Justin.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 06:06 AM · On: Searching

this was a fantastic chapter. brian, jen, and craig went through the wringer and cynthia found him. give the girl a raise.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you liked the chapter. Yeah that's the way things work, the person you think is least expected finds Justin.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 24, 2009 02:56 AM · On: Searching

Cynthia is GOOD! I hope she really did find out where Justin is.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Cynthina deff rocks.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: February 23, 2009 08:21 PM · On: Searching

more please, this is a real torture, how she find him, she's great.

I realy hope that justin let them help him, he need them, specialy  brian.

 great story, kisses



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and review, I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. Justin deff needs help, but hopefully Brian can help him.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: February 23, 2009 04:09 PM · On: Searching

Oh my... Its getting worse by the minute !!!

Poor Brian and Daphne... Justin is such an important part of their lives, its hard on them !

Once again, Cynthia comes to the rescue of her boss ! He He ! I guess instead of firing her, he'll have to give her a mega bonus !!!

Ok. Now, what is this ? You left us on a Cliffhanger ? Just like that ? That's just a mean thing to dooo!

Please please, update soon ! Let us know if Brian will find Justin and be able to help him... and tell in different words that he "loves him".

Well... go typing Butterfly ! I can't wait too long, its killing me !!! LOL!

Jersey :)) 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I have to warn you I have been called the cliffhanger queen and the angst queen and I do it all the time. lol Cyn deff helped out a lot, she rocks. Everything is messed now and it's not going to be better soon.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2009 02:20 AM · On: Pain

Where did Justin go?! Poor thing! Am I reading that Craig actually cares that his son is missing? He's still human afterall. I can't imagine what Brian is going through right now, we know he won't rest until he finds Justin.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you like it. Craig is deff worried about his son. We will have to see how it goes with Brian and Justin.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: February 09, 2009 04:02 PM · On: Pain

Just wanted to let you know that I follow this story of yours and I'm glad you updated !

I like the way you wrte it and I hope Brian will find "C" and shake him hard and that he will find Justin... Or Justin will reach out to Brian in someway !

Those two can't be separated for too long, please !

Jersey :))



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you like the story. Hobbs will get his I'm sure, although I'm not telling.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: February 09, 2009 11:43 AM · On: Pain

omfg he left! without a word to anyone? what will he and brian do now?

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm sorry it took so long for me to answer you. I'm glad you like it.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2009 01:25 PM · On: Nightmares and Dreams

Just read the last 2 chapter. Really good. Just wonder how Justin is really doing and what he told the drs', what he will tell Brian.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing. I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. We will have to see how Justin does win situation.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: welcome_earthling (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 07:30 AM · On: Nightmares and Dreams

Just read the first 4 chapters and it's utterly heart breaking.

I can see I'm no doubt going to cry at some point in the coming chapters 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like the story and I hope it continues to be awesome.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Jerri (Anonymous) · Date: January 20, 2009 06:09 AM · On: Tylenol

Next time? Next time!!!! That fool is crazy.

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, sorry it took so long to get back to it, I have been very busy.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: January 20, 2009 12:33 AM · On: Nightmares and Dreams

Poor Justin! I hope he tells Brian about what happend, he's going to have to. He needs Brian right now.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. This isn't going to be an easy thing for Justin but he would Deff make it a little better if her told Brian so he'd have some support.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: January 19, 2009 06:15 PM · On: Nightmares and Dreams

part one, justin's hell. part two brian's heaven. will they ever combine the two to just be?

Author's Response:

Well that's deff true, on is in Hell and one thinks he's in heaven but reality will hit soon enough. Thanks for the review.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Ashley (Anonymous) · Date: January 19, 2009 11:56 AM · On: Nightmares and Dreams

omg Justin please dont try to hide this from Brian...nothing good ever comes from that!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review. Hopefully when it's not so fresh Justin will come to his senses about telling.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: November 04, 2008 05:17 AM · On: Tylenol

OMFG!

justin crashing, daphne can't find him, chris as smug as can be and brian waiting for him to get home. nobody knows.

OMFG!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm so glad you're enjoying the story. It's all shitty right now, let's hope it gets better.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Lionstar16 (Anonymous) · Date: November 04, 2008 01:40 AM · On: Tylenol

Oh my God, this story is a really cliffhanger! Hope and pray Justin will be okay but slightly dread the gang finding out Justin's been raped. As for Chris Hobbs...it will be a cold day in Hell before Justin has sex with him again!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you like the story. I tend to be rather mean in the cliffhanger thing durning a story. Justin is in a bad place but we will have to hope that he will get the help he needs and Chris will stay away from him.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: November 03, 2008 06:40 PM · On: Tylenol

great update. I like the different POV... can´t wait for your update :-)) rose

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you like how I'm working the story.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: November 03, 2008 01:55 PM · On: Tylenol

I wish they had waited before giving him that Tylenol! They better save him.

Brian is breaking my heart. He's waiting to have that romantic evening with Justin and has no idea his Sunshine is fighting for his life right now. 

Next time? Hobbs wants to do that to Justin again! Sick fuck! 

Glad to see an update!! 



Author's Response:

Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts and offer support for my writing. Yeah Justin is doing badly and they only made it worse. Chris is deff sick. Brian is so sweet though.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: the ugly duckling (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2008 08:12 AM · On: Ride

This is intense, I love the storyline, but even more than that I love your writing style. It provides excellent  imagery without being overly descriptive and thus losing the reader.

 

Well done, I'll be waiting for an update ;]



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for sharing your thoughts, I'm so glad you like not only the story but the way it's being presented.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: thess (Anonymous) · Date: October 10, 2008 11:06 AM · On: Ride

Justin is devastated!! What'll Brian do once he learned what happened to his Sunshine and will Justin tell Brian what and who did to him?

Thanks and please update soon 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviewing, I am so glad that you liked the chapter. Justin is deff in a bad place. Hopefully he will get some help soon.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Shenova (Anonymous) · Date: October 06, 2008 05:23 AM · On: Ride

Wow your story is so sad and intense. Justin had a nice time with Brian and now his world has been turned upside down. How could Chris do what he did and then tell him he loved him sick. What is going to happen next? Update soon.

Author's Response:

Thanks for reading and reviwing, I'm glad you liked it. Justin deff just had everything change in an instant and Chris is deff a sick fuck. Hopefully somehting makes it somewhat better for our blond.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Sling (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 01:59 AM · On: Ride

Noooo hon how could you do it to Justin`?? *sniff*
I hope Brian's going to kill Hobbs for doing that... that fucking little prick!!

But wow what a start! now hurry up with the next chap I wanna see Brian kick his ass muhaha *evil* 

Kiss Tina 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, Tina. I'm glad you like it, even if you do think I'm evil right now. You might be right though lol.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Tiffany (Anonymous) · Date: September 30, 2008 07:51 AM · On: Ride

I"m anxiously awaiting to see how you write the chapter where Brian finds out about this???

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 01:02 PM · On: Ride

someone needs to get in touch with brian.

it was nice of the driver to stay.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review, I'm so glad you liked the chapter. Justin did luck out with the cabbie deff.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 29, 2008 12:53 PM · On: Ride

Poor baby! He's lost so much blood! He's suffering so much now.

Thank goodness for the kindness of that cab driver and so sweet of him to wait around to see if Justin will be ok.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you like the sory so far. Justin is in bad shape, both physicaly and mentaly but luckily he had a caring cab driver. Hopefully things will turn out better for our blond boy.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Jersey (Anonymous) · Date: September 24, 2008 07:23 AM · On: Prom

I have read this chapter a few days ago but couldn't leave a review right away...Too much emotions raging inside I guess ! But I love it...

Damn 'Hobbs' for ruinning the 3 words that means so much to people ! And Justin's prom night...

Poor Justin ! He will surely withdrawn himself from the world after this... For a while anyway ! Will he be the one telling Brian ? Or will Brian find out by going after him or sensing in his gut that something is wrong with his boy ?

I hope Brian's actions will scream his love a thousand times higher and stronger than words, when he finds out ! After all, our mens have a connection that need no words that I think will save them both !!!

Update soon ! I wonder how you will manage all this drama and I want to know how things will turn for Hobbs ! Hope he will PAY LOTS and SUFFER is own nightmare !

Please, don't let us in the dark too long, update soon! Jersey :))

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm so glad you liked it, even if it disturbed you so much. Hobbs did the most unspeakable thing and I'm sure it's going to effect both Justin and Brian for a while. Another chapter will be up tomorrow.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: kayitt (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2008 02:26 AM · On: Prom

OMG this is so sad, poor justin this is definitly worse that the bat in the head, I think that brian gone kill hobbs when he know what he did.

justin gone need a lot of help for heal this horrible experience, the damage in his body and mind is to much.

I hope you can put another chapter soon please, this is killing me.

I hope my english is not too bad (latingirl - chile) kisses



Author's Response:

Don't worry your english is just fine. I'm glad you like the story so far, the next chapter should be up tomorrow. Thanks for the review.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Maddy (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2008 06:48 PM · On: Prom

A powerful start and really well written - I'm looking forward to finding out what happens next.

However, one thing that did put me off was the random paragraph breaks in the middle of sentences!  I expect it was just the uploader, but it did ruin the flow slightly.



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for telling me about the format mess up. I have no idea what happened but no one else mentioned it so I couldn't fix it. It's fixed now, thanks again. I'm so glad you liked the first chapter. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story as well.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:11 PM · On: Prom

OMG! Poor Justin! Hobbs is a twisted pig and to tell Justin "I love you" afterwards is sick! Brian is gonna feel horrible about what happend, but he'll take care of Justin. He'll go into Protective/Caring Brian mode. You have to update soon!!

Author's Response:

Thanks for the review, I'm glad you enjoyed the first chapter. Another chapter willl be up next Sunday. Hobbs sould deff die.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Ann (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2008 01:04 AM · On: Prom

oh shit oh shit oh shit!!!!!! good lord i need some more of this story girl!!!! i absolutely cannot wait for what happens next!  this is so much crueler than a bat to the head.  i hope justin will be okay, but of course he won't. ahhh! i can't wait for the consequences, please update soon, wonderful and intriguing story, i love your writing.

Author's Response:

Oh thanks so much for reading and reviewing, I'm so happy you like it this much. A lot of damage has been done and we will have to see how it's dealt with. A new chapter will be up on Sunday.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Lynn (Anonymous) · Date: September 22, 2008 12:03 AM · On: Prom

Poor Justin. Somehow I just have a feeling that things will turn for the worse for Brian and Justin. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Thanks so much for the review. Well I know things won't automatically be okay after everything that has happened but our boys will make it, somehow.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 09:11 PM · On: Prom

I really like your storys, but you should put a warning for rape on this one, because there are many people, who don't like to read such storys.



Author's Response:

Thanks you for the tip, I have no idea how I missed that warning, ahh I got it on everywhere else but somehow I missed it here. I'm glad you enjoyed it though, and thank you again.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: Sunny (Anonymous) · Date: September 21, 2008 04:31 PM · On: Prom

My heart is aching. That was so terrible. I hope Justin will get and accept the support, help and love he needs now. And Hobbes might rot in hell.I´m looking forward to the next chapter.

Hugs, Sunny



Author's Response:

Hell is too good for Hobbs, this is the most horrific of crimes and to top it off with 'I love you' is so wrong. I'm sorry the chapter effected you so much, as writing it was hard for me too. Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts and feelings on it though.

Later, Jessica



Author's Response:

Hell is too good for Hobbs, this is the most horrific of crimes and to top it off with 'I love you' is so wrong. I'm sorry the chapter effected you so much, as writing it was hard for me too. Thanks for taking the time to share your thoughts and feelings on it though.

Later, Jessica

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 21, 2008 11:30 AM · On: Prom

omg! i can't decide which is worse. being bashed or being rape by that jerk. and then to tell justin that he loves him. omfg!

how is he going to handle this and brian. what is this going to do to them?



Author's Response:

Yeah, I was back and forth about which is worse as well because will/would fuck with Justin's sense of self but the ultamite had to be him saying 'I love you'. That was such bullshit. As for how it's all going to be dealt with I guess we'll both have to see, I have some plans for the story but it's kind of writing itself. Thanks for the review.

Later, Jessica

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