Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2020 01:41 PM · On: Chapter 11

That was an amazing home coming for Justin and to see his passion reflected in Brian's eyes really moved me. I do hope Justin tells Brian about Linda as I feel she is holding back the art team.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2020 11:23 AM · On: Chapter 10

This was amazing I loved seeing a Brian happy to see him happy touches my heart. Thank you for writing this x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 13, 2020 09:13 AM · On: Chapter 9

Poor Justin my heart went out to him and the way Craig reacted was just horrible. I felt for Daniel as well and I hope he goes on to meet someone worthy of him. Brilliant chapter xx

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 12, 2020 09:43 AM · On: Chapter 8

Oh loved this chapter so much, I could feel Brian's worry the poor guy. I was delighted the way Justin's reaction to the proposal they put on the table so amazing. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 09:21 PM · On: Chapter 7

Holy cow I was not expecting that. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 08:29 PM · On: Chapter 5

Lol I loved Daphne and Emmet wearing Justin out by shopping lol. I'm wondering what Brian has to talk to Justin about x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 11:12 AM · On: Chapter 5

Ted is a really good friend to Brian and I think those words he said to Brian meant the world to him.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 4

They need to live in the same city they are soulmates. The talk with Brian and Megan was such a powerful one. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 10:27 AM · On: Chapter 3

That was so sexy and hot wow wee. Thank you kindly 😊😊

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 11, 2020 09:42 AM · On: Chapter 2

Such a wonderful chapter, I loved the conversation between our boys it made me smile from ear to ear. Thank you doing that x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: January 10, 2020 08:50 PM · On: Chapter 1

They are so connected aren't they even just those few hours apart didn't tear them apart. They need to get back in the same place.

Reviewer: Juditka (Signed) · Date: July 18, 2019 10:52 AM · On: Chapter 31

I read this beautiful story again. I really liked it, thank you for writing it.    

Reviewer: Flo3241 (Signed) · Date: July 07, 2019 07:54 PM · On: Chapter 31

This was such a lovely read. Glad I stumbled upon it. 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 30, 2019 12:18 AM · On: Chapter 7

whoops.  Now that's a surprise.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2019 05:42 PM · On: Chapter 5

Here's hoping Brian gets his wish and Mikey shits up.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 14, 2019 12:26 PM · On: Chapter 4

Brian is trapped by Justin's charms which he is Craven.

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 12:54 PM · On: Chapter 1

Such an amazing and beautiful story - even better the second time around. Definitely a favorite.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2019 11:17 AM · On: Chapter 3

They really miss each other don't they?

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2019 08:36 AM · On: Chapter 31

I have read this story again with so much pleasure because I love the way you evolve their lives and their relationship. Thank you very much and I hope you will write other beautiful stories.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2019 07:05 PM · On: Chapter 2

Nice that Justin isn't staying in a dump.  Ted asks the right question, he's a good friend.  Now Brian will be too busy to be unhappy that he doesn't have his sunshine at his beck and call.

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: June 01, 2019 06:49 PM · On: Chapter 1

Yes, why is he in NY.  It's like the girls going to Toronto without having thought it through.

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 17, 2018 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 31

Just love it.. Fantastic

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: December 16, 2018 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 10

PLEASE SOMEBODY KILL lINDSEY NOW

Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2018 02:17 AM · On: Chapter 31

This was such a great story, from start to finish!!   

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: July 26, 2017 10:42 AM · On: Chapter 31

Omg this story is so lovely I can imagine this as an ending..... plz plz come back to writing 

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 24, 2016 05:01 AM · On: Chapter 31

Absolutely amazing story. Loved it!

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: December 18, 2016 08:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

I have tried to give Lindz the benefit of a doubt but bottom line, she figured the best way to keep Brian was to get Justin out of the picture because he gave Brian roots. With her and Gus gone, Peter would be miserable.  Therefore, she saw Brian racking up frequent flier miles to visit them in Canada. Glad Brian decided to confide in Ted. 

Reviewer: KinneysBitch (Signed) · Date: September 18, 2016 09:37 PM · On: Chapter 31

Loved it.....I've read it several times and loved it a little more every time

Reviewer: Shell Scott (Anonymous) · Date: August 02, 2016 11:35 AM · On: Chapter 31

Second time I've read this, it just gets better

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2016 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 31

Wow wow wow, talk about an emotional story.  I felt like I was on this journey with them and felt it all. You seriously wrote an amazing story here. 

Reviewer: nickknack (Signed) · Date: January 05, 2016 12:58 PM · On: Chapter 31

This story was absolutely amazing. I felt as though I was watching QaF continuing on, as though it never finished. The use of canon was especially well done. I am really going to miss this universe. A true favourite - thank you:-)

Reviewer: Prisca512 (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2015 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 31

I 1st read this story quite a while ago and just realized you are the author of ThSpy Who Loved Me. I'm sorry I never left a review before.  This story is one I read and read again, I love it. I was so disappointed with how the series ended, I cried for days. This story gives me the continuing story I wanted.  Thank you for sharing, you are a really talented writer. I hope you are still writing--doesn't matter what as long as you are writing. 

Reviewer: eureka1 (Signed) · Date: June 29, 2015 09:35 PM · On: Chapter 31

I know it has been more than 5 years since you completed your masterpiece, and more than 10 years since the series ended, but I just recently became aware of--and completly addicted to--QAF and the fan fiction it spawned.  No idea how I could have been oblivious to QAF until this month (June 2015), but I’m so utterly hooked at this point that I can barely think about anything else.

 

“Resting Here with You” was the second piece of fan fiction about Brian and Justin  that I read.  Although I’ve read quite a few other takes on their story in the interim, yours remains my favorite, so much so that I just read it for the second time--and know I will revisit it many times.  “Resting” provides a natural, sexy continuation of the season five finale.

 

You could easily publish your story as an ebook/print novel.  As far as I know, the only published QAF stories tell how Brian and Michael get together (without Justin ever entering the picture).  I won’t read those books since, for me, that’s completely implausible and unappealing.  QAF’s central, endless love story belongs to Brian and Justin.  Truly one of the great love stories of all time (fictional and non-fictional).

 

I would have liked to see Craig Taylor’s acceptance of his own homosexuality explored further.  I really liked the way you introduced that storyline  as well as Brian’s statement  that Craig needed to determine when he would come out, while also despising Craig’s hypocrisy.

 

Thank you for finding such a wonderful partner for Emmett in Nathan.  After Justin and Brian, Emmett is my favorite QAF character.

 

Most of all, thank you for developing Justin and Brian’s partnership and emotional connection.  So satisfying to read about and feel their love for each other.  Kudos to you for such a well-told story!

 

I so wish that CowLip would produce either a QAF movie or miniseries before any more time elapses.  I want the original cast, of course.  Your story would be a wonderful basis for a five-episode (or movie) conclusion to the show.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: May 02, 2015 09:51 PM · On: Chapter 31

Congratulations. Liked this a lot.



Author's Response:

Thank you so much. :) ~Liz

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2015 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 31

This has been one of my first QAF stories and omg, what a way to start my "new" obsession. Loved the show for ages, but only just found this site. LOVING IT AND YOU!



Author's Response:

I just wanted to thank you for all of your kind reviews. This story has always been close to my heart...and a labor of love for the this series that I adore so much. And I'm so happy that people are still finding the show and then finding this fic to help ease the pain of the finale. Again thank you so much for reading. And letting me know know how much you enjoyed it. :) ~Liz

 

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2015 12:47 AM · On: Chapter 30

Ahhh they both told each other at the same time, that's brilliant. I loved Brian's "No." :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 21, 2015 12:05 AM · On: Chapter 27

I really love the comment about how Brian and Justin are always connected, that was beautiful x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2015 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 25

Protextive Brian is one of my favourite Brians in all the world. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2015 02:37 AM · On: Chapter 25

Protextive Brian is one of my favourite Brians in all the world. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2015 02:30 AM · On: Chapter 24

You're killing me here. U love it. And you :p

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2015 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

This was HOTCAKES <3

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2015 02:10 AM · On: Chapter 22

I love how you write Molly. This is just as I imagine her. Sassy, yet adorable! And besotted with Brian <3 and don't even get me started on Brian and Daphne!! Ahhhh!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 19, 2015 01:56 AM · On: Chapter 21

Molly sleeping on Brian's chest gave me feels - he is a big softie deep down, especially for her - and after what has happened with her dad.

 

ALSO HE REMEMBERS!!!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 18, 2015 12:39 AM · On: Chapter 20

OH NO! *runs to read the next chapter*

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 05:08 AM · On: Chapter 19

That club scene was HOT and romantic, you're amazing! Also NO - WHAT IS GOING TO HAPPEN?

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 04:39 AM · On: Chapter 18

YAY they're in each other's arms again!

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 17

OOOOOOOOOH! who is this guy!!!!!!?

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 04:03 AM · On: Chapter 16

The fact that it was Mel that saw how much he had chanded was utterly perfect. And as angry as I am with Lindsay, I can understand why she didn't want her Peter to grow up - he was hers, that was something they shared. You can tell she loves him and she now also has to share him with Justin. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 03:21 AM · On: Chapter 15

HE MADE HIM A STUDIO?????? OMG BRIAN <3

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 02:57 AM · On: Chapter 14

If that dude hurts Emmett, I will cry.

Also, I LOVE the relationshp between Molly and Brian. He never had that sibling love x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 02:19 AM · On: Chapter 13

I hate that Justin is hurting :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 01:55 AM · On: Chapter 12

Urgh Lindsay needs to mind her own business :( and why was Gus crying? :(

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 01:30 AM · On: Chapter 11

I need to go to bed but I can't stop reading.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 01:13 AM · On: Chapter 10

The fact that Brian doesn't think he deserves happiness makes my heart ache, but he does, And I think he's starting to see that.

 

LOVE the swing. I love how trusting they are. Especially Justin <3

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 12:43 AM · On: Chapter 9

GUH! Brian throwing his dad against the wall all protective and territorial is hotter to me than any sex scene... HOWEVER, I much appreciated the sexy times. I can't wait to see what his gift is. 

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 12:22 AM · On: Chapter 8

OOOOH!!!! Okay, I like Megan. I was worried lol. And I can't wait to see what happens with Craig.

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 17, 2015 12:04 AM · On: Chapter 7

WOW, not who I was expecting, you little sneak x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 11:02 PM · On: Chapter 5

Love love love Brian and Ted's friendship. He cares so much about his friends, whether he'd ever admit it or not - and that includes Ted. And Ted did make some excellent points.

I also loved how you focused on Lindsay - you nailed that. It's like she took his kid away and sent the love of his life away to live out her dreams in the big apple - DAMN YOU LINDSAY x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 10:54 PM · On: Chapter 4

Oooh do I like Megan or is she  playing Brian by telling her that Justin will be safe with her??? Also, I could TOTALLY hear Brian's voice in this, when eh was talking to her alone :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 10:44 PM · On: Chapter 3

HOT, yet adorable at the same time. Yes they needed to fuck each other senseless, but they also both craved being in each others arms - where they belong. *dies* x

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 10:36 PM · On: Chapter 2

I will never tire of hearing Brian tell Justin that he loves him. And what I love even more is that you haven't over done that. I can't imagine him saying it all the time, but when either of them needs to hear it - and you have done that. Also I love how you have written Brian and Ted - I love their awkward little friendship so much :)

Reviewer: SunshineSally (Signed) · Date: April 16, 2015 10:29 PM · On: Chapter 1

I usually don't like POV stories, but I liked this a lot. I like how you had both of their POV in the same chapter. Seeing the same thing at the same time from both of their perspectives was amazing. Especially when they're bot so vulnrable aw :/

Reviewer: khanspunk (Signed) · Date: July 06, 2014 08:59 PM · On: Chapter 31

Absolutely loved this!!! #fave

Reviewer: leemikki (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2014 02:34 PM · On: Chapter 31

This was unbelievably beautiful!

Reviewer: leemikki (Anonymous) · Date: May 13, 2014 02:39 AM · On: Chapter 7

Oh Fuck! That rat-bastard Craig!! -_-

Reviewer: QaFfangirl (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 07:15 AM · On: Chapter 14

Drunken Pool, Battle Royal- genius!  Nice job

Reviewer: QaFfangirl (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 06:15 AM · On: Chapter 7

Holy Shit, what a twist.  Really loving this so far.

Reviewer: AngelLove18 (Signed) · Date: April 28, 2014 12:59 AM · On: Chapter 7

Was not expecting that!

Reviewer: Deborah (Anonymous) · Date: March 12, 2014 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 20

I am about to start Chapter 20 and I just wanted to stop by and tell you how much I am loving your story. I so needed it after being devastated about the actual S5 finale, for the last 9 months! 

Thank you so much for making loving and romantic Brian believable! *Hugs*

Reviewer: sarahyellow (Signed) · Date: January 16, 2014 07:52 AM · On: Chapter 1

Right away I knew what the title was from. I love that song and it is so melancholy! Perfect way to set the mood :) I think you're such a good writer, this is such a good fic, but I'm not sure if alternating first person POV's is my fav here. Despite that, you write SO well! And I thought the idea of Brian havign justin the way you described-with their hands tied together-was soooo erotic and sensual. Now that is one scenario I'd NEVER thought of!! Creative, and hot.

Reviewer: Gayathri (Anonymous) · Date: October 29, 2013 04:21 AM · On: Chapter 31

This story was amazing. I had tears in my eyes when I finished reading it. I'm sure all the Brian/Justin fans would've loved it. The feeling is something that cannot be expressed. Your writing skills are top notch and it really did feel like reality while readiing your story. 

Reviewer: CFC (Anonymous) · Date: July 12, 2013 11:22 AM · On: Chapter 31

Very much enjoyed this story.

Reviewer: Marguerite (Anonymous) · Date: June 02, 2013 03:41 AM · On: Chapter 31

Thank you for this story, it was amazing =)

Reviewer: Marguerite (Anonymous) · Date: June 01, 2013 06:12 AM · On: Chapter 7

Nice ! I thought it was Chris Hobbs ! But Justin's father ? Great ! It's even better ! :D

Reviewer: Tagsit (Anonymous) · Date: May 18, 2013 07:10 AM · On: Chapter 31

I really love a long, complex, intriguing story - which is why this fic is so perfect. I read this a couple of years ago when I first found the site and it amazed me. Reading it again now, I'm still just as enthralled. Great story. Thanks for writing. TAG

Reviewer: addy (Anonymous) · Date: March 25, 2013 07:02 AM · On: Chapter 31

I am really thankful for your story :D really lifted my spirits and made me happy to see them so happy and together. GOD FUCKING FINALLY TOGETHER! I never cared what happened all I wanted to see was justin and brian TOGETHER :) and you made that possible, so thanks.

Reviewer: Marchwarden (Anonymous) · Date: March 15, 2013 11:37 PM · On: Chapter 12

I hardly leave reviews as I am lazy, but I just want to mention Lindsay is  bit of a twat. If you write her being slapped or being put in her place, I would be okay with this. Also fantastic story and writing style.

Reviewer: no sleep (Anonymous) · Date: September 03, 2012 03:22 AM · On: Chapter 1

Amazing first chapter!  I loved the analogy of the doors of the loft closing like The sheilds around Brian's heart.

Reviewer: Mathilde (Anonymous) · Date: August 16, 2012 08:18 PM · On: Chapter 31

I've just read your whole story, almost only not reading it when sleeping. I love it! The way you write is perfection and the relationship between Brian amd Justin is so full of love and trust! And the sex 'scenes' are flawless! This is probably the best QAF fanfic I've read! I love it! If there was a season 6, this would be it:) I'd LOVE a sequal:)

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 02:00 PM · On: Chapter 31

I just read the BEST B&J ff I have have ever read.What a great story.And all in character.You got Brian down pat.A lot of the stories dont get that but yours did.Thankyou so much.It was great reading.While I did get the ending of QAF I always felt we were left hanging.Now I have my happy ending.Once again I thank you.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 05, 2012 04:16 AM · On: Chapter 24

I am so enjoying this.You go from soft to hot and from tense to scary all in one chapter.Keeping me hooked.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 07:01 PM · On: Chapter 5

NOW my housework is suffering cos I cant stop reading your story.I am really enjoying this.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 06:42 PM · On: Chapter 4

This chapter is great.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 05:41 PM · On: Chapter 3

HOT!!!!!

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 05:32 PM · On: Chapter 2

Yay!! Still good.Loving this story.

Reviewer: charlotte taylor (Signed) · Date: May 04, 2012 05:10 PM · On: Chapter 1

At last!! This first chapter actually has the ring of these two in it.Unlike some stories that are just so un B&J.Well done.Feels like I've picked up a QAF book.Looking forward to the next chapter.

Reviewer: TrinTiff (Signed) · Date: April 22, 2012 01:20 PM · On: Chapter 31

i just read this whole story again! It's at least the 3rd or maybe 4th time through! I loved every word, again!

Hugs, Cindy

Reviewer: Shauna (Anonymous) · Date: March 27, 2012 10:39 PM · On: Chapter 31

I think this is the best ff story ive ever read. I really loved it. I did not want it to end!

Reviewer: lvsHP23 (Anonymous) · Date: March 23, 2012 03:30 AM · On: Chapter 31

After reading this for at least the third time...I realized I'd never left a review! Brilliant...that's all I can say. As for your writing...love the story development, the plot, I thought you did a great job keeping the characters "in character". As for the story itself...I love all of your originals...adore Megan, would love to find places like Crave and Twin Flames, think Nathan is perfection for Em. Of all the stories I've read..we won't talk about how many...I think yours is the one I keep coming back to as my - this is how it should be - story. Keep doing what you do!

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2012 07:47 PM · On: Chapter 31

i must say it's a very brilliant storya281;this is exactly what i‘v dreamed about brian&justina281;they’ll always be my favorite partner!

Reviewer: Gretchen (Anonymous) · Date: February 29, 2012 02:55 PM · On: Chapter 31

This was an AMAZING fic and I loved every bit of it! Your characterization of everyone, especially Justin and Brian, was PERFECT. :D

Reviewer: ronistone (Anonymous) · Date: January 28, 2012 06:51 AM · On: Chapter 1

What a season 6! Thank you. Beautiful job. I know I'm very, very late to review this, but I'm glad I stumbled across it. Your Brian is so very real! Haughty, sarcastic, callous, untouchable...humble, honest, vulnerable, open. I can now watch the final episode of Season 5 without my heart ripping out through my chest...and for THAT I will be eternally grateful.

Thank you again.

Roni ~~ tolday2001@aol.com

 

Reviewer: Jackie Mag (Signed) · Date: September 12, 2011 10:05 AM · On: Chapter 31

Great story.  True to the characters.  It kept me interested the whole way through.

I write, too, but can't imagine 31 chapters!  Good job.

Jackie Mag

Reviewer: mary (Anonymous) · Date: July 15, 2011 04:19 AM · On: Chapter 31

this is the BEST series i've read so far... and i've read some very good ones...

like pink's song, it's 'fuckin' perfect'.....

thank you sooooo much for writing this!!!

Reviewer: Jack Dorff (Anonymous) · Date: July 04, 2011 09:25 PM · On: Chapter 23 - A Porny Interlude

I really enjoy this chapter.Very hot

Reviewer: Kate (Anonymous) · Date: December 20, 2010 05:57 AM · On: Chapter 31

Such an amzing story. One of the best I have read in a long time. Thanks sooo much!!!

Reviewer: Murgy31 (Signed) · Date: August 28, 2010 11:36 AM · On: Chapter 31

This story was truly beautiful! I loved every chapter!!!

Reviewer: CJ (Anonymous) · Date: August 17, 2010 02:23 PM · On: Chapter 31

a beautiful post-season 5 story line!!....keep up the good work..^_^

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2010 05:44 AM · On: Chapter 31

Awww!

I like your ending.  It's so true.  Even perfect happiness has a shadow, if only because you fear it will come to an end.  Life is just there and all you can do is prepare yourself to face it, set up cercumstances to celebrate it, make commitments to not to lose it.

You certainly cant predict it.  You have set our beloved B/J up for a wonderful, busy and fulfilling life with great friends and devoted family. 

I only wish there was a sequal.

LOL = and thanks for writing the story, it was awsome!

Michelle

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 04:49 PM · On: Chapter 28

Gotta adore Cynthia!  The bite behind the Top Dog's growl.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 27

Wow, tense.   I am glad he is dead.  Anything less would have left me uneasy.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 02:20 PM · On: Chapter 24

Brian's fear is pure agony.  Excellent scene.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 11, 2010 12:47 PM · On: Chapter 22

As I pulled out into traffic I stole a glance at him, “Besides…it’s our family…not my family. You do realize Deb has adopted you right? Sorry to say this, Nate, but you’re in. No turning back now.” I teased.

He smiled, “I’m honored.”

“That won’t last.”

So very Brian!  Considerate and sweet, teasing, with a hint of sarcasm.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:45 PM · On: Chapter 21

Squeee!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 11:12 PM · On: Chapter 20

Crazy funny sad scene with Emmett - I could imagine it all.

I love the raw fantasies.  Mmmmm

OMG, Em!

You've got me tense, horny, angry, frustrated, sad......thats really good for one chapter!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 10:40 PM · On: Chapter 19

I like the club, great idea, lets our boys be bad without compromising their ability to go raw.

Im excited for justin about getting promotors and cant wait to see what that will lead us to.

Oh damn.  Em will be fine.  Em will be fine.  Em will be fine.......

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 08:35 PM · On: Chapter 16

Why didnt they think that Gus was missing his father?  Poor little boy. 

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 06:10 PM · On: Chapter 12

Aaaaaarg!  Lindsay is sooooooo not cool.  I'll leave it at that.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 10

"It's a gift, you open it." I whispered.  He chuckled and gingerly pulled at the paper.  I rolled my eyes and smiled.  He opened presents like he was diffusing a bomb.  Christmas and birthdays could be the longest days of my life.

Its lines like this that make me really like a story and a writer.  It is clever and funny and warm and is weighted in a history they share.  It tells me a bit about each of them that a conversation could never convey.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 04:54 PM · On: Chapter 9

7 years!  OMG.  OMG.

And he was still acting like an ass?  Throwing punches at Justin!?!  How freaking deluded, self centered, homophobic, weak weak weak can a man be?

His son is out and PROUD.  Justin only deserves respect from a little weasel like Craig.  Him still calling Brian names?  WTF.

I tell you what though, I kinda like Daniel.  When he told Craig to find another "client" I ached for him.  Although, after 7 years he should have been long gone!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 04:03 PM · On: Chapter 8

YAY.  Them working together is probably my favorite AU plots.  Megan seems amazing.  The offer seems amazing.  I hope you will finally reveal what's on Brian's mind!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:45 PM · On: Chapter 7

HA!  Nice twist with Craig. 

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 03:15 PM · On: Chapter 5

I sat, amazed at my confessions, my anger at Lindsay.  She was supposed to be my friend, the mother of my child and… my Wendy.  But she refused to let Peter grow up.  Instead she robbed me of my Lost Boy then took my son and headed for Canada.  She had left me with nothing and I was fucking furious that I had allowed it.

Its about effing time Brian finally saw what Lindsay was doing.  I dont know if the writers of QAF meant for her to be a coniving bitch or shortsighted and concerned.  What I do know,  is that Brain allowed her too much influence.  Brian doesnt have a lot of friends, and the closest ones aren't very good ones. 

Cynthia and Ted have his back as much as Justin does.

"So, let's look at this from a different perspective, Brian. Have you ever wondered why you didn’t go with him?" he asked calmly.

Lines like this convince me of Ted's sincere concern for Brian;c and growing awareness of how to support Brian.   He's been there for Brian with his sound Business sense and accounting, then covering for him physically, and now he is stepping up "poking the tiger" and trying to help Brian emotionally.  I think Ted is quite brave.  And a true friend.

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:53 PM · On: Chapter 4

I sure as hell hope Megan is trustworthy, and that nothing happens to Justin at work, or while he travels to and from work.

This Brian is, as Daphne put it, to die for!  The intamacy and sensuality is amazingly written.

I actually thought I had read this story before, but there is no way I would have forgotten this.  Even this early in the story I feel your love of B/J and know you will take care of them. 

I think I am as protective them as Brian is for Justin.  LOL

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 02:09 PM · On: Chapter 2

I heard Cyntha laugh in the background and blushed.  There weren't many people Brian allowed to hear our private exchanges.  Cynthia had been around for everything.  Seen every thing, heard everything.  Brian trusted her. Sometimes I wonder if she isn't taking notes and plotting a torrid gay romance novel based on the roller coaster that is Brian and Justin.

Oh, how I wish I had the kind of view into the B/J love affair that Cynthia no doubt has!

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2010 01:56 PM · On: Chapter 1

AAAAAAAAAAAAHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!

As much as I sincerly believe Justin needed to grow up a bit more, take a true chance on his art, and know what it was like to be fully independant === just like any other young person leaving home for the first time, it hurts so much to actually see him go.

Brian's description of the state of his heart - in a ziplock with Justin in NY - feels so achingly painful.  Really well done.

Now boys, its just like any pair of sweethearts watching a loved one going to an  out of state college.  Time will pass, holidays will occur, reading breaks will come regularily, computer cams are immediate, and Thank God Brian has the cash to fly them to each other regularily!

But it still hurts.

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: April 07, 2010 07:39 AM · On: Chapter 31

I am in love with this story. I love b/j stories when they work it out, but i must say my favorite person on qaf was emmett, he's just like my best friend so out, proud, brave and a little tacky with his fashion sense.  So i loved to read a story that showed how important he is to the family.  Thanks for the ride i really appreciated it

Reviewer: Riggershh6 (Anonymous) · Date: April 04, 2010 11:52 AM · On: Chapter 31

Well i spent the last three days off and on(mostly on) reading through this wonderful story. Thank you so much for sharing your gift with us/me. It was so great to read. I come onto this site wayyyyy to often and am happy to say that this was a treat. I am glad that I found it and was able to read it all at once.

Wish that it had made it to the screen as another season, I know that I have always felt cheated that we were left the way that we were. Our boys deserved so much more!!!

I loved your characters. The love/hate with the munchers was wonderful. I have to tell you that I feared that you were going to have one of the girls abusing Gus, but what you did was so much more realistic. Children react horribly to losing those they love, even if it just a temporary thing, and you expressed this very well. Congrats for not making them villians, but just parents.

Ok the sex was hot!!! Thanks for that, and B/J oh to be a fly in that room/house.

Loved the descriptions of the windows in the studio an the kitchen plans that I know were in the works! Oh to live like the rich.

 Thank you again for sharing this wonderful story. I hope that you know that your talent is appreciated.

 

Reviewer: swish (Anonymous) · Date: April 03, 2010 06:01 AM · On: Chapter 31

perfect!! thank you very much.

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 09:32 PM · On: Chapter 31

Fantastic ending......  too bad the QAF writers didn't end the show as good ..... Thanks.... 

Reviewer: snow (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:54 AM · On: Chapter 31

this was perfect, loved it...

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 27

I am thrilled that Emmett finally realizied that he and Nathan can be more than friends... and that Psycho Adam is dead.......

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 02, 2010 07:19 AM · On: Chapter 24

OMG... that Adam Stevens is one sick  S.O.B.... I wish Brian gets to have five minutes alone with him..before they lock him up... 

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 11:28 PM · On: Chapter 16

Alright!!!!!  Melanie finally did the right thing...she realized what Lindsay was trying to do..and how much Brian has changed..... and gave him joint custody... Fantastic....  

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 09:44 PM · On: Chapter 15

I have always hated that phrase ... "It's Only Time".......  if you think about it... Time is the only thing that there NEVER... is enough of for any of us.... it's the "thing" that matters MOST....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 05:47 AM · On: Chapter 12

Lindsay is such a selfish  BITCH.... she wants to ruin Brian and Justin's relationship.. just so she can manipulate Brian into doing whatever she wants....

Reviewer: BluvsJ (Anonymous) · Date: April 01, 2010 01:04 AM · On: Chapter 9

WOW.... Craig has known he was gay for seven years!!!!!!!!  at least the poor asshole he was with had enough sense to finally leave the bastard... seven years ???  OMG....

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