Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2021 10:05 PM · On: A Less Crappy Life

this is confosing.  At beginning it was Daphne who went to Brian to talk about Justin.  Now this?

 

Plus Lindey usec to call Justin all the time and cried, now she acts likeshe does not know him.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2019 10:51 PM · On: Songs in the Key of Love--The End

Great story. I would have loved to see Justin, Daphne, and Kayla together. Would you consider giving us more someday? 

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2019 11:18 PM · On: (teaser) Mikey=Brian's Fairy Godmother?

Both my boys on lockdown? Hilarious. I hope Brian wiped the floor with Ethan.

 

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2019 08:19 PM · On: Must Be the Full Moon

The boys are finally going to meet. I am soooooo excited.

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2019 07:52 PM · On: Leaving Lurkerdom

Awwww, this is only the first chapter and I'm hooked.

Reviewer: Lori (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2017 02:29 AM · On: Songs in the Key of Love--The End

Loved this story,thank  you for writing it ,.

 

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: October 20, 2015 01:02 PM · On: Songs in the Key of Love--The End

Awesome! What a fantastic and enjoyable read. I will really miss it but not the being late to work part of my morning because I just had to read a wee bit more, and more:-D  Can't wait to move to another of your stories and in response to your A/N notes (doubts) please believe that nothing about this "sucked" at any stage, I just found it hard to review a chapter at 2am and even more at 7.30am when I was late for work -my bad and I will try to do better in future:-)

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 17, 2015 05:53 PM · On: Another Brainstorming Session, Part 3B

Now the student, shows the master just what he's learned from his expertise...

Hugs Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 02:28 PM · On: Sex, Lies, and Videotape

Ian…his is so small…and it’s obvious from the bored or disgusted looks on your face that he is a substandard lover…

I love this, I'm surprised I haven't thought to use the idea in my fics...

Later Darling ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 02:15 PM · On: A Little Role Play

I'm loving this be-polar Justin... Sweet and innocent, yet seductive and sexy...

Later Hon ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: 7wildwaysup (Signed) · Date: July 16, 2015 01:39 PM · On: Slightly Scary Feelings

I can't believe I haven't read this before now, it's simply delicious! Great fic Darling, I'm loving it!

Hugs ~ Kathleen

Reviewer: Tace (Anonymous) · Date: March 24, 2015 03:36 PM · On: The New Bed (Part 1)

what a bed! Wrought iron, black plastic, silk and plastic mirrors! Genius. You couldn't have better illustrated just how smitten Brian is. i'm really enjoying yor story.

Reviewer: Severus_divides_into_H (Signed) · Date: February 26, 2015 09:14 AM · On: Songs in the Key of Love--The End

You're simply amazing, I can't believe how frequently you update, and how incredible all chapters of all of your stories are. I really can't catch up with you!:) I'm going to read this story soon. I'll comment as soon as I finish! THANK YOU, again, for being so creative and talented!



Author's Response:

You are TOO sweet!

Let me know what you think...don't wait until the end (pretty please)...although I don't expect chapter by chapter commenting.

PS: forgive the beginning...some of it's awkward...I sometimes switch POV several times in a chapter without letting readers know...I was a young thing then...just learning how to write. 

Reviewer: chandrika (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2015 11:37 PM · On: Leaving Lurkerdom

great story

thank you for sharing

I only read complete stories because I hate to sit on an incomplete story the writer left behind or the waiting time for the next chapter...

I understand that a writer wants and may be needs reviews during the writing process...and you were asking for them...

so I feel a bit sorry for my egoism because you did a great job with the story...and my review comes after you finished the story.

but I hope you understand what I tried to express...

regards

(I am not a native speaker...)

 



Author's Response:

I understand. I like comments while I'm writing (keeps me going), but I'll take them after, too :- ) :-) :-) I'm glad that you did ultimately read the story and especially that you liked it!

Reviewer: nena (Anonymous) · Date: February 18, 2015 10:09 PM · On: Leaving Lurkerdom

This is an amazing story! I loved it from the very first word!!! I love to read complete stories so please, keep on writing because your gics rocks our world.....



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you found it so! Especially since this was one I started pretty early on, so I wasn't as good a writer at the beginning.

Awww...thanks! Fawn.Armani and How Sweet It Is are nearly done.

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: February 16, 2015 05:15 PM · On: Songs in the Key of Love--The End

Congrats and thanks for finishing this fic - I'd started reading a while ago and was so glad to see you we're going to continue writing. This is one of my personal fantasies too - I've often wondered if Gale or Randy ever read our fics. Hehehe! Thanks for writing. TAG



Author's Response:

Thanks! Yeah...total wish fulfillment on my part :-) I do that a lot for Brian and Justin (give them what I fantasize about).

Reviewer: Mary (Anonymous) · Date: February 15, 2015 02:30 PM · On: Songs in the Key of Love--The End

i just wanted to let you know that you are an amazing, creative writer I have been following you for a long time I'm so happy that you started updating, thank you so much you put a smile on my face every time I read one of your story's keep writing please, il be waiting patiently on you next story x x 



Author's Response:

Awww...you're giving me a serious case of the warm and fuzzies! (A super SERIOUS one)

:-) :-) :-)

I'm sorry I took such a long break in between. Stupid R/L. Fawn.Armani and How Sweet It Is are nearly done...

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: February 14, 2015 07:45 PM · On: Leaving Lurkerdom

Bravo! Bravo!  It's a fun Gay fairy tale and a very sweet story.



Author's Response:

I'm happy you found it sweet :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2015 04:31 PM · On: Songs in the Key of Love--The End

At least Brian didn't deny it.  Emmett is so cute, he just accepts things and is happy for Brian and Justin.  Mikey, on the other hand, might need an intervention.



Author's Response:

Brian and I pretty much ignored his whining in this fic. This time it was mostly harmless :-)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: February 14, 2015 07:29 AM · On: Songs in the Key of Love--The End

I know what I'll be reading tomorrow (Sunday - day off - aka - read all day if I want to and let the everyone fend for themselves....LOL) I have started this and loved it but I really enjoy reading the really long stories all at once so back to the start I go - I'm the same way with TV Series

Author's Response:

Wow! Such a compliment that you're going to read it from the beginning. I hope it holds up :-)

 

PS: Me, too. I've rewatched Glee and QAF a few times (okay, for QAF, more than a few)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2015 06:01 PM · On: Unfriendly Spirits

Some HOT scene!  Love how Emmett lets Justin in on what everyone is thinking.  That last line!  LOL

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: February 10, 2015 05:33 PM · On: Unfriendly Spirits

That was Hot,a little scary ,and funny.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 04, 2015 06:36 PM · On: So Begins A "Normal" Life

I love the way you brought us subtly up-to-date on previous chapter.  Not to mention Justin's list of affirmatives.  The interaction between Emmett and Brian is so fun.



Author's Response:

I've always liked Brian and Emmett's interactions (few though they usually are).

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: February 01, 2015 02:44 PM · On: "Should I Bring My Rubber Ducky?"

always wonderful to see Buttercup and Enigma again.  Maybe Enigma should explain why he wants to leave Babylon and Woody behind or should I say who for.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're still enjoying this one!

Reviewer: wellreadbunny (Signed) · Date: January 24, 2015 05:11 PM · On: No

This story has been so much fun to read. Justin is being brave, Brian is being caring and the adventures keep coming. I love it.

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're enjoying this one!!

Reviewer: Twinkminded (Signed) · Date: January 15, 2015 05:01 AM · On: How Did You Know?

I absolutly love the smily faces!  Love the storry too  :)



Author's Response:

That's wonderful to hear!!

Reviewer: Cristina (Signed) · Date: January 07, 2015 12:09 PM · On: No

Absolutamente adorando! Ansioso para o próximo capítulo!



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're enjoying the story (and looking forward to more) :-) :-) :-) Thanks so much for the feedback!

Reviewer: DavidR (Signed) · Date: January 06, 2015 12:35 AM · On: No

  Thank you for the story and that chapter.  That certainly was


one amazing chapter.  it wasn’t just the 20 people at the open


mic, but who knows how many readers as well applauded.     


  Congratulations to you and Justin for a wonderful speech, 


and  allowing us to share in Justin’s growth and amazing


courage.


    Thanks again,


    DavidR



Author's Response:

You're very welcome!

Justin and I are very flattered that you enjoyed his performance so much :-)

I couldn't agree more. Justin has grown a lot over the course of this story.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2015 07:00 PM · On: No

I feel like I'm missing something.  Why did Daphne leave and when did Lindsey show up?  Justin's song was emotional.    And so true to his life.  Yay for Justin.



Author's Response:

You did miss something. Everyone did. I skipped ahead to after Daphne's visit. I'm glad you liked his performance.

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: January 05, 2015 05:43 PM · On: No

NO, to NOT reviewing this. I got groceries on the table and I am so behind in this fic it's ridiculous, but I Just had to take a glance and was entranced.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

Awww...so sweet of you to say!

 

PS: Hope your ice cream didn't melt!

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2015 01:27 PM · On: No

Great chapter. Love Justin taking a stand and I agree with everything he said and I bet Brian does too.

Author's Response:

I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. I was worried it might be too weird. But I recently did spoken word for the first time ... so I couldn't resist the temptation to thrust Justin up on stage, too.

Reviewer: debv3 (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2015 12:33 PM · On: No

Yay Justin!!  I love Button Poetry, this was great!  Glad he is starting to feel what was always inside him!



Author's Response:

Me, too! (I usually call it spoken word -- I actually had to google button poetry) Justin really is starting to come into his own :-)

Reviewer: Miki (Anonymous) · Date: December 28, 2014 02:56 AM · On: Fans, Part 2 (aka Smurfing)

ove your story just started it today and am all caught up ca t wait for more



Author's Response:

I'm so happy you're enjoying this one!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 26, 2014 04:07 PM · On: Fans, Part 2 (aka Smurfing)

How nice to have them all dancing.  Emmetts a little more open to the changes he's seeing in Brian.  Mikey and Ted aren't.  So the Dark Queen finally showed up.  what happens next.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2014 10:33 AM · On: The Dark Queen

What did the 3 days of storming and thundering represent? I liked this chapter a lot but hated the rude interruption.. Boooooo....Visitors...

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2014 10:29 AM · On: Fans, Part 1

ARRRGGG!!! Why'd yu stop? I want to see the pictures!! And just so I got this right....Ted's the opossum? Why a possum?

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 14, 2014 08:05 PM · On: Fans, Part 1

Maybe it should have been the dark King.  Mikey certainly relates to Aidan almost as if he were Brian.  You had me, when Deb, Emm, Ted and Mikey showed up but then you explained it by Brian's admitting he sent them a link to the website.  At least three of them are in favor of James and Aidan making a go of it.  But it's obvious that all 4 of them did read it.  Thank Heaven for Gus.

Reviewer: Bksbracelet (Anonymous) · Date: December 14, 2014 12:12 PM · On: Fans, Part 1

Loved this chapter I loved how Justin suddenly lost his shyness and gave Mikey a lesson on life

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: December 09, 2014 06:11 PM · On: The Dark Queen

Poor Justin.  Being trapped inside your head is not fun.  At least Gus can break through.  Now who is the Dark Queen?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 21, 2014 03:03 PM · On: What's a Little Kidnapping among Friends?

Well that was a nice twist.  I can't wait to see what you have planned.  Take the evil man out and fast!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you liked twist :-)

Reviewer: Cassenoisettes (Anonymous) · Date: November 21, 2014 12:26 PM · On: What's a Little Kidnapping among Friends?

I'm disappointed that Justin wants to help Daphne.

Whatever Ken is/was doing to her, instead of asking Justin (& Brian) for help she prefered to ruined Justin's life.

Ken was bad news, it wasn't a secret back then but she still married him. It's on her. Justin should be even more angry because being with Ken meant putting Kayla in danger. She can't use the "I did it for Kayla. I needed money and Ken gave it to me" card.

Daphne isn't a good person and she's using Justin's good heart against him. I hope Brian will help Justin getting Kayla in his care and Daphne out of his life.



Author's Response:

You're right. Justin's heart is too big. Being used and abused doesn't suddenly turn you into a good person. Justin has so much to be angry at Daphne for. Brian will help Justin on this score.

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 17, 2014 04:33 AM · On: Third Time's the Charm?

I don t understand why yu'd think this was weird. It's not like you haven't done r/p scenes b4. This was beautiful.



Author's Response:

You make a good point. This story was weird from jump...I'm thrilled that you found it beautiful...that's the reaction I was hoping for :-)

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 16, 2014 09:59 AM · On: Brian Raps. Justin Chooses Love, Not Fear.

The thought, the image of Gale Harold as he was as Brian rapping...OMG...was at once completely visible and insanely funny.



Author's Response:

I had the same reaction imagining it :-) I would honestly die if we were privy to such a sight (on the show or elsewhere) 

Reviewer: Bryton4ever71 (Signed) · Date: November 15, 2014 11:31 PM · On: Bedtime Story

I LOVE Bedtime  stories ;)

 



Author's Response:

This part was fun to write. Everything in the story meshed so well with their 'real' story...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2014 06:05 PM · On: A Stranger in the Dark

Boy this is getting interesting!  Justin seems to have highly developed senses.  I'm surprised at the amount of damage he managed to inflinct on the red hoody guy.  Could Red Hoody be a PI hired by Daphne's husband.  Another chapter would be so nice right now.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you're finding the turn of events exciting!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2014 05:59 PM · On: Plan B?

Tut, tut.  Seems like Brian has foot in mouth disease.



Author's Response:

Indeed :-)

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2014 07:25 AM · On: A Stranger in the Dark

I know when it comes to reviews - sometimes I don't know what to say. When I enjoy what I read I'm not always sure how to comment without making me sound like a complete idiot. I truly understand confidence issues. There's probably lots of us out there in the same boat.

Author's Response:

Trust me when I say I will NEVER think a review is idiotic. Honestly, I would be thrilled if more people said ... I liked this ... I didn't like that...

 

No need even to tell me why. I want to write more of what people like and less of what they dislike.

Reviewer: tiger062 (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2014 06:58 AM · On: A Stranger in the Dark

I have a Sunday afternoon free to do whatever I want - what better choice than to read. I'm starting from the beginning again because I've missed a lot. Will write a review when I catch up. Don't get discouraged because of lack of reviews - sometimes RL sucks.

Author's Response:

I eagerly anticipate hearing your thoughts!

 

Please forgive some of the early chapters...some of the writing in the beginning is pretty darn awkward. I was fairly new to writing when I started this one.

 

I know I shouldn't view lack of reviews as discouragement, but after a while remaining optimistic (in the face of silence) gets hard...I don't know if people aren't reviewing b/c they don't have time or b/c they hate what I write. I'm still kind of insecure about my writing.

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2014 06:47 AM · On: A Stranger in the Dark

Wow I was completely baffled by this chapter I thought I had missed a chapter all together lol Brian makes me laugh he sees Justin beating someone to death and says who is this guy? Not what the hell lol

Author's Response:

That reaction (Brian's) was definitely non-standard :-) All I can say (other than Brian is strange) is that Brian assumed the guy deserved it. Why else would someone like Justin lose his s**t on the guy? Justin's all decent and good, not generally prone to violence.

 

I'm sorry if I confused you. I decided to be extra creative (I was afraid the tape getting mission was becoming boring). That produces mixed results -- it doesn't always land. 

 

Thank you so much for the review! It's helpful getting other perspectives. I can't always tell if I'm heading in an interesting direction ... if how I'm writing what I'm writing works for readers.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: November 07, 2014 10:55 PM · On: Misbehavin

Buttercup is getting brave.  But he needs to watch it if they are to stay in one piece!



Author's Response:

Ha! Yes ... he must not become a sexual danger junkie... or maybe he should...hmmmmmm..... :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 26, 2014 04:07 AM · On: First Steps

Do we get to find out about the man in the red hoody?  Your description was so vivid, I could feel Justin's anxiety.



Author's Response:

What a great compliment!

 

(grinning like a fool)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2014 08:09 AM · On: Safety Nets

What kind of trouble can they get into getting that last tape?  Knowing you something will happen, but you'll fix it.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 05, 2014 05:58 PM · On: Building Justin-Fucking-Taylor, Part 3

That had to be hard.  Brian coming clean to Justin, but in the end I think it was a real help.



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you think so! I agree.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 03:57 PM · On: Building Justin-Fucking-Taylor, Part 2

Therapy with a break for sex.  Now that's a chapter.



Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

 

That's not how all therapy goes?

 

j/k :-D

Reviewer: no sleep (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 03:04 PM · On: Building Justin-Fucking-Taylor, Part 2

"I project confidence, arrogance, and sex. With the exception of Gus, I use sex on everyone I interact with."

Interesting.

"Justin’s blushed deepened. He buried his face in Brian's chest."

Cute! I love these characters. :)

Author's Response:

I'm so happy you are enjoying this incarnation of Brian and Justin :-)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2014 11:33 AM · On: Building Justin-Fucking-Taylor, Part 2

I love the way Brian moves slow with Justin and allows Justin to set the pace. He keeps treating him like the adult he is, Justin has let him know that before Brian he was virtually a walking empty shell. He did what ever his mum told him and he worked at being all things to everyone

Author's Response:

I'm happy (and relieved) you are enjoying how Brian is with Justin. You couldn't be more right about Justin. In canon, just being around Brian helped Justin figure out who he was...gave him the encouragement and space he needed. This Justin never had that.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 26, 2014 05:13 PM · On: Building Justin-Fucking-Taylor, Part 1

Love this chapter.  You've come up with several options and I'd like to see them try them all.  Love Justin's pickup lines, so funny.



Author's Response:

That's so great to hear! Selecting silly pick ups was a lot of fun. Made me giggle.

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2014 04:30 PM · On: The Boyfriend

Wow, that was quick! Do they really decide to date this quickly? 

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2014 03:43 PM · On: Breaking the Ice

Again, a veyr passionate scene but the phrasing is a real problem. First of all, whose voice is this- Brian or Justin's? The constant switching makes it difficult to follow what is going on. I love the hot blowjob, but I kept having to switch between Justin and Brian, which spoilt it somewhat. And the overuse of "the blond" and "the brunet" could probably be avoided if only using one voice to narrate this. Otherwise, I could really feel the sexual passion running through this, and wanted even more. 

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2014 03:24 PM · On: Recognition

Did Brian literally just hop into Justin's car? LOL! I think you could have added a little more development before they starting making out- although that was quite hot. Also, the reptitive use of "the blond" distracted me from enjoying their sexual frustration... Otherwise, I look forward to the sex...  

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2014 02:44 PM · On: Must Be the Full Moon

Very funny. BEST line:

 

Enigma69 (1:07:44): Have you ever been to Babylon?


Buttercup1983 (1:08:30): I've never been to Iraq.

I love that! I wans't expecting that Ancient Babylon reference, so I was grinning nerdily when I saw it. LMFAO. 

Reviewer: Dido_MagnaCarta (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2014 02:40 PM · On: First Touch

Been skimming through this- quite funny. I wasn't expecting to get into it, because I much prefer canon fics, but I found the whole "Buttercup" "Enigma" thing so endearing I had to keep reading. 

Reviewer: khanspunk (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2014 06:27 AM · On: Another Brainstorming Session, Epilogue

Omg cries!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2014 07:20 PM · On: Third Time's the Charm?

Nicely done.  You made it easy to keep the characters straight.



Author's Response:

Thanks! :-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2014 11:31 PM · On: "This Is F-ing Awesome."

So emotional.  But at least Brian got all the tapes back.  Now, does Justin need to make that call?



Author's Response:

He only got 90% of them back. He does. For many reasons.

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: September 13, 2014 11:25 PM · On: "This Is F-ing Awesome."

Yay finally caught up amazing story I really hate daph I never hated her in a story before I was hoping she didn't know about the bashing. Can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

You think it's amazing?

(grinning like a fool)

Daphne may be redeemable...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 11:18 PM · On: Brian Raps. Justin Chooses Love, Not Fear.

So now I'm all caught up and waiting with baited breath for more.  Have you got a plan for this?  I'm dying to find out what it is.



Author's Response:

I do indeed :-) you'll like it. the aidan/james subplots will continue to parallel B/J's story...for the rest you'll have to wait and see...i should be writing 2 or more updates a week

 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 11:17 PM · On: Brian Raps. Justin Chooses Love, Not Fear.

I would dearly love to have seen this in action.  How nice of Ted to help out.  I wonder if James and Aidan develope this same problem.



Author's Response:

Me, too....imagining it was fun :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 11:08 PM · On: Nothing and Everything

Aha.  How can he fix it if he doesn't know what the problem is.  Daphne is not happy, and doing what Ken wants isn't going to change that.  He's always gonna hold it over her head.



Author's Response:

You're right on both counts.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 11:02 PM · On: Justin and Daphne, Part 2

How cruel.  Can't wait to see how you resolve this.



Author's Response:

as Brandon would say, buckle up. it's gonna be a bumpy, fairly long ride.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:55 PM · On: Justin and Daphne, Part 1

It's slowly coming back to me.  Good thing I get to read further and know that you plan to finish this story.



Author's Response:

Well I hope you end up liking the newest chapter. The first one after too long away is always the hardest.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:51 PM · On: Enter Kayla

I'd completely forgotten about this.  I'm so glad I'm rereading this from the beginning.  My memory is not so good.  So Justin's a daddy!!!



Author's Response:

Yup :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:48 PM · On: A Less Crappy Life

I can understand where Justin is coming from, but I'm dying of curiosity wanting to know why she's back.



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, Brian and Justin don't get to avoid conflict ... being fictional characters and all :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:43 PM · On: Daphne

Ah, it's all coming out now.  See you always answer my questions and you'd written this ages ago.  It's like reading all over again and still new.



Author's Response:

That makes me very happy :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:33 PM · On: The Assault Hearing, Part 1

Haha.  Such an amusing chapter. 



Author's Response:

it was fun to write :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:24 PM · On: Aidan and James--The High School Years Continue, Part 2

So Brian is possessed by a story?



Author's Response:

Not exactly. Justin believes he somehow 'knew' Brian before they met and managed to create a fictional representation of Brian (Aidan). And because Brian does some of the things Justin imagined Aidan doing, he feels like they were fated, destined to be together--like that just confirms his belief that he knew Brian before they met. Brian thinks Justin's a little nuts, but he kind of likes the idea anyway.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:21 PM · On: Aidan and James--The High School Years Continue, Part 1

Woah!  While it's great that they are collaborating, this story is taking a turn for the worse.  I mean the story of Aidan and James.



Author's Response:

True...but it gives them a way of talking without being direct...like when Brian was complimenting Justin's art through Aidan.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:17 PM · On: The Ruse

Enjoyed this!!!!  I can't get over how easy it was to get Rob to change his story.  Good job.



Author's Response:

jealousy and insecurity generally work well...unfortunately not always in the service of good

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 10:08 PM · On: Love Makes You Do Crazy Things...

Oh joy!  How great that Justin was able to tell Lindsay off!  I think that Brian needs to tell Justin what is going on, because if he finds out later from someone else - Mikey for example- it's gonna hurt worse. 



Author's Response:

This part was great fun for both Justin and me.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 09:59 PM · On: Brian's Something, Very Very Something...(Part 1)

Short but HOT!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 09:59 PM · On: Justin's Naughty, Very, Very Naughty (Part 2)

Well that answers my last question.  Hope it doesn't change things.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 09:52 PM · On: Justin's Naughty, Very, Very Naughty (Part 1)

Umm, isn't it a little early for that.   They haven't even been tested yet.



Author's Response:

Yes it is. That's really all I can say. They are being stupid (although as Justin points out later, Brian gets tested every month). 

Reviewer: Tash (Anonymous) · Date: September 11, 2014 09:41 PM · On: The New Bed (Part 3)

I'm reading this story for the first time I bloody love the picture so cute ......... Hot Chapter



Author's Response:

momentsgoneby (formerly known as pannkakan) really outdid herself on that :-) I'm so happy you found this chapter hot :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 09:01 PM · On: Playing Donna Reed, Part 5

How rude of Mel and how is Lindsay feeling about this whole thing, one moment I think she's okay with it and the next I think she and Mikey are on the same page.  I'm thinking Emmett probably already subscribes to Justin's website, he just doesn't know that it's Justin's.  It sounds like something he'd love.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 08:49 PM · On: Playing Donna Reed, Part 4

Love Ted and Emmett.  They are being supportive.  Absolutely adore Deb for putting Mikey in his place.  Will Brian tell how they met or not?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 08:45 PM · On: Playing Donna Reed, Part 3

Nicely done.  How did they manage to redress so fast?  Is Gus with them?  At least Debbie likes Justin.



Author's Response:

Gus is at the babysitter's...I really wish I had included him...he would have made a welcome addition :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 08:41 PM · On: Playing Donna Reed, Part 2

Okay that's one way to deminish a panic attack in the making.  But who's at the door?  The salad sounds scrumptious!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 08:37 PM · On: Playing Donna Reed, Part 1

Love that Brian spiked Debs demands by offering to have them over to the loft.  Ah, shouldn't he have told Justin just how many to expect?  On to the next chapter to see how it goes.  Mikey is sure to raise a ruckus.



Author's Response:

You are always so on the ball :-) I completely forgot about that (the number). Thankfully what Justin made wasn't dependent on how many...

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 08:32 PM · On: Bedtime Story

What a lovely way to tell the truth to Gus.  Looks like Gus loves the new bed.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 08:27 PM · On: Big Boy Toys

Kids do say the darndest things.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 08:14 PM · On: Interrupted

Well at least Lindsay had a good excuse and it was a good way for Justin and Gus to meet.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 08:07 PM · On: Justin's Fine ***, The Cause of an Existential Crisis?

What channel was that on?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 07:55 PM · On: Brian in Wonderland, Part 2B

Talk about going off script!  Brian actually admitted he loved Sunshine.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:55 PM · On: Brian in Wonderland, Part 2

They are remarkably good at reenacting.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:23 PM · On: Brian in Wonderland, Part 1

I can't see Mikey taking Brian serious.  Though the idea of revoking Mikey's key privalege is a good one.  Love the IM's.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:54 PM · On: Another Brainstorming Session, Epilogue

What a comprehensive lesson in finding a prostate.  Brian seems to be catching on to his lesson as well. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:14 PM · On: Another Brainstorming Session, Part 3B

Personally I love Michael bashing.  He makes it so easy.  Can't wait for that little talk he and Brian are going to have.  Justin's fantasy is about to come true.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 03:59 PM · On: Another Brainstorming Session, Part 3A

It's like a fairy tale.  Justin's dreams coming true.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:28 AM · On: Another Brainstorming Session, Part 1

They do work well together



Author's Response:

I agree wholeheartedly.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:25 AM · On: The New Bed (Part 3)

Neat pic.  Now they can collaborate on new stories together.



Author's Response:

That ends up being a big part of this fic...Justin writing and Brian offering feedback.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:22 AM · On: The New Bed (Part 2)

Ambiance is everything.



Author's Response:

Indeed :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:20 AM · On: How Did You Know?

Well you did say you were posting another part in an hour.  So you must write really fast.  I've notice that you sometimes post 2 to 3 chapters a day.  I'm impressed.



Author's Response:

NOW I get it :-) yeah, sometimes I do post multiple chapters in a day. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:16 AM · On: The New Bed (Part 1)

Nice bed.  Very nice.



Author's Response:

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:12 AM · On: Sex, Lies, and Videotape

Just when you think Ethan couldn't go any lower.  He does.  Tut tut.  Do they find all the tapes?



Author's Response:

My Ethans tend to be monstrous. I really gotta work on de-psychoing my villains :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 06:03 AM · On: Paying the Piper, Part 1

Poor Mikey, not.  Serves him right.  At least Brian informed them that Justin is his boyfriend.  Now Brian's going to be put back in jail after he finishes with the cop who helped free Hobbs.



Author's Response:

Brian doesn't know about that yet. We understand because the narrator told us, but Justin hasn't told Brian yet

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:57 AM · On: A Little Role Play

Weren't they worried that one of the guards might come and catch them?  Where's Emmett?  Isn't he supposed to be bailing Brian out?



Author's Response:

No, Brian was hoping Emmett might be doing a cop and thus happen to be there. No one knew he was in jail. When does Brian ever worry about PDS?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:53 AM · On: (the rest) Mikey=Brian's Fairy Godmother?

Ah, so exactly what is it that Brian did.  After he found out about the other guy.  Come to think of it, what did the other guy do when he found out why Brian was there?



Author's Response:

Violence happened 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:49 AM · On: (teaser) Mikey=Brian's Fairy Godmother?

What did Brian do that landed him in jail.  And then Mikey had the nerve to call the cops on Justin?  Oy Vay!



Author's Response:

Brian won't be loving him for that, but they do get a fun role play opportunity

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:41 AM · On: Making Room

I can't wait to see how Brian manages to get the money back.  How sweet of him to let Justin buy a new bed.



Author's Response:

This Brian is three years older than canon Brian (and thus slightly more settled due to Gus and a bit lonely). And Justin has been hurt SO much by the time they meet. His protective instincts immediately come out...getting him all primed for sweetness. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:38 AM · On: Slightly Scary Feelings

And he hasn't found out about Ethan's doublecrossing actions yet.



Author's Response:

No

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:36 AM · On: A Cloud Looms and a New Day Dawns

What will Justin do when he finds out Ethan withdrew most of his money?  Better yet what will Brian do.  Without the money Justin will have to move in with Brian.



Author's Response:

(clearing throat)

 

:-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:33 AM · On: The Second Shoe (and Other Things) Hit the Floor

Ethan only got what he deserved.  If Justin works and makes more than Ethan what does he do?



Author's Response:

I agree.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:29 AM · On: You Must Be the Ex

Well that was easy.  Or was it?  Love how Brian introduced himself as Justin's new boyfriend, expecially when he's never done boyfriends.  Can't wait to find out what happens when he shows Justin off to Mikey and Deb.



Author's Response:

This fic is all about external problems. Ethan's reaction to the break up ... Justin's struggling with his social anxiety and other demons from the past. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:26 AM · On: How Did You Know?

How interesting.  Amazing what you can write in such a short time.



Author's Response:

In such a short time?

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 05:23 AM · On: The Stroke of Midnight

Just where does Justin work?  Or was that just an excuse.  How is he going to explain things to Ethan?



Author's Response:

He works from home, so he really didn't have to leave just then. He's making an excuse because he took Ethan's car and has to get it home.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 04:57 AM · On: Dream Come True

I take it that's the first time Justin has actually had an orgasmic orgasm.



Author's Response:

Well, with another person. He got pretty good at solo orgasms.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 04:55 AM · On: The Boyfriend

Let me guess.  Ethan?  Even when he's not there Mikey can't keep his mouth shut.  Here's hoping that Brian keeps Justin.



Author's Response:

I LOVE that!!! "Even when he's not there Mikey can't keep his mouth shut."

(giggling)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 04:42 AM · On: Breaking the Ice

When you think about it, they are two strangers, one of whom has a social disorder and they got naked and personal before they even said hello. 



Author's Response:

Yup. Justin's biggest issues are being outside and among crowds. One on one inside is much easier. Brian is a stranger, but Justin has been dreaming of a moment like this for at least two years. His longing temporarily gave him the necessary strength. And Brian makes him feel safe and not judged. He hasn''t felt that since before he came out. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 04:36 AM · On: Recognition

Poor Justin.  Maybe he should have warned Enigma that he didn't get out much.



Author's Response:

You are too cute!!!!! I LOVE the way you phrased that. "He doesn't get out much."

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 04:00 AM · On: Must Be the Full Moon

Wow!  I'm surprised that Brian is pushing to meet him.  That should be good.



Author's Response:

I hope you think so :-) :-) :-)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 03:42 AM · On: First Touch

Love the im format.  Great chapter.



Author's Response:

That was a lot of fun.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 03:00 AM · On: Come a Little Bit Closer

Such a shame that Justin had to go through that.  His father is a slime and his mother not much better.  I can't get over the fact that Daphne didn't contact him.  Is it possible that she doesn't know?  Glad Enigma IMed him. 



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, no -- she knows. You'll see that later, toward the end of what's currently written.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 11, 2014 01:48 AM · On: The Sweet Anonymity of the Internet, Part 2

We can all relate to Justin.  We live for reviews, especially if they are nice.  It's almost as if you live through your story, much like Justin. 



Author's Response:

Most definitely.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2014 11:55 PM · On: The Sweet Anonymity of the Internet, Part 1

Surely Ethan will be a thing of the past once Aidan or Enigma and Buttercup connect.  This is even better than I remember.



Author's Response:

This pleases me (grinning like a fool)

Reviewer: Sasha (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2014 03:56 PM · On: Leaving Lurkerdom

I adore this Brian, he's so perceptive and willing to understand Justin.  Loving the update - not the angst or Daphne but - I'm smiling!

Fools In Love

Between Christmas, the New Year and new FIL the holidays will ROCK! 


Signed,


Your Totally Excited Fan 




Author's Response:

I'm thrilled that you're enjoying their dynamic :-)

 

I'm really looking forward to continuing Fools in Love...it will definitely enhance the holiday season :-)

 

(PS: your giving me the warm and fuzzies)

Reviewer: LNG (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2014 01:52 PM · On: Brian Raps. Justin Chooses Love, Not Fear.

A new chapter!!!

Reviewer: Henri (Anonymous) · Date: September 10, 2014 08:20 AM · On: Brian Raps. Justin Chooses Love, Not Fear.

Great you are continuing this story - nothing more frustrating than a story you have enjoying suddenly stops so I for one look forward to more updates 😊

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