Midnight Whispers
QAF Brian and Justin Fanfiction
Reviews For Back for Good
Reviewer: cullengirl08 (Signed) · Date: March 27, 2022 05:29 PM · On: Epilogue

This was a great story from start to finish!!  I'm glad that Justin forgave Brian and that Brian learned to forgive himself over what he had done.   



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked the story :)

Thanks for giving it a chance and for letting me know that you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: April 15, 2021 08:00 AM · On: Epilogue

did read it again



Author's Response:

Awww, I hope you enjoyed it again :) 

Reviewer: coleamber (Signed) · Date: June 21, 2019 11:16 AM · On: Epilogue

Just love it.  Thank you



Author's Response:

I am glad that you liked the story :)

Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 09:02 PM · On: Epilogue

Aww it can’t end there, I want Brian to have another baby and for them to get married. I would love to find out what it is between Dap and Brian. This story was incredible xx



Author's Response:

I am sooooo glad that you enjoyed the story and it was very exciting to read each and every one of your comments and to see how you experienced the story chapter to chapter :D

As for the story ending here... psst... spoiler alert... I am currently writing a sequel to this story! But it's not nearly finished yet :(

In the meantime, I am not sure if you have seen the companion piece to this story which focused on Brian's years in Pittsburgh and gave us more background on his reasoning, his actions and what happened to him and the boys while Justin was in New York. Maybe that will help fill the time until the sequel is finished ;)

In any case, thank you so much for giving this story a try! I really appreciate it :D 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 08:28 PM · On: Chapter 33

Lol that was so cute and funny with Luke and them. I am loving this. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 07:25 PM · On: Chapter 32

Yeppie that was awesomeness. Those two are perfect for each other I’m sooooooo happy. Dancing 🕺 xx

Reviewer: rulisteningbj (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 03:26 PM · On: Chapter 1

Read this beautiful story yesterday and ended it early this morning around 2:00 because I couldn't stop.  Was so surprised that Brian was able to keep this secret for 5 years.  Poor Justin.  What a better person to be able to forgive him.  Now I am off to read the next.  Thanks for sharing your wonderful talent.

Dee Dee



Author's Response:

I am so glad that you gave this story a try and enjoyed it. 2am - wow! Yeah, I've had stories like that as well where I just couldn't stop and needed to know how they ended...

Yes, poor Justin indeed. Poor guy would have deserved a lot better from Brian, his friends and his family. Thankfully he was a much better person than I ever could be and was ready to forgive and move on for the sake of his son and his love for Brian. 

Thanks so much for reading and your comment!

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 02:26 PM · On: Chapter 31

So romantic and beautiful. Thank you for writing this chapter 💕💕💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 01:48 PM · On: Chapter 30

Wow that was so intense and powerful talking all about that was Brian’s moving. I’m so glad that things got worked out like that. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 01:24 PM · On: Chapter 29

This chapter moved me so much. Such a deep conversation and one that I pray cleared away all the air around them.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 12:32 PM · On: Chapter 28

That was really heartfelt, I love the tender way Justin treated Brian. That was really needed and it’s a step forward I think. Beautiful work x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 11:11 AM · On: Chapter 27

Thank goodness for Emmett, hopefully that talk with Brian kicked him up the ass. we don’t need the old Brian back. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 10:43 AM · On: Chapter 26

That was a wonderful Christmas for them and I love the Happy Luke waking his dad up so early lol. I feel for Brian, I hope he and Justin talk they really need to. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 10:33 AM · On: Chapter 25

Poor Debbie, I could feel her pain, I can’t imagine any son doing that it must be earth shattering. I hope they pull out the baby books of photos of Luke and Gus that Justin missed out on. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 08, 2019 08:29 AM · On: Chapter 24

I’m so happy that went well for the boys. It was such a happy event and I had happy tears for them. So much love in that family 💕

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2019 07:57 PM · On: Chapter 23

That was a fantastic way of dealing with that situation. You should be very proud of yourself. You have moved me with every word you have written. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2019 07:36 PM · On: Chapter 22

You have me crying again. Justin and Brians conversation was so heartfelt and strong. Beautiful work 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2019 07:02 PM · On: Chapter 21

Happy tears lots of them. The conversation between Brian and his sons was so beautiful and heartwarming. I got even more emotional with Gus talking with Justin that touched my heart so much. All we need now is for Brian and Justin to reconnect. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2019 06:43 PM · On: Chapter 20

I feel nervous for them, gosh I hope it all works out. I know they will be amazing dads to those boys. I hope this brings them to see they love each other still. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2019 08:26 AM · On: Chapter 19

Wow wow wow what will this mean for their relationship, will it bond them more and will it make them fall in love again. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2019 07:28 AM · On: Chapter 18

That was brilliant, I could feel Brian’s happiness at getting greeted by his son’s like that it was so beautiful of Justin to do. I loved the kids chattering away in the car and their excitement of having their dad back home. Then that amazing conversation between Brian and Justin I hope this breaks more of the barriers and gets them back together.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 07, 2019 07:17 AM · On: Chapter 17

I hope that Justin finds a house that’s perfect for him and for when the boys stay over with him. Maybe Brian as well huh 😜. I’m glad Justin had that talk with Debbie all that tension is not good for anyone is it. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 07:49 PM · On: Chapter 16

They really needed that talk and it was so nice to see that mother son bond is strong and it needs to heal and that talk is definitely the start. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 15

Justin and the kids are so cute together and he is so good with them. I am looking forward to seeing them grow even closer and hopefully with Brian as well. I can’t blame how Justin is with his mum, I don’t think I could ever forgive something like that. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 04:19 PM · On: Chapter 14

That conversation was very grownup for Brian and very brave. I’m glad he took Justin’s feelings into consideration. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 01:55 PM · On: Chapter 13

I wanted to wrap them both in a huge hug. It’s going to very hard and a long road I’m sure for them to get back to what they had if ever. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 01:36 PM · On: Chapter 12

I held my breath reading every word of this chapter, I am crossing everything that they can fix this and get back together. Lindsey and Michael are so evil for doing that to Brian. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 01:07 PM · On: Chapter 11

Em really is the best isn’t he and really great friend to Justin. He needed that chat and Em is right so I hope that Justin listens to him. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 11:25 AM · On: Chapter 10

Happy tears happy tears now. This was so heartwarming to read. Luke is such a wonderful child and that picture fits what you painted beautifully with your words for us.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 11:01 AM · On: Chapter 9

Wow I can feel the thick tension coming off them, I didn’t k ow where to look it was so strong. Powerful and amazing work on this story. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 10:37 AM · On: Chapter 8

That blow up was coming and hopefully it helped clear so of the air between them. I’m looking forward to seeing how all this turns out. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 10:13 AM · On: Chapter 7

I love that Justin’s friends are there to support him. It’s going to very hard to forgive Brian if he can ever find it within him to do so. You are doing a a fantastic job with this x

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 10:03 AM · On: Chapter 6

My heart is shattered for ZJustin, I can feel the pain so very strong 💔

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 5

Wow how could Jennifer have thought that Justin would listen to her. She did the worst thing a mother could do she betrayed him. I would have exploded just like he did. You seriously wrote this perfectly . 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 4

Brian really needed to hear all that from Jennifer and he does need to step up for not telling Justin about his son. I don’t if I could ever forgive either of them that kind of betrayal is hard. I do however hope Justin can forgive so they can become a family. This story is so powerful. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 06, 2019 07:09 AM · On: Chapter 3

Oh my, I think I would have reacted just like Justin. That is so hard and I could feel everything jump off the page. Brilliant work.

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2019 08:14 PM · On: Chapter 2

Wow Ted was brave wasn’t he. I wonder what Brian is hiding and I just hope and pray he and Justin get back together. 

Reviewer: vic32 (Signed) · Date: June 05, 2019 11:47 AM · On: Chapter 1

My heart is going ninety miles an hour reading this. I’m so sad they didn’t stay in contact I can feel Justin’s upset and confusion. I hope they will be ok and get back in contact and get back together.

 

excellent work x

Reviewer: Bo61 (Signed) · Date: October 07, 2018 02:27 PM · On: Epilogue

Thanks for this wonderful story, I enjoyed every word, sometimes with a smile and a tear.



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed the story :) Thanks for joining me on this wild ride!

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2018 11:05 PM · On: Epilogue

Amazing!! Loved the arc. Hope there is more where that came from!!! 



Author's Response:

Thank you, I am glad you enjoyed the story :)

I am working on something new, but it might take me some time before it's finished. It has turned into something bigger than I have originally expected ;)

Reviewer: jg1225 (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2018 12:52 PM · On: Epilogue

Great story, really well done!!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much :) I am glad you enjoyed it!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2018 08:17 AM · On: Epilogue

I can't tell you how sad I'm that this journey now came to an end but yes it's was a wonderful journey and I love happy endings. I hope you will write another story soon. I like your writing. Thank you so much!!

Author's Response:

It has been quite a journey and thank you for joining me on it :) 

I am working on another story at the moment, but it might take me a bit before that one is finished. It has turned into something way bigger than I have originally expected ;)

Thanks for all your kind comments :D 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2018 05:36 AM · On: Epilogue

Thank you for this wonderful story. 



Author's Response:

Thank you for joining me on this journey :) I am glad you enjoyed the story!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 04, 2018 01:48 AM · On: Epilogue

You have taken us on an amazing journey.  From so much anger & unhappiness at the beginning to this happy ending.  This was a truly great story, hope to ready more from you soon.  Bill



Author's Response:

Thanks for joining me on this journey :) 

I am glad that you enjoyed it and yes, I am working on a new story at the moment, but it might take me some time before that one's finished. It has gotten way bigger than I have originally expected ;)

Thank you for all your kind comments :D

Reviewer: Lorma (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2018 08:48 PM · On: Chapter 33

Oh I loved this so much!  Waiting for the epilogue!  It certainly was an amazing ride!  At the beginning I never thought those two could work out such a terrible deception but you took us through a believable journey of forgiveness and true love.



Author's Response:

Awwww, thank you :) I am glad you enjoyed the ride!

The epilogue will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2018 07:13 AM · On: Chapter 33

What a wonderful story and ending. Looking forward to the epilogue I will really miss the story. Thank you.

Author's Response:

Awwww, thank you :) I am glad you enjoyed the ride!

The epilogue will be up tomorrow :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2018 12:58 AM · On: Chapter 33

I am very glad that things did work out, but wonder about the smell in the room. 



Author's Response:

I am sure they opened the window for a bit while taking their showers ;) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: October 01, 2018 12:52 AM · On: Chapter 33

Great ending to a great story.  Thanks for sharing it!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked the story :) I loved sharing it and am happy that people seem to have enjoyed it!

The epilogue will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2018 11:25 PM · On: Chapter 33

How awesome is this story and such a believable ending I look forward to the epilogue although I will miss the story

Author's Response:

Awwww, thank you! I am glad you liked the story :)

The epilogue will be up tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: Giotto (Signed) · Date: September 30, 2018 10:25 PM · On: Chapter 33

ohhh.. I never want this story to end.. it is soo heartwarming 😍



Author's Response:

Unfortunately, all good things must end. The same for our little story here :/

But no worries - one more epilogue to come tomorrow :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 28, 2018 02:23 AM · On: Chapter 32

Well it seems like they are back together now!  I wonder how Gus & Luke will react?  Another great chapter.  Thanks!!!!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

It would seem like that, yes :D 

We'll see about the kids' reaction soon.

Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2018 07:40 AM · On: Chapter 32

What a sweet and moving chapter. And hot!!! Now Brian needs to talk to Justin about his life with Luke and Gus. It's nice that Brian talked about his pregnancy, I think Justin needs that. Thank you for the update of this wonderful story.

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it :)

Yes, Justin wants and needs to hear these stories. Brian might not see it right now, but it's important to Justin that Brian shares these stories. 

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 27, 2018 12:26 AM · On: Chapter 32

Now the only thing to do is to get Brian pregnant again so Justin can go through all of it with him.



Author's Response:

I know it might disappoint some people, but I honestly think that would be the worst thing that could happen to them right now :/

Brian obviously still has a lot to work through and they still have a lot to figure out together for their relationship. Maybe some time down the line. Who knows? ;)

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2018 07:11 AM · On: Chapter 31

Finally !! It was a beautiful evening and the long awaited kiss. Thank you for this chapter it will be hard to wait Wednesday for the next.

Author's Response:

Yes, finally! It took them long enough ;)

More will be up soon and hopefully the wait will be worth it :D 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2018 03:14 AM · On: Chapter 31

I'm not sure what Justin expected, but he got something he'd always wished for.



Author's Response:

Yes, a romantic Valentine's Date with the man he loves - not sure Justin ever expected that to really happen ;)

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: Giotto (Signed) · Date: September 24, 2018 12:09 AM · On: Chapter 31

Finally 😁😂 you made me wait for that kiss a loong time. can't wait for the next chapter



Author's Response:

Yes, we had to wait a long, long time. I am sorry for that ;)

More will be up soon and hopefully you'll be happy about what will happen next as well ;)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 23, 2018 11:56 PM · On: Chapter 31

A real feel good chapter.  Quite an out of character "Romantic Brian".  Always happy to see a new chapter and this was a great one.  Bill



Author's Response:

I'd like to think that this is the Brian he could have been if given the chance. Lets not forget that this Brian went to therapy and found out some insights about himself and has given birth to a baby. That changes you and apparently made him more romantic ;)

I am glad you enjoyed their date :)

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: augusta70 (Signed) · Date: September 22, 2018 01:52 AM · On: Chapter 30

I just started this story and its companion piece yesterday, and I love both of them so much! You've really captured the person that I always thought Brian could be. And I love the relationship between Debbie and Brian. Their scenes were always my favorite on the show. You've really captured the voices of the characters. The dialogue rings true, and the events are exciting, moving, and compelling. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for this great story!



Author's Response:

Awwww, thank you for your nice comment :)

I am glad you're enjoying this little craziness my brain has come up with!

More will be up on both stories soon :) 

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2018 10:40 AM · On: Chapter 30

Woohoo they are making progress and I love it

Author's Response:

Yes, they are finally getting there :)

More will be up soon and then we'll see how their Valentine's Date will go :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2018 07:03 AM · On: Chapter 30

Therapy is good for them and they learn to be really honest and talk to each other. It is the lack of communication that has always separated them. They will do Valentine's Day yesss !! I like this chapter, I can not wait for Sunday.

Author's Response:

Yes, therapy will help them both and it will help them to get their relationship right this time :)

Who would have ever thought that Brian Kinney would end up on a Valentine's Date? Hmmmm, not me... and not him most likely :P

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2018 02:46 AM · On: Chapter 30

Things are working out good.  I am so happy.



Author's Response:

They're getting there - finally :)

More will be up soon and then we'll see how their Valentine's Date will go :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 20, 2018 02:32 AM · On: Chapter 30

Best chapter so far.  Their problems were always when they weren't honest with each other.  It's great that Brian volunteered for a Valentine Date without realizing it.  Love this story!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked the chapter :)

I agree about communication and honesty always having been their major issues. At least they're trying to get it right now.

And who would have thought that Brian Kinney would end up on a Valentine's Date? ;)

Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2018 01:25 PM · On: Chapter 29

If anything Justin should be the one having a breakdown.  After all he missed out on years of Christmases.



Author's Response:

We've always known that Justin is the more mature one of the two and way better at dealing with his emotions ;)

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2018 07:37 AM · On: Chapter 29

I really liked this chapter. Brian was able to release his feelings and they are ready to continue for their family. Thank you for the update

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked this chapter - it's one of my favourites as well :)

This conversation was long overdue and much needed.

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: Giotto (Signed) · Date: September 17, 2018 12:24 AM · On: Chapter 29

thanks for an other great chapter. finally they get closer again 😊



Author's Response:

Yes, finally. I think we've all waited long enough ;)

More will be up soon - thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 16, 2018 10:23 PM · On: Chapter 29

Good talk between Justin & Brian.  Another great chapter!!!!!!   Bill



Author's Response:

Awwww, thanks so much!

This conversation was long overdue :)

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 14, 2018 09:26 PM · On: Chapter 28

Brian deserved being sick after the stunt he pulled.



Author's Response:

That's the least he deserved - I agree!

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2018 06:36 AM · On: Chapter 28

I can't wait to read the next chapter to know about what they are going to taik. Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

This was the calm before the storm - the talk will happen and well... we'll see what will happen then ;)

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 13, 2018 02:18 AM · On: Chapter 28

A caring Justin and an accepting Brian, so what is on the horizon?  I can't wait to read the next chapter.  Bill



Author's Response:

This was  the calm before the storm ;) As Brian said: They will have to talk about this and that talk will happen!

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: Lisajean (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2018 07:00 PM · On: Chapter 9

I am the odd man or shall I say woman out on this because I do not hate Brian or feel anger towards him. I believe in his mind he was really thinking what he was doing was right for Justin, but did not realize all the ramifications in his ill fated decision.

 

That is not to say I believe what he did was right. My heart really goes out to Justin. I can only imagine what he is going through but have respect for him for setting aside his justified anger for what is best for the child.

 

My heart also goes out for Brian because it is going to kill him the more he realizes  keeping Justin away from his son hurt his child as well as Justin.

 

Great story you have my heart racing lol   I just started reading this today and  look forward to reading more :)

 

Lisa

 



Author's Response:

I have to be honest: I have never hated Brian either... To me his behaviour has always made sense. I don't condone what he did, but I could always understand why he did what he did :/ 

Yes, both Justin and Brian are suffering from the decision that Brian made five years ago :(

I am glad you enjoy the story so far and I hope you'll enjoy the rest as well :)

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2018 01:38 PM · On: Chapter 27

Emmett & Debbie did their best to get Brian to take his head out of his ass.  He still hasn't learned the lesson to talk to Justin and not just act on what he thinks is best for Justin.  Great chapter!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

Yes, Emmett and Debbie tried their best and we can only hope that Brian will listen to what they told him!

Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon and then we'll see how Brian will handle the advice he has received :) 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2018 08:00 AM · On: Chapter 27

What a beautiful chapter !!! I hope that Emmett's words will make him realize what Brian might lose now that Justin has forgiven him and that he needs to make a happy family.

Author's Response:

We can only hope that Emmett got through Brian's drunken state and that Brian heard him ...

Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2018 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 27

Emmett is a wonderful friend. Love this chapter.



Author's Response:

He is indeed - I can't help but love him :)

Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 10, 2018 04:17 AM · On: Chapter 27

Love Emmett.



Author's Response:

Yes, Emmett is great :)
I love him, too :)

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2018 08:32 AM · On: Chapter 26

Beautiful chapter and it was a wonderful Christmas. Brian really realizes what he did and he needs to talk to Justin.

Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed the chapter :)
And yes, they need to talk. We can only hope that it will help them.

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: Giotto (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2018 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 26

Thanks for this wonderful next chapter 😍 

can't wait to read about Justins and Brians talk, and hope it brings the two a bit closer again. at least I hope that's what we get to read 😉



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

We can only hope that talking will help them. 

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2018 03:03 AM · On: Chapter 26

Christmas was wonderful, but I can't help but feel bad for all the Christmas' that Justin has missed due to Brian's misguided opinions and I think Brian realises that.



Author's Response:

Yes, it's hard not to think about all those missed Christmasses :/

We'll see about Brian's feelings in the upcoming chapters.

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 06, 2018 12:51 AM · On: Chapter 26

Brian not communicating always leads to trouble.  Happy the boys enjoyed their Christmas so much.  Always great to see a new chapter.  Bill



Author's Response:

Yes, him not talking is the cause of many problems :/ 

I am glad you enjoyed the chapter. More will be up soon!

Reviewer: ForeverLove50 (Signed) · Date: September 05, 2018 01:01 PM · On: Chapter 25

Love this story!!!

I know you said we're coming to an end but maybe a Part 2??????!!!!!!! Where Brian decides to make it up to Justin and have another baby for him to go through all his missed with pregnancy and all and then crazy Michael getting out Stalking them etc etc.... lol. I love your writing style! Yessss! Pleaseeeee,

Author's Response:

Thanks for your comment - I really appreciate it :) And I am glad you like the story.

As of now there are no plans for a part 2 - I am writing on a completely new story, not related to the Back for Good universe ;)

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: Giotto (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 03:22 PM · On: Chapter 25

thanks for giving us readers some insight in the past. great chapter 😊 I don't want that story to end



Author's Response:

Yes, Justin (and us as well) needed some more backstory. That was long overdue :)

It is coming to an end... we're getting closer :/ 

But no worries, still some way to go! More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 11:27 AM · On: Chapter 25

Wow Debbie has had a lot of pain with Michael but she realised that Michael was wrong and has put her real family first. She will never stop loving Michael but she knows he isn’t good for her

Author's Response:

Yes, that was a painful realisation for Debbie, but thankfully she had Carl by her side to help her through it all...

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 07:23 AM · On: Chapter 25

It's good that Debbie tells what happened Justin needs to know and it will surely help him to try to forgive.Michael is really silly. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes, Justin needed to know more backstory. That was long overdue...

I am glad you liked the chapter. More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: September 03, 2018 01:49 AM · On: Chapter 25

It's good that Justin now knows the truth.



Author's Response:

Yes, he needed to hear more backstory... That was long overdue.

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: September 02, 2018 10:37 PM · On: Chapter 25

Another really great chapter.  You made me feel sorry for Debbie.  Justin sure is good at forgiving, not sure I could be as forgiving as him especially his mother.  Still loving your story!!!!!  Bill



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked the chapter :)

Yeah, he is very forgiving. Lets just hope he won't be too forgiving ;)

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 08:35 AM · On: Chapter 24

Yay the boys had a problem talked it out decided together on a plan and trusted each other they were doing the right thing. Good job boys another small step towards becoming a family d84;a039;

Author's Response:

Another step in the right direction - they are slowly getting there. Hopefully...

Mroe will be up soon :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 07:31 AM · On: Chapter 24

It was a good Thanksgiving and the whole family appreciated the announcement of the 2 fathers.Maybe they can fix things with Melanie for Gus. Thank you for the update.

Author's Response:

They all deserve some happiness after all the pain they've been through :)

We'll have to wait and see about Melanie.

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 02:58 AM · On: Chapter 24

Another really great chapter.  Glad that everyone was happy with the announcement!!



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed the chapter :)

They all deserve some happiness after the pain of recent months...

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 30, 2018 01:43 AM · On: Chapter 24

It's a shame about JR.  Will they be able to get her back to see Deb and the family.  Love how Deb took Justin being legally Gus' Papa.



Author's Response:

We'll have to wait and see about JR, but yeah, what Mel did is despicable :/

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2018 07:44 AM · On: Chapter 23

OMG no one thought about how Luke could feel. It is normal for him to wonder about this change. Justin has been successful in making him understand that he loves them both and that he is their dad..Another great chapter. Thank you

Author's Response:

Poor Luke - everything is still so new for him as well. He only just got his Papa and now he's supposed to share him already? Who can blame the little guy for feeling jealous? Not me!

More will be up soon :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 27, 2018 12:37 AM · On: Chapter 23

Oh dear, who would have thought that not telling Luke what was going on would cause such problems. 



Author's Response:

Obviously not Justin and Brian ;) 
But they managed to deal with the situation and everyone is happy now :)
More will be up soon!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2018 09:28 PM · On: Chapter 23

Aw sweet chapter I did wonder if jealousy would happen between the boys but I assumed it would be the bigger boys lol

Author's Response:

Well, we don't know what will happen with the bigger boys ;) 

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 26, 2018 08:15 PM · On: Chapter 23

Really cute chapter.  It's true that you can never be sure how kids look at things and the conclusions they come up with.  Natural that Luke might worry abut sharing his Papa.  



Author's Response:

Yeah, everything is still so new for Luke as well and after not having had his Papa around for years, he just doesn't want to share him. Who can blame him? ;) 

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: sandid (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 11:14 PM · On: Chapter 22

I've been reading this since the beginning.  I miss a few here and there and have to go back.  I prefer reading on A03.  I like the commenting better there.

 

This is good.  At first I thought I would'nt like it.  I didn't understand the premise or how Brian could do that.  I still don't really get that, but I like everything that you've had happen since.  I'm a true sap for them as a couple, so I'm ever hopeful they will end up a loving family in all respects.

Thanks for writing.



Author's Response:

I am glad you're enjoying the story :) I loved writing it and love sharing it with people and hearing their opinion about it.

We should never give up hope - after all this drama they all deserve a happy ending, that's for sure!

Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 07:49 AM · On: Chapter 22

It's good that they do legal things for Gus and when they go talk to him about the adoption he can only be very happy I think to be part of a real loving family. Another great chapter; thank you.

Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it :) And yes, it's good that they both agree and both want to make Justin's role in Gus' life permanent and protected!

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: Giotto (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 04:31 AM · On: Chapter 22

Thanks for an other great chapter 😍



Author's Response:

I am glad you enjoyed it :) More will be up soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 02:33 AM · On: Chapter 22

Making everything legal sounds good to me.  It's a start.



Author's Response:

It is another step in the right direction :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 02:25 AM · On: Chapter 21

It's a given that Justin wants nothing more than to be considered Gus' papa.



Author's Response:

He loves Gus and always has :) 

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 02:03 AM · On: Chapter 20

Ted is a good friend to Brian and Justin too.  Daphne and Emmett just don't want Justin hurt more than he has been.



Author's Response:

Ted is a good friend indeed - and he can see things with a clarity that Brian might be missing at the moment.


As for Daphne and Emmett, they just want their friend safe and happy. They only mean well!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 23, 2018 01:53 AM · On: Chapter 19

It's true that Brian doesn't make the best decisions.  Look who he had for his best friend for such a long time.



Author's Response:

Haha, I couldn't agree more!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 22, 2018 11:19 PM · On: Chapter 22

It's great that B&J are gettng along and in agreement about Gus.  I still think there might be storms ahead.  This is such a great story I enjoy each new chapter!!



Author's Response:

Yes, there will be storms ahead - what would a good story be without some drama ;)

I am glad you're enjoying the story :) More will be up soon!

Reviewer: DarkandLovely (Signed) · Date: August 21, 2018 02:00 AM · On: Chapter 21

Awe love that! I'm glad Gus and Justin have finally gotten past the last five years and are moving on. Now if only Brian and Justin could do the same. Glad they're doing the family thing and it's working!! Great job; can't wait for more!



Author's Response:

Yes, Gus and Justin deserve their happy ending :)

As do Brian and Justin - but we'll have some way to go for them to get there...

Thanks for your comment :) 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2018 05:23 PM · On: Chapter 21

I read this with tears in my eyes. Beautiful chapter.



Author's Response:

Awwwww, I am glad you liked it :)

Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 20, 2018 08:14 AM · On: Chapter 21

It was a very moving chapter. We realize that Gus was hurt by his mother's behavior. Justin will be a super father for the 2 boys. Great chapter

Author's Response:

Yes, he was hurt by Lindsay's behaviour and it's a good thing he can finally move on with Justin by his side as his second father :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 16, 2018 07:07 AM · On: Chapter 20

Ted is a really good friend for Brian with good advice too. We'll see how Brian and Justin can do by leaving in Britin.

Author's Response:

Ted is a good friend indeed - just what Brian needs :) 

Thanks for your comment!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 15, 2018 09:27 PM · On: Chapter 20

Ted has proven to be a true friend who can help Brian see the situation clearly. He actually gave great advice and strategies to help him navigate the difficult path with Justin. He also helped Brian see how both Brian and Justin are hurting and time is needed

Author's Response:

To me Ted has been a way better friend to Brian than Michael ever could have hoped to be. Especially in the last two seasons of the show I felt like Ted and Brian made for much better friends than Michael and Brian...

 

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2018 07:59 AM · On: Chapter 19

t's a big decision to take and again Brian does not take into account Justin's feelings. He should have spoken to him before but I like that Justin agrees it's a good idea. So he made a studio for when Justin would come back, he should not think it would happen like that. I hope Justin will be able to see Brian's love through this and build a future.

Author's Response:

Yes, Brian should have presented his idea to Justin without the boys being present... But I don't think he really thought it through :( 

We'll see how living together will work out for them. More will be up soon!

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2018 04:34 AM · On: Chapter 19

Great idea for moving in. But suggest it in front of the kids, wasn’t the best action. Though it does makes it interesting. Wonderful chapter!!



Author's Response:

Nope, definitely not the best way to present his idea to Justin...

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 13, 2018 02:02 AM · On: Chapter 19

Interesting development.  I was thinking Brian would suggest this but not in front of G&L.  Justin is being very flexible and putting the needs of the boys in front of what may be best for him personally.  Always happy to get the update email!!    Bill



Author's Response:

Yeah, Brian probably didn't really think it through how he should have presented his idea to Justin... wouldn't be the first time Mr Kinney didn't think ;)

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: Giotto (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2018 10:01 PM · On: Chapter 19

I'm happy tha Justin agreed to move in 😁 thanks for the great new chapter 



Author's Response:

I am glad you liked it :)
More will be up soon!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 12, 2018 09:36 PM · On: Chapter 19

Wow how could Brian do that it is such a big gamble that could have hurt the boys. Again Brian is making decisions without thinking about Justin fully. I get he thought he was helping but he did need to talk it through with Justin first. It will be interesting when one of them decides to go out for the night

Author's Response:

I don't think Brian has really thought it through - wouldn't be the first time ;)

I agree - Brian should have talked to Justin alone first. Apparently Mr Kinney isn't used to not being the only one in control anymore.

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: sandid (Signed) · Date: August 10, 2018 04:59 AM · On: Chapter 18

God, I'm really hoping for them to make it.  



Author's Response:

They started taking steps in the right direction - so we can only hope :)

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2018 11:04 PM · On: Chapter 18

Very well written chapter :)

Justin neeeds bigger house, obviously. 

Boys are so cute. :) thanks



Author's Response:

Awwwww, thank you :)

I love the boys as well - they are making it so easy to love them :D

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2018 05:04 PM · On: Chapter 18

Taking the kids to the airport was a good thing. Is Brian concerned about Justin getting a new house?



Author's Response:

Yes, that was a nice thing Justin did there :)

Maybe ;) We'll find out next chapter!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2018 07:38 AM · On: Chapter 18

It was a very interesting conversation. I love this new Brian and I understand that he may have regrets. Thank you for this chapter we see a small light on the horizon.

Author's Response:

Yes, a small light - hopefully enough to get them going in the right direction :)

Yes, Brian has changed and he does feel regret and it's important that Justin sees that and knows all the ways Brian has changed. 

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 09, 2018 12:14 AM · On: Chapter 18

So many fascinating conversations in this story.  It just keeps getting more interesting with each new chapter.  Bill



Author's Response:

Awww, thank you :) I am glad you're still sticking with this story!

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2018 07:18 AM · On: Chapter 17

Justin can forgive Debbie and move on. Debbie would have known better that Justin was not like her even if the parallel between her story with Danny and Brian and Justin seems similar.Let's see Brian's reaction to buying a new house where Justin will welcome the boys. Great chapter.

Author's Response:

Yes, it will be interesting to see how Brian will react. Will he be supportive? Will he be angry and put up a fight? Will he react with something completely unexpected? We'll find out soon :)

Thanks so much! More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 06, 2018 12:45 AM · On: Chapter 17

Interesting parrallel to Debbie & Danny.  She should have known that Justin would want a child, not like Danny.



Author's Response:

Yes, she should have known they were different, but to her it would have raised too many questions and doubts about her own decision to never tell Danny. Who knows? Maybe Danny would have stepped up if given the chance and then Michael's life might have been different...

It was easier for her not to think along those lines.

More will be up soon :)

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2018 09:17 PM · On: Chapter 17

I'm hoping that Brian and Justin together find a new house.  Forgiving Deb is going to take longer than forgiving Carl.  Deb should have known better.  Of course the should tell the kids the truth that Justin was aware he had a son.



Author's Response:

Hmmmm, we'll see what Brian will have to say once he finds out that Justin is looking for a bigger house. Could a new house for the both of them be on the horizon?!?

They should have all known better... but too late for that :( They made their decision years ago and now everyone has to live with it :(

Reviewer: Enohvee1875 (Signed) · Date: August 05, 2018 02:03 PM · On: Chapter 16

Justin and Jennifer are making some progress. Justin is taking the high road by being forgiving because he deserves the peace he will gain by letting go of the animosity and anger. I am pleased they were able to discuss what is best for the kids. However, call me petty because I'm still having a problem with Jen. She sorry, I get it but if I were in Justin's shoes I would still need more info and to know why. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Nah, I won't call you petty - you have every right to feel that way ;) 

And yes, this is a start and some progress! Justin deserves happiness and good things coming his way. It's about time.

Reviewer: Saskya (Signed) · Date: August 03, 2018 12:15 PM · On: Chapter 16

Justin deserves to be happy and boys too. 

Beautiful story :)



Author's Response:

Absolutely - they do deserve happiness! Hopefully they will find it :)

Thank you so much! More will be up later today!

Reviewer: bksbracelet (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2018 12:05 PM · On: Chapter 16

Hmm can it be that easy but I guess as Justin said it takes a lot of energy to be angry and it does not serve any good. Love trumps hate and everyone wins

Author's Response:

No, being angry is way harder in the long run than forgiveness and moving on. Forgiving might seem harder in the beginning, but in the end it does have its benefits - if things work out, of course ;) 

Unfortunately, life is never easy, but we can only hope for Justin that his forgiveness will pay off :) He deserves it! 

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: marie-france (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2018 07:41 AM · On: Chapter 16

It's good that Justin is trying to move forward for the happiness of the kids but I hope he will not be the only one. He did not do that unforgivable mistake it was Brian. Jennifer too. This is her son she should have told him a long time ago, he would have taken Brian by surprise as he did 5 years later.Pretty emotional chapter.

Author's Response:

Yeah, we can hope that his decision to forgive everyone will not backfire on him and that they can move forward as a family... 

As for Brian and Jennifer: No doubt. What they did was wrong and despicable :/ 

More will be up soon!

Reviewer: Giotto (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2018 05:05 AM · On: Chapter 16

thanks for the new chapter 😊 glad Justin is working out things with everybody.. so I hope he finds back to Brian too



Author's Response:

We'll have to wait and see about that ;) But at least he can finally move forward and try to be happy again :) He deserves it!

Thanks for your comment! More will be up soon!

Reviewer: PA Boi (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2018 03:35 AM · On: Chapter 16

Wow Justin is being very forgiving.  He is really trying to do what is best for Luke & Gus.



Author's Response:

Yes, he is. He is trying to do what he thinks will be best for everyone in the long run. 

Hopefully it will work out for him and the boys :) 

Reviewer: arakiss (Signed) · Date: August 02, 2018 01:57 AM · On: Chapter 16

"Luke had no idea about the pain the adults in his life were going through right now."

Just wonderful.
Put the victim and the abusers on the same level.

I think maybe there is something very wrong with me, because I can never understand how Justin's behavior is for the children's benefit, how it seems other readers react.

For me this is not the way to teach your children how to deal with live, how wrong choices have severe consequences, how to have self respect and to expect respect from others.

Sorry for being harsh, but I've seen the fruits of this kind of sheltering, 'loving' upbringing. Living your live for your children instead of living it with them...

well, I guess I'm too angry and shouldn't write a review at all at the moment :)
I tried to stay away with no avail, though.

Author's Response:

No, there is nothing wrong with you. People just disagree and have different opinions. It's the way life is and it's also what makes life so interesting. How boring would it be if we all agreed on the same things and didn't have any disagreements?

As for me, I am totally not a vindictive person and I don't believe in revenge. For me staying angry at someone is a lot harder than forgiving them. For me it always comes down to: Is my anger worth losing this person for good in my life? And I guess a lot of that went into Justin's character as well...

Maybe something is wrong with me ;) 

From personal experience, I can just say that for me it's way more work and way harder to stay angry at people than to forgive them. Yes, forgiving is hard in the beginning and takes work, but in the long run it has always been worth it... But as said before - that's just me and my personal view. Of course it's different for everyone.

As for the children: Justin is just trying to keep them away from pain. Just because they are not being told the truth now, doesn't mean they will never know what happened. We know that Brian told Gus and Luke that he had done something bad. We know that Gus has had questions about Brian's and Jennifer's behaviour. We know that both boys have noticed the tension between Justin and Brian and that Gus has realised how angry Justin has been at Brian and Jennifer... They know that the bad thing Brian did had consequences for him. They know that Justin was angry with Brian and Jennifer because they have done something wrong and bad. Just because they don't know the whole story yet at this point of the story doesn't mean they will never know... And for me Justin's forgiveness is teaching them a way more important lesson: Everyone deserves a second chance! We all mess up, we all make mistakes and we all deserve a second chance to prove ourselves.

Anyway, thank you so much for your comment and for taking the time to leave it - I do appreciate it :) 

Please feel free to leave reviews whenever you feel like it - no matter how angry you are or what you feel :D 

Reviewer: Purple (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2018 04:40 AM · On: Chapter 15

I don’t understand Jennifer. Who could she hurt Justin so much. Great chapter.



Author's Response:

Yeah, how could she? That is the question :(

Thanks, I am glad you liked it!

Reviewer: YumYumPM (Signed) · Date: August 01, 2018 03:54 AM · On: Chapter 15

Jennifer blew it.  If Justin hadn't gone to see Brian she would have just let him go on not knowing.  She at least could have helped him get a bigger home so the kids could stay with him.



Author's Response:

That is the question: Would Brian and Jennifer have continued their lies until Luke was old enough to ask the important questions? Until Luke wouldn't have been content anymore with Brian's excuses for Justin not being there or would there have come a point where they would have told Justin themselves?

Thanks for your comments - I really appreciate them :) 

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