Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: Speedy (Anonymous) · Date: January 02, 2013 06:35 AM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

Wicked! Thanks!

Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: August 19, 2012 12:04 AM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

I can actually see Brian/Ted as a pair! Don't get me wrong. I love Brian/Justin and Ted/Blake, yet I think if Ted became confident earlier he and Brian could have had something. 

I wish Ted hadn't been dreaming :)

With All My Love,

~Nim*huggles*

 



Author's Response:

Hey there...me too!...thanks for reading, reviewing and glad you liked it...I agree that if Ted was more confident he and Brian could have maybe had something...however I do think that Justin was the ONE for Brian as Blake is the ONE for Ted! I liked the way Brian and Ted's relationship became more trusting and somehow more real.

be well

later x

Reviewer: landlady_4rent (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2010 06:24 AM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

You really had me going. Poor Ted. Only a dream. Well written. Annie



Author's Response:

Thank you ...glad you enjoyed it

later x

Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: December 19, 2008 04:35 AM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

Oh!  Poo!  You had me going.  lol  Great story!

 

 



Author's Response:

Heh heh!...I was undecided whether to make it real or not...went with the dream angle...but I really may do an alternate ending sometime...do you think people could take it!LOL!

Glad you enjoyed it!

later x

Reviewer: Joyce (Anonymous) · Date: September 06, 2008 02:31 AM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

HHey the finished article came out fantastic sandra, i hope all the QAF fans enjoy reading it.

You really capture the emotions of Ted and the arrogance of Mr Kinney. 



Author's Response: Thanx friend!...:)...seems to have got more reviews than the others..heh heh! thanx for the help!...c ya soon...later x

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Anonymous) · Date: September 05, 2008 11:03 AM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

The banner, my dear, the banner!  It just jumps out the page at you.... you just want to jump in bed beside him.  That's is beautiful... the most beautiful banner I've seen to date.

It's agonizing to look at... the YEARNING TO BE THERE BY HIS SIDE!!!!



Author's Response: Hmm...well yeah!  Glad you like it.  I am still learning how to use PSP but I am pleased with it...it shows what I wanted it to. later x

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 11:36 PM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

I'm so glad 2 finally C here that more and more writers/authors are starting to take risk here... it first seemed when I came to site... authors were horrified to wander from the norm of all the stories be Bri/Jus... and with happy endings, and I recall how hard the readers came down on you if you dared paired either Bri or Jus with someone else and don't you dare give them an unhappy ending, unless it was a sad,sad,sad, tear-jerking death of one of our beloved boys.

I recall the flap I got from readers when I first did.  However, although I don't have it posted here any more 'Penetrate' (Ben/Brian story) did turn out to be my most read story to date, although it got plenty of flap before readers jumped on the band wagon.

I had problems with my computer and eraed all my stories from the site. "Penetrate" had over 26000 reads and the story was less than 1 month old.  I haven't seen numbers like that since for one of my stories.

Again it good to see so many authors take the risk... and it seems more and more readers are starting to come around be being more acceptable.  I think it's an improvement... it gives us some many more choices and caters to the different variety of taste.

I Think it's a brave and excellent move in the right direction... and I commend all the author's who are getting aboard and expressing themselves to the fullest regardless of what others think... SO TO SPEAK THE AUTHOR SAYING:  NO APOLOGIES/NO REGRETS... Oh, My Gawd!  Where ever have we heard that before!!!



Author's Response:

Yeah...I know what you mean...i broached this to a couple of people and their reactions were oh I won't be able to read it...too yucky!...Well stuff them...their loss i say! Although I love B/J romantic, I have to be honest and say I can't take too much sickly sugarsweet B/J-I have to leave for a while and read something with more bite- and as for Mpregs- I try to read some because everyone should be able to write what they want  and get an honest unbiased response- apart from the fact that it is fiction so anything is possible- I really don't get the whole family/marriage bit-never having wanted it for myself, but I try to read the stories and respond when I can. I think anyone who is brave enough to write and upload their stories deserves the consideration of a fair review-thats why it took me so long to even consider uploading mine...

I loved Penetrate and the sequel-will you be able to repost it sometime or is it gone forever?  Anyway I too hope more authors will take risks and write outside of the box more...it makes for great reading-especially for an insomniac like me! NO APOLOGIES NO REGRETS?---No i have no idea where we heard that before! Heh heh!

ps--I was so bad at Pride-I foound myself quoting Justin's dick speech in a bar at the top of my voice-my friend nearly choked and fell off her chair! LOL 

Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: September 04, 2008 08:45 PM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

You definitely out did yourself w/this one. I didn't think anyone could make me get off on Bri and Ted doing it but I did! 

However, as I was reading it I Was hoping it was dream because under the circumstances I couldn't see it working any other way that is we all know Brian doesn't do his friends. 

Two, although we know Brian did his co-workers (at least we know he did Kip), and clients but QAF didn't make it clear whether or not he did his employees (I'm inclined to think he didn't). 

Also, Justin was still in Brian's life (if not physically but emotionally... so it wouldn't have work that he would have done Ted at that time).

EXCELLENT STORY... TY FOR THAT!  I LOVEEEEEEEEED IT!

Here's your 5 stars.



Author's Response: Hi you!...I am so glad you enjoyed it...anyone with Brian/Gale would get me off...I am that easy! :)...seriously I thinkTed would/could be so hot with Brian...if he had more confidence and dress sense of course...and I love Ted ...sooooo! As I said in an earlier response I really was not sure whether to make it real or not,...making Brian too drunk/high/upset over Justin would not have worked, could not think of a way to make it real in the context of the points you raised...so the dream was the only way...plus it would not upset too many people..;)heh heh! thanks for the review and comments...makes me feel good that you liked it...I think you are a great writer so it makes me feel I am doing something right!

Reviewer: Big J (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2008 03:28 PM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

LOL!!!!  I enjoyed that sooo much.  You are an evil woman. I'm sure we've all had dreams like Ted and woken up and cursed that it wasn't real.

Author's Response: Hi BigJ, I deliberated long and hard over whether to make it real or not...and I really wanted for Ted to experience the Kinney magic...but I figured that this way would be more believable...at least for most people on here and it made me smile so I figured this way was best.  Dreams like Ted?...NEVER! Ha Ha! Glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 11:28 AM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

hahahaha, i loved it.

Author's Response: Thank you sjmpets3. So glad you enjoyed it.

Reviewer: KAYLIN (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2008 09:03 AM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

Ok I trust you it wasn't that bad but so so so so glad it was only a dream ... wipes sweat from my forhead......Later

Author's Response: Thank you Maria, I told you it was not that bad...I am so glad you read it and have not spontaneously combusted!

Reviewer: Sigi (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2008 10:14 PM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

I really liked it :) thanks for sharing

Author's Response: Thank you for reading, Sigi...glad you liked it!

Reviewer: alys (Anonymous) · Date: September 02, 2008 08:46 PM · On: Ted's excellent adventure

I like Ted too. Very funny.

Author's Response: Thanx alys...well I wanted Ted to experience the wonder of Kinney too!...:) Glad you enjoyed it, Thanx for reading.

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