Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 03, 2019 02:40 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

good one



Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Reviewer: Weave the Magic (Signed) · Date: December 01, 2012 02:57 AM · On: This Blond Asshole

This is good. I can really see the attachement of Justin to Brian, and vice versa. Poor Jaon.



Author's Response:

I know but what can you do.  Hope you like the rest of the stories that are going to come.  Later.

Reviewer: soul1essharpy (Signed) · Date: November 09, 2011 08:18 AM · On: This Blond Asshole

["This is so sad," Justin said. "Would it be wrong of me to laugh?"] <- Nope.

OMG. That was hilarious, it made me laugh! Sardonicism with just a smidge of bitchiness... I love your version of Justin!



Author's Response:

LOL I'm happy that you enjoyed him.  Sometimes I do like to change things up and see what happens.  So far me and the muse have done good things.  Lol.  Later, T

Reviewer: M_elle_22 (Signed) · Date: August 04, 2010 09:38 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

LOL.  Honestly, I wasn't too sure about this story when I read the warning.  To me Justin will always be the sweet, unaturally sane one.  So the thought of an Asshole Justin was just too bizzaro.  But he is the same kind of asshole as Brian has always been - if he hurts you it was only because he was trying to protect you from something worse.  He's not really an asshole, just fcuked up, lol.

I liked the surprise ending (the reason Justin left) and was thinking that the story could really have been an AU with canon up to season three - maybe just before or during the Stockwell thing.  They were at a really nice place relationship-wise then, but still tricking - a perfect set up to your plot twist.

I like AU that comes off of canon, it gives it a meatier backstory if the author isn't going to build one up so I can really feel how the gang would interact and react within the new plot.

I hope Im not coming off as too critical - this is just my opinion and only worth as much as you're willing to give me for it, lol.  Thanks for writing the story and I certainly enjoyed it enough to read the other stories you have written on Midnight Whispers.

Michelle



Author's Response: oh no, i love to hear what you guys think. never stop, always be honest. this is how i learn and get better. thanks.

Reviewer: Kat (Signed) · Date: July 24, 2009 01:10 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

I was going to read the current story you have up, but when I saw that it was a continuation, I decided to start from the beginning. I'm glad I did!! This Justin is something else, came back to get his man and made no apologies about it.

 



Author's Response:

I am happy that you liked that.  There will be more for it soon.  I am trying to write something from everyone's POV kind of thing.  Hopefully it will come out how I have it in my head.  Lol.  I hope you enjoy all the others to come.  Take care, Tay

Reviewer: sjmpets3 (Signed) · Date: June 03, 2009 08:53 AM · On: This Blond Asshole

where the hell was i when you posted this? i adored it.

do i feel bad for jason? not at all. if he had seen pictures of justin and then justin himself he should have gotten the idea about him and brian.

and brian that sneaky devil, he called molly so that what did happen would happen.



Author's Response:

I don't know.  He, he, he.  But at least you found it.  Yes, in a way you can truly blame all of this in Brian...but in a good way.  He, he, he, he.  I hope that you like the story that follows it....THIS IS GOING TO END IN TEARS.  There will be many others.  Thanks for reviewing.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Mediana (Anonymous) · Date: May 10, 2009 10:00 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

So different and so very good. Thank you

Author's Response: I'm happy that you liked it.  It's a standalone but there will be more stanalones that follow this particular story.  I hope that you're around to read them.  Later, Tay

Reviewer: Liberty (Signed) · Date: October 03, 2008 12:03 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

That was so amazing, I loved how Justin was all take no prisoners for his man completely wonderful.

Author's Response: He, he.  I really liked writing Justin like this.  It's great.  Thanks for reviewing.  Later, Tay

Reviewer: Rebecca (Anonymous) · Date: September 28, 2008 04:42 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

I love all your stories and this is definately one of my favourites, please update soon and have a flashback to when they are 12 and Justin tells Brian hes going to be his boyfriend :) thats so cute

Author's Response: Wow, that is actually a good idea.  I could work with that.  Let me see what I can do okay?  I'll try to post soon.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Tessa (Anonymous) · Date: September 23, 2008 09:14 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

Michael is so good in this and Justin being posessive of Brian and marking his territory was so great, I so hope you will be updating this soon

Author's Response: You're just loving it, huh?  I will try.  It's so hard writing so much and I like these chapters to be long and juicy.  He, he.  Take care, Tay

Reviewer: Marissa (Anonymous) · Date: July 25, 2008 07:06 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

I loved this so much, Justin was amazing in this and Mikey was so funny, hope you will update soon

Author's Response: Thank you so much.  I'll try to give you guys more.  It will be another standalone following this one.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: brianna1 (Anonymous) · Date: May 21, 2008 07:33 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

hej i am waiting for secont part , this tsory is sooo great

Author's Response: I'm working on it.  I'll try harder so I can post it soon.  Thanks, Tay

Reviewer: QaITFan (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2008 10:39 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

Really loved it! And also laughed -some scenes of Michael were simply amazingly hilarious!  :x T



Author's Response: He, he.  Michael is the best character in this thing so far.  I mean in the funny department.  Lol.  I think you guys are going to like him a lot, more than usual.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: dphysh (Signed) · Date: March 30, 2008 11:16 AM · On: This Blond Asshole

Loved this - the twist was great - I kept thinking at the beginning that maybe it was a Justin substitute in his bed but then it was Jason that turned out to be the J-sub! Just fantastic! Can't wait to see where you will take it from here - the possibilities are mind-boggling! :)

Author's Response: He, he.  At first this was going to go in a different direction.  Brian being left alone because he cheated on Jason with someone and then as time progressed he met Justin and everyone would tell Justin that he was just a substitute.  But then this idea came and I coudln't let it pass.  So here it is.  Hope you like what's to come.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Jackie (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2008 07:12 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

All kinds of sadness and hotness and wonderfulness. I feel bad for Jason, he was dragged into something way over his head. And the fact that Brian called Molly is the best ever. Great chapter.



Author's Response: Well see if you feel bad for Jason as this progresses.  I'm thinking not and you'll see soon why.  I hope you like it.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Vision (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2008 05:02 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

This was great and yes continuation of this story is a must. I feel for Jason but it's always going to be B&J. Michael being supportive was also a great thing for me but since they grew up together may have helped the situation. Mel's a bitch as usual but like before may be circumstances since they hadn't seen Justin in 3 years.

 Justin has a son and does that go for Brian also since there are 2 children. 

 

More please.

 

Great story



Author's Response: Hey, Jason is not as innocent as he looks.  Just you wait and see.  I'm happy that you're keeping an open mind about all of this.  Yes, that goes for Brian too.  It's Gus of course.  I'll try to update soon.  It's good to see you around.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Tasha (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2008 02:54 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

Great chapter, how hot is Justin in this walking round naked smoking a joint being all cocky, I am so liking this story. When Brian went to the theatre and Justin was in the projector room was kinda sweet, they know each other so well. I even like Michael in this cos hes standing up for Brian aswell as Justin and Michael raceing over to Brians in his pjs was so awesome. Justin being sweet to Brian and cocky to everyone else was great, oh and I hope Justin or Brian gets knocked up, they are the hottest couple ever so its only fair they have the worlds hottest kiddies hehe



Author's Response: He, he.  Isn't my muse great?  Okay, so she can be pretty sneaky at times.  Lol.  I'm so glad that you're having fun reading this.  Yes, Michael is a nice guy in this.  Go figure.  Sometimes I get tired of writng the whinny Michael.  Not that I don't enjoy it.  He, he.  Oh maybe there is a baby in the way...prepare yourself for what's to come.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Anonymous (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2008 12:58 PM · On: This Blond Asshole

I love it!

Author's Response: You don't need to say more.  You got me smiling like a fool.  Thanks a lot honey.  Later, Tay

Reviewer: Jacinta (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2008 09:07 AM · On: This Blond Asshole

poor Justin losing the baby and seeing that Brian had taken someone to their home and then he had to go through it all alone, and then getting told he cant have more kids, I hope they were wrong or that Brian gets pregnant eventually. I am glad everyone knows why Justin left, he seems so fragile even though he puts on a tough front. Mikey seeing himself running past them all down the stairs and towards his home haha and so Justin has a baby Ashton, I wonder who Ashtons mother is, I am thinking Linds and not Mel as Mel doesnt seem to like him much, looking forward to reading more

Author's Response: No they weren't wrong.  But yeah, he can still get the brunet preggers.  That would be fun.  He, he, he.  Mmm, ideas swimming in my head and my muse is getting kind of happy here.  He, he.  Mmm, the answer to that question might surprise you.  Maybe Mel is just putting a tough front as well.  She cares about Justin...in her own twisted way?  Lol.  I'll try to update soon.  Oh and the other kid is Gus of course.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Meg (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2008 08:41 AM · On: This Blond Asshole

when they were 12 justin told brian he would be his boyfriend, thats so cute, how old are they now? I like that justin showed up and married brian so nobody else could, I am loving the fact that justin got his man, and that brian called molly to say he was getting married, yeah he knew justin would come back and claim him, update soon

Author's Response: I know it is.  I never thought about the age thing.  Like I said this wasn't supposed to keep on going.  He, he.  Mmm, I think I'm going to make them around twenty seven or so.  We'll see.  I hope you like what's to come.  Hugs, Tay

Reviewer: Sara (Anonymous) · Date: March 29, 2008 07:31 AM · On: This Blond Asshole

Im doing a crazy happy dance right now, because you have a new story yay and its so freaking good, I love mikey in this he is so funny and very loyal which I like and I love Justin in this he is so confident and sarcastic to everyone else especially jason, and the way brian and justin are around each other is adorable, I cant wait for an update for this and can we have some flashbacks from when they were younger, like when they first met, brian and justins first kiss etc, love this story

Author's Response: I'll see what I can do about the flashbacks.  I'll try to work on that and see what happens.  I'm happy with this Michael as well.  He's really happy for Brian and Justin.  There will be more soon.  I hope it's as good and you like it as much.  Later, Tay

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