Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: July 04, 2016 07:46 AM · On: Mine
so sweet :) and thanks for posting...
Reviewer: YumYumPM (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2016 05:58 PM · On: Mine
This was a recommendation on MW facebook page and it's just as good today as it was when it was written. I hope Shai left with his tail tucked between his legs.
Reviewer: charming1 (Anonymous) · Date: April 12, 2016 03:16 PM · On: Mine
Such a sweet story :) I love possessive Brian, so hot.
Reviewer: MAFITA (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2013 11:52 PM · On: Mine
I loved this! ^-^ It was funny to see Brian competing with a boy half his age.... but I kept wishing that Justin could hear what Shai was saying to Brian so that he could put that idiot in his place. The ending was my consolation, though. At least with those words, the twink can finally get a clue.... Anyway, I really enjoyed it! Hope to read you soon in another story! Kisses!
Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: January 28, 2013 09:05 PM · On: Mine
Somehow I am still looking for more.
Reviewer: BritinGuslover (Anonymous) · Date: July 03, 2012 09:13 PM · On: Mine
Wonderful piece! However, it would have been nice for Brian to find out if Justin and Shai were fucking and if so, how serious it was. And if not, then what were they doing. My heart ached for Brian
~Nim
Author's Response: Hey Nim,
I wrote it from Brian's perspective for that reason. I wanted Brian to be able to show Justin how much he loved him and be willing to fight for him, even if there was a chance that he was cheating on him. I'm glad you enjoyed it and thanks for commenting! Hugs, Rena.
Reviewer: Cheburashka2 (Signed) · Date: December 27, 2011 11:36 AM · On: Mine
Awwww! Sniff, sniff! That was just lovely.
You have a very nice way of writing canon. Thanks for sharing this.
Cheers,
Vin
Author's Response: Thanks for commenting. *grins* Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Infatuated_BJreader (Signed) · Date: September 08, 2011 02:49 PM · On: Mine
Nice one! had fun reading it.. :)
Author's Response: Glad to hear! Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: valell50 (Signed) · Date: October 13, 2010 01:43 PM · On: Mine
Lovely! You write canon as well as anyone - with your own special touch!
Author's Response: Aww. Thank you. Hugs! Rena
Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 22, 2010 06:34 PM · On: Mine
Wow, this was great. Sequels would have been great, too. Well done.
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it. This was just something that came to me and was never supposed to be more than a little one shot. Who knows what will happen in the future. *grins* Hugs! Rena
Reviewer: 7qt (Anonymous) · Date: April 05, 2009 04:31 AM · On: Mine
"Exquisite" is the the word IF I may say so -'n'.."The Heats Too High "....???!!! was hilairius ! -I almost fell off my chair - A sence of humour is so hard to come by -But Brian sure has his quirky ones !! -Thats why I so love him -!! -He's such a lovin' bastard all the way !! -You really do write well -I like readin' your stuff -
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm glad you liked the story..."Take that Shai!" Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Beware-of-weeping-angels (Anonymous) · Date: February 27, 2009 09:27 AM · On: Mine
That's so sweet! Made me squee! Loved it, great job!
Author's Response: Awww. Thank you so much. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: michele659 (Signed) · Date: November 27, 2008 02:41 PM · On: Mine
That was sexy and funny and also very touching! I loved the ending-that was beautiful!
Author's Response: Thank you. I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'm sorry for taking so long to respond, but I never got a notice that you'd commented. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: lougenessis (Signed) · Date: November 18, 2008 08:40 AM · On: Mine
Nah! You take that Shai, he has some nerve! Loved your story!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I'm sorry it has taken me so long to respond, but I didn't get a notice that you'd commented. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: edom (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2008 03:48 PM · On: Mine
Ha ha ha. Who does Shai think he is. Does he really think Justin is that shallow? Pfft.
Author's Response: He's obviously not thinking at all. Poor boy is delusional...hehehe. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 01:38 PM · On: Mine
A great one-shot. Then again your writings are like amazing. I really enjoyed it. Haha Shai, Brian's the best.
Author's Response: Thanks, Jackie. I enjoyed writing this little ficlet and I loved it when Brian said, "Beat that Shai." Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2008 04:16 AM · On: Mine
beat the shai! ha! “Too late. All my dreams came true the day I met you.” ha!
Author's Response: LOL sjmpets! You picked my two favorite lines. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: kayitt (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 01:28 AM · On: Mine
hi, I love this story, and i like to ask if you let me traslate to spanish, I'm latin girl in i like to put in my LJ for my LJ friend can read it. i hope you say yes and you can understan every thing that I wrote. =) jiji,if you wana know my lj is http://kayitt.livejournal.com/ kisses
Author's Response: Hey Kayitt! I'm honored that you want to translate my story into Spanish. I'm going to friend you LJ and I'll put a link to your journal entry on my LJ...in case anyone else wants to read it in Spanish. I've had some of my stories translated into German, but this will be the first time in Spanish. Thanks for commenting...I'm glad you liked this one. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: rose (Anonymous) · Date: June 30, 2008 12:46 AM · On: Mine
ohhh, this was sooo nice. I love a jelaous brian. :-)) rose
Author's Response: I do too, Rose, but he's still gotta be cool about it. Thanks for commenting. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Belle (Anonymous) · Date: June 29, 2008 10:43 PM · On: Mine
You can write cannon, twilight zone, upside down, backwards, inside out.....I'll still keep reading and enjoying! I loved your take on cannon. Very in character for Brian during his convo with Shia. The ending was the absolute icing!!! Can't wait for your twilight zone stories....... Ann
Author's Response: Awww thank you, Ann. I really appreciate all your comments and support on my stories. I'm so honored that so many people seem to enjoy the little universes I create. I certainly hope you like the stories that I'll be posting soon. I'm going to post an original ficlet that's a PWP but it's a F/F instead of M/M. I am expanding my scope to see just exactly what I can and can't do with my writing. I certainly hope you'll tell me what you think. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Moonshadow Woman (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2008 10:37 PM · On: Mine
well done
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Very high praise coming from you. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: BrianaWriter (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2008 06:34 PM · On: Mine
Sometimes these 'one chapter' stories are the best: This one ranks up there with the best of them. Thanks for that!
Author's Response: Thanks, Briana. I wrote this for a challenge, so I tried to write something short and sweet. I'm glad you enjoyed it. Hugs, Rena
Reviewer: Bine (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2008 05:05 PM · On: Mine
Aww.... I loved the end. And this Shia guy can go f*ck himself if you ask me. Brian will always be on top of everything, but always with Justin by his side.
Author's Response: Aww thanks Bine! Yeah, I made Shai an asshole of the first order, but I liked him so much I'm gonna write an original fic with him in it...LOL. Hugs, Rena
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